浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练三读后续写

写作组合练训练3Ⅰ.应用文写作假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你方案寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e­mail向旅行社询问相关旅行信息。

内容应包括：1．旅行信息(如景点等)；2．当地特色(如食品等)；3．考前须知。

注意：1.词数80左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam，Sincerely yours，Li Hua 【写作指导】本篇应用文写作要求学生给新西兰旅行社写一封e­mail，咨询旅行信息与当地特色。

本文属于书信类应用文中咨询信。

人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。

本文可分三段写作。

首段作自我介绍，说明写信目；第二段为主体段，写清想要咨询问题，如当地有什么景点，有什么特色食品以及有哪些考前须知；第三段表达希望能尽快收到对方回应愿望。

在遣词造句上，学生可以使用咨询信常见套句，如“I'm writing to ask for information about...〞，“I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.〞等；此外，应尽量使用高级词汇与较复杂句型，如定语从句、同位语从句、倒装句等；还应注意合理使用连接成分，以增强文章逻辑性与层次感。

【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam，I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student studying in New Zealand.I'm writing to ask for information about your agency's New Zealand's travel for the winter vacation.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.Besides, I'm also interested in the local food.How much do I have to pay for the travel At length，are there other things I should be aware ofI'd be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours，Li Hua【导学号：85602038】Ⅱ.读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进展续写，使之构成一个完整故事。

第4节旅游与交通(二)Ⅰ.阅读理解A(2018·嘉兴基础测试)V olunteering to help people in need combined with traveling to faraway places is a new trend in the travel industry.It is called voluntourism.People travel to other countries，learn languages and other cultures，and gain new experiences.On the other side，they volunteer to help others who are not as well off as they are.Recent statistics show that in the past few years voluntourism has been one of the fastest­growing areas of tourism.More than 1.6 million people around the world are volunteers in other countries.They work in orphanages(孤儿院)，help build schools，assist in hospitals and do farming work in developing countries.Some of them develop lasting bonds with people far away.There are many reasons why people want to take part in voluntourism.Students see it as a period of time when they can take a break before going to university；others simply want to take time out from a job and do something else.Then there are those who are bored and merely seek adventure.However，many voluntourists do not see volunteering as what it is.They think it is a cheap way of traveling and don’t really want to get involved in hard work.Not everyone sees voluntourism in a positive way.Critics(评论家) say that if people really want to help those in need，there are many opportunities in their own community to do this.On the other side，volunteers are often not skilled enough for the tasks they do.Travel experts point out that in some cases voluntourists are taken advantage of by the organization that sets up the trips.语篇解读本文主要讲述了公益旅游的概念、好处以及人们选择公益旅游的原因。

写作提升练(四) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

(2017·11浙江)A Vacation with My MotherI had an i nteresting childhood.It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we’d ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loadedsuitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get t he purse and travel er’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?” “What?! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a stran ge city,but we weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her frontdoorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the wor ld as as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to campovernight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. "I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away. ------------With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.甥?枷黑?助棒?物敦?助效八、、提No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling （滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is thatfor me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow -------------------------------------------------------------------------- blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

18年浙江高考英语续写作文As the sun rose over the horizon, a sense of nervous excitement filled the air. This was the day of the Zhejiang College Entrance Examination, the culmination of years of hard work and dedicationfor high school seniors all over the province.当太阳从地平线上升起时，一种紧张刺激的感觉弥漫在空气中。

这是浙江高考的日子，对全省各地的高中毕业生来说，这是多年辛勤努力和奉献的巅峰。

For many students, the pressure of performing well on the exam weighed heavily on their shoulders. They had spent countless late nights studying and preparing, sacrificing time with friends and family in pursuit of their academic goals.对许多学生来说，高考的压力让他们沉重地背负着。

他们为了追求学业目标，牺牲了与朋友和家人共度的无数个深夜熬夜学习和准备。

But amid the stress and anxiety, there was also a sense of camaraderie and support among the students. They encouragedeach other, shared study tips, and offered words of encouragement to help alleviate the pressure.然而，在紧张和焦虑之中，学生之间也有一种情谊和支持。

2016.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up andthey started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to ahigh place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.“Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, butthe farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she alsosaw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go toan open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

专题限时集训(十九)读后续写训练2(对应学生用书第193页),,)A(2017·浙江吴越联盟二模)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

“Will you take me to go trick­or­treating，Chad？”Zoe asked when I came home from school.My little sister was already wearing her fairy wings and taking a wand(魔杖)．“Mom's taking you，”I said.“Mommy slipped on the mat and hurt her ankle，”my sister said.Mom limped(一瘸一拐地走)down the hallway just then，and her left ankle was wrapped in a bandage.“I'll be OK sitting in the car.But could you take Zoe from door to door？She's really been looking forward to Halloween．”“I've been looking forward to it，too，”I said and didn't want anything out of expectation．I had to admit，though，Zoe was more excited than I was.She'd been trying on her costume(化妆服)every day for a week.“I'm a fairy，”she said，twirling(旋转)around.“I have plans with my friends，”I said.Our plans consisted of racing around the neighborhood to collect as much candy as we could，not bothering too much with costumes．“Please，Chad，”Zoe begged.“Fine.”There would be my chance for fun and candy，I thought.Zoe twirled on her ter，Zoe walked to the first house while I hung back.“I don't want anyone to know that I'm taking you to go trick-or-treating，”I'd said to her.I'd told my friends that I couldn't hang out with them tonight，but I didn't tell them why，being afraid of being laughed at．“Take a candy bag，”said Mom sitting in the car at the end of the block.When I turned back，Zoe was already 15 steps ahead.“Zoe，wait！”Zoe stopped and turned around.“Hurry，hurry，”she said.I ran to catch up.Looking after her would be more work than I'd expected.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

专题限时集训(十八)读后续写训练1(对应学生用书第191页)A【导学号：38144069】(2017·浙江宁波5月考前模拟)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

Boys like to be considered to be brave，but what kind of things can be considered to be brave？It is not a question that can be answered by words，but by the actual deed.A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example.Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school，they saw some people fighting in the street corner.Ronny said excitedly，“Some people are fighting！Let's go and have a look！”But Henry refused，“It's none of our business.We'd better go home and don't get close to them.Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me.”“You are a coward，and afraid to go，”said Ronny，and off he ran to the spot with some other boys.Henry had to go home alone and didn't think about it anymore.But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that.They laughed at him a great deal.From then on，they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Ronny for his rude behavior，because he had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved，and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus，he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well.However，Ronny didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead，he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school，they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析（上）(function() {var s = "_" + Math.random().toString(36).slice(2);document.write('');(window.slotbydup = window.slotbydup || []).push({id: "u3686515",container: s});})();2018年6月读后续写题型再次出现在浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节，该题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

下面让我们一起来分析一下本次高考读后续写试题。

一给定材料和题目要求It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul，my dad’s friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn onmy farm，” he said. After breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze （吃草）. I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

写作组合练训练2Ⅰ.应用文写作假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jack在观看《中国汉语桥》节目时，决定学习中国语言文化，希望你能给他一些建议。

请你根据以下提示写一封信。

1．通过中国古典作品了解中国文化；2．借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情；3．和中国朋友多沟通。

注意：1.词数80左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Jack，Yours，Li Hua 【写作指导】本篇书面表达是应用文中的书信，属于半开放式写作，主要内容是给决定学习中国语言文化的英国朋友Jack提出具体建议。

写作前，学生要认真审题，进一步明确写作任务，以确保文章的内容与主题一致。

试题已经给出了书信的开头和结尾，因此学生不需要考虑格式问题，可直接进入主题，展开写作。

在提建议时主要围绕提示的三个方面适当展开。

文章应以第二人称和一般现在时为主。

此外，写作时不要一味使用简单句，应注意复合句和并列句的交错使用，长短句相结合，使文章有层次感。

学生还要注意使用必要的衔接词，以增强文章的逻辑性。

【参考范文】Dear Jack，I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.To learn the Chinese language and culture well，first of all，you have to read some classical literature，which will broaden your horizon.Besides，watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language st but not least，you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently.Only by doing so can you achieve your goal.Yours，Li Hua【导学号：85602036】Ⅱ.读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。