some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than t he advantages, do you agree or disagree?
范文1
the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in th
e past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,car
s can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars br ing great benefit to all of us.but as proverb goes:no garden withou t weeds.car is not exception.
owing a car has a lot of advantages.for one thing,car provide us th e most convient way of transportation.we can get around freely withou t spenting a lot of time.emotionally,i always found driving is so ex citing.for another,its the comfortable to drive a car.In winter.driver s always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,dri vers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night.
Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects gradually come to th
e surface.firstly,to run a car need a lot o
f oil,which is gettin
g l ess and less.the increasing number of cars contribute the lacking o
f energy.secondlly,as more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpeci ally in bi
g cities is getting heaver and heavier,whic
h lead to th
e serious social problem--traffic jam.in addition,the inceasing number
s of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxid
e into atmosphere.it make the air o
f cities unbreathabe,it strip peop le contact with frensh air.
therefore, new energy should be explored to replace the oil so tha
t our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law shou ld be issued to keep the numbers of cars under control.thus,our heav ier traffic can be solluted!
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Private cars vs Public traffic
As traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities o
f developed and developin
g countries, their governments have to try
h ard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with the m.
Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their privat
e cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see t
hey have to sit on the wheels wasting time and fuel in a heavy tr affic jam. At the same time, through burning the fossil fuels, gree n house gas CO2, CO1, acid rain gas SO2, fumes and dusts are bein g released into the atmosphere, all of which heavily overload the en vironment. Thirdly, with the increase of private cars, the road traff ic accidents
are also rise dramatically. For example, in a city with 5000 car s, there will be at least 250 accidents happening everyday, which al so burden the public healthy services.
On the contrary, expected public traffic may be an ideal solution t o these problems. For example city buses and railways are widely use d or being constructed by many cities. People can take buses easil y, which can be found every 10 minutes or less in the peak tim
e. Actually, Nottingham Transport Company is building its own light r ailway in the city, which is announced by the speak man of the com pany, “It will be completed in the next year, the tickets will b
e very competitive and at the same time the travel will be very sa fe and comfortable.”
On the other hand, public traffic had its own disadvantages. Usuall
y it cannot provide door-to-door service. It is inconvenient to go s hopping by public vehicles. Sometimes you must wait a long time fo
r the train. And quite a lot of people prefer to enjoy driving.
In conclusion, developing the public traffic is a useful approach t
o deal with these difficulties. One possible way, if not the bes
t, is to taxi private cars heavily and use these revenues to provid e citizens cheaper public traffic services.
范文3
With the development of science and technology, the cars have alread y become the important component in our daily life gradually. Cars m ake our life convenient and swift. However, too many cars have cause d very serious social problems. Some people claim that the disadvanta ges of car are more than the advantages. I doubt whether the argume nt can bear much analysis.
Since one century [ago], the auto industry has [been] developed at f ull speed worldwide, and has brought the enormous progresses to ou
r life. For example, the car is the most convenient tool of transpo rtation. We can [be] on and off duty by car every day, we can g
o to travel by car on the vacation, we can utilize the cars to de al with some emergency too. The car [is] playing an important rol
e in our daily life. They make our rhythm o
f life faster and faste r, make our business become more and more efficient.
On the other hand, the development of the automobile has brough
t a lot of infant industry to people, Give people countless employme nt opportunities too. Such as, manufacturing industry, repairing indust ry and maintaining industry. We are enjoying the convenience that th e cars bring to us; at the same time we can utilize the auto indu stry to support ourselves.However, we can not ignore that too many c
ars cause enormous social problems, for example, traffic jam, air pol lution, traffic accident, to which we have to find a solution.
In a word, the cars have brought enormous change to our life; th
e advantages are far more than the disadvantages. We should recogniz
e the merit o
f the cars, and do our best to solve the problems. I
f so, our life will be brighter.
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范文1
Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much debate
d as in
our society. Nowadays, tobacco is more harmful than drug to people’s
health, therefore many people think that smoking is legal that i
s a direct and
primary reason to induce this kind of problem. The above point i s certainly
true; this essay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that tobacco is a silent killer to smokers. Toba cco is
known to be the probable cause of some 25 different diseases, and f or some,
such as lung cancer, bronchitis and emphysema, it is the main caus e.
According to a WHO report four million people die yearly from tobacc o-relate
d diseases, that is on
e death every eight seconds. Tobacco is signi
f icantly
becoming a greater cause of death and disability than any other sing le cause.
Another reason is that more and more young people are under 18 year s old who smoke cigarette have been blinded by the deceit of tobacc onists. Tobacco among adolescents remains stubbornly persistent. Smokin g among adolescents rose in the 1990s in several developed countrie s，such as China,Vietnam and Thailand . While new markets are bein g opened by the tobacco industry actions, old markets have not bee
n closed. Tobacco is a global threat.
Last but not the least reason is the increase in cigarette smugglin g. Because
of tobacco smuggling, the legal retailing and distribution systems a re badly
affected, and faced with increased lawlessness and heavy tax losse
s. This be
havior severely affects the economy.
In conclusion, the tobacco should be considered illegal. Perhaps a pa ck of
cigarettes is less harmful than another drug, but tobacco is actuall
y the
biggest killer of all the drugs.
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范文2
Advertisements of tobacco and those of “smoking is harmful”are ofte n seen
together. But there has been an on-going argument about whether o
r not
tobacco should be forbidden and made illegal. I have always believe d that
smoking should be illegal for the following reasons.
First, smoking does great harm to human health and causes many disea ses.
It is reported that more than 70% of lung cancer sufferers are smok ers, and
the average life-span of smokers is seven years less than that o f non-
smokers. Moreover, it hurts not only smokers, but also the ones arou nd the
smokers. Many researchers claim that breathing “second-hand smoke”ma y
be even more harmful than smoking.
Second, many social problems and disasters can be attributed to smoki ng.
For instance, many wives cannot bear their husbands’smoking all th e time,
which causes many quarrels, or even divorces. Furthermore, the bigge st fire
disaster in China, the Daxinganling fire disaster, was caused b
y a burning
cigarette end, and the cost of the resulting loss was unimaginable. Last, smoking tobaccos is a main source of air pollution.A magazin
e said that
for every cigarette smoked each day,a whole tree is needed to clea n the air.
In other words, smoking one less cigar every day equals plantin
g a tree. It
is a brilliant contribution to the earth we are living on.
In a word, all the above demonstrate that smoking harms yourselves a s well
as your neighbors, pollutes the air we ourselves are breathing, an d even
agitates the social peace. So, in my opinion, tobacco should be stri ctly
forbidden, and smoking should be made illegal.
范文3
there has long been controversy over the legality and apparent accept ance of tobacco in society .some hold that cigarettes and other toba cco containing products should be banned, that is, treated as narcoti cs.personally,i agree with this point of view for the following reaso ns:
although cigarettes do not offer as intense an effect as drugs lik
e heroin and cocaine,they rank higher in the level o
f dependence i
t creates in the user.thousands of smokers try to rid themselves o
f cigarettes but cannot,because of the physiological dependence they d eveloped,chiefly imputable to its chemical nicotine.this explains why s mokers continue their habit despite the numerous health warnings. furt hermore,medical science has now proved beyond a doubt that smokin
g ki lls.wit
h all the other causes of preventable deaths such as alcohol,
i llegal drugs,aids,suicide,road accidents,fire,and guns,cigarettes still ac count for more preventable deaths than all of those combined.
more disturbingly,whilst the use of heroin is dangerous solely to th e users,the use of tobacco endangers those who are in their vicinit
y as well. this phenomenon, known as passive smoking, nulls the coun ter-argument that putting one's own health at risk through smoking sh ould be up to one's own individual choice.reports have shown that th e amount of second-hand smoke inhaled by a typical nonsmoker is equi valent to one cigarette smoked per day,and what is more,passive smoki ng can increase a nonsmoker's chance of getting cancer by ten to th irty two per cent.
there are those who will say that the black market created by outla wing tobacco will produce deadlier cigarettes because the product stan dards of the bootleggers are not as high.however,we should all bea
r in mind that legal cigarettes cause roughly four hundred thousan
d deaths a year.it is hard to imagin
e the limited
distribution provided by the criminal underworld could compete wit
h this tragic figure.
to sum up, the harm visited upon our society by tobacco usage is s ubstantial.there will be no solution other than to control tobacco mu ch in the same way that the government now controls drugs which cou ld allow people to remain attentive to the seriousness of the effect s of these substances,and hopefully to prohibit their usage.
范文4
Apparently, it would seem that tobacco is totally different substanc
e from drugs, and it can be used freedom by public. In fact, howev er, our authority should make tobacco illegal as well as drugs, an
d using of tobacco should b
e controlled strictly.
Tobacco only can be used for research and medical purpose. As far a s I am concerned, as a kind of dope, tobacco has been widely use
d to help patients alleviat
e their pain in surgery. At the same tim e, ordinary people should not be allowed to access it legally for t wo main reasons.
Among countless factors which influence my inclination, there is a mo st conspicuous one: it is harmful that smokers addict to tobacco. Ma ny decades ago, scientists have already found that there is a defini te link between smoking and bronchial troubles, cardiac disease and l ung cancer. More seriously, it not only has negative influence for s mokers, but others living or working in same surrounding, even the n ext generation of a smoking pregnant women may be harmed by so-calle d “second hand smoking”. Research shows that sometimes “second hand s moking”is more dangerous than smoking directly, because, at least s mokers can get the protection from filter tips to some extent. Thu s, compared to the hazard of drugs, tobacco can involve more othe
r innocent people and harm their health unknowingly.
The second aspect relates to the problem that our natural resource
s and money are wasted senselessly during the course of planting, tr ansporting and manufacturing tobacco. In light of a statistics, Chin
a consumes nearly 1,000 tons of wood fibers to produce cigarettes an nually. Besides, the investment absorbed by tobacco manufacturers ever y year, is enough to solve all financial troubles that higher educat ion have to face. Obviously, if tobacco is banned by our government s, it means that considerable money will be saved.
In summary, judging from all the evidence offered, we may safely arr ive at the conclusion that tobacco should be forbidden as well as d
rugs except for a few special purposes, such as research and medicin e.
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With the development of society, our life and working pressure are g reater and greater. In this way, a lot of people have become smoker s. Tobacco, as a kind of drugs, prevails in the society. Some peopl e hold the opinion that tobacco should be given freedom be use, bu t others, in contrast, deem it should be made illegal as the sam
e way as other drugs and that is also my point.
Medical science proves that smoking can cause the heart diseases, lun g cancer, and the immune system diseases. These diseases are all man kind's healthy enemies. The statistics have showed that people who di e of the lung cancer, over 90% are smokers. In these smokers, 8
5% are chain smoker. So, obviously, there is enormous danger to th
e human health in smoking.
In addition, smoking not only dangerous to smoker, but also do har m to people at smoker's side. The tobacco contains a large number o f noxious substances, such as nicotine. Just as a famous physician s ays, smoking is equivalent to commit suicide chronically.
However, the cigarette can really relax our nervous nerve, within sho rt time. People, especially, who have heavy working pressure, are pro ne to produce sense of relying on to cigarette. Moreover, as everyon e knows, a lot of countries impose the heavy taxation to tobacco ma nufacturer and seller, thus, if the tobacco business is considered a s the illegal activities, the revenues of the country will be reduce d correspondingly.
In a word, the danger to people of cigarette is obvious. Though i
t can help us flee away from pressure, this to use health as cos t. Our government should forbid the production of the tobacco, mak
e our world fresh and nonpoisonous.
With the development of society, our life and working pressure ar
e [getting] greater and greater.
In this way, a lot of people have become smokers. Tobacco, as a ki nd of drugs, prevails in the society. Some people hold the opinio
n that tobacco should be given freedom [to] be [used, but others, i n contrast, deem [that] it should be made [as] illegal as the sam
e way as other drugs and that is also my point.
Medical science proves that smoking can cause the heart diseases, lun g cancer, and the immune system diseases. [all of these diseases ar e enemies of mankind's healthy] . The statistics have showed that pe ople who die of the lung cancer, over 90%, are smokers. [Among] the
se smokers, 85% are chain smokers. So, obviously, there is enormou
s danger to the human health in smoking.
In addition, smoking not only dangerous to smokers, but also [doe
s] harm to people at smoker's side. The tobacco contains a large nu mber of noxious substances, such as nicotine. Just as a famous physi cian says, smoking is equivalent to commit suicide chronically. However,
the cigarette can really relax our nervous nerve, within short tim e. People, especially, who have heavy working pressure, are prone t
o produce sense of relying on to cigarette. Moreover, as everyone kn ows, a lot of countries impose the heavy taxation to tobacco manufac turer and seller, thus, if the tobacco business is considered as th e illegal activities, the revenues of the country will be reduced co rrespondingly.
To sum up, the danger to people of cigarette is obvious. Though i
t can help us flee away from pressure, this to use health as cos t. Our government should forbid the production of the tobacco, mak
e our world fresh and nonpoisonous.
Although it is a freedom to use tobacco{烟草} while some people thin k it should be made illegal as the same way as other drugs. To wh at extent do you agree or disagree？What’s your opinion?
A:
Tobacco should be made illegal, I agree with this idea personall
y. I hope most drugs can be made illegal, because, as far as I kn ow, they are bad to our health. However, currently most countries st ill keep it free to use tobacco, and this situation seems to be ve ry hard to change in a short time.
From my own experience, using tobacco is not a good thing, especiall y using is for a long time. It will lead to many kinds of disease s, more importantly, many of them are fatale. One of my friends die d from using too much tobacco, and it is believed there are many m ore people like this. The other thing that I am concerned of is, i f a country doesn’t make using tobacco illegal, many young people w ill have a chance to use it, i.e. students. It is very dangerou
s, because if someone gets addicted to this when he is very youn g, he will then almost surely have a big health problem when he i s old.
I am happy to see that, although it is free to use tobacco in man y countries, most of those countries still somehow try not to encour age people using it. For example, tobacco advertisement is banned i
n many countries, and for many countries, smoking is banned in publi c places. Overall, most countries are trying to stop the use of tob acco, though it will take sometime. In my opinion, it is essentia
l to limit the use of tobacco, and I hope everyone doesn’t use.
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Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theat ers
and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care an d
education. Agree or not agree?
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范文1
Nowadays,
the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and mor e overt, which arouses colossal concerns. To understand the solutio n, let’s take a closer look at the causes of the gap at first. The main reason of the gap is the unequal investment between city a nd rural area. China is a typical example. While more and more mone y is being invested to the coastal areas and big cities, such as B eijing and Shanghai, the lack of investment barriers greatly the soci ety development of rural area and western regions
The low education level partly sharps the gap. There is no doubt th at the prime force of productivity is education. However, because o
f poverty, thousands of people go to work without graduatin
g from pr imary school. The poorer, the few children go to school. This bad c ycle finally leads to the dream of ric
h becoming a dream that is h ard to realize.
Moreover, the rural area is short of people with high quality. A su rvey proved that most of university students, whether they come fro m city or countryside, choose big cities instead of poor areas to w ork. The rural area can neither adept talent man nor attract talen t man. No wonder the gap is increasing largely.
Hence, The government ought to knock itself out to decrease the ga p as soon as possible. First, balance the investment between city an d rural area. In addition, the education level should be improved, e specially pay attention on raising high quality people. Besides, le
t more people realize the latent capacity of rural area in order t o attract talent and investment. The set up of CCTV channel12-wester n region channel is a good example.
Only when the ways mentioned above are realized step by step, can t he gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged.
范文2
Nowadays, many people argue against the government putting money on building theaters and sports stadiums. They have claimed that medica
l care
and education would benefit the citizens and the country much more. However, I believe it is worth building more theaters and arenas. First, stadiums and arenas provide ideal places for people to have p hysical
exercises and entertainment. After a whole week’s hardworking, peopl
e can
enjoy a wonderful football game in the weekend, and refresh themselve s
with a good relaxation there. Moreover, the physical exercises are go od for
people’s health, which will ease the pressure of medical care. Second, theaters and museums can be used as base areas of culture a nd his
tory education. The British Museum, which is the largest one in th
e world,
provides visitors with knowledge about the world culture and the art s. The
visitors to the museum are all overwhelmed by the magnificence of th e
cultural and historical displays featuring mankind’s achievements. In a dditio
n, the performances shown in the theaters will also greatly enrich t he lives o
f citizens. People can enjoy ballet, symphony, and Pekin
g Opera i
n a theater,
which contain the soul of Chinese and western cultures.
Third, running theaters and stadiums can earn much money.And this amo unt
of money can do great contribution in other fields, including medic al care,
and education. After winning the Olympic 2008,Beijing made a plan t o spend
160 billion RMB building an Olympic Village. This will surely attra ct many
sports fans to China, which would be much rewarded, not only in eco nomy
but the whole society.
You can tell form my commentary above,since building theaters and sta diums
benefit not only individuals but also the state, it is very worth y of these
expenses.And the government should speed up the pace of the construct ions.
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An argument often heard these days is that whether or not the gover nment should put money on building theaters and stadiums. Some believ e that instead of spending money on this area, Medical care and edu cation, both of which are basic developing factors of one country sh ould be spent more money on. After weighting the pros and con
s, I disagree with this opinion.
Firstly, theaters and stadiums are best choice for people relaxing. M ost of workers, especially white collar who often feel nervous afte
r one day’s hard work, need to relax both mentally and physicall y. Compared with staying at home, it is much better way to stay i n comfortable theater and listen to a wonderful concert.
In addition, going to theaters and stadiums affect the same effec t as education and medical care. Having more chances to go to theat ers can help them mold character. There is no better way to keep h ealthy than doing proper sports in the daily. In this way, the cult ure and health will be improved greatly, which plays the same rol
e o
f education and medical care.
Moreover, theaters and stadiums are basis essential facilities to a d eveloped city. Take holding an Olympic games as an example, it is n o doubt it will take millions of money to build stadiums. Why th
e winner country is proud o
f that. Because this is a confirmation
g iven by whole world.
Of course I don’t mean that the more theaters and stadiums, the be tter society will be, after all, nothing can take the important plac
e o
f medical care and education.
In summary, the key point is to keep both of this two part develop ing. Only in this way, can all people live better in future.
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Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theat ers and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical car e and education. Agree or not agree?
Recently, a criticism often heard is that the government tends to pu t too much money on building theaters and sports stadiums. They main tain that medical care and education would benefit the citizens an
d th
e country much more. However, I
Topic 1: When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion? 媒体信息一致的缺点： ?国际媒体（global media)—般掌握在少数几个有实力的机构手中（in the hands of a few, large, powerful organizations)；有了媒体的宣传(propaganda)后,西方文化成了主流(domineering force),大规模的、有吸引力的广告(mass seductive advertising )唤起了落后地区人们对物质新的向往（create fresh desires),经济联系增强（strong economic ties),西方产品取代了本地产品，使人们更加向往西方的文化； ?文化开始融合在一起(mingle),人们被新的价值观所围绕(bombarded with new values)，对自己的文化失去信心和自豪感（confidence and pride),拒绝接受自己的文化传统（rejection of their cultural heritage)转而接受西方的文化习惯（adoption of Western cultural practices);西方媒体削弱了民族的特征(ethnic identity)和社会的凝聚力（social cohesion);因为担心失去观众(a loss of viewers),当地的电视台也开始播放西方的电视节目（television shows), ?国际媒体的普遍会降低世界文化的品质和多样性（degrade the quality and diversity of world culture);文化被商业化（commercialized), —些文化产品（cultural goods),如音乐、服装，都变成了商品（commodities in the marketplace)。因此，即便一些文化在世界其他地方传播，它原来的性质（authenticity)已经丧失。 媒体信息一致的优点： ?国家之间的频繁交往会促进文化之间的交流。因此，相互了解和相互认同的可能性(likelihood of mutual understanding and mutual acceptance )就会增加，这是顺应全球化的趋势； ?未必一定放弃传统观念（not necessarily lead to the abolition of traditional values),事实上媒体可以起到宣传和稳固传统文化的作用； ?主流媒体一般都会反应文化多元性（The dominant media reflect cultural diversity.); —些外国节目其实促进了文化多元性(Most foreign programming is promoting cultural diversity.),适应了当地的条件（adapt to local conditions)，注意到了当地文化的敏感性（aware of cultural sensitivity).自我调节来适应市场(exercise self-censorship to suit the market :)。 As international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programs (such as TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations, such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of programs broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds. In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin. American culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian people now imitate American people, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV programs that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.
some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than t he advantages, do you agree or disagree? 范文1 the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in th e past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,car s can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars br ing great benefit to all of us.but as proverb goes:no garden withou t weeds.car is not exception. owing a car has a lot of advantages.for one thing,car provide us th e most convient way of transportation.we can get around freely withou t spenting a lot of time.emotionally,i always found driving is so ex citing.for another,its the comfortable to drive a car.In winter.driver s always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,dri vers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night. Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects gradually come to th e surface.firstly,to run a car need a lot o f oil,which is gettin g l ess and less.the increasing number of cars contribute the lacking o f energy.secondlly,as more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpeci ally in bi g cities is getting heaver and heavier,whic h lead to th e serious social problem--traffic jam.in addition,the inceasing number s of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxid e into atmosphere.it make the air o f cities unbreathabe,it strip peop le contact with frensh air. therefore, new energy should be explored to replace the oil so tha t our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law shou ld be issued to keep the numbers of cars under control.thus,our heav ier traffic can be solluted! 范文2 Private cars vs Public traffic As traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities o f developed and developin g countries, their governments have to try h ard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with the m. Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their privat e cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see t
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Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered
【最新整理，下载后即可编辑】 范文的思路好了。这样好的东西，可惜不是我整理的，是一个叫landfish姑娘收集的，厉害！ v105 Some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages,do you ag ree or disagree? 范文1 The birth of cars has made an enormous change to our life. In the past, we travelled fro m one place to another only by foot, nowadays, cars can do the same job . It goes withou r saying that the invention of cars bring great benefits to all of us. but as an ancient prove rb goes, no garden without weeds. Car is no exception. Owing a car has a lot of advantages. For one thing, car provides us the most convenient wa y of transportation. we can get around freely without spenting a lot of time. Emotionally, I always found driving is so exciting. For another , it is comfortable to drive a car.in winte r.Drivers always can stay warm and dry even in rainy weather .In addition, drivers are saf er in their cars when they are out at night. While cars bring the human a large number of merits ,their side-effects gradually come t o the surface .Firstly, running a car needs a lot of oil,which is getting less and less.The incre asing number of cars contributes the lack of energy.Secondlly,as more and more cars are util zed,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which leads to the seriou s traffic jam.Moreover,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantitie s of carbon monoxide into atmosphere.It makes the air of cities unbreathable, it strips peop le’s contact with fresh air. Therefore, the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental p ollution can be avioded , and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars un der control. Thus, our heavier traffic can be solved!
雅思大作文范文三篇雅思大作文写 正题： ESSAY分为三部分： 1.Introduction 2.Body 3.Conclusion 一篇学术性论文当中，这三部分是必须要有的，同理在考试中才能得高分。 那么什么是introduction呢，之前看书说是把题目用替换词带入照抄，后来发现这是傻瓜式写法，对于要求写作7分以上的同学并不适用。真正的introduction是“present your viewpoint”那么怎样来present呢？继续。 第一步：lead-in background information即导入背景信息。 看这个例子：
Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people degree. They think the host country should wele culture different. Discuss the two views，and give your own opinion.. 这个论文题目里， tourism 就是一个背景信息，所以我们introduction里第一句就该来介绍或者叫导入背景信息，即 tourism的信息。例如： Tourism has became an indispensable part in our modern world.或者Tourism is gradually considered to be a hot topic 第二步：narrow down information即从大背景信息里提出你要去论证的方面。还是上面给出的题目，你要narrow down出来的就是：“people show more concern to their two views. Some of them think visitors to others nations should imitate local custom and behaviors，but others argue that the host nation should wele various cultures” 第三步：your viewpoint即给出你自己的立场。例如上题你就 可以说：“As far as I am concerned，I side with the former”
xx年雅思大作文范文 7,8月份，掐指一算，社会、生活和工作类题目闪现概率较大，今天范文依旧是工作类题目，推荐学习：雅思大作文每日范文(xx.4.11) Topic：With the wide use of puters and the Inter, people can study and work from home without going to school or pany. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 利用网络在家工作和学习 思路解析 如果你在家工作，你就不用每天去挤公交和地铁，浪费时间不说，还把人折磨得身心俱疲save a great deal of time and energy. 另外，时间安排会更灵活have a flexible schedule.只 要你能完成任务meet the deadline, 不管你几点开工，很多人早 上9点脑子还没醒过来，而到了晚上他们反而工作起来倍精神。对于学生，如果在网上上课当然也很方便，除了免去上学放学的辛苦，还可以把课程录下来反复听review the course content many times, 无论学霸学渣都可以按照自己的节奏来复习。
关于这种模式的弊端，主要有以下一些：让员工和学生都缺乏面对面的交流face-to-face munication，变得比较疏远bee alienated. 对于员工来说，少了老板的监督和约束supervision and discipline,很多人可能发现工作效率会降低。也许你上下班路上省了俩小时，结果还不够你淘宝、聊天和打游戏的。家里的环境让人放松，估计很多人都觉得在家里缺乏工作的氛围. 最关键的一点是对于学生的影响。本篇范文用到了“剑8-1”的一些素材：学习的目的不只是学知识和获取信息education is not about learning information and acquiring knowledge only,还需要学习与人相处interact with their peers,学习尊敬老师respect their teachers,学习遵守纪律obey school rules,而这些都是远程教学distance learning所无法学到的。 所以文章的结论是：在家工作和上课也许会变得越来越流行popular,但是这种模式只适合某些工作，而且它永远不会取代传统的学校replace conventional schools. ★ 推荐学习
为方便大家的雅思备考，北外网课第一时间准备了2017年2月25日雅思写作真题范文，由雅思教师撰写：探索太空OR关注地球，帮助雅思备考者分析写作思路，掌握写作技能。跟随北外网课长期学习能够有效提高写作水平，更多雅思备考信息和学习资料，外语在线学习平台北外网课实时为大家更新。欢迎关注。
Some people think the government should spend money to look for life on other planets, others think it is a waste of public money when the earth has so many unsolved problems. Discuss these both sides and give your own opinion 探索太空属于科技类话题，同学们写作的难点主要在于相关词汇可能积累较少，北外网课给出了一些关键词，一起看一下。 KEY WORD look for life on other planets ： look for aliens search for extraterrestrial intelligence exploring outer space / space exploration invest in space agencies and programs prioritize spending on the exploration of space Intro. P.（导入） Space exploration is costly, and many people argue that it should be halted since the gains from searching for extraterrestrial intelligence has few immediate benefits, and we should care for our own planet more. However, others support the outer space programmes for the sake of future tremendous gains and human nature.
满分雅思大作文赏析 对于雅思写作的复习，一些雅思大作文范文，例文还是很有必要自己观摩的，为此小编特收集整理了这篇雅思大作文九分例文点评，分享给大家。希望考生能从中总结出对自己有用的知识点。 满分雅思大作文赏析 范文第一段： C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.T o w h a t e x t e n t d o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e? S o m e f e e l t h a t t h e c h i l d r e n o f l o w i n c o m e f a m i l i e s a r e b e t t e r e q u i p p e d t o d e a l w i t h d i f f i c u l t i e s p o s e d b y t h e r e a l w o r l d w h e n t h e y g r o w u p a n d t h e y a l s o b e l i e v e t h e p r i v i l e g e d c h i l d r e n o f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s a r e l e s s f i t t o d e a l w i t h t h e s e d i f f i c u l t i e s .T h e i m p l i c a t i o n s a n d v e r a c i t y o f t h i s a r g u m e n t s e e m s e l f-e v i d e n t,b u t i n f a c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n.(58w o r d s) 名师点评：
2017雅思A类写作大作文真题范文 1.07 教育类 Task：Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Schools are places where students acquire knowledge and skills needed for further achievements. Given the pressure that students are facing, some cannot help wondering whether art classes should still be compulsory. Those holding the view that art classes should not be compulsory might think that art consumes too much of students' time. Fierce competitions students will face when applying for universities necessitate total devotion to academic subjects. College students who intend to take science as their major are even expected to be fluent in foreign languages now so that essays written by foreign scholars are not barriers in their academic pursuit. In other words, high school students are supposed to show higher levels of academic competence,which seemingly makes art unessential. However, art classes are by no means only intended for entertainment. Children even dabbling in art tend to be more creative in mind. Those skilled in music or painting can interpret the world in a way that we cannot expect from a layman. This kind of ingenuity is also a rare quality constantly found in great scientists, whose contributions have served to create a totally new field for the latter generations. In his reply to a question about death, Albert Einstein considered his departure from the mortal world to be forever farewell to another great musician. With a sigh he answered "I cannot listen to Mozart anymore". Thus, can we simply regard art classes to be selective?
雅思大作文范文：城市交通问题 这是雅思大作文范文《城市交通问题》，供大家阅读参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions. The progress of transport industry is inevitable and undeniable. What is under controversy is whether the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. To be frank, I am in high favor that we are well aware of the traffic problem. In my point of view, a possible cause of the problem is that we lack the infrastructure construction. Also the overpopulation is the cause of this problem, especially in China. Although the growth of the transport is rapid, it still can not meet the increasing needs of people. Furthermore, people abuse the private cars to take public transport instead, which caused more cars put into use. Lastly, individuals are also responsible for this problem. People are lacking in consciousness and awareness for
雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文(1) 这是一篇雅思写作Task1曲线图考官范文。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia. Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.
Sample Answer: The provided line graphs compare the employment history of men and women in 1975 and 1995 dividing in six major sectors namely: manufacturing, communications, finance/ banking, wholesale & retail trade, non-defence public sectors and defence public sectors. As is observed from the given illustration, significant changes have been made in women's employment and women appear to have made remarkable improvements in almost the entire job sectors in Freedonia and in some sectors women went well ahead of men. Initially in 1975, men were notably ahead of women in every sector of employment. For example, in communication sector about 260 men worked against 220 women in every thousand employees. Twenty years later, though the number of men remained unchanged, the number of women rose to over 550 in one thousand. A similar trend can be seen in the wholesale and retail trade sector, where the number of women rose from about 550 to almost 800 in every 1000 employees of this sector two decades later. The number of men in this sector remained stable over the period, at around 700 / thousand.
雅思大作文真题范文精选 雅思大作文真题范文：怎样增加年轻人对本国历史人物的兴趣程度?下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 雅思大作文真题范文：怎样增加年轻人对本国历史人物的兴趣程度? Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country.Why is this?What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country? 今天许多年轻人对国际流行音乐和电影明星的了解比他们国家历史上的名人还要多。这是为什么呢?怎样做才能提高年轻人对本国历史上名人的兴趣? 类型 媒体类 题目 Many young people today know more about international pop and movie stars than about famous people in the history in their country. Why is this? What can be done to increase young people’s interest in famous people in the history of their country? 范文解析 本题讨论现在的年轻人对国际娱乐明星比对他们自己国家的名人感兴趣的原因以及如何提高年轻人对历史名人兴趣。题目类型是议论文的现象类题目，题目的问法是“ Why is this? What can be done...”类型，可以采用4段式作文结构。 文章结构 P1：引入话题+指出原因 P2：指出主要原因之一：大众媒体过度宣传以及邀请国际娱乐明星做广告是引起这一现象的主要原因。
2013.9.7雅思考试A类大作文范文 题目：Nuclear energy is better than other resources in meeting ever-increasing needs of the globe. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 津桥国际学院雅思写作范文： 第一段：社会背景描述+正向观点+自己观点 Nowadays, on account of increasingly serious environmental pollution and gradual depletion of fossil fuels, nuclear energy which should be based on safety remains one of the major choices for most countries in tackling the global energy shortage and climate change. Therefore, some individuals are convinced that nuclear energy to be given foremost consideration can meet ever-increasing demand of humans toward energy. After serious consideration, I deem it is not only conducive to sound development of environment for mankind, but to maintaining social stability and harmony. . 第二段：支持观点 论点：核能利于人类生存环境+反向例证：矿物燃料危害+结论：核能势必优先发展 To begin with, nuclear energy utilized in reasonable and effective way plays an active role in promoting the benignant and sustainable development of survival environment of human beings. For example, utilizing the nuclear energy is a valid way to greatly eliminate deteriorating environmental situation triggered by the excessive use of fossil fuel, because fossil fuel can conduce to global warming that triggers a series of issues including melting glaciers and sea-level rise. Besides the global sea-level rise can directly submerge the coastal lowland areas with dense population, and developed industries and agriculture. Therefore, nuclear power is bound the preferred way to replace the traditional energy resources. 第三段：支持观点 论点：核能有利于社会和谐稳定+反向例证：石油资源导致区域冲突与不稳定+结论:核能有效规避此问题In addition, reasonable development and utilization of nuclear energy can be the energetic motivation to maintain stability and harmony of the society. Namely that United States waging war toward Iraq was intended to seize the plentiful oil resources in the Middle East, which imposed great regional conflicts and made Iraqi people suffer from irretrievable pain. Furthermore, suppressing European oil resources and crippling the European economy by the means of United States getting the command of oil resources in the Middle East gave rise to conflicts and instability between European countries. However，Utilizing and popularizing nuclear power adequately can effectively evade the series of issues evoked by seizing the energy sources . 第四段：让步段 另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳 另一种观点：核能带来致命危害+和平隐患对此反驳：双边多边合作解决此问题+核能与社会经济发展紧密 相连 Admittedly, radioactivity of nuclear power can bring about the fatal detriment, such as the Nuclear leak of Fukushima Nuclear Power Station. Besides, it also generates hidden dangers toward World Peace, such as nuclear issue in Iran and North Korean. However, multilateral and bilateral cooperation utilized by various countries can adequately share the precious experience, communicate information and enforce the law to tackle the relevant issues. Besides, to tackle the climate change, nuclear industry, especially in 21 century, is bound to maintain vibrant momentum of development and get more closely related to economic and social development of countries around the world. 第五段：总结段：总结观点+建议/倡导