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姓名，年级：时间：[技法指导]本单元的写作要求是奇幻故事.奇幻故事就是根据材料或者自己的想象，确定好故事的主题,确定好主要人物和次要人物，设计好高潮和结尾,把故事情节描述完整.此类作文要做到: 1．要发挥想象力。
2．语言比较夸张，为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动，富有虚幻性。
3．句子结构多以主动语态、陈述句式为主。
4．奇幻故事通常是发生在过去,因此应以一般过去时为主。
黄金表达1．奇幻故事的开端①Once upon a time， there lived a king。
很久以前，有一位国王。
②Long long ago, there lived a king.很久很久以前，有一位国王。
2．奇幻故事的发展和高潮①The ring suddenly began to speak，which made the brave young man very amazed.戒指突然开始说话了，这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很惊异。
②No one liked to talk to Wilb ur， a weak pig, except a spider named Charlotte，who treated Wilbur as her good friend。
除了蜘蛛夏洛特,没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪韦尔伯说话,夏洛特把韦尔伯当作她的好朋友.③In 2146， we are flying in the air, conveying signals through our minds。
在2146年,我们在空中飞翔，用意识传递信息。
3．奇幻故事的结局They finally defeated the evil witch, living a happy life.他们最终战胜了邪恶的女巫,过上了幸福的生活。
［写作规范]［题目要求]请以“A Magic Ring”为题，充分发挥想象力,写一篇奇幻性质的小故事。
注意：词数100左右。
姓名，年级：时间：The very first recorded literary works in history were fantasy：Homer’s Odyssey,The Book of a Thousand Nights and a Night and countless others.Modernliterature forms are based on them。
Fantasy is particularly the only form of literature that has no clear boundaries between adult fiction and children’s fiction。
Lewis Garroll’s books Alice's Adventures in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass，for instance，were published over 100 years ago。
The books were in fact written for a child-the original Alice，who was the daughter of a friend of Carroll’s.However，they are just as often read by adults looking for an escape back to a simple time。
A more modern example is J．K。
Rowling’s Harry Potter series，which have caused a revolution in the publishing world。
While these again are aimed at a youth market，they have become a fashion for people of all ages.Recently，fantasy has enjoyed popularity（流行)．The main reason for the popularity is the success of The Lord of the Rings series of films.Fantasy novel sales have benefited from social change，with the original The Lord of the Rings novels,the Harry Potter series becoming a force on bestseller lists.Even more recently，a work of historical fantasy，Dan Brown’s The Da Vinci Code，has caught the imagination of the world.The novel was on top of The New York Times’ hardcover fiction bestseller list on April 11,2005。
Section ⅣWriting建议类的电子邮件建议类的电子邮件就是在邮件中向收件人提出建议和忠告。
1.先要明确写给谁。
写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的建议和看法。
写给某个组织机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议和忠告。
2.邮件内容的安排：(1)发邮件的原因和背景；(2)建议的内容及提出建议的理由；(3)对收件人的祝福和祝愿。
3.要用简练的语言。
电子邮件要写得简明扼要，具有合理性和说服力，同时注意说话的语气要委婉。
假如你叫李明，有一位来自英国的朋友Mike。
他与父母一道来到了中国。
初来乍到，他发现自己在家时所学的汉语根本就不够用。
因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。
请根据下面的提示，给他回一封邮件。
邮件的内容包含如下要点：1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。
2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，应尽可能用汉语与同学交流，不要担心犯错误；在家看电视时，多注意节目主持人(presenter)的发音，以便提高听力水平。
3.祝愿他学习取得进步。
注意：1.内容应包括以上要点，可适当增加细节，以使内容连贯；2.词数100左右。
[词汇搜索]1.与某人交流communicate with sb2.犯错误make a mistake/mistakes3.注意pay attention to4.取得进步make progress5.最后in conclusion/to conclude[由词连句]1.如果你多说，你的汉语就会更好。
(the＋比较级...，the＋比较级)The more you speak，the better your Chinese will be.2.为了提高你的听力，当你在家看电视时你应该多注意主持人。
(用省略句)In order to improve your listening，you should pay more attention to TV presenters when watching TV at home.3.随着时间的推移，你会取得很大的进步的。
单元加餐练[基础过关卷]Ⅰ.单句语法填空1.The reason why he was absent(absence) from his best friend’s birthday party was that he had to look after his sick mother.2.I hope you can study hard and master as much knowledge as possible，otherwise you’ll have to live a hard life as a consequence.3.All the students are expected to participate in the event actively，which can not only inspire their imagination(imagine) but also offer them a stage to show themselves.4.Please accept my sincere apologies(apologize) for my rude behavior yesterday.5.Many men still can’t imagine their accepting(accept) a woman as a business partner.6.In copying this paper，be careful not to leave out any word.7.The woman will think of her own child every time she sees(see) these little children.8.According to the survey，three in ten drivers have experienced an accident for lack of concentration while driving.9.Children like to show off what they have but others don’t have，which makes them proud.10.As is known to all，China will be an advanced(advance) and powerful country within 20 or 30 years’ time.Ⅱ.单句改错1.Having small talk is a kind of skill that I am lack.去掉am或lack后加of2.I didn’t need go to the bank after all—Mary lent me the money.need后加to3.Every time when I see the old man in the park，he is absorbed in reading papers.去掉when4.In addition to read for knowledge，we read for fun and inspiration.第一个read→reading5.You shouldn’t have shouted to Mary，which you should apologise to her，I think.which前加forⅢ.完成句子1. Make good use of learning resources such as the website and library, and you will make great progress.充分利用像网站、图书馆这样的学习资源，你就会取得很大的进步。
Mary was gifted in writing, always dreaming ofbecoming a writer like J．K. Rowling and writing aseries of novels associated with fantasy toaccumulate a big fortune. Thus she set out to write,but her manuscripts were rejected again and again bypresses. And at one point she was burdened with rent.She began to doubt if writing is beyond her power. Itwas her boyfriend that played an important part in her writing. With his help, Mary made adjustments in time, overcame all kinds of difficulties, and turned to writing love stories. It was not long before her first love story was published and distributed by a press, and her work appealed to thousands of readers. Soon she possessed her own big house, and she never doubted her ability to attain her target.,玛丽在写作上很有天赋，她一直梦想着成为一位像J.K. 罗琳一样的作家，写一系列与幻想有关的小说，积累一大笔财富。
2019年4月Section_ⅣOther_Parts_of_the_Module[原文呈现]The Story of J．K. Rowling and Harry PotterThe elder stateswoman① of British fantasy literature is J．K. Rowling, the gifted② creator of Harry Potter. Joanne Rowling's roots③ are in the southwest of England, where she grew up④. But the idea for Harry Potter came to her⑤while she was on a delayed train⑥ between Manchester and London. She wrote down⑦her ideas on the back of an envelope. She then went to teach English in Portugal, where she continued to add flesh⑧ to the bones of the first Harry Potter story⑨. But her name is forever associated with⑩ Edinburgh in Scotland, where she lived and developed the format⑪for the whole series of seven books⑫.[读文清障]①stateswoman/'steItsˌwʊmən/n.在某一领域受尊敬的女性领导人物②gifted/'gIftId/adj.有天才的，有天赋的③roots/ruːts/n.(喻)根，根基④grow up成长，长大⑤come to sb.此处指“某种观点、念头、想法在某人脑海中出现”。
2019年4月Section_ⅤWriting—_如何写科幻故事科幻故事是开放式作文的一种，一般给出一段材料，要求我们充分发挥想象力来拓展原材料内容，运用逻辑推理的方法，沿着材料的纵横方向延伸，给故事添加开头、结尾或中间过程。
想象必须合理而且内容丰富，要抓住主题，运用恰当的词汇、句型与语句间的连接成分写出连贯的表达，语言要流畅、具有美感。
一、写作流程写科幻故事需要遵循以下步骤：1．仔细审题，确定文章结构科幻故事的写作一般可分为三部分：第一部分为故事的开始；第二部分为故事发展的过程及结果；最后一部分提出故事的教育意义。
2．根据需要确定时态科幻故事通常是发生在过去，因此应以一般过去时为主。
3．筛选词汇科幻故事一般为虚构的故事，要求语言比较夸张，为了吸引读者，故事的语言要生动、富于虚幻性。
二、增分佳句(一)科幻故事的开端1．Once upon a time, there lived a king.很久以前，有一位国王。
2．With science and technology developing, our lives have changed a lot in the 21st century.随着科技的发展，21世纪我们的生活发生了很大改变。
(二)科幻故事的发展和高潮1．The ring suddenly began to speak, which made the brave young man very amazed.戒指突然开始说话了，这使得这位勇敢的年轻人很惊异。
2．No one liked to talk to Wilbur, a weak pig, except a spider named Charlotte, who treated Wilbur as her good friend.除了蜘蛛夏绿蒂，没有人喜欢和身体虚弱的小猪韦尔伯说话，夏绿蒂把韦尔伯当作她的好朋友。
3．In 2146, we are flying in the air, conveying signals through our minds.在2146年，我们在空中飞翔，用意识传递信息。
(三)科幻故事的结局They finally defeated the evil witch, living a happy life.他们最终战胜了邪恶的女巫，过上了幸福的生活。
[题目要求]某英文报社正在举行英文科幻故事大赛，请你根据所给出的故事的开头(不计入总词数)，续写一篇100词左右的科幻小故事参赛。
Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood, wondering and then the ring said, “Young man, a kind girl is trapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put on me and I will help you.”第一步：审题构思很关键一、审题1．确定体裁：科幻故事属记叙文范畴；2．确定人称：主体为第三人称；3．确定时态：以一般过去时为主。
二、构思第一部分为故事的开始。
第二部分为故事发展的过程。
最后一部分提出故事的结果。
第二步：核心词汇想周全1．hesitate_to_do_...犹豫做……2．put_...on 把……戴上3．invisible 看不见的4．head_for 向……走去5．approach 接近，靠近6．put_a_spell_on 用咒符镇住7．with_the_help_of_... 在……的帮助下8．remove 使消失9．together_with 和……一起10．defeat 打败第三步：由词扩句雏形现1．年轻人没有犹豫，戴上了这枚戒指。
(简单句)The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_and_put_the_ring_on_his_finger.2．他吃惊地发现自己消失了，其他人都看不见他。
(that宾语从句)Surprisingly,_he_discovered_that_he_disappeared_and_was_invisible_to_other_people.3．他感到更有自信了，向前面的城堡走去。
(简单句)He_felt_more_confident_and_headed_for_the_castle_ahead.4．一靠近城堡，他就戴上了戒指，进入了城堡。
(as soon as)As_soon_as_he_approached_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring_and_entered_the_castle.5．最终他找到了那个女孩，她被女巫施了魔咒。
(“介词＋关系代词”定语从句)Eventually,_he_found_the_girl,_on_whom_the_witch_had_put_a_spell.6．他了解到除非有人将女巫的魔棒(magical club)毁掉，否则女孩永远不能动。
(unless 条件状语从句)He_learned_that,_unless_someone_destroyed_the_witch's_magical_club,_the_girl_couldn't_ move_forever.7．在戒指的帮助下，他在一个金盒中找到了魔棒。
并成功地将其毁掉，解除了女巫对女孩施的魔咒。
(and连接多个并列动词)With_the_help_of_the_ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box,_destroyed_it_s uccessfully,_and_removed_the_spell_put_on_the_girl_by_the_witch.8．这个年轻人和女孩一起打败了女巫，他们幸福地生活在一起。
(简单句)The_young_man,_together_with_the_girl,_defeated_the_witch,_and_they_lived_a_happy_lif e_together.第四步：句式升级造亮点1．将句1和句2合并成用动词-ing形式作状语的句子The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_to_put_the_ring_on_his_finger,_surprisingly_discovering_t hat_he_disappeared,_invisible_to_other_people.2．用on＋动词-ing形式改写句4On_approaching_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring,_and_entered_the_castle.3．用动词-ing形式作状语改写句7With_the_help_of_the_ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box,_and_destroyed _it_successfully,_thus_removing_the_spell_put_on_the_girl_by_the_witch.第五步：过渡衔接联成篇Once upon a time, a young man was walking through a wood when he saw a shining ring lying on the ground. He just stood, wondering and then the ring said, “Young ma n, a kind girl istrapped by a witch in the castle ahead. If you are brave enough to rescue her, you will gain happiness. Put on me and I will help you.”The_young_man_didn't_hesitate_to_put_the_ring_on_his_finger,_surprisingly_discovering_t hat_he_disappeared,_invisible_to_other_people._He_felt_more_confident_and_headed_for_the_c astle_ahead._On_approaching_the_castle,_he_put_on_the_ring,_and_entered_the_castle._Eventua lly,_he_found_the_girl,_on_whom_the_witch_had_put_a_spell._He_learned_that,_unless_someo ne_destroyed_the_witch's_magical_club,_the_girl_couldn't_move_forever._With_the_help_of_the _ring,_he_found_the_magical_club_in_a_golden_box,_and_destroyed_it_successfully,_thus_rem oving_the_spell_put_on_the_girl_by_the_witch.The_young_man,_together_with_the_girl,_defeated_the_witch,_and_they_lived_a_happy_lif e_together.。
