85英语基础写作练习现象分析PPT课件

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●环境污染(2013佛山二模)
It’s an alarming phenomenon that with the increasingly serious air pollution, the air quality in cities is becoming worse and worse. The gases from cars and factories keep coming into the air without being absorbed by enough trees, because trees have been cut down in large quantities.
［分析原因］ For one thing, it can provide them a colorful window to show their ideas and for another, it is a way for them to release their pressure. However, many parents and teachers are worried about it. They fear that managing a blog will take a lot of time and energy, which will have a bad effect on their lessons.
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13. be keen on对……感兴趣 14. migrant schools农民工子弟学校 15. collect money筹集资金 16. pour more money into投入更多资金 17. the whole society全社会 18. donate books to them捐书给他们
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5. 为了改善这种情况, 我们政府应 当采取措施帮助他们。 In order to improve the situation, our government should take measures to help them.
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经典范文
［指出现象］Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.
8Hale Waihona Puke 3. 结果，这些学生整天昏昏欲睡, 记忆力很差。 As a result, these students tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories.
4. 由于缺钱, 大多数民工学校没有现代设备, 没 有操场, 没有图书馆, 甚者没有足够的师资。 Owing to lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers.
2. 实际上, 早餐起着重要的作用, 因为它提供了 一整天身体所需的能量的30%。 In fact, the morning meal plays an important part because it can provide 30 percent of the whole day’s energy.
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7. as a result结果 8. improve the situation改善这种情况 9. take measures采取措施 10. stay slim 保持身材苗条 11. creative thinking创造性思维 12. 80% of the students百分之八十的学生
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19. show concern for关心 20. take up too much time占用太多的时间 21. grow tired of厌倦了…… 22. do exercise锻炼；做运动 23. The worst thing is that… 最糟糕的 是……
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24. mean everything to sb.对某人来说意 味着一切
25. reform the current educational system 改革现行教育制度
26. the College Entrance Examinations大 学入学考试(高考)
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相关句式 1. 最近的调查表明, 中国青少年的健康大大下降 了。 A latest survey shows that the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined.
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[作者观点] In my opinion, I do prefer this activity because the Internet is playing a more important and necessary part in our life and in the Information Age, we high school students have to learn and make the most of this useful tool to communicate and show ourselves.
现象分析
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现象分析的文章属说明文，一 般先指出某地存在某种现象，然后 说明这种现象产生的原因，最后提 出建议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通常 用一般现在时态。
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相关短语
晨读背诵
1. stay up late 熬夜 2. play an important part 起重要 作用 3. choose to do选择做…… 4. owing to lack of money由于缺钱 5. feel sleepy感到困乏 6. tend to do sth. 易于/倾向做某事