Col Writ 9J Name: ________________________
UC Berkeley, SELS John McClain
Paragraph Editing Exercises
Well-Focused vs. Unfocused Topic Sentences
Writing an effective topic sentence is absolutely necessary. The main problems they will show
are listed.Here are examples of each:
1)Personal Announcement: “In the following paragraph I explain Hamlet’s deep unhappiness.”
2)Wordiness: “It is obvious to everyone that the use of illic it drugs like LSD, marijuana, cocaine,
prescription pharmaceuticals, bath salts, and even drinking paint thinner can be,
how shall I say, probably not good for one’s own personal health.”
3)Lack of a Clear Point: “Columbus landed in North America in 1492.”
4)Multiple Topics: “Air pollutio n can be blamed for the increase in lung disease
worldwide,and the automobile is the single largest source of its dangerous chemicals.”
5)Bad Grammar: “The problem which we are facing overpopulation.”
6)(Repeated) Questions: “Yes, what young American alive t oday has not yet replaced useof
the telephone with text messaging?”
Write a brief explanation for why each topic sentence above is not effective.
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In the following topic sentences identify the problem with the sentence. Then, rewrite the sentence to make it clear, direct, and proper.If there is not a problem, write “OK.”
1. Myths are like fairy tales, and they are usually highly imaginative.
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2. Perhaps everyone who has a kitchen and a regular supply of groceries has, at one time or
another, made a sandwich and eaten half of it before discovering mold on the bread.
Problem? _________________ Revision: _________________________________________
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3. I will now illustrate the perfect technique for repairing a wall fan.
Problem? _________________ Revision: ________________________________________
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4. The best place your research college library.
Problem? _________________ Revision: _________________________________________
Editing, of course, leads to revision and rewriting. There are three main kinds of revision.See if you can rewrite the following ?s to make them more concise, efficient, and stylish.
Global Revision
It is sometimes important, especially early in the writing process when the reader is being “hooked”, to revise a paragraph in a global way. This may mean reviewing and changing the basic structure of the argument of the paragraph, that is the thesis/claim as well as the way it is written, and/or any or even all of the supporting information.
______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Local Revision
Later, it is sometimes necessary to revise a paragraph to improve its coherence. The sentences, or chunks of information inthe sentences, may not be clearly connected together. Nevertheless, parts of sentences may have to be arranged differently. Indeed, local revision leads naturally to consideration of the basic sentence elements. Thatdoes not have to include punctuation.
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The final aspect of revision concerns style. This includes many things because style expresses the most individual, complex, and sensitive preferences in reading and writing. The use of parallel structure, more condensed and concise phrasing, odd syntax, quick shifts in tone, synonym substitution, the presence of common and rare idioms along with a care for rhythm and rhetorical variety, and more,all may be considered aspects of “dressing the text,” that is presenting an effective writing style. Ultimately, style is a projection of the writer’s personality and “voice.”
______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Moving on, cohesion means that all of the information in a written work is grammatically and logically connected. Cohesion, however, can be relative to the particular kind of writing, or genre, and the ability of the reader to follow the writer’s thinking. Coordination, subo rdination, and transitions are the most commonly used tools to make writing more cohesive. Also, choppy writing tends to fragment, so it should be avoided.
Rewrite the following paragraphs to include 1) better coordination and transitions, and 2) less wordy language.
The best way to experience San Francisco is by walking on foot. There are many hills. You should wear comfortable shoes. There are steps up and down many hills. They are steep. There are many beautiful houses beside them. There are beautiful views from the top of some steps that go up and down and over and around the hills. You can see across the Bay. You can see Berkeley and Oakland in the distance over the restless water. They are in the east. You can see the Golden Gate Bridge. It is to the northwest. Maybe you can see Alcatraz Island near the Golden Gate Bridge. It is famous. Behind it is Marin County. You will enjoy the steps.
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Tobacco has been proven to be harmful to any serious or even non-serious smoker’s health. Numerous studies have analyzed levels of nicotine and tar content delivered to the lungs by tobacco smoke. They have undeniablyconfirmed that almost any amount can cause cancer. These results of these many studies have been known for better than fifty years. This leads to the question: why are cigarettes still allowed to be sold on almost every street corner? Social science studies show that cigarettes are being advertised most aggressively in low-income neighborhoods. It really makes you wonder about the ethics of the tobacco company executivesDon’t they care about the effects of their products on the people they are selling to? What about the government? Isn’t the government supposed to be carefully looking out for the health and best interests of the public? What’s wrong with these people? What’s wrong with this picture?
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名词性从句专项练习100题 1. His success was because of ________ he had been working hard. A. that B. the fact which C. the fact that D. the fact 2. “Is Mary from New York City” “I don't know _______.” A. from what city does she come from B. from what city she come C. what city does she come from D. what city she comes from 3. ________ makes mistakes must correct them. A. What B. That C. Whoever D. Whatever 4. The reason why I didn't go to Shanghai was ________ a new job. A. because I got B. because of getting C. I got D. that I got 5. It worried her a bit ____ her hair was turning grey. A. while B. that C. if D. for 6. Henry killed the dog. I'll ask him why ________. A. did he do that B. he did that C. he did D. he has done so 7. Have you seen Henry lately My boss wants to know ________. A. how he is getting along B. how is he getting along C. what he is getting along D. what is he getting along 8. It is generally considered unwise to give a child ____ he or she wants. A. however B. whatever C. whichever D. whenever 9. He asked me ________ with me. A. what is the trouble B. what wrong was C. what was the matter D. what trouble it is 10. I am sure ________ he said is true. A. that B. about that C. of that D. that what 11. When and why he came here ________ yet. A. is not known B. are not known C. has not known D. have not bee 12. I wonder how much ________. A. does the watch cost B. did the watch cost C. the watch costed D. the watch costs 13. Mary is ________ someone might recognize her. A. afraid of B. afraid about C. afraid that D. afraid for 14.________ is no reason for dismissing her. A. Because she was a few minutes late B. Owing to a few minutes late C. The fact that she was a few minutes late D. Being a few minutes late 15. They came to the conclusion ________ by a computer. A. that not all things can be done B. because of not all things be done C. being not all things can be done D. because not all things can be done 16. Why the explosion occurred was ________ the laboratory attendant had been careless. A. for B. because C. since D. that 17. I don't doubt ________ he'll come.
2012-2013学年闵行区初三语文一模卷 一、文言文（42分） （一）默写（18分） 1.了却君王天下事，。（辛弃疾《破阵子·为陈同甫赋壮词以寄之》） 2.向来枉费推移力，。（朱熹《观书有感》） 3. ，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马。（马致远《天净沙·秋思》） 4.草枯鹰眼疾，。（王维《观猎》） 5. ，出则无敌国外患者，国恒亡。（孟子《生于忧患，死于安乐》） 6. ，佳木秀而繁阴……（欧阳修《醉翁亭记》） （二）阅读下面词，7-8题（4分） 诉衷情 当年万里觅封侯，匹马戍梁州。关河梦断何处，尘暗旧貂裘。 胡未灭，鬓先秋，泪空流。此生谁料，心在天山，身老沧洲。 7.上阕写了当年和现今两个场景，各表现了词人的、的心情。（2分） 8.下列理解不正确的一项是（）（2分） A.“当年万里”是作者对往日军旅生活的回忆。 B.“泪空流”写出了对自己功名未成的不满与失望。 C.“心在天山”和“身老沧洲”构成强烈对比。 D.这首词悲壮处见沉郁，愤懑却不悲沉，感人至深。 （三）阅读下列文章，回答9-11题（8分） 予观夫巴陵胜状，在洞庭一湖。衔远山，吞长江，浩浩汤汤，横无际涯；朝晖夕阴，气象万千。此则岳阳楼之大观也，前人之述备矣。然则北通巫峡，南极潇湘，迁客骚人，多会于此，览物之情，得无异乎？ 若夫霪雨霏霏，连月不开；阴风怒号，浊浪排空；日星隐曜，山岳潜形；商旅不行，樯倾楫摧；薄暮冥冥，虎啸猿啼。登斯楼也，则有去国怀乡，忧谗畏讥，满目萧然，感极而悲者矣。 至若春和景明，波澜不惊，上下天光，一碧万顷；沙鸥翔集，锦鳞游泳，岸芷汀兰，郁郁青青。而或长烟一空，皓月千里，浮光跃金，静影沉璧。渔歌互答，此乐何极！登斯楼也，则有心旷神怡，宠辱偕忘，把酒临风，其喜洋洋者矣。 嗟夫！予尝求古仁人之心，或异二者之为，何哉？不以物喜，不以己悲。居庙堂之高则忧其民，处江湖之远则忧其君。是进亦忧，退亦忧。然则何时而乐耶？其必曰：“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”乎。噫！微斯人，吾谁与归？ 9.上文节选自课文《》，作者是（人名）。（2分） 10.用现代汉语翻译下列句子，注意加点字的含义。（3分） 予尝求古仁人之心，或异二者之．为
you visited the other day? A. that B. where C. in which D. the one some foreign friends visited last Friday? A. that B. where C. which D. the one A. two of whom B. both of whom C. both of which D. all of whom 11. Who can think of a situation A. which B. that C. where D. in that A. That; surprises B. What; surprising C. How; are surprised D. That; is surprised 13. The thought ____ Lao Gao would open a Sichuan restaurant in Los Angeles surprised his wife A. that B. what C. whether D. if 1. Is this the factory 2. Is this factory 3. Is this the factory he worked ten years ago? A. that B. where C. which D. the one 4. The wolves hid themselves in the places couldnt be found. A. that B. where C. in which D. in that 5. Here is so difficult a question A. that no one can answer B. which nobody can answer it C. as no one can answer it D. as nobody can answer 6. The reason is ___ he is unable to operate the machine. A. because B. why C. that D. whether 7. Antarctic __ we know very little is covered with thick ice all the year round. A. which B. where C. that D. about which 8. May the fourth is the day _ we Chinese people will never forget. A. which B. when C. on which D. about which 9. We are going to spend the Spring Festival in Guangzhou, __ live my grandparents and some relatives. A. which B. that C. who D. where 10. He has two sons, work as chemists. this idiom can be used? 12. people spend so much money on their pets us a lot.
三年级语文阅读理解 班级：姓名： 阅读一 金色花 假如我变成了一朵金色花，为了好玩，长在树的高枝上，笑嘻嘻地在空中摇摆，又在新叶上跳舞，妈妈，你会认识我吗？ 你要是叫道：“孩子，你在哪里呀？”我暗暗地在那里匿笑，却一声儿不响。 我要悄悄地开放花瓣儿，看着你工作。 当你沐浴后，湿发披在两肩，穿过金色花的林阴，走到做祷告的小庭院时，你会嗅到这花香，却不知道这香气是从我身上来的。 当你吃过午饭，坐在窗前读《罗摩衍那》，那棵树的阴影落在你的头发与膝上时，我便要将我小小的影子投在你的书页上，正投在你所读的地方。 但是你会猜得出这就是你孩子的小小影子吗？ 当你黄昏时拿了灯到牛棚里去，我便要突然地再落到地上来，又成了你的孩子，求你讲故事给我听。 “你到哪里去了，你这坏孩子？” “我不告诉你，妈妈。”这就是你同我那时所要说的话了。 1.根据意思从短文中找出相应的词语。 （1）偷偷地笑。（） （2）形容微笑的样子。（） 2.根据文章内容，把下面这段话补充完整。 “我”变成金色花后，长在_________；“我”悄悄地开放花瓣，看着妈妈_______，让沐浴后的妈妈闻到香气，我将影子投在_______；妈妈拿灯去_______时，“我”突然跳到妈妈面前，恢复了原样。 3.“我”是一个怎样的孩子？（） A.“我”是一个天真活泼，可爱机灵，爱妈妈的孩子。 B.“我”是一个非常不懂事，心里只想着自己的孩子。 C.“我”是一个有超能力的孩子，可以变成各种事物。 4.如果我会变，我要变成________花，因为______________________ __________________________________________________________。
课内阅读专项练习 一、阅读课内片段完成练习。 天窗(节选) 夏天阵雨来了时，孩子们顶喜欢在雨里跑跳，仰着脸看闪电，然而大人们偏就不许“到屋里来啊！”随着木板窗的关闭，孩子们也就被关在地洞似的屋里了。这时候，小小的天窗是你唯一的慰藉。 从那小小的玻璃，你会看见雨脚在那里卜落卜落跳，你会看见带子似的闪电一瞥；你想象到这雨，这风，这雷，这电，怎样猛厉地扫荡了这世界，你想象它们的威力比你在露天真实感到的要大十倍百倍。小小的天窗会使你的想象锐利起来。 1.用“”画出孩子们看到了什么，用“”画出孩子们想象到了什么。 2.比较下面两个句子，哪句写得好?为什么? ①从那小小的玻璃，你会看见雨脚在那里卜落卜落跳，你会看见带子似的闪 电一瞥。 ②透过那小小的玻璃，你会看见雨点在那里跳，你会看见闪电从空中划过。 3.这风雨雷电会怎样猛厉地扫荡世界呢?描述一下你想象中的情景。 4.“这时候，小小的天窗是你唯一的慰藉。”你是怎么理解这句话的? 在你无奈、不快乐的时候，什么是你的慰藉?请你写一写。 二、阅读课内片段，完成练习。 猫(节选)
猫的性格实在有些古怪。 说它老实吧，它的确有时候很乖。它会找个暖和的地方，成天睡大觉，无忧无虑，什么事也不过问。可是，它决定要出去玩玩，就会出走一天一夜，任凭谁怎么呼唤，它也不肯回来。说它贪玩吧，的确是啊，要不怎么会一天一夜不回家呢?可是，它听到老鼠的一点儿响动，又是多么尽职。它屏息凝视，一连就是几个钟头，非把老鼠等出来不可！ 它要是高兴，能比谁都温柔可亲：用身子蹭你的腿，把脖伸出来让你给它抓痒，或是在你写作的时候，跳上桌来，在稿纸上踩印几朵小梅花。它还会丰富多腔地叫唤，长短不同，粗细各异，变化多端。在不叫的时候，它还会咕噜咕噜地给自己解闷。这可都凭它的高兴。它若是不高兴啊，无论谁说多少好话，它也一声不出，连半朵小梅花也不肯印在稿纸上。 1.根据选文内容填一填，画一画 （1）《猫》的作者是。本册我们还学过他的《》。（2）请用“”画出选段的中心句。选文分别是从猫在时、时以及时和时的表现来体现它的古怪的。(3)“小梅花”指的是。作者这样写的好处是 2.读下面的句子，你体会到了什么?写下来。 它屏息凝视，一连就是几个钟头，非把老鼠等出来不可！ 3.作者为什么能把猫写得栩栩如生?至少从两个角度写一写。 三、阅读课内片段，完成练习。 宝葫芦的秘密(节选) 不管张三也好，李四也好，一得到了这个宝葫芦，可就幸福极了，要什么有什么。张三想：“我要吃水蜜桃。”立刻就有一盘水蜜桃。李四希望有一条大花狗，
名词性从句、强调句与定语从句综合练习 1. What a pity ______ is ______ you didn’t come to the party. A. there; because B. it; that C. he; when D. that; for 2. －I believe ______ you’ve tried your best and ______ you can come to the top of the class. －Thank you. A. what; / B. / ; / C. what; that D. /; that 3. Please give the note to ______ is in the classroom. A. who B. whom C. whoever D. whomever it yesterday ______ you received the letter from her which ) 5. The question Mike asked was ______ the sports meet would be put off. A. that B. if C. whether D. because 6. Some great people said it was their primary school teachers and their lessons they were fond of influenced their whole lives. ;that ;which ;which ;that 7. We need the same machine ______ in your factory. is being used is being used is being used it is being used can be seen from his face, he is quite satisfied. 9. Is ______ he told you really funny A. that B. is C. what D. this 10. —On the contrary，I think it is the mother，rather than her children， to blame. —I agree with you. is is are are — lent me a lot of maney,______ I coul dn’t buy the TV set. it which which which wonder if it was in the bookstore I bought some books I lost the keys. ;that ;where ;that ;where 13. It was in the garden of his old house_____he grew up______he dug up a pot of gold. ;that ;where ;that ;where was in the stone house was built as a school by local villagers the boy finished his primary school. ;that ;where ;which ;which 15．—Where did you meet him while in Beijing —It was in the hotel ______ I stayed． A．that B．which C．when D．where 、 was on October 15 the Communist Party 17th Congress began， was the biggest
北大荒的秋天 桥下小学胡月圆 《北大荒的秋天》是一篇三年级的写景文章。文章通过对北大荒一碧如洗的天空，五彩的流去，清澈见底的小河以及热闹非凡的原野的描写，向读者展示了一幅动静相结、沉甸甸的北大荒秋景图。读完全文，心才有一种饱腹之感，那是货真价实的秋啊！这秋，是实实在在的景呀！15分钟阅读的过程中，我对北大荒的秋景图分别有三个层次逐变重构构过程，现剖析如下： 一、初读《北大荒的秋天》，心生赏疑 “北大荒”顾名思义，大荒之地应该是满目疮痍，枯草一片吧！这种地方的秋色有何值得写的呢？大荒之秋，先看题目，就给了我一种匪夷所思之感，就带着这样的观感走近文章，发现“田园深处有情人”，你看—— 二、复读，动静相结展画面 再读文章，我梳理出文章的框架结构，同时也在心中展开了“大荒之秋”的画面： 北大荒的秋天 流云五彩斑斓空中抖动的美 小河清澈见底地上静躺的爱美哉，北大荒 原野热闹非凡田野丰收的美 勾勒出如上的画面，我心中的“大荒之秋”还是那个沉寂的荒芜的枯叶一片的印象吗？我想，大凡细读到此的读者，都有了自己的画面与构图：不说西边天上那转瞬即逝的、灵动多变的流动之美，也不说大地小河那静谧安详之美，单说原野吧！光原野一带的非凡景象就够我们心襟荡漾好几回了。走进原野，我感觉那儿正奏响丰收的交响乐，“成片的大豆摇动豆荚”哗啦啦地笑着，你猜得出那声响里有什么，分明是沉甸甸的豆粒在纵情欢唱哪；再看，“挺拔的高梁扬起黑红黑红的脸笼”，在乐呵呵地演唱，看得见高梁的神情吗？“扬着”那是什么？是骄傲的“扬起”，看我的果实多饱满：那是得意的自豪的扬起，它在接受阳光的召唤，也在展示自己那沉甸甸的愉悦感。一一端详着原野上这些使者，听他们的声音“哗啦啦”“乐呵呵”；看它们的动作表情“摇动、扬起”，再看看它们的阵势“成片成片，黑红黑红、挺拔”，我不由地想起赵本山表演的小品《红高粱模特队》，不由地感受到这样一句话的深刻意味：“当一个句子在表述时，其背后的许多光芒也在被表述，文本解读，应读出句子的后光来！”同时也不禁瞧见句子背后有这样一双眼睛，一种神情：一些壮实的老农在田间乐呵呵地唱着歌，“哗啦啦”地放声笑，沉甸甸的果实让田野上劳作的人们变得身心轻盈，此时如果老农能歌，相信他们能扬出心中的快乐；如若善舞，他们也会舞出大豆、高梁以及他们自己内心那丰收后的愉快、热闹、多姿的身影。难怪，榛树叶子红了，能将人心给燃烧起来。看到这样的场景，就是叶子不红，人们的心也会自发地红火，自动地燃烧。此时，你若问，北大荒的秋天美吗？哪能不美呢？不仅美在景，更是美在情，美在心哪！“一切景语皆情语！”大概就是这个意思吧！ 三、再读，万紫千红就是秋 《北大荒的秋天》画面展示至此，有声有形，有动有静，但仍觉深挖不够。在动静之间、在音乐舒缓与激昂之间，总觉得少了些什么？再读文猛然间发现画面有绽放的色彩过渡与对比，真是万紫千红，好个秋啊！ 如果说“流云”的五彩斑斓是展示色彩的惟幕的话，那么这些词语无疑就是画面背景的色条。“银灰、桔黄、血红、绛紫”这些语词于三年级的孩子而言，构语是相当有趣的，借助物体的色彩去想象它的颜色，再幻化成五彩的画面，相信于学生的积累也大有裨益。 如果说“五彩”的色闹腾了一些，那么紧接着的便是小河幽静、雅致的蓝了。为什么说小河像一条蓝调子呢？声音而言是静的，色彩而言是冷的，因为它的透明，因为它的安逸，
名词性从句是由if, whether, that 和各种疑问词充当连接词所引导的从句，其功同名词一样。 一．主语从句 1. It 作形式主语和it引导强调句的比较 It is a pity that you didn't go to see the film. It doesn't interest me whether you succeed or not. It is in the morning that the murder took place. It is John that broke the window. 2. 用it 作形式主语的结构 (1) It is ＋名词＋从句 It is a fact that …事实是… It is an honor that…非常荣幸 It is common knowledge that…是常识 (2) it is ＋形容词＋从句 It is natural that…很自然… It is strange that…奇怪的是… (3) it is ＋不及物动词＋从句 It seems that…似乎… It happened that…碰巧… (4) it ＋过去分词＋从句 It is reported that…据报道… It has been proved that…已证实… 3. What 与that 在引导主语从句时的区别 What 引导主语从句时在句时在从句中充当句子成分，如主语．宾语．表语，而that 则不然。例如： 1) What you said yesterday is right. 2) I know that he will study. 3) I know what he will study.
散文阅读专题 徐州中考模拟预测语文密卷 (五)阅读下文,完成18-21题。(17分) 把自己变成一朵花,香给这个世界看 林清玄 ①有时会在晚上去逛花市. ②夜里九点以后，花贩会将店里的花整理一遍,把一些盛开着的,不会再有顾客挑选的花放在方形的天竹篮推到屋外,准备丢弃了。 ③多年以前,我没有多余的钱买花,就在晚上去挑选竹篮中的残花,那虽然是已被丢弃的,看起来都还很美,尤其是它们正好开在高峰,显得格外辉煌。在竹篮里随意翻翻就会找到一大把,带回家插在花瓶里，自己看了也非常欢喜。 ④从竹篮里拾来的花,至少可以插一两天,甚至有开到四五天的。每当我把花一一插进瓶里, 会兴起这样的遐想:花的生命原本短暂,它若有知，知道临谢前几天还被热爱着,应该感叹不枉一生,能毫无遗憾地凋谢 ⑤花的盛放是那么美丽,但凋落时也有一种难言之美。在清冷的寒夜，我坐在案前，看到花瓣纷纷落下，无声地辞枝,以一种优雅的姿势飘散,安静地俯在桌边。那颤抖离枝的花瓣时而给我是一瓣耳朵的错觉,仿佛在倾听着远处土地的呼唤,闻着它熟悉的田园声息。那还留在枝上的花则是眼睛一样、努力张开，深情地看着人间，那深情的最后一瞥真是令人惆怅。 ⑥每一朵花都是安静地来到这个世界, 又沉默离开.若是我们倾听，在安静中仿佛有深 思,而在沉默里也有美丽的雄辩 ．．。 ⑦许久没有晚上去花市了，最近去过一-次，竟捡回几十朵花，那捡来的花与买回的花感觉不同,由于不花钱反而觉得每一朵都是无价的。尤其是将谢未谢，更显得楚楚可怜,比起含苞时的精神抖擞也自有一番风姿。 ⑧说花是无价的，可能只有卖花的人反对。花虽是有形之物，却往往是无形的象征，莲之清净、梅之坚贞、兰之高贵、菊之微骨、牡丹之富贵、百合之闲逸,乃至玫瑰里的爱情、康乃馨中的母爱都是高洁而不能以金钱衡量的。 ⑨花所以无价,是花有无求的品格。如果我们送人一颗钻石,里面的情感就不易纯粹,因为没有人会白送人钻石的；如果是送一朵玫瑰,它就很难掺进一丝杂质,由于它的纯粹,钻石在它面前就显得又俗又胖了。 ⑩花的威力真是不小，但花的因缘更令人怀想。民间有一种说法,说世上有三种行业是前世修来的，就是卖花、卖香、卖伞。因为卖花是纯善的行业,买花的人不是供养佛菩萨,就是与人结善缘,即使自己放置案前也能调养身心。卖香、卖伞也都是纯善的行业,如果不是前世的因缘,哪里有福分经营这么好的行业呢?
名词性从句专项练习Ⅱ 1. Police have found _________ appears to be the lost ancient statue. 2. _______ makes the book so extraordinary is the creative imagination of the writer. 3. Experts believe _______ people can waste less food by shopping only when it is necessary. 4. _________ struck me most in the movie was the father’s deep love his son. 5. It’s good to know _______ the dogs will be well cared for while we away. 6. the only way to succeed at the highest level is to have total belief _____ you are better than anyone else on the sports field. 7. Do not let any failures discourage you, for you can never tell _____ close you may be to victory. 8. From space, the earth looks blue. This is about seventy-one percent of its surface is covered by water. 9. _____ one of you breaks the window will have to pay for it. 10. It remains to be seen _____ the newly formed committee’s policy be put into practice. 11. It is by no means clear ______ the president can do to end the strike. 12. The limits of a person’s intelligence, generally speaking, are fixed at birth, but ____ he reached these limits will depend on his environment.
第二单元主题阅读 （运用多种方法理解难懂的词语） 文段一北国的落叶，渲（xuàn）染出一派多么悲壮的气氛！落叶染作黄金色，或者竟是朱红绀（ɡàn）赭（zhě）。最初坠落的，也许只是那么一片两片，像一只两只断魂的金蝴蝶。但接着，便有沙沙哗哗的金红的阵雨了。接着，便在树下铺出一片金红的地毡（zhān）。而在这地毡之上，铁铸似的，竖着光秃秃的疏落的树干和枝丫，直刺着高远的蓝天和淡云。这便是北国“无边落木萧萧下”的壮观. 文段二那时候，在南京，刚刚开始记得一些零碎的事，画面里常常出现一片美丽的郊野，我悄悄地从大人身边走开，独自坐在草地上。梧桐叶子开始簌（sù）簌地落着，簌簌地落着，把许多神秘的美感一起落进我的心里来了。我忽然迷乱起来，小小的心灵简直不能承受这种兴奋。我就那样迷乱地捡起一片落叶。叶子是黄褐色的，弯曲的，像一只载着梦的小船，而且在船舷上又长着两粒美丽的梧桐子。每起一阵风我就在落叶的雨中穿梭，拾起一地的梧桐子。必有一两颗我所未拾起的梧桐子在那草地上发了芽吧？二十年了，我似乎又能听到遥远的西风，以及风里簌簌的落叶声。我仍能看见那些载着梦的船，航行在草地里，航行在一粒种子的希望里。 文段三从第一片树叶落地开始，北大荒的秋天也就来了。天空一碧如洗，只有在傍晚，西边的天上才会有几缕流云。这些流云在落日的映照下，转眼间变成一道银灰、一道橘黄、一道血红、一道绛紫，就像是美丽的仙女
在空中抖动着五彩斑斓（lán）的锦缎。小河清澈见底，如同一条透明的蓝绸子，静静地躺在大地的怀抱里。一群小鱼顶着水游过来，明镜一样的水面顿时漾起了一道道波纹。原野热闹非凡。成片的大豆摇动着豆荚，发出哗啦啦的笑声；挺拔的高粱扬起黑红黑红的脸庞，像是在乐呵呵地演唱。山坡上，大路边，村子口，榛树叶子全都红了，红得像一团团火，把人们的心也给燃烧起来了。 1.【提取信息】阅读文段，完成下面的表格。 文段季节地点（地域）景物 一秋天北国 二 三 2.【整体感知】比较阅读这三个文段，完成填空。 （1）三个文段从不同的方面描写了_______的景色。 （2）文段一抓住落叶的______、形态和______来突出__________________。 （3）文段二把落叶比作“________________”，仿佛看见自己“航行在草地里”，航行在“_______________________”。 （4）文段三通过描写流云的___________、小河的__________、原野的__________来表达人们丰收在望的喜悦。 3.【品析词语】在正确的选项上画“√”。 （1）联系上下文可知，文段一中“疏落”的意思是。 （A.疏忽大意 B.稀疏零落）
名词性从句专项练习 100 题 1. His success was because of he had been working hard. A. from what city does she come from C. what city does she come from D. what city she comes from makes mistakes must correct them.6. Henry killed the dog. I'll ask him why 7. Have you seen Henry lately My boss wants to know 12. I wonder how much 2. A. that B. the fact which C. the fact that D. the fact Is Mary from New York City ” “I don't know B. from what city she come 3. A. What B. That C. Whoever D. Whatever 4. The reason why I didn't go to Shanghai was a new job. A. because I got B. because of getting C. I got D. that I got 5. It worried her a bit her hair was turning grey. A. while B. that C. if D. for A. did he do that B. he did that C. he did D. he has done so A. how he is getting along B. how is he getting along C. what he is getting along D. what is he getting along 8. It is generally considered unwise to give a child he or she wants. A. however B. whatever C. whichever D. whenever 9. He asked me with me. A. what is the trouble B. what wrong was C. what was the matter D. what trouble it is 10. I am sure he said is true. A. that B. about that C. of that D. that what 11. When and why he came here yet. A. is not known B. are not known C. has not known D. have not bee A. does the watch cost B. did the watch cost C. the watch costed D. the watch costs 13. Mary is someone might recognize her. 14. A. afraid of B. afraid about C. afraid that D. afraid for is no reason for dismissing her. A. Because she was a few minutes late B. Owing to a few minutes late C. The fact that she was a few minutes late D. Being a few minutes late 15. They came to the conclusion by a computer. A. that not all things can be done B. because of not all things be done C. being not all things can be done D. because not all things can be done 16. Why the explosion occurred was the laboratory attendant had been careless. A. for B. because C. since D. that 17. I don't doubt he'll come.
最新苏教版三年级下册语文短文阅读专项提升练习及答案 一、类文阅读 活字印刷术 活字印刷术是一种古代印刷方法，是中国古代劳动人民经过长期实践和研究才发明的。先制成单字的阳文反文字模，然后按照稿件把单字挑选出来，排列在字盘内，涂墨印刷，印完后再将字模拆出，留待下次排印时再次使用。 活字印刷术的发明是印刷史上一次伟大的技术革命。北宋庆历年间（1041—1048），中国的毕昇发明的泥活字，标志着活字印刷术的诞生。他是世界上第一个活字印刷术发明人，比德国人约翰内斯·古腾堡的活字印刷术早约400年。元代王祯成功创制木活字，又发明了转轮排字。明代中期，铜活字在江苏南京、无锡、苏州等地得到较多的应用。 1．（找中心句）短文第1自然段是围绕“_________________”这句话来写的。第2自然段是围绕“_________________”这句话来写的。 2．（提取信息）根据短文内容，将活字印刷术的流程图补充完整。 制成______→按稿______→排列______→涂墨______→印完______→留待 ______ 3．（理解词语）结合上下文，用自己的话说说加点词语的意思。 （1）中国的毕昇发明的泥活字，标志着活字印刷术的诞生 ．．。 “诞生”的意思是________________。 （2）元代王祯成功创制 ．．木活字，又发明了转轮排字。 “创制”的意思是_______________________。 4．（品读句子）读下面的句子，体会作者是如何把意思表达得更准确、更有说服力的。 他是世界上第一个活字印刷术发明人，比德国人约翰内斯·古腾堡的活字印刷术早约400年。 后半句用______和______的方法对前半句进行______说明，说明毕昇是当之无愧的_______________。
定语从句与名词性从句练习 1. Where is the window ______ glass is broken? A. which B. that C. whose D. its 2. The fact he was successful proves his ability. A. that B. what C. which D. why 3. I will never forget the day ______ I spent with them. A. in which B. on which C. that D. on that 4. The reason he has been such a success he never gives up. A. is because B. is what C. is that D. is 5. The reason ______ he was late was ____ he got up late. A. why, why B. why, because C. why, that D. why, as 6. All ______ can be done has been done. A. that B. what C. which D. of which 7. This is the pen ____ he w rote the letter. A. in which B. in that C. with which D. with that 8. leaves the room last ought to turn off the light. A. Anyone B. The person C. Whoever D. Who 9. He has been sent to the place ____ needs him most. A. where B. that C. what D. it 10. Is this book _____ you bought the other day? A. that B. which C. the one D. where 11. The man asked . A. what was going on there B. what it was going on there C. what’s going on there D. what going on there 12. Is this the factory ____ we visit the other day? A. which B. where C. the one D. it 13. _______ is known to all, Xiao Ming is good at English.
原野热闹非凡。成片的大豆摇动着豆荚，发出了哗啦啦的笑声，挺拔的高粱扬起黑红黑红的脸庞，像是在乐呵呵地演唱．山坡上，大路边，村子口，榛树叶子全都红了，红得像一团团火，把人们的心也给燃烧起来了。1.选择正确的读音，在下面画上横线。豆荚(jiājiá) 高粱（liáng liang)脸庞（liǎn niǎn) 燃烧（rán 1án)2.在括号里填上合适的词。（）的笑声（）的高粱（）的原野（）的叶子3.写出下列句子的修辞手法。(1)成片的大豆摇动着豆荚，发出了哗啦啦的笑声。（）(2）榛树叶子全都红了，红得像一团团火。（）(3)这些流云在落日的映照下，转眼间变成了一道银灰，一道腊黄，一道血红，一道绛紫。（）4.找出中心句，并抄写在下列横线上。（提示：中心句就是能概括一段话或一篇文章内容的句子；概括一段话的中心句叫做段的中心；概括一篇文章的中心句叫做全文的中心句。）_________________________________________________________________5.“把人们的心也给燃烧起来了”这句话你是怎么理解的？6、文中从、、、这几个方面写出了原野的热闹非凡。从这段中的“”和“”这两个词语可以看出，作者把大豆和高粱当作人来写。 7、模仿这段的写法，围绕“下课了，学校里真热闹”具体写一段话。下课了，学校里真热闹！________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________参考答案3.拟人比喻比喻排比