第四单元 单元写作

我们学的课文，大都有清晰的思路，要注意体会模仿。比如《再塑生命的人》是按时间顺序展 开思路的。
平时阅读课外读物，也要想着理清其思路。久而久之，你的思维会得到锻炼，表达也会清晰、 有条理。那么，有什么方法能让作文思路清晰呢？可以从以下方面人手。
一、整体构思 看到作文题目，你可能会有很多想法，会想到很多材料。这时别急于落笔，首先想清楚你要表 达的中心是什么，再据此取舍材料，并大致思考文章的整体结构。比如，要表达“他是一个热爱 学习的学生”这一中心，下面这些材料，你会用到哪些呢？大致采取什么样的结构呢?
三、列提纲 在头脑中形成作文的结构框架后，用提纲的形式把它呈现出来，有助于思路的清晰和完善。提 纲不仅要呈现文章的整体框架，也要包括文章各部分的内容要点。
写作指导
叶圣陶先生说:“思想是有一条路的，一句一句，一段一段都是有路的，好文章的作者是决不 乱走的。”那些言之有物、言之成理的好文章，都是建立在思路清晰、言之有序的基础上的。
一线教师写作指导
一、学会拟写作文提纲 写作是需要相对严谨的逻辑思维。写作前必须明确为什么写、写什么、怎么写，有一个清楚的 整体构思，这就如同盖楼房要先绘出“图纸”一样。有了写作提纲，文章就有了一个轮廓，写起 来心中有数，有条不紊。 不少同学不愿意拟写作提纲，觉得麻烦，耽误时间，结果想到哪儿写到哪儿，任意发挥，从而 出现条理不清、结构松散等弊病。为了减少盲目性，克服随意性，保证写作质量，我们一定要首 先学会写提纲。 记叙文写作提纲主要涉及：1.拟写标题；2.行文要点；3.思路结构；4.各层大意；5.表达技 巧。 1.拟写标题 文章标题如同人的眼睛，也是透视心灵的窗户。俗话说：“题好文一半。” 标题必须要有一定的作用：或是交代叙事要素，或是揭示文章主旨，或是蕴含深刻含义，或是 新奇别致吸引读者。 记叙文标题的拟写：或直接以人、事、物作题，或以时间、地点作题，或利用比喻拟人等修辞 作题。 2.行文要点 记叙文的行文要点包括时间、地点、人物、事件、起因、过程、结果、影响。

飞出了栅栏；有人受伤了，整个机舱乱成一团。空姐们不断安慰着大家的情绪，可这也无济于事。 李红说：“要不就迫降，总比坠毁好。”雷鸣面不改色：“不等到最后一刻，决不能做出这样的决定， 再等等。”
突然，飞机失去了控制，向深黑的海面坠去。机舱里一片嗷嚎。大家忍不住闭上了眼睛。 “咚——”的一声，飞机落到了海上。空姐有序组织大家快速调整好自己撤离，一个个救生艇都打开 了。人们拥挤在上面。最后一个离开机舱的是副机长李红。他的腿止不住的颤抖，一下子从机舱里栽 倒了下来。飞机慢慢地沉入了水中。可人们都得救了。
众人排队过桥时，老支书再次 因党性原则，“揪”出了抢在队伍 中的一个党员小伙子。
打破常规思路，设置悬念
列出提纲，丰富构想的情节内容
淘气包学习了《丁香 结》，想酿造“丁香蜜”
班长王寒冰发现教室门口 的丁香花越来越少了，通过侦 查，发现是淘气包 张明偷偷摘 花，她要告诉班主任。
班主任李军没有立刻 批评张明，询问原因
她“不安”的不是要不要把孤儿送回 去，而是担忧自己丈夫身上的生活重担， “揍我一顿也好！”
想一想人物在故事中可能会想什么呢？
环境：开满丁香花的校园 人物：淘气包张明
雷厉风行的班长王寒冰 充满活力的年轻班主任李军
想一想人物在故事中可能会想什么呢？
环境：冬日黄昏时车来人往的街头 人物：充满爱心的少年王天
李老师笑了，大家都笑了，这一刻深深的印在了大家的心中。
范文引路:
一架飞机正停在偌大的停机坪上，此时正是黑夜，飞机在其中显得十分孤独。熙熙攘攘的旅客
依次登上了飞机，机场雷鸣，副机长李红也走进了驾驶室。 这是老机长雷鸣最后一次驾驶飞机了，这次飞行对他来说十分重要。旅客们安顿下来，飞机开始
滑行，冲刺，起飞，飞机咆哮着插入茫茫云海。 过了一会儿，飞机进入平稳期，开启自动驾驶模式。雷鸣躺在椅子上，跟刚进来不久的副机长李

八年级语文上册第四单元写作《语言要连贯》写作指导+范文写作指导（一）什么是连贯？连贯，是从句子前后逻辑关系的角度提出的要求。

无论是一段话还是一篇文章，都由许多句子组成，这些句子如果不连贯，就可能给读者的理解带来困难。

（二）怎样做到语言连贯？1.保持前后话题统一。

一段话不管有多少句子，都应围绕共同的话题，而不能东一榔头西一棒子。

如《昆明的雨》中写菌子的那部分文字，作者提到了牛肝菌、青头菌等，虽然写的内容不少，但都围绕“昆明的菌子极多”这个话题，句子之间的意思是连贯的，所以读起来并不让人觉得杂乱。

2.有合理的顺序。

前面出现的“四周的景色非常秀丽……”这段话，虽然各句都围绕“四周景色”的话题，但因为句子间的顺序不合理，读起来同样让人感到不连贯。

应该将第三句与第四句的顺序对调一下，这样第四句中的“它”才能指代“湖水”，整个语段读起来才连贯。

3.要注意句子间的衔接过渡。

适当的运用关联词、提示语或过渡句，可以帮助我们衔接句子。

如：表示关联的“可是”，“比如”“例如”等这样的提示性词语来引出例子，使句子上下衔接自然，过渡流畅。

范文范文一我的爸爸是一个热爱工作并且关心家庭的人。

由于工作出色,爸爸在单位经常被评为先进工作者，家里的墙上贴满了爸爸获得的奖状。

爸爸不仅上班忙工作,而且下了班也还惦记着工作。

记得有一一次，爸爸单位有一台机器坏了,大家修了一整天都找不出问题。

爸爸下班回到家,吃饭时突然想起了国外有过这方面的资料，于是他马上查阅了资料，接着连夜赶回单位抢修，终于修好了这台机器。

爸爸虽然醉心于工作,却从来不会忽略家人，他总是花很多时间陪伴家人。

周末,爸爸会带领我们全家人去郊游,为此他还专门买了本地郊区旅游攻略的书。

他研究了好多条路线，每次郊游，我们都能看到美丽的风景。

我们玩得非常开心。

范文二我们的节日光阴似箭,日月如梭。

作为中华民族最热闹、最喜庆的传统节日一春节马上要来临了。

春节是农历正月初一，又叫阴历年，是我国民间最隆重、最热闹的节日。

六年级下册英语苏教版第四单元写作文全文共6篇示例，供读者参考篇1My Favourite Animal - The Majestic ElephantHey there! I'm so excited to tell you all about my favourite animal - the elephant! These gentle giants have always fascinated me ever since I was a little kid. Let me share with you why I love elephants so much.First off, elephants are just massive! Can you believe that an adult elephant can weigh up to 6 tons? That's like the weight of a big truck! Their size alone makes them really impressive creatures. And yet, despite being so huge, elephants are known for being quite gentle, at least with humans. Of course, you wouldn't want to make one angry - those tusks can do some serious damage!Speaking of tusks, did you know that elephants use them for so many different things? They use their tusks to dig for food and water, to strip bark from trees to eat, to protect themselves, and even to lift and move heavy objects. Tusks are basically likemulti-purpose tools for elephants. An elephant without its tusks is kind of like us humans without our hands!Another amazing fact about elephants is their trunks. An elephant's trunk is actually a fusion of their upper lip and nose. It's made up of around 100,000 muscles, making it super strong yet flexible. Elephants use their trunks to breath, smell, grab things, drink water, and even give themselves dust baths. Imagine if we had to do all those things just with our noses - it would be chaos!Have you ever seen videos of baby elephants? They are just about the cutest things ever! Baby elephants, called calves, weigh around 200 pounds at birth and drink their mother's milk for around 2 years. Mother elephants are very nurturing and protective of their young. The whole elephant herd helps take care of the calves too. Just thinking about those adorable baby elephant videos makes me smile.Sadly, African and Asian elephants have faced threats like habitat loss and poaching over the years, putting some elephant populations at risk. It makes me sad to think of a world without these magnificent creatures roaming free. Conservation groups and animal lovers are working hard to protect elephant habitatsand crack down on poaching to ensure elephants don't go extinct.Elephants are just so unique and special. They are highly intelligent animals that live in tight family groups, have amazing memories, and can even show emotions like happiness, grief and rage. Some researchers have witnessed elephants seeming to mourn their dead. They are deeply caring animals with complex social lives.When I was younger, I used to love collecting little elephant figurines and stuffed animals. I would line them all up on my dresser and make up stories about their adventures together. As I got a bit older, I became interested in learning more facts about real elephants through books and nature documentaries. There's just something magical about these giants that continues to fascinate me.My dream is to one day go on an African safari and see elephants roaming freely in their natural habitat. How cool would it be to witness a huge herd of elephants quenching their thirst at a watering hole or see young elephant calves playing together? Of course, I would have to keep a very safe distance - you can never be too careful around such immense animals!Until I can make that dream a reality, I'll have to be content admiring elephants through pictures, videos and books. I sometimes wonder what it would be like to actually ride on the back of an elephant. Their leathery, wrinkled skin looks kind of rough, but also comfy in a strange way. I imagine going for an elephant ride would be quite the experience, getting to feel their slow, lumbering movements beneath you as they carry you along.A unique way to journey and see the world!In conclusion, elephants are truly majestic beasts that deserve our awe, respect and protection. Their size, unique features like trunks and tusks, raw strength yet gentle nature, tight family bonds, and high intelligence all contribute to making them one of the most amazing animals on the planet. Elephants have meant so much to me ever since I was a little kid building elephant figurine collections. Even as I get older, my fascination with these giants never fades. Here's hoping that future generations can experience and marvel at the wonder of elephants for years to come. These treasured animals must be cherished and protected so their populations can thrive once more.篇2Unit 4 - A World of WondersHi there! My name is Lily and I'm a 6th grader. Today I want to tell you all about Unit 4 in our English textbook. It's called "A World of Wonders" and it's super interesting!The unit starts off by introducing some of the natural wonders of the world. Can you believe there are places like the Great Barrier Reef in Australia? It's the largest coral reef system in the world! The pictures in our book show so many bright colors and different kinds of marine life. I wish I could go snorkeling or scuba diving there one day.Another amazing natural wonder is the Aurora Borealis, or Northern Lights. They are colorful lights that dance across the sky near the North Pole. The book says they are caused by particles from the sun hitting the Earth's atmosphere. I've only seen photos but they look so magical! Maybe my family can take a trip to see them in real life someday.Then we learned about some man-made wonders like the Pyramids of Giza in Egypt. Those huge stone pyramids were built as tombs for pharaohs thousands of years ago. Just imagining how they were constructed with such basic tools and manpower back then blows my mind! Our book has cool illustrations comparing the height of the pyramids to a modern office building. They're so tall!The Great Wall of China is another man-made marvel we studied. It's an enormous series of stone and earth fortifications that stretches across northern China. Some parts are even older than the Pyramids! The book says the Great Wall is over 13,000 miles long if you add up all its sections. Walking the whole thing would take months and months. I can't fathom how many workers toiled to build something so immense.As we continued through the unit, I was stunned to learn about places like Piopiotahi in New Zealand. It's a massive hole in the ground caused by extreme erosion over millions of years! The photos make it look like a perfect circle carved into the earth. Apparently the crater is over 600 feet deep - that's taller than a 60-story skyscraper! Humans are so tiny compared to the incredible natural forces that shaped places like that.My personal favorite part was reading about Zhangye Danxia National Geological Park in China. It has these bizarre but beautiful rainbow-colored rock formations. The book explained how the surreal patterns and colors come from millions of years of mineral deposits and erosion sculpting the landscape. It almost doesn't look real! I really hope I can travel there to see the Rainbow Mountains with my own eyes someday.Towards the end of the unit, we learned about some incredible engineering projects that humans have constructed in modern times. Like the Channel Tunnel linking England and France undersea. Or the Millau Viaduct in France, which is one of the tallest bridges in the world. There are so many photos and diagrams showing the massive scale and complexity of these building marvels. It's mind-boggling what people can create with enough money, labor and ingenuity!Throughout this whole unit, I kept having the same thought: The world is full of such amazing natural wonders created over eons by powerful forces we can scarcely comprehend. And yet, humans have an almost magical ability to dream up and build our own extraordinary, seemingly impossible creations too. From the ancient Pyramids to modern feats like Burj Khalifa - the world's tallest skyscraper - we find ways to leave our mark on this planet alongside the marvels of nature.Some of my friends think units on world geography and landmarks are boring. But to me, learning about all these phenomenal places firing my imagination and curiosity like nothing else. I can't wait to see what other wonders await in future units!Studying this unit really opened my eyes to the incredible diversity of landscapes, environments and man-made structures around the globe. Sure, a lot of the reading was pretty dense for a 6th grader and some of the vocabulary was super advanced. But all the pictures, maps and diagrams made it easier to visualize and understand each wonder we explored. My personal favorite activities were the hands-on projects, like making a model of an erosion crater or sketching different architectural wonders.I'm so grateful my English textbook could take me on a virtual journey around the world to ponder these amazing natural and man-made marvels. Even though I've never actually traveled far from my hometown, I feel like I gained an appreciation for the astounding beauty and power of our planet - not to mention human creativity and perseverance. Who knew learning English could be a window into the wonders of the world?Well, that's my report on Unit 4! I still have a ton more to learn and discover, but at least this unit fired up my curiosity and excitement about the marvels waiting out there for me to hopefully experience for myself one day. Let me know if you have any other questions! Thanks for reading.篇3My Fun Summer VacationWow, where do I even begin? My summer vacation was just SO awesome this year! I had such an amazing time. Let me tell you all about the cool things I did.First up, my family and I went on an epic road trip! We packed up the car and hit the road bright and early. Our first stop was my aunt and uncle's farm out in the countryside. I loved seeing all the animals - the cows, chickens, pigs and horses. My cousin even let me ride one of the horses, Buttercup. She was kind of smelly but riding her was a blast. I felt like a real cowboy!After a few days on the farm, we drove further west towards the mountains. We stayed in this cute little cabin right near a beautiful lake. The water was so clear and refreshing. We went swimming every single day. My little brother kept trying to skip rocks but he wasn't very good at it. I'm much better than him! One afternoon we rented a little rowboat and went fishing. I didn't catch anything but my dad reeled in a huge bass! For dinner that night, we cooked it over the campfire. It was delicious.My favorite part was when we went hiking up into the mountains. The trails were a little challenging in some spots but the views were just breathtaking. We saw lots of cool plants and wildlife too, like deer, squirrels, and once I even spotted a black bear from pretty far away! We made it all the way up to the top of Mount Morgan. From up there you could see forever. It felt like we were on top of the world. I took some amazing photos and videos to show my friends.After leaving the mountains, we headed back east towards the coast. We spent a few days at the beach near my grandparents' place. I love the beach so much! We had a ball playing in the waves, building sandcastles, and having picnics. My grandpa even took us out on his little boat one day. We spotted some dolphins swimming alongside! That was so neat. In the evenings, we would go get ice cream cones and walk along the boardwalk. Definitely my favorite summer treat.All too soon, it was time to head back home. I was pretty sad that our big trip was over, but I have so many fantastic memories. We saw and did so many fun things. Now I'm back at school sharing all my stories and experiences with my friends. Some of them are pretty jealous that my summer was so action-packed! I can't wait to make more amazing memories next summer.Hopefully, we can go somewhere even more exciting. Maybe a dude ranch in the Wild West? Or we could go on a cruise around the Caribbean? I'll just have to wait and see. But I know for sure it will be an adventure!篇4My Awesome Summer VacationSummer vacation is the best time of year! No school, no homework, just fun in the sun. This summer was one of the most amazing summers ever. I had so many incredible adventures and made so many wonderful memories with my family and friends.It all started on the last day of school. I was so excited for summer, I could barely sit still in class. I just wanted the final bell to ring so I could run home and start my vacation. When it was finally time to leave, I raced out of the classroom yelling "Freedom!" at the top of my lungs. Ah, the sweet feeling of having no responsibilities for two whole months!The first week of summer, my family didn't have any special plans. We just relaxed at home, sleeping in late, watching movies, and hanging out. My little brother and I had endless videogame marathons. We played our favorite games for hours on end, only stopping for meals and bathroom breaks. My thumbs were sorefrom all that controller action, but it was worth it to beat the boss levels.After a week of lazy lounging around, we decided to go on a road trip. We piled into our car bright and early one morning and headed for the mountains. The drive there took forever with my annoying brother constantly asking "Are we there yet? Are we there yet?" But when we finally arrived, it was breathtaking! The towering peaks, the crisp fresh air, the sparkling streams—it was like a painting come to life. Simply gorgeous.We stayed in a cozy little cabin surrounded by forests of tall pine trees. We went on lots of fun hikes, seeing cool stuff like waterfalls, wildflowers, and once even a family of deer. I tried my hand at fishing in one of the rivers, but didn't catch anything. Typical beginner's luck! We also built a campfire every night, toasted marshmallows, and gazed up at the bright starry sky. I spotted a few shooting stars and made wishes on them.Once we got back from the mountains, it was time for summer camp. I went to day camp for two weeks at the community center. We did so many awesome activities like swimming, arts and crafts, field games, even a talent show. I'm not very talented, so I just told some jokes for my act. Here's one of them: Why can't a bicycle stand up by itself? It's two-tired! Getit? The camp was super fun overall and I made some new friends too.The biggest highlight of the summer though was definitely our trip to the beach! We went to a beautiful resort for five days and had a blast. I could spent every minute swimming, playing in the sand, and splashing in the waves. The ocean was so refreshing and relaxing. I spotted some little crabs scrambling along the shoreline, which was cute. For some reason, I also really enjoyed hunting for seashells and unique rocks. I have a small collection of them now at home to remember the trip by.We also went on some fun excursions, like visiting a nearby aquarium one day. It was amazing seeing all the different marine animals like sharks, rays, dolphins, and so many vibrantly colored fish. Another day we went on a glass-bottom boat cruise and got to see the ocean from right above it. The clear turquoise waters were filled with coral reefs, schools of fish, and other neat underwater sights. We even spotted a sea turtle!One night, the resort had a beachside campfire and all the kids did s'mores and listened to ghost stories. I wasn't scared at all by the silly stories, but some of the younger kids got pretty spooked! We ended our night by dancing around the campfire and singing silly songs. So much fun!On our last day at the beach, my brother and I had an epic sandcastle building contest. We spent hours molding and sculpting the perfect castle, decorating it with seashells and leaves. In the end, my castle was declared the winner by my parents, although I think my brother's was better. I'm still the champion though!When it was finally time to head back home, I was so sad to leave the beach behind. But I was also getting excited to see my friends again and swap summer adventure stories. I missed my neighborhood and my familiar surroundings too. And of course, getting back into my comfy bed after all that traveling felt amazing.In those last couple weeks of summer, I spent lots of time riding my bike around the neighborhood, having lemonade stands with my friends, and just savoring those last days of freedom before school started again. We played basketball, had water balloon fights, and stayed up late watching movies. My days were gloriously unscheduled and relaxed. Just pure fun!All too soon, summer was over. I was bummed to be heading back to school, but also excited to see my friends and learn new things. Plus I had a million memories from my awesome summer to look back on! Between the camping, the beach, the day camps,and all the adventures in between, it was one unforgettable couple of months. I had so many amazing new experiences and so much fun quality time with my family. This was a summer I'll never forget!篇5My Favorite SeasonHi there! My name is Xiaoming and I'm in the 6th grade. For our writing assignment this unit, my teacher asked us to write about our favorite season of the year. Well, my favorite season is definitely summer! I just love the warm weather, fun activities, and long vacation. Let me tell you all about why summer is the best.First off, the weather in summer is so nice. After the cold winter and rainy spring, it feels amazing when summer finally arrives. The sun shines brightly, warming everything up. The temperature gets hot, but not too hot. It's perfect weather to spend lots of time outside. I hate being cooped up indoors when it's gloomy and chilly out. But in summer, I can be outside all day long!My favorite thing to do in the summer is go swimming. Our community has a huge pool and I'm there every single day whenschool is out. I'm like a little fish, splashing around and playing games like marco polo with my friends. Swimming is not only fun, but good exercise too. I always take a quick dip in the pool after playing basketball to cool off.Speaking of basketball, that's another activity I love in the summer. There's a court right near my home and me and my buddies have three-on-three tournaments. The sunshine feels so nice as we're running around, dribbling and shooting hoops. Afterwards, we're always dripping in sweat but feeling accomplished.Summer is also great because there are so many fun places to go on trips and vacations. Every summer, my family goes on a road trip to visit my grandparents in another province. The drive there takes forever, but I don't mind because I can look out the window at all the cool landscapes. Last year, we stopped at this amazing lake and went swimming and hiking. We also love going to the beach in summer and playing in the ocean waves.Of course, my absolute favorite part of summer is having no school! Don't get me wrong, I love learning. But those long summer days with no classes, homework, or waking up early are just the best. I can stay up late, sleep in, and do whatever I wantall day. No schedule, no routines, just pure freedom. Thinking about it makes me want summer to start immediately!There are so many fun summer activities and traditions I look forward to every year. For example, we always have a huge barbecue with my extended family. Running around in the yard, playing games and sports, while amazing smells of burgers and corn waft from the grill. Yum! I also really enjoy going to the night markets in summer, wandering around snacking on fun foods and doing carnival games.Another thing I love is reading books and magazines during the summer. Since there's no homework, I can read just for fun. I pull up a lounge chair in the backyard and spend lazy afternoons getting lost in adventure novels and comic books. Sometimes I even build a fort out of blankets and read inside there with a flashlight. So cozy!One of my favorite summer memories is from two years ago when my family went camping in the mountains. We hiked up a trail to this beautiful clearing and set up our tents under the stars. In the evening, we built a campfire and roasted marshmallows. I'll never forget gazing up at the bright milky way while the fire crackled. We sang silly songs and told spooky stories. Though Igot bitten by a million mosquitoes, it was still an amazing experience.Summer also means lots of yummy summer foods and treats. Like ice cream! On hot days, I'll grab a popsicle or bowl of ice cream to cool down. My mouth waters just thinking about digging into a triple-scoop banana split. Corn on the cob, watermelon, lemonade - summer has the tastiest snacks and drinks. And you can't forget fairs and festivals with all their delicious fried food!As you can probably tell, I really look forward to summer every year. From splashing in the pool, to camping trips, to backyard barbecues - summer is just nonstop fun. The warm weather, long days, and time off from school create the perfect recipe for amazing memories. I have so many more summer highlights I could write about, but I'll have to stop here. Thanks for reading about why I love summer the most!篇6My Summer VacationThe summer vacation is my favorite time of the year. I love not having to wake up early for school and having so much freetime to do whatever I want. This summer was especially fun because my family went on an amazing trip!At the beginning of the summer, my parents surprised me and my little brother by telling us we were going to Thailand for two weeks! I was so excited because I had never been out of the country before. We started getting ready right away by packing our suitcases and making sure we had all our travel documents.The day we left, we woke up really early to catch our flight from Shanghai to Bangkok. The plane ride took almost 5 hours but it went by quickly because I watched movies and played games on the screen in front of my seat. When we finally landed in Bangkok, it was super hot and humid outside! The airport was really big and crowded with people.We took a taxi from the airport to our hotel. I couldn't believe all the traffic on the roads - there were cars, motorcycles, and tuk-tuks everywhere going every direction! Our hotel was right in the center of the city. It had a huge pool, a few restaurants, and even a kids' club with video games and activities. After unpacking, we went to explore the area around our hotel. There were so many markets and street food stalls. We tried mango sticky rice, pad thai, and other delicious Thai dishes.The next day, we took a tour to see some of Bangkok's famous temples like the Grand Palace and Wat Pho. They were absolutely breathtaking with all the colorful tiles, intricate carvings, and golden Buddhas. Our guide taught us that we had to dress modestly by covering our shoulders and knees to go inside the temples. Later that day, we went on a long-tail boat tour through Bangkok's canals and waterways. It was really cool seeing all the houses and buildings right along the water.After a few days in Bangkok, we flew down to the islands in the south of Thailand. We stayed in Phuket for a few nights at a beautiful beach resort. I had so much fun swimming in the warm ocean water, building sandcastles, and just relaxing on the beach. One day we took a boat out to go snorkeling at some nearby islands. I saw so many tropical fish and coral under the crystal clear water. It was like being in an aquarium!Our last stop in Thailand was the island of Koh Samui. This was definitely my favorite place – it was so laidback and peaceful compared to the hustle and bustle of Bangkok. We stayed in adorable little bungalows right on the beach. We spent our days kayaking, collecting seashells, and just hanging out by the pool. At night there were amazing fire shows and dance performances at our resort.After two wonderful weeks, it was time to head back home to Shanghai. I was really sad to leave Thailand because I had such an incredible time, but I was also excited to see my friends again and tell them all about my summer adventures.This was the best vacation ever! I made so many amazing memories exploring Thailand with my family. I hope I can go back again someday and maybe even learn some Thai phrases. For now, I'll just have to start dreaming about where my next summer trip will be!。

部编版六年级语文上册第四单元写作训练及范文3篇习作主题：笔尖流出的故事目录：1.流浪狗回家2.醉酒记3.街边的故事☆流浪狗回家☆窗外飘着雪,树被寒风吹得直摇晃,人们一个个穿着羽绒服,戴着手套,围着围巾,恨不得整个人都钻进衣服里。

小西从校门口跑出来,把小小的脸缩进厚重的校服里,拼命地往家跑去。

跑着跑着,突然传出一阵刺耳的喇叭声,一辆车猛地刹住了,紧接着,很多车都响起了喇叭,这高低起伏的刺叭声,在寒风中显得更加刺耳和响亮。

小西受不了了她转过头看了看那辆车,车主正愤怒地盯着前方。

原来前面有一只小狗,它吃力地拖着一条腿,不停地打着哆嗦,身体上还沾满了冰渣子,眼巴巴地望着周围的人。

由于身有残疾,小狗走得很慢,后面的车主已经越来越愤怒,整条街都挤满了车。

小西顿时对小狗起了怜悯之心,她跑到小狗身边,没有丝毫犹豫,把浑身发抖的小狗抱到胸前,用宽大的校服给它取暖。

她抱着这只可怜的小狗,慢慢地走着。

走到家门口,她突然想起妈妈是不会让小狗待在家里的。

可是,这条小狗多可怜啊,待在外面会被冻死的。

这该怎么办呢?突然,她似乎想起了什么,立刻向小巷深处跑去。

小巷的尽头有一个比较隐蔽的地方,小西找来一大把稻草,并均匀地铺好,又把随身带的一块小手帕放到稻草上。

她把小狗抱进去,小狗舒服地站在手帕上,对小西摇摇尾巴。

它那副可爱的模样让小西不禁哈哈大笑起来。

她摸摸小狗的头,对它说:“现在你就叫朵朵了!”小狗高兴地对她叫着,还用脸去蹭她的手。

从此以后,每天放学小西都走这条小巷,顺便把手上的一点食物给小狗吃。

慢慢地,她和小狗越来越熟了,小狗也会准时等着她。

有一天,老师拖课了。

小西十分着急:五点半妈妈就下班了,现在已经五点了，小狗吃不到小西的食物会饿的,怎么办呀?总算放学了,小西飞也似的朝小巷跑去,她心里只有小狗,却没有发现,刚下班的妈妈正从远处走来。

“朵朵,今天老师拖课了,给你送吃的迟了,你还不饿吧?”小西抚摸着朵朵可爱的小脸儿,一脸疼惜地问它。

二、病例分析
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成长的足迹里饱含着亲情的关爱。难忘记忆 里儿时的童稚，骑在父亲脖子上撒欢儿，倚在妈 妈膝上数星星。睡觉时缠着他们讲大灰狼的故事， 半夜里被吓醒，生怕被狼叼走，就钻到妈妈的被 窝里，让妈妈紧紧搂住。不会忘记，在生病时， 送到面前的一片片药片，一杯杯开水，一声声问 候，那是同学们悉心的照顾。更不会忘记，在取 得成绩时，老师送来欣慰和赞许的眼神，考试失 败了她又送来鼓励的目光，增添了我与挫折斗争 的勇气。所有关怀我的人都与我同欢笑，共呼吸。
Байду номын сангаас例分析：
1.中心是说成长的足迹中饱含亲情的关爱，但是所 写材料却涉及同学友爱、老师关爱，这些内容都 偏离了中心。 2.最后一句是强调了关怀我的人与我同欢笑，共呼 吸。未突出亲情环绕的氛围对自己成长的作用。
病例修改建议：
方案一：将生病时同学的关爱和老师的关爱删除，增加在亲 人关爱下成长的事例。 方案二：作者在自己的成长中，能体会到他人对自己的关爱， 能意识到自己的成长离不开亲人、朋友们的关爱，这本身 就是思想认知上的加深，是成长中应该珍惜的精神财富。 如果能在意识到的同时写出知道自己该怎么去做，中心会 更鲜明突出。 方案三：将第一句中的‚亲情的‛删去，把最后一句改为 ‚我成长的每一步都离不开他们对我的关爱啊！‛之类的 语句，中心就明确集中了。但这种方案最好不采用，一是 因为这样改是未尊重作者本意的。二是因为这是修改中心 去适应材料，而没有修改材料来突出中心。
第四单元写作
突出中心
[学习目标]
1、借助课文学会认识中心对于 一篇文章的重要性。 2、从读到写，学习并体会如何 突出中心。 3、通过回忆社会实践活动，围 绕中心立意，写出情感和思考。
猜一猜
下面三段文字是学校组织 夜行军后，小学三年级、小 学六年级和初中一年级同学 写的，请你猜一猜，这几段 文字分别是哪个年级的同学 写的，为什么？

第四单元写作《撰写演讲稿》教案
一、教学内容
《撰写演讲稿》为四年级语文第四单元写作教学内容。本节课依据人教版《语文》四年级下册教材设计，具体内容包括：
1.学习演讲稿的基本结构：开场白、正文、结尾。
2.掌握撰写演讲稿的技巧，如：选题、立意、论述、举例。
3.分析教材中的优秀演讲稿，学习其表达方式和修辞手法。
在实践活动和小组讨论中，我发现学生们在讨论选题和立意时，思维比较活跃，能够提出不少有创意的观点。但在具体的撰写过程中，有些学生还是显得有些吃力，尤其是在运用修辞手法方面。这让我意识到，写作能力的培养并非一蹴而就，需要在日常教学中不断积累和练习。
在小组讨论环节，我尝试作为一个引导者，让学生们自己发现问题、解决问题。这种教学方式让学生们更加主动地参与到学习中来，效果还是不错的。但我也注意到，有些学生在讨论中显得比较沉默，可能是因为性格原因，也可能是对讨论主题不够熟悉。针对这部分学生，我需要在课后进行个别辅导，鼓励他们大胆表达自己的观点。
4.实践撰写演讲稿，培养表达清晰、观点明确、论证有力的写作能力。
二、核心素养目标
《撰写演讲稿》教学旨在提升学生以下学科核心素养：
1.增强语言表达能力，能够运用恰当的词语、句子清晰阐述个人观点。
2.培养逻辑思维能力，通过合理的论述、举例使演讲内容更具说服力。
3.提高文化素养，结合教材内容，了解不同演讲主题背后的文化内涵。
4.培养合作精神，在小组讨论、互评中学会倾听、尊重他人意见，共同提高撰写演讲稿的能力。
5.激发创新意识，鼓励学生在演讲稿中表达独到见解，勇于尝试不同表达方式。
三、教学难点与重点
1.教学重点
-掌握演讲稿的结构：明确演讲稿的开场白、正文、结尾三个部分，了解各部分的功能和特点。

全文思路清楚，行文流畅，给人以无限美好。
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你有勇气去访问你所在地区的一位名人，或者本校一位你不熟悉的教师吗
？ 勇敢地尝试一次，你不仅会获得人际交往的经验，还可能收获满满的自信。
记得提前做点儿准备，列出你的访问提纲。访问完成后，以《对 的一次访问 》为题，写一篇作文，跟同学分享你访问的经过和感受。
老妈对“我”的爱之深 欲扬先抑
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【点评】环绕中心来组织材料，为了突出老妈对“我”的爱，先
写老妈对“我”细致入微的照料，在拟写提纲的时候，按照一定的写
作顺序来完成思路，列出提纲，让我们看到自己谋篇布局的构思：中
心是什么，材料是什么，哪件事详写，哪件事略写，怎样安排顺序等
。这样一目了然，使写作时思路清楚，行文有序。
④听了亚凌老师的回答，我不由得对眼前这位处世不惊、肃然淡 雅的女子多了几分敬意。
⑤随着与老师交流的不断深入，我更是被亚凌老师的人格魅力所 吸引，谈话也愈加自然。最终，我抛出了在心中埋藏已久的问题：“ 亚凌老师，您认为创作过程中最重要的是什么？”亚凌老师淡淡地笑 笑，向我娓娓道来：“写作者的心动了、心热了，语言自然细腻得铺 排成了画面，文字结构自然浑然天成。”
所思、所感为线索，用极其细腻的笔触描写了一个下大雨的晚上，“
我”在放学回家的途中，和一群人一起帮一个卖梨的妇人捡梨的故事
。这件事让“我”感受到了人间真情，即使天空下着雨，即使彼此很
陌生，大家一起雨中全力帮助妇人的情景仍然让“我”倍感温暖。这
是“我”回家晚归的原因，也是“我”备受感动的原因，值得铭记。
对点评析 开头介绍故事产生的环境。 第②段点明故事产生的时间。 引出主人公妇人。 通过对妇人的动作和衣着的描写，为下文作铺垫。 第⑥段写出妇人看到梨掉在地上时的担忧。 第⑦～⑨段详写大家对妇人的帮助。 第 段点明文章的中心，写“我”收获了真情。

八年级下册英语第四单元写作范文大全作文1：The Importance of Environmental ProtectionEnvironmental protection is of great importance to our daily life and the future of the planet. With the rapid development of industry and technology, the environment has been seriously polluted, which has led to a series of problems such as global warming, air and water pollution, and the destruction of ecosystems.First and foremost, environmental protection is vital to our health. Air and water pollution can cause respiratory diseases and other health problems. Therefore, it is necessary to reduce emissions of harmful substances and protect our water resources. In addition, environmental protection is closely related to the survival of all living things. The destruction of the environment not only affectshuman beings, but also endangers many other species. If we do not take action to protect the environment, many species may become extinct.Moreover, environmental protection is crucial for the sustainable development of society. With the depletion of natural resources, it is necessary to develop renewable energy sources and promote sustainable production and consumption. We should also raise awareness of environmental protection and encourage people to develop green and low-carbon lifestyles.In conclusion, environmental protection is essential for our health, the survival of all living things, and the sustainable development of society. We should take action to protect the environment and create a better future for ourselves and the planet.作文2：My Plan for Reducing Plastic WastePlastic waste has become a serious environmental issue, and it is important for us to take action to reduce the use of plastic and protect the environment. Here is my plan for reducing plastic waste.First of all, I will start by reducing my own use of plastic. I will use reusable bags for shopping and avoid using disposable plastic bags. I will also use a reusable water bottle instead of buying bottled water, and I will avoid using plastic straws and utensils.Furthermore, I will raise awareness of the issue and encourage others to join me in reducing plastic waste. I will talk to my friends and family about the importance of reducing plastic use and encourage them to make changes in their own lives. I will also participate in environmental protection activities and volunteer to help clean up plastic waste in my community.In addition, I will support businesses and organizations that are working to reduce plastic waste. I will choose to buy products with minimal packaging and support companies that use eco-friendly materials. I will also encourage businesses to adopt sustainable practices and reduce their use of plastic.In conclusion, reducing plastic waste is important for protecting the environment, and I am committed to taking action to make a difference. By reducing my own use of plastic, raising awareness of the issue, and supporting businesses that are working to reduce plastic waste, I hope to contribute to a cleaner and healthier planet.作文3：The Importance of Biodiversity ConservationBiodiversity conservation is essential for maintaining the balance of ecosystems and the survival of all living things. Biodiversity provides many benefits to human beings,including ecosystem services, genetic resources, and cultural and aesthetic values.First of all, biodiversity conservation is important for ecosystem services. Ecosystems provide us with clean air, water, and fertile soil, and they also play a crucial role in regulating the climate and preventing natural disasters. By conserving biodiversity, we can ensure the stability of ecosystems and the provision of these essential services.Furthermore, biodiversity conservation is essential for preserving genetic resources. Many species have genetictraits that are valuable for agriculture, medicine, and other fields. By conserving biodiversity, we can maintain a rich genetic pool that can be used for the development of new crop varieties, pharmaceuticals, and other products.In addition, biodiversity conservation is important for preserving cultural and aesthetic values. Many people rely on biodiversity for their traditional livelihoods and culturalpractices, and the natural beauty of diverse ecosystems provides inspiration and enjoyment for people around the world.In conclusion, biodiversity conservation is crucial for maintaining the balance of ecosystems, preserving genetic resources, and safeguarding cultural and aesthetic values. It is important for us to take action to protect and conserve biodiversity, and to recognize the importance of biodiversity for our well-being and the future of the planet.。

小结写法
• ⑶刻画人物的语言、动作、神态、心理活动。例如《穷人》。 • ⑷从一个侧面、一个瞬间之中，捕捉生活，表现主题。例如《在柏
林》。 • ⑸戏剧性地设计情节，埋下伏笔，结尾出人意料——情节引人入胜。
例如《桥》《在柏林》。
拟题撰写 拟写题目
撰写初稿
修改初稿
选择最贴近你自己生活的那个素材。
源于生活 的艺术！
“班长,我知道你讨厌不爱护植物的人，但没有证据可不要乱给别人定罪 啊！”张明极力挣扎着，想要挣脱王寒冰的手。但是，别看班长是个女生， 她的手可真像是千年寒冰，力气大极了，张明的手被她死死拽住，他无计可 施，只得跟着王寒冰既不情愿地迈步向办公室。
到了办公室，王寒冰抢着把张明如何摘花，又如何狡辩的不良行为一五 一十地报告给了班主任李老师，李老师听完后点点头，又问张明：“小明， 是班长说的这样吗？”
环境：开满丁香花的校园 人物：淘气包张明 外号“小辣椒”的班长王寒冰 充满活力的年轻班主任李军
环境：冬日黄昏时车来人往的街头 人物：充满爱心的少年陆天 流浪狗朵朵
类似的生活/校园/街头场景
类似性格的同学/邻居/朋友/老师/弟 弟妹妹/爷爷奶奶/你自己
其他动物朋友：流浪猫
环境：月光下的村庄 人物：铁蛋 铁蛋体弱多病的爷爷
“当然不是了！我根本没摘花！”张明高声回应。 “李老师您看，他还在为自己狡辩！”王寒冰不服气地反驳张明。 “好了，你们也不用吵，我们去实地看看就知道了，让事实说话吧！” “可是,我明明看见......”王寒冰看着张明胸有成足的样子，不禁暗想， 难道真的冤枉他了吗？
午休时,校园里静悄悄的，偶尔听见一两声鸟鸣，仿佛是沉睡的校园做了美 梦，笑出了声。
佳作赏析 鸟巢风波
夜里，刮了一夜的风，下了一夜的雨...... 第二天早上,风停了。校园中的丁香树虽落了一地花瓣 ,却又开 出新花苞；小草从地上探出脑袋起来,重新挺起胸膛,湿润的泥土里 冒出许多新芽,雨后的校园，到处都有新生命的痕迹。 张明一个人悄悄地溜到丁香树旁,嘴里一边嘟嚷着, 一边蹑手蹑 脚地鼓捣着什么。他的眼睛紧紧盯着手上的动作，丝毫不被玩闹的 同学打搅。一会皱着眉，一会眯着眼，又10分钟过去了，张明终于 舒了口气，笑了。 他的怪异举动被班长王寒冰看见了，王班长心中暗想:这个淘气 包张明!肯定在摘花，我要告诉老师！想到这，王寒冰冲上前拉着 张明就往老师的办公室跑。

部编版2024-2025学年七年级上册语文单元写作练习：第四单元写作思路要清晰一、写作题1．（2023七上·成华期末）上文中，鲁迅先生说百草园“那时却是我的乐园”。

“乐园”的意思是快乐的园地。

你的乐园或你心中的乐园是什么？请以《我的乐园》为题目，写一篇记叙文。

要求：①要有真情实感；③自定立意；④不少于500字；⑤不抄袭，不套作；⑥不出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

【答案】例文：我的乐园每个人的心中都有一个属于自己的乐园，它或许是繁华喧嚣的城市，或许是宁静恬淡的乡村，又或许是那广袤无垠的自然。

而我的乐园，却是一个既平凡又特别的地方——我家附近的那片小树林。

小树林位于城市的边缘，它既没有华丽的建筑，也没有喧嚣的街市。

但它有着我童年的欢声笑语，有着我成长的足迹，更有着我与大自然的亲密接触。

那里，每一寸土地都熟悉得仿佛是我自己的身体，每一片叶子都好像会与我对话。

每当夏日的午后，阳光穿过树叶的缝隙，洒下斑驳的光影，我便会带着一本书，坐在树林的入口处，静静地阅读。

那时的我，仿佛置身于一个与世隔绝的仙境，耳畔只有鸟儿的歌唱和树叶的低语。

而每当风起时，树叶随风起舞，仿佛是在为我表演一场自然的舞蹈。

除了阅读，我还喜欢在小树林里探险。

那里的每一个角落，都藏着不同的秘密。

有时，我会发现一只色彩斑斓的蝴蝶，它似乎正在向我展示它的美丽；有时，我会遇见一只正在忙碌觅食的小松鼠，它的大眼睛好像会说话，告诉我它的故事。

小树林还是我和小伙伴们的乐园。

我们会在那里举行各种有趣的活动，比如捉迷藏、爬树比赛、摘果子等等。

每一次的嬉戏，都充满了欢声笑语，成为了我童年最美好的记忆。

时光荏苒，如今的我已经长大成人，但那片小树林，依然是我心中最温暖的乐园。

它承载着我的梦想和希望，见证了我的成长和变化。

每当我在生活中遇到困难和挫折时，我都会回到那里，找回那份纯真和快乐，重新出发。

所以，我的乐园或许不是最华丽、最喧嚣的地方，但它却是我最真挚、最亲近的伙伴。

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写作实践
优秀例文
节日
中国的传统节日形式多样，内容丰富，是我们中华民
族悠久文化的组成部分。我们的传统节日有很多，如春节
、清明、端午、中秋、重阳等。最让我难忘的是今年的端
午节。
开篇从中国的传统节日形式多样写起， 继而转入要写的端午节，点明写作对象， “难忘”总领全文。
写作实践
总写今年的庆端午活动让我们兴奋不已。 今年的端午，我们在学校参加了庆端午活动，这让我 们兴奋不已。一进门，迎接我们的是一个打扮成古代男子 模样的老师，他用雄黄酒在我们的额头上写了一个 “王 ”字，据说这能起到避邪的作用。然后，又给我们每个人 发了一个香袋，据说这能驱虫。
写作实践
提示
① 先浏览这段文字，看看写的内容是否保持了话题的统一。可 以加写一个中心句来统领整段话。
② 调整不合理的句子顺序。比如，可以把具体的例子放在要表 达的观点后面，“爸爸单位……把机器修好了”应该放在“ 爸爸不仅上班忙工作，下了班都在惦记工作”的后面，这就 是调整句子的顺序。
③ 重写时，可以补充一些关联词、提示性语句、过渡句等，使 句子之间衔接自然。
写作实践
点拨
修改后的文段，加入了中心句“爸爸既非常热爱自 己的工作，又很爱家人”，使文段围绕一个中心，保 持了话题的统一。同时加入了一些过渡句，使句子衔 接紧密，语意连贯。
小结
写作时语言要连贯
01
前后话题 的统一。
02
围绕一个话题 的各个句子， 还应该有合理 的顺序。
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语言连贯还应该注 意句子间的衔接过 渡。（运用关联词、 提示语或过渡句）
简要介绍端午节的来历。引用屈原的名言,突 出表现了屈原的精神品质。

（3）关注语言表达的准确性、规范性和美感。在写作过程中，注意遣词造句，使文章表达准确、规范，同时注重修辞手法，提高文章的美感。
2.教学难点
（1）连接词和过渡句的灵活运用。对于学生来说，掌握并熟练运用各种连接词和过渡句是难点。教师需提供实例，引导学生进行模仿和实践，以达到熟练运用的目的。
（2）围绕主题组织材料。学生在写作时往往容易离题，难以把握文章的主题。教师应引导学生从范文分析中学习如何紧扣主题，并通过课堂讨论、互动等方式，帮助学生提高组织材料的能力。
其次，我发现学生在实际运用连接词和过渡句时，还是显得有些生硬。这可能是因为他们对这些词汇和句型的掌握不够熟练。在接下来的教学中，我会增加一些练习，让学生多加练习，提高他们运用连接词和过渡句的能力。
此外，课堂上的小组讨论环节，学生的参与度还有待提高。可能是因为我对讨论主题的设置不够吸引他们的兴趣，或者是我没有充分调动起他们的积极性。在以后的教学中，我会尝试调整讨论主题，使之更具吸引力，并加强对学生的引导和鼓励，提高他们的参与度。
五、教学反思
在上完这节课后，我深感语言连贯对于学生写作的重要性。通过这节课的教学，我发现有几个地方值得我思考和改进。
首先，学生在理解语言连贯的概念上还存在一定的困难。虽然我在课堂上用了一些例子进行解释，但可能还需要找到更贴近学生生活的例子，让他们更直观地感受到语言连贯的作用。在今后的教学中，我会尝试用更多生动有趣的例子来说明这个问题。
在实践活动方面，我发现学生对写作练习的热情还是比较高的。但是，有些学生在操作过程中仍然感到困惑，不知道如何下手。针对这个问题，我打算在下一节课中增加一些写作技巧的讲解，帮助学生更好地进行实践。
此外，我还注意到，学生在成果展示环节，表达能力还有待提高。为了让学生更好地展示自己的成果，我会在课后找时间对他们进行一些口语表达方面的训练，提高他们的表达能力。

部编版六年级语文下册第四单元写作范文心愿六年级作文篇1我，芸芸众生中普通的一员，一个真实而平凡的人，却有着自己的理想，自己的性格和追求。

我，并不崇拜现在的歌星影星，并不欣赏“追星族”和“赶时髦”的做法，但我欣赏书法家，喜欢那些有着远大抱负且能执着追求目标的人。

我喜欢绿色，热爱大自然的一草一木，一山一水。

我敬佩松树的高洁，小草的刚强，顽石的毅力，这些都能让我从中获取力量，促使我奋勇前行。

生活是个舞台，从那里我们能看到人生的多姿多彩，体会到生活的无限乐趣。

人生的理想决定生活的态度。

曾有人说“人多爱追梦”，其实这个“梦”就是愿望之意。

愿望就如一个靶子，而我们则是一支想射中靶心的箭，为了拉个满弓，我们就要全力以赴，无时无刻不在为之奋斗。

就是因为有了愿望，爱迪生才能把光明带给人间，雷锋才能把整个人生都献给祖国，献给人民。

因此，我们的人生不能缺少愿望。

对于那些没有愿望的人，好比大海中的一朵浪花，随着风的吹过而销声匿迹，毫无意义。

我的心愿是当一名书法家，让我手中的笔诠释我“心之所思，梦之所在”。

为了实现这个我从小就盼望已久的愿望，我天天都练习。

我喜欢真诚，讨厌虚假；我渴望快乐，但也接受忧愁。

我高兴过、自豪过，但我不狂妄；我失败过、痛苦过，但我不悲观。

我不怕困难，不畏挫折。

我希望用我的执着，我的努力，我的拼搏，我的奋争，去创造我的价值，去实现我的心愿。

心愿六年级作文篇2在我的心底，总埋藏着一个美丽的心愿，它或许会随着年龄的增长而有所改变，但更会随思想的成熟而日趋强烈……孩提时，我曾有个心愿想当个画家，我掏出了积蓄多年的压岁钱，兴冲冲地买回了画笔、画纸，又报上了“少年国画班”。

我在桌上摊开画纸，挥洒大笔，一座座山峰，一棵棵青松，顿时呈现在画笔之下。

时不时，后退几步看看效果，俨然一副“老画家”的派头。

正当我兴致浓郁之际，爸爸把我叫去：“我去过你们学校了，听老师讲，最近一次测验你从第十名跌到第十五名，大退步了！这样你还画什么画，马上停止！”于是画笔、画纸被束之于“高阁”，“国画班”被改报为“课外英语班”，我的心愿破灭了……学画不成，我又萌发了集邮的愿望。

小学六年级第四单元写作训练例文6则难忘的一件事从开学到现在最使我感动的一件事，那就是一位素不相识的小妹妹对于我的帮助，话得从春天说起。

春风吹拂着千万条才舒展开带黄色嫩叶的柳丝。

青的草，绿的叶，各种色彩鲜艳的花，都像赶集似的聚拢来，形成了光彩夺目的春天。

小燕子从南方赶来，为春光增添了许多生机。

我们学校开展了关于春天的各项活动，让同学们在愉快而有意义的活动中健康成长。

记得上一周的星期五，和煦的阳光照耀着大地，学校决定举行一次放风筝比赛。

上午听到这个消息后，同学们的欢呼声可想而知。

个个糊风筝，制风筝，准备为班级争光。

然而天有不测风云，当日风向不定，放风筝活动到了下午听说取消了。

同学们失望极了，老师们见此情景是无法解释的。

后来天公作美，风儿又恢复了定向，真是天随人意，志在放飞的我们终于赢得了主动，人又有了精神。

老师们又经过讨论才决定恢复放风筝活动，同学们闻此喜讯，喜不自胜，径直奔向操场，准备放风筝，为班级争光。

我和几位好友各自拿着风筝来到早已经成为欢乐海洋的操场上，心切的我们下楼梯的速度太快了，东西丢了竟全然不知。

就在这时从我后面传来急切的声音：“大姐姐们，请停一停！”我回过头去，一看，原来一位小妹妹手里高举着一根木棒，气喘吁吁地走到我们的面前，对我说：“刚才你下楼梯的速度太快了，从你的风筝袋子里掉下来一根木棒你也不知道，我现在把这根木棒还给你，希望你能为班级争光。

”这位小妹妹说完之后，转身就走了，我看着手中的木棒，对着她渐渐远去的背影说：“小妹妹谢谢你，我不会让你失望的，我一定能为班级争光的。

”我和几位好朋友到操场上放风筝，当我在放风筝的时候，刚才小妹妹所说的话在我的脑海中萦绕着，像是对我的鼓励，一根木棒、一只风筝能为班级争到光，这似乎是一件小小的事情，但对我来说恰是一件深沉而又感悟很深的事情，如果那位小妹妹不把木棒还给我，我在风筝比赛中又能做些什么？春天里的故事真多，特别是在我们的校园里，一个又一个的小雷锋在成长起来，使得春光无限，生机勃勃。

First and foremost, the unit focused on expanding our vocabulary and improving our ability to express ourselves fluently in English. We learned a wide range of new words and phrases, and practiced using them in context through speaking and writing exercises. This has been particularly beneficial for me as I often struggled with finding the right words to convey my thoughts. The unit has equipped me with a more diverse vocabulary, allowing me to communicate more effectively.
第四单元英语作文
Unit 4 English Composition
Unit 4 of our English course has been an eye-opening and enriching experience for me. Throughout this unit, we have delved into a variety of topics and language skills, and I have gained a deeper understanding of the English language. In this composition, I would like to share my reflections on the unit, as well as the progress I have made.

九年级英语第四单元写作范文3篇How I`vechanged!初三英语优秀作文：How I’ve changed 篇1When I was a little girl ,I used to play with my friends all day and all night , I was very happy .But now ,I m growing up ,I just wand to be alone , so I become worried . I used to like planting flowers ,but now I don t have any time to do that , I only study and do my homework every day .I used to like watching Tv , and ofen watch cartoon ,but now I m more interested in sports games and English programmes.I didn t use to reading books ,now ienjoy reading magazines ,because I think that the more books I read , the more knowledge I get . I usde to make my mother be angry with me ,now I m obedient to her . I used to be afraid of the dark , but now I like to think about my problem in the dark and enjoy the dark instead How much I have changed !But what changed my life ? The time ,time could change everything.初三英语优秀作文：How I’ve changed 篇2Things in the world are changing. People are changing and every creature is changing. Changing is a neutral word.We can’t judge it is good or bad in general, because every coin has two sides. But sometimes we need to change, because it is good for us. Sometimes we will meet some difficult or uncomfortablesituation. When we are not able to change it, we need to change ourselves. If both of us refuse to budge, the problem would not be solved. Sometimes we need to change our life attitude; sometimes we need to change our views of seeing things; sometimes we need to tolerant; sometimes we need to be strong.Changing ourselves according to the specific situation is good for us.初三英语优秀作文：How I’ve changed 篇3I have changed a lot. I used to be short and had a large build. But now I am much taller and thinner. I was lazy before and I didn't like doing housework. But now I am a hardworking person and I often help my parents do some housework, such as, cleaning the room, washing the dishes, doing the shopping and so on. I think doing the housework can help me grow up and to be indepent. I work hard at my study so I can get better grade than before. I think I am becoming lovely, energetic and easy-going.。