新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第1课
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新东方四六级名师解惑之写作篇1.脑子里想好中文的意思,再把它翻译成英文,这样的思路对吗?汪老师:许多同学都是想好中文再翻译成英文。
严格说来,即使对学习英语多年的人来说,在写作时想做到完全用英文思索都是极难达到的一种近乎神话的抱负境界。
关键是中文思索的程度——英文修养极高的人在写作时可能已经很少意识到自己是在用那种语言、很难区分自己在什么时候正在使用什么语言,他已经到了“天人合一”的境界;英文很好的人可能只是在整体构思时用汉语,到详细写作段落或句子时用英语;英文一般的人会将每句的意思大致用汉语想好,但写作时还是要用英文的习惯句型和固定搭配来表达;初学英语基础又很不扎实的人在不仅每句用汉语想好,还基本每字严格对译,这就是中式英文的产生缘由了。
要想少些一点中式英文,就要多积累习惯句型和固定搭配,在“翻译”时尽可能多用这些模式化的句型,少一些逐字对译。
2.经常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法,该如何解决?汪老师:这是考试时任何一个人都会遇到的问题,即使他的词汇量很大。
其实就算一个人的词汇量再大,大到把握全部英文单词,也还是会遇到一些无法用已有单词表达的状况。
由于世界在变化,每时每刻总会有新的事物消失。
遇到不会表达的思想可以用以下几招:第一,模糊化即用上义词表达。
如不会说“手提电脑”,可以用它的上义词“machine”, “gadget”, “invention”, “instrument” 等。
其次,可以解释说明。
如我们可以把手提电脑写作“the kind of computer that you can carry wherever you go and that you can put on your lap”。
第三,可以把一些解释不清的东西略去不写。
写作是一个主动的制造过程,可以并且应当发挥自己的主观能动性。
写那些自己会写的,避开那些自己不会写的。
这才是写作的乐趣所在。
否再和前面的单项选择题有什么区分。
新CET-4写作培训讲义(doc 34页)部门: xxx时间: xxx制作人:xxx整理范文,仅供参考,勿作商业用途新CET-4写作讲义北京新东方学校:王江涛欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材前言开场白推荐两本书:《圣经》《古希腊罗马神话》一共分为四节课,每节课大概2.5小时左右第一节课:1)考试题型;2)考试要求;3)评卷实例第一节一、考试题型1、应用文(7考):口头作文(2考)、书信作文(5考)2、论说文(25考):提纲作文(23考)、图表作文(2考)3、段首句作文:4考4、课程安排:1)考试题型、考试要求、评卷实例2)口头作文、书信总论3)书信详解4)论说文、翻译5、学习方法:实力(高分策略)+技巧(万能框架)二、考试要求《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定:四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。
要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文;写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
其命题方式有:给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。
要求内容切题,文理通顺,表达正确,语义连贯,无重大语言错误。
6、时间要求:30分钟1)审题(3分钟):2)写作(25分钟):3)检查(2分钟):语法(时态、冠词、主谓一致)、拼写、标点【2005.06】For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay [IN honour ofteachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 wordsfollowing the outline given below:1. 向老师表达节日祝贺2. 从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献3. 我如何回报老师的关爱7、字数要求:120-150词8、写作主题:大学校园生活(学习、生活、工作)9、命题方式:段首句、提纲、命题、关键词、情景、图表作文10、具体要求:1)语言第一位:表达通顺、无重大语言错误(1)基础一般:简单原则、安全第一(2)基础较好:句子结构词多变2)结构第二位:(1)逻辑性:A.并列:and/or/butB.因果:because/in that, since/as, forC.转折:but/however(2)关联词:3)内容第三位:切题Last night, I was kicked by my girl friend. She ran away with a small white face. She is my green plum and bamboo horse. Now I know that love is blind. Beauty is but skin-deep. Money is the root of evil. However, I only regret that I have but one life to lose for my country. Could you please tell my why the injured is always me. It is high time that you teachers devoted your love to me. If you do not give me full mark, I will commit suicide immediately.三、评卷实例11、教材第5页第1篇:中英思维差异1)中式思维:情感分段、读者领会、迂回模式、归纳式思维2)英式思维:逻辑分段、作者交代、直线模式、演绎式思维1999年1月真题例文(1)讲解Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.on another hand. Someone's intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn't reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don't treat these books with rackless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.12、教材第4页第2篇:1999年1月真题例文(2)讲解I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.13、教材第5页第3篇:1999年1月真题例文(3)讲解Some people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beautiful. we must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.14、教材第5页第2篇:1999年1月真题例文(4)讲解How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view. Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree. They emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.15、教材第4页第1篇:1999年1月真题例文(5)讲解When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can。
自我介绍
1. 英语专业
2. 领事馆
3. 新东方
ü课程安排
1. 概述和书信
2. 书信和对立观点题
3. 对立观点和单一观点题
4. 单一观点和图表
5. 图表,改错和完型
课程要求
1. 预读——范文,模板,泛读
2. 复读——例文,笔记
3. 实践——押题
ü评分原则——内容与结构
总体评分
1. 找:idea
2. 扫:从,写作方法
3. 感:文字,文法,文体,文笔检查扣分点
1. 作文格式
2. 拼写
3. 搭配
4. 三“一致”
印象分——加分点/闪光点
十大闪光点(求求大家)
1. 提问法
2. 总结法
3. “一些人认为”
4. 从句:宾语从句、定语从句
5. 并列句
6. 理由词汇
7. 理由段公式
8. 路线句型
9. 数据的表达
10. 结语。
写作模板(一)段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。
一些人认为……There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.2. 俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。
There is an old saying______. It’s the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.3. 现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。
首先,……;其次,……。
更为糟糕的是……。
Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____. What makes things worse is that______.4. 现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。
Nowadays,it is common to ______. Many people like ______ because ______. Besides,______.5. 任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。
它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.6. 关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person. Some people say that ______.To them,_____.7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。
CET4写作高分班电子教材主讲:王江涛欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材第一节四级写作总论一、课程安排:1、四级写作总论:1)考试流程2)复习计划3)学习方法4)大纲解读2、应用文:1)个人简历2)书信3)口头作文4)告示5)经典范文3、论说文:1)评卷实例2)万能句型3)最新真题4、翻译:1)最新大纲2)最新真题二、考试流程:08:45 验证入场(身份证、准考证、学生证缺一不可)09:00 发答题卡(答题卡1正面为作文题,背面写作文),9:00之后无法入场。
09:10~09:35 写作(09:35发试题册)09:35~09:40 翻译09:40~09:55 快速阅读理解(在答题卡1背面作答)09:55~10:00 收答题卡1,建议快速浏览听力选项10:00~10:35 听力理解(以下在答题卡2作答)10:35~11:05 仔细阅读理解(选词填空或简答+篇章阅读理解)11:05~11:20 完形填空(11:05 监考教师提醒15分钟后交卷)三、复习计划:1、攻克词汇:1)词汇书:俞敏洪《四级词汇词根+联想记忆法》2)软件:《新东方背单词》(5)3)真题:最新10套四级真题4)记忆法:参见我的博客/m/jtwang:“考研复习”之“十天搞定考研词汇”2、精研真题:最新10套四级真题,尤其是2006年6月24日以后真题1)词汇:没有一个词汇不认识2)选项:没有一个选项不了解3、适当模考:参见王江涛编著《大学英语四级考试一本通》(群言出版社)四、学习方法:(一)提高实力:1、背诵:10大必背范文1)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩2、考生可能带来的副作用3、我对考试的看法In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition,the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively.In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the studen ts’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?2)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Favorite Novel. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我最喜爱的小说是···2、该小说的内容3、我为什么喜爱My favorite novel is Around the World in Eighty Days which is written by Jules Verne. The author was born in France and devoted himself to literature and wrote several scientific romances, which gained him the name——Father of Modern Science Fiction.This is a book of science fiction which tells us an exciting story about an English gentleman, Mr. Phileas Fogg, who makes a bet with his clubmates and manages to travel around the world in eighty days. It gives us a vivid description of the many difficulties and incidents which happen on his journey.From this story, we can see the author’s deep love for the sea, travel and adventure, which played a vital role in his life. We are also astonished and convinced by his fertile imagination and scientific and geographical knowledge.3)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Person I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、我生活中最难忘的人是······2、为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀3、结论In my life I have met a great many people who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever know is my English teacher.What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First and foremost, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Furthermore, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs.Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.4)Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually:1)邀请他们参加晚会,2)说明举办晚会的原因,3)为他们安排了什么活动Dear Snoopy,I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Fujiwora to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2008.As you are a close friend of us,we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the show ing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company.Yours sincerely,Li Ming5)SpeechMr. President, ladies and gentlemen,Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of Motorola(China) Electronics Ltd.The following is my introduction to the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference fo International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company , I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive. .I was all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.6)LetterDear Sir or Madam,I am a senior from the Department of Business Administration of Beijing University. I am writing the letter in purpose of applying for admission into your esteemed institution/your recently advertised position for a staff member.I am sure that I am qualified for it. Fist, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience. Second, not only do my qualifications and experience make me a perfect candidate for it, my cheerful personality is well suited to studying in your prestigious university/working as a staff member. Last, my hobbies include sports and music.Words fail me when I try to express my heartfelt gratitude to the help you render me. Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely,LiMing7)RESUMELi MingP. O. Box 237, Beijing University5, Yiheyuan Road, Haidian District, Beijing 100871Tel: 62768888 Email: Liming@Career Objective: A position with management potential in the banking business specializing in international corporate financingEducational Background:Sept 2003 to Beijing UniversityJuly 2007Major in International Business ManagementMain courses include English, Computer, Business Management, Accounting,International Commercial LawWork Experience:July 2006 to Bank of ChinaJune 2007Internship, Secretary to Deputy Manager of MarketingDraft business correspondenceSchedule deputy manager’s appointmentsQualifications:University graduation certificate and bachelor degree to be conferred upon graduation (2007)College English Test Band 4 June 2005Honors & Awards: Twice awarded scholarship by Beijing University 2005& 2006Special Skills:Familiarity with Microsoft Word, ExcelAbility to work independentlyGood Organizational skillsExperience:President of Student Union 2005-presentPersonal Data: Date of Birth: 9/17/1985Gender: FemaleMarital Status: Unmarried8)AnnouncementDirections:The Student’s Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:1) the purpose of the contest,2) time and place of the contest,3) what is required of the candidates,4) details of the judges and awards.Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature.Chinese-Speaking ContestJune 10, 2007 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (17june) at the Students’ Recreational Center. Those who are interested in talking part in it may sign up with the monitors of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.The Students’ UnionDepartment of Chinese Language and Literature9)InternetOwing to the speedy economic development, the number of the people who use Internet has considerably increased. It is universally acknowledged that Internet playa a crucial role in modern society.Due attention has to be paid to the issue of Internet. With the reform and opening-up in recent decades, people in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of Internet. Unfortunately, if we let this situation continue as it is, we do not know where humans will be in the forthcoming future.Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures. To begin with, we should cultivate the authorities to make strict laws to control Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet. In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of people that Internet is essential to us. Only in this way can we solve the problem.10)Jobs for Graduates (1)Job hunting has always been a headache for college graduates. Though many graduates are employed right after graduation, some are not. Most serious of all, some still have no idea whereto go working even a long time after graduation.The reasons for this phenomenon are various. On the one hand, a few years ago colleges and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. On the other hand, most graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.I think the problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. First, they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. Second, students' attitude towards employment should be changed. They should go to some small cities and country. There they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. In a word, if we pay much attention, the problem can be solved.参考译文1)在绝大多数大学里,考试都是作为衡量学生是否掌握某一课程的主要手段。
雅思写作完全攻略Total Solution of IELTS Writing俞伟国-2009-雅思考试作文部分题型课时安排:Marking SystemEssay WritingIntroductionBodyConclusionStructureReport Writing近年雅思考试中国大陆考区作文部分得分情况(From Mat Clark)Band4 or below: 15%-20% Band5: 60% Band6: 15%-20% Band7: <5% Band8 or above: RareKey Language Features in Marking SystemTask Response:1. No evidence of digression/irrelevant content2. Adequate Words3. Position + Supporting Ideas + DevelopmentCoherence and Cohesion1.Logical overall structure2.Topic Sentence3.Cohesive devicesLexical Resource1.Accurateness2.Authentic Vocabulary (Less-common Vocabulary)3.VarietyGrammatical Range and Accuracy1.Accuratenessplex Sentence3.Variety欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Chapter One-Essay Writing第一章. 议论文完全攻略______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Part One-Introduction-闪亮开篇--Version -Structure of Introduction1. Background Information(1). Lead-in Sentence (Introduce the subject of the topic)(2). Public Opinion2. Statement(State your position)1.主体背景(Background Information)(1) In the last century, the first man walking on the moon said: “It is a big step for mankind”. However, some people think it ma de______________________________, when ________________________________________________________________for the first time, he _____________________________________________________ that it was a great step for mankind. Nowadays, however, some people believe that it actually _____________________________________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase方法之一-具体化(笼统概念-缩小范围)(2) Food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. However, some people think the methods used to do this may have negative effects on local communities and be dangerous to human health.Nowadays people can _______________ food far more _______________ _________________________ more _______________ fertilizers and machinery. Nevertheless, some people hold the methods used may ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:Paraphrase 方法之二-单词转换(优先考虑三大词类:)Paraphrase方法之三-句型转换(方法1 )(方法2)(3) Many people say teachers should only teach students academic subjects;Others say teachers should also take the responsibility of teaching students to judge what is right and wrong.Some people hold the opinion that ______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________While some argue that ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill: 句型转换(方法3)(4) Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it uses up fuel resources and causes pollution. Do you agree or disagree with the statement You should use your own experience to support your argument.According to some __________, air travel should be _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill: Paraphrase思路顺序:单词转换>句型转换>具体化(5Some people propose that___________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法4)(6). In modern society, there are more and more old people, do you think its benefits outweigh its disadvantages______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:信息量偏少的Topic Introduction写作对策追根溯源法-Factor(s) [因]-Phenomenon (Subject) [果]2. 总论点(Statement)Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punishedAverage Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished. Decent Example:In my opinion, the parents should not be punished except that (unless) they are those who purposefully teach the child to behave badly.Topic-Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools. But others feel that it has negative effects on them. Discuss the both viewpointsFrom my point of view, it is an ideal choice to send children to private middle schools ______________________________Exercise1: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法5)Exercise2: Topic-Should college students be encouraged to take up part-time jobs ______________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________Language Skill:句型转换(方法6)3. Report-Introduction写作对策Today, the phenomenon that_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________has aroused growing concern.In my opinion, a lot of factors contribute to the problem and in this article, I would like to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________*This phenomenon, as far as I am concerned, can be attributed to the following causes, which could be regarded as the apple of discord.Structure of Report Introduction1. Lead-in Sentence (Paraphrase the first sentence in the topic)2. Plan A: Essay StatementPlan B: Linking SentenceExercise1:Exercise2: Topic-Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to studyExercise3: Topic-欢迎光临俞老师的BLOG:Part Two-Body-中流砥柱--Version -分论点的要求:1.字数要求:One complex sentence preferred. Around 20 words.2. 分论点四项基本原则:(1). 内容原则:分论点应该体现为一种_____________________________并且与总论点为_________________关系。
2023英语四级作文新东方万能作文模板讲义Introduction:In recent years, the importance of English proficiency has been widely recognized. As a result, the English proficiency test, such as the CET-4, has become a crucial gateway for many Chinese students. In this essay, we will explore the New Oriental universal writing template for the 2023 English CET-4 exam.Body:Part 1: Introduction to the topicThe initial paragraph should provide a general introduction to the topic without referring to the specific essay prompt. This part aims to engage the reader's attention and set the tone for the subsequent discussion.Part 2: Background information or definitionIn this section, provide some background information or define the key terms related to the topic. It is essential to ensure that the reader understands the context.Part 3: Thesis statement and previewPresent a clear thesis statement that outlines the main argument or stance of your essay. Additionally, provide a brief preview of the main points that will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.Part 4: Supporting argument 1Present the first supporting argument that supports your thesis statement. Use appropriate examples, evidence, or statistics to strengthen your argument. Ensure the paragraph is coherent and logically organized.Part 5: Supporting argument 2Present the second supporting argument that further reinforces your thesis statement. Provide relevant examples, evidence, or statistics to substantiate your position. Maintain a clear and logical flow of ideas.Part 6: Counterargument and refutationAcknowledge and address potential counterarguments or opposing viewpoints. Refute the counterarguments using valid reasoning and evidence. This demonstrates a balanced perspective and strengthens the overall argument.Part 7: Supporting argument 3Present the third supporting argument that solidifies your thesis statement. Use specific examples, evidence, or statistics to strengthen your argument and make it more persuasive. Ensure a smooth transition between paragraphs.Part 8: Conclusion and final thoughtsSummarize the main points discussed in the previous paragraphs and restate the thesis statement. Offer final thoughts or recommendations related to the topic. End the essay with a strong concluding statement.Conclusion:The New Oriental universal writing template for the 2023 English CET-4 exam provides a structured approach to crafting a high-quality essay. By following this template, students can effectively express their ideas in a logical and coherent manner. Remember to practice using this template in various essay prompts to enhance your writing skills and increase your chances of success in the exam.。
新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程讲义第一课写作的三条原则:1. practice 从现在开始到考试,规定至少写十篇作文;2. input3. vary:作文要强调的不是内容,而是语言。
注:practice n. 实行, 实践, 练习;input n. 输入,投入逃税cheat on tax flee tax(错误的表达);vary 变化例:从图表中我们可以看出:在过去十年中,大学生花在电脑上的小时数是不断增加的。
In the past ten years, the number of hours a college student spent on the computer has been increasing.上升,增长ascendIt may affect his study if he spends too much time on the computer.eyesight 视力;It may do harm to one's eyes.对出题人的分析:1.出题的内容(1)关于大学生的话题;How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively Or Extensively?campus life 校园生活(2)常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of HousesTraffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?;非典SARS第二节对出题人的分析:1.出题的内容(1)关于大学生的话题;How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively Or Extensively?campus life 校园生活(2)常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of HousesTraffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?;非典SARS2.出题的形式六级考试作文的出题方式有:命题作文,看图画或图表作文,根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,给出关键词作文等。
根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,考的可能性很小。
给出关键词作文,只要你的作文中包含所给的词语就可以了。
car pollution;Nowdays cars cause serious pollution to the air.So I prefer to go to school by bike.(一)正反阐释题,比例35%;(二)阐释原因、方法,描述危害题;(三)永恒话题;Haste Makes Waste(四)图表题;(五)书信题。
3.要求:字数150,时间30分钟试卷二上,改错和作文,应该集中精力先保证作文。
5 + 20 + 55 审题和构思,审题要求看懂题目,大约1、2分钟即可,构思就是简单的勾勒一下自己可能写到的内容。
20 写正文5 改错,不要整句都改,改一些细小的地方,比如说,单复数,时态等。
第三节对出题人的分析:1.出题的内容(1)关于大学生的话题;How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively Or Extensively?campus life 校园生活(2)常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of HousesTraffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?;非典SARS2.出题的形式六级考试作文的出题方式有:命题作文,看图画或图表作文,根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,给出关键词作文等。
根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意,考的可能性很小。
给出关键词作文,只要你的作文中包含所给的词语就可以了。
car pollution;Nowdays cars cause serious pollution to the air.So I prefer to go to school by bike.(一)正反阐释题,比例35%;(二)阐释原因、方法,描述危害题;(三)永恒话题;Haste Makes Waste(四)图表题;(五)书信题。
3.要求:字数150,时间30分钟试卷二上,改错和作文,应该集中精力先保证作文。
5 + 20 + 55 审题和构思,审题要求看懂题目,大约1、2分钟即可,构思就是简单的勾勒一下自己可能写到的内容。
20 写正文5 改错,不要整句都改,改一些细小的地方,比如说,单复数,时态等。
对改卷人的分析:1.字体字迹清楚、段落明朗:先总后分连词用上;写完检查然后欣赏关联词In the first place, first of all, to begin with,in the second place, furthermore, moreover, for one thing, for another, what's more, what's worse;finally;last but not least;Will spring be far behind if winter has come?一般要求3段只写一段者:0~4分;只写两段者:0~9分(指规定三段的作文)②I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict......5分注意文章各段的开头graph:从上面的图表中from the above graph= from the graph above= from above the graph 为什么很多大学生喜欢读小说?Why so many college students like reading novels?= Why do so many college students like reading novels?语义上要高度概括实例一2003年1月Range-findersIt Pays to Be HonestDirections: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。
第四节实例一2003年1月Range-findersIt Pays to Be HonestDirections: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:1.当今社会上存在着很多不诚实的现象。
2.诚实利人利己,做人应该诚实。
注:It Pays to Be Honest 诚实是有回报的show→showing;show→that show/which show;product→productshonest→honesty;teach sb. to do sth.;honest→to be honest;economic→economy①In our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? ......Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well.②Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.③With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.注:economic→economy;industry→society;competitive→competitionobvious→fierce;increasingly;performance→phenomenaaction behavior dishonest people必须改正的语法错误:1.词性success n succeed v2.单复数:电脑很有用Computers are very useful3.冠词4.时态:作文基本上以现在时为主。