书面表达针对练(1)邀请信(1)

书面表达针对练(一) 邀请信

题目要求

(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)

假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper­cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

1．展览时间、地点；

2．展览内容。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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四步作文法

第一步审题谋篇

1．体裁邀请信

2．时态一般现在时和将来时

3．人称第三人称为主

第二步要点要全

1．我是你的学生李华。

I'm_Li_Hua,_one_of_your_students.

2．我写信想邀请你参观中国剪纸艺术展。剪纸是中国的传统艺术形式之一，我确信你一定会喜欢剪纸。

I'm writing to invite_you_to_visit_the_paper­cutting_exhibition. Paper­cutting is one of_Chinese_traditional_art_forms_and_I'm_sure_you_will_like_it.

3．艺术展将在下星期六上午8点到11点在当地博物馆举行。

The exhibition will_be_held_in_the_local_museum_from_8：00_am_to_11：00_am_next_Saturday.

4．有一些著名的艺术家将当场表演如何剪纸。

There_are_some_famous_artists. They will perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot.

5．从全国各地收集的一些漂亮的剪纸艺术画将被展出。

Some beautiful paper­cutting works, which_were_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_will_be_on_show.

6．如果你喜欢，你也能参加剪纸活动。我相信对你而言将是一个令人难忘的经历。

If you like, you_can_also_join_in_paper­cutting. I'm_sure_it_will_be_an_unforgettable_experience_for_you.

7．盼望着收到你的来信。

I'm_looking_forward_to_hearing_from_you.

第三步句式要美

1．句4合并升级为定语从句

There_are_some_famous_artists_who_will_perform_how_to_cut_paper_on_the_spot .

2．句5升级为过去分词作定语

Some_beautiful_paper­cutting_works,_collected_from_all_over_the_country,_wi ll_be_on_show.

第四步衔接要顺

One possible version：

Dear Henry，

I'm Li Hua, one of your students. I'm writing to invite you to visit the paper­cutting exhibition. Paper­cutting is one of Chinese traditional art forms and I'm sure you will like it.

The exhibition will be held in the local museum from 8：00 am to 11：00 am next Saturday. There are some famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot. Meanwhile, some beautiful paper­cutting works, collected from all over the country, will be on show there. If you like, you can also join in paper­cutting. I'm sure it will be an unforgettable experience for you.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours，

Li Hua

改写两用

这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。

Dear Henry，

I am writing to invite you to take part in the Chinese paper­cutting art exhibition be held in the art gallery from 8：00 am to 11：00 am the next Sunday.