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With this cover letter, we will submit the revised manuscript (acp-2010-399) entitled, “Relating tropical ocean clouds to moist processes using water vapor isotope measurements” for publication in Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics. We would like to thank referees for the careful and constructive reviews. Based the comments from the referees, we have made changes of the manuscript, which are detailed below.Reply to the evaluation by the second refereeThis reviewer pointed out two things. We believe these two points are relevant to comments from first reviewer and following his/her minor comments.1.Table 1: Is it valid to show the number of lower sensitivity data? (Specifically, BLC and PC data for 850-500 hPa)Answer: This point is related to our answer to the first referee. Please see our responses and Appendix to the first reviewer above.2. Figure 1: What are the multiple lines in the same colors?Answer: The multiple lines in the same color are multiple profile observations in one TES Run ID (5889) except precipitating clouds (Three Run IDs, 5889, 5918 and 5948 were need to plot multiple profile observations).3. Figure 2: Latitude/Longitude information should be added. Is this a snapshot? If so, the date should be specified.Answer: We add the date in the figure caption. The geographical information was already presented in the original manuscript.4. Figure 3: Time information should be specified in the caption. Why COD/CTP and H2O/dD have different sampling frequencies? How can the reader know about the cloud types during this time series?Answer: In Fig. 3, cloud properties (a and b) and water vapor (c and d) have different sampling frequencies because we sampled cloudy conditions for Fig. 3 (a) and (b). We add a sentence in figure caption.5. Figure 4: Is it a snapshot? Seasonal mean for a single year? Climatology? Please clarify.Answer: We mentioned sampling period in Section 2.2. Isotopic composition of water vapor (δD). It is not a snapshot. It is a seasonal mean value (June to August, JJA) from June 2005 to August 2008.6. Abstract: It has been told by many that the vapor-dD relationship is controlled by not only Rayleigh process but also other non-Rayleigh processes, but none of them has quantified the significance. Is it still impossible in this study?Answer: It is a good point. One of the simplest models for atmospheric water vapor isotope is based on the Rayleigh distillation equation. Several processes could potentially change the isotopic composition of water vapor, such as mixing, subsidence and re-evaporation (non-Rayleigh processes) as we described in our manuscript. Quantifying the significance is beyond our scope of the study. However, some studies using remotely sensed data and/or in-situ measurements have been used to constrain humidity dynamics of lower troposphere. For example, Worden et al. (2007) quantitatively showed the contribution of rainfall evaporation to lower tropospheric humidity. Galewsky et al. (2007) reproduced the clear-sky free troposphere relative humidity and D/H ratios using a model that accounts for large-scale condensation, fractionation, mixing and transport of water vapor, which Rayleigh distillation model underpredicted.Galewsky, J., Strong, M., and Sharp, Z. D.: Measurements of water vapor D/H ratios from Mauna Kea, Hawaii, and implications for subtropical humidity dynamics,Geophys. Res. Lett., 34, L22808, doi:10.1029/2007GL031330, 2007.7. P17412 top: What is the unit of COD?Answer: Cloud Optical Depth is unit-less.8. P17414 bottom: Why do the ranges of the lines in Fig 1e-h link to the sensitivity? What is the each single line in the figure 1e-h? What is difference between error and sensitivity in this context?Answer: If there is little sensitivity, there would be no difference between TES a priori constraint and an estimate. Each line represents a single observation measured by TES in Fig. 1e-h.9. P17415 middle: What is “step-and-stare”? Describe.Answer: “Step-and Stare” is a TES observation mode in which 60 measurements are made spaced about 35km apart. “Stare” means point at a specific latitude and longitude for up to 210 seconds. “Transect” means a set of exactly contiguous latitudes and longitudes in a line up to 885 km long. We added the definition of “step and stare” in the manuscript. Now it becomes “A TES “step-and-stare”, which is a set of nadir footprint spaced about 35 km apart, was conducted during this same time and the approximate orbit location of this set of observations is shown as a vertical red line over the MODIS imagery.”.10. P17416 middle: “less than 0.1” -> No COD data is less than 0.1 in Figure 3.Answer: Fixed. Now the sentence is “Near –3°, the air is relatively dry, approximately 1 g/kg but also very isotopically depleted underneath high cirrus (cloud-top pressure near 200 hPa, but cloud optical depth less than 1.0).”.11. P17419 bottom: “The first distribution is for comparison against...” -> I don’t see any clear sky and non-precipitation cloud distributions in the figure 6.Answer: The sentence in Page 17419, lines 28 and 29 seems to be confusing such that we have added more information. Now it becomes “The first distribution (850-500hPa) is for comparison against the clear sky and nonprecipitating cloud distributions shown in Fig. 5 and shows that the air above boundary layer clouds is more isotopically depleted than air parcels associated with clear sky and nonprecipitating clouds.”.12. P17420: This explanation is particularly hard to follow. At top, it reads “well explained by local mixing”, but at middle, it reads “due to less frequent mixing”. Which is true? I may misunderstand it, but to avoid such misunderstanding, it’d be better for the authors to make the explanation easier. Using schematic figures is absolutely necessary.Answer: The TES observations show that the air above boundary layer clouds is constrained by the two theoretical lines. However, compared to the clear and nonprecipitating clouds, the overall isotopic composition of water vapor for boundary layers are more depleted in heavy isotope (Table 1). We tried to explain this isotopic depletion in the sentence in page 17420, line 5. To address the criticism of this reviewer, we reworded the paragraph in Page 17420, lines 3 to 11 to make that clearer. Now the paragraph becomes “We can conclude from either distribution that the TES observations above boundary layer clouds are well constrained by local mixing and Rayleigh condensation.”. Since Steven (2005) described each type of clouds in detail using cartoons, we believe it is not necessary to add a cartoon in this manuscript.We appreciate the comments from the reviewers. Thank you for reviewing our manuscript.Sincerely,Jeonghoon Lee。
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It is submit ted to be consid eredfor public ation as a “...” in your journa l.(2)We submit our manusc ript entitled " 文章titl e" to 杂志名for public ation.(3)On behalf of my co-author s, I am submit tingthe enclos ed materi al “ TITLE” for possib le public ation in JOURNA L.(4)We wouldlike to submit the enclos ed manusc riptentitl ed " *** ", whichwe wish to be consid eredfor public ation in **journa l.(5)Enclos ed are a manusc ript by sujian, y ang kun, chenzhihua．Su jian titled“Hypoth ermia a fter Acute Ischemic Stroke”．It is submit ted to be consid ered f or public ation a s a“review" in your journal．(6) Enclos ed are two comple te copies of a manusc riptby Mary Q. Smithand John L. 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The statem ent that all author s in the manusc ripthave agreed to submit it to this journa l and it's better to have each one's signat ure;c riptand approv ed to submit to your journa l.(1) All author s have seen the manus(2)We have review ed the finalversio n of the manusc riptand approv e it for public ation. To the best of our knowle dge and belief, this manusc ripthas not been publis hed in wholeor in part nor is it beingconsid eredfor public ation elsewh ere.6.The statem ent that the resear ch in the manusc ripthas been conduc ted underthe guidan ce of intern ation al ethica l standa rds if the resear ch uses animal s as experi menta l materi als;7.表达祝愿Thankyou very much your consid ering our manusc riptfor potent ial public ation. I'm lookin g forwar d to hearin g from you soon.8. The corres ponde nce inform ation of the corres ponde nt;(1)Corres ponde nce should be addres sed to **at the follow ing addres s, phoneand fax number, and emailaddres s:(2)Correspondence and phone calls about t he paper should be direct ed to Su jian at the follow ing addres s，phone and fax number，and e-mail addres s：四、范文（1）Dear Dr. Richar dI enclos e a manusc riptentitl ed The Prepar ation of the Monoka ryonProtop lastand its Regene ratio n in Oyster Mushro om (Pleuro tusostrea tus), whichI submit for possib le public ation in the Jounal of Biosou rce Techno logy. All of the author s agreeto the submis sionof this paper.The text includ es 20 pages, 3 tables, and 2 figure s prepar ed usingMicros oft Word Proces sing2003 accord ing to the journa l's Instru ction s to Author s. We have provid ed all requir ed suppor tingdocume ntati on.We respec tfull y submit that the follow ing indivi duals wouldbe suitab le peer review ers basedon theirexpert ise in the field:Li Yu, Microb iolog icalResear ch Instit ute, Chines e Acadme y of Agricu tlure al Scienc es. E-mail: li_yu@yahoo.cnZhangJun, Resour ces and Enviro nment al Protec tionSchool, Sichua n Agricu ltura l Univer sity.E-mail: zhangj un@yahoo.cnChen Wei, School of Hortic ultur e, ChinaAgricu ltura l Univer sity. E-mail: chenwe i@yahoo.cnh ua in Sichua n Instit ute In recent years, our resear ch grouphas had some confli cts with Li Haha and Wang Chuacof Microb iolog y in projec t applic ation. We reques t that theseindivi duals not be consul ted.We thankyou for consid ering this work and look forwar d to your respon se. Please direct all corres ponde nce aboutthis manusc riptto me (or Dr. ZhangSan, e-amil: Zhangs an@yahoo.cn).Sincer elyZhangShane-mail: zhangs an@yahooThe follow ing are all the author s in this paperand theirsignat ure.ZhangSan XXXLi Si XXXWang Wu XXXYang Yu XXX（2）Dear Editor,We wouldlike to submit the enclos ed manusc riptentitl ed "GDNF Acutel y Modula tes Neuron al Excita bilit y and A-type Potass ium Channe ls in Midbra in Dopami nergi c Neuron s", whichwe wish to be consid eredfor public ation in Nature Neuros cienc e.GDNF has long been though t to be a potent neurot rophi c factor for the surviv al of midbra in dopami nergi c neuron s, whichare degene rated in Parkin son’s diseas e. In this paper, we report an unexpe cted, acuteeffect of GDNF on A-type potass ium channe ls, leadin g to a potent iatio n of neuron al excita bilit y, in the dopami nergi cbrainslices. Furthe r, we show that GDNF regula tes the K+ channe ls throug h neuron s in cultur e as well as in adulta mechan ism that involv es activa tionof MAP kinase. Thus, this studyhas reveal ed, for the firsttime, an acutemodula tionof ion channe ls by GDNF. Our findin gs challe nge the classi c view of GDNF as a long-term surviv al factor for midbra in dopami nergi c neuron s, and sugges t that the normal functi on of GDNF is to regula te neuron al excita bilit y, and conseq uentl y dopami ne releas e. Theseresult s may also have implic ation s in the treatm ent of Parkin son’s diseas e.Due to a direct compet ition and confli ct of intere st, we reques t that Drs. XXX of Harvar d Univ., and YY of Yale Univ. not be consid eredas review ers. With thanks for your consid erati on, I amSincer ely yours,（3）参考资料：复旦大学科技论文写作课程(卢宝荣) 网络资料整理人：GG。
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一、投稿信1. Dear Dr. Defendi ML:I am sending a manuscript entitled “” by – which I should like to submit for possible publication in the journal of - .Yours sincerely2. Dear Dr. A:Enclosed is a manuscript entitled “” by sb, which we are submitting for publication in the journal of - . We have chosen this journal because it deals with - . We believe that sth would be of interest to the journal’s readers.3. Dear Dr. A:Please find enclosed for your review an original research article, “” by sb. All authors have read and approve this version of the article, and due care has been taken to ensure the integrity of the work. No part of this paper has published or submitted elsewhere. No conflict of interest exits in the submission of this manuscript, and we have attached to this letter the signed letter granting us permission to use Figure 1 from another source.We appreciate your consideration of our manuscript, and we look forwardto receiving comments from the reviewers.二、询问有无收到稿件Dear Editors,We dispatched our manuscript to your journal on 3 August 2006 but have not, as yet, receive acknowledgement of their safe arrival. We fear that may have been lost and should be grateful if you would let us know whether or not you have received them. If not, we will send our manuscript again. Thank you in advance for your help.三、询问论文审查回音Dear Editors，It is more than 12 weeks since I submitted our manuscript (No: ) for possible publication in your journal. I have not yet received a reply and am wondering whether you have reached a decision. I should appreciated your letting me know what you have decided as soon as possible.四、关于论文的总体审查意见1. This is a carefully done study and the findings are of considerable interest. A few minor revision are list below.2. This is a well-written paper containing interesting results which merit publication. For the benefit of the reader, however, a number of points need clarifying and certain statements require further justification. There are given below.3. Although these observation are interesting, they are rather limited and do not advance our knowledge of the subject sufficiently to warrant publication in PNAS. We suggest that the authors try submitting their findings to specialist journal such as –4. Although this paper is good, it would be ever better if some extra data were added.5. This manuscript is not suitable for publication in the journal of –because the main observation it describe was reported 3 years ago in a reputable journal of - .6. Please ask someone familiar with English language to help you rewrite this paper. As you will see, I have made some correction at the beginning of the paper where some syntax is not satisfactory.7. We feel that this potentially interesting study has been marred by an inability to communicate the finding correctly in English and should like to suggest that the authors seek the advice of someone with a good knowledge of English, preferable native speaker.8. The wording and style of some section, particularly those concerning HPLC, need careful editing. Attention should be paid to the wording ofthose parts of the Discussion of and Summary which have been underlined.9. Preliminary experiments only have been done and with exception of that summarized in Table 2, none has been repeated. This is clearly unsatisfactory, particularly when there is so much variation between assays.10. The condition of incubation are poorly defined. What is the temperature? Were antibody used?五、给编辑的回信1. In reply to the referee’s main criticism of paper, it is possible to say that –One minor point raised by the referee concerns of the extra composition of the reaction mixture in Figure 1. This has now been corrected. Further minor changes had been made on page 3, paragraph 1 (line 3-8) and 2 (line 6-11). These do not affect our interpretation of the result.2. I have read the referee’s comments very carefully and conclude that the paper has been rejected on the sole grounds that it lake toxicity data.I admit that I did not include a toxicity table in my article although perhaps I should have done. This was for the sake of brevity rather than an error or omission.3. Thank you for your letter of –and for the referee’s commentsconcerning our manuscript entitled “”. We have studied their comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with their approval.4. I enclosed a revised manuscript which includes a report of additional experiments done at the referee’s suggestion. You will see that our original findings are confirmed.5. We are sending the revised manuscript according to the comments of the reviewers. Revised portion are underlined in red.6. We found the referee’s comments most helpful and have revised the manuscript7. We are pleased to note the favorable comments of reviewers in their opening sentence.8. Thank you for your letter. I am very pleased to learn that our manuscript is acceptable for publication in Cancer Research with minor revision.9. We have therefore completed a further series of experiments, the result of which are summarized in Table 5. From this we conclude that intrinsic factor is not account.10. We deleted the relevant passage since they are not essential to the contents of the paper.11. I feel that the reviewer’s comments concerning Figures 1 and 2 result from a misinterpretation of the data.12. We would have include a non-protein inhibitor in our system, as a control, if one had been available.13. We prefer to retain the use of Table 4 for reasons that it should be clear from the new paragraph inserted at the end of the Results section.14. Although reviewer does not consider it is important to measure the temperature of the cells, we consider it essential.15. The running title has been changed to “”.16. The Materials and Methods section now includes details for measuring uptake of isotope and assaying hexokinase.17. The concentration of HAT media (page12 paragraph 2) was incorrectly stated in the original manuscript. This has been rectified. The authors are grateful to the referees for pointing out their error.18. As suggested by both referees, a discussion of the possibility of laser action on chromosome has been included (page16, paragraph 2).19. We included a new set of photographs with better definition than those originally submitted and to which a scale has been added.20. Following the suggestion of the referees, we have redraw Figure 3 and 4.21. Two further papers, published since our original submission, have been added to the text and Reference section. These are:22. We should like to thank the referees for their helpful comments and hope that we have now produced a more balance and better account ofour work. We trust that the revised manuscript is acceptable for publication.23. I greatly appreciate both your help and that of the referees concerning improvement to this paper. I hope that the revised manuscript is now suitable for publication.24. I should like to express my appreciation to you and the referees for suggesting how to improve our paper.25. I apologize for the delay in revising the manuscript. This was due to our doing an additional experiment, as suggested by referees.Date: ***Dear Editors:We would like to submit the manuscript entitled “***”, which we wish to be considered for publication in ***.We certify that we have participated sufficiently in the work to take public responsibility for the appropriateness of the study design and method, and the collection, analysis, and interpretation of the data.We have reviewed the final version of the manuscript and approve it for publication. To the best of our knowledge and belief, this manuscript has not been published in whole or in part nor is it being considered for publication elsewhere.Best Regards.Yours Sincerely,Authors : ***,***,***(Submitting author: ***, ***University. EMAIL: ***;Corresponding author: ***,*** University. EMAIL: ***)1、什幺是cover letter？指的是投稿信2、cover letter的内容主要包括那些？应该简述所投稿件的核心内容、主要发现和意义，拟投期刊，对稿件处理有无特殊要求等（如“not to review” list）。
5834 Waterman BoulevardSaint Louis, Missouri 63112September18, 2011ConsultantDear Recruiting officer:It is a pleasure writing to you about my interest and qualifications for the fulltime job opportunity atBain & Company.I am a 2nd year MBA student at Washington University, Olin Business School, with concentration in Marketing & Strategy. Prior to my MBA, I worked for 5 years at AbbottChina (1 year Sales Representative and 4 years Regional Marketing Specialist). During my 5 years with Abbott, I have done a large volume of data analysis, created business plans and held with brand management to assist the senior management team. I have accomplished a wide range of projects, including launching new product seminars and press meetings, and setting up sales training programsfor more than 100 personseach year in Northeast China.Working closely with the senior management team, I have developed the following competencies:• Outstanding strategic thinking and analytical skills• Excellent time management & multi-tasking skill and ability to work under pressure• Strong coordination skill in teamwork• Committed, diligent, proactive, and results-orientedAdditionally, I spent my summer internship at Johnson & Johnson China, and designed the “ADHD Patient Care Week” project(APCK). During this intensive 12 weeks internship, I worked closely with the senior marketing management, conducted 5 rounds marketing research program related to APCW project, and executed the project in a pilot hospital. This internship experience not only enhanced my competencies above, but also gave me the opportunity to get a deeper understanding of how companies making strategic business plan in long run. Besides these experiences, I also want to highlight my educational background. I got my Medicine Bachelor Degree at China Medical University, majored in Medical Imaging. In my professional careers, I found that, armed with this specialized knowledge background, I have little difficulty to understand product selling points and can always explain medical concepts precisely to the sales and marketing team. This strength helps me to differentiate myself and improve my working performance significantly.Please kindly refer to my résumés for a more detailed list of qualifications. I am looking forward to discussing with you my fit atBain & CompanySincerely,Gang LiMBA Candidate, Class of 2012Olin Business School, Washington University in St. Louis(314) 398-9981gang.li@。
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英文cover letter范文模板[Your Name][Your Address][City, State, Zip Code][Email Address][Phone Number][Date][Recipient's Name][Company Name][Company Address][City, State, Zip Code]Dear [Recipient's Name],I am writing to apply for the [position] at [company name], as advertised on [where you found the job listing]. With a strong background in [relevant field or industry], I believe I am a perfect fit for this role and would be thrilled to contribute my skills and experience to your team.My experience in [relevant experience or skills] has equipped me with the necessary tools and knowledge to excel in this position. I am adept at [specific skills or tasks related to the job], and have a proven track record of [specific accomplishments or achievements]. In my previous role at [previous company], I successfully [specific achievements or accomplishments related to the job you are applying for].I am particularly drawn to [company name] because of [specific reasons why you are interested in the company]. I admire [company's mission/values], and am excited about the opportunity to contribute to [specific projects or initiatives at the company].I believe that my skills and experience make me a strong candidate for this position. I am confident that I can bring [specific value or contributions] to [company name], and am excited about the opportunity to discuss how my background, skills, and enthusiasm for the role make me a perfect fit for your team.Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my application further.Sincerely,[Your Name]。
修改稿cover,letter模板篇一：SCI 投稿全过程信件模板一览(Cover letter,催稿信等) 一、最初投稿Cover letterDear Editors:We would like to submit the enclosed manuscript entitled “Paper Title”, which we wish to be considered for publication in “Journal Name”. No conflict of inter est exits in the submission of this manuscript, and manuscript is approved by all authors for publication. I would like to declare on behalf of my co-authors that the work described was original research that has not beenpublished previously, and not under consideration for publication elsewhere, in whole or in part. All the authors listed have approved the manuscript that is enclosed.In this work, we evaluated ?? (简要介绍一下论文的创新性). I hope this paper is suitable for “Journal Name”.The following is a list of possible reviewers for your consideration:1) Name AE-mail: ××××@××××2) Name BE-mail: ××××@××××We deeply appreciate your consideration of our manuscript, and we look forward to receiving comments from the reviewers. If you have any queries, please don’t hesitate to contact me at the address below.Thank you and best regards.Yours sincerely,××××××Corresponding author:Name: ×××E-mail: ××××@××××二、催稿信Dear Prof. ×××:Sorry for disturbing you. I am not sure if it is the right time to contact you to inquire about the status of my submitted manuscript titled “Paper Title”. (ID: 文章稿号), although the status of “With Editor” has been lasting for more than two months, since submitted to journal three months ago. I am just wondering that my manuscript has been sent to reviewers or not?I would be greatly appreciated if you could spend some of your time check the status for us. I am very pleased to hearfrom you on the reviewer’s comments.Thank you very much for your consideration.Best regards!Yours sincerely,××××××Corresponding author:Name: ×××E-mail: ××××@××××三、修改稿Cover letterDear Dr/ Prof..（写上负责你文章编辑的姓名，显得尊重，因为第一次的投稿不知道具体负责的编辑，只能用通用的Editors）:On behalf of my co- authors, we thank you very much for giving us an opportunity to revise our manuscript, we appreciate editor and reviewers very much for their positive and constructivecomments and suggestions on our manuscript entitled “Paper Title”. (ID: 文章稿号).We have studied reviewer’s comments carefully and have made revision which marked in red in the paper. We have tried our best to revise our manuscript according to the comments. Attached please find the revised version, whichwe would like to submit for your kind consideration.We would like to express our great appreciation to you and reviewers for comments on our paper. Looking forward to hearing from you.Thank you and best regards.Yours sincerely,××××××Corresponding author:Name: ×××E-mail: ××××@××××四、修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分）List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in red in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as flowing:Responds to the reviewer’s comments:Reviewer #1:1. Response to comment: (??简要列出意见??) Response: ××××××2. Response to comment: (??简要列出意见??) Response: ××××××。
cover letter英文范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Dear Hiring Manager,Hi! My name is Sarah and I am writing to apply for the position of Junior Graphic Designer at your company. I am very excited about the opportunity to work with your team and contribute my creativity and passion for design.I am currently a student in elementary school, but I have been interested in art and design for as long as I can remember. I love drawing, painting, and creating digital designs on my computer. I am always looking for new ways to express myself through my art and I am constantly inspired by the world around me.I have taken art classes at school and have also participated in several art competitions, where I have won a few awards for my work. I am confident that my artistic skills and my enthusiasm for design make me a great fit for this position.I am also very eager to learn and grow as a designer. I am always looking for ways to improve my skills and I am not afraid to take on new challenges. I am a quick learner and I am always willing to put in the hard work necessary to succeed.I am very excited about the possibility of working with your team and I believe that my creativity and passion for design make me a great candidate for this position. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you further.Sincerely,Sarah篇2Dear Hiring Manager,Hello! My name is Emily and I am in grade 5. I am super excited to apply for the position at your company. I love to learn new things and I think I would be a great fit for your team.I am a good student at school and my favorite subjects are science and math. I am really good at solving problems and I always try my best to help my friends when they are struggling with their homework.I am a responsible person and I always finish my assignments on time. I am also a good team player and I like working with others to achieve a common goal. I believe that teamwork is important and I always try to listen to others' ideas and opinions.I am also a very creative person and I love coming up with new ideas. I think outside the box and I am not afraid to try new things. I believe that creativity is important in any job and I always try to think of new ways to solve problems.I am a hard worker and I always give 100% in everything I do.I am a quick learner and I am always eager to learn new things. I believe that learning is a lifelong process and I am always open to new challenges.I hope you will consider me for the position at your company.I am confident that I would be a valuable asset to your team and I am excited about the opportunity to work with you.Thank you for considering my application.Sincerely,Emily篇3Dear Hiring Manager,Hi there! My name is Lily and I am in the third grade. I am really excited to write this letter to tell you why I would be the perfect fit for your company.First of all, I love to learn new things. I am always asking questions and looking for new challenges. I think working in your company would be a great opportunity for me to learn and grow.Secondly, I am a good team player. I enjoy working with others and I always try to help my friends when they need it. I think teamwork is really important and I know that together we can achieve great things.Thirdly, I am very organized and responsible. I always make sure to do my homework on time and I never forget important dates. I think these skills would be really helpful in a job where attention to detail is important.Lastly, I am a creative thinker. I love to come up with new ideas and think outside the box. I think this quality would be really valuable in your company where innovation is key.In conclusion, I believe that I would be a great addition to your team. I am eager to learn, a good team player, organizedand responsible, and a creative thinker. I hope you will consider me for the position.Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely,Lily篇4Dear Hiring Manager,Hello! My name is Emily and I am very excited to apply for the position at your company. I am a hardworking and enthusiastic student who is eager to learn and grow in a new environment. I am writing this cover letter to tell you a little bit about myself and why I would be a great fit for your team.First of all, I love learning new things and trying out new experiences. I always try my best in everything I do, whether it’s in school, sports, or any other activities. I am a quick learner and I am not afraid to ask questions when I don’t understand something. I believe that with the right attitude and effort, I can accomplish anything I set my mind to.Secondly, I am a team player. I enjoy working with others and co llaborating to achieve a common goal. I think it’s important to listen to others’ ideas and opinions, and I always try to contribute in a positive way to the team. I am also a good communicator and I can easily get along with different kinds of people.Lastly, I am very organized and responsible. I always make sure to complete my tasks on time and I pay attention to details.I take pride in my work and I strive for excellence in everything I do. I am confident that I can bring these qualities to your team and contribute to the success of your company.Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to the opportunity to meet with you and discuss how I can be a valuable addition to your team.Sincerely,Emily篇5Dear Hiring Manager,Hi there! My name is Emily and I am in the fifth grade. I am writing to apply for the position of Junior Assistant at yourcompany. I am really excited about the opportunity to work with you and I believe that I would be a great addition to your team.I may be young, but I am a hard worker and a quick learner. I am always eager to learn new things and I am not afraid to ask questions when I need help. I have good communication skills and I enjoy working with others. I also have a positive attitude and a strong work ethic.In school, I am a member of the student council and I am responsible for organizing events and helping out my classmates.I am also a member of the science club and I love conducting experiments and learning about the world around me. I am always looking for ways to challenge myself and improve my skills.I believe that with my enthusiasm and positive attitude, I would be a valuable asset to your team. I am confident that I can handle any task that is given to me and I am excited about the opportunity to contribute to your company's success.Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely,Emily篇6Dear Hiring Manager,Hi! My name is Lily and I am in grade 3. I am writing this letter to tell you why I want to work at your company.I really like your company because it makes cool toys that I love to play with. I have a lot of fun playing with them with my friends and I think it would be so awesome to work for a company that makes such fun toys.I am a really good student in school and I always try my best in everything I do. I am good at listening to the teacher and following instructions. I am also really good at sharing and working with others. I think these skills would make me a great team player at your company.I am also really good at problem solving. Whenever my friends have a disagreement, I always try to help them find a solution. I think this skill would be really helpful in a job where I have to think of new ideas and solve problems.I am really excited about the possibility of working at your company and I promise to work really hard and do my best every day. Thank you for considering me for this job.Sincerely,LilyP.S. I hope I get to play with all the toys at your company!篇7Dear Sir/Madam,Hello! My name is Emily and I am in Grade 5. I am writing this letter to express my interest in the position of Junior Assistant at your company. I am very excited about the opportunity to work with you and learn new things.I am a hard-working and responsible student. I always finish my homework on time and I am good at organizing my tasks. I am also a friendly and helpful person, and I enjoy working with other people. I believe that these qualities will make me a great fit for the role of Junior Assistant.I am also very interested in learning new things and developing new skills. I think that working at your company will give me a chance to learn about different aspects of the business world and gain valuable experience. I am eager to learn from experienced professionals like you and to contribute to the success of your company.In conclusion, I would like to thank you for considering my application for the position of Junior Assistant. I am confident that I will be able to make a positive contribution to your team and I am looking forward to the opportunity to work with you.Thank you for your time and consideration.Sincerely,Emily篇8Dear Sir/Madam,Hi there! My name is Sarah and I am in the third grade. I am writing to tell you why I would be a great fit for your school.First of all, I love learning new things. I am always asking questions and trying to figure out how things work. I think school is so much fun because there are so many cool things to learn about.I also love to read. I have read all the Harry Potter books and I think they are awesome. Reading helps me use my imagination and learn about different places and people.I am also a good friend. I like to help my classmates when they are stuck on something and I always share my snacks with them at lunchtime.I am really good at math too. I can add and subtract really fast and I even know some multiplication. Math is like a puzzle to me and I love figuring out the answer.I hope you will consider letting me come to your school. I promise to work hard, be a good friend, and keep on learning new things every day.Thank you for reading my letter.Sincerely,Sarah篇9Dear Hiring Manager,Hello! My name is [Your Name] and I am 10 years old. I am writing to apply for the position of [Job Title] at your company. I am very excited about the opportunity to work with you and learn new things.I may be young, but I am a hard worker and a fast learner. I excel in school and am always eager to take on new challenges. I believe that I can bring a fresh perspective and a positive attitude to your team.I am very good at [Skills/Activities], which I believe will be beneficial to the position. I am also a great team player and am always willing to help others. I am responsible and always complete my tasks on time.I am very interested in [Company Name] and admire the work that you do. I would love the opportunity to be a part of your team and contribute to your success.Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to discuss my qualifications further.Sincerely,[Your Name]篇10Dear Hiring Manager,Hi there! My name is Sarah and I am a 10-year-old student from Sunshine Elementary School. I am writing to apply for the position of Junior Assistant at your company. I am super excitedabout this opportunity and can't wait to tell you more about myself.I may be young, but I am a hard worker and always ready to learn new things. I am great at keeping things organized and making sure everything is in its place. I also love helping others and making sure everyone is happy and having a good time.I may not have a lot of work experience yet, but I am a quick learner and I know that I can do a great job if given the chance. I am a whiz at using computers and I can type really fast too! I am also great at math and I love to read and write.I am a friendly and outgoing person who gets along well with others. I am always willing to lend a helping hand and I never give up, even when things get tough. I am eager to work hard and prove myself as a valuable member of your team.Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely,SarahP.S. I promise to bring lots of energy and enthusiasm to the job!。
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Dear *****,The review of your manuscript, Thermal Decomposition and Kinetics Studies on 1, 4-dinitropiperazine (DNP), submitted to Journal of Hazardous Materials has been completed. The reviewers recommend the need for minor revisions. Please revise your manuscript according to the reviewers' comments attached, and re-submit tome your revised version of the manuscript including an itemized response to each reviewer's comments.Please submit your revised submission before Jul 11, 2007. I will then begin the re-review process.Please note that revised manuscripts will be sent for review because revising a manuscript does not automatically mean it will be accepted for publication.For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below. On your Main Menu page is a folder entitled "Submissions Needing Revision". You will find your submission record there.Please ensure that the article conforms to the format of the Journal. In particular make sure that all the articles in your references have titles included. The Journal Guide for Authors is available on the Journal homepage /locate/hazmatWhen submitting your revised manuscript, please ensure that you upload the source files (e.g. Word). Uploading a PDF file at this stage will create delays should your manuscript be finally accepted for publication. If your revised submission does not include the source files, we will contact you to request them.Once again, thank you for your interest in Journal of Hazardous Materials.Yours sincerely,Merv Fingas, PhDEditor Journal of Hazardous MaterialsReviewers' comments:Reviewer #1: The paper reports on the thermal decomposition and kinetics of DNP. It is a welcome addition to the literature and acceptable for publication after some revision:(i) Please provide large basis-set DFT calculations to support the assignment of the IR bands of DNP.(ii) Please assign ALL IR bands of Fig. 5Reviewer #2: authors have carried out work on the thermal analysis of the dinitropiperazine. The new information reported in the paper is scanty. The large amount of data has been already reported by the several researchers on the thermal analysis of dinitropiperazine (See the reference section of the paper and also reviewer has done thescopussearch). The only new information reported in this paper is of the T-Jump IR studies and DSC studies under different pressures, which may adds on to the existing scientific data base. There is not much novelty in the reported work. The Table 1 and figure 1 need to be deleted from the paper since it isalready well reported in the literature.Table2 and figure 3 gives the same information. Authors are requested to delete Table 2 and the same information may be explained in the results and discussion part of the paper. May i also kindly request authors to update the literature survey till date on DNP in the introduction part of the paper using Chemical abstracts on disk (CA on CD)data base. The quality and clarity of the figures in the paper need to be improved. English need to be improved. The paper is recommended for short communication after the minor revision.Reviewer #3: The paper is okay in terms of contents. However, since it has been written by a Chinese, the English is very poor and as such requires a lot of corrections and editing by your team. The authors have used ozawa and Kissenger methods to find out activation energy. However, they have given data for activation energy by ozawa methodonly under 3.4 thermal decomposition kinetics).The data for Eo by Kissenger methods should also be included in the paper. Also, captions of Figs1,3 &5 are missing.Reviewer #4: This paper is promising but could be improved by better kinetic analysis.1. Kissinger's method is OK as a first approximation, but Friedman's method is the best isoconversional method. Even Ozawa has abandoned his method in favor ofFriedman's.2. The method of comparing a large number of kinetic modelsagainst data at a single heating rate (page 5) is invalid, discredited, and should not be published. This issue has been discussed in several papers by Vyzovkin and in ainternational kinetic study published by Brown et al, Thermochemica Acta 355, 125-143, 2000, and following papers. Consequently, there is no real evidence presented that the equation is first-order. In fact, from my studies of energetic materials, including RDX and HMX, I would have thought that nucleation-growth kinetics would be mostappropriate. However, I would have to do a more rigorous kinetic analysis of the data to know for sure.3. The best way to judge a kinetic model is how it compares with data at multiple heating rates (using a single set of parameters). Such a comparison is not present in this paper, so it is difficult to judge the validity of the kineticparameters.4. The author's discussion of HMX kinetics is good in some respects but out of date in others. More recent papers by multiple institutions place the activation energy for HMX closer to 150 kJ/mol. A commonly cited paper on this is by Wight and Vyazovkin, Ann Rev Phys Chem 48, 119, 1997. A more recent but harder paper toget is by Burnham and Weese in the proceedings of the 2005 ICT conference. Henson has published a correlation in the detonation symposium showing that explosiontimes scalewith an activation energy of about 150 kJ/mol. Active workers in energetic materials should have access to these materials. 看完了这个,是不是会觉得很头疼,是的老外就是这么认真.要求很具体仔细,审稿细致深入.下面就是看你怎么样回复这篇审稿意见了.我回复后的第三天就收到论文录用通知,估计他们没有再次送给审稿专家重审.因为我的Cover Letter他很满意,我是这样写的:Dear ***,My manuscript, *********************（论文题目）, was revised according to there viewers' comments, and the itemized response to each reviewer’s comments is attached. Many thanks for your suggestion. I am so sorry to bring you so much trouble because of our careless. Correspondence and phone calls about this paper should be directed to ****（作者）at the following address，phone and e-mail：Address:*********Tel.: ********Fax:*******E-mail: ********** Thanks very much again for your attention to our paper．Once again, thank you for your help to our paper processing. Yours sincerely，******For your guidance, itemized response to each reviewer’s comments is appended below.Dear reviewer #1:(i) Suhithi M. Peiris, Richard, etc. (J. Phys. Chem. A, 104 (39), 8898 -8907, 2000.10.1021) had already reported large basis-set DFT calculations to support theassignmentof the IR bands of DNP.(ii) We assigned all IR bands of Fig.5 (now change to fig.8).(iii) Because of the IR study had been reported, the IR spectra (fig.1) wasdeleted form the paper. Anyway, thank you for your arduous work and instructive advice.? Dear reviewer #2:(i) G. V. Sitonina, etc. (Russian Chemical Bulletin, V ol.28, 284-288) A study has been made of the kinetics of thermal decomposition of dinitropiperazine, in melts and insolution. As you said, the only new information reported in this paperis of the T-Jump IR studies and DSC studies under different pressures, which may adds on to theexisting scientific data base. Nevertheless, the kinetics study in our paper isa supplement which is with multi-heating rate method.(ii) The Table 1 and figure 1 was deleted from the paper and the correlative references were put forward.(iii) Table 2was deleted and the same information was explained in the results and discussion part of the paper.(iv) We had update the literature survey till date on DNP in the introduction part of the paper and enriched the introduction of the paper.(v) The figures were drawn again and the quality and clarity of them were improved.(vi) English expression was improved a littl e and it’s my great honor to ask your help on the language aspect.Dear reviewer #3:(i) As a Chinese, our English is very poor and a few of corrections and editing had done by our team.(ii) Now we only used Ozawa method to find out activation energy and you can check it in our paper again. According to reviewer #4, Kissinger method is invalid,discredited, and should not be published.(iii) Figures and captions of them are changed.(iv) At last, thank you for your arduous work and instructive advice.Dear reviewer #4:(i) This paper was improved by a better kinetic analysis. The kinetic parameters were established by Ozawa's isoconversional method because there is no Friedman's calculation program in our institute.(ii) As you just said, the method of comparing a large number of kinetic models against data at asingle heating rate is invalid. After the kinetic study by isoconversional method with data at multiple heating rates, we found that nucleation-growth kinetics is moreappropriate. You are seasoned in these aspects and it’s my great honor to ask your advice on these sorts of aspects.(iii) In order to judge a kinetic model, we did acomparison a single heating rate method with multi-heating method, and at last the kinetic parameters were judged. iv. You are right; the discussion of HMX kinetics is reall yout of date. The activation energy for HMX is closer to 150 kJ/mol. We had done the improvements in our paper. v. From your c omments, it’s obvious that you are an expertin thermo analysis, and there is lots of shortage in our study which need your instruction. At last, I want to thank you sincerely for your suggestions and I feel so sorry that so much of your precious time was wasted on our paper revision.认真对待修改意见.一般论文投到国外,如果满足期刊内容要求的前提下,一般会给你一个修改意见,不会直接拒绝.即使拒绝也是在第一次修改不满足要求的情况下拒绝的.他们想的是你改都改不好,还有什么话说.最后,我希望大家多多发表高质量的科技论文,多到国外投稿,这样不是为了多几篇SCI,是多增加国际交流,给自身的发展创造条件.特别是对于想出国深造的研究学者们.谨以此和大家共勉!本文多有论述不当之处,望大家批评指正!谢谢!。
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cover letter 英文范文Dear [Hiring Manager], I am writing to express my keen interest in the [Job Title] position at your esteemed company. With my passion for [Specific Industry] and a track record in delivering exceptional results, I am confident that I wouldbe a valuable asset at [Company Name].Allow me to elaborate on my qualifications and experiences, which align seamlessly with the requirements of this role.I possess a [Degree Type] in [Degree Major/Minor], which has provided me with a solid foundation in [Relevant Knowledge or Skills]. During my studies, I focused on [Specific Courses, Projects or Research], developing a deep understanding of [Relevant Topics]. My academic background, combined with hands-on industry experience, has equipped mewith a unique perspective that would contribute greatly to your team.In my previous role at [Previous Company], I was responsible for [Previous Position Description]. Here, I initiated and implemented several successful [Projects or Initiatives]. For instance, the [Project 1] project involved [Project Description], which required extensive [Skill Set] and strong problem-solving skills. Through my expertise in [Relevant Skills], this project not only met but exceeded its goals, resulting in [Project Outcome].Furthermore, at [Different Previous Company], I had the opportunity to work on [Different Projects or Responsibilities]. One notable achievement was my work on [Project 2], where I collaborated with a diverse team of professionals to develop [Project Description]. By leveraging my [Skill Set 2] and adaptability, we achieved remarkable results, including [Project Outcome 2]. This experience hashoned my ability to work effectively within cross-functional teams and manage complex projects.What truly excites me about [Company Name] is your innovative approach to [Specific Aspect of Company's Work]. The opportunity to contribute to your cutting-edge projects and collaborate with your esteemed team is deeply motivating.I believe I can make a significant impact in this role, drawing on my experience and passion for [Relevant Industry or Company Focus].My skills and experiences in [Highlight Key Skills] would be a valuable addition to your organization. I am confident that, given the opportunity, I will deliver outstanding results and align seamlessly with your company's vision and values.Thank you for considering my application. I have attached my resume for your review, which provides additional details on my experience and qualifications. I would welcome thechance to discuss how my skills can contribute to your team's continued success.I look forward to the possibility of joining your organization and driving meaningful outcomes.。
英文cover letter范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Subject: My Cover LetterHi there!I hope you are doing great! My name is [Your Name] and I am writing to apply for the [Job Position] at your company. I am super excited about this opportunity and I wanted to tell you a little bit about myself.First of all, I love learning new things and trying out new challenges. I am always eager to learn and grow, and I believe that this job would be a perfect fit for me to do just that. I am a hard worker and I always give my best in everything that I do.I have some experience in [mention any relevant experience or skills that you have]. I have also done some projects [mention any relevant projects or achievements that you are proud of]. I am a quick learner and I am confident that I will be able to pick up new skills quickly.I am also a team player and I love working with others. I believe that collaboration is key to success and I always do my best to contribute to the team. I am friendly, easy to get along with, and I always approach tasks with a positive attitude.In conclusion, I am really excited about the opportunity to work at your company. I am confident that I have the skills and attitude to excel in this role. I would love the chance to talk to you more about how I can contribute to your team.Thank you for considering my application. I can't wait to hear back from you!Best regards,[Your Name]篇2Dear Hiring Manager,Hi! My name is Emily and I am a super excited fifth grader who is applying for the position of Junior Graphic Designer at your company. I love art and design, and I think I would be perfect for this job!I have been drawing and creating art since I was a little kid. I love using colors and shapes to make things look cool and pretty.I have also been learning how to use computer programs like Photoshop and Illustrator to make digital designs. I even made a fun poster for my school's bake sale last month!I am really good at paying attention to details and making sure everything looks just right. I always make sure to double check my work and fix any mistakes. I am a hard worker and I always try my best to make things look awesome.I know I am still young, but I am a fast learner and I am always eager to try new things. I think this job would be a great opportunity for me to learn more about graphic design and improve my skills. I am really excited about the possibility of working with your team and creating cool designs together.Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon!Sincerely,Emily篇3Dear Mr. or Mrs. Hiring Manager,Hey there! My name is Sarah and I am writing to apply for the position of Junior Assistant at your company. I am reallyexcited about the opportunity to work with you and be a part of your team!I am a hardworking and responsible student who loves to learn new things. I enjoy helping others and always try my best to do my work well. I am good at organizing, working in teams, and using computers. I have good communication skills and am always ready to learn new things.I have some experience helping out at my school and with my family. I have helped my teacher organize the classroom and my parents with chores around the house. I also enjoy working on projects with my classmates and coming up with creative ideas.I am really looking forward to the chance to work with you and learn from your team. I believe that I can be a valuable asset to your company and help with whatever tasks you need me to do.Thank you for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon!Sincerely,Sarah篇4Dear Hiring Manager,Hi there! My name is Sarah, and I'm a super excited to be writing to you about the job I saw posted. I am very interested in the position and I would like to tell you a little bit about myself.I am currently in the fifth grade and I am a very hardworking student. I always try my best in everything I do, whether it's studying for a test or helping out my classmates. I am also very creative and I love coming up with new ideas. I believe that I would be a great fit for this job because I am always eager to learn new things and I am not afraid to try new tasks.Even though I am young, I have some experience that I think would be helpful for this position. I am the leader of my school's student council and I have helped organize several events, such as the school's Spring Fair and the Talent Show. I have also worked on projects with my classmates and I always make sure that everyone's voice is heard.I am looking forward to the opportunity to learn and grow in this position. I am confident that my positive attitude and strong work ethic will make me a valuable member of your team. Thankyou for considering my application. I hope to hear from you soon!Sincerely,SarahP.S. Let's have some fun working together!篇5Dear Hiring Manager,Hi! My name is Sarah and I am a super excited and enthusiastic 4th grader who loves to learn new things. I am writing this letter to tell you why I would be the perfect fit for the position you have available at your company.First of all, I am a really good listener and I always pay attention in class. My teachers always say that I am a great student because I am always eager to learn and ask lots of questions. I am also a team player and I work well with others. I love to help my friends and classmates with their schoolwork, and I always encourage them to do their best.I am also a very hard worker and I never give up, even when things get tough. I always try my best and I am not afraid to askfor help when I need it. I am always willing to learn new things and I love to challenge myself to do better.I think that I would be a great addition to your team because I am responsible, reliable, and I always do my best to make sure that I am doing my part. I am a quick learner and I am always looking for ways to improve and grow.Thank you for considering me for this position. I am really excited about the opportunity to work with you and I can't wait to show you what I can do.Sincerely,Sarah篇6Dear Hiring Manager,Hi there! My name is Lily and I am a 10-year-old student from Sunshine Elementary School. I am writing to apply for the position of Junior Assistant at your company.I am a hard-working and responsible student who always completes my homework on time. I am also very good at working with others and always try to be helpful and kind. I loveto learn new things and I am excited to help out at your company.Even though I am young, I am eager to learn and I believe that I can bring a positive and enthusiastic attitude to your team.I am good at following instructions and I am always willing to listen and learn from others. I am also very organized and I know how to manage my time well.I may not have a lot of work experience yet, but I am a quick learner and I am always willing to try my best. I am confident that I can be a valuable asset to your team and I am excited about the opportunity to learn and grow with your company.Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to the possibility of working with you and I hope to hear from you soon.Sincerely,Lily篇7Dear Hiring Manager,Hi! My name is Sarah and I am in grade 5. I am writing this letter because I am really excited about the opportunity to applyfor the position of junior assistant at your company. I think I would be a great fit for this role because I am responsible, hardworking, and eager to learn new things.I love helping out my friends and teachers at school, so I think I would be great at assisting you with any tasks you need help with. I am also really good at following directions and paying attention to details, so you can count on me to get things done accurately and on time.I am a good communicator and I love meeting new people, so I think I would be able to work well with your team and be a positive addition to your company. I am always eager to learn new things and I am not afraid to ask questions when I don’t understand something.Thank you for considering my application. I am really excited about the opportunity to work with you and I can’t wait to hear back from you.Sincerely,Sarah篇8Dear Hiring Manager,Hi! My name is Lucy and I am in the fifth grade. I am writing this letter because I really want to be considered for the job at your company. I may be young, but I am very responsible and hardworking.I have always been a good student in school and I have received many awards for my good grades and hard work. I am a fast learner and I am always eager to learn new things. I am also very good at working with others and I can get along with anyone.I think that I would be a great fit for the job at your company because I am very organized and I pay attention to detail. I always make sure to double check my work to make sure that it is perfect. I also am very good at following instructions and I always make sure to ask questions if I am not sure about something.I am also very good at problem solving and I can think quickly on my feet. I am a very creative person and I am always coming up with new ideas. I think that these skills would be very valuable to your company.Thank you for considering me for the job. I am very excited about the opportunity to work at your company. I promise that Iwill work very hard and I will do my best to be a valuable member of the team.Sincerely,Lucy篇9Subject: Application for Class MonitorHi there!My name is Emily and I am writing to apply for the position of Class Monitor in our class. I am super excited about the opportunity to take on this important role and help make our class the best it can be!I believe that I am a great candidate for this position because I am a very responsible and organized person. I always make sure to complete my homework on time and I never forget important dates or events. I am also a good listener and I care about what my classmates have to say.As Class Monitor, I promise to be fair and kind to everyone in our class. I will make sure that everyone follows the rules and I will do my best to help out my classmates whenever they need it.I will also work closely with our teacher to make sure that our class runs smoothly and that everyone feels happy and safe.I am really looking forward to the opportunity to be Class Monitor and I promise to do my very best if I am chosen for the role. Thank you for considering my application!Sincerely,Emily篇10Dear Hiring Manager,Hi there! My name is Sarah and I am writing this cover letter to apply for the position of Junior Marketing Assistant at your company. I am so excited about the opportunity to join your team and learn all about marketing.I may be young, but don't let my age fool you! I am a hard worker and I love to learn new things. I may not have a ton of experience, but I am a quick learner and I am always eager to try new things. I am good at using social media and I love coming up with creative ideas to promote products.I am also very organized and I always make sure to meet deadlines. I am good at working in a team and I love tocollaborate with others to come up with new and exciting campaigns. I am also a great communicator and I am not afraid to speak up and share my ideas.I am confident that I would be a great fit for your team and I am excited about the opportunity to learn and grow with your company. Thank you for considering my application. I can't wait to hear from you soon!Sincerely,Sarah。
尊敬的编辑委员会：我是XXX，来自XXX大学XXX研究团队的一名研究人员。
我想再次向您提交我们团队对于XXX方面的研究成果。
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感谢您抽出宝贵的时间来审阅我们的稿件。
在此，我想就我们的研究成果重新提交给您，并就我们的研究成果向您进行较为详细的说明。
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此致敬礼XXX 敬上尊敬的编辑委员会：我是XXX，来自XXX大学XXX研究团队的一名研究人员。
非常感谢您在之前对我们提交的稿件进行审阅，并提供宝贵的意见。
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sample 1Dear Mr. Wang,I am a fresh graduate from Xiamen University of Technology, and I am writing in response to your advertisement for recruiting a software programmer intern posted on our university BBS yesterday. I hope I can take the job.The main reason for my confidence in this position lies in both my extensive academic training in software programming, and my work experience in the relevant industry which has further polished my abilities. Moreover, I have much spare time this semester, which can ensure my time commitment for the internship. Please find more details in my enclosed resume.Thank you for your time and patience, and I would greatly appreciate it if you could grant me an interview.Yours sincerely,Li Ming译文：尊敬的王先生：我是厦门理工学院的一名学生，写这封信希望应聘您昨日在我校BBS上招募的计算机编程员实习生职位。
我希望我能够得到这份工作。
我认为我适合这个职位的信心来源于两点，一是我在计算机编程方面得到了广泛的学术训练，二是我在相关行业的实习经历进一步增强了我在这个领域的能力。
With this cover letter, we will submit the revised manuscript (acp-2010-399) entitled, “Relating tropical ocean clouds to moist processes using water vapor isotope measurements” for publication in Atmospheric Chemistry and Physics. We would like to thank referees for the careful and constructive reviews. Based the comments from the referees, we have made changes of the manuscript, which are detailed below.Reply to the evaluation by the second refereeThis reviewer pointed out two things. We believe these two points are relevant to comments from first reviewer and following his/her minor comments.1.Table 1: Is it valid to show the number of lower sensitivity data? (Specifically, BLC and PC data for 850-500 hPa)Answer: This point is related to our answer to the first referee. Please see our responses and Appendix to the first reviewer above.2. Figure 1: What are the multiple lines in the same colors?Answer: The multiple lines in the same color are multiple profile observations in one TES Run ID (5889) except precipitating clouds (Three Run IDs, 5889, 5918 and 5948 were need to plot multiple profile observations).3. Figure 2: Latitude/Longitude information should be added. Is this a snapshot? If so, the date should be specified.Answer: We add the date in the figure caption. The geographical information was already presented in the original manuscript.4. Figure 3: Time information should be specified in the caption. Why COD/CTP and H2O/dD have different sampling frequencies? How can the reader know about the cloud types during this time series?Answer: In Fig. 3, cloud properties (a and b) and water vapor (c and d) have different sampling frequencies because we sampled cloudy conditions for Fig. 3 (a) and (b). We add a sentence in figure caption.5. Figure 4: Is it a snapshot? Seasonal mean for a single year? Climatology? Please clarify.Answer: We mentioned sampling period in Section 2.2. Isotopic composition of water vapor (δD). It is not a snapshot. It is a seasonal mean value (June to August, JJA) from June 2005 to August 2008.6. Abstract: It has been told by many that the vapor-dD relationship is controlled by not only Rayleigh process but also other non-Rayleigh processes, but none of them has quantified the significance. Is it still impossible in this study?Answer: It is a good point. One of the simplest models for atmospheric water vapor isotope is based on the Rayleigh distillation equation. Several processes could potentially change the isotopic composition of water vapor, such as mixing, subsidence and re-evaporation (non-Rayleigh processes) as we described in our manuscript. Quantifying the significance is beyond our scope of the study. However, some studies using remotely sensed data and/or in-situ measurements have been used to constrain humidity dynamics of lower troposphere. For example, Worden et al. (2007) quantitatively showed the contribution of rainfall evaporation to lower tropospheric humidity. Galewsky et al. (2007) reproduced the clear-sky free troposphere relative humidity and D/H ratios using a model that accounts for large-scale condensation, fractionation, mixing and transport of water vapor, which Rayleigh distillation model underpredicted.Galewsky, J., Strong, M., and Sharp, Z. D.: Measurements of water vapor D/H ratios from Mauna Kea, Hawaii, and implications for subtropical humidity dynamics,Geophys. Res. Lett., 34, L22808, doi:10.1029/2007GL031330, 2007.7. P17412 top: What is the unit of COD?Answer: Cloud Optical Depth is unit-less.8. P17414 bottom: Why do the ranges of the lines in Fig 1e-h link to the sensitivity? What is the each single line in the figure 1e-h? What is difference between error and sensitivity in this context?Answer: If there is little sensitivity, there would be no difference between TES a priori constraint and an estimate. Each line represents a single observation measured by TES in Fig. 1e-h.9. P17415 middle: What is “step-and-stare”? Describe.Answer: “Step-and Stare” is a TES observation mode in which 60 measurements are made spaced about 35km apart. “Stare” means point at a specific latitude and longitude for up to 210 seconds. “Transect” means a set of exactly contiguous latitudes and longitudes in a line up to 885 km long. We added the definition of “step and stare” in the manuscript. Now it becomes “A TES “step-and-stare”, which is a set of nadir footprint spaced about 35 km apart, was conducted during this same time and the approximate orbit location of this set of observations is shown as a vertical red line over the MODIS imagery.”.10. P17416 middle: “less than 0.1” -> No COD data is less than 0.1 in Figure 3.Answer: Fixed. Now the sentence is “Near –3°, the air is relatively dry, approximately 1 g/kg but also very isotopically depleted underneath high cirrus (cloud-top pressure near 200 hPa, but cloud optical depth less than 1.0).”.11. P17419 bottom: “The first distribution is for comparison against...” -> I don’t see any clear sky and non-precipitation cloud distributions in the figure 6.Answer: The sentence in Page 17419, lines 28 and 29 seems to be confusing such that we have added more information. Now it becomes “The first distribution (850-500hPa) is for comparison against the clear sky and nonprecipitating cloud distributions shown in Fig. 5 and shows that the air above boundary layer clouds is more isotopically depleted than air parcels associated with clear sky and nonprecipitating clouds.”.12. P17420: This explanation is particularly hard to follow. At top, it reads “well explained by local mixing”, but at middle, it reads “due to less frequent mixing”. Which is true? I may misunderstand it, but to avoid such misunderstanding, it’d be better for the authors to make the explanation easier. Using schematic figures is absolutely necessary.Answer: The TES observations show that the air above boundary layer clouds is constrained by the two theoretical lines. However, compared to the clear and nonprecipitating clouds, the overall isotopic composition of water vapor for boundary layers are more depleted in heavy isotope (Table 1). We tried to explain this isotopic depletion in the sentence in page 17420, line 5. To address the criticism of this reviewer, we reworded the paragraph in Page 17420, lines 3 to 11 to make that clearer. Now the paragraph becomes “We can conclude from either distribution that the TES observations above boundary layer clouds are well constrained by local mixing and Rayleigh condensation.”. Since Steven (2005) described each type of clouds in detail using cartoons, we believe it is not necessary to add a cartoon in this manuscript.We appreciate the comments from the reviewers. Thank you for reviewing our manuscript.Sincerely,Jeonghoon Lee。
