初中英语写作-PPT课件.ppt.pdf

While-writing
Who is your best friend? Introduce 3b your best friend by comparing you two .
My best friend Me
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While-writing
My Best Friend
Beginning 1.Who is your best friend? 2.Is your friend similar to you or Body part different? Describe your best friend. 3.What do you think a best friend Ending should be like?
连词，表 示对比
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I am hot-tempered and easy to get angry , while my friend is more patient. _______________________________________
3a
Wang Lingling Liu Lili tall tall library, and always She often goes to the school talks much hair about the things she reads. long straight short straight hair likes reading popular outgoing serious like sports Interests popular outgoing funny Personalities (more details)
Pre-writing

初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
五、认真检查
检查信息点是否全面，时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否清 晰，短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。
检查后，将草稿誊写在纸上，请注意按结构分段，书写清晰。 下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误： 1.We live more and more comfortable。 改正：comfortably(副词修饰动词) 2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers。 改正：much information (不可数名词由much修饰) 3.There has many programs in TV。 改正：There are many programs on TV。 (There be句型和介词短语) 4.I think ride a bike can keep our health。 改正：I think riding a bike can keep us healthy。(动名词作主语)
3.表转折对比关系的：However，but Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one
hand…，On the other hand… Some…，Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As
字迹要清晰，让阅卷人看得清楚，不可字 迹潦草，难以辨认，要保持卷面的整洁。
注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如： receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。
标点符号特别注意汉英的不同。
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件
初中英语作文写作技巧ppt课件

结尾
1. 自然结尾，点明主题 随着文章的结束，文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman (帮助警察)”的结尾 可以是：The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy.再如 “The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是：When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。 2. 首尾呼应，升华主题 在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题，深化主题，起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如 “I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是：I love my hometown, and I am proud of it. 3. 反问结尾，引起深思 这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句，但意义却是肯定的，而且具有一定的强调作用，可引起 他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许 多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是：If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning English is great fun? 4. 表达祝愿，阐述愿望 这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中，表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。 如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是：I hope the farmers' life will be better and better. 另外，书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语：Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。 ppt课件 7

• 总结 in a word（总之）, in all（总之）
• 递进 not only…but (also),
• 举例 and so on，for example
技巧三：句式多样化
原句：It was a wonderful day.
长短句连用 简单句/复合句交叉 感叹句
强调句
What a wonderful day it was! 倒装句 原句：I have never seen such a lovely dog. Never have I seen such a lovely dog. 原句: We heard beautiful songs everywhere. Beautiful songs were heard here and there.
By Linda
英语作文写作技巧：
技巧一：中心明确，围绕发展
My Father 误：My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music and so on. I like music ,too. I think music is very important. It is……
understand a few English words…
要求三：标点使用正确
句号 逗号 省略号 顿号 感叹号 汉语 。 ， …… 、 ！ 英语 . , … 无 !
注意：英语中无顿号
、
1. My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music…
like good many and but …

Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Body
正文
Key sentence1
Most students…
First of all learn… from …also… listen to…, enjoy … Besides make…more convenient
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.

• _____, he stood up. Then he got out. _____, he went back. _____, he smiled.
连
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report.
• A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.
school, though most of us don’t like them at all. 3. Every school has its own rules for students. We
have many school rules to follow in our daily life. 4. What’s more, we ought to return books on time. 5. Our school rules are good for us, I will try my
• According to it, most people travel. And some people stay at home. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
• Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.

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英文写作任务趋势
通过文本呈现写作要点； 强调文章逻辑及语言流畅； 主张美词美句及句型多样化； 重视对学生思维品质的评价。 改变写作要求 “对” ——“美”
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Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students
think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot
Internet. Only in this way, it can help us.students a lot.
Ending
Linking words (连接词)
OR(u提etlt纲ine)ell (复述)
Topic
On the Internet
Beginning Different people have different ideas about ….
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.

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注意：1. 词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不 计入词数）； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分
Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs. Here is a report about my group members’ ideas.
Hopefully everyone can realize their dreams in the future.
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作文评分原则
• 说明：评分时，先根据短文的内容、语言 的准确性和流畅性确定短文所属档次，然 后再根据“分享分档评分表”具体衡量或 调整考生应得分。
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写好英语作文的原则
结构: 要点: 逻辑: 语法: 亮点:
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结构：
• 三段式 “观点——要点——总结”
第一段：开门见山，观点明确,不
超过2句话。
第二段：分2-3点细说。
第三段：得出结论。不能抄第一
段，要有升华。也可以提出希望
和建议等。
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要点：
• 翻译！ 在第二段呈现，要做到全，围绕中心。
8 内容要点，但内容简单平淡 言得体性较好；基本合 较通顺，意思表达
乎规范（出现少许语法 较清楚。
错误，但不影响理解）。
C 3— 描述不够全面（欠缺一 5.5 个内容要点），词语数 量不足。
语言结构较简单；语言 词语贫乏，上下文 得体性较差，出现多处 意思不够连贯。 语法错误。
D 1— 描述过于简单（欠缺两 2.5 个内容要点），词语过 少。