2008-2012广东高考英语基础写作、读写任务及范文
一、基础写作
2008年广东高考英语基础写作
第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。
[写作内容]
请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：
Version 1
Shooting, originated as a means of survival, developed into a sport only in the late 19th century. The sport first appeared in 1896, but none were contested during the 1904 and 1928 Games. The sport returned to the Olympics in 1932. Women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting in 1968. The sport has grown steadily from just three shooting events at the 1896 Olympic Games to 17 today.
Version 2
It was not until at the end of 19th century that shooting, originated as a means of survival, earned its status as a sport. Shooting became an Olympic event officially in 1896. Yet, twice in history (1904, 1928) shooting was suspended at the Olympics. It returned to the Games in 1932, and women were first allowed to participate in the competition in 1968. The sport has been growing steadily from 1896's three events to today's seventeen.
2009年广东高考英语基础写作
第一节基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)
你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：
时间：上周末
对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授
主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题
基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50％
(2)人数：世界第一
专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂
(2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视
(3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动
(4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关
[写作内容]
根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容：
1．采访的时间、对象和主题；
2．中小学生近视的发生率及人数；
3．专家解读。
Version
Last weekend, I had an interview with Professor Wang, an eye-doctor, about the issue of short-sightedness of the school children in China. According to Professor Wang, slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world. He also pointed that the causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness. So he suggested that school children avoid overuse of their eyes and do more outdoor activities. He particularly reminded us that how to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.
2010年广东高考英语基础写作
第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。
二手烟：second-hand smoke
[写作内容]
请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯，内容包括：
1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;
2.目标和措施;
3.相关数据。
Version
My country begins to carry out the policy that prevents smoking in public buildings since January 1st, 2011. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking. There are 350 million people smoking recently in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent. Because of these smokers, about 540 million non-smokers are influenced. More than 100 thousand people per year die because of the second smoke.
2011年广东高考英语基础写作
第一节：基础写作
以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道
基本信息：
⑴书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother
⑵作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授
⑶出版时间：2010年
⑷内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事
⑸效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论
相关报道：
⑴中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售
⑵意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法
⑶最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取
耶鲁：Yale 哈佛：Harvard
[写作内容]
根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：
1.图书的基本信息
2.图书的相关报道
Version 1
A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010. It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.
Version 2
A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua’s way of parenting. A recent report says that Amy’s elder daughter, 17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.
2012年广东高考英语基础写作
第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）
你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。
【写作内容】
请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物
*硕
Version
Here is a legendary Australian named Allan Steward, who was born on March 7, 1915. He holds such an amazing attitude towards learning, that is, it’s never too old to challenge oneself, that he has attained 4 degrees, the first of which was obtained in 1936. After getting his second degree, Doctor of Medicine, Mr. Steward decided
to take up law in his eighties and in 2006 he succeeded in winning his third degree, which led him to set a world record of being the oldes t holder of a master’s degree. He was awarded the fourth degree in 2012 by learning online. And he earned praise from his teachers for making good use of his time for learning in a proper and reasonable manner.
二、读写任务
2008年广东高考英语读写任务
第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick.
Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The Students’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs.
One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ??? it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground.
[写作内容]
学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括：
1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点；
2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括：
(1) 对中学生活的感受；
(2) 理想的大学生活；
(3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的
参考范文：
Mike’s mother did almost everything for him when in high school, which brought him a hard time adjusting to the first-year college life. However, afterwards he got accustomed to it because of the academic atmosphere and colorful activities there. As for me, what I do every day is to study hard to enter a famous university, which is always the expectations of my parents and teachers. So traveling among classroom, dormitory and canteen is the routine work. Seldom do I have the time to do some activities. Anyway, unlike you, I have learned how to be independent in a boarding school, which is beneficial to adjust to the college life.
It seems to me the ideal college life is that I become matured both physically and
mentally，and that I obtain qualified academic knowledge and get well prepared for society at the same time.
As we all know，college is wildly different from middle school. It connects not only adolescence to adulthood，but also the ivory tower to the real society. So an active part in activities，associations，as well as some romances are three keys to achieving my ideal college life.
2009年广东高考英语读写任务
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala（考拉）at the Feather dale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. That’s right—sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepy.
The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists，who make the trips to Feather dale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandable. How would you react，my friend，if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you?
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；
2. 然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括:
（1）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；
（2）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；
（3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。
[写作要求]
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
参考范文：
The passage narrates that koalas who are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.
The reasons why tourists like taking photos of the animals in the zoo perhaps vary from people to people. Some think it a happy reminder of their visit to the zoo or the animals, while others may consider it just sort of fun to have. But anyway they may not share the deep feelings of the animals.
If I were in the same position as the animal in the zoo, my reaction would be very severe strongly against being photographed. No having peaceful surroundings to sleep, don’t you suffer r estless and fidgets. No doubt we do and so do the animals.
I think it necessary to ban tourists’ taking pictures with animals, making a comfortable environment for them to live and regarding them as our friends, so as to found harmonious relations with animals.
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
In junior high school, one of my classmates, Ethan, was addicted to TV. This boy simply knew everything about such pop shows as Who’s the Boss?
Then one day Ethan’s mother made brim an offer in order to draw him back to his school subjects. She promised that she would give him $200 if he could go a full month without watching any TV. None of us thought Ethan could do it, but he did quite well. His mom paid him $200. He went out and bought a TV, the biggest he could find.
In recent years, hundreds of schools have carried out experiments with paying kids with each for showing up or getting good grades. All school kids admire this trend. But it upsets adults. Teachers say that we are rewarding kids for doing what they should be doing of their own will. Psychologists warn that money can actually make kids perform worse by making the act of learning cheap. The debate has become a typical battle over why our kids are not learning at the rate they should he despite decades of reforms and budget increases.
[写作内容]
1.以约30词概括上文的主要内容。
2.以约120词对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的现象进行议论，内容包括：
(1)你对用金钱鼓励孩子学习的看法：
(2)你的父母（或其他亲人）是如何鼓励你学习的；
(3)你认为怎样才能更好地鼓励孩子学习
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
参考范文：
1
What should people really do encourage their kids to concentrate their time and energy on studying lessons and doing well? People’s opinions differ from each other about this problem.
Some schools, teachers and parents give their students or kids money as a stimulating means in order to encourage them to do what they should do effectively, this phenomenon is common in recent years and it is welcome by most of the young.
I don’t think it is an effective way, on the contrary it may lead to the opposite result.
My parents and family often tell me some encouraging stories in ancient or modern times such as Li Bai, Zhou Enlai and so on. Each time I make a little progress in my study, they always praise me with open arms, and whenever I am confronted with difficulties my family always stand my side. I feel comfortable and warm in my heart for what they do for me. I make up my mind that I’ll live up to my family and my homeland.
I think, as a student myself, school and parents should educate their kids through teaching them to study for their family and their motherland rather than giving them money to let them passively do something. Only by building up some noble and long-range aims can they study on their own initiative.
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文
When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents, he was very happy. He thought he would be able to go home every weekend. When he was told he would not, he started crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.
He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term. He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave. He was then taken to the dorm, where he saw other children happy. He tried as much as he could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home. He started feeling homesick (想家) and wanted to go homes as soon as possible.
He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food. He could not concentrate in the classroom. All he could think was being at home with his family. He had no mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents. He was angry and felt lonely. He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.
[写作内容]
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词讲述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的经历，内容包括：
⑴时间、地点和起因；
⑵想家给学习和生活带来的影响；
⑶你（或你朋友）是如何应对的。
[写作要求]
1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引
用原文中的句子。
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容何时，语句连贯。
参考范文：
The passage told us that a student, Sam was sent to a boarding school, in which he very missed his parents, so he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons.
In fact, in real life, everyone can have an experience of feeling homesick. I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents was busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city. Here, I studied for two years. Although my uncle and his family were kind to me, I still felt homesick. At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there. And, because different teachers ha ve different teaching methods, it was difficult for me to understand the lesson. Besides, I was new for the students there, I hardly had friends. I felt very lonely.
As days went on, I slowly adapted to the new environment. I actively communicated with my new students and made friends with them. My homesick gradually disappeared.
第二节读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank him for having a great influence on her life.
In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it. To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”
What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health.【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：
（1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；
（2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；
（3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。
参考范文：
The passage is mainly about a retired teacher in poor health received a thanking letter from one of his students, an accountant working at a medical center, to whom she attributed her success and expressed her gratitude.
What a touching story, which reminds me of my favorite teacher, Jeffrey, who sets a wonderful example for his students to follow through the rest of their lives. And for me, Jeffrey is always a role model to look up to and learn from, whose energetic commitment to work always earns him respect and praise both from his colleagues and students. I feel fortunate to be blessed with such an excellent instructor who didn’t give me up when I failed so many times in English test. Instead, he patiently cultivated my interest in English, gave me timely help with my study, and praised me for my small progress. Little by little, I felt increasingly confident in myself and showed more and more enthusiasm in English learning. At last, I made up my mind to be an English teacher like him.
In my eyes, a teacher should be the wind beneath the wings of students, helping them fly higher and faster. Rather than fill a pail, a teacher should light a fire, inspiring students to develop their mind, character and skills, and empowering them to take control of their lives. In one word, a teacher should be a role model, exerting a far-reaching influence on the development of students.
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广东省高考英语作文评分标准 1.基础写作 【评分说明】基础写作的评分建议按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该题的总得分。 2.读写任务 【评分说明】读写任务的评分建议采用综合法,即根据总体情况给分。概要和文章的分值分别为5分和20分。 读写任务的评分标准
初三物理电学综合试题及答案 一、填空题（每题2分，共32分） 1.电流在某段电路上所做的功，等于这段电路跟路中的以及的乘积，写成公式就是。 2.一个电熨斗，标有“220V 300W”，它的物理意义是。这个电熨斗正常工作4小时，消耗 电能千瓦时，合焦耳。 3.照明电路的电压是伏特。在照明电路里，某个电灯正常发光时，通过它的电流强度是0.22安培，此时，灯泡的电阻是欧姆。 4.一只标有“6V 3W”的小灯泡，接在4.5伏特的电源上，它的实际功率是瓦特。 5.滑动变阻器的原理，是靠改变电路中来改变，从而改变电路中的。 6.一个导体，电阻为20欧姆，接在某一电源上，通过的电量为18库仑，电流做功108焦耳。这电源的电压是伏特，通过导体电流强度为安培，这导体消耗的电功率为瓦特。
7.一节干电池电压是伏特，一节蓄电池电压是伏特，照明电路电压是伏特，对人 体安全的电压是。 8.磁场周围的磁感线都是从磁体的出来，回到磁体的。 9.在磁场中，小磁针北极所受磁场力的方向跟该点的磁场方向。 10.直线电流周围磁感线的方向跟方向有关，它们之间的关系可以用定则来判定。 11.电磁铁的优点是：它的有无可以由通断电流控制，它的可以由电流的强弱来控制，它的可以由变换电流方向来控制。 12.在丝绸和玻璃棒摩擦的过程中，有一部分从玻璃棒转移到丝绸上，摩擦起电的实质是。摩擦起电并没有。 13.电阻是导体的性质，我们用跟的比值表示导体的电阻，写成公式就是。 14.闭合电路的一部分导体，在磁场里做切割磁感线运动时，导体中就会产生电流，这种现象叫做。如果电路不闭合不会产生，只在导体两端产生。 15.家庭照明电路里的保险丝是由电阻率比较而熔点比较的铅锑合金做的。选用保险丝时，应使它的额定电流或电路最大的正常工作电流。 16.如图4-2所示，电源电压不变，滑动变阻器的滑片p向a端滑动时，安培表的读数，伏特表的读数；当滑片p向b端滑动时，伏特表的示数，安培表的示数
2016年广东漫画作文范文 家长对待孩子分数有讲究 应该讲，大多家长最高兴的事是孩子成绩好，最不高兴的事是孩子成绩差。孩子成绩好，家长喜笑颜开，全家开心，孩子成绩不好，家长眉头紧皱，全家笼罩着一层阴云。因此，从某种程度上说，孩子的成绩已牵动着千家万户的心弦，成为家庭和谐的晴雨表。 为了让孩子提高成绩，不少家长不惜花血本请名师，择名校，可是结果却常常事与愿违，没有功劳，只有苦劳和疲劳，花费了大量的人力、财力，换来的是家长与孩子的身心憔悴，家庭的幸福指数没有上升反而大幅下降。 一、用平常心对待孩子分数 家长要摆正心态。要以一颗平常心来对待孩子的分数。一个家庭把自己的幸福建立在孩子的成绩上是不正常的。家长要摆正期望的天平，胜败乃兵家常事，有的家长孩子考得好时就把孩子捧上天，孩子考得差时就把孩子踩在脚下，前后截然不同的态度会让孩子心理失衡。有的孩子成绩差，家长张口闭口就骂，不是骂“笨蛋”，就是咒将来干最下贱的活，孩子在高压力下学习，压力太大是魔鬼，会使孩子丧失对学习、生活的兴趣，严重损坏了孩子的身心健康。成绩好坏跟孩子的未来无关，成绩差照样能成才。在我们的周围，差生走上社会后前途并不差。爱迪生、爱因斯坦都曾是“差生”“问题儿童”，可是他们的成就举世瞩目。学会辩证分析问题。 二、用科学方法分析孩子分数 家长要掌握分析成绩的方法——看涨看跌抓趋势。 从单科来看，要把前后几次成绩纵向比较系统分析，还要与班级其他学生成绩横向比较，可以看出这门学科成绩的发展趋势上升、下降或升降振荡不定。还要找出本学科薄弱的知识点、技能点及薄弱章节。从整体来看，把多次总体成绩进行比较，就可以找出优势学科、弱势学科，可以制定保优强弱的策略，找到增长的路线，提升的空间。 当孩子的单科成绩下降幅度较大时，家长要适时与孩子沟通，找到外在原因与内在因素，激励孩子，而不是训斥孩子，防止孩子产生厌学情绪。 三、用正确态度对待孩子成绩 对于孩子的成绩，家长要刷新观念，实现由关注结果向关注过程转变 两个孩子，甲每天花一个小时复习英语，乙每天花30分钟复习，结果期末考试都考了100分。如果甲和乙都是初一新生刚接触英语，单从考试成绩上来看，甲和乙没有区别，但学习过程有很大的区别，乙的学习效率比甲高，看成绩还要看投入与回报的比率。甲每天复习一小时，集中复习，乙早、中、晚各花10分钟复习，英语这门学科用零碎时间分散复习效果更佳，英语是一门记忆性很强的语言学科，多次重复利于记忆。
2008年高考广东试卷英语作文及优秀学生作文4篇 （以下是作者在参加高考英语评卷时利用手机拍的，后来打印成文档，分享给大家。） （2008年广东省高考英语试卷）第二节读写任务(共1小题,满分25分) 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Hi, I am Mike. I just went through my first year of college. The toughest part on me at first was the general adjustment.1 went to a very small high school where my mom was a teacher and she did practically everything for me. But at the college I needed to know some basic life skills. such as balancing a check—book, laundry, and the things you have to be able to handle that I never thought of in the high school! It was really tough for me at first and I got badly homesick. Once that first semester was over and I got used to the college life, I loved it—good facilities, helpful instructors. and a good library. The S tudents’ Union organizes various parties every week. I also go to cinemas and concerts, and often spend Saturday nights in pubs and clubs. One thing I think is important is to get yourself active in things. I was on the dance team in college and met a ton of people that way ??? it was so much easier to make friends when you had a common ground. [写作内容] 学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“大学校园生活”讨论。听完Mike的发言之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“Preparing Myself for College Life”，内容要点包括： 1. 以约30个词概括Mike的发言要点； 2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你理想的大学生活，内容包括： (1) 对中学生活的感受； (2) 理想的大学生活； (3) 中学生活和大学生活的差别，以及你打算如何适应。 [写作要求] 1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的 1 Mike said that he was fond of college life after a period of tough adjustment. He found lif in college colourful and took part in various activities, throuth which he made many friends. Mike’s speech reminds me of my life as a high school student. During those three years, I have made lots of improvement both physically and mentally with my teachers and fellow students. Besides, the tough and interesting experience gradually shaped my value towards life and world. So I am convinced that I have been well prepared for college life. As a delight student, I have been dreaming of becoming a college student for years. In my ideal university, not only can I gain ample scientific knowledge but I can
2020广东高考优秀作文出炉：作文总体成绩有提 高 近日,网传“高考满分作文”感动了不少网友,但最后竟发现是老师之作。别急!广东2016高考优秀作文昨日终于出炉,广东省教育考试院昨日公布了8篇广东省2016年高考优秀作文,其中议论文占6篇。考试院并未透露今年语文作文的平均分,但有评卷组老师在评卷尚未结束时透露,今年作文总体成绩有所提高,优秀作文数量和去年差不多。 考生普遍缺乏高层面思考 今年是广东使用全国卷的第一年,早在未评卷之前,就有专家表示语文作文“考生发挥空间大”、“考生不容易跑题”,同时也有人提出“要出彩不容易”。广东省高考语文评卷组副组长、华南师范大学文学院副院长李金涛教授认为,此次高考题目贴近现实,角度多样层次丰富,考生发挥空间大,可以结合自己的现实生活来评述。中山大学中文系教授、博导,广东省作家协会副主席谢有顺则表示,作文题不太好写,指向性很明确。要独辟蹊径,要出彩,不容易。 语文科评卷组组长、华南师范大学陈少华教授分析,从考生的答卷情况来看,总体上较好,但也反映了考生一些普遍性的问题,例如对名句意义的理解有所欠缺,对作品深层次意蕴的把握有所欠缺,对漫画寓意的把握有所欠缺,仍停留在表层的思考,缺少社会学、哲学、文化学等高层面的思考。 多取材于生活议论文最多 记者留意到,考试院公布的8篇优秀作文中,有6篇是较典型的议论文,一篇议论散文,一篇书信。考生大都从分数、家庭教育、进步与退步等角度出发,取材于自己熟悉的生活,紧密联系实际,不空谈大道理。
在专家点评中,部分专家也指出了部分优秀作文的瑕疵,比如行文不够简洁、条理性不够强、例子略显单薄等问题。比如,华南师范大 学文学院张玉金教授就指出,优秀作文《进步与退步》第四段所举的 陈忠实、王阳明、杨绛的例子不太恰当,称人生遇到挫折,遭遇厄运, 不等于退步。 广东省2016年普通高考部分优秀作文 巴掌之吻教育之痛 一张考卷,几分浮动,换得巴掌与吻。是耶?非耶?报以无奈苦笑。 仅从表面上看,母亲对从满分降为98分的退步的孩子求全责备, 而对虽然一开始不及格、但后来进步的孩子不吝爱吻,是不是仅说明 这位母亲鼓励进步之可取与苛责退步之不妥呢?并非如此,拨开表面 的巴掌与吻之别,在这幅漫画中,我们应看到仅仅是分数上的一点变化,都足以使家长做出截然不同的反应,其背后折射出的无数个家庭 相似的情景,不免令人深思。 紧紧盯着分数,视分数进与退为奖罚标准,与其产生的求全责备之态,并非是个别家长所为。满分得吻、98分得巴掌这一荒谬现象,正 是被诟病许久的唯分数论的体现,当家长并不在乎分数背后反映的知 识掌握情况,指导学习作用时,也就不再在意“98分已经很接近满分”这一事实,而是只看见比上次退步了2分的情况,辨不清“无论55分 还是61分都说明孩子学习状况不佳”,而只关注比上次进步了6分。在啼笑皆非之余,我们不免要发出这样的疑问:这样粗暴的分数对待, 对分数的执着,到底因何而来? 固然,激烈的竞争环境与中国向来重视考试的传统都在一定程度 上导致了对考试分数的普遍关注,但有没有更深层、更本质的原因呢?将分数进退当作唯一依据的背后,不正是我们缺乏对孩子成长客观全 面的评判标准、对除学习外其他方面忽视遗忘吗?古代便有“为己之学”,以修养完满人格而非取得外界认可的官位为目标,而今,社会也 更需要综合素质优秀、人格健全的人才,而非巴掌与吻滋养出的分数 型人才。君不见今年校园投毒案中,犯罪的青年虽分数耀眼,但人格
2012广东高考作文精选点评（6篇） 来源：三人行 第一篇：生逢其时 我想起《双城记》中开篇时的那句话，这是一个最繁华的时代，这是一个最萧条的时代，我们永远在时代的夹缝里徘徊、挣扎、踌躇独行，天上地下人间更仿得找不到一个立足之地。而我却以为，不论生活在那个时代，我们都该怀着宽恕与爱，去面对这个世界、去活着。 生活在十九世纪的狄更斯，彼时改革初行社会动荡，英国贵族与底层贫民矛盾激化，资产阶级戴着虚伪的面纱招摇过市，那算不上一个好的时代，换句话说，那并非一个适合文艺发展的时代。可是生活在那个时代的狄更斯并没有纵情歌酒怀着绝望的心情自暴自弃，也没有愤懑偏激、用一支笔写作生命的孤注一掷，相反他给当时的英国开出的一剂良方是宽恕与爱。他书写《双城记》、《雾都孤儿》，他写的不是革命时史，而是捕捉了那个时代的氛围，用一个故事告诉人们仇仇相报终无已时，流血只能造成更多的流血，只有宽恕能拯救这个世界，仁慈如狄更斯看似最不适合那个阴暗的时代的，可是他能勇敢地直面它，用自己的力量去感化那个社会，在最不适合的时期里做出了最合适的壮举。 而在现代，二十一世纪的伊拉克，我仿佛又看到了这种力量——那个生活在巴格达的八岁少年卡马尔。哈希姆。他行走在哀鸿遍野、民不聊生的那片土地，有这么一句诗歌形容这个时代的中东，“山坡上的灵车来来往往，日以夜继。”没有少年的玩乐，没有吃得饱的热饭，只有硝烟与战火，明灭不熄，多少人在贫民窟、难民营里祈祷，来生不要生在这里，可是卡马尔并没有，他拿着相机记录伊拉克的点点滴滴，每一个温情的画面：有老人坐在书店的门口阅读，太阳从棕榈树后徐徐升起，咖啡馆的门外摆着一杯免费饮料。这算是一个糟糕的时代，这是一个没有任何孩子愿意生活的时代，然而卡马尔用自己的微薄的力量去记录那些爱与温暖，鼓励每一个伊拉克人勇敢地、努力地活下去，这是在最不适合的时期里最合适的救赎。 我们无法选择自己的生卒，然而又有多少人终生困于自己的生不逢时而最终郁郁而终。如那个错生在帝王家的亡国诗人李煜，如那个最忧愤了一生最终病死的贾谊。倘若他们能正视自己的年代，能用自己的力量去改变一些什么，那么历史会否有所不同？ 不论我们生在繁华的时代，抑或萧条的岁月，都应当拿出自己的力量。那不是残忍的力量，不是无情的力量，它或许微弱并伴随苦难，却能在深渊中带来光明，在坚韧中捍卫我们的爱——这便是生逢其时的全部诠释。 【评语】文章一开头便点明“个人”与“时代”有着不可分割的关系以及“个人”对“时代”、“世界”所应该采取的人生态度，这种思路和观点显然是考生在阅读、理解原材料基础之上的进一步“思考”。接着，文章采用了两个例证来说明自己的观点。分别生活在19世纪的狄更斯和21世纪的伊拉克少年摄影者，他们一个用文学，一个用相机，来实现“个人”对于“时代”的价值：在“阴暗的时代”，狄更斯作品里的“宽恕”、“仁慈”独有意义，在“哀鸿遍野、民不聊生”的战乱时代，卡马尔相机里“温情的画面”独有价值。这两个例证，都较为充分、深刻、细致地阐释了人们在每一个时期都可以过“有用的生活”的基本观点。最后两个自然段，作者否定了“生不逢时”的人生观，并且指出，既然“我们无法选择自己的生卒”，那么，在任何时代，“拿出自己的力量”，都可以说是“生逢其时”，从而强化了文章的主要观点。可以看出，这篇文章自始至终都围绕了“人们在每一个时期都可以过有用的生活”的主题，中心突出，观点鲜明，立意深刻，论证充分，结构严谨，是一篇较好的考场作文。 但这篇文章有几处语病和标点符号的错误，有些知识陈述也可以更精准严谨。 （华南师范大学文学院教授吴敏）
广东高考英语作文素材题型 I like to see movie so much, before I was in middle school, science fiction movie is my favorite movie, like Harry Potter, for which I read the books for not only one time. But as I grow up, I start to watch other types of movie, like horror movie. I was afraid of watching horror movie before, because I would think about the horrible plots at night, even in my dreams, I would dream about it. One day, my friends asked me to watch horror movie with them, then I realized it was so exciting, the unknown plot caught my eyes. Sometimes I kept my eyes closed because of the scaring faces. But I loved this feeling. Since then, I fall in love with horror movie, I become more and more brave. Now watching horror movie has become an interesting activity with my friends. 我很喜欢看电影,在我上中学的时候,科幻电影是我最喜欢的电影,像《哈利波特》,我读了不仅一次这本书。但是当我长大了,我开始看其他类型的电影,喜欢恐怖电影。我以前害怕看恐怖电影,因为我晚上会想起那可怕的情节,甚至在我的梦里,我会梦到它。一天,我的朋友叫我去看恐怖电影,然后我发现它是如此令人兴奋,未知的情节吸引了我的眼睛。有时我闭上我的眼睛,因为里面有吓人的脸庞。但是我喜欢这种感觉。从那时起,我就爱上了恐怖电影,我变得越来越勇敢。现在，和朋友们看恐怖电影已经成为一项有趣的活动。 When people start to set the goal, they will think about the result immediately, of course they want to get the best result. If people can predict the result, most of them will give up by knowing the unsuccessful ending. It seems that if the result is bad, what people work for is meaningless. Well, in my opinion, the process of fighting for the goal is much more important than the result. When we fight for our goal, we will do our best and try to improve ourselves, even we fail in the end, but when we look back at the beginning, we can find that we are no longer the childish ones, we have grown up and become mature. What’s more, on the process of fighting, we get close to success, as the saying that fail is the mother of success. So don’t treat the result so serious, just enjoy the process. 当人们开始定目标，他们会立刻想到结果，当然他们想要得到最好的结果。如果人们能够预知结果，他们大部分人会因为知道失败的结果而不去尝试。似乎如果结果是坏的，人们所做的努力就会没有意义。然而，在我看来，为目标而奋斗的过程比结果重要得多。
2020广东高考语文作文_预测话题作 文五篇 当一个人真正觉悟的一刻，他放弃追寻外在世界的财富，而开始追寻他內心世界的真正财富。今天给大家分享一下有关于追求的话题作文，让我们一起来欣赏一下吧! 第1篇：成功的追求 如果，将成功放在屋檐上，就是雨滴将岩石滴穿的那一刻;如果，将成功放在沙漠里，就是仙人掌顽强生长起来的那一瞬间;如果，把成功放在我们身上，那么，它的本意会是什么呢? 一朵成功开放的花朵，是多么娇艳。在它成功开放的那一刻前，所有人都不知道，它当初是个苍芽时就已饱尝风雨了。也许，它是生长在黄沙漫天的环境里;也许，它是生活在干燥缺水的日子里。可是，这些都难不倒它。它，有时可能会泪流满面;它，可能会在某一瞬间想到过死。但是，它挺住了，它战胜了一切困难，为这个世界添上了一丝光彩。这种成功，是那么地辉煌，有意义。这绝对不是温室里的花朵。
如果，一块尖锐的石头也想像鹅卵石般平滑，那么，它必须经受海浪一次又一次地冲刷，也许，这可能是五年、十年，甚至一百年。成功，就如这石头一般，想要亮出来就必须经受得住失败的冲刷。失败一次，离成功也就近了一步;磨难一次，对成功的意义也就加深了一次。如果人生是一次漂流，受挫与磨难就是到达成功的彼岸的指示牌。勇敢地走过去，就有可能到达成功的彼岸;反之，躲得远远的，就是远离成功，逐渐被卷入失败的旋涡。( 文武文学ww-mould ) 没有人想要重演守株待免的故事。想要完整的成功往往需要一些埋头苦干的傻气才可以，不是投机取巧而来的。如果是不费吹灰之力而得到的成功，我想是不够完整的。我坚信，只有积极进取、持之以恒的人，跌倒而再度站起来的人，就一定可以成功。 成功看起来无边无际、无止无境。但它的长远则在于跋涉与追求、探索。如果具备了这三种物质，离成功的梦想还会遥远吗? --600字 第2篇：追求卓越，成功就会在不经意间看上你——读《三傻大闹宝莱坞》有感
湖南高考零分作文：踮起脚尖 湖南高考零分作文：踮起脚尖 当我翻开试卷的最后一页，看到这个令我十分震惊的作文题目时，我不由得发出感慨--这分明就是典型的带有歧视性质的命题。 我身高一米五八，家里兄弟有仨。农村户口，至今女友没有。 就在出门临行之前，我还做过几万次的推测与估计，题目千万不能触碰到我的精神的底线，可惜悲惨的事情最后还是发生了，而且还发生得让我几乎措手不及--而我的弟弟，他有着一米七七的身段，这个题目对于他来说应该会十分的得心应手。很多时候我都做过许多莫名其妙的猜测，我的父亲也有一米七以上的身高，而为什么偏偏我却长得如此矮小？唯一的可能性便是我或许根本不是我父亲的亲生儿子。我想也许是因为我的母亲思想过于前卫，在一个漆黑的夜晚与一个素不相识的男人发生了一夜情的错误举动，最后怀上了我。或许这个陌生男人就是出这个题目的老师，他出这个题目的原因在于他是想鼓励我积极向上，想让我踮起脚尖，不低人一等。
好了，言归正传，开始答题。 踮起脚尖，顾名思义就是要以非正常的眼光去看待正常的问题。古语云，站得更高，看得更远。王之焕便有着“欲穷千里目，更上一层楼”的经典名句。然而如今我们站在这个钢筋混凝土所堆砌而成的城市中，就算我踮起了脚尖伸长了脖子，也无法将这个现代化的水泥雕塑琢磨通透。我是个十足的现实悲观主义者，我一想到如果考不上大学我肯定就会下海到广东打工，在寻找工作的途中肯定会被人以“身高不足”的原因所拒绝接受，找不到工作我就一定会挨饿受冻，人一饿起来肯定就会什么事情都去做，也许我更会因此走上犯罪道路。电影里很多灭绝人性的匪徒也就似乎跟我的外表差不多--不高的个子，一副凶神恶煞的嘴脸，手上脚上的汗毛长得像一只猩猩，杀起人来丝毫不会手软。我也不可能找到女朋友--谁也不会找一个这么丑陋且心狠手辣的男人做她的男朋友或是老公。 我环顾四周低头写着作文的各位考友，他们竟然各自面带微笑。最后，我终于明白了，他们分明都是在写我。写我不是我的父亲的亲生儿子，写我今后走上匪徒生涯的道路的故事。 去年我在网上看过这样一张照片。照片上是一
高考作文万能模板：图表标作文 As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/picture，____ has been on rise/ decrease，significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart，it goes without saying that _____. There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____. In one hand，____.In the other hand，_____ is due to the fact that ______.In addition，______ is responsible for _____. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______.But itis generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned，I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 书信作文模板 Your addressMonth，Date，yearReceiver's addressDear …， I am extremely pleased to hear from you. And I would like to write a letter to tell you that_____. …… I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/I am looking f0rward to your replies at your earliest convenience. Best regards for your health and success. Sincerely yours 话题作文 Nowadays，there are more and more __ _ in __ _. It is estimated that ___. Why have there been so many ____? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is ______. Besides，_____. The third one is _____. To sum up，the main cause of it is due to _____. It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing，_____. For another thing，_____. All these measures will certainly reduce the number of _____. 对比观点作文 (1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为 2. 另一些人认为 3. 我的看法 The topic of ①------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③------理由二). Moreover, ④-----(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,--- ----(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥--------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦--------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧--------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列1） 第一讲记叙文：如何写人 一、写作指导 高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题： 1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。 3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。 4．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。 二、常用词语 外貌特征： beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong, tall，thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc. 性格特点： absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talk ative，warm-hearted，wise，etc. 出生年龄： a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , d uring his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc. 兴趣爱好： be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc. 教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test，a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ，go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc. 经历事迹： become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a go od way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to do
2016年广东高考8篇优秀作文及点评 （来源：广东省教育考试院） 勿以点点沉浮论英雄 “爱其子，择师而教之。”今人之于古人，更为注重孩子的教育。然而，不少父母把重视化为对于点点成绩的纠结，平日里的“天子骄子”因点点失误而被“由爱转恨”者有之，一直的“差生”因点点进步而顿被“捧在手心”者亦有之。父母的态度因一点点分数改变而“一百八十度”大转弯，这是对待成绩过于主观、生硬的行为。 分数的沉浮本就有多重原因，孩子的掌握、思维方式、老师出题的难度，甚至于个人的运气皆可改变成绩的高低。仅以“这次比上次高了几分”来界定孩子是否认真学习是不客观的、表面的。高分学生的父母看不到孩子一直以来的勤奋与不缀，低分学生的父母不能认识到孩子的能力与水平。单次成绩的沉浮即界定英雄、评定父母心中的“宝”，难以认识到孩子的水平，终会致使孩子深陷那红色的分数中，不清醒且不理智。 《礼记》有言“父之爱子，乃生而行之乎。”父母的爱本是无条件，而现今因分数一点点退步或增加均可改变父母的爱，则此爱易流于表面而不触其心。孩子退步了两分即挨了巴掌，或许便是错罚了试题变难仍是班级第一的他。孩子学习如同苦行僧在路上踱步前进，这一路上，父母的关爱与理解是如“春风潜入夜，润物细无声”般让前路阳光明媚。而若父母的爱变得“有偿”，须用分数进步来赢得，只会让孩子战战棘棘，时刻背负“优生的包袱”或者“差生的重担”。 古人云，“爱其子，则为计之深远。”父母看待孩子的眼光不应局限于那小小的分数。考试是对孩子学习的评估、却并非是对孩子的评估。父母看待孩子分数的眼光也不应局限于一隅，而应看到整体的、比较的，这样才能知道成绩背后那点点浮沉的真正意义。
高考在即，语法知识基本形成体系、完形/阅读也练得接近炉火纯青的地步了(虽然还是不能得满分)，现在看看，最能提分的当属作文了。和大家分享高考英语写作的万能模板，同学们再也不用担心英语写作时无构思、无句型、无词汇的尴尬“三无”局面了! 一. 对比观点题型(1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为...... 2. 另一些人认为...... 3. 我的看法...... The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there
2020广东高考语文作文_关于老师的作文五篇您的工作在今朝，却建设着祖国的明天;您的教学在课堂，成就却是在祖国的四面八方。今天小编给大家分享一下有关于教师的高中优秀作文，让我们一起来欣赏一下吧! 三尺讲台三寸舌三寸笔三千桃李，十年树木十载风十载雨十万栋梁。——题记 秋风又起了，树叶又黄了，九月来了，又一年的教师节来临了。沐浴着这瑟瑟秋风，抚摸着这一片片落叶，我想起了我的启蒙老师——杨老师，他现在怎么样，身体还好吗? 我离开他，来到这所学校的时候，还没有和他道别，还没有和他说过一句“谢谢”呢。 我已忘记了第一次见他是什么场景，我只依稀记得那时他已年过半百，满头白发，那 是粉笔灰沾染上去的吗?一年级，我还只是个顽皮的孩童，根本不爱学习，更是不爱这个 看起来很和蔼的老人，他却似乎非常喜爱我，常常爱怜的抚摸着我的头说：“这道算术题 会做了吗?”我已忘记我是怎样应付似地回答他的了，只记得他听见我的回答后满意的走了，然后我便在他身后做各种各样的鬼脸，他似乎没发觉，或者发觉了也不恼。 他一直教我的数学，我本不爱数学，只觉得那十个数字一会儿组成那个算式，一会儿组成这个算式，十分枯燥无味。但在他的教导下，我的数学成绩一直名列前茅，直到四年级，我的对手出现了。那是一个文静的女孩子，笑起来甜甜的，很可爱。我却一直对这种女孩子很不屑，认为她们一点都不活泼，整天病恹恹的，没有一点生气，但我似乎小看她了。她一出现，就把我从全班第一的位置给挤下去了，而且那个和蔼的老人还当众宣布我 从此不再是数学课代表，这个职务由她接任。也许是小孩子特有的心理，我开始有意的疏远那个我越来越喜欢的和蔼老人，同时也疏远了我越来越喜欢的数学。 那天下午，数学测试卷发下来，我整整差那个文静女孩二十分!周围，同学们有的在 祝贺那个女孩取得了第一名的好成绩，有的在议论自己的成绩，我却蜷缩在我自己的支离 破碎的世界里，与满教室的喧嚣隔绝开来。这时，老人进来了，看了我一眼，想说什么却 又没有说，便开始上课了。放学了，同学们陆陆续续的离开了，只有值日生在认认真真的扫地，扫把扬起满教室的灰尘，把整个天空都变的昏黄昏黄的。不知道是什么时候，老人进来了，我赶忙把头扭向一边。“怎么了?这段时间好像很不开心，也不爱学习了。”老人抚摸着我的头，“是因为那个新同学抢了你的位置吗?”我再次听到他那么和蔼的跟我说话，鼻子一酸，眼泪就流出来。“我知道你是一个要强的孩子，突然被别人超过了，心里是不好受，但是你就是选择逃避吗?逃避能解决问题吗?你这样消极的堕落下去，你能回到你的第 一名的位置吗?你不能，你只会越来越差，离第一名越来越远。你只有重振信心，努力学 习才能够回到当初啊!我选择她做数学课代表，是因为她的确比你强，学习成绩的确比你好，但是我还是要向你道歉，我很抱歉这样做伤害了你的自尊——”“老师，对不起!”我大 声的哭喊出来。老师轻轻的拍着我的头：“不哭了，你没有对不起我，要好好学习，知道