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高三英语基础写作basic writing课件

高三英语基础写作basic writing课件

（2005年广东高考题）Michael是一名美国中学生，在学 校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步
了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画， 不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事 和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。
注意：1．词数：在80—120词之间； 2．参考词汇：bump into(撞上)，hoe(锄头)
写作要求：请根据以上文字提示用5个句子来描述 故事里的全部内容。注意故事的连贯性和文章的 过渡。
• ①【思路导航】 • 这是一篇记叙文，是一则寓言故事：掩耳盗铃。这里要求用5句话完成，只要抓住记
叙文的要素：时间、人物、地点和发生了什么事就行了。在这里要注意故事情节的完 整性，要有头有尾，但不可瞎编或增多故事情节。考试主要抓住故事的要素和以下几 个要点即可完成一篇漂亮的文章。
基础写作步骤
六、誊写
注重基础,单词短语多。 2. 培养写句意识,以动词为中心。
Summaries:
1. Use different ways to describe one sentence. 2. Making sentences by using non-predicate. 3.Sentence patterns are always useful.
基础写作步骤
一、审题
理清文字信息
判断文章格式、人称、要点、时态、
基础写作步骤
二、抓要点
确定主要行为
用一两个词或短语 写出每句的要点
基础写作步骤
三、扩展成句
形成基本语义单位
用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或 高级词汇将要点扩展成句
基础写作步骤
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）、 逻辑关系、开头与结尾、巧用连接词和 过渡句

广东英语高三基础写作公开课Basic Writing

广东英语高三基础写作公开课Basic Writing
I must not only finish the file on time but also hand it to my manager in person.
Not only must I finish the file on time but also I must hand it to my manager in person.
3.We will hold a farewell party this Sunday . (there be) There will be a farewell party this Sunday . 4.The population in the world is increasing fast . More and more farmlands have been taken up by man. (with结构）
Correction: 1. Our school has a long history of 80 years old. 2. The city has a population of 2 million people. 3. The UK is consisted of four countries. consists
Dear Mr. Helper, I’m a senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing our homework. As a result, hardly can we find any time to do what we want. What’s worse, We suffer from lack of sleep, which, in the long run, is not good for our health. The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are getting the pressure from the college entrance examination. In addtion, our parents have high expectations of us. I am looking forward to your advice. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

Basic Writing(基础写作)

Basic Writing(基础写作)
位于 占地面积 平方公里 人口 大洋洲 气候 沿海地区 雨量 由…组成 组成 以…而著名 而著名 明媚的阳光 牛羊 野生动植物 世界各地的游客 美景 be located in/ lie in …. cover an area of square kilometre a population of Oceania climate coastal area rainfall be made up of / consist of be famous for bright sunshine cattle and sheep wildlife the tourists from all over the world beautiful scenery
1. 澳大利亚位于最小的大洲 大洋洲。 澳大利亚位于最小的大洲—大洋洲。 大洋洲 Australia is located in the smallest continent—Oceania. 2. 澳大利亚是世界第六大国家。 澳大利亚是世界第六大国家。 Australia is the sixth largest country in the world. 3. 澳大利亚的总面积 澳大利亚的总面积7,686,850平方公里。 平方公里。 平方公里 Australia covers an area of 7,686,850 square kilometers.
kilometers with a population of about 20 million.
How to write complex sentences?
巧用连接词, 巧用连接词 如 and，写出规范的并列句 ， 3. 它是一个干旱气候为主的国家，只有少部 它是一个干旱气候为主的国家， 分沿海地区有充足的雨量 。 3. It is a mainly dry country and only a few coastal areas have adequate rainfall.

Basic Writing01

Basic Writing01

密码 (列车)慢车/特快 方便面 白酒 红眼 高等教育 救火 洗牌
code/ pass word
local train/ limited express
instant noodle(s) spirits/ liquor
pink eyes/ green-eyed higher education
fire fighting shuffle
密码 (列车)慢车/特快 方便面 白酒 红眼 高等教育 救火 洗牌
secret code
slow/ especially fast train
convenient noodle white wine red eye(s) high education save the fire wash the cards
Basic Writing
Lecture One
Course Introduction
Contents
• • • • Course Objectives Course Content Marking System English Writing& C-E Translation
Ⅰ. Course Objectives
● 从前有个俊俏的年轻人，名叫王小，
人人都喜欢他，可他总是闷闷不乐， 因为他有一个说话尖酸刻薄，唠叨不 休的继母。
Once there was a handsome young man named Wang Xiao. Everyone liked him very much , but he was always unhappy because he had a sharptongued and nagging step-mother.

Basicwriting(1)

Basicwriting(1)
mbeotrteearnadnmde supermarket There is a big supermarket near Lucy’s home. She likes to go shopping there.OOnnoonneehhaanndd, , the goods in the supermarket are excellent in quality and reasonable in price.OOnn tthhee otheerr hhaanndd,, it is convenient for customers to go shopping there. AAss a reessuulltt,, Lucy hopes that there will be more supermarkets in the city aanndd the things in the supermarket will be better and better.
goginog shopping itnhethreere. ,Bbecaauussee the things are cheap and nice. It is ccoonnvevnieennt ifeornccusetomtherastto go shopping in it. Lucy hopes the supermarket can be
lead to
waste
导致（不好的结果） 浪费
pay attention to… 注意
范文：
Dear ZhouLiang,
I heard that you are smoking these days, but as a friend, I want to tell you my opinions about smoking. First, as we know, smoking is bad for our health, which can lead to the cancer. Second, smoking is a waste of money. What’s more, if you pay no attention to it , it will cause a big fire. In our school, it is not allowed for students to smoke, because it will break the rules of the school.

Basic Writing (introduce a place)高中英语 公开课教案

Basic Writing (introduce a place)高中英语 公开课教案
1．潍坊位于山东半岛中部。（Shandong Peninsula）
2.潍坊的总面积1.59万平方公里。
3.潍坊的人口863万。
4.潍坊气候宜人。
5.潍坊春季风多雨少。
6.潍坊的年平均气温摄氏12.3度。
7.潍坊有着悠久的历史。
8.潍坊有富饶的矿产和水产资源。
9.潍坊是中国优秀旅游城市。
10.潍坊自1984年开始举办一年一度的国际风筝节。
Basic Writing(introduce a place)09/12/15
基础写作一：
第25届潍坊国际风筝节将于2008年4月在山东潍坊举行，
请你以导游的身份写一篇介绍潍坊基本情况的短文。
地理位置
位于山东半岛中部，总面积1.59万平方公里，人口863万。
气候
宜人的气候，春季风多雨少，年平均气温摄氏12.3度
4.潍坊自1984年开始举办一年一度
的国际风筝节。
Summary by students:
Steps of basic writing
Useful words and phrasess
基础写作二：简介珠海
地理
位置
广东省珠江三角洲的西南部，东与香港隔伶仃海相望，南与澳门相连，离广州150公里。是中国的五个经济特区之一。பைடு நூலகம்
气候
冬无严寒，夏无酷热。雨量充沛，气候宜人，年平均气温22．3℃。
资源
花园式海边城市，四季花开,是中国优秀旅游城市。
航展历史
1996年开始举办国际航展节，已经成功地举办了七届。
Combine the above information into five sentences.
1.潍坊位于山东半岛中部,总面积1.59

高中英语基础写作训练Basicwriting课件

Conclusion
Writing Practice
03
Summary: By narrating events, characters, and emotions, convey the plot and theme of the story.
Detailed description
Determine the theme and plot: Choose an interesting and meaningful theme and design an attractive plot.
Creativity
Identify key strengths
Point out the student's strengths in writing, such as clear ideas, strong arguments, or creative expressions
Provide constructive feedback
Event Description
Provide a detailed description of the occurrence, development, and outcome of the event, paying attention to using vivid language and detailed descriptions.
Structural arrangement
Reasonably arrange the structure of the article, including the introduction, main body, and conclusion, to ensure rigorous and clear argumentation.

高中英语 Basic Writing 课件(共14张PPT)


decide to buy them.
check
2020/7/29
5
V 合并句子、润色
1.恰当使用连接词 A、表并列：and, besides, also, in addition,that is
what’s more, moreover,while,or... B、表转折：but, however, yet, … C、表原因: because, because of, for, due to… D、表结果：so, therefore, as a result,thus… E、表列举：such as, for example, for instance …
decide 2020/7/29 to buy them.
7
Advertisements, which are very common in modern society, are now playing an important role in our life. They can tell people a lot of information about new products – quality, prices and so on. What’s more, not only can they attract potential customers’ interest but also help increase the selling quantity. However, sometimes advertisements are not true, so we shouldn’t trust them too much. Therefore, it is best to check the products before we decide to buy them.

Basic Writing(基础写作)


3.组句（注意添加恰当的主语） 3.组句（注意添加恰当的主语） 组句
1) 要减少感染病毒的机会，最重要的是要勤洗 要减少感染病毒的机会， 手。
The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected.
组句成文的各种关系的常用过渡词语
• • • • • • • • • • 比较 on the country ; on the one hand; on the other hand ; 转折 but ; yet; however ; though; in spite of ; instead ; 递进 besides ; moreover ; what’s more; in addition ; 举例 for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 总结 all in all ; in short ; in general ; in conclusion; in brief; in a word.
基础写作训练
你是校报小记者, 最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：
4.成篇 成篇
Announcement Hello everyone. Here is some advice on how to keep yourself healthy and avoid the H1N1 flu. The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected. If any of you have caught a cold, you should go and see a doctor as soon as possible. For those with serious illness, we suggest you stay home and rest until the doctor tells you it’s safe to return to school. Besides, you’d better clean your surroundings, such as your desks and chairs, every day. Drinking plenty of boiled water and taking more exercises will also do you good. May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.

高考话题写作Basic Writing 人物介绍(公开课课件)


Education XX was admitted to …university, （教育） XX went to … to go further study.
Find out some useful patterns and expressions
Basic information
How to write?
Barack Obama, 44th President of America, was born on August 4th, 1961 in an ordinary worker’s family. In Education 1985, he was admitted into Harvard as a major in Law and got his doctor Experiences degree in 1991. He devoted himself to strengthening (加强) the cooperation between peoples. Therefore, people of America all speak highly of him and respect him. In 2009, he was awarded Evaluation “The Nobel Peace Prize”.
Jeremy Lin
He is a young artist who grew up in Shenyang. He went to a piano school in Beijing when he was just eight. In 1999, he went to the U.S. to go further study. Because of his great gift in playing piano, he got chances to perform in many big events, such as 2008 Beijing Olympics. Right now he is considered as the greatest pianist Lang Lang in China.
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例5： 正要出去这时 我正要出去，这时我的一个老朋 友来了。
• be about to do sth. when… • be on the point of doing sth. when… • I was about to go out when one of my old friend came.
3.时态和语态误用
has been working He is working in this company ever since he was graduated from college. The teacher explained that light traveled travels
faster than sound. The story was happened long long ago.
if left unsolved.
1）动词的基本用法错误。 advise me studying • My classmates suggest to study hard.
M My classmates suggest that I (should) study hard.
8.句式错误
• Welcome you to visit our school.
害怕挨骂，那个淘气的男孩没 男孩 关水龙头就跑了。 跑了
第二步：确定主干的相关词汇
害怕挨骂，那个淘气的男孩没 关水龙头就跑了。
boy, run away
第三步：翻译句子主干
害怕挨骂，那个淘气的男孩没 关水龙头就跑了。
The boy ran away.
考虑： 时态 语态
第四步：添加修饰成分
害怕挨骂，那个淘气的男孩 没关水龙头就跑了。
when the old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face.
二、正确表达句子
第一步：找出句子主干 第二步：确定主干的相关词汇、 短语或句型 第三步：翻译句子主干，考虑
时态、语态
第四步：添加修饰成分
第一步：找出句子主干
例 1：
2）以逗号代替句号,把两个简单句当成一个句子 ① The hall is different from all other buildings , it is made of glass. The hall is different from all other buildings , for it is made of glass. The hall is different from all other buildings , which is made of glass. ② The old man thought of his son, tears came down from his face.
The naughty boy ran away. The naughty boy ran away without turning off the water. Afraid of being scolded, the naughty boy ran away without turning off the water.
• Our PE teacher is ill. Who will instead of him? Who will take his class instead?
6、词义错误
• The big fire spread through the building quickly, but luckily everybody tried managed to escape. to persuade • We all tried persuaded Father to give up smoking, but he wouldn’t listen. • The young man pointed to a policeman over there, explained said, “He stopped us and and explained an hour ago.”
例 2：
女孩 是 穿红色羊毛衫的女孩是我们班长。 班长
One possible sentence:
The girl dressed in a red sweater is our monitor.
例4： 希望我 她希望我和孩子们一起去公园。 去公园
• hope to do sth. • hope that sb. do sth. • She hoped that I would go to the zoo together with the children.
5. 她把自己锁在房间里看了一天电视。 She spent a day locked in the room,watching TV.
三、美化句子
较高级词汇 丰富的语法结构
较高级词汇
1. 多实少虚 : A nice person 2. 短语优先：
He did much for society.
generous, humorous, smart, gentle, warmhearted, hospitable, considerate,promising …
He made great contributions to society.
We want to go home very much.
We are looking forward to going home. We are dying for going home.
３.弃旧取新:
spend- devote rich- wealthy thank- appreciate/be grateful for save- set aside/put aside important- of importance very- nothing but/ more tnan think of – occur\strike,come up with as soon as- immediately/the second/on+v-ing/n. be interested in- be absorbed in/be crasy about be tired- be worn out be made up of- consist of
（4）误: Recently our village have taken place great changes . 正: Recently great changes have taken place in our village. （5）误: There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 正: Twenty students in our class have been to Beijing.
（6）误: That factory broke out a fire last Sctory
last Sunday. （7）误: Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 正: Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. （8）误: Wei Fang’s father blamed her coming late to school. 正: Wei Fang’s father blamed her 5 for her coming late to school.
practiceA
1. 那个骑车人撞倒了正在过马路的孩子。 2. 他喜欢运动。他不喜欢看电视。 3.那只绑在树上的羊丢失了。这使他很伤心。 4. 我们正在吃饭，突然闯进一个衣衫破旧的陌 生人。 5. 她把自己锁在房间里看了一天电视。
1. 那个骑车人撞倒了正在过马路的孩子。 The cyclist knocked down the child crossing the street. 2. 他喜欢运动。他不喜欢看电视。 He prefers sports to watching TV. 3.那只绑在树上的羊丢失了。这使他很伤心。 The sheep tied to the tree was missing, which upset him very much. 4. 我们正在吃饭，突然闯进一个衣衫破旧的陌生 人。 We were at table when a stranger in rags broke in.
7.谓语与非谓语不分
She going first,and then I followed her. She went first,and then I followed her. Thought for a while ,and you will have a good idea.
Think for a while,and you will have a good idea. This problem may lead to more serious ones if leaving unsolved. This problem may lead to more serious ones
writing Our school is well equiped with modern equipment. eqiupped
2.汉语式英语。 ⑴误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正: The dictionary cost him five yuan. 或 It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary.
4.词形错误
动词有过去式、过去分词、现在分词、单数第三 人称形式，记住变化规则。 • In short, things have begun began to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. • I was studying studiing in my room when the telephone rang. • The driver drived drove so fast that the car knocked into a truck. spread quickly. • The news spreaded