本课要点：
1.雅思作文考题A/G类
2.雅思作文评分四大类和标准
3. 连词分析: 六大类（举例/引用，递进，类比，对比转折，原因结果目的，总结）
一、雅思作文考题A/G类：
academic for education and general training for immigration；题型区别（GRAPH VS. LETTER）
写作TASK 1 (20min, 150 words): graph(bar, pie, line), table, and diagram 和TASK
2 (40 min, 250 words): essay on contemporary issue (四类：agree or disagree,
advantage or disadvantage, opinion, discuss and give opinion).
二、评分标准：
1) Task achievement:辨别、说明、报道问题中的关键信息
注意：文章结构的完整性：头，BODY，尾；每段有点出TOPIC SENTENCE.
2）Coherence and cohesion: 观点组织连贯性，信息衔接性
注意：组织文章紧凑，无跳跃感，有逻辑性，流畅自然。
3）Lexical Resource: 词汇多样性，准确、恰当, FORMAL
注意：整篇文章不能重复地用同一个词。否则，（单调，空洞，无内涵）。比如国外文
科大学生写论文，是怎么写的--找同义词或相同意思的短语或语句来替换，尽量
不重复用同一个词。
举例（垃圾，原因，重要的，解决，培养，认为，优势，导致，总结，而且等多样化表达）
4）Grammatical Range and Accuracy:语法结构多样、准确、恰当。NO RUN- ON SENTENCE! NO FRAGMENTS!
注意：总体上讲，句子干练，变化要多，不重复使用同样的句型（比如用些被动语态，
用多种从句，和现在分词/介词引导的分句等。
举例：她在大学学习环境工程学。她想要去科学院工作。她期望今后能在污染控制上取得成就。
EX1. With her majoring/specializing in…, she wants to work for … , hoping … in future.
EX2. Studying …., she wants to …., in order to ….
学生自我介绍：
三、作文评分5-6
●5分标准：
1）基本或部分回应题目要求，有主要观点/立场但发展不清晰，论证不够，缺少结
论。
2）信息有组织，但缺少总体连续性
3）词汇有限，只是在最低层面上满足题目
4）拼写和语法有明显错误，导致某些阅读困难
●6分标准：
1）回应题目要求，能说明核心信息，但细节不够相关或不适合。
2）信息组织连贯，有连续性，指代可能不太清晰。
3）词汇使用范围恰当，拼写和构词有错，但不影响交流。
4）句型能混搭，语法有些错误，但不影响交流。
●健康类范文举例(6分)：
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●IELTS Agree or Disagree Essays
●“Prevention is better than cure” Out of a country’s health budget, a large
proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
●评语：
●+TASK ACHIEVEMENT
not fully able to achieve the task，没有明确AGREE OR NOT
+LEXICAL RESOURCE
Vocabulary is average. 语法和构句出现多次明显错误
+COHERENCE AND COHESION（unity）
quite organized，even though some irrelevant examples in the 3rd paragraph were used.
●+GRAMMATICAL RANGE AND ACCURACY
PERSONAL ADVICE:
+ "healthy experts" and "health experts" are completely different.
> "healthy experts" refers to professionals in any occupation who are physically healthy.
+ "It is reported that ... wrote ... that" > it sounds very redundant.
> Next, your introduction is quite vague since it doesn't clearly show your stance whether you agree or disagree with the topic. You only showed you agreed with the health experts.
+ Plural: "handle public health problem" -> "handle public health problems"
+ Incomplete "the more money been put in" (where is the verb? which tense is it?) + Incomplete sentence "Take smoking controlling in China for example"
> Right: Let's take smoking control programs in China as an example (not for example)
+ "According to the report, there are about 1.2 million of people died of lung cancer ..."
> "the report"??? which report?
+ Propaganda is used for political issues.
+ You could lose marks for this: "It isn’t unusual" -> "It is not unusual"
+ "the packing of cigarette" is wrong. Examples of correct usage include: > "the packaging of cigarette" ，> "Cigarette pack"
+ "treatment" is countable -> "treatments"
+ "the bad situation happens": which situation? did you mention it earlier in the essay? why are you using "the" there?
+ You definitely have to provide a conclusion for your essay which sums up everything you said above and re-instate your opinion.
