7B 期中作文专题训练
让学生了解扣分细节，才能让学生重视作文的细节，同时一个主题多次修改，从而提高学生用词，造句，布局等能力。
评分细则：
1、短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。一处大错扣1 分。
2、通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣 2 分。
3、拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。3个小错相当于 1 处大错。
4、相同错误，只扣一次。
5、词数不足扣 2 分。
6、书写潦草，卷面不清，乃至影响阅卷，扣2 分。
作文（1）
假如你是Andy ，你的朋友Daniel 下周要来玩，请你向他介绍一下你的家乡。
要点： 1. 我的家乡在无锡北部的一个小镇上，离无锡市中心大概二十公里；
2.是个居住的好地方。有公园，可以锻炼；有购物中心，可以买到各种各样
的东西；有电影院，可以看电影；
3.镇上有许多高楼，我住在公园北面的一套公寓里；
4.找到我家很容易；
5.盼望着你尽快来玩。
Dear Tommy,
I want to tell you something about my hometown.
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Welcome to my home!
Best wishes!
请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文，词数70 字左右，必须包含以下所给要
点。
1.我理想的家在山脚下，每天都能听到鸟叫，闻到花香。
2.邻居们很友善，乐于帮助别人解决问题。
3.这是个居住的好地方，我喜欢邀请朋友来我家。
4.如果你能来这儿，我会为你准备充足的食物和饮料。
5.我盼望??（用一句话表达你的看法）
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假设你是Jewels, 请给你英国的笔友Neil 写一封信，介绍一下你小区情况，
并邀请他到你小区来玩。词数90 左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（neighbourhood 街区、居民区；volunteers 志愿者）。
要点如下：
1.我住在镇中心的一套公寓里。这是一个居住的好地方。
2.小区里有许多志愿者。他们可以帮你解决各种问题。这儿优秀的医护人员会使
你感觉好多了。技师来这儿帮你检修冰箱或洗衣机。所有的艺术家对风格和颜色非常了解，他们会高兴给你提一些建议。
3.我的感受??（发挥1-2 句）
Dear Neil,
I am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown.
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假如你是Wendy ，春天来了，你准备邀请Millie 去西太湖（West Taihu Lake）野餐，请根据以下提示给Millie 写一封邀请信。内容必须包括以下要点：1．春天来了，鸟语花香，都认为西太湖是野餐的好地方；
2．和朋友们周日上午8 点在校门口集合，准备乘公交车前往，大约半个小时就到了；3．带一些食物、水、小吃等。
4．在西太湖还可以划船、放风筝、环湖骑行和玩游戏。相信会过得愉快的。
要求： 1. 内容完整，可适当发挥；
2. 表达清楚，意思连贯、符合逻辑；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名，不少于80 字。
Dear Millie ，
We are going to have a picnic at West Taihu Lake this Sunday.
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假如你是刘芳，你所在学校的“爱心俱乐部” （ Helping Hands Club ）将吸收新的自愿者。你 想加入该俱乐部，请根据下面表格中的内容，用英语写一封自荐信。
姓名 刘芳 性别 女 班级
七年级 1 班
本人情况
14 岁；身体健康；学习努力；心地善良；乐于助人 “爱心 ”表现
1. 帮助老年人打扫公寓
2. 帮助邻里检查和修理有问题的电脑
3. ??
加入目的
1. 加入俱乐部后能交到更多的朋友
2. ??
要求： 1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯；
2.要点须包括表格中的信息；
3.表格中 “?”内容由学生自拟；
4. 词数： 100 词左右。信的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear chairperson,
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作文 1【范文】
Dear Tommy, I want to tell
you something
about my hometown.
I ' m a girl student from Class 1, Grade 7. I
a vol 'untde elikr eo ft oth bee Helping Hands Club.
Yours,
My hometown is in a small town in the north of Wuxi. It ' s about 20 kilometres
away
from the centre of Wuxi. It d 'plasc ea tgoo loive. You can exercise in the parks, buy all kinds
of things in the shopping malls and watch films in the cinema. There are a lot of tall buildings in my town. I live in a flat north of the park.
It ' s easy to find my home. I ' m lookin gs efoeriwnga rydo tuo soon.
Welcome to my home!
Best wishes!
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My dream home is at the foot of a hill. I can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers every day. My neighbours are friendly and kind. They are ready to help others with their problems. It 'oos da pglace to live. I like to invite my friends to my home. If you can come here,
I ' ll prepare plenty of food and drinks for you. I look forward to seeing you some day.
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Dear Neil
I am glad to hear from you, and I hope you will come to my hometown.
I live in a flat in the town centre. It is a good place to live. There are a lot of volunteers in the neighbourhood. They can help you with all kinds of problems. The good doctors and nurses here
will make you feel much better. The engineers are here to help you check and fix your broken fridge or washing machine. All the artists know a lot about styles and colours. They will be happy to give you some ideas. I am happy to have a neighbourhood like this. (90 words)
Yours,
Jewels
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Dear Millie,
We are going to have a picnic at West Taihu Lake this Sunday.
As spring comes, we can smell flowers and hear birds sing everhwhere at West Taihu
Lake, so it is a quite good place to have a picnic there.
We will meet at the school gate at 8 o 'acyl omcokr onnin gS uanddn leave by bus. It will take us about half an hour to get there.
We will do some activities at West Taihu Lake, such as rowing a boat, flying a kite,
playing games and going cycling around the lake. Of course, we will also take some food,
water and snack. I believe all of us will have a good time.
Would you like to come with us?
Yours,
作文5【范文】
Dear chairperson,
I 'm a girl student from Class 1, Grade 7. I 'd like to be a volunteer of the Helping Hands Club.
I 'm 14 years old. I 'm strong and healthy. I work hard at all my lessons and I 'm good at them.
I like computer studies best. I 'm kind to my classmates. So they all like me very much.
I 'm also always ready to help others. I often visit the old people with my classmates and help the old people clean their flats. When there is something wrong with my neighbours computers, they usually ask me to check them and help to fix them. Sometimes I go to clean the
park with my friends.
I can make more friends after I join the club. I can also learn different skills from the other volunteers in the club. Then I can do more for others and help more people.
I 'll be happy if I 'm accepted. I 'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Fang
There are some photos on the wall. They’re very beautiful. In the middle of the room, there is my bed. It’s not so big, but it’s very comfortable. Every night, I lay on the bed and have a good dream. On the right of the bed, there is my desk and chair. They’re in front of the window. My computer is on the desk. There is a lamp on the desk, too. I can do my homework here and play computer games. My bookshelf is on the left of the bed. There are a lot of storybooks and picture books in the shelf. I like them very much. Not everyone has a bedroom. I’m very lucky, because I have a very beautiful bedroom. I’ll try my best to keep it clean and tidy. 1. Our School Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building. There are thirty classrooms, a modern library, a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard. Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much. 2. How did you spend your summer vacation I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there. 4.. A happy Day It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the
初中英语作文带翻译范文大全初中英语作文：糟糕的一天My Sad Day Today, when I went home after school, I saw the delicious snack, so I wanted to buy one of the snacks, then I could not find my wallet, I searched it many times, at last, I had to admit that my wallet was lost. I felt so worried, so I turned back to find my wallet, I watched the road carefully, suddenly, a black dog was in front of me, I felt so scared. The hog yelled at me, so I ran, the dog run after me, I run into the shop and got rid of the dog. I have to went home because of it was dark, my mother came out and told me I forget to bring my wallet, how stupid I am. 翻译：今天，当我放学回家后，我看到了美味的小吃，因此我想要买一些小吃，然后我找不到钱包，我搜索了很多遍，最后，我不得不承认我的钱包弄丢了。我很着急，所以我返回去找我的钱包，我一路仔细查找，突然，一条黑狗在我前面，我很害怕。那条狗朝着我叫，所以我跑了，狗追赶我，我跑进了一家商店，摆脱了那条狗。由于天色已暗，我不得不回家，我的妈妈出来，告诉我我忘记了拿钱包，我是多么的愚蠢啊。初中英语作文：我身边的噪音The Noises Around Me I live in the school now, I will go home on the weekend, at first, I thought living in school could make me focus on my study, while the fact is not. At noon, when I take a snap, the noise from the building machine is so loud, our school is under construction now, so the workers work day and night. But I couldn’t sleep well, my head aches, without not good sleep, I can’t focus my mind to study. What’s more, some students are playing games in the corridor, they laugh so loudly that do not realize they are bothering us. I hope the school could let the workers stop working at noon for two hours, so that it will be good to students. 翻译：我现在在学校住，我会在周末回家，刚开始，我以为住在学校能让我集中精力学习，然而事实并非如此。在中午，当我午睡的时候，建筑的机器发出很大的噪音，我们学校现在正在建造中，因此工人日以继夜地工作。但是我无法好好入睡，我的头很痛，没有好的睡眠，我就无法集中精力学习。而且，一些学生在走廊外玩游戏，他们笑得如此的大声，没有意识到打扰了我们。我希望学校能让工人在中午停工两个小时，这样对学生好。初中英语作文：杜绝浪费Never Wasting the Food When I was small, I like to eat a lot of food, but I have a habit, I will not eat up all the food, I just like to taste all of it. When my mother saw this, she felt bad for me, she told me that all the food was the farmers’ hard work, I should not waste it. Thinking about this, I felt so shameful about my bad behavior, I decided to eat up the food. Wasting the food should be condemned, especially in the cities, people like to waste the food, they want to keep thin and only eat small portion. Now, the government advocates people clean the plate, this movement is welcomed by the public, more and more people have the idea not to waste the food. 翻译：在我小的时候，我喜欢吃很多东西，但是我有一个习惯，我不会把东西吃完，我喜欢浪费食物。当我的妈妈看到这些，她对我感觉不好，她告诉我所有的食物都是农民辛勤劳作的，我不应该浪费食物。想到这些，我对自己的坏习惯感到惭愧，我决定吃完所有的食物。浪费食物应该受到谴责，特别是在大城市，人们喜欢浪费食物，他们想要保持苗条，只吃小部分。现在，政府提倡人们光盘，这个做法得到了大众的肯定，越来越多的人意识到不浪费食物。初中英语作文：北京三日游A Three-day Tour to Beijing Last month I went to Beijing to visit one of my friends, because we haven’t seen each other for about two years and I got a holiday meanwhile. It is my first time to visit Beijing, which is always the dream city for all the Chinese. All the information about the city came from the books and TV, now I could see and get know of it by myself, how excited I am! There were so many tourist areas in my plan list, like Tian’anmen Square, Forbidden City, the Great Wall, t he Perking University and so on. However, due to my short holiday I only visit several places of my list, with my friend’s companion. I will take a long tour to Beijing next time if I have the chance.翻译：上个月我去北京看望我的一个朋友，因为我们有将近两年没见，而我刚好有假期。这是我第一次游览北京，这座全中国人都向往的城市。我对北京的所以认知都来自电视和书本，而现在我有机会亲自来看
一篇初中600字作文大全_奋斗 有人会问：人生最重要的是什么?我会说：是目标。有了目标，那下一步会是什么，是：奋斗。不奋斗，你人生中最重要的目标又将如何完成? 想不付出代价而得到幸福，那是神话。 ——张海迪 在我短暂的人生旅途中，我最崇拜的有三种人：一种是能够给我带来照顾、关心、教育、引导的人，例如爸爸、妈妈、老师等;一种是爱国、为国捐躯的人，例如戚继光、黄继光等;还有一种就是像竺可桢爷爷那样一生为理想而奋斗的人。其实，我也说不清竺可桢爷爷是个怎么样的人。可是，自从我阅读了《学到终生》这篇文章后，我终于明白了。 读了《学到终生》这篇文章以后，我的心不禁一颤。二月十日，0-1℃，偏北风3-4级，森林防火5级。请明天准时收听。收音机里传来一位阿姨清脆、婉转的声音。唉，还是亲自体验比较有真实感，都怪我生了病，而下不了床忽然病房里传来埋怨自己、责备自己的声音。哦，原来是着名的气象学家、物候学家、自然地理学家，曾经还担任过浙江大学校长，中央研究院院长、中国科学院学部委员、生物学地学部主任的竺可桢爷爷。我被深深地感动了，为竺可桢爷爷，为理想而奋斗，为学到终生的精神。 其实，像竺可桢爷爷一样为理想而奋斗的人，又何止他一个呢?陆游、王冕、鲁迅、蔡元培、马寅初等，他们都是为理想而奋斗的人，学到终生的了不起的人物。用马克思的话来说，就是后悔过去，不如奋斗将来。 二篇初中600字作文大全_秋天 夏爷爷走了，秋姑娘慢慢飞来。看!树叶在秋风中舞蹈——有的成蝴蝶在翩翩起舞;有点成仙鹤盘旋在这山林之中;有的成蜜蜂群朝人们涌来，为我们报来了秋风的喜讯 秋，它在不知不觉中悄悄地到来，它化作仙子，带着她的魔棒，给大家送来了礼物。瞧!她先给苹果的脸蛋儿上扑上了红粉，好像一个红似火的灯笼;她又给香橙穿上了金灿灿的衣服，看上去光彩夺目，美不胜收;她再给香蕉披上特制的外套，看上去让人口水都掉了三里地。她给长松换上新装，看上去更苍翠、跟英俊了;她为银杏翠绿的头发染你一个新颜色，看上去真时髦;她还给柳树梳理了一下，给她扎上两个常常的小辫儿，看上去就想一个清秀的小姑娘 秋，它来了，带着它无穷的魔力，为我们带来了丰收的喜悦。听!成熟的瓜果笑哈哈的，有的也含羞带笑等待着人们的到来。看吧!黄澄澄的柿子总是躲在青红色的叶子后面;有的则憨态可掬，如大大肚皮的南瓜，毫无隐藏地躺在大地上;有的哈哈大笑，如串串大红色的辣椒，稀疏的几片叶子似乎以挡不住它们的火辣 隐约中，天空中下起你渺渺细雨。秋雨那变化多端的表情，蕴藏着无数的奥秘。它多愁善感，似乎是在低声的呜咽，为草木发出声声叹息;似乎是在愉快地工作，为收获的大地清扫;
高二英语作文专题训练 20XX年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。 注意： 1．对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 2．词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3．植入广告：product placement Festival Gala has set records for TV commercial rates, which accordingly has caused heated discussions due to product placement in the programmes. The opinions on this topic vary from person to person. One in four think there is so much of product placement that lots of people feel unsatisfied when they watch the programmes. And 10% of the people think product placement in the programmes greatly ruins the image of CCTV, beause it will leave a bad impression on audience in and outside China. Besides, nearly one third of the people hold the
1.沉迷网络游戏 题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up, concentrate on, be (become)interested in ★范文Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2.怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 ★范文How to learn English well
优秀初中作文题目分类大全 一、父母、老师、同学、爱、幸福、感谢 1、①-------，我永远忘不了你②榜样③良师 2、①有家真好 （家是什么？是难舍的亲情，是温馨的集体，是亲爱的祖国。在这里，父母用慈爱的伞为儿女撑起一方晴空，儿女用孝顺的心给父母奉上一缕慰籍；在这里，洋溢着哝哝的师生之情、伙伴之情） 3、①爱使我----------- （成长、战胜困难与挫折、走向成功------生活中充满了各种各样的爱。爱来自我们身边的许多人。爱伴随着我们成长） 4、①幸福 （人人都在渴望幸福，人人都在感受幸福。幸福有时很抽象，有时又很具体；幸福有时很遥远，有时又近在咫尺。奉献是幸福，给予是幸福，获得是幸福，享受是幸福------一句祝福的话语是幸福，一个理解的眼神是幸福-------幸福是心灵的感觉，幸福是生命的体验----） 5、①朋友 6、①分手时，我想说声谢谢你②分手时，我想说声对不起 （文题中的你可以是与你朝夕相处的同学，也可以是辛勤培养了你三年的老师。说声谢谢是因为你获得了真情与帮助，说声对不起是因为你因为某件事而有愧疚。） 二、自我、成长、个性、美德 1、①我自豪，我是-------的人②其实，我真的很棒③为自己竖起大拇指 （“竖起大拇指”常用来表示鼓励、夸奖、赞美、自豪；也可用来表示有决心、有信心、有志气） 2、①我终于战胜了-------- （每位同学自身都会存在这样或那样的弱点，如胆怯、自卑、懒惰、粗心------请结合你的实际选择一个方面，把题目补充完整作文。）②我也衔过一枚青橄榄 3、当我面对------的时候（荣誉、成功、挫折、鼓励、某种目光-----） 4、掌声 （生活中，人人需要掌声，取得成绩和荣誉，掌声给人以褒奖，给人以再创造的活力；面对困难和考验，掌声会给人信心，给人以勇气，给人以奋进的动力，应该说，掌声就是一种鼓励，也是一种尊重。因此，我们要学会鼓掌：为别人鼓掌，为自己鼓掌，为丰富多彩的人生而鼓掌，可写你的体验和见闻，也可写你的见解和认识） 5、①我长大了 ②成长（成长伴随着人的一生。成长的过程曲折坎坷，成长的故事丰富多彩。人是这样，世界上万事莫不这样。关于成长，你一定还有好多话要说-----） 6“我” 三、写心声、苦闷、压力
英语作文 V. 书面表达（1 题，10 分） 请以"Why are Bicycles so Popular in China?"为题，根据下列要点用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。 1. 大多数中国人居住的地方离上班或上学的地点不远，骑自行车很方便。而且，骑自行车是锻炼身体的好方法。 2. 自行车是一种很方便的交通工具(means of transportation)，骑自行车做短途旅行，想到哪都可以。 3. 骑自行车可以节省能源，减少空气污染。 Why are Bicycles so Popular in China? Bicycles are a convenient means of transportation. People can go wherever they like by bike on a short trip. It is easy to go to work or school by bike because most of the Chinese live not far away from where they work or study. Riding bicycles is also good exercise, which can help build people's bodies. What's more, riding bicycles can save energy. China has a population of more than 1,300 million. As bicycles are not expensive, almost every family has one. Now each family in China has at least a bike instead of a car. Thus a great deal of energy is saved and serious air pollution is reduced. That's why bicycles are so popular in China. 假如你是Amy，请你给你的网友Joan发一封电子邮件告诉她你在老师的帮助下学习英语的一些变化和取得的进步。 1．过去：认为学英语就是背语法规则和英语单词：不喜欢读英语，更不愿意和同学练习对话。 2．现在：意识到英语是说出来的，开始喜欢讲英语并和同学用英语交流；经常上网阅读一些新的英语文章并查阅一些英语资料，对英语越学越感兴趣并且取得了很大的进步。 注意：词数100左右，开头已给出，不记入词数。 生词：互联网internet 软件 software Dear Joan, Hello! I’ m glad to send you an e-mail to tell you that I ‘m getting more and more interested in English. However, in the past I thought learning English meant learning grammar rules and words by heart. I didn’t like to read or speak English, nor was I willing to practice dialogues with my classmates. Now with my English teacher’s help, I came to realize we learn to spe ak English by speaking as we learn to sing by singing. I began to enjoy speaking English and communicate with my classmates. I often read some fresh English news or articles and look up some information on the internet. As a result, I have made great progress in English. Yours sincerely, Amy 假如你的朋友李明应邀去参加美国朋友的家庭宴会，他不懂如何应付。请你给他提些建议，告诉他如何去做以便给人留下好印象。根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文。
初一英语作文大全 There are some photos on the wall. They’re very beautiful. In the middle of the room, there is my bed. It’s not so big, but it’s very comfortable. Every night, I lay on the bed and have a good dream. On the right of the bed, there is my desk and chair. They’re in front of the window. My computer is on the desk. There is a lamp on the desk, too. I can do my homework here and play computer games. My bookshelf is on the left of the bed. There are a lot of storybooks and picture books in the shelf. I like them very much. Not everyone has a bedroom. I’m very lucky, because I have a very beautiful bedroom. I’ll try my best to keep it clean and tidy. 1. Our School
Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building. There are thirty classrooms, a modern library, a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard. Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much. 2. How did you spend your summer vacation I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and
初中生优秀作文评语大全 导读：本文是关于初中生优秀作文评语大全，希望能帮助到您！ 1、文章杂而不乱,能做到详略得当,重点突出。 2、文章对……的气氛渲染充分而恰到好处,对文章重点…作了细腻而传神的刻画。 3、…切合实际,蕴含着朴素而深刻的哲理,读来令人精神振奋,情绪激昂。 4、这篇文章充满了激情,从字里行间能体会到小作者对…的喜爱之情。全文层次清晰,语句流畅。 5、事例叙述生动、具体、趣味性强,且与前面的比喻…一脉相承。最后,作者用寥寥数语,表现出了自已对…的情感,令人感动。 6、文章前后连贯,形成完整的形象。 7、文章语言清新活泼,描写能抓住事物的主要特征,篇幅短小精悍,值得一读。 8、内容生动丰富,语言新颖清爽,结构独特合理。 9、文章有详有略,言之有序,内容生动具体,不失为一篇佳作。 10、特写镜头别开生面,情趣盎然。全文充满童心童趣,读来倍感亲切。 11、文章能过清新有趣的语言,描写了…的事。字里行间,充满童年真童趣,欢声笑语不绝于耳,不失为一篇佳作。 12、详略得当,虚实相生,是的两大特色,……内容更丰富、更生动。 13、全文清新秀逸,亲切委婉,朴素而不落俗淘,值得借见。 14、全文语言生动准确,情节精彩曲折,仿佛将读者带进了开心乐园,令
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1. 书面表达热点预猜（1） 假设你是李红，你的一位美国笔友Robert写E-mail问及你高考后暑假的安排，请根据以下要点，写一封100词左右的email回复他, 可以适当增加细节。 1. 学开车 2. 参加英语培训课程 3. 去北京看奥运会 4. 游览北京的名胜 注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。 2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思； 3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。 Dear Robert, How time flies! ____________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 【命题方向与写作提示】 高考英语书面表达写作素材都是与中学生的日常生活相关的话题，会避免出现考生不熟悉的话题，也不会出现农村或城市学生不熟悉的话题，注重考查考生的语言表达能力。本篇素材考查书信体裁的作文，是应用文的写作，话题涉及社会热点：北京奥运会，内容与中学生的实际生活相关：高考后暑假的安排，体裁是书信体的电子邮件。写作要点包括：1）问候；2）引入话题：高考临近，高考后的安排；3）学开车；4）参加英语培训课程；5）去北京看奥运会；6）游览北京的名胜；7）结束语。 【写作提示】 书面表达一定要注意要点齐全，写作中要注意适当增加细节以使上下文连贯，并使用一定数量的句式结构。 范文(One possible version) Dear Robert: How time flies! The happy days we shared often shines in my memory. What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life. However，I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation. First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China. I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies. Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US. I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long. After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon. That is the plan for my vacation. I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation. Give me your quick reply soon, OK? Best wishes! 2. 书面表达热点预猜（2） 如今世界粮食短缺，价格飞涨，给部分地区造成社会动荡。假设在你校开展的研究性学习中，你们小组以“World Food Crisis”为题进行研究，现在请你代表你们小组向全体同学简要介绍你们的研究成果。主要内容如下：
初中英语作文优秀范文20篇 想要写好英语作文，首先要从两个方面入手，一个是写作技巧，另一个是素材积累，技巧方面大部分学生掌握的都很全面，真正拉开差距的是素材积累。只有脑子里有丰富的素材积累，写起文章来才会得心应手，当然分数也会提高。接下来笑笑老师会带大家学习优秀的作文素材和范文。 无论你现在上初几，这20篇英语范文都应该好好看一看。它们涵盖了初中三年涉及到的所有英语写作的话题，包括学习、健康、网络、生活、环保、礼仪等，会为你的英语写作提供清晰的思路和丰富的素材，多看、多记、多思，你一定能够像这些小作者一样，写出优秀满分英语作文的！ 1 为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。 【优秀满分范文】 How to be a good learner? As a good learner we should have good habits and ways of learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems we’d better ask others for help. As a student working hard is important but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I think all these above will be helpful to us. 2 亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
初一英语作文大全1. Our School 我们学校 Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building. There are thirty classrooms， a modern library， a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard. Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much. 我们学校在城市的西部。这是非常大的一个高大的教学楼。有30间教室，一个现代 化的图书馆，食堂和健身房。有一个大操场，我们经常有运动。有许多树木和花草操场旁边。有超过500的学生和教师在我们的学校，我们都努力工作。我们学校是如此的美丽，我们都非常喜欢它。 初一英语作文大全2. How did you spend your summer vacation 如何过暑假 I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet， read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework， too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there. 我有一个忙碌而有趣的暑假。每一天我做功课，所以我完成了新一届十日前做我的功课。我每天也打乒乓球和篮球与我的朋友。我有时去的电影，去和我的朋友们的乐园。我使用过互联网，看书看电视，每天晚上。我到外婆家和帮助他们做家务了。我帮我父母打扫房间和做饭。最重要的是，我的父母和我去汉南洲，花了一个星期在那里。 初一英语作文大全3. A happy Day 快乐的一天 It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest
优秀作文题目大全这篇关于优秀作文题目大全，是特地为大家整理的，希望对大家有所帮助！ 【作文好题】 作者：中山女高陈家毅老师 【引言】 进入大学的途径，由传统的考招合一，迈入多元入学，考生的机会虽然大幅增加，但考试的压力仍然未减；不管是推荐、申请或考试分发，都需要考，因此，分数就决定了一切，尤其是国文，几乎是国内所有国立大学必考的科目，其分数之关键，自不在言下，文、法、商系如是，理、工亦不例外。 国文科考题一般分成两大部份，一是选择题，二是非选择题。本专栏就非选择题而论，不及其它。所谓非选择题，就是指写作部份而言。近年来，这部份考题，大多偏向引导作答式的题型，考题多方取材，古文名家从不缺席，近代作家及诗人的作品，亦所在多有，其目的，一方面测试学生阅读与鉴赏之能力；一方面则考验同学推想与写作之创意，融阅读与写作于一炉，可谓学思并重，学不废行。 本文循此方向，特拟题目，以供同学思考。 【题目】 《论语．先进》 子路、曾皙、冉有、公西华侍坐。子曰：「以吾一日长乎尔，毋吾以也。居则曰：『不知吾也。』如或知尔，则何以哉？」 子路率尔而对曰：「千乘之国，摄乎大国之间，加之以师旅，因之以饥馑，由也为之，比及三年，可使有勇，且知方也。」夫子哂之。 「求，尔何如？」对曰：「方六、七十，如五、六十，求也为之，比及三年，可使足民；如其礼乐，以俟君子。」 「赤，尔何如？」对曰：「非曰能之，愿学焉：宗庙之事，如会同，端章甫，愿为小相焉。」 「点，尔何如？」鼓瑟希，铿尔，舍瑟而作；对曰： 「异乎二三子之撰。」子曰：「何伤乎！亦各言其志也。」曰：「莫春者，春服既成，冠者五、六人，童子六、七人，浴乎沂，风乎舞雩，咏而归。」夫子喟然叹曰：「吾与点也！」 人生有梦，希望相随。 读过上面文章，请以「如果」为题，写一文章，文长不限，但起码要有启、承、转、合之美。