高中英语作文专题——议论文

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【佳篇品读】 Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether middle school students should make friends on line. Different people have different opinions. Some people say making friends on line is their favorite. They think that the Internet helps them make more friends. And chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions. Besides they may even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think students should not make friends on line. They say making friends on line is a waste of time. And they should spend time more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
过渡句
① However, disadvantages are also obvious. (过渡句) ② on the contrary,正相反 ③ what’s more, 而且 ④ most importantly, 最重要的是 ⑤ on the one hand, ... on the other hand, ...一方面,另一方面 ⑥Every coin has two sides.
第四段:得出结论,画龙点睛,结束全文(表明自己观点)
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题) Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分 歧) 第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点 ) Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...( 列出 2~3个赞成的理由) 第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观 点) Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由) 第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
People, however, differ in their opinion on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二. In their point of view, on (the) one hand,理由一. On the other hand, 理由二. Therefore, there is no doubt that 观点二. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that 观点一或二. It is not only because …, but also because …./ The more …, the more …./Only by doing…can …
表原因:because、 as、since、because of、 now that、thanks to、due to、owing to、as a result of 表结果:therefore、thus、as a result、so 表结论:in a word、in brief、in general、in short、in conclusion、on the whole、to sum up、all in all 表解释:That is (to say)、namely、in other words
认真审题,把握题材
审题包括:
一审体裁(议论文记叙文说明文应用文) 二审格式(书信通知演讲稿) 三审人称(根据题目需要对人称进行合理 的选择定位) 四审时态(主要使用什么时态)
紧扣主题,组织要点
观点对比类书面表达其要点似乎已被 出题者定位好了。但仍要逐个地,完 整无缺的把内容要点用英语短语或词 组列出来,并根据需要按顺序安排好。
高三英语作文专题
——议论文
正反观点式
阐述主题式 解决方法式 说明利弊式
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五.实战演练
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇 关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自 己的看法。
赞成的理由 1. 广交朋友; 2. 可自由表达思想; 3. 利于外语学习。 反对的理由 1. 浪费时间; 2. 影响学习; 3. 可能上当受骗。 你的看法 „„
注意:1. 文章必须包括表格中的全部内容。 2. 参考词汇: 网络朋友online friend(s); 上当受骗to be cheated
二.写作模板
The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say观点一is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that观点一is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支 持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥-----------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由 三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我 的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
三.基础句型
开头句
① Nowadays,…plays an increasingly important role in our daily life. ②Recently there is a heated/hot discussion about... ③When asked about…,different people will hold different opinions. ④People hold/have various opinions/views on...
遣词造句,初步成文
在题材明确,信息全面,要点清晰的 基础上,要根据要点和重点词汇的句 法功能和语法规则,按照提示遣词造 句,然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一 致,时态呼应,脉络分明,合乎逻辑, 内容完整的短文。
通读审核,查漏补缺
定稿前认真检查,仔细核对,及时 修改,(内容要点是否遗漏,字母 大小写是否正确,单词拼写是否有 误,习惯用语搭配是否恰当,时态 是否呼应,主谓是否一致,是否有 中式英语出现等)力争使全文信息 完整,结构合理,语句表达准确。
【模板展示】 Recently our class had a heated discussion over whether (探讨的问题)or not. Different people have different opinions. Some people say yes. They think that (支持的理由一). And (支 持的理由二). Besides (支持的理由三,此 点略低于前两个). Others, however, think students should not. They say (反对的理由一). And (反对的理 由二). In addition(以别于前面的Besides), (反 对的理由三). It is my opinion that (自己的观点)students should place their study, health and safety before other things. (理由一至二).
正反观点式议论文
一. 写作步骤 :
从正反两个方面来论证某一观点,时态一般用一般现在时。 通常分为四个步骤来写: 第一段:文章开头,开门见山,引入话题(提出总论点)
第二段:阐述提纲中列举的第一种看法,给出理由或者举 例说明:主题句+理由 第三段:阐述提纲中列举的第二种看法,给出理由或者举 例说明:主题句+理由
结尾句
① in my opinion/in my view/as far as I am concerned /personally ② we should pay attention to... ③Therefore,I am fully convinced that...我深信 ④Only in this way can we…… ⑤ We should……,which, of course, will benefit ……
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四.衔接词
表列举:first(ly), second(ly), third(ly), last(ly); in the first/second/third place; Above all、first of all 表举例:for example, for instance, such as. 表补充:besides、in addition、moreover、what’s more、furthermore 表转折让步:but、however、nevertheless、yet、 in spite of、despite、though、although、even though、even if 表对比:on the one hand…on the other hand; For one thing…for another…
There is a widespread concern over the issue that -----------------(主题). But the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that 观点一. In their opinion there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, 理由一. Furthermore/In the second place,理由二. So it goes without saying that 观点一.