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B.外貌,性格: 巧用with做定语
译:我的历史老师是个漂亮女人,她长着两只大眼睛,留着长发
My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.
C. 教育经历:注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
1)Majored in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2)Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctor's degree.
3)Lishizhen makes great contributions to Medical literature.
Find out the good sentences in the possible version and remember them with your partner
1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.
D.生平:尽量用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等,润色文章
1)Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music. 2)He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.
order of time )
(5)评估evaluation (1)概况age, sex, birth-place, background
介绍人物步骤记忆技巧:
概
概貌(盖帽)
,,,,
貌
育
平
估
平(估)菇
* 语法,句法高分tips
1.A. 概况 : 尽量用分词短语、同位语结构,使文章简洁,通 顺
译:钟南山1Biblioteka 41年出生在广州,他是中国最伟大的医生之一
E.评估: 注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
1)Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .
2)He is one of the greatest novelists in China and will be always remembered as an outstanding man.
Dear Bruce, I was glad to know you began to study Chinese literature.
Now let me tell you something about Luxun . _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ _______________________________________________ ____________________________________________. Since you are learning Chinese literatures, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will help you to know more about it.
Yours, Li Ming
审题的步骤是什么?
1、文体 2、主体时态 3、人称 4、信息点整合 5、列提纲,打草稿
人物简介的一般步骤: Give the right order
概,貌,育,平,估
(3)教育:education (2)外貌/性格appearance ,character (4 )生平big events in his or her life ( in
(5)一些作品还被选入了中学和大学课本。 参考词汇:《阿Q正传》:The True Story of AH Q
《祝福》:The New Year’s Sacrifice 注意:
1)介绍必须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条译成英语。 [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。文章首尾已给出,不算字数。 [评分标准] 句子结构的准确性,信息内容的完整性。
基础写作系列之三
如何写人物介绍
1.例文:假如你叫李明,你的美国朋友布鲁斯开始学习中国文 学,来信询问鲁迅其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅,内容如下
(1)鲁迅,原名周树人,浙江绍兴人 (2)为了国家,弃医从文。 (3)著名的作家,思想家,而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。 (4)小说被译成多种文字,并被制成电影,如《阿Q正传》、 《祝福》这两部影片。