中考高分英语作文范例赏析

中考英语作文范文及详解50篇1．假如你是李华，你收到了好友Tom的一封来信。

他在信中向你倾诉了在新学校没有朋友的烦恼。

请你用英语给Tom写封回信，给他提供一些交友建议，并表达美好祝愿。

2.回信须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

Dear Tom,I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________All the best,Li 【答案】例文Dear Tom,I’m glad to hear from you. You told me that you haven’t made a friend in the new school. I hope the following advice can help you.First of all, we should know how to share. We can share delicious food, books and interesting things with others. Sharing can give us pleasure. Second, we should be helpful. When we are in trouble, we should help each other. We should be willing to help others and seek help from others in case of difficulties. Finally, we can’t say bad words about others so that we can get well on each other. We should keep secrets.I hope these suggestions can help you.All the best,Li 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。

上海中考英语作文学习资料一.评分标准上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。

以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：1.内容分8分。

内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。

2.语言分8分。

学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型使用恰当。

首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3.组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。

根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗语的情况来加分。

二.注意点：每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。

先划档次：A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档 3.5~0分然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误,最后给出总分。

第1页共34页三.学生常出现的问题：1.内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。

2.议论过多，描写不足。

大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。

应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。

3.总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。

尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn English well.就可以换成：It is important for me to learn English well.4.结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。

应该使用总分或总分总的结构。

5.都是简单句，缺少复合句。

多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人教版新目标初二下英语同步辅导（一）初中二年级下un...初中二年级下Un...可以用用被动语态。

6.连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。

中考高分英语作文范例赏析My hobby is read books①。

When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

②also的位置应放在can之后。

[点评]：档次9-11分。

①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

②句子根本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在答复上述问题。

③有少量错误。

My hobby is reading.Reading books is veryenjoyable.When I was young ，my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they weren’t enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books，I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future，soI must study hard and read more books so that my dream cane true.①开门见山、点题。

近三年中考英语满分作文解析(河北卷)2019年真题在线•文段表达礼貌从我做起，从现在开始，从点滴小事做起。

请根据下面的提示和要求，以“When to Say Thank You”为题，写一篇短文。

提示：1) When should we say “thank you”at home?2) When are we supposed to say “thank you”at school?3) ...要求：1) 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点，可适当发挥。

2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。

3) 词数80个左右。

(开头已给出，不计入总词数)参考词汇：wash, encourage, openWhen to Say Thank YouIt’s polite to say “thank you”when others help us or say something kind to us.考题解析2019年河北中考英语作文形式上没有了去年的观察图片；内容上注重了对个人文化品质的考查。

今年以“礼貌“为主题，按照提示写文章，侧重对学生英语学科核心素养文化品格的考查。

近年来，作文题目多从热爱劳动、诚实守信、文明做人、道德品质等方面考查学生，引导其养成良好的行为习惯，成为一个有道德修养的人。

When to Say Thank You教育学生感恩及把握感恩的时机等，给学生传递正能量，弘扬社会正气，教会学生感恩，培养学生的关键思维，这都促进了学生素养的形成，体现了“全人”教育的思想。

满分范文When to Say Thank YouIt's polite to say "thank you" when others help us or say something kind to us. Being polite is a good tradition in our country. Nobody likes a person who is impolite. It's important for us to be polite. We should say "thank you" to parents when they cook for us. We should say "thank you" when they wash clothes for us. We should also be polite at school. When the teachers help us work out questions, we should say "thank you" to them. When we get bad grades and the teachers and classmates encourage us, we should say "thank you". When someone opens the door for us, we should say "thank you". We should say "thank you"as often as possible. If everyone is polite to others, the world will be more and more beautiful.【名师点评】这是一篇要求介绍我们在家和在学校怎么做个有礼貌的人。

2020中考英语作文素材热点5 校园欺凌校园欺凌无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了负面影响。

今天，选择的2020年中考英语写作预测话题是：校园欺凌。

【预测题目】（一）近日，“校园欺凌”（bullying in school）已经成为社会热点话题，阅读完上面的帖子后你有何感想？请你根据下面的写作要求，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：1.“校园欺凌”对我们有什么危害？2.碰到此类事件，我们应该怎样做？请提出两点建议。

3.人人有责保持校园安全，并呼吁同学们抵制“校园欺凌”。

作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。

作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，不必抄写在答题卡上。

Good afternoon, everyone .Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school._____________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you【参考范文】Good afternoon, everyone .Today I am going to talk something about bullying in school. In my opinion, bullying can make us feel unsafe and unhappy. It makes us hard to learn at school and get on well with others. No one has the right to hurt us. If someone bullies us or we see bullying happening, we shouldn’t be afraid to stop it .First, we should trust ourselves and tell them it’s not right to do like that. Second, we can ask teachers and parents for help.It’s everyone’s duty to make schools safe. I hope all of us should be friendly to others and say no to bullying. That’s all. Thank you.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇演讲稿谈谈你对“校园欺凌”的看法。

【导语】各地中考正在紧锣密鼓的进行着，英语作文也是英语考试的重头戏。

以下是为大家整理的《中考必背英语满分作文范文》供您查阅。

【篇一】为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

【优秀满分范文】How to be a good learner?As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.I think all these above will be helpful to us.【篇二】健康一直是人们关注的问题，我校要举行以“关爱健康”为主题的主题班会，请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

1. 保持健康的重要性；2. 保持健康的方法：多吃水果蔬菜；每天锻炼一小时；早睡早起；勤洗手；3. 自己的看法（至少一条）。

注意：1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2.内容可适当扩展。

3.字数60-80词；4.文章开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

【优秀满分范文】Boys and girls,It is very important for us students to keep healthy.There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat morefruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.Thank you.【篇三】节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。

初中英语作文题目及范文解读1．假定你是李平，计划暑假去伦敦旅游，互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确，请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况．要求：（1）邮件内容必须包含图中所指的问题，但可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．（2）词数80左右．开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数．（3）参考词汇：入场费﹣﹣entrance feeDear Sir/Madam，I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London．I'm writing for more information about the two days' tour of London．Firstly，I'd like to know more about the fee．what's the price for students？Does it include the entrance fees for the places we will visit？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring my own food？Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？I have something important to do on that day so I'd like to know it．Thirdly，I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．I really want to have a look at the big stores in London．Looking forward to your reply．YoursLi Ping 【分析】【高分句型一】Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？其次，你能告诉我预计回来的确切时间吗？I can expect to be back是定语从句，修饰先行词time【高分句型二】I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．我想知道是否会有时间购物．I wonder+宾语从句；if引导宾语从句【解答】Dear Sir/Madam，I'm writing for more information about the day tour to London．（写信的目的）Firstly，I'd like to know more about the fee．what's the price for students？Does it include theentrance fees for the places we will visit？What about lunch？Is it included？Or do I need to bring my own food？Secondly，could you please tell me the exact time I can expect to be back？【高分句型一】I have something important to do on that day so I'd like to know it．Thirdly，I wonder if there will be any time for shopping．【高分句型二】I really want to have a look at the big stores in London．（询问的要点）Looking forward to your reply．YoursLi Ping【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．2．下面是一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，每个调查项目之后有几个选项，请将符合自己实际情况的选项打"⋅"（除前两个项目外，其他均可多选）．然后，根据你的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈你的想法．课文课外阅读问卷调查表调查项目选项（1）阅读兴趣A．喜欢B．有点喜欢C．不喜欢（2）阅读时间A．每天阅读B．有时阅读C．很少阅读D．完全不读（3）阅读内容A．小说B．散文C．诗歌D．其他（4）阅读目的A．提高语文水平B．增加知识C．休闲娱乐D．其他（5）阅读书籍A．自己选择B．父母购买C．教师指定D．其他（6）影响阅读的因素A．学习压力太大B．教师没有要求C．没有书籍可读D．其他注意：①无须写标题；②内容必须包含调查表中6个项目，以及关于课外阅读的想法；③文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名；④词数为80左右．参考词汇：fiction小说；essay散文．【分析】这是一份给材料作文．首先要根据自己的情况填写一份关于九年级学生语文课外阅读情况的问卷调查表，然后根据自己的选择，用英语写一篇短文，简要介绍自己的语文课外阅读情况，并谈谈自己的想法．要用第一人称，一般现在时态．文中可加however、so等连词，可使文章更通顺．【解答】参考范文1I like reading very much．I always do some reading in my free time．My favorite books are fictions．On weekends，I often go to the bookstore to buy what I like．My parents buy some books for me as gifts．I think reading is very interesting and helpful．It not only makes me relaxed but also improves my Chinese，especially my writing．However，as students of Grade Nine，we are under great pressure of study，and now it's nearly impossible for us to do some reading after class．So I hope Chinese teachers will give us more time to read．I believe the more we read，the better we'll do in exams．短文写作参考范文2I like reading a little．Sometimes I do some reading just for fun．I enjoy cartoons better than any other kinds of books because they are very interesting．At times I go to the bookstore to buy cartoons，and I also borrow some from my friends．Our teachers are always telling us that reading is important and we can learn a lot by reading．But I'm not interested in the books that our Chinese teacher asks us to read，such as fictions，essays and some science books．I hope she can choose some more interesting books for us．Maybe that will make me like reading．As we all know，interest is the best teacher．【点评】书面表达要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容．在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题．审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等．3．题目②曾子曰："吾日三省吾身．"自省（self﹣reflection）有助于解决自身的问题，也是自我完善和自我超越的必经之路．某英文网站正在开展以"自省"为主题的征文活动．假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈为了提升自身的品德修养或学业素养，你平时是如何进行自我反省的，以及这样做给你带来的好处．提示词语：think，improve，record，behavior，question，emotion提示问题：●What do you do to be self﹣reflective？●What benefits have you gained from doing so？Self﹣reflection plays an important role in our life．．【分析】【高分句型一】A mood journal allows me to not only record my feelings，but also deal with them．心情日记不仅能记录我的感受，还能处理它们．not only…but also…不仅……而且……【高分句型二】I've learned that everything in life is a lesson if you look at it the right way，self﹣reflection has taught me how to learn from my past and be hopeful for the future．我明白了，生活中的每件事都是一课，如果你用正确的方式去看待它．自我反思教会了我如何从过去中吸取教训，并对未来充满希望．that引导宾语从句．if引导条件状语从句．【解答】self﹣reflection is a process of thinking carefully about our own behavior and beliefs．Indeed，when we understand ourselves at a deeper level，we will then be able to see personal growth within ourselves．（点题）To practice self﹣reflection，I usually find a quiet place and spend some time alone．I start by asking myself the questions on my mind．For example，"what are my strengths and weaknesses？"and "how can I make better use of my time？"．Also，I keep a diary of what's going on when I experience strong emotions．A mood journal allows me to not only record my feelings，but also deal with them．【高分句型一】In this way，I manage to accept and then let go of negative emotions that I experience．（我是如何自省的）I've learned that everything in life is a lesson if you look at it the right way，self﹣reflection has taught me how to learn from my past and be hopeful for the future．【高分句型二】（我得到的好处）【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．4．根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50 词的文段写作。

中考英语作文高频考点学习高分范文5篇题目：假如你是李华，请你写一封信给你的英国笔友Tom，谈谈你的学习经历。

作文一Dear Tom,I hope this letter finds you well. I’m Li Hua, your new pen pal from China. I’d like to share my learning experiences with you. I’ve been studying English for five years, and it has been both challenging and rewarding.At first, I found English grammar quite difficult. However, with the help of my teachers and lots of practice, I started to improve. I often listen to English songs and watch English movies, which makes learning more enjoyable. Now, I can communicate more confidently in English. I’ve also made some foreign friends online, which helps me practice. I believe that consistent effort and a positive attitude are key to learning any language. I look forward to hearing about your learning experiences too.Best regards,Li Hua作文二Dear Tom,How are you? I am Li Hua from China. I want to tell you about my learning journey. English has been a part of my life for many years now, and it’s been quite an adventure. Initially, I struggled with vocabulary and pronunciation. My teachers encouraged me to read English books andpractice speaking with my classmates. Gradually, I began to enjoy learning English more and more.Now, I am able to understand English news and even write essays in English. My confidence has grown a lot. I believe that perseverance and passion are essential for mastering a new language. I’m eager to know about your learning journey as well.Yours sincerely,Li Hua作文三Dear Tom,I hope you are doing great. My name is Li Hua, and I am excited to share my learning experiences with you. Studying English has been a significant part of my life.When I first started, I found it hard to keep up with the new words and grammar rules. But my parents and teachers always encouraged me. They suggested watching English cartoons and reading simple stories, which made learning fun.Today, I can confidently speak and write in English. I participate in English debates and have won a few competitions. This journey has taught me that patience and consistent effort are the keys to success. I would love to hear about your experiences too.Warm regards,Li Hua作文四Dear Tom,Greetings from China! I am Li Hua. I’m delighted to share my learning experiences with you. Learning English has been an incredible journey for me.In the beginning, I faced many challenges, especially with grammar and listening skills. My teachers were very supportive, providing extra help and resources. I also joined an English club at school, where we practiced speaking and listening through various activities.Now, my English has improved significantly. I enjoy reading English novels and watching English films without subtitles. This has greatly improved my comprehension and vocabulary. I’ve learned that practice and exposu re are crucial in mastering a language. I can’t wait to hear your story.Best wishes,Li Hua作文五Dear Tom,I hope you are well. My name is Li Hua, and I would like to share my learning experiences with you. Studying English has been a rewarding part of my education.At first, I struggled a lot with English grammar and writing. However, with the help of my dedicated teachers and continuous practice, I started to get better. I found that writing daily diaries and essays in English was very helpful.Currently, I am able to communicate effectively in English.I participate in English-speaking contests and enjoy watching English TV shows. This journey has taught me the importance of hard work and perseverance. I look forward to learning about your experiences.Sincerely,Li Hua。