大学英语作文评分标准[1](2020年九月整理).doc

全国大学生英语竞赛作文评分标准English: The national college English competition essay is typically evaluated based on several key criteria. Firstly, content and organization are crucial factors in scoring. This includes having a clear introduction, well-developed body paragraphs with logical transitions, and a thoughtful conclusion. Moreover, originality and creativity play an important role in distinguishing top essays from average ones. Judges also look for well-supported arguments and ideas, along with relevant examples and evidence to support them. Furthermore, language accuracy and vocabulary usage are essential in evaluating the quality of writing. This involves using a range of vocabulary, appropriate grammar and sentence structures, and proper word choice. Additionally, coherence and cohesion are significant aspects in determining the overall effectiveness of the essay. This means ensuring that ideas flow smoothly, with connections between sentences and paragraphs clearly established. Lastly, adherence to the topic and task requirements is fundamental in achieving a high score. Essays that address the prompt directly and showcase a deep understanding of the topic are more likely to receive favorable evaluations.Translated content: 全国大学生英语竞赛作文通常根据几个关键标准进行评分。

大学英语作文评分标准在大学英语教学中，作文是一项重要的考核内容。

而作文的评分标准也是考察学生英语综合能力的重要指标之一。

那么，究竟什么样的作文才能得到高分呢？下面就让我们来详细了解一下大学英语作文的评分标准。

首先，作文的内容是评分的重要依据之一。

好的作文应该有清晰的中心思想，主题鲜明，内容充实。

学生要能够清楚地表达自己的观点，结构合理，逻辑严谨。

同时，要求作文要有一定的深度，不仅仅是泛泛而谈，而是能够深入思考，展现出学生的思维能力和语言表达能力。

其次，语言表达也是评分的重点之一。

作文要求使用准确、丰富的词汇，句式多样，语法准确，表达清晰流畅。

此外，要求学生能够运用恰当的修辞手法，使文章更加生动、有趣。

而且，要求学生能够注意书写规范，避免出现拼写错误、标点错误等问题。

此外，逻辑思维和观点独立也是评分的重要方面。

好的作文应该有清晰的逻辑结构，条理清晰，层次分明。

学生要能够通过合理的论证和举例，使自己的观点更加有说服力。

同时，要求学生的观点要独立、独特，不是简单的套用模板，而是能够展现出学生自己的思考和见解。

最后，作文的语气和态度也是评分的重要考量。

学生要能够用积极、乐观的语气来表达自己的观点，态度要诚恳、真诚。

同时，要求学生要有自信，不要出现消极、悲观的情绪，而是要展现出对生活和学习的热爱和向往。

综上所述，大学英语作文评分标准是一个综合性的评价体系，要求学生在内容、语言、逻辑、态度等方面都要达到一定的要求。

而要想在作文中得到高分，学生需要不断地提高自己的语言表达能力，增强自己的逻辑思维能力，培养积极乐观的心态，才能在作文中得到更好的表现。

希望同学们在大学英语作文的写作中，能够根据以上评分标准，不断提高自己的写作水平，取得更好的成绩。

1本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

2评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

3词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分4评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性，上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。

5拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

6如书写较差，影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

1.要点18分（每个要点3分）；2.语言分5分（1—5档，分别为1---5分）；3.卷面分2分要点：1.高中生活刚刚开始，我面对新的学习和生活环境。

我打算这样安排我的高中生活。

2.我打算确定新的学习目标。

3.我将改进学习方法。

4.我将学会独立生活。

5.我将参加各种课外活动。

My new life in senior school has just started.Facing new study and life environment/ surroundings. I’ll plan to arrange my life as follows.I want to set new goals in my study and improve my way of learning. What’s more, as I am away from my parents, it is necessary for me to learn to live on my own. In my spare time, I will take part in different kinds of school activities. For example, I will often go to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, I need to get along well with my classmates and teachers.I think I will have a wonderful life in senior school. (97 words )。

最新整理英语作文评分标准及范例作文可以分为五个等级2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分—基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分—基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分—切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分—切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

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Forfurtherinformationpleasecontactusat99999999.PartTwo结构与模板作文开头部分1.开门见山TheBestWaytoStayHealthy Thebestwaytostayhealthyistodevelopagoodqualityofpsychology....... 2.正反表态Advantages/DisadvantagesofAdvertisingonTelevision NowadaysmoreandmoreadvertisementsareseenonTVeveryday.Somepeoplethinkt hatadvertisingonTVcanbringusalotofbenefits,butothersholdthedifferento pinions.Inmyopinion,Iaminfavoroftheformer.3.让步法WillPhonesKillLetterWriting?Nowadays,youngpeoplechoosetophoneeachotherratherwritingletters.Somear eworriedthatletterwritingwillbeuselessinthefuture.Evenso,Istillmainta inthatletterwritingwillneverbekilledbyphones......4.提问法FactorsInfluencingYoungAdultsOfthedifferentfactorsthatcanhaveinfluenceonyoungadults,thefamilyandfr iendsstandoutmost.Whichofthetwoismoreimportant?Myviewisthatitisfriend swhohavethemostimportantinfluenceonyoungadults.常用句型1.Whenitesto......,somethink/believe/hold......2.Thereisapublicdebatetodaythat......3.Recently,....hasbeenbroughtintofocus.4.Likeacoinhastwosides,thereisapositiveaspectandanegativeaspectto.... ..5.Nowadays,itisheatedlydiscussedtopictomanypeoplethat.....6......hasarousedmuchpublicconcernin......7.Inmyopinion/Personally....8.Frommypointofview,Ithink.......9.Myviewisthat.....10.Asformyself/Formypart,Iwouldliketosay....11.AsfarasIamconcerned,I.......12.Wecanassume......作文主体部分段落的展开主题句:本段要说什么问题;具体;简洁扩展句:说明和支持该主题表示各种逻辑关系的过渡词连接各个句子1.列举时常用词语:forexample,forinstance,suchas,like,thus,take...asanexample,toillus trate....2.分类时常用词语：tobeginwith,first,second,furthermore,besides,inaddition,moreover,fina lly,3.因果关系常用语汇:becauseof,so,owingto,thanksto,thus,asaresultof,hence,forthisreason ,consequently,iscausedby,leadto,resultin4.比较常用语汇：atthesametime,similarto,accordingly,both,similarly,thesameas,inthesam eway作文结尾部分1.总结归纳Advantages/DisadvantagesofAdvertisingonTelevisionFromtheabove,wecanseethatTVadvertisingisbeneficialbothtomanufacturers andconsumersbecauseoftheinformationitprovides.2.再次强调FactorsInfluencingYoungAdultsGenerallyspeaking,inmostcases,friendsarethemostimportantinfluenceonyo ungadults.3.提出建议GlobalizationInordertosurvivethepetitionofglobalization,wemustgoalongwiththehistor ictideofglobalization,andactivelycopewiththeopportunityandchallengeth attheeconomicglobalizationbrings.常用句型1.Insummary,...2.Inshort,....3.Inbrief,....4.Tosumup,.....5.Inconclusion,....6.Allinall,.....7.Onthewhole,....8.Inaword,.....9.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat.....10.Thus,itcanbeconcludedthat....11.Takingintoaccountofallthesefactors,wemayreachtheconclusionthat....12.Wecanconcludefromtheforegoingreasonsandexamplesthat....常见作文模板Nowadays,therearemoreandmore.......Itisestimatedthat......Whyhavether ebeensomany...?Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Thefirstoneisthat. ...Besides,....Thethirdreasonis....Tosumup,themaincauseof....isdueto. .....Itishightimethatsomethingweredoneuponit.Foronething,.....Ontheot herhand,.....Allthesemeasureswillcertainly..... 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现代大学英语四、六级 考试作文评分标准
书山有路勤为径， 学海无涯苦作舟
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•评分原则（Evaluation Principles)
• 1. CET (College English Test) 是考查学生是否已达 到了《大学英语教学大纲》规定的四级和六级教学 要求的考试，对作文的评判应以规定的作文评分标 准为准则。
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作文评分标准本题满分为15分。

2．阅卷标准共分五等：2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。

各有标准样卷一至二份。

3．阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一份数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即可加一分（即9分）或减一分（即7分），但不得加或减半分。

4．评分标准：2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或在部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分……基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分……基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分……切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分……切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。

基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。

[注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，则给0分。

] [注]1.如题目中给出主题句，起始句，结束句，均不得计入所写字数2.只写一段者：0~4分；只写两段者：0~9分（指规定三段的作文）长度计分标准:91～100词: 扣1分81～90词: 扣2.5分71～80词: 扣4分61～70词: 扣6分60词以下: 扣8分3.为了便于阅卷人员掌握评分标准，现将各档作文分相当于百分制的得分，列表如下，称为得分率。

其中9分的得分率为60（相当于百分制的60分）。

作文分15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1得分率100 94 87 80 74 67 60 54 47 40 34 27 20 14 7经原国家教委批准，四、六级考试已从1997年6月份起采用“作文最低”制计算成绩，其中足见国家对提高大学英语写作能力的重视程度。

按规定，考生作文若为0分，无论其总分是否高于60分，均作不及格处理；若其作文分高于0分，低于6分，报导成绩时，需从总分中减去6分，再加上实得作文分。

也就是说，要从总分中减去实得作文分与6分之间的差额部分。

英语作文评分细则Essay Grading Rubric。

Introduction:The introduction clearly states the topic and sets the tone for the rest of the essay. It should include a thesis statement that presents the main argument or purpose of the essay.Content:The content of the essay should be well-researched and provide relevant information to support the thesis statement. The arguments should be logical and well-organized, with clear transitions between paragraphs. The essay should demonstrate a deep understanding of the topic and offer insightful analysis.Organization:The essay should have a clear and logical structure, with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea and support it with evidence. The essay should flow smoothly and coherently from one point to the next.Development:The essay should develop its ideas thoroughly and provide sufficient evidence to support its claims. It should avoid generalizations and unsupported assertions. The essay should also consider and respond to potential counterarguments.Clarity:The essay should be clear and easy to understand. It should use precise language and avoid unnecessary jargon or complex sentence structures. The writing should be free of spelling and grammatical errors.Style:The essay should demonstrate a strong and engaging writing style. It should use varied sentence structures and vocabulary to maintain the reader's interest. The essay should also show an awareness of audience and purpose.Conclusion:The conclusion should effectively summarize the main points of the essay and restate the thesis statement. It should leave the reader with a sense of closure and a final impression.Overall Impression:The essay should leave a strong and positive impression on the reader. It should be well-written, thoughtful, and persuasive. It should demonstrate a high level of critical thinking and analysis.Sample Essay (Fictional):Title: The Impact of Technology on Education。

一、评分标准一档文17-20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。

二档文13-16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。

三档文9-12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。

四档文5-8分：写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。

五档文0-4分：词不达意，不知所云；只有2-3个短语可读。

二、评分说明1、短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。

一处大错扣1分。

2、通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣2分。

3、拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。

3个小错相当于1处大错。

4、相同错误，只扣一次。

5、词数不足60词扣2分。

6、文中若出现自己及学校等真实名称扣3分。

7、书写潦草，卷面不清，乃至影响阅卷，扣2分。

三、评分标准一档文17-20分：写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有句式变化，有复杂结构（至少2-3个），基本无语法错误（1-2个错误），或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误，但不影响意义理解。

二档文13-16分：基本写出全部内容要点，层次清楚、语言流畅，有少量语法错误（3-4个错误）。

三档文9-12分：写出大部分内容要点，语言基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误，基本不影响意思表达。

四档文5-8分：写出一半左右有关内容要点，语言不太通顺，语法结构单调、错误较多，只有少数句子可读，影响理解。

五档文0-4分：词不达意，不知所云；只有2-3个短语可读。

四、评分说明8、短语及句子结构不对，人称、时态、语态误用，均为大错。

一处大错扣1分。

9、通篇人称、时态、标点错误，统扣2分。

10、拼写、标点符号、冠词、介词等方面的错误为小错。

1）2分段： 句句有错；如词性误用、语义错误、生僻词语义歧义、重点动 词用法错误等。字面含义也无法推断出所要表达的含义。 2）5分段： 几乎句句有错，但是会跳跃地出现表达正确的句子，和2分段 的区别在于根据字面含义能够推断出所要表达的含义。 3）8分段： 有3-5处严重的语言错误，主要是动词的用法错误、动词时态 混乱；语义表达几本清楚；有连接词，有逻辑性。 4）11分段：基本没有严重的语言错误，如动词用错；可以有小的语法误用，如 名词的用法错误，词性的误用等。 有核心词汇（闪光词）、有短语、连接词、同义词、有英语句式（如强调句、 复合句、长句式）、修饰语如副词的用法、分词的用法；被动语态、动词时 态的正确使用等。 5）14分段：基本没有语言错误、有核心词汇（闪光词）、有短语、连接词、同 义词、有英语句式（如形式主语、形式宾语、补足语等用法、强调句、复合 句、长句式、修饰语如副词的用法、分词的用法、被动语态、动词时态的正 确使用等。 词汇运用准确、丰富；文章富有文采；感情真挚动人。 6) 虽然没有严重的语言错误，但词汇基本上在高中范围内，总体上属于高中水 平的作文，最高得9分。
作文评分标准
满分15分 字数120字 要求： 1）冠词不计入字数； 2）有连接作用的虚词不计入字数，如want to know 为2个词； 3）重复词不计the other hand, 是一个词。
2. 分数段 1）2分段；分值1分；2分；3分 2）5分段；分值4分；5分；6分 3）8分段；分值7分；8分；9分 4）11分段；分值10分；11分；12分 5）14分段；分值13分；14分。

英语作文的打分标准English:When grading an English essay, there are several key factors that should be considered. Firstly, the content of the essay should be well-developed, with a clear thesis statement and coherent supporting arguments. The essay should demonstrate a thorough understanding of the topic and engage critically with any relevant sources or materials. Secondly, the organization of the essay is crucial. The essay should have a logical structure, with smooth transitions between paragraphs and sections. Each paragraph should focus on a single idea or argument, and there should be a clear progression of ideas throughout the essay. Thirdly, the language and style of the essay are important considerations. The essay should be written in clear, concise, and academic language, with proper grammar, punctuation, and spelling. The essay should also demonstrate a varied vocabulary and an appropriate tone for the intended audience. Finally, the overall impact of the essay should be taken into account. The essay should be engaging, persuasive, andoriginal, with the ability to hold the reader's interest and leave a lasting impression.中文翻译:在评分英语作文时，有几个关键因素需要考虑。

作文评分标准2分—条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。

5分—基本切题。

表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。

有较多的严重语言错误。

8分—基本切题。

有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。

11分—切题。

表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。

14分—切题。

表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。

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英语作文的评分标准Essay Grading Criteria。

Introduction。

The introduction should clearly present the topic and introduce the main points of the essay. It should also grab the reader's attention and provide a clear thesis statement. The introduction should be engaging and set the tone forthe rest of the essay.Content。

The content of the essay should be well-researched, relevant, and insightful. The essay should demonstrate a deep understanding of the topic and provide evidence to support the main points. The content should be organized in a logical and coherent manner, with smooth transitions between paragraphs. The essay should also show originality and creativity in its approach to the topic.Structure。

The essay should have a clear and well-organized structure. Each paragraph should focus on a single main idea and be supported by evidence and examples. The essay should have a strong and cohesive argument that builds throughout the essay. The structure should be easy to follow and help the reader understand the main points of the essay.Language and Style。

全国大学生英语竞赛写作评分标准Task I 应用文评分标准一、评分原则：1. 本题满分为10分。

2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整本档次，最后给分。

3. 词数少于80的，从总分中减去2分。

4. 如书写较差，以致影响阅卷，将分数降低一个档次。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求：第四档：8—10分完全符合写作格式的要求，覆盖所有内容要点，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性很好，基本上无词汇和语法错误。

第三档：6—7分基本符合写作格式的要求，有个别地方表达思想不够清楚，文字基本通顺、连贯，有少量词汇和语法错误。

第二档：3—5分未恰当完成写作格式的要求，漏掉内容要点，表达思想不清楚，文字多处出现词汇和语法错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

第一档：1—2分未完成写作格式的要求，明显遗漏主要内容，表达思想紊乱，有较多词汇和语法的重大错误，未能将信息传达给读者。

0分Task II 议论文评分标准一、评分原则：1. 本题满分为20分。

2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整本档次，最后给分。

3. 词数少于120的，从总分中减去2分。

4. 如书写较差，以致影响交流，将分数降低一个档次。

二、各档次的给分范围和要求：第四档：16—20分完全符合写作格式的要求，覆盖所有内容要点，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性很好，基本上无词汇和语法错误。

第三档：11—15分基本符合写作格式的要求，有个别地方表达思想不够清楚，文字基本通顺、连贯，有少量词汇和语法错误。

第二档：6—10分未恰当完成写作格式的要求，漏掉内容要点，表达思想不清楚，文字多处出现词汇和语法错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

第一档：1—5分未完成写作格式的要求，明显遗漏主要内容，表达思想紊乱，有较多词汇和语法的重大错误，未能将信息传达给读者。

0分。

英语作文评分标准每次英语考试，最让人头疼又期待的部分之一，大概就是作文了。

而这作文的得分，可全凭那神秘莫测的评分标准。

先来说说卷面吧。

这就好比去相亲，第一眼看的就是外表。

如果作文卷面脏兮兮、字迹歪歪扭扭，就像一个蓬头垢面的人，谁能有好感？老师批改作文的时候，要是看到那龙飞凤舞的字，估计心情瞬间就不美丽了，这印象分首先就得大打折扣。

所以啊，一笔一划写工整，间距适中别拥挤，这是最基本的要求。

再说说语法错误。

这可真是个要命的事儿！就好比走路，一步一个坑，能顺利走到终点才怪。

比如说，该用一般现在时，你用了过去时；该用单数，你用了复数；或者主谓不一致，那简直就是在给老师的心脏“上刑”。

“三单”问题更是常见的“坑”，主语是第三人称单数，动词却不变形，这就像做饭忘了放盐，总觉得缺了那么点儿味道。

一个语法错误可能还能忍，要是错误扎堆，那分数能高才怪呢。

词汇的运用也很关键。

要是整篇作文翻来覆去就那么几个简单的词，比如“good”“bad”“happy”，老师看得都要打瞌睡了。

要是能用上几个“高大上”的词，像“excellent”“terrible”“delighted”，瞬间就能让老师眼前一亮。

但也别为了显摆，乱用那些自己都没搞明白的生僻词，用错了反而弄巧成拙。

句子结构也有讲究。

全是简单句，就像一条笔直的公路，没点儿起伏和风景，多无聊啊。

适当来几个复合句，什么定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句，就像在公路旁点缀上了美丽的花朵和别致的建筑，让整个文章变得丰富多彩。

比如说，“The book which I bought yesterday is very interesting” 这就比“I bought a book yesterday It is very interesting” 高级多了。

内容的连贯性和逻辑性也是重点。

不能东一榔头西一棒槌，想到哪儿写到哪儿。

得有个清晰的思路，开头引出主题，中间详细阐述，结尾总结升华。

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英文作文评价标准英文：When it comes to evaluating an English essay, there are several key criteria that I consider. First and foremost, I look at the overall structure and organization of the essay.A well-written essay should have a clear introduction, body paragraphs that support the main argument, and a strong conclusion. Each paragraph should flow logically from oneto the next, and the overall structure should be easy to follow.Another important aspect of an English essay is the use of language. I pay close attention to the writer's use of vocabulary, grammar, and sentence structure. A strong essay will demonstrate a varied and sophisticated vocabulary, a good command of grammar and punctuation, and variedsentence structures. Additionally, the use of figurative language, such as metaphors and similes, can add depth toan essay and demonstrate a writer's creativity and skill.In addition to structure and language, I also consider the content and depth of the essay. A strong essay will present a clear and compelling argument, supported by relevant evidence and examples. The writer should demonstrate a deep understanding of the topic and engage critically with the material. Furthermore, a strong essay will show originality and creativity in its approach to the topic, rather than simply rehashing familiar ideas.Finally, I consider the overall impact and effectiveness of the essay. A strong essay will engage the reader and leave a lasting impression. This could be achieved through the use of vivid imagery, compelling storytelling, or thought-provoking ideas. The essay should also demonstrate a sense of voice and personality, allowing the writer's individual perspective to shine through.In conclusion, when evaluating an English essay, I consider the overall structure and organization, the use of language, the depth of the content, and the overall impact and effectiveness. By paying attention to these keycriteria, I can assess the quality of the essay and provide constructive feedback to help the writer improve.中文：在评价一篇英文作文时，我会考虑几个关键的标准。