欢迎信
一、审题
“四个审”：体裁、时态、人称、内容
二、写作要点
分段：表示欢迎、提示要点、结尾
三、常用表达
（自行总结）
四、写作
【作文题1】
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华，得知美国网友Chris，计划今年七月到你校参加关于中国传统文化的交流会，请根据以下提示给他写封邮件。
1.表示欢迎。
2.介绍在交流会中汇谈到的内容：毛笔，京剧在中国文化中的作用及影响。
3.询问对方的其他需求。
参考词汇：交流会Communication meeting 毛笔The writing brush 京剧Peking opera
【范文】
Dear Chris，
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Students' Union. Glad to learn that you are coming to my school to attend a communication meeting about traditional chinese culture in July. Words fail to express my welcome to you!
As for the content of the communication meeting, there are two aspects that I can't wait to share with you. First, the writing brush has a long history in China. It represents one of the four treasures of study, which also include paper ink and ink stone. Without the writing brush, Chinese paintings and calligraphy could not have achieved such distinct features and enjoyed such great success around the world. Second，Peking opera is a national treasure with a history of more than two hundred years. Nowadays, Peking opera has become more and more popular with people all over the world，which makes an excellent contribution to cultural exchange between China and the West.
By the way, do you need any other help? If there is any demand/ requirement, don't hesitate to tell me. I'm looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
【作文题2】
假设你是高三一班的班长李华，得知美国朋友Chris将在下个学期作为交流生到你们班来学习交流，请根据以下提示，给他写封邮件。
1.表示欢迎。
2.介绍本班情况与本地生活相关的信息，如饮食气候等。
3.希望Chris做哪些事情，以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。
【范文】
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Hua, Monitor of Class One, Grade Twelve. I am more than glad to know that you're coming to be with us as an exchange student this coming
term/semester. In fact, all my classmates are kind and look forward to your coming. And all of us are willing to accept your as one of us.
Besides, I hope that you will have no difficulty adapting to the food and weather here. It is generally not too hot in summer here and we have relatively warmer winter, compared to that in America. We have rice as our main food, which I hope you'll like.
Indeed we feel excited about having you as our new classmate. For one thing we can have a better knowledge of American culture and social customs with your help. In addition we view this as a good chance for us to improve our English.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
高考作文满分练—求助信 ◆题型解读： 在求助信中应开门见山，直截了当地把你遇到的难题或者困惑告诉对方，并向对方求助。应注意：（1）向别人征求意见，态度一定要诚恳，语气委婉； （2）把握时态：应用一般现在时表明目前自己存在的困难，用一般将来时描述自己得到帮助后的进步。 ◆注意：作文的主体时态：一般现在时为主，一般将来时偶尔穿插。
◆满分模板： ◆Dear __________(写信对象), My name is __________; I’m writing to ask whether you could do me a favour. I have had much difficulty/trouble in ___________(交代自己面临的困难). Besides, I’m very upset that ___________（提出令自己苦恼的问题）. What’s more, I don’t know ___________（进一步说明自己的困境）I’m wondering if you could be so kind as to _________ so that ____________（再次请求对方的帮助）. I’d appreciate it if you could lend me a hand. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua ◆优秀作文欣赏： 题目1：（2016全国卷1）假如你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附的文字和格式（format）。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯 Sample: Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm writing to ask whether you could do me a favor. In order to gain some social experience and improve my work ability. I'm going to take a part- time job during the summer vacation. So interested in the position in a foreign-captured company am I that I’ve already written an application letter and my resume all in English. H owever, I’m afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format in the materials that I prepared. Would you be so kind as to correct the mistakes and improve the format of the application and resume for me. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to help me. I’m looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 题目2. 假如你是李华，你家乡的梨花节(Ewha Festival)负有盛名，你写了一篇英文宣传稿，想请外籍教师Bob帮忙润色。请根据提示用英语给Bob写一封电子邮件，内容包括： 1.求助事由； 2.求助内容； 3.表达感激 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Sample: Deer bob, I’m writing to you in the hope that you will be so kind as to do me a favor. When it comes to the Ewha Festival. There's no denying that it enjoys a great reputation in my hometown. I, for a long time, have been desiring to write an appealing article to make it better known. However, only when I put the idea into practice did I find my English far from satisfying. As far as I know, you have such a good command of written English as impresses me a lot. Therefore, I’m wondering whether you could take the trouble to have my draft polished at your convenience. I would be grateful if you could take my request into consideration. Yours, Li Hua
学案(四)申请信 [题型技法] (学一学) 申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。写申请信的目的在于让对方了解自己的经验、能力、成就、愿望等，所以个人情况的介绍应该是申请信的核心内容，应尽可能向对方说明本人的长处，以便留下好印象，获得面谈的机会。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点，并要注意人称和时态的变化，避免出现逻辑混乱。 [经典考题] (悟一悟) [典例](2015·陕西高考)假定你是李华，在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事。请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 Volunteers Wanted Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate.If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi@https://www.doczj.com/doc/bb8816008.html,. 写作要点： 1．表达写信意图； 2．陈述应征目的； 3．说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。 写作要求： 1．邮件词数不少于100； 2．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数； 3．可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯； 4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Dear Ms Chen， I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 2, Grade 3.
高考英语作文之应用文“建议信” 1.简介 建议信写作注意事项： 写作目的是针对某事向对方提出合理化的建议和忠告，使对方接受自己的想法、主张和建议，从而解决问题。（常用一般现在时和一般将来时） 写作风格： 简明扼要、目标明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强、有说服力，语言文雅，礼貌当先 写作内容： 写信的原因+建议的内容+这样建议的理由 2.写作方法 首段1）自我介绍/问好（不要啰嗦）一两个句子，概括性 2）复述背景，表明目的 主体1）提出具体建议 2）篇幅允许的话，可适当先肯定对方优点，再提出建议 3）适当说明原因或这样做的好处 结尾1）总结建议，注意礼貌 2）希望采纳/希望建议有用 3.范文练习 假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven向你咨询怎样学好中文，请根据下列要点给他写封建议信： 1）参加中文学习班 2）看中文书刊，电视 3）学唱中文歌曲 4）交中国朋友
开头： 自我介绍/问好 认识→问好(可问可不问) 最近好吗？ How are you doing? How are you these days? How do you do? How is it going? How is everything going? 好久不见 Long time no see. 收到你的来信真好! How nice to hear from you! 不认识→自我介绍 我是李华，育才学校学生会主席。 I’m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. 我来自高二一班的李华， I’m Li Hua from class one,senior two. 复述背景，表明目的 1．收到来信，得知你在中文学习上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 I have received your letter saying you have difficulty (in) learning Chinese so I’m writing to offer you some suggestions. 2．得知你在学习中文上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 Learning that you have trouble in learning Chinese,I’m writing to provide you with some advice. 3．你询问我一些在中文学习上的事情，我会尽量给你一些建议。 You have asked me for some advice on Chinese learning(how to learn Chinese well/how to
Dear Jenny How are you doing? Time passes so quickly that it seems that you have been away for nearly half a year. I miss you so much and sometimes can’t help recalling the time when you had class with us. I am very grateful to your help with my English study. But recently I face some problems on my English study which I still can’t manage them well after trying many methods or turning to others for help. The first one is that I find it a little bit difficult to remember new words and their usage. I guess it’s because we are learning more new things than before but I don’t know how to learn their by heart in a short time. By the way, you must know that we are going to retell a short story when taking the reading and speaking test during the college entrance examination. And the second difficulty I meet is that I can’t retell a short story well. I have no difficulty in understanding the story but I have trouble taking notes in a high speed and retelling them fluently after a short preparation which just last for one minute. Since I’m going to be a senior three student, I’m very concern and hope to solve these two problems soon so that I can make better progress in English study. I’m looking forward to your advice which I’m sure I can get some help from. Welcome back to China for another visit whenever it’s convenient for you. I hope to meet you again. Best wishes Yours, Li Hua
应用文写作-申请信 1、假定你是李华,你看到某旅游公司在招聘英语导游的广告,于是你写一封求职信申请该职位,要点如下: 1.年龄:18 2.毕业学校:红星中学 3.学习情况:成绩优秀,擅长英语,尤其口语好。 4.优势:有相关的工作经验;本人精力充沛、热爱旅游。 注意: 1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3.请将作文写在答题卡指定位置 Dear sir, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 2、假如你是李华,是新华中学的一名学生,得知可向世界儿童基金会(World Childhood Foundation)申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目(poverty-relief program),以帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣,准备申请。请根据以下要点写一封信: 1. 个人的基本情况和申请理由; 2. 你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划;
高中英语作文求助信
精品文档 求助信模版 Dear Mr. Johnson, How are you doing these days? It’s almost two months since we met each other last time. I miss you a lot. Thank you so much for your help with my English study. Now I am faced with some new learning problems. I have some difficulty in comprehensive reading. My English teacher often says that only if we expand the reading quantity can we be admitted into a better university. But, I feel it difficult to understand English passages with the increase of vocabulary / for lack of vocabulary. Besides, I often feel nervous while reading English. All of the problems bring me great pressure. I am unable to remember words well and feel tired of learning English. I really hope that you can give me some good advice on how to memorize new words and practice reading English. I believe I can make great progress in English with your help. I would be grateful/thankful if you could give me some advice/help. （By the way, please come to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you. I am looking forward to seeing you again.） Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li hua 收集于网络，如有侵权请联系管理员删除
建议信(1)-----阐释原因；提出建议类 请你代表你班同学给校长写一封信，反映一下你校食堂的几点问题，以引起学校重视，并针对问题提出两条合理建议。问题包括： 1. 菜价昂贵，菜市单一； 2. 排队时间长，浪费午休时间； 3. 味道不佳，浪费现象严重。 注意：1. 词数不少于120； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 食堂canteen Dear Principal, Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you! Yours, Li Hua 作文范文： Dear Principal, Recently, many students are discussing the problems of the canteen. The problems are as follows. Some students think the prices of the dishes are too high and that the choices are too limited. Another concern is that the time spent in waiting is so long that we have less time to have a rest. Meanwhile, some students think that the taste of the food is awful, which leads to a lot of waste. As far as I’m concerned, measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. First of al l, it’s suggested that the prices be more reasonable and the choices of dishes be more various. In addition, it’s better to open more service windows to reduce waiting time. I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you! 需注意的词汇、表达： 1.delicious waiting taste(n.味道) tasty (adj.可口的) cook (n.厨师) cooker (n.炊具) price 价格 2.lower /bring down the price 降低价格 3.at a lower/reasonable price 以较低的价格 4.varieties of dishes 种类多样的菜品 5.For one thing,……. For another,…… 6.make sb (not)do sth 7.wait /stand in line / in a queue for a long time 8.The kinds of food are few. 表达食堂出现的问题： 9.The prices of dishes are so high that many of us can’t afford them. 10.There are so few dishes to choose from, which is far from satisfactory. / which can’t satisfy our needs. 11.It takes us so much time to stand in line, which decreases our time of rest at noon. 12.The food in the canteen doesn’t taste good./ nice. The taste of food in the canteen isn’t good. 13.The food in the canteen tastes so bad that a lot of food is left and wasted 14.It’s a waste of time to stand in line for a long time. 15.The food in the canteen tastes so bad, which leads to a severe phenomenon of wasting food. 16.In the long run, it’s bad for our health and study. 17.It goes without saying that it will influence our sleep in the afternoon. 表达提出的建议： 18.Improving the taste of the food is also a good solution to the problems. 19.I think it’s necessary to provide more kinds of food. 20.It’s high time that we took measures to solve the problems. So it’s high time for us to take measures 21.To solve the problems, I think the canteen should set up a new figure(形象) and improve the present condition to satisfy the students’ needs. 22.We hope the canteen can provide us with dishes of a high quality at a reasonable price. 23.The canteen should open more windows so that we needn’t wait so long. 24.As far as I’m concerned, the canteen should attach importance to the quality. What’s more, different kinds of food should be provided. 25.Measures are supposed to be taken to improve the conditions of the canteen. 建议模板： Dear …., I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to…….(引出话题). Here are a few suggestions. First of all, it is important to do sth. Then, it also helps to do sth. Besides, it should be a good idea to do sth. 建议句型积累：
申请信 2018浙江卷 假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的外国学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1口语能力；2相关经验；3应聘目的。 框架结构： 第一段：写信目的第二段：详述优势+申请目的第三段：期盼回复 第一段写信目的：1自我介绍；2信息源 1.I am Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade2 2.①I am writing to apply to be a volunteer of our English association. ②Having learnt that our English association is looking for some volunteers. I am writing to express my deep interest in the position of student volunteer. I am Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade2. Having learnt that our English association is looking for some volunteers. I am writing to express my deep interest in the position of student volunteer. 第二段详述优势—1表明能胜任；2英语流利；3相关经验；4人品性格; 5擅长合作 1.My personal conditions taken into consideration. I confidently think I am qualified for the position. 2.Have a good command of English can speak English very fluently 3.Have relevant volunteering experience 4.I have diligence and patience, both of which are necessary for volunteering. 5.Seldom do I fell at a loss as to how to cooperate with others. 申请目的1对集体2对个人 1.As a student, it is my responsibility to make contributions to our school. 2.①acquire knowledge and skills which can’t be got from the textbooks. .②be beneficial to my all-round development. My personal conditions taken into consideration. I confidently think I am qualified for the position. Firstly, I have a good command of English can speak English very fluently. Besides, I have
建议信----A Letter of Suggestion 一、假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。 提示：1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。 2、关心同学、乐于助人。 3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。 4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。 5、……（你的建议） 才能：talent 注意：1.词数130左右，信的格式已给出，但不计入总词数； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 范文（一） Dear Lin Hao, I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions. First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school. Yours Li Hua 范文（二）、 Dear Li Ming, In your letter, you said you are not good at communicating with others and often feel lonely. I think you can just make it so long as you can follow the advice below. First, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Second, you should take an active part in the discussion held in your class and show your own opinion actively, and at the same time, learn to listen to others patiently. Then you can make friends with more people. Third, it will be a good idea to help others when necessary. With time going on, people will know you better and like to make friends with you if you can do the above. I hope you will find these ideas useful Yours, Li hua
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How to Write a Letter of Request Task 1：下面是2011课标卷高考作文，请阅读范文，并找出求助信件的框架结构（通常为三部 分）： 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心 （Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1.本人简历 2.求助内容 3. 约定时间 4.你的联系方式（ 注意：1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and I find my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center p Thanks for your kindness in advance. Look forward to your reply. y o u r s , L i h u a Common structure of a request letter: 1. Opening: Introduce yourself & _______________ politely. 2. Body: Describe your _________ & _____________ again. Make some specific requirements if necessary. 3. End: Give ___________ to the person who will help you. Useful expressions for writing a request letter: https://www.doczj.com/doc/bb8816008.html,eful expressions for an opening： 写信寻求帮助。(用至少两种方式表达) (a). ________________________________________________________________________________. (b). ________________________________________________________________________________. More expressions: https://www.doczj.com/doc/bb8816008.html,eful expressions for describing your problems: 高三学生，地理学习有困难。(用至少两种方式表达) (a) _______________________________________________________________________________. (b) _______________________________________________________________________________. More expressions: 努力过，但人际交往仍然有问题。(用至少两种方式表达)
书信经典范文 1. 申请信 【写作要求一】 假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括:1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力);2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3. 希望获准。 注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好. 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Yours Li Hua 【写作要求二】 假设你是晨光中学的高中生李华。你校拟选拔一些优秀学生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小学为学生辅导英语。你希望参加此活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给校评选组写一封申请信： 1. 对此活动的认识（如对本人、学生及社会的益处等） 2. 个人优势（如性格、独立生活能力、语言能力等） 3. 你的计划（如怎样进行辅导等） 注意：1. 词数不少于100；
H o w t o W r i t e a L e t t e r o f R e q u e s t Task 1：下面是2011课标卷高考作文，请阅读范文，并找出求助信件的框架结构（通 常为三部分）： 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅 导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一 封信： 1.本人简历 2.求助内容 3. 约定时间 4.你的联系方式（ 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你 写好。 Dear Sir/Madam, I ’ m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’ m wri ask for help. I came here last month and I find my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center p Thanks for your kindness in advance. Look forward to your reply. yo urs, Li hu a Common structure of a request letter: 1.Opening: Introduce yourself & _______________ politely. 2.Body: Describe your _________ & _____________ againMake. some specific requirements if necessary. 3.End: Give ___________ to the person who will help you. Useful expressions for writing a request letter: A. Useful expressions for an opening ： 写信寻求帮助。 (用至少两种方式表达 )
高考英语作文之应用文“建议信 1. 简介 建议信写作注意事项： 写作目的是针对某事向对方提出合理化的建议和忠告，使对方接受自己的想法、主张和建议，从而解决问题。（常用一般现在时和一般将来时） 写作风格： 简明扼要、目标明确、条理清晰、逻辑性强、有说服力，语言文雅，礼貌当先 写作内容： 写信的原因+建议的内容+这样建议的理由 2. 写作方法 首段 1 ）自我介绍/ 问好（不要啰嗦）一两个句子，概括性 2）复述背景，表明目的 主体 1 ）提出具体建议 2）篇幅允许的话，可适当先肯定对方优点，再提出建议 3）适当说明原因或这样做的好处 结尾 1 ）总结建议，注意礼貌 2 ）希望采纳/ 希望建议有用 3. 范文练习 假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Steven 向你咨询怎样学好中文，请根据下列要点给他写封建议信：1）参加中文学习班 2）看中文书刊，电视 3）学唱中文歌曲 4）交中国朋友
开头： 自我介绍/ 问好 认识→问好(可问可不问) 最近好吗？ How are you doing? How are you these days? How do you do? How is it going? How is everything going? 好久不见 Long time no see. 收到你的来信真好! How nice to hear from you! 不认识→自我介绍 我是李华，育才学校学生会主席。 I ' m Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. 我来自高二一班的李华， I' m Li Hua from class one,senior two. 复述背景，表明目的 1．收到来信，得知你在中文学习上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 I have received your letter saying you have difficulty (in) learning Chinese so I ' m w offer you some suggestions. 2．得知你在学习中文上有困难，我写信来给你一些建议。 Learning that you have trouble in learning Chinese,I 'wrmiti ng to provide you with some advice. 3．你询问我一些在中文学习上的事情，我会尽量给你一些建议。 You have asked me for some advice on Chinese learning(how to learn Chinese well/how to have a good command of Chinese) and I will try to give you some suggestions.