2019高考英语写作高分点拨70个例子高分词替换低分词1. 穷：poor
替换词：needy / impoverished / poverty-stricken
2. 幸福：happiness
替换词：cheerfulness / well-being
3.青少年：young people
替换词：youngsters / youths / adolescents
4.优点：advantage
替换词：merits / superiority / virtue
5.努力：struggle for
替换词：aspire after/strive for/spare no efforts for
6.从事：embark on / tap / set about / go in for
7.影响：influence 替换词：impact
8.危险：danger 替换词：perils / hazard
9.污染：pollution 替换词：contamination.
10. 严重的：serious 替换词：severe
11. special 替换词：distinct
12.want 替换词：desire
13.like 替换词：be fond of / be engaged in
14.in fact 替换词：as a matter of fact
15.can 替换词：enable
16. true 替换词：the case
eg. I dont think it is the case （ture）
17.take the place of 替换词：supplantinstead other than（这个用的时候注意语法结构）
18.消极的，不良的：bad
替换词：detrimental / undesirable
19.健康的: healthy
替换词：robust / sound / wholesome
20.惊人的：surprising
替换词：amazing / extraordinary / miraculous
21.有活力的：energetic
替换词：dynamic / vigorous / animated
22.明显的：obvious
替换词：apparent / evident / manifest
23.提高，加强：improve
替换词：promote / strengthen /optimize
24.引起：cause
替换词：trigger / endanger
25.解决：solve
替换词：resolve / address / tackle / cope with
26. 拆除：destroy
替换词：tear down / knock down / eradicate
27.培养: develop
替换词：cultivate / foster / nurture
28.激发，鼓励：encourage
替换词：motivate / stimulate /spur
29.good 指人时可以用以下形容词代替
kind/ honest/ generous / selfless/ brave / warmhearted / sympathetic / honorable / humorous/ smart / gentle
30.good 指事物或事情时可以用以下形容词代替
great / fantastic / splendid / marvelous / excellent /wonderful / meaningful / enjoyable
31. surprising 替换词：amazing
32.rich 替换词：richwealthy
33.for example 替换词：for instance
34. sometimes /once in while
替换词：occasionally
35.because of 替换词：due to
36. stand up 替换词：get to one’s feet
37. under 替换词：beneath
38. finish 替换词：accomplish
39. finally 替换词：eventually
40. hard 替换词：challenging
41. pay attention to
替换词：attach importance to
42. happy 替换词：delighted
43.quick 替换词：prompt / immediate
44. great，incredible 替换词：marvelous
45. want 替换词：tend
46. usually 替换词：more often than not
47. tired 替换词：exhausted
48. cute，attractive 替换词：charming
49. achieveful 替换词：fulfill
achievement 替换词：filment
50. arrive at 替换词：set foot on
51. promote 替换词：enrich
52. build up 替换词：strengthen
53.be fond of
替换词：be addicted to / be devoted to
54. have a good time 替换词：have a ball
55. discover 替换词：come to light
56.wanttodo sth / wish for eg I want to see you very much I anm long to see you
替换词：be long for sth / be long to do sth
