高考短文改错真题解析(全国卷)
Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers nor 76.________
sisters, in any other words, I am an only child. My parents 77.________
love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure 78.________ that I get a good education. They did not want me to do 79.________
any work at family; they want me to devote all my time to 80._______ my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. We 81.________
may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 82.________ not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 83.________
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they 84.________
really understand their own daughter? What things are in 85.________
other homes, I wonder.
答案和解析：
本文讲的是中国独生子女的问题。父母望子成龙，孩子们在家里什么也不让干，只要求他们读好书。孩子们缺少与家人交流的时间，在家里被当成了客人。
76. 正确。
77. 去掉any。in other words 为一固定短语，意思是“换句话说”。
78. 在can 后面加to。they can 后面承前省去了一个do，they can 在此是定语从句修饰all，后面的不定式make sure作目的状语，故to在此不能省。这句话的意思是“父母亲做他们力所能及的事情，来保证我得到良好的教育”。
79. did 改为do。整篇文章基本时态为一般现在时，此处用一般过去时态, 显然错误。
80. family 改为home。at home 为固定短语。
81. subject改为subjects。请注意前面的all，subject应用复数。
82. a 改为the。the same为固定搭配。
83. 去掉about。about后面没有宾语，about显属多余。
84. and 改为or。a visitor 和a guest应是选择关系，而并非并列关系。意思是“好象我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”。
85. What改为How。“我想知道其它家庭的情况是怎样的”。
短文改错之错词考点分析
错词原因很多，归纳起来，有以下几个方面：
1. 时态、语态误用
例1 The time passes quickly.
分析：原文讲的是上周游览峨眉山，故将passes改为passed。
例2 Books must be keep for four weeks.
分析：根据句意，该句为被动语态，故将keep改为kept。
2. 非谓语动词误用
例1 I was often a little tired after a day’s work and watch TV demands very little effort.
分析：and并列结构之后缺少一个主语，故将watch改为watching。
3. 主谓是否一致、主语和代词是否一致
例1 Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
分析：句中my picture and the prize为并列主语，谓语动词应用复数形式，故将is改为are。
例2 The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
分析：句子的主语为复数，与之相应的人称代词his应改为their。
4. 形容词和副词(比较等级)的误用
例1 As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer t han people in the past.
分析：longer本身即构成比较级，故将more去掉。
例2 After learning the basic of the subject, nothing else seemed very practically to me.
分析：连系动词后要用形容词，故将practically改为practical。
5. 连接词的误用
例1 The food was expensive and the service was good.
分析：the food was expensive与the service was good 是转折关系，不是并列关系，故应将and改为but。
例2 I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends that a great time I had.
分析：此句中含一个感叹句作told的宾语，故应将that改为what才正确。
6. 思维定势的干扰
例I also enjoyed the evening when we spent together.
分析：尽管evening是时间名词，但是spend是及物动词，需要关系代词作宾语，故应将when改为which / that, 或者将when去掉。
7. 句式结构中平行、并列关系混乱
例1 It was very kind of you to meet me at the railway station and drove me to yo ur home.
分析：句中drove应改为drive, 才能与前面的to meet保持平行并列关系。
例2 As we climbed the mountains, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told storie s.
分析：句中用了三个并列的谓语动词，故应将visiting改为visited。
8. 行文逻辑错误
例1 Now someone at home reads instead.
分析：根据上文可知，电视机卖掉以后全家人都看书，故应someone 改为everyone。
多词错误是受汉语的干扰和影响，而出现的汉语式表达方式，这些词多为冠词、介词、代词或连接词等。
例1 Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.
分析：catch sight of为固定词组，意为“看到”，故将不定冠词a去掉。
例2 But we don’t seem to get much time to talk about together.
分析：句中未交代谈话内容，介词about是多余的。故去掉。
例3 I hope that both you two could come and visit us some time soon.
分析：句中both与two并用，属意义重复。表示“你们俩”可以说you two或you bo th, 故应将both去掉。
例4 I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading and preparing for it.
分析：all与whole 连用，造成语义重复，故将all去掉。
例5 In some places you may borrow as many books as you want, in other places where you are limited to a certain number, of which some may be novels.
分析：此句是简单句，不含有定语从句，in other places是句子的地点状语，故应将w
here去掉。
短文改错缺词考点分析
