读后续写好句积累
1. She tried to hide her anger.
她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。
(hide your disappointment/anger...掩饰...)
2. She laughed to hide her nervousness.
她笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。
3. The treatment offers a ray of hope for cancer sufferers
这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。
(a ray of hope/light 一线希望/光明)
4. Rays of light filtered through the trees.
一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。(透过?f?lt?)
5. His statement was greeted with cries of astonishment and anger.
他的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。（be greeted with /by sth被报以...)
6. Complete silence greeted us as we entered the room.
走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。
7. I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived.
她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。(a rush of anger / excitement / gratitude...一阵...)
8. A rush of jealousy swept through(over) her.
她心中突然涌起一阵嫉妒。(妒忌?d?el?si)
9. The smoke hung in the air.
烟在空中缭绕。(mist/smoke/smell hangs in the air在空中缭绕)
10. A thick mist hung over the town.
小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。
11. Joe's been ill for weeks now - it's really dragging him down. 乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。(drag sb down 使人感到不愉快) 12. Forester stared at his car, trembling with rage.
福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。(trembling / shaking with rage 气得浑身发抖)
13. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital.
卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。
14. His face was red with rage.
他气得满脸通红。
15. The child was quivering(trembling) in her arms.
那孩子在她怀里发抖。 (抖动?kw?v?)
16. Her mouth quivered slightly as she turned away.
她嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。
17. I lay there quivering with fear.
我躺在那儿，害怕得直发抖。
18. His voice was quivering with rage.
他气得声音都打战了。
19. Luck had come her way at the very last moment.
好运在最后时刻降临到她头上。(sth come sb's way意外地落在某人头上) 20. She was aware of a tall dark figure watching her.
她发现有个高高的黑影在注视着她。(be aware of...注意到;察觉到...)
21. He was aware of the wind in his face.
他感到风在他脸上吹拂。
22. Bill became aware that he was still holding his glass.
比尔意识到他手里还握着杯子。(be/become aware that从句注意到;察觉到...)
23. He had time to reflect on his successes and failures.
他有时间反思他的成功和失败。(reflect on...反思；仔细思考...)
24. Environmentalists are alarmed by the increase in pollution. 不断加重的污染引起环保人士的担忧。(be alarmed at/by...对...感到担忧；惊慌)
25. He was alarmed to discover that his car was gone.
他惊慌地发现自己的车不见了。（be alarmed to see /hear...惊慌地看到;听到...）
26. Tim was a clumsy boy, always bumping into the furniture.
蒂姆是个笨手笨脚的孩子，老是撞到家具上。(bump into sb/sth撞到...)
27. I dragged myself out of bed and into the bathroom.
我吃力地下床走进浴室。 (drag yourself to /into /out of...费力地走到/进/出某处)
28. He paused for breath, then continued up the hill.
他停下来歇口气，然后继续上山。
29. "No," he replied, without pausing for thought.
"不是的。" 他不假思索地答道。
30. Charles was overcome with grief.
查尔斯悲痛欲绝。
31. His eyes fell on her bag. "Are you going somewhere?"
他的目光落在她的包上。"你是不是要去什么地方？"(sb's eyes / gaze / glance fall(s) on sth 某人的目光落在某物上)
32. Only one man tried to help us, the rest just looked on in silence.
只有一个人尽力帮助我们，其余的人都只是一声不吭地袖手旁观。
33. He sprang to his feet and rushed after her.
他腾地站起身，冲过去追她。(spring to one's feet一跃而起)
34. Tears rolled down her cheeks.
泪珠顺着她的脸颊滚落。
35. Thunder rolled in the distance.
远处雷声隆隆。
36. Lucy rolled her eyes as Tom sat down beside her.
汤姆在露西身旁坐下，露西翻了个白眼。
37. The red tip of his cigarette was glowing in the dark.
他那红红的烟头在黑暗中幽幽发光。
38. She looked exceptionally well, glowing with health .
她气色特别好，满面红光。
39. She gazed up at him, glowing with happiness.
她抬头凝望着他，脸上洋溢着幸福。
(glow with pride / joy / pleasure由于自豪/高兴等而容光焕发）
40. "Well, there's nothing we can do about it now," she sighed. "唉，我们现在对此无能为力。" 她叹口气说。
41. Frankie stared out of the window and sighed deeply(heavily). 弗朗基凝望着窗外，深深地叹了口气。
42. He sighed with despair at the thought of all the opportunities he had missed.
想到自己错过的一个个机会，他绝望地叹了口气。(sigh with despair 绝望地叹了口气)
43. He took a firm grip of my arm and marched me towards the door.
他紧紧抓着我的手臂，快步往门口走去。(take a firm grip /hold /grasp of...紧抓;紧握...紧握，抓牢gr?p)
44. A look of pure hatred flashed across her face.
她脸上闪过十足的仇恨表情。
45. She was on her knees, weeding the garden.
她在花园里跪着除杂草。
(on your knees=kneel跪着)
46. Tim fell to his knees and started to pray.
蒂姆跪下来开始祷告。
(sink /fall /drop to your knees跪下)
47. Tom knelt down and patted the dog.
汤姆跪下来轻轻拍了拍那只狗。
48. She knelt on the floor and put more wood on the fire.
她跪在地板上，往炉火中添了些木柴。
49. She shot past me into the house.
她从我身边飞奔过去，跑进屋里。 (shoot:move quickly飞快地移动）50. The cat shot across the garden.
这只猫飞快地蹿过花园。
51. "You're welcome to stay as long as you like." Michelle shot him a furious glance.
"随你爱待多久都行。" 米歇尔愤怒地瞪了他一眼。
(shoot sb a look/glance=shoot a glance at sb 迅速地看某人一眼) 52. Jack shot an anxious look at his mother.
杰克焦虑地看了母亲一眼。
53. To Jamie's credit, he remained calm.
值得表扬的是，杰米始终保持冷静。
(to sb's credit值得赞扬某人的是)
54. Credit must go to Fiona for making sure everything ran smoothly.
应该感激菲奥娜使一切得以顺利进行。
(Credit must go to sb for doing sth...应该感激某人做了...)
55. It was hard work, but it gave her great satisfaction.
工作很辛苦,但是给了她极大的满足。
56. "I've passed all my exams," he announced with satisfaction. "我通过了所有的考试。" 他满意地宣布。(with satisfaction满意地) 57. He watched the others with envy.
他羡慕地看着其他人。
(with envy羡慕地；嫉妒地)
58. I felt a rush of envy when I saw them together.
我看到他们在一起就感到一阵嫉妒。
(a rush of envy一阵嫉妒)
59. She could see that all the other girls were green with envy (=feeling a lot of envy) .
她看得出其他女孩都很眼红。（be green with envy=feel a lot of envy眼红；感到嫉妒)
60. A sudden wave of joy swept over her.
一阵喜悦涌上她心头。(a wave sweeps /washes over sb 一阵…充满某人心头)
61. He threw Anna a big smile.
他对安娜粲然一笑。
(throw sb a look /glance /smile 朝某人看了看/瞥了一眼/笑了笑)
62. He threw a glance at Connor.
他瞥了康纳一眼。
63. After the explosion, a terrible silence fell upon the scene.
爆炸之后，现场陷入一片可怕的寂静。 (silence falls on /upon sth ...陷入一片可怕的寂静)
64. A loud scream shattered the silence.
一声高声尖叫打破了沉寂。(break /shatter the silence 打破了沉寂使破碎???t?)
65. There was a brief silence before anyone answered.
沉默了片刻才有人回答。
66. The four men sat in silence.
这四个人一声不吭地坐着。
(in silence 一声不吭地)
67. I plucked up the courage to go out by myself.
我鼓起勇气一个人走了出去。 (pluck up the courage to do sth 鼓起勇气做...pl?k)
68. The driver was still conscious when the ambulance arrived.
救护车赶到时，司机仍然神志清醒。
69. They were full of excitement at the thought of meeting a real movie star.
想到要见一位真正的电影明星，他们就满心激动。(be full of /filled with excitement 满怀激动)
70. He woke up that morning with a feeling of excitement.
那天早晨他醒来时情绪亢奋。(a sense /feeling of excitement 激动的心情)
71. Her excitement grew as the day of the wedding came nearer. 随着婚礼临近，她越来越兴奋。(sb's excitement grows 某人越来越兴奋) 72. Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the letter.
她打开信时激动得双手颤抖。(be trembling with excitement激动得直发抖)
73. In all the excitement, I left my wallet behind.
我一时激动，忘了拿钱包。
(in the excitement / in your excitement某人一时激动)
74. In his excitement he couldn't remember her name.
他激动得想不起她的名字了。
75. The children were filled with excitement at the thought of visiting Disneyland.
想到要去迪士尼乐园，孩子们激动不已。
76. Greene was on his feet now, his body trembling with rage.
格林这会儿站了起来，气得全身直哆嗦。(tremble with anger / fear 气得全身直哆嗦;害怕得发抖)
77. His lip started to tremble and then he started to cry.
他的嘴唇开始颤抖，接着就哭了起来。
78. He bent towards me and whispered in my ear.
他俯过身来在我耳边低语。
79. Adam whistled happily on his way to work.
亚当在上班路上愉快地吹着口哨。
80. They listened to the wind whistling through the trees.
他们听着风在树林中呼啸。
81. Ben slipped quietly out of the room.
本悄悄地溜出了房间。
82. One man managed to slip from the club as police arrived.
警察到来时，一个男子设法溜出了俱乐部。
83. He tightened his hold, refusing to let her go. 他抓得更紧了，不让她走。
84. Make sure you keep hold of my hand when we cross the road. 过马路时你一定要抓住我的手。
85. I took hold of her hand and gently led her away.
我抓住她的手，小心地带她离开。
86. Grab hold of the rope and pull yourself up. 抓住绳子爬上来。
87. It was only later that I realized my mistake.
我到后来才认识到自己的错误。
88. There were tears in her eyes, but her voice was steady.
她眼里含着泪水，但声音很平静。
续写亮点突破系列 一、主句，+ 简短状语（介词短语，分词，状语从句的省略，形容词，副词） 1.At last he came, with his hands in his pockets 2.He was stunned there, staring at me with wide eyes. 3.With apparently unwilling affection, he nodded. 4.With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile. 5.When coming back, he still folded his arms with a little anger on his face. 6.With an impatient look, he listened to me reluctantly. 7.He was numb with shock, staring at me. 8.Then the next second his eyes were shining like diamonds, with a bright smile on his face. 9.Curious, he approached to find a silver balloon. 10.With tears in her eyes, he decided to help Desiree. 11.Touched deeply, he decided to tell a white lie. 12.With heart beating wildly, she hurried to show it … 13.Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile. 14.Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits. 15.He attempted to find the owner, but all in vain. 16.Her eyes began to water, with her stomach uncomfortably twisting. 17.Looking at each other, we smiled, hiding ourselves in the car and expecting his reaction to the gift. 18.Obviously confused at the sudden disorder around, Rafael turned to me for reasons in written words. 19. Surprisingly, my explanation put a smile on his face. 20.Greeting us with a confident smile, Rafael shared his story in a magnetic voice, which left me surprised. 21.Feeling a lump in the throat, I clapped my hands even more loudly, determined never to judge a book by its cover. 22.He gave me a bright smile, with his eyes sparkling. 23.To our delight and relief, Tom recovered quickly. 二、形容词、副词的恰当使用 1.Cherish every single moment when you can stay with her. 2.I turned to him and said gently. 3.He looked at me with a broad smile. 4.I praised him sincerely. 5.Taking it home, Wade read the touching lines 6. A thunderous applause burst out. 7.I’m firmly convinced that … 8.with a burning desire to win, he … 9.So excited was he that he held it tightly, rushing into the house. 10. 11. 12.
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专题10 读后续写高分技巧综合训练 一、请运用所学技巧翻译下面的段落。 （一） Jim 看到袭击者逃进了黑暗中，他想到了那个姑娘。Jim 仍然喘着粗气，朝着她走去。那姑娘坐在灌木丛后面哭着。尽管Jim在黑暗中几乎看不清那姑娘，他还是能确定地感觉到她惊魂未定。Jim不想再吓着她，他隔开一定距离和她说话。Jim轻轻地告诉她袭击者已经逃跑了，她安全了。姑娘许久没说话，接着他吃惊地听到姑娘问道：“是你吗，爸爸？” 【参考范文】 Seeing the attacker flee/disappear/run into the darkness, Jim thought of the girl. Still breathing heavily, Jim walked towards her. The girl was sitting behind the bushes, sobbing. Although in the darkness Jim could hardly see the girl clearly, he could sense her trembling alarm with certainty. To avoid frightening the girl further, Jim spoke to her at a distance. In a soft voice, Jim told her that the attacker had run away and that she was safe. There was a long silence and then in astonishment he heard the girl ask, “Dad, is that you?” 【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词和介词短语，丰富了表达形式，使情感描写和动作描写更加细腻生动。 （二） 第二天，Meg去跟Mrs.Gilson 解释了她为什么不交回家作业。为了不让同学知道这件事，她趁没人注意时悄悄地溜进了Mrs. Gilson的办公室。Meg低着头，她告诉了Mrs.Gilson她的回家作业找不到了。“我保证我完成了回家作业。。。。。。”她解释道，眼里含着泪。见此情景，Mrs. Gilson 打断了她。她笑着告诉Meg 她已经在上一天把她的作业和试卷一起交起来了。她知道Meg不会因为偷懒而说谎。听到Mrs.Gilson的话，Meg 如释重负。她开心地笑了，眼里的泪水落了下来。 【参考范文】 The next day, Meg went to tell Mrs. Gilson why she couldn’t hand in her homework. To avoid being known by her classmates, she secretly slid into Mrs. Gilson’s office without being noticed. Her head drooped, Meg told Mrs. Gilson the truth that she just could not find her homework. “I promise that I did finish my homework and…” she explained, tears welling up in her eyes/ eyes brimming with tears. Seeing this, Mrs. Gilson interrupted her. With a smile, she told Meg that she had handed in her homework with her paper the day before. She knew Meg was not lying because of laziness. Hearing this, Meg felt a surge of relief. She smiled brightly, drops of tears rolling down her cheeks. 【点评】这篇短文用到了前面学过的Ving、副词、介词短语、情绪表达和独立结构，尤其是独立结构。文
高中英语新高考-英语作文：读后续写题型的写作兵法三招：转折,语言,词库 目前英语卷的题型的改革力度是够大的，说来就来。这不，各种证据证明，未来作文会变成文章续写，即：给一篇350词左右的记叙文给你，结尾没有，让考生自由发挥。限制是:需要用上文章里给定的五个左右的词语。目前浙江已经明确在考试说明中说了，后面的高考就要采用这种形式。（孙三五） 这种改革给考生一种恐慌，为什么呢？因为从未写过这样的文章，而且续写听起来好高大上。但是，我看来，这种作文最好发挥。我给出的技巧是：内容上要注意两个转折；语言上要注意倒装和非谓语动词；另外，我给考生们准备了万能的九个小词库。 一、何为内容上的两个转折 写记叙文，英汉是同理的。故事要有曲折即：twist。而高考作文150作文只能让你写顶多两个曲折。曲折分：情节曲折和心理变化的曲折。 英语作文毕竟和语文作文有差别，我们的曲折不要一味追求离奇，而是讲究逻辑的连贯。 二、语言的运用 记叙文是动作和语言的干活，不需要你写复杂句，这是文体的需要。常用的是：非谓语动词和倒装句。为什么呢？因为只有这两种语法结构句子才能表达动作的多样性。 三、关于九个小词库 我认为记叙文的心情描写是伴随着动作一起的，你有什么样的心情就有什么样的动作。笔者平时有摘抄各种文学作品的佳句和词块的习惯。仅挑选一小部分，省略了伴随心情的手、脚、脸等词库，进行粗线条的概括。虽然不多，但我认为也足够应付高考了。我将它们分为九大类： 一、如何表达决心和注意力的集中： 二、如何表达同情和关心 三、如何表达轻松 四、如何表达生气、不耐烦等不愉快的心情 五、如何表达胆小、害怕 六、如何表达害怕、害羞和尴尬 七、如何表达悲伤
读后续写好句积累 He had time to reflect on his successes and failures. 他有时间反思他的成功和失败。(reflect on...反思；仔细思考...) Environmentalists are alarmed by the increase in pollution. 不断加重的污染引起环保人士的担忧。(be alarmed at/by...对...感到担忧；惊慌) He was alarmed to discover that his car was gone. 他惊慌地发现自己的车不见了。（be alarmed to see /hear...惊慌地看到;听到...） Tim was a clumsy boy, always bumping into the furniture. 蒂姆是个笨手笨脚的孩子，老是撞到家具上。(bump into sb/sth撞到...) I dragged myself out of bed and into the bathroom. 我吃力地下床走进浴室。 (drag yourself to /into /out of...费力地走到/进/出某处) He paused for breath, then continued up the hill. 他停下来歇口气，然后继续上山。
"No," he replied, without pausing for thought. "不是的。" 他不假思索地答道。 Charles was overcome with grief. 查尔斯悲痛欲绝。 His eyes fell on her bag. "Are you going somewhere?" 他的目光落在她的包上。"你是不是要去什么地方？"(sb's eyes / gaze / glance fall(s) on sth 某人的目光落在某物上) Only one man tried to help us, the rest just looked on in silence.只有一个人尽力帮助我们，其余的人都只是一声不吭地袖手旁观。 He sprang to his feet and rushed after her. 他腾地站起身，冲过去追她。(spring to one's feet一跃而起) Tears rolled down her cheeks. 泪珠顺着她的脸颊滚落。 Thunder rolled in the distance. 远处雷声隆隆。
读后续写好句积累（1） 1. She tried to hide her anger. 她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。 (hide your disappointment/anger...掩饰...) 2. She laughed to hide her nervousness. 她笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。 3. The treatment offers a ray of hope for cancer sufferers 这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。 (a ray of hope/light 一线希望/光明) 4. Rays of light filtered through the trees. 一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。(透过?f?lt?) 5. His statement was greeted with cries of astonishment and anger. 他的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。（be greeted with /by sth被报以...) 6. Complete silence greeted us as we entered the room. 走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。 7. I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived. 她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。(a rush of anger / excitement / gratitude...一阵...) 8. A rush of jealousy swept through(over) her.
她心中突然涌起一阵嫉妒。(妒忌?d?el?si) 9. The smoke hung in the air. 烟在空中缭绕。(mist/smoke/smell hangs in the air在空中缭绕) 10. A thick mist hung over the town. 小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。 读后续写好句积累（2） 11. Joe's been ill for weeks now - it's really dragging him down. 乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。(drag sb down 使人感到不愉快) 12. Forester stared at his car, trembling with rage. 福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。(trembling / shaking with rage 气得浑身发抖) 13. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital. 卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。 14. His face was red with rage. 他气得满脸通红。 15. The child was quivering(trembling) in her arms. 那孩子在她怀里发抖。 (抖动?kw?v?) 16. Her mouth quivered slightly as she turned away. 她嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。 17. I lay there quivering with fear.
新题型写作 读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,”Arthur said. “I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start my car.” “Is there something I can do to help?”Arthur asked. The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said, “Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t be too much trouble, you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.” “No trouble at all. I’d be glad to help.” The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the back seat. After placing it on the ground, he turned to get the other one. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking, he heard the loud noise of an alarm. It was from the bank. There had been a robbery! Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before. Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank. People asked each other, “What happened?”But everyone had a different answer. Arthur, still carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised. “Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 ：
一 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。续写的字数应为150字左右。 It was the lovely month of February, when everyone was sick of the snow, and spring still felt light years away. The cold air on windows during February, however, always did make for good pictures in the stream of my breath. Every year, we invite the children to our club to make cookies or chocolate at holiday times. The children are always excited to come back and have memorized the rules by now. We explain how to spoon the different-colored chocolates into the heart-shaped molds, and the kids jump right into the project, even the youngest ones, who are too short to reach the counter. On this day, there was a boy I was drawn to. He was ten, but his attitude told the story of a boy who had been hardened (使刚毅) by the world and all the trouble that he suffered from. His face looked much older than his age. I especially noticed the lollipop(棒棒糖)he was making. Most of the children had finished with their projects. There wasn’t m uch chocolate left. He took the remaining spoonfuls of all the different colors, which were so jumbled(混乱的)that a person could not see where one color started and the next ended. It seemed to him that all that mattered was that he was able to finish his chocolate. Two hours had passed and it was time for everyone to go. Each of the children was given a bag, and they all split the candy amongst themselves to take with them. The ten-year-old boy came back over to me after he had gotten his share of candy. He noticed my hands were empty. Why didn't you take any? "he asked “I wanted to make sure there was enough for everyone else, ”I said “Oh,” he replied, but I could see he didn’t really accept my answer. As everyone got ready to leave, I was occupied with my work and didn’t see the boy staring at me. I got a hug from each of the smiling children as they slipped out of the door. My ten-year-old friend was the last to go. By now, I had noticed the little tough guy looking at me. He came up to me again, this time slowly, looking around to make sure no one was watching. Paragraph 1 This is for you, " he said, as he handed me a piece of candy. _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 I have been keeping that lollipop ever since _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________
专题09 高分情绪描写技巧 一、情绪描写之笑 smile brightly; grin at sb; laugh; beam; light (sth) up; light up with; burst into laughter; burst out laughing；wear a bright/broad smile; give sb a smile 学一学： beam: smile very happily 例：获胜者满意地笑了。 译法一：The winner beamed/smiled with satisfaction. 译法二：The winner wore a satisfied smile on his face. light up: if someone’s face or eyes light up, they show pleasure, excitement etc light up with：His eyes lit up with laughter. Her face lit up with pleasure. light sth up: to make someone’s face or eyes show pleasure or excitement Suddenly a bright smile lit up her face/eyes. 练一练： 看到直升飞机，Jane 高兴地笑了起来。 判断正误：Seeing the helicopter, a bright smile lit up her face. 二、情绪描写之高兴激动 V.dance; whistle; jump/leap with joy; feel a surge of happiness/delight/joy/excitement; be overcome with happines/delight/joy/excitement;(one’s eyes) twinkle；(one’s heart) beat/pound wildly Adj.happy; delighted; overjoyed; excited; thrilled; wild with joy 练一练： 当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 三、情绪描写之生气 feel/get angry/furious; feel a surge of anger(rage/fury); eyes blaze; storm out of/into/off ; storm(say angrily); sth. makes sb’s blood boil(sth makes sb extremely angry); clasp one’s hands; clench one’s fists/teeth; speechless 练一练： Sam 感到非常生气。 四、情绪描写之伤心痛苦
读后续写好句积累 1. She tried to hide her anger. 她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。 (hide your disappointment/anger...掩饰...) 2. She laughed to hide her nervousness. 她笑了笑以掩饰自己的紧张。 3. The treatment offers a ray of hope for cancer sufferers 这种治疗方法给癌症患者一线希望。 (a ray of hope/light 一线希望/光明) 4. Rays of light filtered through the trees. 一束束光线透过树丛照射下来。(透过?f?lt?) 5. His statement was greeted with cries of astonishment and anger. 他的这番话被报以一片叫喊声，有震惊，也有愤怒。（be greeted with /by sth被报以...) 6. Complete silence greeted us as we entered the room. 走进房间，迎接我们的是一片沉默。 7. I felt a rush of excitement when she arrived. 她来到的时候，我感到一阵激动。(a rush of anger / excitement / gratitude...一阵...)
8. A rush of jealousy swept through(over) her. 她心中突然涌起一阵嫉妒。(妒忌?d?el?si) 9. The smoke hung in the air. 烟在空中缭绕。(mist/smoke/smell hangs in the air在空中缭绕) 10. A thick mist hung over the town. 小镇笼罩在浓浓的雾霭中。 11. Joe's been ill for weeks now - it's really dragging him down. 乔已经病了几个星期了，这使他很沮丧。(drag sb down 使人感到不愉快) 12. Forester stared at his car, trembling with rage. 福里斯特盯着他的汽车，气得浑身发抖。(trembling / shaking with rage 气得浑身发抖) 13. Sobbing with rage, Carol was taken to the hospital. 卡罗尔气得呜呜哭，被送往医院。 14. His face was red with rage. 他气得满脸通红。 15. The child was quivering(trembling) in her arms. 那孩子在她怀里发抖。 (抖动?kw?v?) 16. Her mouth quivered slightly as she turned away. 她嘴唇微微哆嗦着，转过头去。 17. I lay there quivering with fear. 我躺在那儿，害怕得直发抖。
2020高中英语新高考 读后续写细节描写第一讲：描写forest, woods 英语文学的描写在于细节，如此可以细分为物和人两大类别。就物而言，又分山川和建筑。 山川又可以细分为：forest, mountains, caves, islands and volcanoes, paths, rivers, sea。第一个章节我说forest，这也是鉴于浙江这几年的读后续写都是关于森林有关的多。 但高中的词汇量也就是3500，而文学中的景色描写很容易超过这个数字。我为了减轻高中生的记忆压力，力图从200多本经典英文原著中挑选最常见的表达（我发现很多表达反复出现在很多人作品中，因此以下呈现都可以供高中学生大胆选用），个别超纲词汇也无碍。 如何练习： 当写到树林的时候，查看本节，根据文章需要挑选句子。 我的学生跟我说，记不住。其实，没有谁能一下子记住，多练习几篇就会记住的。 考生需要记住，景色描写，一定要脑子里存在几幅图，例如下面的，这样你才能更好去应用。实际上，读后续写的图像定格是非常重要和实用的技能，我后面会说到。 Chapter 1 Forest 这一节说树林，无非围绕：草、花、树（包括树干、树茎、树叶、藤蔓）、颜色。其中读者最好多记忆一些文学作品中常见的花名，好比汉语小说中常用牵牛花、红豆等。（虽然有点累，但是你会发现很值得） 以高考真题作文为例：妻子和丈夫分手后迷路了，两段的开头：
高频短语–名词和形容词 * Magnificent forest of tall trees高大的森林 * Like a crowd of vivid green umbrellas像一群鲜艳的绿色雨伞* Emerald /?em(?)r?ld/ green leaves翠绿的叶子 * Vivid green stems鲜艳的绿色茎 * Like fluttering, emerald ribbons像飘动的翡翠丝带 * Blazing carpet of bluebells耀眼的风信子 * Red and orange berries红色和橙色浆果
四 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续 写的词数应为150左右。 Mom was a good cook. No, I take that back. She was a great cook. She could take a little hamburger a few potatoes and some tomatoes to make a feast that would make everyone drool(流口水) .And the dishes she could do with chicken well, it makes my mouth water to think about her delicious fried chicken. Her homemade chili sauce was second to none. Her bottled peaches were better than candies. When I was a little girl I once offered to make my sister Kathy’s bed for a week if she would give me the last slice of toast made with Moms homemade bread and pineapple jam. Kathy w ouldn’t go for it. She prefe rred to eat the toast. There is no doubt that Mom was a great cook most of the time. But if you put a steak in her pan, she would turn it into a texture(口感) of shoe leather. Of course, she didn’t do that on purpose She really did try her best. The night before I was married, she thought she was giving me a special treat by preparing a thick steak. It tasted as terrible as usual. Several months later, my elder brother Bud took me out for lunch and ordered steaks. I wasn’t excited, but since he was paying I figured I could try a few bites. When the waitress served our steaks, I was surprised at how good they smelled .Mom's steaks never smelled like that. Suddenly, I understood why others spoke of steak fondly. I finished my steak greedily, and even stole a bite of Bud’s."“ You k now," I said to Bud, patting my stomach with real satisfaction, "I used to think Mom was a great cook. But it's hard to believe her steaks come from the same animal as these steaks. Of course she is, Bud said. "But think about it. She grew up during a time when her family was very poor. That’s when she learned to cook. How often do you think they had steak? Probably not very often, I guessed Paragraph 1 “Probably never,”Bud said . _____________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: But then it occurred to me that "great” do esn' t mean" perfect” _____________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 1: “ Probably never," Bud said.“ And when I was a little boy and Dad was in the army, don't remember ever having steak. It's only after our youngest sister was born that Mom and Dad could afford steak. So it isn’t that Mom isn't a good cook. It's just that she didn’t have a lot of experience of cooking steak. That’s the reason for my mother’s having a weakness in the kitchen. It was difficult for me to understand this at first, especially after we enjoyed Moms incredible fried chicken the day before. Paragraph 2 But then it occurred to me that“ great” doesn' t mean" perfe ct”. It just means" great” It's great of Mom to have cooked delicious food for us for years and make everyone feel happy. But what did I do for her? I determined to give Mom a surprise. After learning from a friend, I prepared a big dinner for Mom .When she saw the nice steak and had her first bite of it, a happy smile appeared on her face. 1