高中英语作文投诉信.ppt

Dear Manager,
My name is Li Hua. I stayed at your hotel, Golden Bay during my visit to Australia from May 1 to 2 with my parents. However，the service in your hotel was too bad. I'm writing this e mail to express my dissatisfaction.
高考英语作文 投诉信
I am writing to show my disappointment about…I recently purchased from your website.
1. And the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of some books was torn, which made me very disappointed.
First, we found our suitcases broken after they were carried to our room by one of your porters. Second, water was leaking out of the toilet in the bathroom. Third, the noise from the bar downstairs went on so late into the night that we couldn't have a good rest.
I sincerely hope you can improve your service so that none of the above happens again.

?2. I have been content /satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about...
?3. There are some main reasons why I am not content with...At first,...What's more,...Eventually,...
?5. I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/ solve the problem as aoon as possible
IV. Consolidation(质疑再探)
? Dear sir,
? I'm writing to express my dissatisfaction about the mobile phone I
?
Sincerely yours,
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Bu Manyi
v. Homework(课后练习）
? 假设你是李华，你在周日搭乘 102路公交车，该公交车司机的不 文明行为让乘客很愤怒。于是你向公交车公司写一封投诉信。要 点如下：
? 1. 司机的不文明行为（大声讲话、紧急刹车、态度粗鲁等）。 ? 2.希望尽快查清此事。 ? 注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
bought in 20th Apr. 2015 in your store. Ten days before that, it didn't ring or sent text messages. Then I took them to the seller, but was told that the model has been sold out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossibly to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hear that. What can I wait that long? Therefore, I sincerely hope you can send to me a new one of some model. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take measures to solve the problem as soon as possible.

will your company pay for the postage?
I would appreciate it very much if you could solve the
problem immediately. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
高 考 英 语 投 诉信课 件(共4 4张PPT )
Underline useful expressions &recite them!
高 考 英 语 投 诉信课 件(共4 4张PPT )
高 考 英 语 投 诉信课 件(共4 4张PPT )
To whom it may concern,
Passage 1
Appreciation and learning:
在Passage 1 中找出相关的表达：
1 在你的网站上_f_r_o_m__/_on__y_our website
2 投诉……____c_o_m__p_l_a_in_ about... 3 从……购买……p_u_rc_h_a_s_e_/_b_u_y sth. from ... 4 一双九码的鞋子 _a__p_a_i_r_o_f_s_iz_e_-_nine shoes/
the above reasons, I demand either a new pair of black
size-nine shoes be posted to me immediately or I be
given a full refund. Also, if I send back the wrong shoes,
your restaurant.
Here are the reasons for my dissatisfaction. First of all,

高中写作----投诉信
Dear Sir，
I am writing to you for the mobile phone of DephoneS250 I bought on 20th Apr.2008 at Tele Mall in Wuhan, P.R. China. Ten days after that, it didn’t ring and send short messages. Then I took it to the seller, but was told that the model had been sold out and I had to wait at least three months for a new one. Later I went to the repairman. He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts. I was so desperate on hearing that. How can I wait that long? Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month.
disturbance干扰
nuisance 麻烦事
remedy 补救 solve解决
recurrence再次发生 awful 糟糕的
相关句型：
1) I am writing to you to complain about ... 2) I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with... 3) There are some problems with the flat that I

Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
完善写作流程图
自我介绍 写作目的
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内容
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常用语块
1. 抱怨
__c_o_m__p_l_a_i_n__a_b__o_u_t_______
Dear Sir, 第一段：自我介绍+写信目的
I am Li Hua, a frequent customer in your restaurant. I have been pleased with your excellent service for years but now I’m I’m writing to make a complaint about the
6. 调查此次事件
investigate/look into the matter/incident
7. 表达不满
express one’s dissatisfaction about
8. 要求合理的赔偿
ask for reasonable compensation.
套用句式
② 写信目的， 因何事向对方提出投诉。
Dear Dir,
I am Li Hua, one of your customers. I’m writing to make a complaint about the poor Web service I have received, and ask for reasonable compensation.
三、投诉信模板
Dear ________， I am ________ (自我介绍). I am writing to make

Sincerely Yours,
Tom
例题 2
假定你是李华，在外教课期末考试中发现有人作弊，你认为这会影响考 试公平。请你给外教John写一封邮件，内容包括：1.情况描述；2.你的看 法；3.你的请求。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear John,
Yours, Li Hua
For one thing, the TV I bought the other day from your company turned out to be a fake, which ruined your good reputation. (原因一) For another, when I went to your shop for an explanation, the salesperson behaved in a rude manner, turning a deaf ear to my requirement. (原因二)
To improve the situation, it is advisable for you to take the following measures.
To remedy（补救）the matter ,I suggest making the following changes.
I would appreciate it if you can look into this matter. Please contact me by phone at… , and I will wait until…/ before seeking help from…
Dear manager,
I am Tom, one of your customers. (自我介绍) I am writing to lodge a complaint about the poor quality of your product. (表达写作目的) The experience in your shop is a bitter disappointment to me.(投诉原因)