托福写作句子替换练习--杨竞欧

托福作文考试百个精选替换词1.important =crucial (extremely important),significant(amount or effect large enough to be important)mon=universal, ubiquitous(if something is ubiquitous, it seems to be everywhere)3.abundant=ample(enough and usually extra), plentiful(enough for people's needs and wants)4.stick=adhere, cling(hold on something tightly)5.neglect=ignore.(difference: neglect means someone has not paid enough attention to something; ignore means no attention.)6.near=adjacent(twothings next to each other), adjoin(the same as adjacent)7.pursue=woo(man woos woman, old-fashioned), seek(if you seek sth, you try to obtain it. FORMAL)8.accurate=precise(precise is exact and accurate in all details), exact(correct in every detail)9.vague=obscure(unknown or known by only a few people)10.top=peak, summitpetitor=rival, opponent(especially in sports and politics)12.blame=condemn(if you condemn something, you say it is very bad and unacceptable)13.opinon=perspective, standpoint(means looking at an event or situation in a particular way)14.fame=prestige(describe those who are admired), reputation15.build=erect(you can erect something as buildings, FORMAL), establish16.insult=humiliate(do something or say something which makes people feel ashamed or stupid)plain=grumble (complain something in a bad-tempered way)18.primary=radical (very important and great in degree), fundamental19.relieve=alleviate (alleviate means you make pain or sufferings less intense or severe)20.force=coerces into(coerce means you make someone do something s/he does not want to),compel21.enlarge=magnify(magnify means make something larger than it really is)plex=intricate(if something is intricate, it often has many small parts and details)23. Lonely=solitary (if someone is solitary, there is no one near him/her)24.small=minuscule(very small), minute,25.praise=extol(stronger than praise), compliment(polite and political)26.hard-working=assiduous(someone who is assiduous works hard or does things very thoroughly)27.difficult=arduous (if something is arduous, it is difficult and tiring, and involves a lot of efforts)28.poor(soil)=barren, infertile(used to describe the soil is so poor that plantscannot be planted on it)29.fragile=brittle, vulnerable(someone who is vulnerable is easily hurt emotionally or physically)30.show=demonstrate (to demonstrate a fact means tp make it clear to people.)31.big=massive(large in size, quantity, or extent), colossal(use this word, you emphasize something’s large), tremendous(INFORMAL)32.avoid=shun(if someone shuns something, s/he deliberately avoid that something or keep away from it.)33.fair=impartial(someone who is impartial is able to give a fair opinion or decision on something.)34.attack=assault (physically attack someone), assail (attack violently)35.dislike=abhor(abhor means you hate something to a extreme extent for moral reasons), loathe(dislike very much)!36.ruin=devastate (it means damage something very badly, or utterly destroy it.)39.always=invariably(the same as always, but better than always)40.forever=perpetual(a perpetual state never changes), immutable(something immutable will never change or be changed)41.surprise=startle(it means surprise you slightly), astound(surprise you to a large degree),astonish(the same as astound)42.enthusiasm=zeal (a great enthusiasm), fervency (sincere and enthusiasm)43.quiet=tranquil(calm and peaceful), serene(calm and quiet)44.expensive=exorbitant(it means too expensive that it should be)45.luxurious=lavish(impressive and very expensive), sumptuous(grand and very expensive)46.boring=tedious(if you describe something tedious, you mean it is boring and frustrating)47.respect=esteem(if you esteem someone, you respect and admire him/her. FORMAL)48.worry=fret(if you fret about something, you worry about it)49.cold=chilly(unpleasantly cold), icy(extremely cold)50.hot=boiling(very hot)51.dangerous=perilous(very dangerous, hazardous(dangerous, especially to people's safety and health)52.nowadays=currently53.only=unique(the only one of its kind), distinctive;54.stop=cease(if something ceases, it stops happening or existing)55.part=component(the components of something are the parts that it is made of)56.result=consequence(the results or effects of something)57.obvious=apparent, manifest58.basedon=derived fromcan see or notice them very easily)60.quite=fairly61.pathetic=lamentable(very uncomfortable and disappointing)62.field=domain(a particular field of thought, activities or interest)63.appear=emerge(come into existence)64.whole=entire(the whole of something)65.wet=moist(slightly wet), damp(slightly wet), humid(very damp and hot)66.wrong=erroneous(incorrect or partly correct)67.difficult=formidable68.change=convert(change into another form)69.typical=quintessential(this word means represent a typical example of something)70.careful=cautious(very careful in order to avoid danger), prudent(careful and sensible)71.ability=capacity, capability(the same as ability)72.strange=eccentric(if some one is eccentric, s/he behaves in a strange way, or his/her opinion is different from most people)73.rich=affluent(if you are affluent, you have a lot of money)e= utilize (the same as use)75.dubious=skeptical(if you are skeptical about something, you have doubts on it.)76.satisfy=gratify (if you are gratified by something, it gives you pleasure and satisfaction)77.short=fleeting, ephemeral(if something is ephemeral, it lasts a short time)78.scholarship=fellowship79.angry=enraged(extremely angry)80.smelly=malodorous(used to describe an unpleasant smell)81.ugly=hideous(if something is hideous, it is very ugly or unattractive)82.attractive=appealing(pleasing and attractive), absorbing(something absorbing can attract you a great deal)83.diverse=miscellaneous(a miscellaneous groups consists of many different kinds of things)84.disorder=disarray, chaos85.crazily=frantically(used to describe someone who behaves in a wild and uncontrolled way)86.rapid=meteoric(ATTENTION: meteoric is only used to describe someone achieves success quickly)87.ordinary=mundane(very ordinary and not at interesting or unusual)88.despite=notwithstanding(FORMAL)89.best=optimal(used to describe the best level something can achieve)90.sharp=acute(severe and intense)91.unbelievable=inconceivable(if you deem something inconceivable, you think it very unlike to happen )92.puzzle=perplex(something perplex someone means it confuses and worries him/her because he/she does not understand it)93.method=avenue(away of getting something done)94.famous=distinguished(used to describe people who are successful in their career)95.ancient=archaic(extremely old and extremely old-fashioned)96.decorate=embellish(embellish means make something look more attractive via decorating it with something else)97.possible=feasible(if something is feasible, it can be done, made or achieved)98.so=consequently, accordingly99.rare=infrequent (doesn’t happen often)100.greedy=rapacious(greedy and selfish)。

托福考试写作练习及精选范文(26)TPO 35Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.文章：The Earth today faces many problems. Among these problems, the top three, i n some people's perspective, are probably global warming, pollution and energy crisis. All three, if we really look into them, can be connected with the perva sive use of private cars. It is because of this, I agree with the statement tha t there will be fewer cars in twenty years comparing with today.First of all, people will definitely use fewer cars. If we look at the glob al media, we are seeing an increasing consciousness on environmental problems. Be it the famous documentay by Al Gore, An Inconvenient Truth, or the "Earth On e Hour" movement. They all indicate a global consensus: "We need to help the en vironment". So what's the easiest way to help? Using fewer cars. According to a survey conducted by the Ministry of Environmental Conservation in China, more than 40 percent of carbon dioxide produced by individuals are from private cars. If the trend of eco-friendly consciousness continues to grow in the next 20 ye ars, people will, without a doubt, use fewer and fewer cars. So, in a nutshell, the first reason why people will drive less in twenty years is because they wi ll be more environmentally-concerned.Another key aspect is that, in twenty years, there will be fewer people in the world. If there are fewer people in the world, of course there will be fewe r cars. If we are sensitive to global trends, we can see that a lot of countrie s in the world are facing a decrease in population. The biggest contributors to population growth, China and India, are also experiencing a decrease in the ra te of population increase. In 20 years, I am confident that there will be, without a doubt, fewer people in the world. In this case, there will be a decrease in the needs of transportation. So, it is logical to assume that there will be fewer cars in the world twenty years from now.A final argument I want to make is based on the ever developing technology. In the past twenty years, we have seen tremendous innovations taken place in t he field of transportation. From high-speed trains to cars that run on electric, there is simply no telling what might happen twenty years from now. Considerin g how much we have achieved in the past twenty years, it is not so improbable f or me to say that we might not even need cars in the near future. Who's to say that we won't be traveling on more efficient vehicles? Or maybe public transpor tation may become so convenient that we won't even consider using private trans portation ever again? The fact is, we cannot deny these possibilities for they are very likely to happen. In this light, I am definitely supportive of the vie w that there will be fewer cars in the future.From my arguments above, I think I am very optimistic about the future. I b elieve that, in twenty years, we will be living in a society with much fewer ca rs. And I am looking forward to that future.。

1.People should insist on a challenging plan rather than a practical plan.2.University students should be required to take history courses no matter what field they study.3.A low-paid but secure job is better than a job with a high salary but easy to lose.ernments should focus its budget more on art museums and concert halls than on recreational facilities such as swimming pools and playground.5.A government should focus its budget more on young children education than on universities.ernments should spend more money on environment protection than on economic development.7.People are now easier to become educated than in the past.8.In twenty years, there will be fewer cars in use than in today.9.People in the past were easier to be happy and satisfied than they are today.10.Advertisements make the products seem better than they really are.11.Technology makes people's lives simpler in turn to make people's lives more complicated.12.Movies and television have more negative effects than positive effects on young people.13.People who do not work because they have enough money are rarely happy.14.People will feel happier when they finish a difficult and challenging work than they finish an easy work.15.People today will be happier if they have fewer possessions.16.Successful people take new things and take risks rather than the thing that they've done well.17.People who keep their room clean and tidy are more likely to be successful in the future.18.Future career success relies more on other people more than studying hard at school.19.Only movies that can teach people something about real life are worth watching.20.Th e best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teachers’ salary.21.Advertising is the only cause of unhealthy eating habits.22.Now we have too many sources of news and information that we cannot tell who is telling the truth.23.If parents want their children to perform well at school, they should limit their children’s time on watching television.24.People today can solve many important problems so they do not need help from the government.。

•1,People are more friendly in the past than today.•2,Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.•3,Students are more interested in politics today than before?•4,It is easier to succeed nowadays than it was in the past.•5,In the past teachers had more influence on the young people than they do today. •6, Students are more interested in politics today than they were in the past.•7, Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.•8, Teaching was a harder job in the past than it is today.•9, The ability to cooperate well with others is more important today than it was in the past.•10，People rely on their neighbors less now than in the past.•Young people today are less dependent on their parents than in the past.Never do topics concerning dependence fail to fascinate us in the modern society. It is wildly accepted that the young people tend to be independent. From my perspective, the youth are less dependent on their parents nowadays than in the old days based on the following reasons.One of the most critical reasons is that the development of science and technology enable them to solve problems easier. Since there are so many new inventions coming out these days, youth are able to search things they do not understand online and solve them without the help from their parents. This kind of help from the internet is always more helpful than their parents, so there is no reason relying on parents. For instance, decades ago the young might ask parents for help understanding how to actually cook a dish. However, we can easily search online or just let the electric cooker automatically cook the ingredients.The changing of life styles also gives rise to independence of the children. The world is now in a quick mode and a lot of people are used to living in rapid rhythm style.Therefore there is less communication than in the past. If the youth consider them as individuals according to the new life style, they are less likely to be dependent upon their parents. Take my friend as an example, he always hangs out with friends and he hardly has time to have a really long talk with family members. After becoming less imitate with parents, he depend less on them. Here we can tell the life style changing is significant on determining the young’s less independence.Education lead students learn to solve problems on their own and become less dependent. The new educating system asks teachers to cultivate students’problem solving skills. They always make students think more and try more to solve problems on their own in order to achieve the goal. The educating method encourages students to ask less for help. I tend to ask parents for less help because the good educating method decreases my tendency to be dependent. Usually I can easily solve the problem after trying for several times.All reasons taken into account, we can safely reach the conclusion that young people now depend less on parents than before. That's because of the help from the well-developed science and technology and their changing of life style. Besides their education make them learn problem solving skills.。

新东方TOEFL作文题选编（2）新东方TOEFL作文题选编(2)26. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.A student's main purpose in getting an education is to earn a lot of money. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.27. Some students like to attend a large university that has many students. Others prefer to attend a small university that has fewer students. Which type of university do you prefer?Use specific reasons and example to support your answer.28. Some students like to have outdoor activities. Others like indoor activities. Which do you prefer? Give specific reasons and examples to illustrate your answer.29. How do movies or TV influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.30. Some people like to buy books to read, others like to borr4Dw books from libraries or from other people. Compare the advantages of these two ways of reading. Which do you prefer? Why?31. Some universities arrange a long period of vacation for students in the school year, others arrange several short vacations. Which kind of vacation do you prefer---a long vacation or a short one? Give specific reasons and examples for your answer.32. Some people like to communicate by telephone, Other people like to communicate by letter. Which do you prefer to communicate-by phone or by letter? Use specific and details to explain your answer.33. Some people like to listen to classical music, others liketo listen to popular music (including popular songs). Which kind of music do you prefer? Give specific reasons for your answer.34. Games teach people about life. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give specific s for your answer.35. Many important natural resources such as water, forests, oil, etc, are running out in the world today. What。

托福写作语言进阶提高Part 6 常用词和句式的替换练习一．常用词替换1. 转变对于她态度的转变，我感到很震惊。

辨析：（1）Change：可以指任何变化，常用来指根本的或者完全的变化。

【to become different】1.He changed from an optimist to a pessimist.2.You can't change human nature.3.The leaves change color from green to red in the fall.（2）Transform:指使人或物在性质上或形态上发生彻底或根本的积极的变化,常指突然或神秘地改变,有时含有夸张的意味。

【to change in composition orstructure;to change the outward from or appearance of 】1.They wanted to transform his world outlook.2.I believe she would transform me into a talker.3.A smile transformed her face.（3）Convert: 是强调改变（某事物）的形式和用途；改变信仰【make to change from one (form, use, etc.) into another; to bring over from one belief, view, or party to another 】1.The solar cell can convert the energy of sunlight into electric energy.2.My mother has converted to Catholicism.3.Coal can be converted to gas.（4）alter: 只意味着局部的或表面的变化，而没有变成另一种事物。

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托福TPO13独立写作题目原文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福TPO13独立写作满分范文：The extended family was of great importance in the good old days, but is it still of great importance in our modern society? In my point of view, though the extended family is still important, it is really less important that it was before because of the development of the new society.One of the important uses of the extended family is to help with family affairs and housework. Meanwhile, nowadays people tend to turn to the community service to help with housework. Under this circumstance, we can hire someone else, who doesn’t belong to our whole family, to help us with family work. For instance, my mom was brought up with the help of her grandparents. But I was taken care of by the baby-sitter, whom may parents hired from thecommunity service center. The community service center provides good service with a reasonable price.Another important thing that extended family can to is to provide information to and educate family members. However, in the modern society, we have schools to get our education. We have several methods, such as Television and Internet, to get information. These are resources which can be easily had accessto. We do not depend on our family members to get knowledge of the world we live in any longer.In addition, nowadays people tend to live alone with their small care family rather than live with many family members within a big family. Therefore, we have our own circle of communication and we have less in common between different families. Taking my own family as an example, my family and my uncle’s are living in the different cities. We usually get together only on spring festival. We have different friends and interest, so sometimes we just find it hard to have something in common. Thus, if we really have something in trouble, we can hardly turn to them for help.All in all, though extended family is still essential to us to some extent, itis less useful with the development of the modern society. The importance of extended family is now fading.以上是给大家整理的托福TPO13独立写作题目文本+满分范文，希望对你有所帮助!。

TOEFL ESSAY 010100014Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks・ Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice・We have many chances either to choose to do what we already do well or to choose something we5ve never tried before through out our lives. There might be great risk and staggering challenge ahead of a new road. However, I prefer to explore the unknown world rather than to do the same thing in my whole life.Working on what one's good at means to stay in safe or to maintain what he is possessing now, like properties, status or reputation. Another advantage of this is that the more a person working on a subject, the deeper understanding he get. In other words, experts and specialists are formed in this way.Though there might be several distinctive advantage of what one is good at. But the advantages of trying new things far overweigh them. Only when we trying new things can we discover our potential interests and talents. My elder sister, for example, didn't realize that psychology is her optimal field of career until she was persuaded by her professor to take an psychology course. Before that, she was convinced that she will be a computer programmer in the future. Though I have definite goals in mind now, but I believe this might not be the best direction for me and I will possibly discover what is the most appropriate for me by taking a large variety of courses・Apart from discovering one's real potential, taking risks to try new things can help one to broaden his eye view and thoughts which is essential in many occupations acquire for creative thoughts, such as movie making, game designing. To make a movie, the film maker not only has to be familiar with the process of filming, he should also know well about the topic he is filming. If he knows nothing about the background of the story, he could only produce a movie without soul but impressive visual effect which is not called a good movie. Also, a game designer who likes to try new things tends to have more interesting ideas than others, for he has wide range of inspirations in mind as a result of his general experienee.The last but not the least reason for me to try is that my personality decides I am a generalist rather than a specialist. I'm genetically eager to explore the unknown world and seldom follow the routine, and recently I began to anticipate an activity called 'urban exploration' which I have never tried before.Though taking risk might bring me to the plight situation, but I think it can not eclipse the profit of risking brings・ By uncovering potential power and getting over the limits of thinking, I believe ifs a bargain and I will always be ready for new tasks.Editor's CommentsOff the record, I like your spirit in daring to think out of the box, and trying newthings. It keeps things fresh for us, and from that risk-taking, we are rewarded with a new in sight of thin gs, albeit the possibility of losing more might be imminent as well.Perhaps the only concern that I have for your essay is your choice of small words. If you look at the corrections made, you'd notice that most of them dealt with the correction of a word or phrase (save that of some of your other corrections wherein a large chunk was corrected) that is not often corrected. Incorrectly using simple words can often lead to confusion, and misinterpretation of your points, so be careful with them, even if, at first glance, they don't really hold any real significance to the actual points.Also, don't forget to indent your first paragraph as well.For your essay, you get a 3.5. Improve more on your writing! You're doing good. Editor's MarksWe have many chances either to choose to do what we already do well or to choose something we've never tried before throughout our lives. There might be great risk and staggering challenge ahead. However despite this obstacle, I prefer to explore the unknown world rather than to do the same thing in my whole life.Though there might be several distinctive advantages of simply working on what one is good at, the advantages of trying new things far overweigh complacency and settling with what you already know. Only when we try new things can we discover our potential interests and talents・ My elder sister, for example, didn't realize that psychology would be her best career move until she was persuaded by her professor to take a psychology course・ Before that, she was convinced that she will be a computer programmer in the future. Though I have definite goals in mind now, I believe this might not be the best di recti on for me and I will possibly discover what is the most appropriate for me by taking a large variety of courses.Apart from discovering one's new potential, taking risks to try new things can help one to broaden his points-of-view and thoughts which are essential in many occupations which require a lot of creativity, such as movie making, game designing. To make a movie, the film maker not only has to be familiar with the process of filming, he should also find new ways to tell the story. If he fails to diversify in his film-making, he loses the attention of this audienee because he doesn't provide a new perspective for them. A game designer, on the other hand, must venture into new ways in developing the game and story in order to keep things interesting for the playerThough taking risks might bring me to a situation that might let me end up losing more things, but I think it cannot eclipse the profit risk-taking . By uncovering new potentials and getting over the limits of thinking, I believe ifsa bargain Pm willing to wager on.。

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TOEFL 写作攻略无论你水平如何，本章教给你TES、托福作文的游戏规则和我们的应对技巧，保证易学易懂，立竿见影。

托福作文5分的标准中，有一句话是：“句间连接流畅，句式使用恰当、灵活；用词基本得体”。

同样，在平时的英语训练中，这一句话要我们花费多少时间、进行多少训练，才勉强达到。

不过，我们在这一章中，将会让您尽量少走弯路，朝这个目标前进。

当然，你的努力也是必不可少的条件。

学英语本身就是一个积累的过程。

许多人在写英语作文时，往往出现无词可用的情况，或者同样的意思，前面已经用过一个词了，这里找不到一个近义词或者同义词来替代。

这都是积累不够的缘故。

和汉语一样，英语词汇博大精深，同一个意思往往有几百种表达法，常用的也能有十来种，只要你积累够了，就绝对不会出现无词可用的情况。

希望读者们多多积累，在脑海中建立一个强大的同义词、近义词词库，这样在考试时，自然文思泉涌，一气呵成，不用卡在那边冥思苦想用什么词汇了。

本章的结构，正是由字到词，由句到段，由段成文。

本书中，我们向你详细介绍了写作技巧，让您胸有成竹，文采飞扬。

第一节托福作文必杀技本小节是全书中最有价值的小节之一，因为我们将在其中介绍几招托福作文的“必杀技”。

请注意，“必杀技”的含义是用上去就好使的技巧，因此不会介绍很多（事实上也没有很多），只凭我们在新东方多年的教学经验，把最有效的技巧罗列出来。

只要你能够掌握这些技巧，并且在考试中加以巧妙运用，你的作文分数就会上涨。

我们在本书的前面一章提到过铁岭老师的模板。

这个栽赃法提出了一个非常科学的理念，即“判分的老外看重两点，文章的质和文章和量！所谓‘质’就是文章当中的闪光点，出闪光点是需要灵感的，而一般人写文章的时候，没有把‘质’提高上去，那有只有从‘量’上面下功夫了，以期达到从量变到质变的飞跃”。

铁老师的模板帮助大家提高了“量”，我们再进一步帮助大家提高“质”。

句式的变化和多样性更能体现非同质化的竞争，体现出竞争优势，使得应试者可以脱颖而出。

（15）Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:nowadays advertisements are more honest than they were in the past.开头：现在的广告比以前的广告更不诚实了。

（话题引入+展示争论的话题+ 我的观点及过渡）Advertising is an effective way to popularize products. In this world full of intense competitions, advertisements increasingly incorporate into our daily lives taking different forms. Along with this phenomenon comes a heated debate: are today’s advertisements more honest than they were in the past? From my perspective, businessmen nowadays are more inclined to make their advertisements exaggerated in order to take an upper hand in commercial competition. There are two examples below that can well illustrate my viewpoint.中间段1：食品领域，广告非常诱人，但实际上差强人意。

（主题句+说理论证+细节例子）The first example comes from the food industry nowadays. It is not uncommon that food companies choose to feature their food in an exaggerating way with the purpose of catching customers’ attention. Once I went by the door of a restaurant, a salesman handed me a coupon that was a form of advertisement. This coupon presented a mouth-watering burger with a big chunk of beef and many fresh vegetables. My empty stomach compelled me to enter the restaurant and order that burger. However, to my disappointment, I only found that the burger was much smaller than what was shown in the coupon.中间段2：教育培训领域经常出现过分承诺的情况。

托福写作初级-翻译、词句替换练习题（含学生答案）课程1第一部分翻译下面的句子1.为了保护濒危物种(the endangered species)，我们必须竭尽所能We must do everything to protect the endangered species.2.为了完成任务，我尝试了各种工具来修(repair)我的车I try every tours to repair my car in an effort to achieve the work.3.北朝鲜和美国重启双边会谈(restart bilateral talks)，试图解决由来已久的(age-old)核问题(nuclear issue)North Korea and America restarted bilateral talks in an effort to solve the age-old nuclear issue.4.奥巴马的目标是提高(increase)中产阶级的可支配收入(disposable income)Obama’s goal is to increase disposable income.5.昨天老妈同意给我买车了，但是她没买My mother agreed to buy me a car yesterday, but she failed to do it.6.我的想法(idea)是去租一辆汽车My idea is to lease a car.7.为了通过SAT考试，提高我的词汇量很关键(essential)It’s essential to improve my number of words to pass SAT8.达到目标体重的方法之一是通过(through)身体锻炼(physical exercise)It’s one way to reach goal weight through physical exercise.9.解决空气污染的方法之一是发展公共交通(public transport)（两种写法）One way to reduce air pollution is to develop public transport.To develop public transport is a way to reduce air pollution.10.使用人工色素(artificial color)是使食物色彩丰富(colorful)的最常见方法（两种写法）It’s the most popular way to make food colorful to use artificial color.To use artificial color is the most popular way to make food colorful.11.修建地铁(metro)是降低交通堵塞(congestion)的最佳方法（两种写法）To make metro is the best way to reduce transport congestion.The best way to reduce transport congestion is to make metro.第二部分地道的替换词1.事实是：In factthe reality is that2.快乐：happiness，例句：America is about life, liberty and the pursuit of happiness3.悲伤sadnessgrief4.私家车保有量：the ownership of private cars5.名人：Famous mancelebritie s6.领域：Place onSphere造句练习：1.残酷的(harsh)现实是她不爱我The harsh fact is she doesn’t love me.2.我的目标是追求快乐My goal is to look for happiness.3.我不得不掩藏我的悲伤(grieves)I have to cover my grieves.4.正在上涨的私家车保有量引发了一系列的交通问题An increasing number of the ownership of private cars causes some traffic problems.第三部分段落阅读及仿写Obviously, you can't make everyone happy all the time, and some of your actions are going to ruffle feathers. One way to figure out how to handle these situations is to imagine how you will describe what happened later, when the dust has cleared（主旨句）. I'm reminded of a case a few years ago when a student come to me for advice. He was leading the campus-wide business competition and one team didn't show up for the final round of judging. Like all the teams that reach that stage of the competition, the team had been working on the project for seven months and had managed to（设法做到了）make it over a lot of hurdles （跨栏）to get to the finish line（目的）. The team hadn't received the message about the presentation time, in part because it was posted late and in part because they weren't paying attention. The student came to ask my opinion（目的）was torn（撕裂）about what to do （该做什么）. He felt there were two clear choices: he could hold fast to（坚持）the rules and disqualify the team, or he could be flexible and find another time for them to present their work.（目的）His gut reaction （直觉反应）was to stick to the rules. Everyone else had managed to show up, and it was going to be a burden to reschedule（目的）. The only guidance I gave him was this: whatever he did, I hoped he would be pleased with his decision at a later date. I urged him to consider how he would describe this challenge if during a job interview he were asked how he handled an ambiguous situation. The delinquent team was subsequently allowed to present, and I realized afterward that thinking about how you want to tell the story in the future is a great way to assess your response to dilemmas in general. Craft the story now so you'll be proud to tell it later.（段尾总结，与主旨句呼应）地道表达：克服了很多困难：Try ones bestover a lot of hurdles到达终点/完成：achieveget to the finish line（面对两难的选择时）不知道该如何选择：be torn about what to do，其中torn是tear的过去时，这里做动词Don’t know how to choose坚持规则：hold fast to the rules, stick to the rulesObey the rules佳句仿写你可以为我找另一个时间来做演讲(give a lecture)You can give a lecture for me in another time.成为我们的一员，你将会非常自豪You’ll be proud of yourself to join us.我不知道该选哪个女孩I don’t know which girl to choose.课程21，很少有人能克服困难成功的戒了烟(quit smoking)。

托福写作语言进阶提高Part 3 句子的优化练习1. 定语从句的优化1)Jason Wu, who is a contemporary artist, created a painting namedGoing Home,which made a blast in the art field.2)Information that is provided in the advertisements is usually overlyexaggerating.3)He is always occupied by his work, which makes it difficult for his familyto enjoy the time with him.4)The Internet, which is an efficient means to connect people fromdifferent places, is widely used all over the world.5)Justin Bibber, who is a young celebrity with outstanding talents, exertsnegative influence on teenagers with his bad behavior.6)Interstel l ar, wh i ch i s a successfu l sc i ence-­‐fiction mov i e,i nsp i res aud i ence’s enthus i asm about phys i cs and astronomy.7)People who are used to obtaining information through printednewspaper may find it difficult to make use of the advanced technological devices to interact with information.8)The milk powder which contains poisonous matters reach thousands ofconsumers through advertisement.9)The customers who are cheated by the inflated claims in theadvertisement will be less likely to fall in the trap again.10)The movie successfully portrays a brave hero in the WWII, whichleaves a deep impression on the audience.11)The Internet allows everyone to freely express their opinion, which speaks more directly to the current issues.12)Reading books requires more deep thinking than watching TV, which makes it possible for children to exercise their intelligence andimagination.13）Environmental problems, which are the hottest issues nowadays, should be taken seriously in the near future.14）Protecting our environment, which is the most important subject, should be learnt by everyone nowadays.15）Peop l e who work on so l ving our environmenta l prob l ems are a l ways smart and have a long-­‐term v i ew.16）Students who know what to do to make our environment a better one are very clever.17）People love money, which makes it so hard for them to focus on solving ourenvironmental problems because protecting our environment won’t benefit them in any ways, at least not for now.18）We haven’t realized the severe of our environmental problems, which makes it almost impossible for us to really solve them.19）Peking University, which is one of the best universities in China, strives to gain universal acclaim by investing more money on its research programs.20）Professor Clark, who is a Nobel laureate, finds a way to cure AIDS.21）This experiment, which is done by Professor Clark, shows a positive result.22）He comes from a wealthy family, which allows him to study abroad with scholarship or not.23）The school plans to build a new stadium on campus, which cheers all students up.2. 状语从句的优化1）When we buy things, we always tend to ask for the suggestions form our family or friends, who provide us with reliable information.2)Since people see how other people could become better off with thenew product,they surely would like to purchase that particular productthemselves.3)Once people see the beautified pictures in the advertisements, they willnaturally be willing to buy the products.4)When children get addicted to watching TV, their academicperformance will inevitably be affected.5)Even though the domestic film industry spends millions of dollarsmaking blockbusters,it still fails to attract young audience.6)Because popular celebrities exert great influence on teenagers’behaviors, they should avoid showing bad images in public.7)Because nowadays TV programs are full of useless and violentinformation, they will harm students’ psychological development.8）When we realize the importance of protecting our environment, we can actually solve our environmental problems.9）When we finally stop throwing trash everywhere, we can talk about protecting our environment.10）Because we did realize the importance of protecting our environment, we solved a lot of our environmental problems.11）Because we started educating our children about how to protect our environment, we made it easier for us to solve those problems.12）When I walked along the street, I caught sight of a beauty.13）When I saw from summit, the village seems to be gorgeous.14）When I entered in college, I followed my parents’ intention and I majored in anthropology, for I did not realize what my preference indeed was.15）When they yelled to me for almost forty minutes, consumer service sent someone to amend my broken television.16）When he sees the right opportunity, he would grab it right away. 17）Once you fall in love with English, you would find it so easy to learn.18）If I wear a Real Madrid jersey to school tomorrow, I would skip the class to watch the live game.19）Because he is one of the top students in his class, he always is the apple of his teacher’s eye.20）Because it sells good in the Asian market, it starts to become a hit all over the world.3.名词化练习(高级优化)1）因为人们的工作特别繁忙，所以他们很少有时间跟家庭成员呆在一起。

托福综合写作句子改写方法1. 原句：这个理论很复杂。

改写：这理论复杂得就像一团乱麻，理都理不清。

2. 原句：那座建筑非常高大。

改写：那座建筑高得呀，仿佛都能捅破老天爷的肚皮了。

3. 原句：他跑得很快。

改写：他跑得那叫一个快，就像屁股后面着了火的火箭。

4. 原句：这个问题很难解决。

改写：这个问题难解决得就像要从铁公鸡身上拔毛一样。

5. 原句：她的歌声很动听。

改写：她的歌声动听得像一群百灵鸟在耳边开音乐会。

6. 原句：这个地方很拥挤。

改写：这个地方拥挤得像罐头里塞得满满的沙丁鱼。

7. 原句：那本书很厚。

改写：那本书厚得像一块砖头，能直接当凶器使了。

8. 原句：他的力气很大。

改写：他的力气大得能像拎小鸡仔一样拎起一头牛。

9. 原句：这道菜很辣。

改写：这道菜辣得就像在嘴里放了一把火，要把舌头都烧没了。

10. 原句：天气很热。

改写：天气热得像太上老君的炼丹炉被打翻了一样。

11. 原句：她很害羞。

改写：她害羞得像一只见了猫的小老鼠，恨不得找个地缝钻进去。

12. 原句：他很聪明。

改写：他聪明得像个成了精的小狐狸，啥事儿都难不倒他。

13. 原句：那片海很广阔。

改写：那片海广阔得像老天爷用蓝色颜料任性泼洒出来的巨幅画卷。

14. 原句：这个任务很艰巨。

改写：这个任务艰巨得像要把喜马拉雅山移走一样。

15. 原句：他的饭量很大。

改写：他的饭量大得像个永远填不满的无底洞。

16. 原句：这只猫很懒。

改写：这只猫懒得出奇，就像一块化了的黄油瘫在那里。

17. 原句：那个孩子很调皮。

改写：那个孩子调皮得像孙猴子下凡，整天大闹天宫。

18. 原句：这个消息很惊人。

改写：这个消息惊人得像在平静的湖水里扔了颗原子弹。

托福写作句子练习：SUCCESS 成功篇Achievement provides the only real pleasure in life .( Thomas Edison , American inventor)有所成就是人生唯一的真正乐趣。

( 美国发明家爱迪生. T. )But has the last word been said ? Is all hope to be lost ? Is the defeat final No !(Charles De Gaulle , French president )但是难道败局已定，胜利已经无望?不，不能这样说! (法国总统戴高乐. C.)I succeeded because I willed it ; I never hesitated .(Bonaparte Napoleon , French emperor )我成功是因为我有决心，从不踌躇。

(法国皇帝拿破仑. B .)If you wish to succeed , you should use persistence as your good friend , experience as your reference , prudence as your brother and hope as your sentry. (Thomas Edison , American inventor ) 如果你希望成功，当以恒心为良友、以经验为参谋、以谨慎为兄弟、以希望为哨兵。

(美国发明家爱迪生. T.)Only those who have the patience to do simple things perfectly ever acquire the skill to do difficult things easily . (Friedrich Schiller , German Dramatist and poet).只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人，才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事。

七夕，古今诗人惯咏星月与悲情。

吾生虽晚，世态炎凉却已看透矣。

情也成空，且作“挥手袖底风”罢。

是夜，窗外风雨如晦，吾独坐陋室，听一曲《尘缘》，合成诗韵一首，觉放诸古今，亦独有风韵也。

乃书于纸上。

毕而卧。

凄然入梦。

乙酉年七月初七。

-----啸之记。

Q：“Public transportation should be encouraged instead of private cars.” Do you agree with this statement? Please give reasons for your answer.A：With the improvement of living standards, some people can afford to buy their own cars. They drive to work or drive to the suburbs, enjoying the happy holidays. Yet, private cars can‟t replace public transportation, such as buses or subway s. Compared with private cars, buses and subways have several advantages. First, they are very cheap. A monthly ticket enables one to go from almost any part of the city to another by bus or subway. Second, the bus and subway schedules are well planned and seldom does one have to wait very long to catch them. Third, they have comfortable seats and some of them are air-conditioned. Therefore, public transportation should be encouraged.Q:What do you think are the qualities of a good leader？A:In my opinion, a good leader should be trustworthy, persistent and forward-looking. The world is looking for honest and upright leaders, too.In order to leave this world a different place, a leader also has to persevere. Leaders don't grow in a comfort zone（温室）. Leaders are not people with exceptional （例外的，特别的）talent; they are people who have learned from their mistakes and get up and try again, being a non-quitter（永不放弃的人）.Being in leadership roles, a person should be able to see the big picture and take risks, doing things right and at the right time. Thus he can correctly assess a situation and knows how to take the next step.In summary, honesty, endurance, and having a big vision are the good qualities of / for effective leadership.Q:Do you agree or disagree that people should always tell the truth?A:I don‟t think it‟s a good idea for people to always speak the truth. Truth can enhance but sometimes can destroy a relationship, depending upon the intent.There are times when telling "truth" is unloving. For example, you might not be wild about what your friend is wearing, but if your friend is giving an important presentation and asks you how s/he looks, it would not be in anyone's highest good （有最大好处）to give your opinion.There are also times when many of us have much difficulty speaking our truth especially to important others such as parents, siblings, close friends, and beloved ones. We are afraid the other person will be angry or hurt by our truth, even when we state it without judgment or blame.Therefore, telling the truth is not always helpful. The important thing in telling the truth is to be honest with yourself about your own intent in telling your truth.Sample answer:The lecture is about the relationship between demands for certain products and their prices in the market. Generally the proportion relationship beween them is inverse, that is, when the price goes up, the demand immediately drops down. The higher the price is, the less willingly the consumers pay for. Instead, some former consumers may shift to other alternative products. However, there are also exceptions to this rule. That is, when the price of certain products increases, the demands for them could also rise for a while. However, consumers could still buy the product for storage because it is relatively affordable compared to other kinds of products. Also they wouldn‟t take the risk of paying the soaring price later on.Q:What new skill would you like to learn? Explain why this skill would be good for you to have.A:A new skill that I would like to learn is （稍换了一种说法）to cook. Chinaenjoys a worldwide reputation as “kingdom of cuisine”. Chinese dishes are popular all over the world. And I , as a would-be overseas Chinese student, is expected to know how to cook food that shows the perfect combination of “color, aroma and taste” -------the three essential factors in judging Chinese cooking（背景介绍）. It would be a good skill to have because I could ask my classmates and friends over to my house and cook for them. Also, I could do a television cooking show to publicize our food culture. Maybe I could make money that way, but the main reason is I enjoy cooking and want to share with people the pleasure derived from it.Q:Some people plan every detail of their vacation in advance. Others prefer to leave most details flexible or open to chance. Which do you think is better andwhy?A:I think advance planning is critical to a successful vacation, regardless of whether the trip is long or short.To have a comfortable vacation, it‟s necessary to check the climate for the time to plan to visit. And it is always a good idea to make advance hotel reservations when vacationing. Planning the vacation in advance will also give us more time to prepare for it and to ensure that we have all of the needed. This could mean we will not have to miss out on activities because of not having the correct equipment. Especially when we decide to go camping for vacation, reservations in advance allow us to determine ahead of time whether or not the campground has a lake, hiking trails, electricity, etc. Besides, we get the idea of what to take.Last but not least, advance vacation planning is likely to make our experience a more memorable one.Q:Describe a memoriable celebration or social event.2005. 12. 16/2005.12. 17 / 2006. 2. 11真题A:A type of social event celebrated in my culture is the flag-raising ceremony on National Day. Oceans of (表示“许多”)people from all across the country come to Beijing the day before. They are very excited to see the ceremony with their own eyes instead of on TV. Some even have been planting this dream in their mind for years. They arrive around 6:00 early in the morning, waiting for the special moment. I guess they are all overwhelmed (震撼的) and thrilled (激动)by the wonderful scene at the time. On the other hand, the view ofthe honor guard parade is fantastic,the guards are wearing the green military uniform and marching to Tianmen Square with a high spirit. Each birthday celebration of the great country always begin with such a solemn (庄严的) flag-raising ceremony, which strengthens the unity and motivation of its people. Q:Which do you prefer to communicate with your family and friends by letter and e-mail or by telephone?新托福iBT口语黄金80题中的第57题A:People have different preferences, but for me, I‟d like to communicate with my family and friends by telephone.Talking on the phone is direct and fast. I now live far from my family, and my friends are often busy, so I use the phone to communicate with them. Also, I can make sure whether they are fine by listening to their voice.Writing a letter is not practical because my parents are too old to read clearly and my handrwriting is not neat enough as well.Another disadvantage of writing a letter is that it‟s too slow. Email is fast, but it mig ht not be checked in time.So I use the telephone more often.Q:Choose an object you like and explain why it is of special value to you. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.A:I‟d like to talk about the cellphone I bought two years ago. I spent my first month‟s salary on it and I felt happy.It is an NEC with a wid range of functions. Besides the normal functions like making telephone calls, sending messages, checking the calendar and the time, taking memos, it has an easy wireless access to the Internet, through which I can search the latest information and even chat with my friends.Other than that, it can also be used to watch TV, take photos and consult new words in an English-Chinese dictionary, which is very convenient for an English learner.What‟s more, it looks beautiful. It has a large screen, with a good color combination of black and silver.In a word, I like it a lot because it‟s so useful and brings me much convenience.Q:Some people tend to judge a person on the basis of first observation. Some people believe it takes a long time to know a person well. Which approach to knowing people do you think is better and why?A:In my point of view, I don‟t think judging a person on the basis of first observation is generally correct.First of all, a person usually tries to appear nicer than he or she really is when first meeting someone. Some even pretend to be good on purpose.Second, good looks doesn‟t necessarily match good character. People should be wise to realize the possibilities of false impressions they may have at the first glance. In fact, a person‟s character can be fairly judged through careful observation …cause the true character can only be revealed in the person‟s reactions to different events.It takes time to get to know someone and find out the real personality. Therefore, judging a person by the appearance is often wrong.Q:If you get a chance to choose a job, what will you do? What‟s your reason for choosing this job?Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.A:If I could freely choose any job, I would choose a job where I could do something constructive and beneficial for ordinary people. Definitely it would be something helping people.Teaching of course is sort of that kind of job-if you do it properly you can certainly help people. Traditionally in China teachers have been very respected; we have a saying a teacher for a day is a father for life.Nowadays, attitudes are changing, and perhaps people are more realistic. But my dream isn‟t changing. I wouldn‟t be helping them materially but I could give them a lot of pleasure and lighten their days.I love teaching and I want it to be my whole life‟s career …cause I feel I really am contributing something to people‟s live s, to help them.Q:If you unexpectedly receive a large amount of money, what will you do with it? Would you spend it for practical purpose or simply for fun? State your opinion and explain your reasons.5 j$A:If I got a lot of money, the first thing I would like to do is to go for overseas study. I have always wanted to finish my university in a different country. When I was in junior high, one of my classmates got a chance to go to the USA. At that time there were not many families who could afford their child to do that. To me, it was also a dream, and the dream has been planting in my mind until today. Therefore, I would definitely do this first if I had enough money. Then, I would give the rest of the money to my parents so that they could live a better and easier life. These two things above are what I really would like to do if I had a lot of money.Q:Which place is your favorite place when you were a child? Describe it and explain why you liked to go there.A:When I was young, the place I most liked to go is the beach I live close to.I love nature----white, powdery sand along crystal-clear waters, palm trees for shade, and the sea breeze are all the things that I really appreciate.Besides, I could do a lot of things there. There were many fun and athletic activities available. I learned how to swim there and building sand castles is my favorite activity. When the weather was awsome, I just lay on the beach and enjoyed the sun.Also I made my childhood friends there and we still keep in touch to this day. It is the place that brought me a lot of wonderful memories and that‟s why I loved to go there.Q:Compared with science and math study, the study of art and literature is not very important. Do you agree or disagree?A:Many people may think that studying science and math is more beneficial. However, I do believe that art and literature also have their own importance on our lives.To begin with, our life relies a great deal on such subjects as art and literature. Many aspects of our lives need to be treated by art and literature. As human beings, we have feelings and emotions which are expected to be cared for. That‟s why we have music, movies, books, paintings, sculptures for us to relax, enjoy, enlighten our mind and refresh our soul.Apart from that, I believe that some people are born with scientific ability while others are born with literary talents. So let a scientist do the research, and let a painter paint.Q:Describe a work of art, such as a song, poem or painting, which has made a lasting impression on you. Please explain the impression and include specific examples and details in your explanation.A:I‟d like to talk about a painting that comes to my mind first---Mona Lisa, an oil painting by the famous Italian artist Leonardo da Vinci.A ctually I‟ve never seen the original painting, but I remember the first time I saw its reproduction was when I was in elementary school. The picture is really amazing. The painting shows a woman looking out at the viewer with an “enigmatic smile” （神秘的微笑）. When you look at her, no matter where you stand, you‟ll find her looking at you and smiling at you.My arts teacher told us that Mona Lisa is perhaps the most famous piece in art history and is, perhaps the most widely known portrait in the western world. It‟s so different from the paintings of Chinese style. My teacher also told us that we could learn a lot about other cultures from painting, which I believe is quite true.Q:Some people prefer to keep reading a new book until it is finished. Others prefer to stop reading whenever they lose interest. Which method of reading do you think is better and why?A:In my opinion, I like to keep reading a new book until it is finished.This way, I can develop a new ability to maintain focus. Reading at parts kind of gets boring. It‟s true that there are some people who start a book and never finish it and then switch to another book and never complete it either.Normally, people stop reading when they lose interest …cause they think if they continue, it won‟t be of any help but annoyance. On the contrary, when you keep reading and afterwards you‟ll find it‟s going to get interesting. Gradually you‟ll renew enthusiasm for reading, and thus form a good habit of reading.Therefore, I would rather be a sequential finisher than a scattered reader.Q:Describe the most disappointing event in your life and explain why you were disappointed. Please include specific details in your explanation.A:I went to the Nordstrom store at Xidan, which is about an hour‟s subway ride a way from my home. I bought some perfume and some skin care products and I also asked for the perfume atomizer (喷雾器) bottle.When I got home, I opened the perfume box, finding out that the sales rep (representative 的简称) gave me the wrong bottle. It was the large bottle that wasn't an atomizer and wasn't refillable. I was very upset, as now I would have to make another 2-hour round trip if I wanted to return the product for the correct one. I have decided that I would just keep the bottle I purchased and not deal with the hassle (麻烦trouble) of the long ride back to the store.I was very surprised at my experience considering I have friends that rave about (对。