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作文范文之雅思大作文提问方式

作文范文之雅思大作文提问方式
作文范文之雅思大作文提问方式

雅思大作文提问方式

【篇一:雅思大作文写作方法】

雅思大作文写作步骤指导

雅思写作部分有2篇作文,要求考生在一小时内完成至少400字的

写作任务。由于时间比较短,不少考生因未能合理安排时间,结果

没有有效完成任务要求或是未能充分展现自己的英语写作水平。

写作部分两篇文章的字数要求是不一样的。大作文必须完成250字

以上写作任务,而小作文150字以上。根据这一指令,从机械地写

字速度来看,考生较为合理的时间分配为大作文40分钟,小作文20分钟。另外,大作文占写作总值的60%,小作文为40%,从这分值

的权重来看,时间上2:1的分配也是相当合理的。所以,要想成功完成大作文任务一定要把时间控制在40分钟左右,前后不超出5分钟。

那么如何充分利用这40分钟,完成一篇基本令人满意的文章呢?

步骤一:审题(3 分钟)

审题是有效完成任务的第一步,也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看,审题的正确与否与task response有着直接的联系。而在当前模板

泛滥,文章千篇一律的大环境下,有效审题是突破六分的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时,要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读,要么只关注题目中

词的同义转换。如此读题,都有可能对之后的文章撰写方向造成偏差。而有效的读题方法应为:

通读题目,了解大意。

细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。

由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步,所以出现离题或部分离题

的可能性很大。现以2008年11月15日的考题为例:

there are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. this is because the computer technology

is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. do you think

it is a positive or negative development?(题目为考生回忆,与

原题可能有少许出入)

通读题目,了解大意。

当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作,有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得,也越来越便宜了。你认为这是

个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?

备注:题中的accessible有不少考生不理解,对审题的准确性会造

成一定影响。细读题目,分析句子间的逻辑关系。

要把握题目中的句子间逻辑关系,关键是能读懂代词this; it的具体

指代。 this是指第一句话。

it可理解为前两句所呈现的这一现象。为了使文章写作方向更为明确,这里可把it 概括为:the wider usage of computer

technology in working or studying from home

再读题目,辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词,推测考官的出题意图。主题词:computer technology in working or studying from home

限定词:positive or negative

不容忽视的词:easily accessible and cheaper

题目信息解构:

(topic) positive

(benefits)

computer technology in working or studying from home

(causes) negative

(drawbacks)

easily accessible and cheaper

对题目做出如上分析,确保撰写的文章能包含以上的信息,审题这

关绝对能过。以上用时不超过3分钟。

步骤二:列大纲(3分钟)

根据以上的题目解构信息,寻找关键词的下义词和衍生词,根据已

有素材确定写作框架。

如:

computer technology:on-line, pc, laptop, broadband

working from home: fashion designer; freelancer; translator; journalist; writer; music composer, artists

studying from home: on-line course, the disable who are difficult to move; course in the foreign country

cheaper: on-line ielts course --several hundred rmb

class ielts course -- several thousand rmb

easily accessible : in city-- at least one pc every house

broadband: almost every house; school

net bar: almost every neighborhood

outline:

introduction:

computer technology in home-study and home- work(topic) positive development (opinion) body:

benefits of studying from home:

cheaper--- ielts course (on-line /class)

freer--- white collar for further education in free time

benefits of working from home:

artists(music composer/fashion designer)---- more productive

freelancer( translator/journalists)---- more working opportunity drawbacks:

lack self-control /independence( line-addicts)

conclusion: inevitable trend( with self-discipline)

备注:在实战考试中无需把大纲写得如此详细,但胸有成竹一定会

使之后文章的写作如鱼得水。

步骤三:文章撰写(30-35分钟)

一般文章为4-5段,平均每段用时5-10分钟

备注:大作文写作一定要写结论段,以体现文章的完整性。

步骤四:检查(1-2分钟)

此时,不宜做大的修改,把笔误的部分改掉即可。

在本篇论文中,笔者花了较多的篇幅来论述审题和列大纲,旨在引

起读者对这两部分的足够重视。

议论文四种类型与结尾模版

针对雅思议论文写作中的辩论式话题,在教学中我们通常会向学生

介绍两种安排结构的方式,即单边支持和双边讨论。所谓单边支持,顾名思义就是文章的辩论从一边展开,作者的观点和理由呈现“一边倒”的形式;而双边讨论型文章的特点则是文章针对题目所提出的话题,从正反(即支持和反对)两个方面展开辩论。单边支持和双边

讨论结构的文章有着各自的特点和谋篇布局的套路,不同的题目可

能适合不同类型的结构。但无论是用什么样的结构,作为议论文写作,论点、论据和论证都是必不可少的,特别是论点,没有论点或

论点不清的文章是绝不可能拿高分的。然而在双边讨论型文章教学中,经常会发现学生对于如何提出观点感到非常迷惑。本文将从如

何提出“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”这个角度对于双边讨论型文章的观

点设计进行简单分析。

一、何为“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”

很多雅思写作考题的提问方式都是“do you agree or disagree?”

或者“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”。很多刚刚接触

雅思考试的学生甚至是老师认为对于这种提问方式无非就是yes或

no两种答案,所以文章的观点也就只能是同意或者不同意了。其实,对于这类提问,也可以采用“折衷”的观点,即“partly agree,partly disagree”(部分同意,部分不同意)。但是前提是一定要在文章中

从支持和反对的两方面都阐述一些理由,而且最好再提出一种“折衷”方案。例如,考题问“现在很多人用动物做试验,你同意吗?”,考

生可以在文中分别讨论支持和反对动物试验的理由,最后提出动物

试验既有好处也有坏处,这就是一种“折衷”观点。除此之外,作者

还提出了是否能用动物来做试验主要是取决于试验是否能给人类生

活带来显著的改善(比如帮助人类发明治疗aids的药物),这就属

于“折衷”方案。

二、“折衷观点”和“折衷方案”的几种形式

那么如何提出“折衷观点”呢?“折衷方案”又有哪几种形式呢?下面

将对常见的几种安排折衷观点和折衷方案的形式,结合相应的考题

进行总结。

1)兴利除弊

“兴利除弊”应该是一种比较简单的折衷方案,在优缺点类文章中特

别常用。即在分析完考题所涉及事物的优缺点之后,在结尾段提出“优缺点都有,我们要兴利除弊”这样的折衷方案。例如以下考题:

the advantages brought by the spread of english as a “global

l anguage” will outweigh the disadvantages. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

在讨论完英语作为全球性语言的利与弊之后,结尾段可以这样提出

折衷观点: to sum up, it is difficult to tell whether or not the advantages outweigh the disadvantages regarding the spread

of english as a global language. what we may have to consider is how to accept this trend as positive while at the same time staying away from its drawbacks.

2)平衡发展

很多考题需要考生讨论两种观点,通常会有“discuss both views and give your own opinion”这样的提问要求。很多情况下,文中

说到的两种观点表面上看来

是完全相反,但其实并不矛盾,可以用“平衡发展”的思路来提出观点。例如考题:some people think that cultural traditions may

be destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. others believe it is the only way to save these traditions. discuss on both sides and give your opinion.在讨论完发展旅游的必要性和保护文化传统的重要性之后,结尾段可以这样提出折衷方案:

we should find the right balance between tourism development and cultural protection and i believe the government has a very important role to play here. in my own country, for example, many tourist cities have made effective development plans to successfully attract large numbers of visitors while still preserving their distinct cultural traditions.

3)列出条件

有时在讨论完a和b两种观点以后,可以提出类似于“同意a还是b 要取决于??”这样的折衷观点,前文讲到的动物试验是否可以进行取决于试验的性质就是属于这样的方案。再比如下面这个例子:some people think that the animals should be treated as pets; others think that animals are sources of food and clothing. what is your opinion?

在讨论完动物当宠物养的理由和动物当食物吃的理由之后,结尾段可以这样提出观点:

from my point of view, there is no absolute answer as to whether animals should be treated like pets or as sources of food and clothes. it largely depends on what kinds of animals they are. but what remains undoubted is that we should treat animals with a humane attitude and bear in mind that they are important in preserving nature’s ec ological equilibrium.

4)解决方法

很多双边讨论型文章中所讨论的两种观点其实是可以通过某种方案来“化解矛盾”的,例如这道考题:in many countries, good schools and medical

facilities are available only in cities. some people think new teachers and doctors should wok in rural areas for a few years, but others think everyone should be free to choose where they work. discuss and give your own opinion.

在讨论完“支边”的利(缩小城乡差距)与弊(年轻人丧失自由)之后,我们可以提出这样一种解决方案:

the best solution, therefore, is not to order, but to encourage. we should instill a sense of responsibility in young people and

give more incentives to those who are willing to work in

difficult areas, so that we can address the problem of urban-rural disparity while respecting whatever decisions new teachers or doctors have made.

雅思议论文论证方法

雅思写作部分要求考生在一小时内完成两篇文章,一是150单词以

上的图表说明文,二是250单词以上的议论文。说到雅思议论文,

它的考查点可以从三个方面进行概括,即结构、内容、语言。本文

将就其中内容方面进行探讨。雅思写作通

常都围绕着几大类话题展开,如2009年到现在较常出现的教育类、

科技类、媒体类等,所以考生要在考试前做好论据扩展的准备,争

取每个话题都练习几个常考题目。

雅思议论文,不管是双边论证还是单边论证,论据的扩展是非常重

要的,只有合理逻辑的对一个理由进行论证,才能说服考官相信你

的论证是有理的。而合理的扩展有了素材后还需要一些方法的补充。常见的方法有解释说明(explanation)、举例子(exemplification)、列数据(raising figures)、对比对照(contrast comparison)、让步(making concession)、引用(quotation)等。接下来,我们先来熟悉一下前两种方法的具体使用。

1、解释说明(explanation)

句型:

this is to say, ?

to be more precise,?

by this i mean,?

中国学生思维方式有个最大的特点就是拐弯抹角,不会开门见山,

这往往与西方人的思维方式有着巨大的区别,西方人通常习惯一针

见血,而不是含蓄的说话。这就导致很多考生在论证过程中用讲道

理的论证方法时容易出现离题偏题的现象,从而降低考分。比如,

一次课上,笔者请一位学生来分析一下“the reason why it is

difficult for university students to find a job after

graduation”,学生的答案为“the increasing world population”,考生给出答案后进行了分析,他认为人口多了,意味着大学生人数

增多,那就是说大四学生变多了,找工作竞争激烈了,所以他们找

工作困难了,这样就将看上去风马牛不相及的两个东西转了好几个

圈终于联系在一起。中国学生喜欢去研究一个问题的根本原因,但

事实上,这个原因与题目根本没联系,就可以被判定为离题,所以

还不如直接说“the increasingly fierce competition”,更有说服力。根据这一特色,朗阁海外考试研究中心的老师建议考生在讲道理的

时候只围绕topic sentence进行解释说明,这样就不会出现离题的

现象了。我们看下面一个topic sentence,通过explanation来进

行扩展。

e.g. the retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

读完这个句子,我们可能对其中the benefits of the family and

the community感到疑惑,到底是什么利益,提供什么服务。

this is to say, the elderly always spend their time in taking

care of the family and doing household chores for the family

as well as organizing charitable activities for the community.

这样就能很好的对上述句子进行解释说明了。

2、举例子(exemplification)

句型:

for example, for instance, to illustrate, ?

take? as example, ?

举例子也是中国考生较常用的论证方法,只是在使用的过程中往往

也会出现一些不符合西方思维的问题。既是举例子,顾名思义,我

们要列举一个具体的例子,比如某某人,或某事件而不是在for example后面还出现some people,这根本就不能算是个具体的例子。笔者在上课时请一位学生来举例论证“the students

【篇二:雅思大作文3个常见问题解答】

雅思作文分为大作文和小作文,考生们普遍在小作文上得分较高在

大作文上得分较低。这主要是由篇幅和观点决定的,关于雅思写作

学习的提高,大家都有不同的方法,今天天道小编主要就一些大家

经常问的雅思写作要求,特别是雅思大作文的要求来谈谈解决办法,希望能够对大家有用。

1、 is it ok to use firstly, secondly, finally in both main paragraphs? 在每个主体段落中都使用firstly, secondly, finally结

构可以吗?

it would be nicer to vary the way you organise or link your ideas in each main paragraph. however, the ideas and vocabulary are more important than the linking words, so

using firstly, secondly, finally twice isnt a big problem.答:在每

个主体段中使用不同的连结词会让你的作文看起来更多样化。但是,ideas和词汇远比连结词重要,所以,使用两次firstly, secondly, finally结构并不是一个太大的问题。

2、i explained both sides for an agree or disagree question. is that ok? agree or disagree类型的大作文中,我解释了双方的观点,这样可以吗?

yes, but i hope you made it clear in your introduction that you partly agree. have a look through my writing lessons until you find something about strong opinions and balanced opinions.答:可以,但是我希望你能在你的开头段中说明你’partly agree’,

部分同意。看过我写作课的同学都知道,在表达“强烈的意见”和“两

边儿都行”时要在开头段中使用不同的表达,如果“两边儿都行”,就在

开头段中写“部分同意”。

3. can i write everything in capital letters in the writing test? 我能在雅思考试中全部使用大写字母吗?

when i trained as an examiner, we were told that students should not write in capitals in the writing test. somebody told me that this rule has changed, but personally i still think its better not to write essays in capital letters. 答:当我是考官的时候,我们被告知学生不可以在写作考试中全部使用大写。但是现在

政策有改,有人告诉我说可以全部大写了。但我个人认为最好还是

不要全部大写。

以上就是天道小编总结给出的雅思大作文部分常见问题的解决方法,这些问题的方法都是根据雅思的评分标准来的,大家可以放心采用。另外再教大家一个小技巧,如果下次再遇到类似的问题,大家可以

参考雅思写作范文的做法,一般来讲都是非常靠谱的。在此,小编

祝愿大家考出一个理想的雅思成绩,进入自己理想的高校就读。

个性化方案定制

一对一的自由培训形式,通过专业测评,全面考虑学员的性格、习惯、能力等因素,为学生量身定做最个性化学习方案。建立在学生

个人数据基础上的方案,不仅具有针对性,还将随着学生在培训中

的变化做出调整,并可形成学生个人档案记忆。

也是在中国考生整体素质提高基础上,对培训提出的新挑战,在培

训的伊始,天道培训就着力于为每一位考生提供具有针对性的服务。

【篇三:雅思大作文模板及高分技巧讲解】

智课网ielts备考资料

雅思大作文模板及高分技巧讲解

摘要:雅思大作文的写作题目一般分观点类、讨论类、问题解决三

大类。那么,针对雅思大作文考题都有哪些模板呢?雅思大作文的高

分技巧又有哪些呢?估计很多考生还不清楚,下面,小编就为大家带

来了雅思大作文模板及高分技巧讲解,希望能帮到大家。

雅思大作文的写作题目一般分观点类、讨论类、问题解决三大类。

那么,针对雅思大作文考题都有哪些模板呢?雅思大作文的高分技

巧又有哪些呢?估计很多考生还不清楚,下面,小编就为大家带来了

雅思大作文模板及高分技巧讲解,希望能帮到大家。

首先,同意不同意类

此类题目常见的问法为do you agree or disagree? 或to what extend do you agree or disagree? 针对这一问题,考生最好不要

单纯从同意或不同意这两个比较单一的角度去分析问题。也许,从

正反两方面多角度去分析效果会更好。

下面,我们就学习一下此类的模板吧。

1、i fully agree with the argument that (1) 支持观点 a. for one thing (2) 支持观点 a 的原因之一。

for another, (3) 支持观点 a 的原因之二。

history has told us that (4) 历史证明 a 的正确性。

for example, (5) 举例证明。

furthermore, (6) 进一步阐述 a 的正确性。

but some people stubbornly cling to (7) 人们反对观点 a.

if we listen to these people we will (8) 听从那些人会产生的后果。 in conclusion, i think we should not (9) 我们不应该怎么做。

on the contrary, we should (10) 我们应该怎么做。

2、according to the opinion of some people , there are quite different attitudes towards aaa. some claim that (1)人们的观点aaa. however, i cannot agree (2) 我反对观点 aaa.

first, (3) 我反对 aaa 的第一个理由。

that is to say (4) 进一步阐述。

second, (5) 我反对 aaa 的第二个理由。

in fact, (6) 举例说明。

finally, (7) 我反对 aaa 的第三个理由。

to sum up, (8) 总结我的观点。but it is also necessary to stress that (9) 退一步总结。

其次,讨论类

讨论类题目问法有discuss these points of view. what is your opinion? 或discuss both views and give your opinion.

题目要求是两个观点都要分析,考生通过两方面论点的讨论,最终给出自己的观点。观点可以是偏向任意一个view,也可选择站在中立的立场上,言之成理即可。

那此类模板有哪些呢?

首段:

in this day and age, it is +adv + p.p + that 主题句.

there is evidence that主题句.

but, meanwhile, there remains some disagreement as for……nevertheless, a controversy has arisen over……

as a consequence, there has been always a fierce argument as to……

主体段:

convincing arguments can be made that...

it is noticeable / undeniable that ……

people who hold that 句子may have the following reasons.

on the other hand, many individuals firmly believe that……however, others firmly argue that……

结尾段:

in conclusion, my view is that…… because……. therefore, it is +adj. for sb. to do sth.

it is quite natural that people retain diverse attitudes

towards ….

speaking for myself, i am in favour of…because……

hence, i am strongly convinced that…

最后,问题解决类

一般比较普遍的提问方式为“what are the main reason of this phenomenon?”以及“what measures should be taken to solve this phenomenon?”需要考生提出问题出现的原因以及解决策略。此类题目模板有:

para 1—causes (effects)

1. in my opinion,the phenomenon/ problem/ failure/ change in…… is partly/ mainly/ largely attributable to/ due to/ owing

to ……。the fact that……has several factor s. first,……second……,finally,……。

para 2—solutions:

1. it is urgent/ important/ necessary that appropriate/

effective/ proper actions/ measures/ steps/ method be taken to end/ correct/ improve…

2. there are believed / expected / supposed to be two effective measures/ practical schemes/ sound solutions, one of which is…

conclusions:

taking into account all these factors, we may safely draw the conclusion that…… it is time that we put/ placed / laid considerable special emphasis on the development/ change/ growth of……

以上模板仅仅是冰山一角,想要完全掌握考生还要多加努力。此外,即使掌握了大量的模板却不会恰当应用,那么结果也是枉然。在使

用模板方面,考生要如何做呢?研究剑桥系列文章后的考官满分范文

可以发现,文章用词简单贴切,句式简单多变,文章表达实际,例

子多,有说服力。利用模板的主要目的是在日常的练习中培养写作

的方法和技巧,而不是提升文章的语言层次。

一个5分水平的学生生搬硬套7-8分的语言,会破坏文章的连贯性。但恰当运用,可使考生很快完成文章架构的搭建,争取更多时间去

揣摩如何表达个性化的内容,关键在于如何使其融入到自己的写作

风格中去,打造个性化的模板。

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