(新)高考英语二轮复习考前三个月专题五短文改错模拟演练,集中突破命题点模拟演练八

语鹅市安置阳光实验学校短文改错(1)It was 7：15 in the morning of February 8th, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn't stop and drive off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital.(2)I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can't accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn't be forbidden to watch TV.(3)Dear sir，Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.CustomerLi Ming(4)I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place.We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming's parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday.Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven't see each other much. But we've kept writing to each other.(5)I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we're going to have tomorrow. The teacher hasalready told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good.In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115－140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.(6)Dear Susan，I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours，Zhang Ming(7)Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even communicate some college students freely.(8)If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics asmuch as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Gamesa success.(9)Dear Mary，I receive your E－mail just now. Don't worry about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I'm afraid I couldn't agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I' m looking forward to hearing good news from you.Yours，Li Hua (10)Dear Ralph,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one tomove into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don't talk with me, and they've become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don't I win true friendship?答案：（1） It was 715 in onthe morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking alongPark Road towards the east while when an old man came out of the park on theother sides side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Streetand made make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit theman while she he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn'tstop and drive drove off at full speed heading west. I noticed the driver was∧a young woman wore wearing a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. After two minutes later, I stopped a passed passing car and took the old manto the nearest hospital.答案：（2）I often quarrel about with my mother over whether I can watch TV afterschool. She holds ∧the view that senior three students have to makefully fulluse of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me her that once I am allowed to do that, I'll ∧be unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye eyes .But I really can't accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch watching TV can setmy mind at rest after a day's hard works work . Besides, it is important forus to know what had has happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn'tbe forbidden to watch TV.答案：（3） Dear sir ，Last year I buy bought a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road.We all like ∧the shape of the refrigerator. And But recently I findsomething is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it∧is或去itturned on. At first it is low but gradually it become becomes louder and louder.To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing disappointed. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please sendapeople man/ person to repair it? I will ∧be/stayat home this weekend.Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks Thankyou very much. Customer Li Ming答案：（4）I first met Li Ming at a friend friend's birthday party five years ago.Then I invited Li Ming over in to my place. We listen listened to my CDs togetherand soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming's parents invited I me to spend two wonderful week weeks in Qingdao with them during the summerholiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beautiful beachesthere. Last year I was ill but and had to stay in hospital for a week. LiMing came ∧to see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and theymoved to another city. Since then we haven't see seen each other much. butwe've kept writing to each other.答案：（5）I feel quite sure∧about/ofthe chemistry test that we're going tohave tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact exactly what to studyand I think my grades on homework has have been good.In a fact, I thinkchemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susanand I had have already spent two hours review reviewing pages 115－140 tonight.We are going to devote another hour to practise practicing with some of thesample(实例) problem problems . Then I will ∧beready for the test.答案：（6） Dear Susan ，I'm very gladly glad to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although because/asI have classes in the afternoon. You won't find ∧it difficult to get tothe city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute minutesand will takeyou rightly right to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by thenor andI will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with about our plan for the weekend overdinner. Having Havea pleasant trip and see you Friday.Yours ， Zhang Ming 答案：（7）Some One day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there where people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised surprise ， I found the oral English of some junior students were was better than me mine . I asked them for advice and they told me to practise moreon QQ. But So every day after that I would spend one hour practise practising myoral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions.With As 或went －goingtime went by, I found that I could evencommunicate ∧withsome college students freely.答案：（8）If I have the honor to be chose chosen to work for the 29thOlympic Games,I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about with 或toforeign visitors. Second ，I will learn more about ∧the history of theOlympics as much well as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was am familiarwith Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways way in the city. Finally,I should be able to tell visitors about our history or and culture and showthem their our great achievements. In short, I will do my best to helpmaking makethe Games a success. 答案：（9） Dear Mary ，I receive received your E －mail just now. Don't worry about me. I'm getting on well with my research work in the lab.But to my greatly greatsurprise you say you will give up learn learningEnglish. The reason isbecause thatyou have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests interest .I'm afraid I couldn't can't agree with you . I know it is difficulty difficultto learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be ∧an important tool in our future work. Beside Besides ， itis becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I' am looking forward to hearing good news from you.Yours ， Li Hua 答案：（10） Dear Ralph,I am an a university student. I once thought life at the universitymust be excellent, but now I ∧have changed my mind. I have threeroommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I We got along peacefully and happy happily. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don't talk with me, and they've become cold coldertoward me. Many time times ， I have wanted to talk with them about how I feltlike, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving left alone, I alwaysrecall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don't can't I win truefriendship?。

专题五 短文改错训练1AAt present ，I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student ，I study hard every day and live it at the full.It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me ，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship ，hoped to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort ，I succeeded.At the ceremony ，my mum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and with the brightest smile on her face.答案：At present ，I am extreme extremelyhappy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student ，I study hard every day and live it at to the full.It feels good to studyhard with my determining determinedclassmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me ，the experience of my receiving the scholarshipin middle school topped it them all.It was a time when my family is wasgoing through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship ，hoped hopingto lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort efforts，I succeeded.At the ceremony ，my mum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and yet/butwith the brightest smile on her face.BOn September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if they visited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements in science andtechnology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology.答案：On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science andTechnology Museum.At 8：00，we leave left for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them it to us briefly and told us how whatwe should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but and began our separate visit visits.Some students took notes carefully as they visited.All the students were amazing amazedat the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after beforewe knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly great interest in science and technology.CThis morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried ，I immediately tried the number.A man answered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face ，I felt happy that I was able to help.答案：This morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or anda card with a phone number.Believe Believingthat the owner would be worried ，I immediatelytried the number.A man answered it in an amazing amazed voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs sighed with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late later ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an theowner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated repeatedly.Seeing the smile on her hisface ，I felt happy that I was able to help. DWhen it comes to the TV ，there will be different word in different people's minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.Therefore ，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.答案：When it comes to the TV ，there will be different word wordsin different people's minds.Some people think that watch watchingTV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or and know more about the world by watching latest news andreports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we canpredict that whatmay happen in the future and be prepared. Therefore However ，every coin has its two sides.There is arealso disadvantages of watching TV.Not only do does it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect effecton our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat it in a right way.训练2AMy name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao ，Shandong Province on February 1995.I started the school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese ，maths ，English ，physics ，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at st year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.答案：My name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao ，Shandong Province on in February 1995.I started school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy happily in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate graduatedlast summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese ，maths ，English ，physics ，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but andI am very good at it them .Last year I winned wonfirst prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp stamps .My favourite sports is areswimming in summer and skating in winter. BOne day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow －covering road.Many people passed by ，and no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got into a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waiting the ambulance ，I took down my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time did the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into an ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.答案：One day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy heavily onto the snow －covering snow －covered road.Many people passed by ，and butno one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got getinto a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waitingthe ambulance ，I took down off my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time the ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry himinto an the ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this itis our duty to help those who are in troubles trouble. CI'm going to study in the senior middle school on September.I can live either at school and at home.But I can't decide because both has advantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but I can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student at school.Maybe I can't sleep good.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoy eat with my classmates.I think it's a great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home ，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely.It's so hard to make a decision.答案：I'm going to study in the senior middle school on inSeptember.I can live either at school and or at home.But I can't decide because both has haveadvantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but so/andI can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student students at school.Maybe I can't sleep good well.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoyeat eating with my classmates.I think it's great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home ，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely safe.It's so hard tomake a decision.DBeijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago ，visitors behave badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers ，cutting down trees and hurt animals.And even better ，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily ，things has changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily.As student ，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's to change our behaviour when we travel.答案： Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist tourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago ，visitors behave behavedbadly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers ，cutting cut down trees and hurt animals.And even better worse，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily ，things has havechanged.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at to/towards animals.Everybody Nobodysmokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily happy .As student ，I think we should know it's our duty to protect theenvironment.Let'schange our behaviour when we travel.训练3A(导学号59430108) Dear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me ，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello ，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do exceptsitting in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.Love always.Your Friend ，Jesus答案：Dear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me ，asked asking my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your lifeyesterday.But I noticed you were too busily busy.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it therewould be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello ，but you were too busy.At one point you have hadto wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting sit in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot feet.I thought you wanted to talk to meand but you ran to the phone and calling calleda friend. Love always.Your Friend ，JesusBRecently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies that I will not want.But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back.” Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office change immediately.Because I now knew who had been sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.答案： Recently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting apackage.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies company that I will not want.But So I will have to go to the trouble of send sending it back.” Late Laterthat day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything somethingin the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on towards/tothe package waiting for me at the post office change changedimmediately.Because I now knew who had sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful delightedto get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.CIt was an unusual cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were especially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across the street.There ，walking into town ，was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads “I will work for food.” My heart was sank.We continued with our meals ，but his image lasted in my mind.答案：It was an unusual unusuallycold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So But a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit satwith two friends by the window ofrestaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were was especially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across thestreet.There ，walking into town ，was a man which whoappeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She He was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads reading“I will work for food.” My heartsank.We continued with our meals meal，but his image lasted in my mind.DWhen I was seven years old and my sister were only four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week after his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing.Although we were really so young to understand what was going on ，but I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that we needed ，but we miss our father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken.His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.答案：When I was seven years old and my sister were was only four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week weeksafter his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing disappointed .Although we were really so tooyoung to understand what was going on ， I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that whatwe needed ，but we miss missedour father.About every evening we would go to our grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time atKentucky Fried Chicken.His Her boss was a nice young man named Charles which whogot to know my mother and fell in love with her later.训练4A(导学号59430109)Dear John ，I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you.In addition ，don't worry at your school work.We will help you make it up when you return back to school.During recovery in hospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help improve your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or drink more water than usually.Always follow the doctors' advices.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours ，Li Hua答案：Dear John ，I heard you were injured in a an accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me I plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning turnto us if there is everything something we can do for you.In addition ，don't worry at aboutyour school work.We will help you make it up when you returnto school.During recovery in hospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help helpsimprove your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or and drink more water than usually usual.Always follow the doctors' advices advice.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back. Yours ，Li HuaB(导学号59430110)In our life ，everyone is surely to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following my teacher in the English class.Beside ，my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends.They willing shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses in learning English.答案：In our life ，everyone is surely sureto have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am wasabout my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following follow my teacher in the English class.Beside Besides ，my classmates often laughed at me becausemy poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took part in the English Corner that whereI metmany friends.They willing willingly shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you Italked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses progressin learning English.CThe trip of Shanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so excited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep standing all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie in bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bed excited.My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit many places of interests.I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my own mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.答案：The trip of toShanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so tooexcited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but and we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep keptstanding all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie lyingin bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bed excited excitedly .My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit visitedmany places of interests interest .I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.DI want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that I needed in a big box.The big day had arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and then got on the bus by me.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interestedwaiting for me.On arrival I found many student accompanied by their parents.I feel sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying my luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became more dependent through it.答案： I want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated dates back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that whatI needed in a big box.The big day arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and thengot on the bus by me myself.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interested interesting waiting for me.On arrival I found many student studentsaccompanied by their parents.I feel felt sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying carrymy luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became more dependent independentthrough it. 训练5AI still remember the day which I learned the importance of following the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I went shopping with some of my best friends.We bought what we were needed and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So we were too tiring and decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have we reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot away from me.What dangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey the traffic rules.答案：I still remember the day which whenI learned the importance of following the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I went shopping with some of my bestfriends.We bought what weneeded and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly narrow escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So But we were too tiring tired and decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have hadwe reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot feet away from me.What Howdangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey obeyingthe traffic rules. BHow often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medical magazine ，that provides guidance ，say that the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because their teeth can become bad fast ，while adults without problem can wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are OK for people who have been caring for his teeth.Similar advice is giving elsewhere.An expert group review the evidence in Finland back in 2001 had recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.答案：How often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medical magazine ，that which provides guidance ，say saysthat the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because theirteeth can become bad fast faster ，while adults without problem problemscan wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are isOK for people who have been caring for his their teeth.Similar advice is giving given elsewhere.An expert group review reviewingthe evidence in Finland back in 2001 recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.CHi Thomas ，How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting because I have appliedfor a holiday job ，taught English conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit of worried because I don't know if I should bring some present for the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or just smiling? What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do something that will seem rudely? This may seem unimportant with you ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or I'd love to know what you think.You had been to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，Bruno答案：Hi Thomas ， How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting excited because I have applied for a holiday job ，taught teachingEnglish conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit worried because I don't know if I should bring some present presentsfor the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or justsmiling smile ？ What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do somethingthat will seem rudely rude ？ This may seem unimportant with to/foryou ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or so I'd love to know what you think.You had havebeen to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，BrunoDDear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked us list what our parents had done for us.I write down a lot of good sides.Time passes quickly ，isn't it? It is three years when I became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far ，I really appreciate for your support.I know that without your properly guidance ，I would not have doneso well.However ，what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true.Please continue to lend I a hand.I really need your help.Kate答案：Dear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked uslist what our parents had done for us.I write wrote down a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly ，isn't doesn't it? It is three years when sinceI became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses progressthat I have made so far ，I really appreciate your support.I know that without your properly properguidance ，I would not have done so well.However ，what still makes me puzzling puzzled is how to make my dream to go to the atop university come true.Please continue to lend I mea hand.I really need your help. Kate训练6ADear manager ，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me briefly.I am a 25－year －old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a English guide for two years after graduation.As a result ，my oral English is pretty well.I have great interest the job.I had much confidence in myself.If I am given to the job ，I can assure you I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully ，Wang Yong答案：Dear manager ，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions position as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me myselfbriefly. I am a 25－year －old young man /graduated graduating from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a anEnglish guide for two years after graduation.As a result ，my oral English is pretty well good.I have great interest the job.I had have much confidence in myself.If I am given the job ，I can assureyou I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient convenienceto discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application willbe high highlyappreciated. Yours respectfully ，Wang YongBDear Mandy ，I'm not doing well in my lessons at school ，especial in maths.My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university.He thinks I'm lazy ，but it's not true.I work really hard ，often study late into the night ！I've tried to talk to my mother ，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does.My brother doesn't study very hard ，and he always gets excellent grades.It's not fair!The only thing I like it is art.My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year.When I told my dad ，all he said was ，“You mustn't waste your time in art.You must focus your mind on your lessons ！”I'm feeling quite puzzling about what to do now.Would you please help me out?Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely ，Lisa答案：Dear Mandy ，。

高考英语二轮复习第3板块专题5短文改错学案含解析专题五短文改错[ 三年考情分析][命题规律]短文改错的语言材料通常取自于学生的习作，以记叙文为主，主要考查学生在语篇中准确运用英语知识的能力。

1．错误类型相对稳定。

全国三套卷的设题中，错词各为7－8个，多词或缺词为2－3个。

需要注意的是，有时从句引导词错误既可按错一词也可按缺一词修改。

2．知识考查覆盖面广，动词、形容词、副词、名词、代词、冠词、介词、连词及行文逻辑是考查的重点。

3．近三年高考考点相对稳定，但也有变化，如2017年全国卷Ⅰ首考了数词，2018年全国卷Ⅱ首考了名词普通格与所有格的误用。

[命题趋势]1．预计2019年高考短文改错仍将以记叙文为主，题材和难易度都会保持相对稳定，话题贴近学生生活，内容积极向上，反映核心价值观。

2．以词法考查为重点，其次会考查句法及行文逻辑。

3．备考时要注意近三年高考未考到的知识点，像虚拟语气中的谓语动词、强调句型中that的用法、倒装句中助动词的用法等。

[短文改错解题三步骤]第一步：从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态短文改错取材于考生作文，在时态上常用一般现在时和一般过去时。

有些句子中谓语动词的时态和语态本身并没有错误，只有立足于上下文才能发现其中的错误。

因此，在理解短文大意之后就应该逐句排查每句的时态和语态。

第二步：从句子入手，逐句分析，推敲语法解决语法类错误的关键是要熟知短文改错的出题点，对实词和虚词的考查角度了如指掌。

如动词类错误一般有三个左右，第一步应从时态、语态角度进行排查，这时就需要考虑非谓语动词、主谓一致和情态动词；名词的数、形容词与副词的混用、冠词的用法、介词搭配等问题几乎每年都要考到，因此我们做题时要做到心中有数。

第三步：从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代通过前两步仍然有做不出来的，就应该重读短文，看看是否存在连词错误、指代是否一致、逻辑词是否一致。

2018年⾼考英语全国专⽤考前三个⽉⽂档：专题五短⽂改错满分⽅略第三步模拟演练四含解析精品模拟演练(四)A(2017·湖北黄冈⼀模)This afternoon，I saw an interesting thing while I was walking home to school.I noticed a schoolboy walking in the front of me.When he passed by a white wall，he left two footprints on it.See this，an old man shouted at the boy angry.The boy felt afraid and ran out quickly.A few minutes later，other boy passed by the wall and saw the footprints on it.He thought a moment and took out a pencil from his schoolbag.After I was wondering，I saw the boy painting a panda on the wall.And the footprints become the panda’s black eyes.What smart the boy was!答案This afternoon，I saw an interesting thing while I was walking hometofrom school.I noticed a schoolboy walking in the front of me.When he passed by a white wall，he left twofootprints on it.SeeSeeing this，an old man shouted at the boyangryangrily.The boy felt afraid and ranoutaway quickly.A few minutes later，otheranother boy passed by the wall and saw the footprints on it.He thought∧for a moment and took out a pencil from his schoolbag.AfterWhile/When/As I was wondering，I sawthe boy painting a panda on the wall.And the footprints becomebecame the panda’s black eyes.WhatHowsmart the boy was!1.答案to→from解析考查介词。

模拟演练（一）AI’d like to introduce Sarah to you.She is a good friend of me.Actually she is an exchange student from Ireland ，which has been studying in my school for two month.Wanting to take an advantage of her short time here ，Sarah works hardly.She had not studied Chinese before arriving here ，but she has some difficulty communicating with people.She woke up early every morning to study a bit before class.I admire her independence for doing all of this while live so far away from her family.Besides ，Sarah is in great help.Busy as she is ，she often takes time help classmates with their English homework.A lovely girl ，isn’t she?答案I’d like to introduce Sarah to you.She is a good friend of me mine.Actually she is an exchange student from Ireland ，which whohas been studying in my school for two month months .Wanting to take an\ advantage of her short time here ，Sarah works hardly hard.She had not studied Chinese before arriving here ，but soshe has some difficulty communicating with people.She woke wakesup early every morning to study a bit before class.I admire her independence for doing all of this while live livingso far away from her family.Besides ，Sarah is in ofgreat help.Busy as she is ，she often takes time ∧to help classmates with their English homework.A lovely girl ，isn’t she?BBeing responsible are actually not that difficult.I used to think that it was hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.An incident happening in a rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude.I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light while a girl was knocked down by passing car ，which drove off quickly.A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation.Soon many help was given to the girl.We sent her to the nearest hospitals in time ，and she received properly treatment.Not badly injured ，I expressed gratitude to those giving pared with the escaping driver ，I was proud of what I did. 答案Being responsible are isactually not that difficult.I used to think that it was hard to grow up into a responsible member of the society.An incident happening in ona rainy Sunday afternoon changed my attitude.I was on my way to the bookstore andwas waiting for the green light while whena girl was knocked down by ∧a passing car ，which drove off quickly.A man immediately gave her first aid and I had joined in without hesitation.Soon many muchhelp was given to the girl.We sent her to the nearest hospitals hospital in time ，and she received properly proper treatment.Not badly injured ，I sheexpressed gratitude to those giving pared with the escaping escapeddriver ，I was proud of what I did.CWhat do you do if you get sick or need medical care ？You probably go to hospital.But in the US ，a new way of visiting the doctor is come —telemedicine.Telemedicine is a method that it uses technology connect doctors and patients.It takes advantage of apps ，phone and videoconferencing.Under the help of the Internet ，people can get diagnosed and treat at home.Based on the 2016 Women’s Health Behavior Index from Lippe Taylor ，an agency that specialize in marketing to women,35 percent of women are choosing telemedicine over a office visit.In this way ，they avoid wait rooms that are fully of sick people.答案What do you do if you get sick or need medical care ？You probably go tohospital.But in the US ，a new way of visiting the doctor is come coming—telemedicine. Telemedicine is a method that it uses technology ∧to connect doctors andpatients.It takes advantage of apps ，phone phones and videoconferencing.Under Withthe help of the Internet ，people can get diagnosed and treat treatedat home.Based on the 2016 Women’s Health Behavior Index from Lippe Taylor ，an agency that specialize specializesin marketing to women,35 percent of women are choosing telemedicine over a anoffice visit.In this way ，they avoid wait waiting rooms that are fully fullof sick people. 精美句子1、善思则能“从无字句处读书”。

模拟演练（五）ADear Tom ，I’m glad to hear from you.I know your parents want you be a student with artistic skills.Needlessly to say ，a student with some artistic skills is more popular in school as well as in society.Having some artistic skills also help understand and master the general subject ，such as math ，English ，and so on.Therefore ，interest is much more important.If you show no interest in it ，you are more likely to learn it well.And it won’t help you much.Some day in the future，you will regret making such a choice.In my opinion ，you should follow my heart.You should do whichever you are doing well.If you learn your academic subjects well ，you can still enter into a famous university.Art is not the only approach to succeed.答案Dear Tom ，I’m glad to hear from yo u.I know your parents want you ∧to be a student withartistic skills.Needlessly Needlessto say ，a student with some artistic skills is more popular in school as well as in society.Having some artistic skills also help helpsunderstand and master the general subject subjects，such as math ，English ，and so on. Therefore However，interest is much more important.If you show no interest in it ，you are more lesslikely to learn it well.And it won’t help you much.Some day in the future ，you will regret making such a choice.In my opinion ，you should follow my your heart.You should do whichever whateveryou are doing well.If you learn your academic subjects well ，you can still enter into\ a famousuniversity.Art is not the only approach to succeed success. BDear Editor ，I’m writing to tell you how we students use computers on our daily life.First，some students surf online while doing their homework ，what makes them not concentrate their efforts on our studies.Second ，some use computers to get bad informations such as violence.Third ，computer games destroy many students because they throw themselves into a virtual world ，complete forgetting that they’ve got to do.Fourth，a large number of students absorbed in online shopping and watching movies and they keep think of the various goods and the exciting plots even when they’re having classes！So I suggest that we used computers in a right ，healthy way ，and for a proper period of time while at the home.Yours ，Li Hua答案Dear Editor ，I’m writing to tell you how we students use computers on inour daily life.First ，some students surf online while doing their homework ，what whichmakes them not concentrate their efforts on our their studies.Second ，some use computers to get bad informations informationsuch as violence.Third ，computer games destroy many students because they throw themselves into a virtual world ，complete completely forgetting that whatthey’ve got to do.Fourth ，a large number of students ∧are absorbed in online shopping and watchingmovies and they keep think thinkingof the various goods and the exciting plots even when they’re having classes！So I suggest that we used usecomputers in a right ，healthy way ，and for a proper period of time while at the\ home.Yours ，Li HuaCI am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me.I was a perfectly stranger when reaching this city.Once I lost myself for not know the way in a downtown street ，although I stopped to ask some people for help.As you knew ，this is the first time for me to come up to this big city.I bought a guidebook ，and there were still difficulties in going round the city.Thestreets and shops puzzled me too much that I would rather stay indoors.It is your valuable guidance which has enabled me go about the city without losing myself.Now I begin to know how to take the proper buses.Yesterday I went to downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping.Lessons will begin after a few days.I will come over to see you some days next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.答案I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me.I was a perfectly perfect stranger when reaching this city.Once I lost myself for not know knowingthe way in a downtown street ，although I stopped to ask some people for help.As you knew know，this is the first time for me to come up to this big city.I bought a guidebook ，and butthere were still difficulties in going round the city.The streets and shops puzzled me too somuch that I would rather stay indoors.It is your valuable guidance which thathas enabled me ∧to go about the city without losing myself.Now I begin to know how to take the proper buses.Yesterday I went to\ downtown with some of my schoolmates for shopping.Lessons will begin after in a few days.I will come over to see you some days daynext week and tell you everything that has happened to me.。

AI would greatly appreciate 代 if I could have the chanee to host them and make friendswith them.Look ing forward to your reply.Dear Sir , 模拟演练（二）I ' m writing to request a valuable chanee to be one of the host family for the British students.Locating in a beautiful and quiet neighborhood , our large fully-equipped apartme nt meet all their n eeds.Apart from the convenience public transportation , our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest.With flue nt En glish and an outgo ing pers on ality,I ' m sure I will have no difficulty com muni cate with them.Above all , we host two British stude nts last year , through that we' ve gained lots of experience.ln addition , my mother ' s expert cooking can guara ntee for them a won derful cha nee of taste delicious Chin ese food. I would greatly appreciate if I could have the chanee to host them and make friendswith them. Look ing forward to your reply. Yours truly ,Li Hua答案Dear Sir , I ' m writing to request a valuable chanee to be one offamilythe host ?amhfor theLocati ngBritish stude nts. in a beautiful and quietn eighborhood , our large fully-equipped apartme ntmeet all their n eeds.Apart from the meets convenience convenient publictransportation , our own car can also take them to some nearby places of interest.With flue nt En glish and an outgo ing pers on alitym sure I will have no difficulty com mun icate host with them.Above all , we two com muni cat ing hosted British students last year , through that ,we ve gained lots of experience.ln which addition ,my mother ' s expert cooking can guara ntee for\ them a won derful cha neeoftastedelicious Chi ne se帕记won' t give off waste gas. BesideB e sid e s，riding bicycles is a good way for us to exerciseand it is ben eficial to our healthyhealthYours trulyLi HuaAs is known by all , with the impro vement of people ' s living standards , cars have become a popular means of transport , bring great convenience to our life.However , they have also caused some problems such as air polluti on and traffic jam.Howcan we solve these problems then ? As far as I am concerning , riding bicycles is a good solution.For one thing , bicycles don ' t need any petrol but they areen ergy-savi ng.For ano ther , bicycles are en vir onmen tally frien dly because of theywon' t give off waste gas.Beside , riding bicycles is a good way for us to exerciseand it is ben eficial to our healthy.As result , let ' s take the resp on sibility to build up a low-carb on city by ridi ng e on and join them.答案by ,As is known 石all , with the improvement of people s living standards , cars havebringbecome a popular means of transport , great convenience to our life.However ,bringingthey have also caused some problems such as air polluti on and trafficconcerning Howcan we solve these problems then ? As far as I amconcernedjamjams riding bicyclesis a good soluti on.For one thing ,bicycles don ' t need any petrol butthey are anden ergy-savi ng.For another , bicycles are environmentally frien dly because of\ theyAsaresult,let ' s take the resp on sibility to build up a low-carb on city byridi ng e on and jointhem us（20 16 •江西南昌八一中学高三三模 ）Nowadays , it ' s fashi on able for young stude nt to have ed iPads ,download a lot of learning materials and read it.Obviouslyliste n to musicwe can ,it ' sof great help with our studies , especial with our English listening skills.Some students , however , bring their iPads to the classroom listening to musicwith earphones , but some even playing video games, which make teachers and students greatly anno yed.For my opinion , the classroom is a place to study , and concentrationwas terriblyneeded.Therefore , we should make a good use of iPads and other modern communicationthe stude nts to use iPads properly. 答案listen to music , download a lotit materials and read 両.°bviouslyof great help with our studies with our En glish liste ningskills.Aschools should make some rulesto instructthe stude nts to use iPads properly.Nowadays , it ' s fashi on ablefor youngstude nt Used赢面厂 to have iPads .硕 iPadsweca n Some students , however , bring their iPads to the classroom listening to music but with earphones ,and make some even playing video games, which teachers and students makesgreatly anno yed. For my opinion was the classroom is a place to study , and concentration terribly isn eeded.Therefore , we should make a good use of iPads and other modern communicationtools to help with our less on s.Mea nwhile,schools should make some rules in structof learningit ' sespecial ，especiallytools to help withour less on s.Mea nwhile ,。

语鹅市安置阳光实验学校模拟演练（四）AMy name is Nina Francis and I am in Class 3B.I have little dog called Dwarf(矮小的) Fluffy ，that is three years old.The main characteristics which makes him get the name are that he doesn’t grow very big but he has tiny ears.He lives in my backyard and spends much time on the garden.Sometime he follows me to my bedroom.While I am watching TV ，he sits nearby.He is very kindly and lovely.He doesn’t bite and loves being touching.In my spare time I often took him to go for a walk and meet with my friends. 答案My name is Nina Francis and I am in Class 3B.I have ∧a little dog called Dwarf(矮小的) Fluffy ，that which/who is three years old.The maincharacteristics whichmakesmakehim get the name are that he doesn’t grow very big butand he has tiny ears.He lives in my backyard and spends muchtime oninthe garden.SometimeSometimes he follows me to my bedroom.While I am watching TV ，he sitsnearby.He is verykindlykinda nd lovely.He doesn’t bite and loves being touching touched .In my spare time I often tooktake him to go for a walk and meetwith\ my friends. BLast weekend we went mountain­climbing.Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go.Setting off very early ，we went along an extreme narrow road ，all in high spirits.On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house.We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixed with laughter.At noon we reached top of the mountain.That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes here.After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought ，we started going down.It rained even harder.We are wet to the skin ，and we still sang and laughed happily. 答案Last weekend we went mountain­climbing.Even the heavy rain in themorning could not prevent us gogoing .Setting off very early ，we went alongan extreme extremely narrow road ，all in high spirits.On every each/either side of the road were green fields and some farm house houses .We could hear the soundof the rain and our footsteps mixed with laughter.At noon we reached∧the top of the mountain.That What surprised us most was the beauty of thescenes here there .After having a short rest and sharing with\ the food wehad brought ，we started going down.It rained even harder.We arewere wetto the skin ，andbut we still sang and laughed happily.CLast weekend ，I helped my grandparents with their trip to the Dalian.On Saturday morning ，together with my grandparents ，I search the Internet for the train schedule ，the weather in Dalian ，and some hotel informations.In the afternoon ，they went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue.After dinner ，I packed the things into the suitcase ，what mygrandparents would need ，such as clothes ，glasses ，an umbrella ，a map.The next morning ，I went to the station to show them off.Waved goodbye to them on the platform ，I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey. 答案Last weekend ，I helped my grandparents with their trip to theDalian.On Saturday morning ，together with my grandparents ，I searchsearchedthe Internet for the train schedule ，the weather in Dalian ，and some hotel informations information .In the afternoon ，theyI went to the train station andmanaged to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there hadwas a longqueue.After dinner ，I packed the things into the suitcase ，whatwhich mygrandparents would need ，such as clothes ，glasses ，an umbrella ，∧and a map.The next morning ，I went to the station to show see them off.WavedWavinggoodbye to them on the platform ，I felt happilyhappy for them and wished thema safe journey.。

精研真题模拟演练A(2021·全国Ⅰ)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead，he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close tothat whereIlive.Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Somepeople even hadhaveto wait outside.My uncle tells me that thekey to his success is honesthonesty.Every day he makes sure thatfresh vegetablesorandhigh quality oil areusingusedforcooking.My uncle says that he never dreams ∧of becomingrich in theashort period of time.Instead，he hopes thatourhisbusiness will grow steady steadily.71．答案第一句：that→where解析考察宾语从句连词用法。

专题五 短文改错 满分方略 第三步五套模拟实战演练A(2017·福建泉州质检)Dear Mum and Dad ，In London at last ，we are having great time!To stay in a hotel in an old castle，and we tried to make a reservation.However ，that hotel was booked full.So ，instead ，we get a couple of beds in a dormitory. Stay in a dormitory was a lot of fun because there were lots of people from 模拟演练(二)got ∧a Staying placesIf you had come without us ，you would have enjoyed Europe either.All of the paintings I ’ve seen so far is fantastic.Now I think Van Gogh is his favourite artist.Is there anything specially I can bring you?Li Mingwithtooare myspecialB(2017·广东广州一模)Getting rid of the bad habit of procrastination(拖延症) is now my goal in life.My first step was to set small targets what can be reached realistically.For example ，I plan to set a timetable for my study.So after school ，I will put finishing homework in the last place.Additionally ，I will make a list o f my important task including their due dates but follow my schedule strictly.that/which is first tasks andI will avoid find excuses for putting them off.At same time ，I will ask for my friends and parents to help me.By achieving this small targets ，I have confident that I will overcome procrastination.∧the finding theseconfidenceC(2017·河北石家庄质检)With the development of science and technology ，intelligent robots will be wide used in the future.In families，robots will help people do some housework and taking careof the elderly，babies and patients.In addition to these task ，robots will even be able to play the chess and do exercisewith people.In factories，robots will be used to perform some dangerous jobs avoid accidents.widely take tasks ∧toRobots will change our future life b y many ways ，what will make it more colorful and comfortable. Therefore ，we shouldn ’t depend on intelligent robots too much ，for they were made to help humans rather than replace us.As helpers of we humans，robots should be used properly.which HoweverareinusD(2017·内蒙古赤峰二中三模)This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank.An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank.Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down.To make things bad ，his money was flying in all direction.In no time the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood there ，not know what to do.deeply worse directions rushed knowingSurprisingly ，everyone gave back the money they had just picked up.The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill w as missed.To my great joy，there are now a lot nice people in your life.It ’s true what honesty is more important than money!missing ∧of our that本课结束。

（全国通用）2024年高考英语专项分类复习——短文改错（真题试卷模拟）短文改错1．（2024届青海省西宁市大通高三三模试题）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

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School life has taught me a lot, of them I think honesty is the most important. When I was in Senior One, I caught cheating in the final exam. I feel everyone in my class looked down upon myself. I was very ashamed that I decided to run away from school. Upon know this, my teacher paid a visit to my home in person but had a long chat with me. He made me to come to know that being brave enough to recognize one’s mistakes and overcome them are a basic quality for a man. Since then, I’ve made up my mind to be honesty and work hard.2．（2024届宁夏银川一中高三三模试卷）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

专题模拟训练(短文改错)短文改错(一)A(2021·江西南昌市高三一模)Virtues are jewel of great price.I find honesty is most valuable virtue in my heart.And it is always accompany my growth.As a child, I was constantly told the story naming The Wolf Is Coming, which obviously has a lasting influence.Over time, I ’ve increasing realized the importance of honesty and try to carry it out.Only then I ’m honest and reliable will I be trusted with others.Actually being honest, I ’ve found it more easier to make friends.The virtue of honesty will help me open the door to success of our career and life.【答案】Virtues are jewel jewels of great price.I find honesty is ∧themost valuable virtuein my heart.And it is always accompany accompanyingmy growth.As a child, I was constantly told the story naming namedThe Wolf Is Coming, whichobviously has a lasting influence.Over time, I ’ve increasing increasinglyrealized theimportance of honesty and try tried to carry it out.Only then ifI ’m honest and reliablewill I be trusted with byothers.Actually being honest, I ’ve found it more easier to make friends.The virtue of honesty will help me open the door to success of our mycareer and life.【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。

步步高全国通用高考英语二轮复习考前三个月专题五短文改错模拟演练集中突破命题点模拟演练七ABoys and girls ，I am honored to share my experiences in learning English.I often read English aloud in the morning ，which help me improve my language sense ，getting to the good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and talk with the others in English.In this way ，I had improved both my hearing and my speaking English.I keep a diary in English every day because my written English is becoming better and better.I also do best to master the necessary grammar knowledge.By this means ，I can express myself in English correct.That is the way I have been learning English.I hope they will be useful to you.That’s all.Thank you.答案Boys and girls ，I am honored to share my experiences experiencein learning English.I often read English aloud in the morning ，which help helpsme improve my language sense ，getting to into the good habit of thinking in English.I listen a lot and talk with the others in English.In this way ，I had have improved both my hearing and my speaking spokenEnglish.I keep a diary in English every day because somy written English is becoming better and better.I also do ∧my best to master the necessary grammar knowledge.By this means ，I can express myself in English correct correctly.That is the way I have been learning English.I hope they itwill be useful to you.That’s all.Thank you. BThere is a boy Tom used to get bullied because of his size.One day ，he decided that he couldn’t take them anymore，and he wasn’t scaring.When the bullies picked up on him again ，he tried to fight back hardly.However ，one of the bullies was about to throwing a big punch right into his face ，and he suddenly felt scared.Just then Mike appeared ，hitting the bullies instead.At that moment ，the teacher was just passing by them so the bullies run away.From then on ，Tom has never been afraid of the bulliesso he has got a true friend Mike.答案There is a boy Tom ∧who used to get bullied because of his size.One day ，he decidedthat he couldn’t take them it anymore ，and he wasn’t scaring scared.When the bullies picked up\ on him again ，he tried to fight back hardly hard.However ，one of the bullies was about to throwing throwa big punch right into his face ，and he suddenly felt scared.Just then Mike appeared ，hitting the bullies bully instead.At that moment ，the ateacher was just passing by them so the bullies run ranaway.From then on ，Tom has never been afraid of the bullies so because/ashe has got a true friend Mike. CYesterday my friend Julia and me had lunch in the Pizza Hut behind our school.I knew Julia wasn’t crazy about pizzas，but she came along just because me.At the table next to ours ，there were two guys from our class.One of them was real funny.He tried to imitate all the customer in the Pizza Hut.We couldn’t stop to laughing.And there were some people whom did not like the fact that two boys were imitating them.They complained to an owner of the Pizza Hut ，so he came over and tell them to stop.Seeing it ，Julia and I was greatly embarrassed.答案Yesterday my friend Julia and me Ihad lunch in the Pizza Hut behind our school.I knew Julia wasn’t crazy about pizzas，but she came along just because ∧of me.At thetable next to ours ，there were two guys from our class.One of them was real reallyfunny.He tried to imitate all the customer customersin the Pizza Hut.We couldn’t stop to \ laughing.And But there were some people whom whodid not like the fact that two boys were imitating them.They complained to an theowner of the Pizza Hut ，so he came over andtell told them to stop.Seeing it ，Julia and I was weregreatly embarrassed.。

模拟演练（六）AGood morning ，everyone.It’s great honor for me to speak here.My name is Li Xiang，born in a harmonious family.My father and mother are all high school teachers.Influenced by them ，I read widely during my early age ，but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports.I’m easy­going，getting along well with my classmates.It is this personality which helps me win over the friendship of all my classmates ，and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life.Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me.I dream constantly that I ，along with mine classmates ，will study happy with the help of the respectable professors.I dream that I will swim freely in the sea ，enjoy the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream will come true in the near future.Thank you. 答案Good morning ，everyone.It’s ∧a great honor for me to speak here.My name is LiXiang ，born in a harmonious family.My father and mother are all both或all\ high school teachers.Influenced by them ，I read widely during my early age ，but andI’ve developed a great interest in arts and sports.I’m easy­going，getting along well with myclassmates.It is this personality which thathelps me win over the friendship of all my classmates ，and also help helpsme overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life.Being admitted in to/intoyour university has always been a beautiful dream for me.I dream constantly that I ，along withmine my classmates ，will study happy happily with the help of the respectable professors.I dream that I will swim freely in thesea ，enjoy enjoying the waves of knowledge.I hope all my dream dreamswill come true in the near future.Thank you.BDear John ，I’m writing to recommend a book with you.Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese novel ，which was writing by Cheng’en Wu 400 years ago.There have many magic and strange stories in the book ，through them we know many principles of our lives.The most important things in your life are belief ，loyalty and devotion.Beside ，we can learn about the power of love.If we want to be happy ，we should love and help the others.What’s more，we must be strong in mind if we want achieve success.I think this book was interesting and valuable.Li Minghao答案Dear John ，I’m writing to recommend a book with toyou.Journey to the West is one of the most famous Chinese novel novels ，which was writing writtenby Cheng’en Wu 400 years ago. There have are many magic and strange stories in the book ，through them whichwe know many principles of our lives.The most important things in your ourlife are belief ，loyalty and devotion.Beside Besides，we can learn about the power of love.If we want to be happy ，we should love and help the others.What’s more，we must be strong in mind if we want ∧to achieve success.I think this book was isinteresting and valuable. Li MinghaoCI believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat.Cooking is a lot of easier for us than most of us st Sunday my parent were away on business.I left alone ，with no one to cook for me.As I had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal.Early in the morning I went to the market ，buying some beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back.Before cooking ，I put a few oil ，salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it together.When the pot was hotter enough I began to fry the steak.Then I cooked some tomato soup with the egg in it.The food tasted deliciously!答案I believe anyone can make themselves something good to eat.Cooking is a lot ofeasier for us than most of us st Sunday my parent parentswere away on business.I ∧was left alone ，with no one to cook for me.As SoI had a good chance to cook myself a wonderful meal.Early in the morning I went to the market ，buying boughtsome beefsteak and tomatoes and then came back.Before cooking ，I put a few littleoil ，salt and sugar on the steak and mixed it them together.When the pot was hotter hotenough I began to fry the steak.Then I cooked some tomato soup with the an egg in it.The food tasted deliciously delicious！。