2020届高考英语二轮复习短文改错学案(浙江专用)

二轮复习短文改错原创试题训练学案假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Peter,As the Internet is developing fast, more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chinese. Here are some examples.One of the most popular words are Dianzan, which is often use when you quite agree with someone. Another example is Renxing. When we say somebody is Renxing, you mean that they will do whatever they liked. The phrase Miaosha first came on online shopping, which means you can complete your shopping orders高中英语试卷第1页，共79页before other. But now it's wide used when you achieve your purpose in very short time. If you will describe somebody as a Tuhao,you mean that he is very rich.You can find lots of such new Chinese words. Keep learning, you'll know more about our language and culture.All the best!Yours,Li Hua 1.______ 2.______ 3.______ 4.______ 5.______ 6.______ 7.______ 8.______ 9.______ 10.______2.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．修改：在错的词下画一横线（________），并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．In my village a lot of children have left school for many different reasorn．Some families are so poor to send their children to school，so their kids have to earn money to support their families．There are also many parents do not think it useless to send their children to school．They prefer to have their children do something else rather than to let them go to school．I feel worried this．I think every children should havethe opportunity to receive education．And it is necessary of Us to care about the children，because one day they will play important part in the construction of our country．So ways must be found to prevent children from leave off their sttldies．3.51.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

浙江省2012高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（65）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；第四节：作文（满分30分）假设你是高中生李华，有感于校园中存在的上课使用手机的行为，请用英语给校长写一封100-120个词的信。

信中应包括以下内容：1.说明写信目的；2.对这种行为进行评论；3.提出建议注意：信的抬头、落款及信的第一句已给出（不计词数）。

Nov.19, 2011Headmaster,I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior3.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your faithfully,Li HuaIn China children are the centre of each family. All parents wish their children, especial senior highespecially students, can go to top universities and have a bright future. So they always expect their children∧ makecouldtofull use of their time to study. They don’t allow them to watch TV, playing computer games or go out toplayplay with their friends .Some students just complained that their parents are only concerned about theircomplaingrade and not their other needs.gradesIn my opinion, our parents are responsible for us. Perhaps they are sometimes too strict to us，but whatwith they are doing is out of nothing but love. The most important thing, I think, is what we should learn tothat communicate with them. Find the right time for the talk, telling them that you’ll never let them downaand will work harder to earn trust or respect from them.and。

第五节代词和介词(短语)考向分析题型一关于代词和介词(短语)的语法填空1．Nervouslyfacingchallenges，IknowIwillwhisperto(I) thetwosimplewords“Beyourself”．(2019·北京)答案myself解析考查代词。

句意为：焦虑不安地面临挑战时，我知道我将轻声对自己说：“做你自己。

”此处whisperto这一动作的发出者和承受者为同一人，宾语要用反身代词。

故填myself。

2．Astudyshowsthestudentswhoareengagedinafter­sch oolactivitiesarehappierthan (that) whoarenot.(2019·天津)答案those解析考查代词。

句意为：一项研究表明，参加课外活动的学生比不参加课外活动的学生更开心。

空格处代词对应thestudents，是复数，故填those。

3．Runningischeap，easyandit’salwaysenergetic.Ifyouaretimepoor，youneedrunforonlyhalfthetimetogetthesamebenefitsasothersports，soperhapsweshouldallgiveatry.(2018·全国Ⅰ)答案running/it解析考查名词或代词。

此处号召我们尝试一下这种运动，因此可以填名词running，也可以用it指代。

givesth.atry尝试一下某事。

4．Whenthegorillas(大猩猩) andIfrightenedeachother，Iwasjustgladtofind(they) alive.(2018·全国Ⅲ)答案them解析考查代词之人称代词。

分析句子结构可知，此处要用代词作find的宾语，故要用人称代词的宾格。

专题四短文改错A(2020·高考全国卷Ⅰ)When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.答案：When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.IthinkthoughtI would be happythere.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in∧the countryside.Therethe air is cleanorandthe mountains are green.Unfortunately，onwiththedevelopment of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a veryseriously serious problem.Theairsairwe breathe in is getting dirtier anddirtier.MuchManyrare animals are dying out.We mustfoundfindways to protectyourour/theenvironment.If we fail to do so，we’ll live to regret it.B(2020·甘肃兰州市高三实战考试)Recently a survey has been done find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. With this survey, two thousands senior middle school students from ten schools in Lanzhou were interviewed. They were asking which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The survey show that more than a half of the students like to read news most. Twenty­six percent of the students say that English stories are his favorite. Only seven percent of the students are mostly interested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students who enjoy read popular science articles doubles that of those which prefer reading articles about learning methods.答案：Recently a survery has been done ∧to find out the reading interests ofsenior middle school students. WithInthis survey, twothousandsthousandseniormiddle school students from ten schools in Lanzhou were interviewed. Theywere askingaskedwhich they liked reading most among the four categories ofEnglish articles: news, stories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods.The surveyshowshowsthat more than a half of the students like to readnews most. Twenty­six percent of the students say that English stories arehis their favorite.Only seven percent of the students are mostly mostinterested in reading articles about learning methods. However, the number of students whoenjoy read reading popular science articles doubles that of those which whoprefer reading articles about learning methods.CMr.Zhang is sixty years old and had retired.He taught our biology when we were in Grade One.He taught very good.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict in us.Each time when we made mistakes in our homework ，he would ask us to correct it.I was poor in biology.He often helps me with my study patiently.With his help I made great progresses.He was very kind to his students.As experienced teacher ，he was respected or loved by all the students.答案：Mr.Zhang is sixty years old and had has retired.He taught our usbiology when we were in Grade One.He taught very good well.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually made good preparations for the lessons and was strict in with us.Each time when we made mistakes in our homework ，he would ask us to correct it them .I was poor in biology.He often helps helpedme with my study patiently.With his help I made greatprogresses progress .He was very kind to hisstudents.As ∧an experienced teacher ，he was respected or andloved by all the students.。

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浙江桐庐县2020高考英语短文改错二轮摸底选练（3）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in schoolfor student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lotsof problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shoppingby us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming inthe pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.【参考答案】4.I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in ∧ schoolfora/the student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lotsof problems in ourstudents at/fromdaily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us . However, we seldom feltourselveslonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on thehelpless would/couldplayground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a bigswimfamily. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when wetreated sincegraduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.短文改错（共10分,每小题1分，满分10分）该自我介绍中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

考法2句法错误语篇出处：2019年全国卷Ⅲ语篇类型：记叙文主题语境：职业梦想1.I'll remember those unforgettable days when we spent together.________________________________________________________________ 答案：when→that/which或去掉when考查定语从句的引导词。

在定语从句中作宾语，所以用关系代词，作宾语也可以省略。

2．There is a large shopping centre in Wangfujing, which you can buy traditional hand-made crafts like paper-cuts.________________________________________________________________ 答案：which→where考查定语从句的引导词。

从句中不缺少主语或宾语，用关系副词引导定语从句。

先行词表示地点，故用where引导该定语从句。

3．To those which are devoted to the cause of education, happiness means the achievements their students made.________________________________________________________________ 答案：which→who考查定语从句的引导词。

先行词是指人的代词those，用who引导定语从句。

4. September 1st is the day where students go back to school after a summer vacation.________________________________________________________________ 答案：where→when考查定语从句的引导词。

第四讲特殊句式-- 祈使句、省略句、强调句、倒装句一、改正下列句子中的唯一错误：1.It is your valuable guidance which has enabled me to go around the city without any trouble.【答案】(强调句）which改为that【解析】句意：正是你的宝贵指导使我毫无困难地游览了这座城市。

句中强调主语"your valuable guidance"。

2.It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike, and he rode it every day.【答案】(强调句）when改为that【解析】句意：正是在一年以前Joshua获得了一辆自行车，并且他天都骑着这辆自行车。

这是一个强调句，句中强调了时间状语"a year ago",故把when改为that。

3.Was it in the lake where Mary was saved by a soldier?【答案】(强调句）where改为that【解析】此处强调的是句子的地点状语"in the lake",是强调句的一般疑问句句型："Was it+被强调部分+that/who+句子的其他部分？”故把where改为that4.It is not how much we learn but how much love we put into what we do which benefits our work most.【答案】(强调句）which改为that【解析】此处表示重要的不是我们学到了多少，而是我们在工作中投入了多少爱对我们的工作最有用。

本句考查强调句，强调句型基本结构：It is/was+被强调部分+that/who+句子的其他部分，本句是对not how much we learn but how much love we put into what we do 的强调，故把which 改为that。

专题二短文改错1、假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：把缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；John is a tall man weighing as much as 100 kilogram.Though he is large，but he fears dogs.One day he was taking walk when a dog suddenly appeared from somewhere.He became so nervous that he ran as fast as he can.The dog kept run after him and it was getting closer.In the danger situation，John decided to climb up a tree to avoid the dog.Unfortunate，it was not an easy job.He hadn't gone up very high when the dog stood right above the tree.The dog jumped up and bit it's teeth into his bottom.John fell right onto the dog's head，that killed it immediately.2、假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

浙江省2020高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（3）第一节：短文改错（满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。

请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Rush buying of salt by worrying shoppers had emptied supermarket shelf in Zhejiang,Guangdong, Jiangxi, Guizhou, Sichuan, Jiangsu and Hubei provinces so well as the cities ofBeijing or Chongqing.The MOC（Chinese Ministry of Commerce）took some measures immediately and was orderedlocal commerce departments to close monitor the market and organize timely distribution ofgoods meet people’s needs, according to the statement.The MOC advised shops and supermarkets to decrease their salt storage ifnecessary andsupply the product in an orderly and balanced way.Also, China Salt had launched （启用）an emergency response mechanism to step upproduction and start a 24-hours distribution program.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）给你的英语老师发一封英文电邮，告诉他你已经被香港科技大学（The Hong Kong University of Science and Technology）大学录取，你想请他再给你一些如何提高听力和口语的建议。