《声声慢》的英译

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这首《声声慢》曲式李清照的代表作,开头七对叠字被认为是千古绝唱。“寻寻觅觅”是若有所失的动态,“冷冷清清”是有所失的静态结果,“凄凄惨惨”是内心的表层,“戚戚”是内心的深处。这三句由动而静,由浅入深,写出了女词人国破家亡,物是人非的悲痛。“乍暖还寒时候”,我认为是刚暖还冷的春天,这种时候最难保养身体。女词人喝上两三杯味不浓烈的淡酒,怎能抵御晚上吹来的寒风呢?风吹雁叫,一听更加伤心,因为从前看见雁过,总是春回大地,如果丈夫在外,则希望会带来他的消息,现在丈夫已死,过雁还能带来什么希?只能令人心碎断肠。

The beating of the slow 曲式李清照were beginning to field of seven is considered 千古绝唱寻寻觅觅. "" if there is a dynamic and "cold" are of the motionless as a result, the "miserable" inner surface, the "inner distress" is the depth of three. it is still and quiet, build and write the 词人find his homeland, the sorrow. "乍暖还寒, i think that's just warming is still a cold spring, when the most difficult to maintain body

下片转入秋天,“满地黄花堆积”,回想从前与丈夫饮酒赏菊,而今花谢飘零,有谁还会来“采菊东篱”呢?只好一个人坐在窗前,望着落花,形单影只,怎样才能熬到天黑啊!更难堪的是,到了黄昏时分,忽然下起雨来,一点一滴落在梧桐叶上,都像是对女词人心灵的打击。这样的哀愁,从春到秋,周而复始,叫一个孤苦伶仃的女词人如何受得了!

XiaPian into the autumn, the ground "stack" flower, recall the past with her husband, now take drink chrysanthemum appreciation xie wandering, who would come "adopt chrysanthemum"? To a person to sit by the window, looking out, how can I stay up until, dark! More embarrassed, by nightfall, suddenly it started to rain, and a drop in phoenix, like to leaf of heart attack poetess. This sorrow from spring arrive autumn, round and round, a famous female poet of how his stand! 全词都用仄韵:觅、戚、息、急、识,积、摘、黑、摘、得,更增加了愁苦之情。英译文用miss,cheer,和觅、戚音似;用drift/swift,quicken/thicken,drizzles/grizzles等,也是用音美来传达原词的意美。

这句原文全是口语,因为有韵有调,所以阴雨袅袅,不绝于耳。美国译者Rexroth 的译文是How can I drive off this word—/Hopelessness?(我怎能把“失望”这个词赶走?)译文无韵无调,用词又散文化,不能传达原文的三美。

The word was with rhyme: an emotion, qi, interest, urgent, general, and pick, black, picking, too, more added sorrow. English translation, and to use here, look like; QiYin, Drift with swift, quicken thicken / / drizzles, etc, also use grizzles/beauty to convey the original word meaning beauty. This sentence is spoken, because there YuanWenQuan rhyme, so there is unusually

early-between curl. America is the translator Rexroth while I drive off regardless of Hopelessness - / word? (I can put "down" this word away? It is no rhyme, words and text can convey the prosification, three beautiful

中国译者徐忠杰的译文是How, in the word “miserable”,

Can one find—/The total effects of all these on the mind!(怎能在“悲惨”这个词中找到这些事在我心头产生的全部效果?)句型整齐平衡,远不如长短句的短句压抑,长句奔放,效果不大相同。比较一下现译:Oh, what can I do with a grief/Beyond belief! (这种难以相信的哀愁让我如何受得了!)现译不如前两种译文符合“信达切”的标准,但是前长后短,后句四个音节,和原文相近,而且用了两个be和两个ief,读来富有音美,能够使人回肠断气,一唱三叹。由此可见,文学翻译应该发挥译语的优势,选择最好的(而不是最切的或最佳近似的)表达方式,才能译出精品。

China XuZhongJie translation the translator is How, in the word "miserable",

Can one find The total - / exploration nowadays all The mind! (how the word "in" tragic find these