D单元短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
（一）[2012·锦州模拟]
Time and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulder. Because my school is far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her.
However, I always can't help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears . Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual.
The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.
[解析]
Time and tide wait ∧
for no man.My mother is becoming a __middle-age
middle-aged
woman quietly.
She ha d
has been busy running after us all the years.My father is very busy every day outside.Bu t
So
the
heavy burden falls on my mother's shoulde r
shoulders
.Because my school is far from my home，I have to
go to school by the\train and my mother sees me off at the station every time.I often choose a seat wher e
which/that
is close to the window，so I can see her.
However，I always can't help ru n
running
tears from my eyes.All the buildings and people outside
the window disappear.I wave gentl e
gently to my mother and I look at her till the view of her back disappears.Up to now，even if h e
she
is busy，she still does it as usual.
The view of my mother's back will never change in my heart.
（二）[2012·银川实验中学月考]
Last year, I was addicted with playing computer games. I found it hard to breaking away from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessly. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Because I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons giving in classes.
Fortunately, psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talks with me about his problem. At last, he offered his advices on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can manage to control myself.
[解析]
Last year, I was addicted with
to playing computer games. I found it hard to breakin g
break
away
from the bad habit. My teacher talked to my parents about this, and they made me to\ promise not to play those games again. I tried hard, but I found it uselessl y
useless
. The moment my fingers left the keyboard, I would feel very uncomfortable. Becaus e
Although/Though
I was determined to forget the games, I still could not concentrate on the lessons givin g
given
in classes.
Fortunately, ∧
a psychological advisor in our school came to know this. He talk s
talked
with me
about hi s
my problem. At last, he offered his advice s
advice
on how to get rid of the addiction. Now I can
manage to control myself.
E1[2012·课标全国卷]
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys to you.”My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.
[解析]
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littl e
less
aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my to y
toys
. I was happy when the toys worked, but
when things di d
went /∧
/go
wrong, I got angry and broke i t
them
. For a while ∧
my
parents bought me
new toys. But before long they began to see whic h
what was happening. When I tea r
tore
apart my fifth
birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys to
for
you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I mus t
could/might
make my toys to'last. My attitude changed from then on.
1. little→less考查副词的用法。根据句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。
2. toy→toys考查名词的单复数形式。根据each of 可知，应该是“我”的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。
3. did→went或者did 后加go考查固定短语的表达法。解题关键：掌握短语go wrong 意为：出错。
4. it→them考查代词指代一致。此处指前文的toys，所以后文用them。
5. 在parents前加my考查代词的用法。英语中需前后一致，my parents bought me new toys.此处my和me对应。
6. which→what考查名词性从句的连接词。此处what作宾语从句的主语。句意：明白所发生的一切。
7. tear→tore考查动词时态。通过观察整个文章的时态以及my fifth birthday可知，此处用一般过去时。
8. to→for考查介词的用法。此处意为：不再给你买玩具了。toys for sb意为：给某人的玩具。
9. must→could/might考查情态动词。根据句意：拥有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。
10. 去掉last前的to考查不定式作宾语补足语。解题关键：make sb/sth do，此处make 作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。
E1[2012·浙江卷]
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
[答案]
Two years befor e ago ， I traveled to Brazil and I rented for'a car. Unfortunat e Unfortunately ， I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee k weeks
. I called my parents, so but I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wil l would
be worried about mysel f me because I was so farthe r far away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore,
I told them intereste d interesting stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew ∧the truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
E1[2011·陕西卷] 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线(__)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
[解析]
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visi t visited Beijing last
month. It is in the downtown area, bu t and/so it is easy to go to'anywhere from the hotel by public
transport.
We lived in a comfortabl y comfortable double-room with a big bath. What I liked best wer e was the
free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared fo r with my friends many photos takin g taken in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dis h dishes .
It is such ∧a
great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m e mine who is going to Beijing.
1．visit →visited 根据时间状语last month 可知本句时态是一般过去时，故动词用过去式。
2．but →and/so 前后文是承接或因果关系，故连词用and 或so 。
3．to 去掉 anywhere 是指地点的副词，其前不用介词。
4．comfortably →comfortable 修饰名词double-room 应用形容词。
5．were →was what 引导主语从句，其谓语动词应用单数形式，故系动词were 改为was 。
6．for →with 动词share 与介词with 构成搭配，意思是“和某人分享”。
7．taking →taken take 与所修饰词photos 是逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词作后置定语。
8．dish→dishes由several修饰，名词应用复数。
9．such后加a such修饰的hotel是可数名词单数，需加不定冠词a。
10．me→mine双重所有格的构成是“of ＋名词性物主代词或名词所有格”。
E2 短文改错应用文
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
(一)
Dear Mary，
I've received your e-mail. Don't worried about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But in my surprise, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lose interest. I'm afraid I can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and it is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in the future. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardly, you will succeed. I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you !
Y ours，
Li Hua
[解析]
Dear Mary，
I've received your e-mail. Don't ∧
be 或
worried
worry
about me. I'm getting on well with my
research work in the lab. But in
to my surprise, you say you will give up lear n
learning
English. The
reason is becaus e
that you have not done well in it recently and you have los e
lost
interest. I'm afraid I
can't agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, an d
but
it is widely used in the world today
and it will be ∧
an important tool in the future. Besid e
Besides
，it is becoming more and more important
in our daily life. I am sure that if you study hardl y
hard
，you will succeed.I'm looking forward to hearing a good news from you !
Y ours，
Li Hua
（二）[2012·宝鸡市高三教学质检]
Dear Wei Fang，
It's a long time since I heard from you in last time. Now I'd like to tell you a impressive story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.
A boy, Li Ming, whom father died a month ago, was late for school. He stood outside the classroom silent. I smiled to him and let him come.
After a while, he began to cry. Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what has happened. He told me his mother was ill but he had to get some medicine for her. At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness. Moved by his word, I praised him for his deeds and decided to sing a song was named “Mother” for the students.
From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did our best to help them. Do you think so? I'm looking forward to your reply.
[解析]
Dear Wei Fang，
It's a long time since I heard from you in\ last time.Now I’ d like to tell you a an impressive
story that happened on the first day of my teaching career.
A boy, Li Ming, who m whose father died a month ago, was late for school.He stood outside the classroom silen t silently .I smiled to him and let him come in 或∧in
. After a while, he began to cry .Seeing this, I walked to him and asked what ha s had
happened.He told me his mother was ill bu t and he had to get some medicine for her.At the same time, he apologized to me for his lateness.Moved by his wor d words ， I praised him for his deeds and decided to
sing a song ∧that/which 或was\ named “Mother” for the students.
From then on, I began to realize we should respect our parents and did do
our best to help them.Do you think so? I’m looking forward to your reply.
E2[2012·辽宁卷] 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Diana ，
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.
[解析]
Dear Diana ，
Thank you for the lovely day we hav e had with you. It was so kind for of
you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunat e Unfortunately ， the only problem was the journey home. There had been a
terrible accident on the highway and, for as
a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil e miles . In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles s until/till the road was clear. In the car park her e there Gina nearly got knocked over as ∧a
car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They We
finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to' home. 76. have →had 。全文讲述的是过去的事情，因此用过去时。
77. for →of 。It’s kind of sb. to do sth.为固定句式。
78. Unfortunate →Unfortunately 。副词作状语，修饰全句。
79. for a result 中的for →as 。as a result 为固定短语，意思是“因而”。
80. mile →miles 。前面有six 修饰，因此名词应该用复数形式。
81. unless →until/till 。空后的内容是前面的时间状语。
82. here →there 。讲述离自己远的地方用there 。
83. as car 中间加a 。car 是可数名词单数，因此用a 。
84. They →We 。全文用第一人称讲述发生在自己身上的事情。
85. 去掉home 前的to 。home 是副词，前面没有介词。
E3 短文改错议论文
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
（一）[2012·石家庄质检]
We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmate for example，they often feel upset because the expectations from parents，endless homework and the pressure of exams. These serious affect their physical and mental well-being. Therefore，I think about it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First，that is a good idea to have heart-to-heart talks with our parents，tell them we won't disappoint them. Meanwhile，it's advisable to spare some time to take some exercise beside our devotion to the studies so that we will always feel relaxing and energetic. As long as we were fully prepared，we are sure to achieve great success in my academic performance.
[解析]
We senior school students do have some growing pains. Take some of my classmat e
classmates
for
example, they often feel upset because ∧
of
the expectations from parents, endless homework and the pressure of exams. These seriou s
seriously
affect their physical and mental well-being. Therefore, I think about \it quite necessary to take measures to relieve the pains. First, that
it
is a good idea to have heart-to-heart talks with our parents, tel l
telling
them we won't disappoint them. Meanwhile, it's advisable to spare some time to take some exercise besid e
besides
our devotion to the studies so that we
will always feel relaxin g
relaxed and energetic. As long as we were
are
fully prepared, we are sure to
achieve great success in m y
our
academic performance.
E4 短文改错说明文