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bec高级真题2 写作范文英文回答：As an international student, I have had the privilege of experiencing the unique perspectives and challenges that come with living and studying in a foreign country. One of the most significant benefits of my time abroad has been the opportunity to develop a deep understanding of the history, culture, and society of my host country. This has enabled me to gain invaluable insights into different ways of thinking and living, broadening my horizons andfostering a greater appreciation for the diversity of human experience.Moreover, my international education has provided me with a global network of friends and connections from diverse backgrounds. This has not only enriched my social and cultural life but has also opened up opportunities for collaboration and exchange of ideas. I have had the chance to work on projects with students from different countries,exchanging perspectives and learning from each other's strengths.While my international experience has been incredibly rewarding, it has also presented some challenges. One ofthe most significant has been the language barrier. Atfirst, I struggled to communicate effectively with both my peers and my professors. However, I persevered anddedicated myself to improving my language skills. I took language classes, immersed myself in the local culture, and sought out opportunities to practice speaking and listening. Through hard work and determination, I gradually becamemore confident in my ability to communicate in my host country's language.Another challenge I faced was adjusting to a different educational system. The teaching methods, grading criteria, and expectations were often quite different from what I was accustomed to. This required me to adapt my learning strategies and seek support from my professors and classmates. I also had to learn to navigate theuniversity's administrative system, which could be complexat times. With patience and persistence, I eventually became familiar with the new system and learned how to succeed in my studies.Despite the challenges, I believe that the benefits of my international education far outweigh the difficulties. The experiences I have gained have not only enhanced my academic and professional skills but have also made me a more well-rounded and adaptable individual. I am grateful for the opportunity to have studied abroad and would highly recommend it to any student seeking a transformative educational experience.中文回答：作为一个留学生，我有幸体验到在国外生活和学习的独特视角和挑战。

大作文真题一: 题目讲解及范文首先我们来看商务报告的写作要求：◇You work in the Customer Services Department of a mail-order company. You have been asked to prepare a short report for your line manager about complaints.◇Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes.◇Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your report.◇Write 120~140 words.题目解读根据商务信函中提到的“1事2人1材料5要点”提示信息归纳，我们可分析出该题中的“1事”为报告顾客投诉情况；“2人”：“你”是邮购公司客服部的员工，阅读者是“你”的顶头上司，即line manager，直译为“直线经理”；“1材料”是1月至3月的顾客投诉统计图表和对三个月投诉原因的百分比分析。

内容与形式内容方面，商务报告强调材料和手写要点缺一不可，比如报告中应当包括图表数据变化的特征，如2月投诉锐增，3月投诉减少，对应的手写要点１和２是对图表数据变化原因的分析，如2月投诉锐增是因为计算机系统崩溃，而3月投诉减少的原因是引入新的订货系统。

又如报告中应提到顾客抱怨的主要原因是投递时间过长，占总投诉的56%，而要点3、4和5是提出减少投诉的方法，如3月误投的减少；降低投递时间，内容可展开为增加投递员工或者更好地划分投递区域等；改进所投递产品的质量，重新选择产品生产公司等，这里需要一定的商务背景知识。

其实读者不难发现，BEC写作题目体现了提出问题、分析问题、解决问题的思路，在潜移默化地传递着解决商业实际问题的思考过程。

第一篇PART ONE•You are going to spend holidays in Hawaii in June. Suddenly you receiveda letter from an important customer, Mr. Elton Deland, who will arrive on25th June and discuss the claim. You have to delay the trip till July. •Write a short message to Ms. Anne Folster, your secretary:•explain why you postpone your trip•mention the date when Mr. Elton Deland will arrive•ask her to arrange your meeting.•Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.PART TWO•Read the letter blow.Dear Mrs. DeanWe would be grateful if you could give us information about two of your cleaning products, Super Floor Cleaner and General Cleaner.We would like to know the discount you can offer if we buy 30 liters of each product.We would also like to know when you could deliver these quantities; this would ideally before 18th October.Yours sincerely,H. Wong•Write a letter to Ms Wong:•thanking her for her inquiry•telling her about your discount•confirming that you will deliver by the required date•asking her to phone if she would like further details.•Write 60-80 words.•You have to organize an urgent meeting at 9 a. m. tomorrow with all the staff from your department.•Write an email to the staff:•saying when the meeting will be held•telling them where the meeting will be held•explaining what the meeting will be about.•Write about 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.PART TWO•Read this note you have received from your boss.•Write an email to Ms Brown:•thanking her for the invitation to Head Office•telling her how many people are planning to go•saying which departments people would like to see•asking about the time of the visit.•Write 60-80 words. Do not include any postal addresses.• You work for a company which is going to buy a set of equipment fromChina. You are asked to translate a lot of specifications and instructions within four months, which is impossible. Therefore you decide to advertise for two experienced translators as soon as possible.• Write a short note to Mr. Max Remington, the Public Relation's manager:• asking for an advertisement for two translators• explain the reason• mention your urgency.• Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.PART TWO• Read this program for a visit you went on last week.• Write a short letter to Mr. Henry:• thanking him for the tour• saying why it was interesting• asking for another copy of his catalogue• inviting him to visit your company on 8th June.• Write 60-80 words.9 a. m.ProgramMeeting with Mr. Henry, Production Manager Tour of main factory 10 a. m.----------Production ----------Quality ----------Delivery system 12:30 p.m. Lunch•The staff in your office decided to spend holidays together this year. While reading the news you are attracted by the advertisement of the GrandPalazzo Hotel in Italy. As no one in your office has ever been to Italy, you want your secretary to contact the hotel through telephone.•Write a short message to Ms. Emily Malan, your secretary:•suggest the visit to Italy•give the hotel telephone number to her•ask her to contact with that hotel.•Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.PART TWO•Reading this message from your secretary.Telephone messageMr. Johnson called—our quotation received, but the price is too high. Asked us to reduce by 5%. I contacted our Sales Dept and was informed cost of raw materials is rising. Ours is lowest price. Also, our quality is better and orders are coming. Impossible to reduce.•Write a letter to Mr. Johnson:•telling him you cannot reduce your price•saying why you cannot reduce your price•persuading him to reconsider your price•asking for an early reply.•Write 60-80 words.•You have received a fax from a customer who in the fax complained that he had received 100 green color bicycles instead of 50 green and 50 blue colorbicycles. In order to solve the problem and find out the facts, you write ashort note to the warehouse.•Write a short note to Mr. Randy Simon, who is in charge of delivering goods from warehouse:•tell him about the claim•mention the date of delivery•ask for the duplicate invoice.•Write 30-40 words.PART TWO•Read the following letter.Dear Mr. DingMr. John Green，our General Manager，will be in Changchun from June 2 to 7 and would like to come and see you，say，on June 3 at 2.00 p.m. about the opening of a sample room there. Please let us know if the time is convenient for you. If not，what time you would suggest. Yours faithfully，Tim Forest•You are the secretary for Mr. Ding. Write a reply to Mr. Tim Forest: •thanking for informing you the visit•telling him Mr. Ding cannot be accept the visit•saying Mr. Ding cannot be accept the visit•telling him when will be available.•Write 60-80 words.。

商务英语BEC高级写作部分综合指导(一)写作部分BEC HIGHER写作部分主要涉及商业信函和图表写作两部分的内容，现具体介绍如下：商业信函第一章格式问题1. 格式问题：请同学们在BEC的写作中采用平头式的写法。

收信人的姓名和地址置于信纸的左上方地址、称呼和结束礼词后没有标点符号日期在右上方段落从定格开始，段落之间的行距为两行（但在考试中由于受答题卡限制，请同学们酌情考虑）写信人的名字和头衔在签名下方2. 称呼和结束礼词的注意事项：称呼的写法遵循下列原则：Dear Sir or Madam 写信给某一公司，不确定具体的收信人Dear Sir 对男士，但是你不知道他的具体姓名Dear Madam 对女士，但是你不知道他的具体姓名Dear Mr Smith 对男士Dear Ms Smith 对已婚或未婚的女士Dear Mrs Smith 对已婚女士Dear Miss Smith 对未婚女士Dear John (此处John 为英语中常用男名) 对朋友或你比较熟悉的人（通常为多年生意伙伴）称呼与结束礼词存在对应的关系，请同学们特别注意：Dear Mr/Ms/Mrs/Miss Smith Yours sincerelyDear John Best wishes以下均为错误用法：Dear Mr JohnDear Mr John Smith3. 日期：在英国英语中，天在前，但是在美国英语中，月份在前。

所以某些特别的时期容易引起误解。

例如：12 06 2003在英国指的是：6月21日在美国指的是：12月6日因此日期要写成：12 June 2003商务英语BEC高级写作部分综合指导(二)要记住月份使用大些字母开头。

天后不必写th、rd、nd或者st。

预备参加bec考试的同学们由于缺乏商务写作的实际经验，对于写作部分都比较郁闷。

恩波结合历年考试实际，为大家准备了15类共计50个经典的实战句型，供大家在考场上使用。

第三版新编剑桥BEC中级写作参考范文以下是第三版新编剑桥BEC中级写作参考范文：在商业领域中，有效的沟通和书面交流至关重要。

一篇优秀的商务英语文档必须满足关键的标准，包括准确的用语、可读性、以及格式的正确性。

本文将提供一个实用的参考范文，以供商业人士参考。

第一部分：简介在商务领域接触到的日常文档有很多种，包括报告、备忘录、电子邮件等等。

每种文档都有其独特的形式和特点。

本文的参考文档是一份业务报告。

这种文档常需要陈述实际情况，并向对方提供可行的解决方案。

第二部分：格式业务报告一般分为以下几个部分：1. 标题页。

标题页应该包括报告名称、作者、日期等相关信息。

2. 概述。

概述是报告的开篇，要简明扼要地介绍报告内容和结论。

3. 正文。

正文应包含报告的主要内容，可以根据需要分成多个部分。

4. 结论。

在结论中，要再次说明报告的主旨和解决方案。

5. 建议。

建议是对应对方或者团队的一个提醒，对下一步的决策起到至关重要的作用。

在具体的正文部分，要注意逐个说明每个问题，并给出相应的建议。

同时，建议应该贴近事实，并且能够清楚地说明如何解决问题。

精确的数据和确凿的事实能够使报告更加可信。

第三部分：语言和用词好的商务英语文档必须用准确的措辞传递信息。

需要特别注意已经广泛运用的缩略语和行话，以保证对方能够清楚理解你的意思。

过多的行话可能会在对方中产生困惑或者不必要的误解。

另一方面，通顺的语言会使文档更易于阅读和理解。

第四部分：参考资料和附带文件如果报告涉及数据的展示和分析，则需要提供相应的附带文件以支持报告。

这些文件可能包括表格和图表等。

同时，如果引用了其他的资料，则必须在文档中提供相应的参考资料，以供后续参考。

结论建议商业人士阅读本文档作为参考，以便在编写业务英语文档时更加得心应手。

有了正确的格式、准确的语言，以及准确的参考资料和附件，就能够轻松地写出优秀的商务英语文档，满足不同情况下的商务需求。

bec作文proposal格式英文回答：As a BEC (Business English Certificate) candidate, I would like to propose a format for the BEC writing task. The writing task is an important part of the BEC exam, and it is crucial to have a clear and effective format to follow. In my proposal, I will outline a format that I believe will help candidates to organize their ideas and write a coherent and persuasive essay.Firstly, the writing task should begin with an introduction that clearly states the topic and the candidate's position on the topic. This introduction should be concise and engaging, and it should provide a preview of the main points that will be discussed in the essay. For example, if the topic is about the advantages and disadvantages of working from home, the introduction should briefly mention the benefits and drawbacks of remote work.Next, the body of the essay should be divided into paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on a different main point. Each paragraph should begin with a topic sentence that introduces the main point, followed by supporting details and examples. It is important to use transition words and phrases to connect the paragraphs and create a smooth flow of ideas. For instance, when discussing the benefits of remote work, one paragraph could focus on the flexibility it offers, while another paragraph could discuss the cost savings for both employees and employers.Finally, the essay should conclude with a summary of the main points and a restatement of the candidate's position on the topic. The conclusion should leave a strong impression on the reader and reinforce the main arguments presented in the essay. It is also a good idea to end with a call to action or a thought-provoking statement to leave the reader thinking about the topic.中文回答：作为一名BEC（商务英语证书）考生，我想提出一个BEC写作任务的格式。

「BEC写作」通过实例教你书写报告书优选篇「BEC写作」通过实例教你书写报告书 1Let‘s have a case!实例~以下是一个__报告的实例Stand-alone report__ STORES, __ HILL BRANCHREPORT ON __LITY OF __ A CRECHE__CTIONI was asked to investigate the opening of a crèche at the Notting Hill branch by Mrs Lillian Cheng. In order to do this the following steps were taken.1. I obtained a breakdown of figures showing the number of customers with young children.2. I discussed this issue with several customers who brought children to the store.3. The modation, staffing and insurance issues were considered.4. I investigated the experience of other shops that already have acrèche.__S1. 7.3% of Maruman customers have at least one child under the age of 3.2. The majority of customers interviewed said they would use a crèche if the cost was reasonable. Some of these customers also mented that other friends who are not presently customers might also consider using the shop if there was a crèche.3. There are strict laws and regulations concerning modations and staffing of a crèche. The site would have to be approved to run a crèche before we could start one.4. Staff appointed to run the crèche would have to be fully qualified.5. A suitable space would have to be found. This would require running water as well as toilets. The crèche would have to be close to the store entrance but due to noise levels it should be kept separate from the main store.6. The pany would be required to ensure adequate insurance.7. Many rival stores in the neighbourhood are offering crèche facilities.__IONSA crèche would be popular and well-used if we decided to go ahead with this.____SI suggest that the pany should give further consideration to offering a crèche and investigate the financial aspects that would be involved.Sally TurnerCustomer Service ExecutiveLC/ST (归档号)20 April 2023(日期)分析: 这篇report非常简洁清晰,没有多余的词句。

剑桥商务英语中级写作范文剑桥商务英语中级（BEC Vantage）是一种流行的商务英语考试，是许多国家的企业、学校和机构选择的一种认可的英语语言技能测试。

BEC Vantage 要求 Test takers 完成听力、阅读、写作任务和口语任务四项能力，针对商务实践中的实际应用，考验学生的商务英语水平。

下面，我们将分享几篇商务英语中级写作范文，以帮助那些正在准备BEC Vantage考试的学生提高他们的写作技巧。

1. 商务报告题目：如何解决部门间的沟通及协调问题由于每个团队都有独立的目标和分工，企业中的部门之间存在沟通和协调的问题。

下面的商务报告提供了一些有针对性的解决方案。

尊敬的总经理，这是有关如何解决部门间沟通协调问题的报告，为此我们对公司内的不同部门进行了调查。

以下是我们提出的解决方案：1. 采用线上沟通工具。

公司可以投入更多的资金来购买顶尖的在线工具，与此同时也需要给员工提供更好的网络学习资源，引导他们熟练使用这些工具。

这将极大地改善部门间的沟通效果。

2. 加强部门间的协调。

建议企业设立一个协调员，次要任务是在所有部门之间协调与促进沟通。

这位协调员将负责收集所有部门之间的信息，并与相关部门进行沟通，从而更好地协调业务。

3. 资源共享。

每个部门通常都有自己的资源，需要考虑是否可以共享这些资源，以节约成本和提高效率。

每个部门的领导人必须确定资源共享的准则，以确保共享的资源不与部门的其他职责冲突。

通过采用这些方法和策略，我们可以解决企业中部门间的沟通和协调问题，提高公司的商业运营效率，减轻压力并改善员工效率。

2. 商务信函题目：感谢信在商业领域，感谢信是非常常见的一种信函，通常用于表达谢意，或者展示感恩之心。

下面是一封感谢客户的信，可以作为商务信函范文学习。

尊敬的XXX：感谢您对我们商业改进的帮助和支持。

正是由于您的信任和支持，我们的公司在过去的几年里得以茁壮成长，获得了良好的市场份额，并将业务延伸到了全球多个国家和地区。

BEC商务英语初级写作精选范文BEC商务英语初级写作精选范文精选3篇（一）Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to apply for the position of Sales Assistant at your company, as advertised on your website. I have recently graduated from university with a degree in Business Administration and I am excited to start my career in the field of sales.During my time at university, I gained valuable skills and knowledge in sales and marketing through my coursework and internships. I have a strong understanding of the sales process, including prospecting, qualifying leads, making sales presentations, and closing deals. I am also highly proficient in using CRM software to manage customer relationships and track sales activities.In addition to my academic qualifications, I have excellent communication and interpersonal skills. I am confident in my ability to build rapport with customers and effectively communicate the features and benefits of products or services. I am also a highly motivated and results-oriented individual, and I thrive in fast-paced and competitive environments.I believe that my skills and qualifications make me a strong fit for the Sales Assistant position at your company. I am confident that I can contribute to the success of your sales team and help drive business growth. I am eager to further discuss my qualifications and how I can add value to your organization.Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to interview with you and discuss how my skills and experience align with your company's needs.Sincerely,[Your Name]BEC商务英语初级写作精选范文精选3篇（二）商务英语初级写作范文（1）：询价信Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to inquire about the prices and availability of the products your company offers.I have recently started a small online business and I am interested in purchasing a range of office supplies, including pens, notebooks, and staplers. I would like to know if you have these items in stock and what the current prices are.Could you also provide information on any discounts or deals that may be available for bulk orders? I am looking to purchase a large quantity of these items on a regular basis, so any cost savings would be greatly appreciated.In addition, please let me know what the payment methods are and if there are any additional charges for shipping. I am located in XYZ city and would like to know if you offer delivery to this area.I would be grateful if you could send me a detailed price list along with any necessary order forms or catalogs. This will allow me to assess whether your products meet my requirements and make an informed decision about purchasing from your company.Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon with the requested information.Yours faithfully,[Your Name][Your Company Name][Contact Information]商务英语初级写作范文（2）：感谢信Dear Mr. Johnson,I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for the wonderful service I received during my recent visit to your hotel.From the moment I arrived, the staff at your hotel went above and beyond to ensure that my stay was comfortable and enjoyable. The receptionist was warm and welcoming, and the concierge was incredibly helpful in providing recommendations for local attractions and restaurants.The housekeeping staff did an excellent job of keeping my room clean and well-stocked, and the restaurant staff provided prompt and attentive service during breakfast and dinner.I was particularly impressed with the level of professionalism displayed by your staff. They were always courteous and willing to assist with any request I had. It is clear that you have a well-trained and dedicated team working at your establishment.I would like to commend your hotel for its high standards of service and hospitality. It was truly a pleasure to stay at your establishment, and I will definitely recommend it to friends and colleagues who plan on visiting the area.Once again, thank you for providing such a positive experience. I look forward to staying at your hotel again in the future.Yours sincerely,[Your Name][Your Company Name][Contact Information]商务英语初级写作范文（3）：申请信Dear Hiring Manager,I am writing to apply for the position of Marketing Assistant advertised on your company's website.I recently graduated with a Bachelor's degree in Business Administration, with a focus on Marketing. During my time at university, I completed internships at twodifferent marketing agencies, where I gained practical experience in market research, campaign development, and social media management.I am particularly interested in working for your company because of its strong reputation in the industry and its commitment to innovation. I believe that my creativity and attention to detail would make me an asset to your marketing team.In addition to my academic and professional experience, I am also proficient in a range of marketing software, including Adobe Creative Cloud and Google Analytics. I am a fast learner and have the ability to quickly adapt to new technologies and tools.I am confident that my skills and qualifications make me a strong candidate for this position. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my experience aligns with your company's needs in more detail.Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of working with you in the future.Yours sincerely,[Your Name][Contact Information]BEC商务英语初级写作精选范文精选3篇（三）A Letter of RecommendationFebruary 15, 2022To Whom It May Concern,Re: Recommendation for Ms. Emily ThompsonI am writing to highly recommend Ms. Emily Thompson for any position or opportunity she may seek. I have had the pleasure of working closely with Emily for the past two years, and her dedication, professionalism, and strong work ethic have truly impressed me.Emily joined our company as a marketing assistant, and from the start, she demonstrated exceptional skills and qualities that set her apart from her peers. She has a keen understanding of marketing strategies and is always up-to-date with the latest industry trends. Her ability to analyze market data and identify key insights has greatly contributed to the success of our marketing campaigns.What truly sets Emily apart is her creativity and attention to detail. She has consistently delivered innovative and engaging content for our social media platforms and website. Her writing skills are exceptional, and she has a talent for capturing the attention of our target audience. In addition, she has successfully managed several high-profile projects, consistently meeting deadlines and exceeding expectations.Emily is not only a talented professional but also a great team player. She is always willing to lend a helping hand and collaborate with others to achieve common goals. Her positive attitude and strong communication skills have helped foster a productive and harmonious work environment.Throughout my time working with Emily, I have been consistently impressed by her ability to handle challenging situations with grace and composure. She is a quick thinker and is able to adapt to changing circumstances effortlessly. Her problem-solving skills are top-notch, and she always approaches obstacles with a proactive attitude.In summary, I wholeheartedly recommend Emily Thompson for any position or opportunity she may seek. She is a highly skilled and dedicated individual, and her contribution to our company has been invaluable. I am confident that she will bring the same level of professionalism and success to any endeavor she undertakes.Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information or clarification regarding Emily's qualifications and abilities.Yours sincerely,John DavisMarketing Manager。

ＢＥＣ中级商务报告写作1. 什么是商务报告商务报告是指针对某种特殊的、有意义的商务目的，向一个人或多个人提供的公正、客观和有计划的事实陈述。

报告中所陈述的事实必须与事件、条件、质量、进展、结果、问题或提议的解决方案有关，帮助当事人了解复杂的商业情况，计划进程，解决问题，使上级领导就一系列事件做出决策。

通常是根据上司的要求，由下级向上级呈报。

2. 商务报告种类事件调查报告（Investigative Reports）意见调查报告（Survey Reports）年度报告（Annual Report）、月度报告（Monthly Reports）、周报告（Weekly Reports）进展报告（Progress Reports）市场调查报告（Market Research Reports）可行性研究报告（Feasibility Reports）。

3. 商务英语报告写作的总体原则内容准确无误（Accurate）、简明扼要（Brief），结构清晰（Clear），建议明确果断（Decisive），故简称ABCD原则。

具体内容如下：内容准确无误：报告的正确性不仅仅是指英语语法、标点符号和拼写，更重要的是其内容要叙述的正确。

报告的事实陈述部分既不能因哗众取宠而夸大其词，也不能因其涉及的令人不愉快的消息而低调陈述。

实事求是、准确无误是报告写作的重要原则。

·内容简明扼要：报告的长短一般取决于报告的内容及其正式程度。

正式报告篇幅一般较长，而非正式报告则较短。

不论何种报告，报告的语言必须简洁、流畅，切忌陈词滥调。

一份拖沓冗长的报告不仅写时费力，对方阅读更浪费时间。

撰写商务英语报告时要尽量避免罗嗦，用尽可能较少的文字，完整、清楚地表达需要表达的意。

结构清晰明了：用数字、符号标明段落、层次、要点等，加强逻辑性，使读者一目了然。

建议明确果断：多数报告都有结论和建议部分，是报告的核心。

撰写时，应确保报告的结论和建议是经过充分论证而得出的，而且应明确果断，切忌模棱两可。