第7周SR3-共康中心语文-2017年虹口高三一模作文学生例文(1篇)-洪婵

上海市虹口区2017-2018学年高三上学期期末教学质量诊断（一模）语文试题I卷一现代文阅读（30分）（一）阅读下文，完成第1—4题。

（9分）①一颗蒲公英小小的种子，被草地上那个小女孩轻轻一吹，神奇地落在这里便不再动了。

这也许竟是夙缘。

已经变得十分遥远的那个八月末的午夜，车子在黑幽幽的校园里林丛中旋转终于停住的时候，我认定那是我一生中最神圣的夜晚：命运安排我选择了燕．园一片土。

燕园的美丽是大家都这么说的，湖光塔影和青春的憧憬联系在一起，溢发充满了诗意的情趣。

每个北大学生都会有和这个校园相联系的梦和记忆。

②燕园其实并不大，未名不过一勺水。

水边一塔，并不可登；水中一岛，绕岛仅可百步余；另有楼台百十座，仅此而已。

但这小小校园却让所有在这里住过的人终生梦萦魂牵。

其实北大人说到校园，潜．意识中并不单指眼下的西郊燕园，他们大都无意间扩展了北大特有的校园观念：从未名湖到红楼，从蔡元培先生的铜像到民主广场。

或者在北大人心目中，校园□具体□抽象，他们似乎□乐于承认象征性的校园的灵魂。

（节选自谢冕《永远的校园》）1．文中加点字注音正确的一项是（）。

（2分）（1）燕．园（2）潜．意识A．（1）yàn（2）qiǎn B．（1）yàn（2）qiánC．（1）yān（2）qián D．（1）yān（2）qiǎn2．文中画线词语含有错别字的一项是（）。

（2分）A．夙缘 B．溢发 C．梦萦 D．不单3．联系上下文，填入第②段空格处恰当的一项是（）。

（2分）A．虽却只 B．虽却更C．既又更 D．既又只4．概括“这小小校园却让所有在这里住过的人终生梦绕魂牵”的理由。

（3分）【答案】1．C2．B3．C4．①燕园的美丽。

②燕园美景与北大学生的青春憧憬联系在一起，充满诗意。

③燕园丰富了象征性的校园精神（观念或灵魂）。

【解析】1．试题分析：“燕”是多音字，在这里应读“yān”；“潜”不要误读为“qiǎn”。

2017年上海市高三一模现代文一宝山区（一）阅读下面甲、乙二文，完成5—10题。

（16分）甲《湄公河行动》：主流电影的良心品质①国庆节档期，《爵迹》《王牌逗王牌》等电影纷纷遭遇口碑滑铁卢，票房成绩后劲不足。

唯有警匪动作片《湄公河行动》低开高走，在观众良好口碑的助推下票房逆袭，多日蝉联单日票房冠军。

影片凭借现代化的艺术表达、奇观化的视觉呈现和商业化的包装手段实现了主旋律题材的类型突破，带给观众不一样的惊喜。

在叫座不叫好的电影不断涌现的行业背景下，这部弘扬主流价值观的良心之作获得市场成功，让更多潜心艺术创作的电影人获得了继续前行的信心。

②2011年10月5日，两艘中国商船在湄公河流域遇袭，13名中国船员遇难，这起“湄公河惨案”震惊了全世界。

犯我国民，虽远必诛。

为了替国人讨回公道，中国政府出动警力，境外追捕幕后黑手、毒枭糯康。

《湄公河行动》讲述的正是我国缉毒精英为了国家利益和人民生命财产安全赴汤蹈火的那段不凡经历。

影片以弘扬英雄主义为叙事基调，集中展现警察工作的凶险刺激和英雄警察的机智勇猛，让我们真切地体会到了“我们的生活之所以光明，是因为有人替我们挡住了黑暗”的道理。

影片跳出了以往一些主旋律创作程式化、套路化的窠臼，没有让“为了世间正义舍我其谁、为了保家卫国无私奉献”的主题流于说教，而是通过紧张刺激的故事情节和细腻丰富的细节处理使这些大情怀、大格局落在了实处，做到了有看点、有骨架、有灵魂。

③对真实事件的创新性改编是影片成功的第一步。

创作者并没有局限于呈现现实本身，而是在保证故事逻辑性和目的性的基础上，架构艺术真实。

《湄公河行动》的开篇就从维护国家尊严、打击国际犯罪行为的层面简洁交代了案件的背景，然后迅速切入故事本身，用强情节推进剧情。

影片三段重头戏，即在赌场营救线索人物，商场假交易以及抓捕糯康，可谓险象环生，悬念迭起。

其中既包括窄巷追击、高空飞跃，也有丛林野战、近身格斗，既有直升机空中救援、水面快艇追逐，也有无人机侦查和缉毒犬排雷，更别提追车、爆破等警匪片中的常见桥段了……这种短平快的叙事节奏和奇观景象的有效营造展示了中国警察领导者的运筹帷幄、团队的有力配合和个人的英雄本色，使观众的肾上腺素不断飙升，极大限度地调动了他们的观影热情。

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上海2017虹口区高三语文一模第一篇：上海2017虹口区高三语文一模2017届上海市虹口区高三语文一模一、积累应用（10分）1.默写填空。

（5分）（1），层林尽染；漫江碧透，百舸争流。

（毛泽东《沁园春·长沙》）（2），千营共一呼。

（卢纶《塞下曲》）（3）峰峦如聚，波涛如怒。

（张养浩《[中吕]山坡羊·潼关怀古》）（4）王先生买了一套房子，朋友向他祝贺，他却引用了辛弃疾《水龙吟·登建康赏心亭》中的名句来表达自己的惭愧心情。

他引用的名句应该是：。

（5）很多市民往往认为市级大医院的医疗水平一定比其他医院高，其实韩愈在《师说》中就说过“”，有些二级医院在某些病症上的医疗水平远远超过大医院。

2.选择最恰当的一项填入下列句子的空缺处。

（5分）（1）李白好饮酒，对酒放歌，常成名句，如“”。

A．对酒当歌，人生几何？B．白日放歌须纵酒，青春作伴好还乡。

C．花间一壶酒，独酌无相亲。

D．今日听君歌一曲，暂凭杯酒长精神。

（2）有些同学总想在学习上走捷径，却不知孔子早就说过“”。

A．逝者如斯夫，不舍昼夜B．岁寒，然后知松柏之后凋也C．欲速则不达，见小利则大事不成D．君子上达，小人下达（3）如果杜甫给李白写信，那么信中用的称谓应该是：。

A．自称甫，称对方白B．自称甫，称对方太白C．自称子美，称对方白D．自称子美，称对方太白（4）皇皇古柏道，每一段时光总会有不同的人经过，如今都已化作云烟，只有古柏还依然屹立，成为历史的见证者和守护者。

A.或英雄豪杰，或仁人志士B.或芸芸众生，或匹夫匹妇C.或骚人墨客，或一介书生D.或仕宦商贾，或贩夫走卒（5）天上的云姿态万千、变化无常，我们可以“看云识天气”，即根据云的形状来判断天气。

那些薄云，；那些厚云，常常是阴雨风雪的预兆。

A．云是天气的招牌往往是天气晴朗的象征 B．它是天气的招牌往往是天气晴朗的象征 C．云是天气的招牌象征着晴朗的天气 D．它是天气的招牌象征着晴朗的天气二、阅读（70分）（一）阅读下文，完成第3-8题。

2017年上海虹口区高三一模作文范文2017年上海虹口区高三一模作文范文材料：人是群居的动物，人群密集处总显得热闹而繁华，但哲人们却总在说独居有无止境的好处。

你对此是怎么看的？请写一篇文章，谈谈你的思考。

要求：（1）题目自拟；（2）不少于800字。

学生作文：（共3篇）以独居之心群居（一类中）人类是一种群居的动物，正是因为群居，人类得以生存，而哲人却反其道而为之，他们说了许多独居的好处，正是因为独居，他们得以伟大。

在我看来，毋庸置疑，群居有群居的好处。

许多古语及案列都告诉我们诸如“人多力量大”的事实。

当一个人无法解决一件事的时候，往往一群人可以成功战胜困难。

因为人各有所长，就像零件一样，只有互相配合才能得到一加一大于二的效果。

但不可否认，独居也有其妙处。

独居强调的是一种精神与思考。

可以说人是一种同时具有工作与思考能力的零件。

群居有时会忘记自我，忘记自己的思考以及与自己内心对话。

相对而言我更加赞同后者的观点，正如哲人所说的独居带来的好处是无止境的。

当然，我不算哲人。

与许多哲人不同，我认为独居还应当结合群居。

独居的条件其实是比较苛刻的，但我所谓之独居，并非像鬼谷子之类的独自在深山老林中。

而是如同《饮酒》中的，“问君何能尔，心远地自偏”这样的独居，可以让我们的心灵沉静清澈，但同时又避免了与世隔绝、“问今是何世”的无知。

哲人所谓的独居，正如他们独自一人思考一样；而哲人终日在思考，从赫拉克利特到笛卡尔，从老子到朱熹，从自然到人类社会。

而我所谓的独居，正如佛教的至理名言一样，“以出世心入世”。

正是这样，可以让我们在思考的过程中，又发挥了“作为零件”的社会职能与功效。

那么可以说这是一种“以独居之心群居”。

然而纷繁社会中，“以独居之心群居”不是一件容易事。

正如佛教讲究的入世，又谈何容易。

但是，这其实是一种可行的策略。

许多人说，要在社会中保持自我，守住初心不被社会潮流所裹挟。

而我认为恰恰相反。

思想是社会带给我们的，我们的“独居之心”不应成为路中央的“钉子户”，而是同社会一起向前并适当调节自我，成为黄河奔流到大海中最清澈的一滴水滴。

2023高三一模虹口作文题解析及范文（秩序与混乱）（这是对2023高三一模虹口作文题的解析及范文，从题目类型、关键词、界定概念、漂亮标题、素材积累及佳作展示等方面解析。

5篇佳作，其中1篇66 分，1篇64分，3篇63分。

且每篇都有老师的简析。

）原延回放：人们内心深处总会追求一种叫秩序的东西。

然而，这种秩序又往往掺杂着某种混乱。

当你有足够的能力与运气，将这种混乱与秩序平衡控制好，你就成功了。

请写一篇文章，就此谈谈你的认识。

要求：①自拟题目；② 不少于800字。

题目类裂：现象类观点型关键词：秩序混乱平衡成功界定概念：秩序：有条理地、有组织地安排各构成局部以求到达正常的运转或良好的外观的状态。

内心秩序：犹如常提到的“价值序列二每个人的内心、思维都如同一个井然有序的系统，我们需要结合自身的价值判断，对种种价值观、方法论、信仰进行检脸，再把它们按照自选级排列组合，从而形成一定的顺序。

为什么人们内心深处总会追求一种叫秩序的东西？1.追求秩序，符合生命可控原那么。

追求秩序能让我们获得有序的结果，从而对自己的命运在时空上有可控制的能力。

2.追求秩序，符合机会平等原那么。

秩序本身能让世界获得更公平的跃迁机会，每个人都能够凭借自身的能力获得平等的机会。

3.追求秩序，符合自我投射原那么。

人无法从个体的虚空汲取出某种价值观，价值观必然来自外在世界的投射--世俗文化、历史习俗、商业广告轰炸、媒体舆论造势、亲疏远近各色人等的影响。

4.遵守秩序能节约时间，提高效率，使人们更易接近成功；且秩序是动态的，与时俱进，对个性开展起保障作用；秩序也能让个体很好地融入社会。

为什么这种秩序又往往掺杂着某种混乱？1.这个世界的本质是不可控的，是混乱的。

秩序虽能让我们在情境中寻找到某种意义上的优质选项，但却不能改变这个世界混乱的现实。

2.混乱能让这个世界具有更多的可能性。

世上会有很多秩序外的混乱变量，这些变量同样影响着个人的成功，变量是不确定的、是混乱的。

虹口区2016-2017学年度第一学期期终教学质量监控测试高三英语试卷第 I 卷 (共100分)I. Listening ComprehensionSection ADirections: In Section A, you will hear ten short conversations between two speakers. At the end of each conversation, a question will be asked about what was said. The conversations and the questions will be spoken only once. After you hear a conversation and the question about it, read the four possible answers on your paper, and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard.1. A. This afternoon. B. Tomorrow.C. Next week.D. Next month.2. A. She doesn’t play tennis well. B. She likes other sports as well.C. She is an enthusiastic tennis player.D. She is a professional athlete.3. A. At a paint store. B. At an oil market.C. At a science museum.D. At a gallery.4. A. Work in the yard B. Buy some wood.C. Go to the bookstoreD. Take a walk.5. A.A taxi driver. B. A passenger.C. A car cleaner.D. A mechanic.6. A. Call a repairman. B. Get out the paper stuck.C. Turn to her colleague for help.D. Restart the machine.7. A. There are not enough gardens. B. Parking areas are full before 10:00.C. Parking areas are closed after10:00.D. All classes begin at 10:00.8. A. The presentation will begin atnoon.B. She’ll present her work to the man.C. She’d like to invite the man for lunch.D. She suggests working on the presentation at 12:00.9. A. The dormitory hours. B. The problem with the rules.C. The door number of the dormitory.D. The time to open the dormitory.10. A. The chairs didn’t need to bepainted.B. He doesn’t like the color of the chairs.C. The park could have avoided theproblem.D. The woman should have been more careful.Section BDirections: In Section B, you will hear two short passages and one longer conversation, and you will be asked several questions on each of the passages and the conversation. The passages and the conversation will be read twice, but the questions will be spoken onlyonce. When you hear a question, read the four possible answers on your paper and decide which one would be the best answer to the question you have heard.Questions 11 through 13 are based on the following passage.11. A. Worried. B. Surprised. C. Satisfied. D. Uninterested.12. A. It spoiled Joann a’s reputation.B. It copied her ideas without permission.C. It bought Joann a’s dishwashers.D. It wanted to share the dishwasher market.13. A. A successful business case. B. Joann a’s waterless laundry.C. A case against a global company.D. The worldwide dishwasher market.Questions 14 through 16 are based on the following passage.14. A. Footprints. B. Food. C. Living insects. D. Orange seeds.15. A. Don’t touch animals under any circumstances.B. Don’t take away any natural objects from the park.C. Don’t leave litter in the park or throw any off the boat.D. Don’t transport animals from one island to another.16. A. To protect the guide’s interest. B. To improve the unique environment.C. To ensure a trouble-free visit.D. To get rid of illegal behaviors.Questions 17 through 20 are based on the following conversation.17. A. Writing a book. B. Preparing a lecture.C. Searching for references.D. Reading comedies18. A. Make his topic more specific. B. Make a complete reading list.C. Read at least six books.D. Read some Hollywood comedies19. A. Hollywood in the 1930s and 1940s.B. 20th-century Hollywood comedies.C. Comedies in the 1930s and 1940s.D. Golden Age Hollywood comedies.20. A. Student and teacher. B. Reader and librarian.C. Customer and shop assistant.D. Two strangers reading in the libraryII. Grammar and VocabularySection ADirections:After reading the passage below, fill in the blanks to make the passage coherent and grammatically correct. For the blanks with a given word, fill in each blank with the proper form of the given word; for the other blanks, use one word that best fits each blank.Wedding in the United StatesWeddings in the United States vary as much as the people do. There are church weddings with a great deal of fanfare; there are weddings on mountain tops with guests (21) _____ (seat) on the rocks and even barefooted; and there have been weddings on the ocean floorwith oxygen tanks for the guests. But many weddings, (22) _____ _____ _____ or how they are performed，include certain traditional customs.Before a couple is married, they become engaged. And then invitations are sent to those who live nearby, their close friends and their relatives who live far away. When everything is ready, then comes (23) _____ (exciting) moment of all.The wedding itself usually lasts between 20 and 40 minutes. The wedding party is walking through the aisle of the church as the Wedding March (24) _____ (play). The bride carrying a bouquet (花束) enters last with her father who will “give her away”. The groom enters the church from a side door. When the wedding party is gathered by the altar (圣坛), the bride and groom exchange vows. (25) _____ is traditional to use the words “To have and to hold from this day forward, for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, till death do us part”. (26) _____ (follow) the vows, the couple exchange rings. Wearing the wedding ring on the fourth finger of the left hand is an old custom.(27) _____ the ceremony there is often a party called a “reception”, which gives the wedding guests an opportunity to congratulate the newlywed.The car in (28) _____ the couple leaves the church is decorated with balloons, streamer and shaving cream. The words “Just Married” are painted on the trunk or back window to tell people (29) _____ they are married. Now comes the last step of the wedding ceremony. As a tradition, the bride and the groom (30) _____ run to the car under a shower of rice thrown by the wedding guests. When the couple drives away from the church, friends often chase them in cars, honking (鸣喇叭) and drawing attention to them. And then the couple go on their honeymoon.Section BDirections: Fill in each blank with a proper word chosen from the box. Each word can be used only once. Note that there is one word more than you need.Why Aren’t Women Happier?Why aren’t women happier these days?That’s the question raised by a thought-provoking study, The Paradox of Declining Female Happiness, __31__ last month. The research showed that over the past 35 years women’s happiness has declined, both __32__ to the past and relative to men even though the lives of women in the US have improved in recent decades by most __33__ measures.The research, by University of Pennsylvania economists Stevenson and Wolfers, and made __34__ by the National Bureau of Economic Research, found the decline in happiness to be widespread among women across a variety of demographic(人口统计的) groups. The researchers, for instance, measured similar declines in happiness among women who were single parents and married parents, “__35__ doubt on the hypothesis (假设) that trends in marriage and divorce, single parenthood or work/family __36__ are at the root of the happiness declines among women,” they wrote.One theory for the decline in happiness is that expectations for workplace and general advancement were raised too high by the women’s movement and women might feel __37__ for not “having it all,” as a Los Angeles Times columnist recently put it.The researchers acknowledge that’s a __38__:“If the women’s movement raised women’s expectations faster than society was able to meet them,” the paper says, “they would be more likely to experience __39__ in their lives.” But they add things could change for the better: “As women’s expectations move into adjustment with their experiences, this decline in happiness may reverse.”Readers, why do you think women are unhappier than in the past? Do you think that ifexpectations for “having it all” were __40__ to “move into adjustment with experiences,” women might be happier?III. Reading ComprehensionSection ADirections: For each blank in the following passage there are four words or phrases marked A, B, C and D. Fill in each blank with the word or phrase that best fits the context.A Cashless SocietyThere is nothing worse than feeling around in your pocket trying to find some small change to pay for a newspaper or a coffee. So it’s good to know that new __41__ is making cash -- banknotes and coins -- a thing of the past, turning us into a cashless society.Today, many of us already use credit and debit cards for __42__ transactions (交易) so there’s no need to carry around huge amounts of money. And now it’s __43__ to make contactless payments using tap-and-go cards which are regular bankcards but with a built-in chip. The card reader __44__ a radio signal and, when you bring the card close to the reader, the chip picks up the signal to make the payment.__45__money this way or spending on “plastic” -- an informal name for a credit card -- can put you at risk of fraud (诈骗). Criminals try to steal cards, or the information on them, to make __46__ online or in shops, which, as a result, adds too much difficulty to the police’s detective work. __47__, contactless payment is capped -- in the UK the limit is £30. And, if someone does go on a crazy spending with your card, your bank covers you against the loss. Also, the __48__ of chip and PIN technology has even been helping businesses by cutting the time people spend at the cashier’s in shops and has led to a(n) __49__ in fraud.But, if getting your bankcard out seems like too much trouble, there’s now a __50__ using wearable technology -- something you can wear that include computer and electronic technologies. Kenneth Cukier, economist and technology expert, says “this is __51__ for people who don’t want to take their card out of their wallet, or use their phone, or usetheir watch. People are going to be making more purchases more of the time -- __52__ for small-valued goods.”And, although our mobile phones are another way of making payments, BBC reporter Kate Russell says that when this is __53__ you can use the fingo-pay (指纹支付) system which “reads the unique maps of veins under the surface of your finger.” The trick is remembering which finger you __54__ with in the bank -- that’s when good old-fashioned cash might save the day! What do you __55__ to use when you buy something?41. A. experiment B. evidence C. technology D. analysis42. A. financial B. equal C. economical D. moderate43. A. definite B. possible C. formal D. legal44. A. work out B. makes out C. gives out D. sends out45. A. Refunding B. Depositing C. Paying D. Withdrawing46. A. bargains B. purchases C. preparations D. troubles47. A. Similarly B. Meanwhile C. Furthermore D. However48. A. introduction B. contact C. cooperation D. extension49. A. rise B. drop C. change D. increase50. A. question B. reason C. concept D. solution51. A. reserved B. provided C. intended D. chosen52. A. particularly B. specially C. simply D. purposefully53. A. inexact B. unnecessary C. impractical D. inconvenient54. A. cancelled B. registered C. tested D. restricted55. A. attempt B. demand C. prefer D. aimSection BDirections:Read the following three passages. Each passage is followed by several questions or unfinished statements. For each of them there are four choices marked A, B, C and D. Choose the one that fits best according to the information given in the passage you have just read.(A)You are checking your emails when you start daydreaming about where to go on your summer holiday. This reminds you to compare the cost of local gyms. Then you suddenly decide to look up some place for your birthday party.You may think you are browsing the Internet in a slightly absent-minded manner. You are, in fact, “wilfing”. According to a survey for a financial website, almost seven in ten Internet users admit to the newly named habit. The study of 2400 people carried out by YouGov found that more than a quarter of Internet users wilf ---- a rough acronym of What Was I Looking For? ---- for two days every month.Pete Cohen, GMTV’s resident life coach and motivator, said, “Stopping yourself wilfing takes a mixture of planning and willpower. These days there are all manners of website attracting our attention. Internet users need to set themselves a specific surfing goal and a time limit to keep on track.”Shopping in the online activity is most likely to make users wilf. Men are more likely to admit to being wilfers than women. A third of the men questioned said the habit had damaged their relationship with a partner. The good news is that wilfing is a habit people tend to grow out of. Internet users aged 55 or over were three times less likely to wilf than those aged under 25.Jason LIoyed, from moneysupermarket,said, “The Internet was designed to make it easier for people to access the information they need quickly and conveniently. Although people log on with a purpose, they are now being offered so much choice and online distractions that many forget what they are there for, and spend hours aimlessly wilfing instead. It’simportant that people do not allow unnecessary online distractions to get in the way when surfing in the Internet, as it can affect productivity in the workplace and relationship at home.”Are you a wilfer, lost in the Internet?56. The underlined word “acronym” in Para. 2 most probably means ______.A. a phenomenon that makes people daydreamB. a summary of the book “What Was I Looking For?”C. an expression meaning taking people’s attention awayD. a word composed of the first letters of the words in a phrase57. What is an efficient way to stop wilfing according to the passage?A. Stopping taking a mixture of planning and willpower to keep on track.B. Trying to focus on different subjects at the same time.C. Trying to set a surfing goal and a time limit.D. Logging on the Internet all the time.58. It can be concluded from paragraph 4 that ______.A. men are less likely to be wilfing than womenB. wilfing damages the relationship between partnersC. as you grow older, you’ll become more and more wilfingD. one third of Internet users will be wilfers lost on the Internet59. What can be called “wilfing” according to the passage?A. You spend hours aimlessly surfing the Internet every day.B. You suddenly decide to look up some information about clothes.C. You are accessing the information you need quickly and conveniently.D. You are browsing some of your emails which haven’t been checked for months.(B)Shanghai Disneyland: Attractions and TipsWelcome to a never-before-seen world of wonder where you can arouse the magical dream within your heart. This is Shanghai Disneyland, a fun experience filled with creativity, adventure and thrills for Guests of all ages! Set your sights on Enchanted Storybook Castle -- the largest Disney castle on the planet -- and then get ready to explore as you discover 6 unique and unforgettable lands: Mickey Avenue, Gardens of Imagination, Fantasyland, Adventure Isle, Treasure Cove and Tomorrowland.Opening HoursMonday -- Thursday: 09:00 -- 21:00Jun -- SeptFriday -- Sunday: 08:00 -- 22:00Sunday -- Friday: 10:00 -- 19:00Oct -- DecSaturday: 09:00 -- 20:00Ticket BookingVisitors can book tickets on the official website or mobile app of the park or by calling 400-180-0000 / 86-21-31580000. They can also follow the official Wechat account ShangHaiDisneyResort to book a ticket. Of course,tickets can be bought at the entrance, but theremay be a long queue. Visitors need to showpassports or ID cards to book tickets and enter.Five Things You S houldn’t MissTRON Lightcycle Power RunPirates of the Caribbean Battle for the Sunken Treasure“Mickey’s Storybook Express” ParadeEnchanted Storybook CastleBroadway-style show The Lion KingSpecial RecommendationThe cartoon characters Judy and Nick in Zootopia, the animated movie whose box office hit $1 billion globally in 2016, will be added to Disney’s signature “Mickey’s Storybook Express” Parade, said Robert Ige r, the president and CEO of Walt Disney.Things to RememberOnly well-packaged food and water are allowed.Selfie sticks, large tripods, folding chairs, and large luggage are banned.Visitors above 16 should not be dressed in cartoon, movie and comic costumes.Disney Fastpass tickets for free can save you from waiting in a long queue.Comfortable sneakers are strongly recommended for a long walk during the day.Animals are not allowed to enter as well, excluding guide dogs.60. It can be inferred from the passage that ______.A. Enchanted Storybook Castle is a must-see sightB. Broadway-style show The Lion King is a 3D movieC. “Mickey’s Storybook Express” Parade earns $1 billion in 2016D. Pirates of the Caribbean Battle for the Sunken Treasure is an animated movie61. What day is supposed to be the busiest day according to the passage?A. Thursday.B. Friday.C. Saturday.D. Sunday.62. It can be concluded from the last part of the passage that ______.A. blind people are not allowed to visit the landsB. visitors can only eat and drink at certain placesC. cartoon costumes and uncomfortable sneakers are bannedD. Disney Fastpass tickets can help visitors enter the lands fast(C)A group of college students is hoping to place a satellite powered only by water into an orbit (轨道) around the moon.The students are from Cornell University inthe state of New York. They are taking part ina competition called the Cube Quest Challenge.It is a program of NASA, the American spaceagency. The Cornell team is called the CisLunarExplore rs. The word cislunar means “betweenthe e arth and the moon.”The challenge is simple: to design, buildand deliver “flight-qualified, small satellites.”NASA officials say the satellites must be able to perform “advanced operations near and beyond the moon.”Ten teams are taking part in the competition. But the CisLunar Explorer satellites are different. They are the only ones using water to power their spacecraft.The idea for a water-powered vehicle came from Mason Peck, who works at Cornell University. He once worked as NASA’s chief technologist. He has always wanted to usesomething other than rockets to push spacecraft beyond earth. “A lot of the mass we send into orbit these days is in the form of rockets -- the only way we get anything into space,” he said, in a Cornell press release. “But what if we could use what’s already there? If we could do that, if we could re-fuel spacecraft while they’re already in space...”The spacecraft is shaped like the English letter L. It measures about 30 centimeters in length, and the two pieces are connected. Water is stored in the lower part of the satellite. The sun will separate the water into two elements: hydrogen and oxygen. When one combines hydrogen and oxygen with a spark (火花), an explosion results. This provides a forward movement, known as thrust.The CisLunar Explorer team has an unusual way to guide its spacecraft. The idea is to copy how old-time sailors used the moon, sun and stars to fix their position on the oceans. The satellite is equipped with cameras. The cameras will take pictures of the sun, the earth and the moon and compare their positions and their sizes. Based on where the sun, moon and earth are at any given time, the CisLunar Explorers will do the mathematics to find their position.The competition is being held in four parts. The Cornell team has been among the top three competitors during parts one and two. The winners of the third stage will be announced in about a month. The final three winners will be announced in early 2017. They will get to ride on NASA’s space launch system in early 2018.63. The essential part of the competition “the Cube Quest Challenge” is ______.A. to launch a satellite to take a watery flight to the moonB. to design, build and deliver a small and flight-qualified satelliteC. to place a satellite powered only by water into an orbit around the moonD. to make the satellite perform advanced operations near and beyond the moon64. What does Mason Peck want to do at Cornell University according to the passage?A. To stop using rockets for the sake of safety.B. To use something already in space as power.C. To try using water in space to push spacecraft.D. To design a water-powered vehicle to push spacecraft.65. It can be inferred from the passage that ______.A. there is a lot of rubbish of rockets and satellites in the orbit these daysB. a water-powered satellite will soon be sent into the orbit around the moonC. the explosion of the combination of hydrogen and oxygen provides powerD. the team members of the CisLunar Explorers are the students of Mason Peck66. What would be the best title of the passage?A. A Spacecraft Powered by WaterB. A Water-Powered Flight to the MoonC. A Competition for Water-Powered SatelliteD. A Design of Water-Powered Space JourneySection CDirections: Read the passage carefully. Fill in each blank with a proper sentence given in the box. Each sentence can be used only once. Note that there are two more sentences than you need.The Good of GardeningDo you have a hobby that helps you relax and unwind? For some people, there is no better way to relieve pressure than spending time in the garden. This small private area of green space can be their place of calm.__67__. A survey conducted by the Royal Horticultural Society, found that 82% of people in the UK said that gardening makes them happier. It also found that 70% of them, given the choice, would prefer to spend their working day in the garden with just 9% opting for an office.For those with green fingers, the pleasure of gardening comes from getting out in the fresh air, in all weathers and communing with nature -- even if there are a few too many worms! It can also be seen as a sort of digital-detox -- time away from technology. __68__.Dr Christopher Lowry, a neuroscientist at the University of Colorado, injected a bacterium commonly found in soil into mice to see what affection this would have on them. __69__. When we dig in soil we absorb this bacterium through our lungs or cuts in our skin, so Dr Lowry concluded that since the mice seemed happier when treated with soil bacteria, it’s likely we would be, too.__70__. There’s evidence that recovering alcoholics who have been given the opportunity to plant, grow, and even sell their produce, have managed to stop their addictive habits. Scot Stephenson, for example, got dismissed from school and started a vocationalqualification in gardening. He says, “I got my NVQ level 2 which is my first qualification and enjoye d it ever since.”Whatever the reason, there are many therapeutic benefits to getting your hands dirty, doing some physical hard work and then watching your garden grow. Does this sound like your idea of fun?IV. Summary WritingDirections: Read the following passage. Summarize the main idea and the main point(s) of the passage in no more than 60 words. Use your own words as far as possible.Are You Ready for Your Exam?So, it’s the exam time again -- have you done the necessary work to get good marks? Sleeping with the textbook under the pillow (枕头) in the hope that knowledge will be magically absorbed into your brain as you sleep doesn’t work. The best strategy is to space your practice out, rather than cram(死记硬背) it all together. It means hit the books early!In an article in the British newspaper The Guardian, Tom Stafford, a lecturer in psychology at the University of Sheffield, UK, advises: “If you organi ze five hours of study into one hour a day, you’ll remember more than if you study for five hours on one day.”Don’t rely on memory alone -- get pen and paper and start working. Students who can test themselves in advance will be better at getting back material from their memory and learn that material in the long run. John Dunlosky, Professor of Psychology at Kent State University in the US, suggests that “you start by reading a textbook using your favourite highlighter (荧光笔) and favourite colours, but then you go back and make flashcards of all the critical concepts and instead of just rereading those, you basically try to test yourselves on them.”Good revision should give you confidence, but if you are still anxious, there’s no harm in indulging (放任) in a personal routine. In Japan, it seems to be a tradition for students to eat Katsudon before a test. This is a warm bowl of rice topped with egg and a deep-fried pork cutlet. The name of the dish reminds people of the word ‘katsu’, meaning ‘winning’.For some students in South Korea, the key to success is not washing their hair before sitting an exam because they believe they could wash all the knowledge out of their head. And in different parts of the world there are always those who swear by their ‘lucky underwear’.The bottom line is that you need to study, sleep well on the eve of the test, eat a nutritious meal, drink plenty of water and believe that your efforts will pay off. Good luck in your exam!（请将答案写在答题纸上）第II卷（共40分）I. TranslationDirections: Translate the following sentences into English, using the words given in the brackets.一、干吗不去看场电影轻松一下自己？（Why）二、全市所有的公园都应付市民免费开放。

2016学年虹口区高三一模语文卷参考答案分析及试卷试题一、阅读（80分） (一）（17分）1．在世界上许多民族都用拼音文字的时候，中国却独立应用了音节文字，表现了中国人与众不同的认知世界的方式 (两个要点各1分)（2分）2、汉字主要是以笔画构图，形音融合，读音见形知义为主要特征的方块字（注音字）。

(定义格式1分，内涵本质属性2分)（3分）3、汉字以少量的基本笔画和组合关系(或：以五种基本笔画和三种组合关系)构成(表达全系形象的)图形，图形不易混淆，信息准确丰富（或：承载的信息量大而具有规律性）；汉字都富有文化的底蕴.易于观字形知概念。

（2+1分）（3分）4、构字造词〔2分）5、D (3 分)6 、（4 分）汉字以少量笔画拼构图形，表达全息图像，（使形音有机融合，读音见形知义)体现中华民族想象力;汉字基本笔画和组合关系少而简单，承载的信息量大且具有规律性，易于学习，体现了中国人精细入微的观察力；汉字每个字都富有文化底蕴;汉字容易储存信息和制造新词，最能体现“生词熟字”的效果；汉字简洁、准确、严密、先进，是最佳信息交换应用程序的语种。

（答对4点即可，每点1分。

）特别关注第2、3段的最后一句及第4、5段的第一句“更加突出”。

(二）（19分）7、第③段中运用比喻，形象地描绘出了深山中小路的曲折弯曲与崎岖狭窄，途中无人却山外有山，衬托出下文中作者见到宽阔无边、充满生机的山景以及谷底小石屋的惊讶与喜悦之情。

（3分）8、突出地表达出作者一行在深山荒野中出乎意料地发现咖啡店的讶异和惊喜之情。

（2分）9、（运用比拟的修辞手法，把女孩的吉他声拟作小精灵），形象地写出了吉他声的生疏拙嫩而又活泼可爱(新奇)的感觉。

（1+2分）10、C (3 分）11、( 3分)文中的伏笔主要有:第⑪段“结这么简单的账.他们也要看价目表，像是很不习惯”；第⑫段“一天中也不知可以卖出多少杯茶水，却没有减低他们的欢笑声”。

要点:指出文中伏笔的具体内容，写明余下文的某个情节的关联与照应、提示或暗示。

2017年虹口区初三一模语文试题一、文言文部分（40分）（一）默写（15分）1、日暮乡关何处是，。

（《黄鹤楼》）2、，人约黄昏后。

（《生查子·元夕》）3、……轻烟老树寒鸦，。

（《天净沙·秋思》）4、，在乎山水之间也。

（《醉翁亭记》）5、，故克之。

（《刿论战》）（二）阅读下面一首词，完成6-7题（4分）破阵子·为同甫赋壮词以寄之[宋]辛弃疾醉里挑灯看剑，梦回吹角连营。

八百里分麾下炙，五十弦翻塞外声，沙场秋点兵。

马作的卢飞快，弓如霹雳弦惊。

了却君王天下事，赢得生前身后名。

可怜白发生。

6、对标题中“壮词”词义理解最合理的一项是（）（2分）A.壮志之词B.壮丽之词C.壮观之词D.壮美之词7、词中划线句表达出作者的心愿是（2分）（三）阅读下文，完成第8-10题（8分）楼记（节选）若夫淫雨霏霏，连月不开，阴风怒号，浊浪排空；日星隐曜，山岳潜形；商旅不行，樯倾楫摧；薄暮冥冥，虎啸猿啼。

登斯楼也，则有去国怀乡，忧谗畏讥，满目萧然，感极而悲者矣。

至若春和景明，波澜不惊，上下天光，一碧万顷；沙鸥翔集，锦鳞游泳；岸芷汀兰，郁郁青青。

而或长烟一空，皓月千里，浮光跃金，静影沉璧，渔歌互答，此乐何极！登斯楼也，则有心旷神怡，宠辱偕忘，把酒临风，其喜洋洋者矣。

嗟夫！予尝求古仁人之心，或异二者之为，何哉？不以物喜，不以己悲；居庙堂之高则忧其民；处江湖之远则忧其君。

是进亦忧，退亦忧。

然则何时而乐耶？其必曰“先天下之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”欤！噫！微斯人，吾谁与归？8、选文的作者是________（人名），本文是受（人名）之邀而作的。

（2分）9、用现代汉语翻译文中划线句（3分）予尝求古仁人之心，或异二者之为。

10、以下理解正确的一项是（）（4分）A.前两段流露出作者“悲”和“喜”两种不同的感情。

B.写“春和景明”之景是为了反衬“喜洋洋”的心情。

C.作者与“古仁人”都有相同的生活态度和政治抱负。

D.“微斯人，吾谁与归？”流露出作者极悲观的情绪。