题型训练写作（三）
第一节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
WeChat is becoming increasing popular with people. Recently I have made a survey among my classmate about the use of WeChat. According to a result, 45% of the classmates admit they often use it because comparing with other means of communication, WeChat has more advantages. It was cheap, convenient and easy to send all kinds of messages around. Besides, 35% of whom are against using it, saying it will affect their study. Not using WeChat, the rest has no opinion about it. As far as I'm concerned, since WeChat offers us great convenience, it should be made good use. We should not be slaves to it or let it to govern our minds and behaviour.
第二节书面表达
假定你是李华，市电视台将举办《中国诗词比赛》(Chinese Poetry Contest)国际友人专场，你想邀清对文化感兴趣的外教老师Adam一同观赛。请给他写一封信，内容包括：
1.时间：下周五晚六点半；
2.地点：市民中心；
3.诗词比赛的意义。
注意：
1.词数100词左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考答案
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Dear Adam,
Knowing that you take a great interest in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to attend Chinese Poetry Contest for foreigners to be held by the city TV station at 6:30 pm next Friday at the Citizen Center.
Similar contests are watched by many people in China as ancient Chinese culture is regaining popularity these days. Also, the wisdom delivered through Chinese classic poems can be rather impressive and helpful for the learners of the Chinese language.
It will be a rather unforgettable night and I sincerely hope you could come with me. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
概要写作（Summary writing），被称为“小作文”。概要写作分值占据15分，考查的是考生阅读和写作的综合能力。 概要写作所给定的语篇一般在200-250字，内容丰富多样，包含故事、时政、科普等，体裁以记叙文、说明文为主，字数一般要求在50-60字，答案尽量符合“Key points of a summary”的要求。 一．正确认识概要写作 1. Definition of summary writing（概要写作的定义） By summary, we mean a brief restatement, in your own words, of the content of a passage, an article, a chapter or a book. 2. Key points of a summary（概要写作的要点） Conciseness（简要性）：Omit unnecessary details like examples, explanations and other unimportant information. Length: 1/4-1/3 of the original text. Completeness（完整性）：To include all the main and supporting points delivered in you own words in a condensed manner. Accuracy（准确性）：To give the same attention and stress to the points as the author does. Coherence（连贯性）：Rather than an outline listed as key words and phrases, a summary is a paragraph with necessary transitions and function structures to make it flow. Objectivity（客观性）：Do not include your own ideas or emotions on the topic. The summary should reflect the content of the original passage only. 3. Steps to write a summary（概要写作的步骤） 1）Skim the text to find out the general theme. 2）Analyze the text’s structure to divide it into several sections, find out the main idea of each section and write it out briefly with your own words. (one sentence) 3）Write down the key supporting points for each main idea without involving minor details. 4）Organize the main and related supporting points in a logical order with necessary transitions to achieve coherence. 5）Proofread for grammatical, spelling and punctuation mistakes. 4. Beginning of a summary（概要写作的开头） Begin your summary with: *The author’s name *The article’s or chapter’s name *The author’s thesis statement—a general overview(survey) of the article. The Body: First of all, the author describes…… He then points out that…… In addition, the author talks about…… Finally, the author suggests…… Some other introductory phrases: *(The author) states in (this article) that…
普陀区 2017 学年第一学期高三英语质量调研英语试卷 I. Listening Comprehension Section A 10% Directions:In Section A, you will hear ten short conversations between two speakers. At the end of each conversation, a question will be asked about what was said. The conversations and the questions will be spoken only once. After you hear a conversation and the question about it, read the four possible answers on your paper, and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard. 1. A. Mother and child. B. Teacher and student. C. Husband and wife. D. Boss and secretary. 2. A. They like reading today’s paper. B. They are interested in today’s paper. C. They found nothing interesting in today’s paper. D. They have no idea what the paper is about. 3. A. In the concert. B. In the theatre. C. In the exhibition. D. In the studio. 4. A. Getting ready to board a plane. B. Queuing up for the check-in. C. Meeting friends at the arrivals. D. Waiting at the baggage claim area. 5. A. The man doesn’t care which colour is chosen. B. The woman prefers the colour. C. The man is concerned about the colour. D. The man intends to choose a different colour. 6. A. Doing a lot of homework. B. Staying focused in class. C. Sleeping for a short break. D. Devoting all her spare time to learning. 7. A. He was chairman of the club. B. He wanted to learn a new language. C. He wanted to know more about the club. D. He was interested in international advertisement. 8. A. The man should work hard. B. The man should turn down the job offer. C. The man may have another chance. D. The man can apply for the job again. 9. A. Its ending is not good enough. B. Its structure is not satisfying. C. It deserves an award. D. It is good except for the writing skills. 10. A. She likes watching instead of playing. B. She is a good team sports player. C. She doesn’t like any kind of sports. D. She likes taking part in team sports. Section B 15% Directions: In Section B, you will hear two short passages and one longer conversation, and you will be asked several questions on each of the passages and the conversation. The passages and the conversation will be read twice, but the questions will be spoken only once. When you hear a question, read the four possible answers on your paper and decide which one would be the best answer to the question you have heard. Questions 11 through 13 are based on the following passage. 11.A. It contains protein. B. It contains water. C. It helps the brain work properly. D. A full stomach leads to a good sleep. 12. A. Sleep helps the brain control the senses. B. Sleep promotes rest. C. Sleep helps the brain revise and store information.
高中英语作文文 Protecting the Environment-保护环境 Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence. The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better. 全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气影响了人们的呼吸，工厂释放污染的气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排人河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可见随意丢弃的垃圾。事实上，污染正威胁我们的生存。 地球是我们的家园，我们有责任为我们自己和我们的后代去照顾好它。庆幸的是，愈来愈多的人们已经意识到这些问题。政府已经采取了很多措施去解决这些问题，法律已被通过以制止污染。我希望这些问题在不远的将来能得到解决，我们的家园变得越来越好。 Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make GREat noises and give off poisonous gas. Trees on the hills have been cut down,and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. Furthermore,wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man's existence. Protecting the Environment-保护环境 Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world. For example, cars have made the air unhealthy for people to breathe and poisonous gas is given off by factories. Trees on the hills have been cut down and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers.Furthermore, wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. Pollution is, in fact, threatening our existence. The earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our later generations. Fortunately, more and more people have realized these problems. Measures have been taken to cope with these problems by the government. Laws have been passed to stop pollution. I hope the problem will be solved in the near future and our home will become better and better. 全世界的环境问题变得越来越严重。例如汽车污染的空气影响了人们的呼吸，工厂释放污染的气体，山上的树木被砍伐，污水不断被排人河里。另外，无论我们走到哪里，到处可
概要写作 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt，in the opinion of most people，is a good thing.However，there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century，people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease，as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538，the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom.So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry Ⅳ，King of France，was famously dirty.Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath，the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out. Though the belief in the merit(好处) of dirt was long－lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speaking，cleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet，it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War Ⅱ.Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer，surfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt，however，gone too far? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first－time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt，which might be responsible for the spread of disease.On the contrary，Mary Ruebush，an American immunologist(免疫学家)，encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system.And the latter(后者) position is gaining some ground.
情景作文（20分） 假设你是某所中学的学生，3月22日（世界水日）你参加了你班开展的一系列节水宣传活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以日记的形式记录当天的活动内容。 注意：词数不少于60。 提示词：宣传材料leaflets；危机crisis
March 22,2010 Monday Today is World Water Day. One possible version: March 22, 2010 Monday Sunny Today is World Water Day. In the morning, we had a class meeting talking about what to do on this special day. Finally, we reached an agreement and immediately began to make preparations for the afternoon's activities. At 2:00 pm, we went to the neighboring community to hand out leaflets, calling on people to save water. Around 3 o'clock, the expert we invited made an excellent speech on the current water crisis in China. He talked about the draught in the Southeast and the severe shortage of water in our city. The speech had a strong appeal to all the people present, including me. After the speech, we had a discussion with our neighbors about various ways of saving water in our daily life. I suggested turning off the tap water immediately after use, and a granny came up with the ideas of reusing the water from kitchen, for example, the water after washing fruits and vegetables can be used to water flowers and so on. Today, I have had a better understanding of the importance of saving water and really learned a lot about saving water. 情景作文（20分） 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing”的英文稿件。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。
2018年海淀一模作文参考范文 One Possible Version
Dear Jim, Thank you for your New Year greetings, and I’m very happy about your interest in Chinese zodiac. Actually, there are altogether twelve zodiac signs in Chinese culture. As you were born in 2000, the year of dragon, your zodiac sign is “dragon”. Dragon in Chinese culture mainly conveys two meanings. First, it is the symbol of power and nobleness. Second, Chinese dragon delivers the meaning of being outstanding and extraordinary. Parents often put Chinese char acter “Long”, which means dragon, in kids’ name to show their higher expectations. That’s all about my brief introduction. Hoping it’ll help you have a better understanding of China. If you have any further question, please let me know. Yours, L i Hua
一 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One time, the teachers at a school wanted to teach the students about airplanes. While all airplanes can fly, some are able to fly farther than others. This is because not all airplanes are built the same. For example, a fighter plane looks very different from a plane that people fly in when they want to go on a holiday. The teachers wondered how they could make students understand this. Then, the science teacher, Mr Moose, decided that the school should have a paper airplane contest. Every student would design a paper airplane. They would stand in a line in the playground behind the school. The students would take turns throwing their airplanes. The student whose airplane went the farthest would win. When Mr Moose announced the paper airplane contest to the students, they were very excited. A student named Paul, who was on the school sports team, said to everyone else that his
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假如你是明启中学的李华，你的朋友李楠给你写了一封信，告诉你他要开发一个新的APP，用这个软件共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法，你是否愿意共享你的衣服，给出理由（信的格式已给）。 Dear Linan I have received your letter and known that you are going to develop an App which enables us to share our clothes.I'm writing to express some opinions about it. Personally,I think it a good idea to exchange our clothes with others. My reasons are as follows. To begin with, it is environmentally-friendly to share our clothes. Some people are crazy about buying new clothes which costs a huge amount of money. Not only can sharing clothes help them save money but also it reduces much unnecessary waste. Furthermore, those who use this App will acquire knowledge and skills to match clothes, making them more attractive. Once they look more pretty, they will be praised by others around them so that they become more confident and positive towards life. Last but not least, many users are likely to make friends through the App. All in all,I am in favour of your idea and I firmly believe that this App will bring us lots of convenience and people will benefit a lot from it. Yours sincerely Lihua
. .. 情景作文 高考考什么 1．掌握情景作文的基本写作方法。 2．学会描写情景作文中的情节冲突。 3．学会对情景作文的情节进行扩充。 4．学会在情景作文中合理运用起承转合的过渡语。 5．掌握情景作文中的抒情议论句和高级词汇。 命题人怎么想 本节课首先从语篇角度来介绍情景作文的写作方法，然后会为大家提供抒情、议论的语料库，保证从宏观和微观两个角度为大家的写作提供支持。 满分必备攻略 Part A 从语篇角度谈情景作文写作技巧 一、情景作文的基本写作思路：主题先行+双线并行 所谓主题先行，是指我们在写情景作文时，一定要对四幅图片进行宏观把握，抽出文章的大主题，这样，有助于我们从整体的角度出发，对每幅图进行情感渲染。 同时，我们要明白：要写好情景作文，必须保证叙事清晰、情感充沛。换言之，要保证“动作描写”和“情感描写”两条线并行不悖，给人层次清晰、逻辑严密、动作到位、情感充实的印象，这便是所谓的“双线并行”。 要保证叙事清晰，一定要在上幅图转换到下幅图时，运用好起承转合的连词，同时对时间、场景的转换做好交代。 要保证情感充沛，一定要对静态的画面进行挖掘，分析人物心理，补充事实细节。
【例一】 假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。最近你班组织了一次活动，寻找身边的雷锋。请根据下图提示将此次活动情况记录下来，并以“Looking for Lei Feng”为题向你校英语报刊投稿。 注意：1．文章题目已为你写好。 2．词数不少于60。 Looking for Lei Feng 【写作初稿】 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
2019年上海高考英语一模写作汇编 1.上海市黄浦区2019年高三英语一模写作 假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你的网友王磊近日就学习时如何记好笔记发邮件向你求教，请给他回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容： ●描述两到三个不同的笔记类型及其特征 ●如何记好笔记的建议 2.上海市普陀区2019年高三英语一模写作 2018年11月5日-10日，首届中国国际进口博览会在上海成功举行。假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平，学校英语报向全体高三学生进行征文，题目为“TheCIIEinMyEyes”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章。稿件内容必须包含： 1.对“新时代，共享未来（NewEra,SharedFuture）”的理解； 2.首届进博会向世界传递了什么信息？对中国发展有何深远的影响？ （中国国际进口博览会：ChinaInternationalImportExpo简称CIIE） 3.上海市徐汇区2019年高三英语一模写作 学校将组织一次“我心目中的英雄”主题班会活动，请你以HeroesinMyHeart为题，写一篇演讲稿。基本要求如下： 你心目中英雄的标准； 你心目中英雄的事迹简介（请举1-2例）； 从这些英雄事迹中，你学到了些什么？ 4.上海市杨浦区2019年高三英语一模写作 请简要描述图片，并结合生活实际谈谈你的看法。 5.上海市崇明区2019年高三英语一模写作 中华中学为了进一步规范学校的社团建设，提高社团活动的品质，向广大师生征求意见。假设你是该校学生王敏，写一封电子邮件给负责社团的林老师，就你所了解的1-2个学校社团发表意见。你的邮件需包括： 你所了解的学校社团的现状（亮点和不足）及其原因； 提出你对改进学校社团建设的建议。 6.上海市长宁嘉定区2019年高三英语一模写作 假设你是明启中学的高三学生王蕾。学校正在招募话剧团（dramaclub）和机器人社团（robotclub）新成员。你在日记中表达获知该消息时的感受，做出选择，并阐述理由。 7.上海市松江区2019年高三英语一模写作
高三英语作文:高三英语作文范文10 篇 高三的同学应该如何学习英语作文，提高英语写作水平呢?大家不妨多模仿写作，多积累素材。下面X为大家整理了有关高三英语作文，欢迎大家阅读。高三英语作文篇一 Ladies and gentlemen, I feel it a great honor to have a chance to give a speech here, talking about the haze weather, which causes lots of bad effects on our health and life. We breathe polluted air, making us suffer from lung and liver diseases. Besides, because of it, the flights have to be canceled. All kind of transports may run into each other, resulting in much damages and lots of injuries.
As far as I am concerned, it is high time that we did something. As individuals, we should ride the underground or buses instead of cars to reduce carbon dioxide. As government, more measures should be taken by carrying out the related law on pollution. In summary, we’re all looking forward to breathe fresher air and live a happier life. Everyone should be a part of this job. Thank you for your listening. 高三英语作文篇二 Here comes the summer holiday, I have planned a busy schedule on it. Firstly, I will find a part time job, probably work in a factory which is near my home, so that I can accompany with my parents. Secondly, I have joined a violin course in the previous time, because I
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要(2017宁波模拟) Many Chinese students have studied English for approximately ten years, but most of them cannot even speak English correctly or fluently. In my opinion, there are several obstacles that have caused this to happen. The main obstacle is fear! Another is the habit of mentally translating from Chinese to English and then to change these thoughts into spoken words and sentences. Many of these difficulties are caused by the way Chinese people study and learn the language. We must learn to speak as a child does. When we are learning a second language we need to remember how we learned our native language. Learning to understand and speak a language is one of the first skills a child develops. How does a child learn the language? He listens for a time and then he tries to repeat the words. Parents give great praise for the smallest effort and slightest improvement. Therefore, the child develops courage and is excited about learning. It takes a long time before he knows anything about grammar, spelling or formal sentence structures. As for language teachers, they should avoid criticism and be very encouraging and generous with praise. Criticism or pointing out faults too often causes students to lose self-confidence and develop a fear of speaking. The best way to motivate a student is using praise. The most important aspect of speaking is having good self-esteem. Self-esteem is how you feel about yourself. When most Chinese people are asked how their English is, or they are told their English is very good, they immediately respond by saying, "Oh my English is very poor." If you say this to yourself often enough, you will believe it. When someone compliments（称赞）you, just say "thank you". __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 共（）词