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专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落专题15读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落一、读后续写收尾的方式：读后续写是指在已有的故事基础上，续写一个新的结局或者补充故事情节。
在写作过程中，可以采用多种方式来收尾，例如通过画面定格、情感渲染、意义深化等手法来呈现更加生动、精彩的收尾段落。
二、画面定格画面定格是一种常用的收尾方式，通过描绘人物的动作、场景的变化等来展现故事的和结尾。
例如，在《2020杭州高级中学等五校联考》中，作者通过描写女儿将手搭在母亲肩上的动作，表达了两人之间深厚的感情。
在《Reuben的礼物》中，作者通过描写母亲紧紧拥抱儿子的情景，表达了母子之间深厚的感情。
在实际写作中，画面定格可以通过细致的描写和生动的语言来实现，让读者更加真切地感受到故事情节的和收尾。
1）The sky was filled with a n pure。
sparkling eyes of light。
and the grass beneath my feet was a lush green。
It was as if the merging of night and day had created a breathtaking moment of beauty。
Dawn had arrived。
and with it came a sense of renewal and hope。
(对黎明到来的画面进行了修饰，表现出黎明的美丽和带来的希望)2）As the first rays of dawn broke over the placid ocean。
the water shimmered and glowed with a golden light。
It was as if the sun was bestowing a gift upon the world。
creating a path of light from the shore to the horizon。
专题05读后续写之精彩结尾--新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破好的开端需要精彩的结尾，精彩的结尾可以吸引读者的眼球，这是获取高分的关键。
一主题升华1 名言警句式结尾升华主题使用名言结尾往往能给文章增添文采和说服力，同时也能起到深化主旨的作用，这样的结尾可以抒发感情和渲染氛围，合理运用名言警句可以为读后续写起到画龙点睛的作用。
同时也应当注意具体文本具体分析，使用名言警句合理得当。
【2022年高考浙江卷1月】One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. I felt so sorry to hear that and I thought I should visit him in any case. He was a little surprised to see me when I stepped into his ward with some flowers and fruits. I offered to do the rest work of our project and he invited me to share my ideas to perfect it. We began to work as a fine team and finally finishe d our project on time. Our hard work paid off and Dr. Henderson’s was very satisfied with our wonderful findings. From this project, we also learned the significance of teammates. Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.【译文】有一天，我得到消息，他因重病入院。
高考英语读后续写之精彩结尾01 哲理式结尾哲理性结尾往往总结出文章中心思想，并用客观语言表述，它能使作文具有一定的思想含量，能给读者送去一份宝贵的精神财富。
它可以通过以小见大、从物到人、由事及理、从点到面、由一及众等方式升华文章主题。
哲理性结尾佳句欣赏：1. Shy and silent as Abe was, he gave his mum a big hug and whispered, “I love you!” Love may be silent, but it was always there.2. I believe God is glad to help someone who wants to help himself.3. Life is full of dilemmas and conflicts, but we should smile and never give up, just like Kelly.4. She returned the seven dollars and I was sure there was something glorious shining in her eyes. I got to know it is the grace of forgiveness.5. Many years has gone by, but whenever I look back to that day, I am still grateful for the lesson in forgiveness that she taught me.6. The thankful words I heard from the boy and the girl after they recovered from the hospital made one thing strike my 19-year-old mind—rose given, fragrance in hand!02 以景结情以景结情是诗歌绝句的一种技巧，也是借景抒情的方式之一，可以使读者在景物描写中，驰骋想象，体味诗的意境，产生韵味无穷的艺术效果。
【读后续写】句子素材积累动作描写1. She shot her a meaningful look.她向他意味深长地看了一眼。
2. Beli’s diamond eyes locked on to her.贝利钻石般的眼睛紧盯着她。
3. Mary felt her heart race.玛丽感到她的心跳加速。
4. A great silence surrounded them.周围一片寂静。
5. His name had completely slipped from my memory.他的名字，我竟忘得一干二净。
6. He stormed out and slammed the door shut.他怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。
7. We were merrily driving on the highway when suddenly one tyre burst.我们正在高速路上欢快地开着车突然一个轮胎爆胎了。
8. Jenny walked slowly to the front, with her legs trembling and her heart bumping nearly out of her chest.珍妮慢慢走到讲台，腿发抖，心都快跳出来了。
9. She choked and her eyes brimmed with tears.她喉咙哽咽，眼里满是泪水。
10.The moment he finished his speech in a magnetic voice, a wave of applause erupted from the audience.他用磁性的嗓音完成了演讲，观众席中暴发一阵掌声。
11. He stood leaning against the wal l, unable to speak.他靠着墙站着，说不出话来。
（表达伤心）12. She hugged them to her chest, and at last she was able to look up with tearful eyes and a smile.她把它们紧紧地抱在胸前，终于抬起头来，泪流满面地微笑着。
万能结尾句助人结尾句Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
感动感悟结尾句Whether rich or poor,we should be happy to do something for society.This is because giving is the source of happiness.无论贫富，我们都应该为社会做点什么。
这是因为给予是幸福的源泉。
脱险结尾句That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it.It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，没有什么能够抹去它。
事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境成长改变结尾句1.学习知识促“改变”It's never too late to learn.Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。
每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
2.发挥天赋促“改变”Actually,each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with.As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest,and also make efforts,we can create miracles in the end.事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不同的天赋，只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹。
读后续写结尾金句
1. 放下执念，才能获得真正的自由。
当我们迈出放下的一步，便能轻
松地走进未来的幸福。
2. 坚持梦想是一种力量，也是一种信念。
只要心中有梦想，就会拥有
无限的可能。
3. 真正的成功并不是你所拥有的物质财富，而是你所拥有的自我价值。
4. 人生是一段奇妙的旅程，我们必须在自己的旅程中追求自己的幸福。
在这个充满挑战的世界，我们每个人都需要自信和勇气去面对自己的
人生。
我们需要学会放下那些束缚我们的执念，去追寻我们的梦想和
自我价值。
只有这样，我们才能在这段奇妙的旅程中获得真正的自由
和成功。
人生的每一步都是一种经历，每一次失败都是一次成长。
我们需要勇
敢地面对自己的失败和挫折，不抱怨命运的不公，而是凭借自身的力
量和信念，去迎接更多的机会和更美好的未来。
坚持自己的梦想，追
寻自己的目标，这是人生中最为珍贵的财富。
最后，希望每个人都能够在自己的人生旅程中勇敢地前进，放下执念，
坚持梦想，追求自我价值。
只有这样，我们才能在这个世界上获得真正的自由和成功。
专题15-读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落一、读后续写收尾的方式：1.画面定格2.对话收尾3.主题升华4.结尾留白5.首尾呼应二、画面定格1.人物动作的画面定格如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考） They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her back into the deluge.如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.如：The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“T omorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...”The n the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily withthem.2.特殊寓意的写景画面（1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。
1. Life is 10% what happens to us and 90% how we react to it.生活中10%是发生在我们身上的事，90%是我们应对的方式。
2. The positive thinker sees the invisible, feels the intangible, andachieves the impossible.积极的思考者能看到看不见的，感受无形的，实现不可能的。
3.It’s n ot what happens to you, but how you reactto it that matters.在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。
4.Livelife to the fullest, and focus on the positive.充分地享受人生，保持积极的心态。
5.Onesmall positive thought can change your whole day.一个积极的小想法可以改变你的一整天。
6.Whenlife gives you lemons, make lemonade.当生活给了你柠檬，就做柠檬水。
7.Insteadof worrying about what you cannot control, shift your energy to what you cancreate.不要担心你不能控制的事情，把你的精力转移到你能创造的事情上。
8.Youcannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how yourespond to it.你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以选择如何应对。
9.Themore you feed your mind with positive thoughts, the more you can attract greatthings into your life.你越是用积极的思想充实你的头脑，你就越能吸引极好的事物进入你的生活。
主题1：读后续写之不同结尾段落
在这个故事的不同结尾中，我们可以看到主要角色所面临的不
同选择和结果。
以下是三个可能的结尾段落：
结尾一：和解与友谊
主人公经历了一系列挑战和困难，最终决定与他的对手和解。
在一个令人感动的场景中，主人公与对手之间的紧张关系开始缓解。
他们开始更好地理解彼此，寻求共同的解决方案，并最终建立起真
正的友谊。
这个结局传达了一个重要的信息，即通过沟通和理解，
人们可以超越差异，建立和谐与合作。
结尾二：背叛与复仇
主人公的经历使他变得愤怒和痛苦，他决定采取行动来报复他
的对手。
他密谋了一个计划，以破坏对手的名誉和声誉。
然而，这
个决定使他堕入了复仇的深渊，最终毁灭了他自己。
这个结局传达
了一个重要的信息，即仇恨和复仇只会造成更多的伤害，而不是解
决问题。
结尾三：内心的成长与救赎
主人公通过经历一系列困境和磨难，逐渐认识到自己的错误和不成熟。
他决定寻找内心的和解和成长。
在一个感人的场景中，主人公表现出真正的悔过和决心改变。
通过真诚的努力和付出，他最终获得了内心的平静和救赎。
这个结局传达了一个重要的信息，即每个人都有机会从错误中研究，并通过成长和改变来重建自己的生活。
每个结局都传达了不同的信息和主题，让读者思考人性、道德和选择的重要性。
无论结局如何，这个故事都带给我们启示，教会我们在生活中做出明智的抉择并寻找内心的和解。
专题15 读后续写之各种精彩收尾段落一、读后续写收尾的方式：➢ 1.画面定格➢ 2.对话收尾➢ 3.主题升华➢ 4.结尾留白➢ 5.首尾呼应二、画面定格1.人物动作的画面定格如：（2020杭州高级中学等五校联考）They stood there for a moment, side by side, waiting for the rushing holiday current and for their place in it. Then the daughter glanced over and momentarily regarded her mother. And slowly, almost reluctantly, she placed her arm with apparently unaccustomed affection around her mother’s shoulders and gently guided her ba ck into the deluge.如：His hard work paid off! Holding the soda tin firmly, Reuben rushed for the shop to buy the brooch. The moment he got the beautiful brooch, he burst through the front door and placed it in Dora’s hand. Never had Dora received such a gift. Speechless and happy, she held her son tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.如：The butterfly cleaned her tears on the face，“No.” God felt a bit relieved and said，“Tomorrow you can become human again.” But she shook her head and said, “No, I want to be a butterfly for the rest of my life...”Then the butterfly would stay together with her lover forever. On the top of the mountain, she seemed to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset happily with them.2.特殊寓意的写景画面（1）The sky was a billion pure eyes of light and the grass green underfoot, it was as if night and day had become one beautiful moment. Dawn had come.天空像是一亿只纯净的眼睛拼接在一起，脚下是青草，仿佛黑夜和白昼已成为一个美丽的时刻。
黎明已经来临。
（黎明到来的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（2）Dawn sent shimmering rays over the placid ocean, bestowing a golden path from the shore to the horizon.黎明在平静的海面上放射出出闪闪发亮的光线，留下一条从海岸到地平线横亘而过的金色道路。
（黎明到来的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（3）The crystal and cerulean water was gentle as I waded through it, the sunset like orange paint on a blue canvas.当我涉过水晶般天蓝色的轻柔的水时，日落就像蓝色画布上的橙色颜料。
（美好日落时的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（4）The lingering sunlight was obliterated by the rapidly falling night，resembling a pitch-black curtain draped over the sky.逗留在天际的最后一缕阳光被迅速落下的夜幕擦除，就像是天空被一层漆黑的幕布覆盖。
（日落时的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（5）The moon under siege by stars seemed to lighten the night bringing forth stars that shone and hung in the blackness. The never ending blackness consumed everything.被群星围困的月亮似乎照亮了黑夜，带来了在黑暗中闪耀和悬挂着的群星。
无尽的黑暗吞噬了一切。
（描写夜空的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（6）Looking up, I saw the sun shine brighter than I ever knew before. I saw a tree in the distance glisten gently as it reflected the sun's rays. My consciousness ebbed away with the heat. I took a few blinks before I landed with a thud.抬头一看，我看到太阳比我以前所知道的还要明亮。
我看见远处有一棵树反射着太阳光，发出柔和的光辉。
我的意识随着热度而衰退。
我眨了眨眼，然后摔倒在地才猛然回到现实中，恢复了知觉。
（特殊寓意）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（7）Dotted with glittering stars, the sky, midnight blue, gave the scene a fairytale quality. 缀满星光的天空，午夜的蓝色，给了这一场景一个童话般的质量。
（神话般美丽的夜空画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（8）Kissed by the rain and glistening, the wet ground is cold under foot. A dense earthly sweet smell rises from the ground, enveloping everything within its soft embrace.潮湿的地面走起来很冷，被雨水亲吻后闪闪发光。
一股浓郁的泥土般的香味从地上升起，把一切都包裹在它柔软的怀抱里。
（雨后清新的画面）The rain drummed on the window, bidding farewell to the last beam of sunlight.雨水打着窗户，向最后一缕阳光告别。
（雨水来临的画面）2.特殊寓意的写景画面（9）The leaves crunched beneath my feet as I strolled down the street. Occasionally, one would fall past me, lightly swaying as the air gently carried it to the ground. 我在街上漫步时，树叶在我脚下嘎吱作响。
偶尔，有叶子会从我身边掉下来，轻轻地摇晃，缓缓落到到地面。
（描写落叶的画面）三、对话收尾（1）Chester said his father told him he had tried to search for him and his brother, but both brothers had changed their last names.“He does remember me and my older brother and he told me that he’s been looking for us ever since we lost contact，” he said. Chester said his brother has since flown to Colombia to be reunited with Urrea as well. When asked how the reunion with his father will change his life, Chester said，“I got family everywhere, so it might lead to many more trips now.”(2) What was most fascinating about the reunion is that Shavi also moves others. Nina’s family had moved to a bigger apartment.“I’ve heard amazing stories about dogs’loyalty, but I never imagined this sort of thing would ever happen to me. Even now, I can hardly believe this dog traveled such a long distance to find us，” said Nina，“I would never give this kind of friend away again. I never grow tired of repeating this—animals are the most devoted and loving creatures. They need our love and care.”(3) Her husband spoke to the director of Heightvale, Dolores Haworth. Soon she offered him a job working for the company. She said，“He just had a brilliant working attitu de and is definitely the type of employee we are looking for. I was told, ‘If he does this for free, imagine his jobs if he was being paid. ’I met him and he was a lovely and polite young man and he has already started working for us.”(4) …They hung all the things back to the wall.Jack asked Paisley, “Are you really willing to leada tough life with me？” She patted away the ashes on hands and looked at the walls with loads ofstuff on them satisfactorily, saying，“Yes! For me，it is not a suffering to liv e.”四、主题升华(1) Everyone has one person they look up to as a role model. To me there is none other than my mom. She has beauty, brains, and one of the best hearts I know. Without her in my life, I would have no idea whether I can be a_famous_dancer. Someday, when_I_am_older and have children of my own, I hope I can be just as great a parent as my mom.（母爱的深远影响）(2) ….I am extremely unhappy about it. I think money doesn’t equal happiness. And free life style also doesn’t equal happiness. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other, and does everything useful for our society. Most of my classmates support me. But some of them think money is everything.In my opinion, money can’t take the place of everything, such as your life, your time and your happiness.(表达自己的价值观）(4) “Two reasons account for that you won，” the teacher answered.“First, you’ve almost mastered one of the most difficult throws in all of judo. Second, the only known defense for that move is for your opponent to grab your left arm. It is your biggest weakness that makes you win the match. As a proverb says, ‘Every coin has two sides.’ Making full use of your strength is your achievement. Please remember that in no case will you give up especially in trouble. God is fair to ev eryone.”(借用名言警句来升华主题）五、结尾留白(1) While she wrapped them, I took a deep breath and asked Joy, “Do you have dinner plans?” I explained that I’d like to wait a bit before I went back to the hospital –gave Grace and her husband some time alone with baby. “Would you be interested in joining me in a bite to eat?” I asked. “I’d love to,” she replied, her eyes sparkling like diamonds. And, this was the beginning ofthe end to my months of heartbreak foll owing Betsy’s death.（故事结尾留白，给予读者想象空间）(2) The beggar hesitated for a moment, then he decided to open it. He declared aloud, “Who cares? He wanted me to have it anyway. I might as well enjoy it now.”With that, he unwrapped the white tissue paper, but to his surprise, there was no hard rock candy inside. Instead, into his fingers fell a shiny white pearl worth thousands of dollars.六、首尾呼应(1) 2017年浙江高考题开头：I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with suprises and amusements, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange faimly trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.结尾：Despite mom's being absent-minded and forgetful,she was still a kind and nice mom.(2) 2018年浙江高考题开头：It was summer and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.结尾：Never had I had such a thrilling yet dangerous vacation before. The special trip to the Wild West was deeply engraved in my mind.(3) 2016年浙江高考题开头：A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.结尾：What a funny day. Arthur couldn't stop laughing whenever he looked back on this hilarious 搞笑的experience.附：名言警句升华主题1. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。
