高中英语人教版必修1-unit1-writing.

必修一 Unit1 Anne’s Best FriendDo you want a friend whom you could tell everything to, like your deepest feelings and thoughts? Or are you afraid that your friend would laugh at you, or would not understand what you are goi ng through? Anne Frank wanted the first kind, so she made her diary her best friend.Anne lived in Amsterdam in the Netherlands during World War Ⅱ. Her family was Jewish so nearl y twenty-five months before they were discovered. During that time the only true friend was her diary. She said, ”I don’t want to set down a series of facts in a diary as most people do, but I want this diary itself to be my friend, and I shall call my friend Kitty.” Now read how she felt after being in the hiding place si nce July 1942.Thursday 15th June, 1944 Dear Kitty,I wonder if i t’s because I haven’t been able to be outdoors for so long that I’ve grown so crazy ab out everything to do with nature. I can well remember that there was a time when a deep blue sk y, the song of the birds, moonlight and flowers could never have kept me spellbound. That’s chan ged since I was here.…For example, one evening when it was so warm, I stayed awake on purpose until half past eleven in order to have a good look at the moon by my self. But as the moon gave far too much light, I di dn’t dare open a window. Another time five months ago, I happened to be upstairs at dusk when the window was open. I didn’t go downstairs until the window bad to be shut. The dark, rainy eve ning, the wind, the thundering clouds held me entirely in their power; it was the first time in a ye ar and a half that I’d seen the night face to face……Sadly …I am only able to look at nature through dirty curtains hanging before very dusty windows . It’s no pleasure looking through these any longer because nature is one thing that really must be experienced.Yours, Anne第一单元友谊Reading 安妮最好的朋友你是不是想有一位无话不谈能推心置腹的朋友呢？或者你是不是担心你的朋友会嘲笑你，会不理解你目前的困境呢？安妮·弗兰克想要的是第一种类型的朋友，于是她就把日记当成了她最好的朋友。

Unit 1 Teenage LifePeriod 5 Reading for Writing教材分析该板块设计了读写结合的活动，活动主题是“写一封建议信”(Write a letter of advice)。

阅读文本是一封青少年咨询师Susan Luo写给一位因朋友沉迷于电脑游戏和网络而担忧的青少年的建议信。

青少年思想活跃，渴望独立，在“幼稚”与“成熟”之间徘徊，所以在这个年龄段会面临各种问题。

该板块引导学生思考网瘾、早恋、孤独、与父母之间的代沟等问题，并讨论解决的方法，最终落实到一封建议信的书写。

旨在让学生能够体会到互相沟通、真诚相助的重要性，并能对照反思自己的行为，解决现实生活中出现的问题。

教学目标1. 能正确理解使用下列词汇：behaviour, generation, attract, focus, addict, adult。

2. 了解中外青少年在学习生活、课外活动和成长中可能面临的身心问题。

3. 熟悉并掌握建议信的常见结构，掌握提建议的常用表达方式。

4. 能够写一封针对解决青少年问题的建议信。

5. 能够客观、理性地分析青少年学习生活中的问题，并提出解决方案。

教学重难点【教学重点】帮助学生掌握建议信的常见结构和语言特征，并能写出一封语义连贯、结构清晰的建议信。

【教学难点】掌握建议信的语言特征并能够写出一封语义连贯、结构清晰的建议信。

教学过程Task Writing a letter of adviceStep 1 Reading1. Read the letter. Then answer the following questions:(1) What is Worried Friend’s problem?(2) What suggestions does Susan Luo give to Worried Friend?(3) Besides suggestions, what else does Susan Luo say in her letter?Step 2 Pre-writing2. Work on Activity 1. Students discuss the last 2 questions in groups.3. Work on Activity 2. Study the organisation and language features. Then summarize the expressions used to make suggestions.设计意图：该环节属于语言输入阶段，活动一关注阅读文本内容，活动二关注文本结构和语言特点。

[新教材]人教版（2019）高中英语必修一话题作文与范文10篇【作文一】话题：自我介绍（Welcome Unit）国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平、友谊”夏令营活动，要求提名者提交英文个人简历。

假设你是李华，16岁，晨光中学高一学生，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简历。

1. 爱好音乐、摄影，善于与人交流。

2. 乐于助人，热爱自然，热爱和平。

3. 参加夏令营的目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化(foreign cultures)。

参考词汇：和平友谊夏令营Peace and Friendship Summer Camp要求：1. 词数100词左右；2. 不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文；Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua, a student studying in Chenguang Senior High School. Learning that the Peace and Friendship Summer Camp to be held by International Culture Communication Centre is approaching, I'm writing to apply for it.First and foremost, I have great passion for music and photography, and I always enjoy music in my spare time. Besides, as a kind person who loves nature and peace, I am confident that I can promote a bettercommunication with others. Last but not least, not only can I make more friends, but also I can learn more about foreign cultures.Should this application meet with your favorable consideration, I will do my utmost to justify the confidence you repose in me.Yours truly,Li Hua【作文二】话题：校园生活（Unit1 Teenage Life）假定你是李华，是学校英文报“Advice”栏目的编辑。

WritingTeaching goals教学目标1. Target language目标语言a.重点词汇和短语disagree with, flatter, shine, make an effort to, editor, communicate, situation, gratefulb.重点句子Although I really try to talk to my classmates, I still find it hard to make good friends with them.I do want to change this situation, but I don’tknow how I would be grateful if you could⋯2. Ability goals能力目标a. Enable the Ss how to write a letter as an editor to give advice on how to communicate with people.b. To write an essay to give your opinions about how to make good friends.3. Learning ability goals学能目标Help the Ss to learn how to write a letter as an editor to give advice on how to communicate with people.Enable the Ss to write an essay to give your opinions about how to make good friends.Teaching important&& difficult points 教学重点和难点a. Teach the Ss how to write a letter as an editor to give advice on how to communicate with people.b. Teach the Ss how to write an essay to give your opinions about how to make good friends.Teaching methods教学方法Task-based learning.Discussion.Teaching aids教具准备A projector and a computer.Teaching procedures & ways教学过程与方式Step I RevisionCheck the homework, asking them to read out their ideas for the class.T:Let’scheck the homework. I’d like some of you to read out their ideas. For theclass. Volunteer!Possible versions:S1: Everyone needs friends. We can live without a brother, but not without a friend. Ithink friendship is more important that anything else in my life. So I’d like to spendmost of my time with my friends. We think it’scool to spend most of our time withfriends. Arranging some recreational time with friends is necessary in a well-roundedlife. As part of a large group of friends, or as one half of“ just the two of us, you spend with friends is an essential part of a satisfying life. We can enjoy ourselvesin all kinds of ways, such as traveling, having sports, having dinner, gossiping,drinking coffee, going to the movies. I think the best way to spend time with friends isto go hiking and camping with them. Because when we’re camping we are not in anyrush to go somewhere and there are fewer choices, just enjoying what we’re doing.Step II Warming upT: Have you ever read The 21st Century?S:Yes, I have. ’Itsa popular paper among teenagers in China.T:If you have any problem, you can write to the editor and ask for advice. Here isa letter from a student.Step III WritingThis part asks the Ss to write their advice to Xiaodong as an editor. First, let the Ssto discuss how to write a letter to offer some advice with their partners. Second,teacher shows the instructions on how to write a proposal letter on the screen. Third,ask the Ss to read the letter on Page 7. Ask them to discuss whatXiaodong’sproblem is and what is the solution they can offer in groups of 4, withthe help of the points given on the books. Fourth, give them ten minutes to write theletter. At last, ask some of the Ss to read their letters for the class while the teachergives some comments.T:Today we’re going to write your advice to Xiaodong as an editor. Do you know how to write a proposal letter? Now, let’shave a discussion on it with your partners. Ss are talking about how to write a proposal letter.T:Who’d like to answer this question?S1: The problem should be presented first. Then we must analyze the reasons to cause the problem. Proposing the solution must be the main, which should be well explained.T:Exactly. The discussion of the solution itself, based on the analysis of the problem, is the core of a proposal. I’ll give you some instructions about how to write the bodypart of a proposal letter as follows.Step What should be written How do we writePart I Presenting the problem Introducing the topic andanalyzing the problemPart II Proposing the solution Explaining the proposal ingreat detailPart III Conclusion Concluding byreconfirming the proposedsolutionT:All right. Let ’s read the letter on Page 7.And try to find out what Xiao Dong’s problem is and what is the solution they can offer in groups of 4, with the help of the points given on the books.The Ss are discussing Xiao Dong’sletter.T:OK, who can tell me what Xiao Dong’sproblem is?S:He is not very good at communicating with people. He wants to know how to make friends with others.T:Quite right. Now please write your advice to Xiao Dong as an editor with the help of the points given on the books. I ’llask some of the Ss to read their letters for the class in ten minutes.The Ss are writing the letters.T:Are you finished? ’Ill ask some of the Ss to read their letters for theclass. Possible version:Dear Xiao Dong,I am sorry to hear about your problem and thank you for your trust. You’re feeling quite lonely and find it hard to make friends with your classmates, because you have some problems in communicating with people.You are asking how to make good friends with others. ’Id like to give you some advice on it. First of all, I think you should make an effort to change the situation. Because friends and friendship are important to you. You can try your best to start talking topeople about what you both like. You’d better find the chance to join in people’s discussion in order to understand and communicate with each other. You may show your interest in their talk. You should try to make friends with one or two classmates. If you want to develop a friendship with others, you should first have self-confidence. If you want others to treat you as friends, you should first treat them as friends. Being a good listener is also important. When listening to a friend, you can show that you are concentrated by looking into his or her eyes and asking questions.I hope my advice is helpful and I wish you make some good friends successfullyas soon as possible.Best wishes,Yours trulyLihuaStep IV Writing Task本题要求写一封回信，谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：首先，回应来信中提出的问题，并分析原因。

Unit1 写作课教学设计（一）Teaching PlanObjectives:1. Knowledgea. After this class, the Ss can command the important words and phrases, such as make friends with share… with, honest, understanding, outgoing, easy-going and so on.b. The Ss will learn to use the sentence patterns such as you'd better. …you should. . …why not. . …and so on.2. Abilitya. The Ss can use the important words, phrases, and sentence patterns to make sentences.b. The Ss can write a proposal letter.3. HumanityThe Ss will know the importance of friendship and have the sense of being a good friend. Teaching important and difficult point:allow to use the words. phrases and sentence structures to make sentences and write a proposal letter.Major Procedures:Teaching Aims Teacher'sActivitySs' Activity timeGreetings and lead-in Warming-up Playing a pieceof music andfree-talkListening andanswering3Reading and Discussion Preparation forthewritingGiving a fewminutes to theSs to read ashort letter anddiscuss Howto be a goodDiscussion inGroups andgivingpresentation12friend and How to give a suggestionWriting Learning towrite aproposalletter Giving the Sssometime to writethe letterWriting 12Inter-correcting Enhancing theSs'writing abilityandevaluating Learning theSs correct theirdeskmates'writings andshowingCorrecting andshowing10Summary and homework Making the Ssknow theimportance offriendshipand havingthe sense ofbeing a godfriend andfurtherconsolidationShowing theSs the Englishsaying A friendin need is afriend indeedand assigninghomeworkLearning theEnglish sayingby heart andunderstandingthe homework3 Blackboard-writing PlanningWritingHow to write a proposal letter? Useful expressions: How to be a good friend?outgoingeasygoingcommunicate withshare. . with. . . …You'd better. . .You should. . .It will be a good idea if. . …Teaching reflection:。