新高考概要写作模拟试题汇编答案
Writing 1
文章首先介绍了基因工程的好处。最后一段说明了一些不同的观点。在概要写作时,以自然段为概括的基础。
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Gene technology is now a hot topic worldwide. (要点1)It can help people cure deadly diseases and allow them to live a happier and longer life with better economic conditions.(要点2) Gene technology also makes it possible for people with genetic diseases to give birth to healthy babies.(要点3) However, some people are concerned that gene technology will be largely used in human cloning while others don't see it as a problem.(要点4)
Writing 2
文章主要是关于澳大利亚饮食的多元化现象。本文段落比较分散,但是其中心主旨还是很明确的。阅读时注意几个相关中心的把握。
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Various choices of food from around the world are available in a typical inner city in Australia. (要点1)Different cultural influences contribute to Australian foods.(要点2)But some Australian families may restrict their diet to meat and three veg while most enjoy its variety.(要点3)Though Chinese dishes are easy to get in Australia, Australians have their own special dishes:meat pie and desserts.(要点4)
Writing 3
本文是说明文,介绍了台风“天免”对广东造成的破坏。概括时要注意要点,要照顾到台风破坏的各个主要方面。因为涉及并列信息的叙述,因此要注意概写的句子之间的顺畅连接。
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Typhoon Usagi struck China's Guangdong Province just after the Mid-Autumn Festival, causing at least 25 deaths.(要点1) In addition to having damaged many houses, it also stopped traffic and transports and even some cars were blown off the road. (要点2)What's worse, electricity and water supply were cut off, and it also kept fishermen onshore and students off school. (要点3)All beaches in the province have been closed. (要点4)
Writing 4
文章论述了中国人学英语时的问题,并提出了学好英语的方法。文章结构清楚,只要读懂文章,并能根据自然段进行段落归纳,就可提炼出优秀的概要。
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Caused by their fear and way of learning, many Chinese students cannot speak English fluently even after ten years' learning.(要点1)Actually we should learn to speak English as a child learns his native language by listening and repeating a lot.(要点2)And teachers should praise and encourage students rather than criticize them, just as parents do.(要点3)Finally, having good self-esteem is of vital importance in speaking English.(要点4)
Writing 5
文章论述了大学只重视学生考试分数的种种弊端。
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Colleges are too dependent on tests in admitting their new students. (要点1) Nevertheless, these tests, in which students can get high scores by taking extra pre-classes or medicine, cannot guarantee them a rosy future. (要点2) Besides, these tests are not able to give an accurate picture of students' full potential. (要点3) Therefore, to make sure they can get all-round top graduates, colleges should take their students' academic track into consideration. (要点4)
Writing 6
这是一篇科普文章,文章认为淋浴会增加一个人的创造力,并给出了很多调查的实证资料。文章信息比较多,有很多背景信息和分支补充信息,而且自然段落也比较多。因此阅读时一定要仔细,理出其中的关键信息。
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Showering is of great benefit to our mind.(要点1) It is found that relaxation in the shower helps raise the level of dopamine and bring new ideas. (要点2) Showering can also provide a new, unexpected and fresh experience that can make it possible to stop thinking about what we are stuck with, resulting in positive changes in thinking. (要点3) So if you want to have a change and make new ideas, go for a shower. (要点4)
Writing 7
本文指出了学生考前压力产生的原因以及克服的办法。文章包含的信息较多,概括时一定要理清重点信息,把握要点,不要被分支信息分散了注意力。本文的要点信息较多,写概要时要全部包含,不要漏掉信息。
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Most students will experience stress during examination periods. (要点1)To overcome it, students should make a good preparation ahead of time. (要点2) Besides, understanding what you are learning instead of just memorizing it matters greatly. (要点3) Learning to relax properly before exams is of benefit.(要点4) It is wise not to learn anything new and talk with classmates about what they have studied or how much they have studied. (要点5)Clever methods during the exams,such as completing easy questions first, also count in dealing with anxieties. (要点6)
Writing 8
本文主要介绍的data对于我们的影响。
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Data brings ease and comfort to one's life and seems reliable, so many people only trust data while judging things. However, if people rely too much on data, they become narrow-minded. Firstly, data is not the whole truth. Besides, wrong data may prevent them from making a good judgment. Lastly, many things in life like emotions can never be measured by data. All in all data is not enough to describe the wonderful world.
