【不得不看】安徽考研如何避免英语作文得低分？
考研想拿高分，必须用正确的姿势打开真题，因为我们在考试中得到的每一分，都来自真题。那么考研真题的正确打开姿势是什么呢？是“从真题中来，到真题中去”。也就是说，要根据真题判断和把握复习的基本内容、重点内容，复习到一定阶段之后，又要回到真题中去，检查自己的复习效果，查漏补缺，继续提高。
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寻寻觅觅，走马观花，你在考研这条路上看了多久？走了多远？你是否还在为它而困扰？你是否发现找到一个心仪的实在太麻烦！其实选择也可以很简单！让小编带你走进考研，来了解些实用干货。
2018硕士研究生入学初试日益临近，很多考生都已经开始把复习的精力转移到比较容易得分的题型上，对于英语来说，最容易提分的部分是写作。很多学生都认为只要考前背诵一些范文和模板就能考出不错的分数，但事实并非如此。历年来考生在使用写作模板这个问题上存在很大误区，容易犯各种错误，使得写作得分较低，影响总体成绩。
新东方在线全国研究生入学考试研究中心考研英语教研室将有代表性的问题归纳如下，并给大家提出了改进的建议，希望考生能在平时的练习中多加注意和运用。
易犯错误一：模板中的句型套用不正确，不完整。
比如：我们在书信结尾的时候会说I am looking forward to hearing from you. 而学生却把这句话写成了I am looked forward to hear from you. 这种现象非常普遍，可见，学生的写作态度并不是很认真，要善于总结固定搭配的用法。
易犯错误二：模板中的句型和实际写作内容不匹配。
比如：有的图画作文第二段要求根据图画所表达的含义进行深层次的论证，而学生套用的句型却是第二段写对比的句型，显然是没有正确理解句型使用的语言背景。再比如：小作文的摘要，是要根据汉语文章归纳出中心内容进行英语写作，这个一般都是客观的描述，而学生却用了一个写图画作文的模板，通篇都是“我”认为，这如何又能得高分呢？
易犯错误三：模板套用千篇一律，没有新意。
再好的模板，如果所有的学生都是用也就变成了一张白纸，没有任何亮点。而这个错误也正是急功近利的学生容易犯的。所以只背诵模板是不行的，新东方在线建议大家一定要在考前总结出一套自己的“模板”，在考场上灵活发挥。
那么针对这些易犯错误，该如何改进，提高写作分数呢？
一、端正心态，保持认真的态度，强化英语基本功
作为一个考生，首先应该有端正的考试心态，答题一定要非常认真仔细，那么对于写作来说，就应该尽量避免我们常说的“低级错误”，比如：拼写错误，单词使用错误。只有在平时注意积累，注意改正自己的错误，才会避免低级错误，才会运用正确的语法结构。
二、重视动笔之前的审题和构思
动笔之前，一定要认真审题和构思，要尽量明确写作的形式，内容。比如，是写书信，还是通过图画表达含义等等，这些要弄明白。然后要注意看写作要求，这一点至关重要。
比如，图画作文的第二段，有的要求用实例证明主题思想，有的要求深化主题，这两个不同的要求所体现出来的具体内容是不一样的，如果没有认真审题的话，见题就写，没有严谨的写作思路，很容易造成跑题、偏题、不符题意的错误，也就不能使模板中的句型和内容相匹配。三、学会活用模板，注重素材的积累，同时要适当加入自己
的内容
我们在初练写作的时候套用模板是正常的事情，也是一个必经的过程，只有先试用别人的
东西，才能学习和积累写作素材。模板要活学活用，不要一字不差地照抄无误，而是要根据自己所要表达的内容进行更改。写作不一定要字字句句都是难词、长句，而是要学会运用一些常见词的常见短语去表达，这样才能真正显示写作的水平。这就要求学生在平时的学习中注意积累常用的短语或者词组，以备写作之用。
另外，关于写作素材，不仅仅指写作常用的词汇，句型或者语法结构，还要包括所用的事例。比如：2001年的写作真题，要求写“爱心”，第二段要求用实例证明主题。有的考生见题就写“我考试面临很大的压力，我的朋友是如何帮助我排解压力的”，这显然就是素材贫乏造成的后果。题目中的“爱心”是指“大爱”，陌生人互帮互助的心态。如果写“汶川地震，希望工程”这类事例，显然非常符合题目要求，而且事例又广为人知，比写“朋友如何帮助我”更生动，更有说服力。因此，在平常的练习中要注意从阅读中积累素材，积累词句，而不要仅仅局限于模板之中。
四、重视日常练习中的作文批改
考生在备考写作时，大多忽视了写作训练，因而不能发现自己经常犯的语法错误，更不能克服提笔不知写什么的问题。虽然有部分同学意识到了作文训练的重要作用，但是面对自已“难产
而生”的文章，怎么看怎么满意，却不知里面充满了基本的语法错误，以及与考研英语写作要求格格不入的内容，所以建议大家一定要重视写作练习后的批改。
新东方在线在这里提醒大家，模板只是给了考生一个写作的思路和框架，但是要想获得高分，就要在框架之上填加自己的内容，把模板变成自己的东西，只有文章中有自己的内容，才能避免被判低分。
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最新2018上海中考英语作文范文预测 2018上海中考英语作文篇1 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 如何学好英语 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions。 First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible.
Don't be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you'll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It's good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries。 In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well。 2018上海中考英语作文篇2 近年来我国的发展世人瞩目，中国的传统文化正越来越受到各国朋友的关注。请根据提示，以"The Spring Festival"为题写一篇短文，向外国朋友介绍我国的春节。 要求：1、字迹工整，规范; 2、80词左右; 3、根据所给要点及参考词汇，可适当发挥。
2018年广州市中考英语作文万能模板（附带近7年中考作文） (1)说明利弊题型 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测) 1．说明事物现状 2．事物本身的优缺点(或一方面) 3．你对现状(或前景)的看法 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has an important role in our daily life. Generally， its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---(A的优点之 一), Besides ---(A的优点之二) But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ---(A的第一个缺点). To make matters worse，---(A 的第二个缺点) Through the above analysis， I believe that the positive aspects over weigh the negative ones. Therefore， I would like to ---(我的看法) (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A， we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way， ---(对前景的预测) (2)：图表作文的框架 _______as is shown by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart)， ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up/increases/drops/decreases)，significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from____ to ____ From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart， it goes without saying that ____. There are at least two good reasons accounting for ____. On one hand， ____. On the other hand，____ is due to the fact that _____. In addition， _____ is responsible for ____.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ____.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned，I hold the point of view that _____. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded。 (3)阐述主题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。 1．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。 2．分析并举例使其更充实。 中考英语作文万能模板：解决方法题型，要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
2018中考英语作文预测范文20篇 1. 沉迷网络游戏 李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up concentrate on be (become)interested in 范文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2. 怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 范文 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English i n class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries. In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. 3. 如何减压让生活更美好 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括: (1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; (2) 我的压力是什么; (3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。 注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数80~100。 范文 Less Pressure, Better Life
【2018-2019】中考英语作文范文带翻译-word范文模板 本文部分内容来自网络，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将予以删除！ == 本文为word格式，下载后可随意编辑修改！ == 中考英语作文范文带翻译 导语：下面YJBYS小编与您分享中考英语作文带翻译范文，感谢阅读! 【我将来的计划】 When I chose to study further, it is because I want to avoid the job pressure, now three years will pass, I come to my cross road again, at this time, I must make my choice, I can’t avoid the pressure anymore. I have already made my future plan, it has two parts。 当我选择深造的时候，是因为我想要避开工作的压力，如今三年即将过去，我又来到了十字路口，这一次，我必须做出决定，我再也不能逃避压力了。我 已经制定了将来的计划，那有两部分。 One part of my future plan is that I want to be a teacher. This is my career plan, being a teacher is always my dream, I can pass my knowledge to students, I like to talk to them, I want to lead them to the successful road. So now I must pay attention to the recruit message, I should seize every chance to be a teacher。 我将来计划的其中一部分就是我想要成为一名教师。这是我的职业计划， 成为一名教师一直以来都是我的梦想，我能把我的知识传递给我的学生，我喜 欢和他们聊天，我想要把他们引导到成功的路上。所以现在我必须要关注招聘 信息，应该抓住每一个成为教师的机遇。 The other part of my future plan is that I want to travel around the world. Being a teacher can make me have many vacations, so I can make used of these vacations and to carry out my travel plan. I have
模拟作文题 一 第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 假如你叫李平，你班班主任在安排座位时，让成绩好的学生和成绩差的学生作同桌，这在你们班中引起了强烈反响，班会课上大家就此进行了讨论。现在请你根据下表把讨论结果给校英文报写一篇报道。 赞同反对你的观点 1．人人有长处和不足，成绩差的学生也有可取之处； 2．相互学习，建立友谊； 3．通过帮助学习差的学生的学习从而使他们建立自信。1．部分学习差的学生常 常违反校规校纪，担心自 己会受影响，养成坏习惯。 2．老是问问题，使自己 不能专心学习。 ？ 注意： 1．词数：100~120，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。2．短文需包括表中所有要点，内容可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。3．参考词汇：成绩差的学生：a slower student 【写作要求】 1．只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容； 2．文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校。 3．字数：100词左右。 【评分标准】 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯 1
Dear Mr. Zhang, We have held a discussion about whether it is good or not for a top student to share a desk with a slower student. _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ping 第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Entering the 21st century, man is now in an age of information and knowledge. In such an age, interpersonal communication plays an increasingly important role and all people have to communicate with others. Distance used to be the main barrier that shuts people off from each other. Just imagine the effort it would take to deliver a letter from a province to another in ancient times. Even when we have cars to transport our correspondence it still takes months to send and receive a letter from a far away relative or friend. And it is very likely to lose your letter during the transport. So at those times a letter really weighs much heavier than now it does. What is it that makes our communication much easier? Everyone could give you the answer without thinking. It’s technology. With the appearance of the phone, the computer and the internet our life changes.Moreover, our way of communication changes https://www.doczj.com/doc/4e806290.html,munication can take place anywhere any time as long as you have a access to internet.We chat via qq with our friend.We write an E-mail to our friend instead of writing a letter.Why?Because with a few simple clicks you can send your message to anyone in a second for free.We can say that internet provides us a huge and vast communication platform. 【写作内容】 （1）以约30个词概括短文的要点； （2）以约120个词就“交流方式”为主题发表看法，并包括如下要点： ①目前主要交流方式有哪些？ ②简述你对这些交流方式的认识； ③你对大家在与人交流方式选择的建议。 【写作要求】 1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，可以参照阅读材料的结构和内容，也可以使用材料中的词汇，但不得直接引用原文中的句子； 2．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
COMPOSITION 1 I Would Like to Be a Polite Person I am pretty sure that I would like to be a polite person throughout my life. I am brought up in a family whose members are polite to each other. My parents share the same quality with me. I am taught never to be rude to anyone else even if he behaves badly enough. I am aware that a polite person should have an air of tolerance. My mother always says, “Ignore the ill-mannered people because they do not know what they are doing. Be polite to those who deserve your respect.” I also hold many other good manners to be a polite person，such as being friendly and helpful to others, keeping graceful postures all the time, trying to be understanding, talking in a modest way and so on. All in all, my family’s motto, never stop being polite, will stay with me forever. (146) COMPOSITION 2 I Would Like to Be a Soldier My dream changes all the time. But the other day, I happened to hear an English song named Tell Me Why, which tells something about poor kids whose country is in war. At that moment, I made up my mind that I would like to be a soldier in the future. If I become a soldier, I can fight for people’s freedom. I can help those who suffer a lot in war, especially the innocent kids, who are supposed to sit in class studying, just like the ones living in the peaceful world. I will do whatever I can to realize my dream. (103) COMPOSITION 3 I Would Like to Be a Singer The other day, I was on my computer going on You Tube to listen to music. I happened to find out that one song had almost five hundred million views. At that moment, I decided that I would like to be a lead singer in the future. I think it would be awesome seeing tons of fans wearing a shirt with my face right in the center. How great it is to hear my song played on the radio that billions of people will listen to! What a delightful sense to have my face appear on the cover of a magazine! Then I can afford to tour the world purchasing expensive and nice clothes. Maybe I will be rich enough to buy a cruise ship. All in all, being a rich and famous lead singer is my dream. I really hope it will come true someday. (146) COMPOSITION 4 On Helping with Family Chores Nowadays many students say they are too busy with their study and they do not have time to help their parents with the housework. I do not think it is true which make them appear to be all excuses. In my opinion, doing some housework such as washing our own clothes and making the bed is our own responsibility. We cannot depend on others all our life. Doing housework can make us independent. Thus we can take better care of ourselves when growing up. Besides, sharing the housework is helpful for us to set up good relationship with our parents. What’s more, I am aware that trying to do some housework, among which hard work can be regarded as a kind of physical exercise, can keep us healthy and strong. On weekdays, I often clean my bedroom every morning and wash dishes after supper. At weekends, washing clothes and mopping the floor is my duty. Also I offer to carry heavy bags from the supermarket. Just as the saying goes, “One cannot make a big success without being self-reliant.” Therefore, I hold the opinion that it is necessary for students to share the housework. (194)
中考英语作文万能模板及英语写作技巧 中考英语作文万能模板 教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。 问：“哪十字？” 允泽老师答：“结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！” 结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day! 要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。 逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。 语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。 亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。 只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！ 英语高分作文必备杀手锏—三段四步法 中考英语阅卷老师看写作主要有三个标准： 1）结构2）内容要点 3）语言（词组搭配、句型、句式变化、过渡词）看结构和内容要点定分数档，看语言给成绩。这是中考英语阅卷的潜规则。 三段四步法——中考英语满分杀手锏 知己知彼，方能百战不殆，既然中考阅卷流程和内部标准已经明朗化，相对的策略也就顺利成章的形成了。现在和大家分享，笔者教学和阅卷过程中总结创立的写作满分秘诀。 1 “三段”（三个段落）——针对的阅卷老师先看文章结构和内容要点，让阅卷老师不得不给你定位一类文。 中高考情景是作文，无论是那种文体，都可以用三段法来表示。这个方法的起源是来自美国的“高考”SAT考试，（SAT 是美国或它国学生想要申请美国大学必须参加的考试，故被叫过美国的高考）。 我们管这样的文章叫做Hamburger Writing(汉堡写作) 顾名思义，就是无论是记叙文、还是议论文、或者08年中考以及09一模西城的夹叙夹议文章，都可以通用。简单解释如下： 第一段记叙文议论文 开篇背景介绍（时间、地点、人物、事件） 发表观点 第二段
话题一：写人记事 例文：初中阶段你印象最深的又是哪位老师？请用英语写一篇题为“The Teacher I Never Forget”的作文。内容包括：1.简要介绍老师的性格或特长；2.列举一个事例，说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的；3.感谢老师，祝愿老师。 The Teacher I Never Forget How time flies! Three years has passed since I became a middle school student. I had very good memories of my classmates and teachers. The teacher I never forget is Mr. Zhang, an English teacher. He is very kind and friendly. He helped us not only in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it, and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved. I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future! 例文：假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事情让你印象深刻。请根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。 要点：1. 一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；2. 你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；3. 孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；4. 你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。 On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and a violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus. When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean. 话题二：环保污染 例文：节约资源, 保护环境. 从我们身边的小事做起，假设你是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生, 请以“My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。提示: (1)每天步行上学; (2)离丌教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时, 记住关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张；（5)不使用塑料袋。 My Low-carbon Life It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, so we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we should go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the
初中英语作文必背范文20例 （1）如何学好英语 English is important and useful to us , How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes ,English songs and English programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us .Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you will make, we’d better join the English club and practice with others . Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite （背诵）some good passages and keep diaries . In a word , as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well . （2）保持健康之我见 It is very important for us to keep healthy. There are many ways to be healthy. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. We should exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest , so it is important to go to bed early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn’t drink wine or smoke, They are bad for our health. We should also stay away from junk food. —— 正确面对你的压力 （3）Less Pressure Make Better Life—— Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are
上海中考英语备考训练：写作 一，一等文要求， 1，结构三段式： 第一段：简单明了，开门见山。 如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，一句足矣。第二段：分析为什么他强壮。 A. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。 B. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。 第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day! 2，内容和要点： 话题topic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题, 跟主旨无关的话不要写。 3，逻辑合理： 递进：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, what's more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not the least。 转折：but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。 总结：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。 4，语法和亮点： 单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。 二，三段十句话： 1，三段布局： 高考作文题型多样, 有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料, 按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。 记叙文：A. 背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B. 故事发展经过结果。C. 结局和感受。 议论文：A. 发表观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。 图片文：A. 描述图片内容，提炼观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。 日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，意图，主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。 2，十句成篇： Passage 1, 1）Topic 话题 2）Thesis 论点 Passage 2, 3）Transition 过渡句 4）Argument1 论据1
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一）、健康问题（热点 1 How tokeep healthy ? All of us want to be healthy. First，we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should be happy everyday. Because smile will make us younger. That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. 2~健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文。信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起,不熬夜;参加运动,强身健体。 要求:根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。 healthy habits I think healthy habits are very important for us. All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don’t feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once. If we can do all above, we can live a healthy life. 2 二、关于环境保护问题（热点） 1 、 6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日，我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重…… As we all know,the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse .In some places, we can’t see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink. So I think we must do something to protect the environment. But what can we do? How