(完整版)雅思作文批改--经典版(2)
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TASK 1
The charts below show the number of Japanese Tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data shows the number of Japanese traveling abroad from 1985 to 1995, as well as its proportion in Australia during this period.
It can be seen from the first graph that the period saw a generally increasing number of tourist traveling outside Japan. It increased gradually from about 5 million in 1985 to 11 million in 1990. From then on, it experienced a 3 years’ fluctuation between approximately 10.5 million and 12 million. After that, the number backed to its speed of rising and reached the highest point in 1995 at about 15.5 million.
The second graph illustrates that the 2% Japanese tourists visited Australia in 1985 and this number climbed to about 4.8% in 1988. Then it experienced a drop in the next year and dipped to 4.2%. After this point, the proportion increased again and countinious until 1993, reaching the peak at 6.2%. From 1994 to 1995, it slightly declined to 6%.
To recap, the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad experiences an increased trend from 1985 to 1995. It was the same for the share of Australia except a year’s drop from 1988 to 1989.
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