“批改网”句子修改案例

批改网使用说明
1、注册账号：浏览器输入网址，点击“学生注册”，按要求填写信息，获取账号密码，请填写真实中文姓名、学号,否则成绩作废。

2、加入班级：账号密码登录后，点击“班级”，搜索班级号加入班级，班级号：C；
3、写作答题：登录后显示以下界面，写作任务（作业）可通过以下3个地方找到。

4、选择一篇作文，在答题框里输入或粘贴作文内容再点击【提交作文】，即可成功将作文提交。

提交作文后，系统会自动对作文进行分析并给出批改结果。

同学可根据按句点评进行词汇学习，并再次将优化后的作文提交。

5、点击学生首页的题库作文，进入到【题库作文】界面，可以选择各种题型进行写作训练或测试。

6【自测作文】满足学生在题目自拟的前提下，提交开放性的作文；
7、学生在提交作文后，可以通过3种方式继续完善和修改自己的作文；
（1）在答题列表中找到要修改的作文,在学生作文后方的操作区，点击【完善】即可进入答题页面，对作文重新进行修改；
（2）学生点击要修改的作文题目，在作文分数的后方选择【继续完善】，对作文做出修改；
（3）学生点击要修改的作文题目，在按句点评模块中，点击每一句的句末【修改】按钮，实现逐句修改：
8、查看修改轨迹
学生查看某一篇作文的修改轨迹有如下方式：
作文详情页面查看：学生可以查看修改轨迹，找到学生作文模块下方的【提交次数】，点击提交次数就可以看到学生的修改轨迹；
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英语批改网范文English:In today's digital age, the internet has become an integral part of our daily lives. From communication and research to entertainment and shopping, the internet has changed the way we live and interact with the world. While the internet provides countless benefits, it also brings about certain challenges and risks, especially for young people. One major concern is the issue of online privacy and security. With the abundance of personal information shared online, there is an increased risk of identity theft, cyberbullying, and other forms of exploitation. Additionally, the internet can also be a breeding ground for misinformation and harmful content, leading to potential harm to young and impressionable minds. Therefore, it is crucial for parents, educators, and policymakers to prioritize the education and awareness of online safety for young people.中文翻译:在当今数字时代，互联网已成为我们日常生活的重要组成部分。

基于句酷批改网的高中英语写作中式英语现象探究作者：苗启慧来源：《学校教育研究》2020年第21期一、引言中英文化的差异会直接影响高中生的中英文写作的差异。

要想提高英文写作能力，必须了解这种差异，在写作时运用英语思维方式的遣词造句以及合乎逻辑的篇章布局，写出地道的英语作文。

在锻炼和提高学生英语写作能力方面，一线教师进行了很多尝试，也进行了相关的研究，但是大部分都是侧重课堂讲练教学，课下批改订正，耗时较长，无法将作文批改建议及时反馈给学生，也没有将写作教学与现代网络技术进行有效结合。

随着互联网的发展，批改网在线写作批改系统应运而生，相比于传统的纸笔写作练习、批改，批改网有其与众不同之处。

句酷批改网系统（）是基于語料库和云计算技术的辅助教师批改英语作文的自动在线批改服务系统，批改反馈及时且能给学生提供相关语言知识的学习运用技巧，极大地提高了写作批改的效率。

基于此，笔者利用批改网系统就山西省“十三五”规划课题第6至8期作文反馈进行了课堂教学。

二、基于批改网的高中英语作文讲评课案例分析笔者任教的高一年级某班的一节以批改网第6-8期同题写作为例，探讨高中英语写作中式英语现象以及批改网在高中英语写作教学中的具体应用。

（一）课例背景本节课的内容是山西省“十三五”规划课题第6至6期同题作文。

通过批改网横向和纵向对学生英语作文的的问题反馈，分析中式英语对学生写作的影响。

（二）教学目标及学情分析语言可以被分成不同层次。

篇章则是高于句子、意群但低于话语的一个语言层次。

语言篇章的结构性和意义逻辑性是篇章构成的基础。

而篇章的结构性主要体现在篇章的站粘性和连贯性两个方面。

中国高中生在练习英文写作的时候，受“形散神不散”的中文影响，在用词搭配、句子结构、逻辑等方面缺乏一定的英式思维，出现看似合理，实则不地道的中式英语。

（三）教学流程1.导入学生在线提交修改后的作文后，批改网及时给出了分数和反馈意见。

鉴于批改网独特的评价功能，首先以学生典型的中式英语例子导入主题。

网上英文作文批改1. I love traveling. It's like a breath of fresh air, a chance to escape from the routine of everyday life. Whether it's exploring a new city or hiking in the mountains,there's always something exciting and different to discover. Traveling opens my eyes to new cultures, foods, and experiences. It's a way to break free from the monotony and see the world in a whole new light.2. Food is one of my greatest passions. I love trying new cuisines and experimenting with different flavors. From spicy Thai curries to delicate French pastries, there's always something delicious to savor. Food brings people together and creates a sense of community. It's a way to connect with others and learn about different cultures. Plus, who can resist the joy of a perfectly cooked meal?3. Music is my escape. It has the power to transport me to another world, to make me forget about my worries andjust enjoy the moment. Whether it's a catchy pop song or asoulful ballad, music has the ability to evoke emotions and bring people together. It's a universal language that transcends barriers and connects people from all walks of life. When I'm feeling down, a good song can always lift my spirits and remind me that I'm not alone.4. Nature is my sanctuary. There's something so calming and rejuvenating about being surrounded by trees, mountains, and water. Whether it's a hike in the woods or a walk along the beach, nature has a way of grounding me and putting things into perspective. It reminds me of the beauty and power of the natural world and helps me appreciate the simple things in life. Plus, there's nothing quite like the feeling of fresh air filling your lungs and the sun warming your skin.5. Books are my escape into another world. They havethe power to transport me to different times and places, to introduce me to new characters and ideas. Whether it's a thrilling mystery or a thought-provoking novel, books have the ability to expand my imagination and challenge my perspective. They allow me to see the world through someoneelse's eyes and gain a deeper understanding of the human experience. Plus, there's nothing quite like the feeling of getting lost in a good book and forgetting about the world around you.6. Sports are my passion. Whether it's playing soccer with friends or watching a basketball game, sports bring out my competitive side and give me a sense of camaraderie. They teach me the value of teamwork, perseverance, and dedication. Sports also provide a much-needed release from the stresses of everyday life. When I'm on the field or court, I can forget about everything else and just focus on the game. It's a way to push myself physically and mentally and feel a sense of accomplishment.7. Art is my way of expressing myself. Whether it's painting, drawing, or photography, art allows me to communicate my thoughts and emotions in a visual way. It's a form of therapy and self-expression. Art also has the power to inspire and provoke thought. It can challenge societal norms and push boundaries. It's a way to make a statement and leave a lasting impact on the world.8. Friends and family are my support system. They are always there for me, offering a listening ear and a shoulder to lean on. They provide a sense of belonging and unconditional love. Spending time with loved ones brings me joy and reminds me of what truly matters in life. They are my biggest cheerleaders and keep me grounded. Without them, life would be a lot less meaningful and fulfilling.9. Learning is my lifelong pursuit. Whether it's studying a new language or diving into a new subject, I believe in the power of knowledge. Learning keeps my mind sharp and opens up new opportunities. It allows me to grow and develop as a person. Plus, there's a certain satisfaction that comes from mastering a new skill or understanding a complex concept. Learning is a never-ending journey that keeps life interesting and fulfilling.10. Life is a beautiful adventure. It's full of ups and downs, twists and turns. It's about embracing the unknown and taking risks. It's about finding joy in the little things and cherishing the moments that matter. Life isabout growth, learning, and making a positive impact on the world. It's about finding what sets your soul on fire and pursuing it with all your heart. Life is too short to be anything but happy. So, let's make the most of it and live each day to the fullest.。

whereas意思是然而…，是四六级经典转换话题类词汇take into account意为把…考虑进去,属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！A case in point is［高分短语］意为：一个恰当的例子，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！[高分短语] cope with意为：对付…，妥善处理,属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！[高分短语] once for all意为：一劳永逸地,属于四六级经典高分短语,用得很棒！比如take into account（我不觉得它很牛的样子）、heart and soul，play an role in等等.［高分句型］that is the reason why的意思是原因是，是四六级经典句型。

referring tonot hesitate toGive priority to给===优先权Recently,a heated debate arose online in China about the ”Chinese style of crossing the road”, a term referring to the tendency of large crowds of people to cross roads in disobedience of red lights。

Puzzle out苦思，puzzle overBe short of 缺乏.。

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attach great importance to高度重视［高分词汇］ important的近义表达有 crucial/essential。

[高分短语］ may as well意为：最好，不妨,属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！[高分词组] what's more意思是另外,而且…,是四六级经典补充类词组。

［高分句型] There is no denying that意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型.［高分句型] It is conceivable that意思是可想而知的.。

英语作文练习批改网【篇一：批改网高分句型】we may as well cut across the playground.我们不妨从运动场上横穿过去。

[高分句型] it pays to 意为：...是值得的。

属于四六级经典高分句型，用得很棒！it pays tohelp others.帮助别人是值得的。

[高分表达] 高分词组，not to mention意为“更不用说/别提??”，同意表达有to say nothing of、not to speak of。

[高分表达] 高分词组，be of接名词用来说明句子的主语所具有的性质或特征。

though time is of the essence, it pays to spendsome to make our work better. 高分短语] contribute to意思是对某事有帮助，有贡献；有助于做某事?，是四六级经典短语。

[高分短语] stay up late意思是熬夜，是四六级经典短语。

many retired people can still contribute to the society withtheir rich experience .许多退休的老人还能用他们丰富的经验为社会作贡献。

好评报错[高分短语] on no account 意为：决不，属于四六级经典高分短语，用得很棒！ young people should on no account neglect their daily physical exercises. 青年人决不应疏忽每天的体育锻炼。

好评报错[高分句型] on no account can意思是...绝对不能...，是四六级经典句型。

on no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

好评报错there is no denying that意思是不可否认的，是四六级经典句型。

批改网闪光短句1.English1 不离题2 不累赘.3 较多的使用复杂结构的句子.4 灵活运用定语重句. 强调结构、还有能加强语气，语势的连词.比如：so 。

that 。

. ,however。

等等.5 再高级点的.用谚语，美国俚语.比如常用的"where there is a will ,there is a way （翻译为有志者，事竞成）".这些可以让你的文章"闪光！"还有.最重要的.高考作文的批改原则是 3个小错误扣 1 分.比如拼写.单复数.大错误就是语法.但是：如果你是因为为了"使用较复杂的结构，才导致句子出现问题的"---会被看成是高级错误.老师 100% 会体谅你的.基本上可以忽略不记的哦！.2.修改作文的方法有哪几种修改作文的方法：1、调。

文章的修改，应本着先整体后局部，先大处后小处，先思路后材料，先内容后形式的顺序进行，而不要一下笔就被一些细枝末节牵制了注意力，如同雕塑、绘画，总是先有一个大体的轮廊，才去逐步细化，文章的修改亦如此。

又好比带兵打仗，先要调兵遣将，排兵布局。

所以修改的第一步，是要通过“调”使整篇文章的线索清楚、层次分明、结构合理，之后再进行段内的梳理。

通过“调“，使散乱的变得集中，混乱的变得清楚，上下不衔接的变得连贯。

2、补。

“补”主要是通过对疏漏、残缺之处加以补充，使文章更加全面完整。

比如议论文，在阐述某个观点时，是否只分析了事物的正面、主流、成绩和长处，而没有辩证地看到其反面、支流、问题和短处，是否只有前因而无后果，只有伏笔而无照应，是否只见材料不见观点，是否有必要的中心句、点题句。

同时，在修改时要注意用一些必要的过渡词，如“总之”、“因此”、“总而言之”、“反之”、“既然……那么……”、“不仅……而且……”，注意用一些过渡的短语。

如“一言以蔽之”、“综上所述”，用一些过渡的句子或语段。

这些必要的过渡，将使文章更加完整而严谨。

批改网英语作文高分句型英文回答：1. Introduction.The purpose of this essay is to analyze the different strategies that can be employed to improve one's writing skills. By examining the various techniques available, individuals can develop a comprehensive approach to enhance their communication abilities.2. Techniques for Improving Writing Skills.a. Active Reading:Engaging in active reading involves paying close attention to the text, identifying key points, and actively questioning the material. By critically engaging with the written word, individuals can develop a deeper understanding of the content and improve theircomprehension skills.b. Regular Writing Practice:Consistent writing practice is crucial for improving writing skills. By regularly expressing oneself through written communication, individuals can refine their ability to organize their thoughts, convey ideas clearly, and develop a unique writing style.c. Study of Grammar and Vocabulary:A thorough understanding of grammar and vocabulary is essential for effective writing. By mastering the rules of language and expanding their vocabulary, individuals can construct grammatically correct sentences, use precise language, and enhance the overall quality of their writing.d. Feedback and Critique:Seeking feedback from others and engaging in self-critique can provide invaluable insights into areas forimprovement. By receiving constructive criticism and analyzing their own writing, individuals can identify weaknesses and develop strategies for addressing them.e. Immersion in Literature:Immersion in great literature exposes individuals to a variety of writing styles, techniques, and perspectives. By carefully studying literary works, readers can learn from the masters and incorporate effective elements into their own writing.3. Conclusion.By utilizing a combination of these techniques, individuals can effectively improve their writing skills. Active reading, regular practice, a strong foundation in grammar and vocabulary, constructive feedback, and immersion in literature contribute to the development of effective communication abilities.4. Personal Experience.As a language learner, I have utilized these strategies to enhance my own writing skills. Through active reading, I have improved my comprehension and identified writing techniques used by proficient writers. Regular writing practice has enabled me to develop fluency and clarity inmy writing.Seeking feedback from native speakers and engaging in self-critique have helped me identify areas for improvement and refine my writing style. Immersion in Englishliterature has provided me with models of effective communication and inspired me to incorporate various techniques into my own writing.中文回答：1. 引言。

批改网提分路（第二章）很早以前就允诺自己要达到批改网目前我见到的最高分，本次得尝己愿，写下这个“第二章”。

虽然心里有点怨念——第一章没有怎么得到大家的支持，回帖什么的都很少，虽然我不是很在意这个，但是这毕竟是我的心血，不管对大家的作用大小，但毕竟我是带着诚意帮大家写下这个，现在姑且称为经验吧。

首先希望大家已经看过了第一章，因为我在这章不会说上一章已经说过的经验。

首先问大家第一次接触句酷修改网（不是其他修改网）是自己主动找到的还是老师布置作文，告诉你们的。

大多数应该是后者吧。

其实，笔者越接触批改网，对其的反感和厌恶之情也就越深。

作为一个喜欢人工智能和微电自控技术但又同时深深受教育于中华文学的人，笔者本身就是矛盾的。

因为一方面甚至语言的美丑优劣只有视角、立场和区域的不同，没有绝对高下之分，在第一章中笔者就已经说明过，电子批改的基本算法是不堪我们这些充满“创造力”的考生折磨的，了解了打分的模式，每次按照这个结构出牌，分数一般就恒在一水平线上。

没错，笔者认为按照笔者的方法，这个线大概是88-98. 那么，接下来的这个问题就很重要了——你是主要是想要高分数还是英语写作能力的提高？笔者之所以这么问，第一是因为；前面已经说了，（这里用一点计算机方面的知识），你可以把批改网想象成一个有固定接口和固定处理程式的机器，即使每次你输入的是差不多的一些句型，一些其实不是很恰当但是“高级”的词汇，并用上一些小技巧（后文会说），你就能得到高分数。

而这，是根本对于提高你的英语实力无益的。

注意，这里说的是对整个过程无益，也许你考四六级、考研时用上应付批改网的这类技巧，拿到了高分，但那只是类似于一个随机结果，通过测试你面对真实英语写作实际时所展现的能力的水平线来看，你还是处在一个不高的水平上。

说到这个可能你会感到笔者的语言展现已经有些不清晰了那么我用具体的测试来说明下：笔者通过对批改网的测试，有这些样例：VOA原文，考研范文，GRE黄金200句（Issue）等，几乎都有不下5个的错误和成片的黄色警告，中式英语和句式错误让我情何以堪……面对这些纯正地道的英语批改网往往给出80分左右的评价，这不禁让笔者想起了“庸医害一人，庸师误一群”，反观之，高考满分作文和四级高分作文就好很多，大概85上下。

批改⽹得⾼分的句⼦1. 句酷批改⽹认定的加分表达有哪些第⼀，批改⽹说明的中式英语等可能就是它的语料库本⾝不完善，很多好句型可以去如：British National Corpus去找。

⼤家为了分数的话还是要改，只不过不能在⼤脑⾥留下“这个表达是中式英语，以后不能再⽤”的想法，你可以多⽅查证，我聚个⾮常简单的例⼦： learn knowledge就是中式英语，应该⽤obtain,get等，这些就需要你去查证，也许批改⽹会报错第⼆，很多错误，如时态，单复数，代词指代等，作为⼀个了解电⼦评改基础算法的⼈我可以说，能查出语⾔的各种细节的机器和软件的制造难度不亚于完美的机器翻译和⼈⼯智能通过图灵测试。

所以你拿了⾼分，很可能在英语考级或者TOEFL等实⼒测试中因为各种基础错误连篇⽽败得很惨。

第三，因为写作思维的不同，我们的很多表达只能被中国⼈理解，但电脑就认为是中式英语，然后你再改，⼜是中式英语表达，但是假设通过了（这个很容易），可是它还是中式英语。

相反，很多优美的句⼦，也许来⾃著名的英语母语的作家，或者就来⾃读者（-，-不是中国的），但是这句在语料库中出现很少（经过测试），批改⽹的评分⼗分缺乏理解美⽂美句的能⼒。

⽐如你写⼀篇中⽂作⽂，有那么⼏句如泣如诉，恍若天成，那么这篇作⽂可能因为这句话⽽上⼏个等级，但是在电脑看来，这种感性的“感觉”不会存在，最多是，判断⼀句，然后做出“很好”然后在判断⼀句“⼀般”，再判断“好”，你的那句有着修辞⽤法的句⼦即使没有被误判为有错误，那么最多给你的作⽂增加0.5-1分。

写到这⾥，笔者觉察到似乎写得不是很有头绪，也许是因为经验，即使是条例化的经验也是包含在感觉中的，更何况我好似⼀直在批判……那么，以上的总结可以姑且概括为——如果你需要提⾼分数或者只要分数，那么往下看，如果你认为你只希望提⾼能⼒，那么下⾯你就参考参考，⼀直⽤，你的分数⾼了，能⼒却不会有什么上升。

为了更清楚，我决定分条写，但这样的弊端是相互间联系很⼩了：先说总体提分，再说具体：1. 改的次数。