最新2019版高考英语一轮复习 写作话题 15 个人情感 新人教版

第二步用高级表达增分(用时10周)阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死，大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。

在词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，阅卷老师的给分也绝不会吝啬；在句式方面：如果考生多运用一些并列句和复合句等高级句式，并注意句式的灵活多变，使文章读起来抑扬顿挫，让考生深厚的语言功底得以体现，阅卷老师一定会毫不犹豫地将你的作文定位于五档线。

第三周不落俗套的亮点词汇写作最基本的要求是考查考生遣词造句的能力，遣词的原则是表达准确、地道自然、生动形象。

如果考生在掌握了最基本词汇的基础上，能够将一些常用词汇进行升华，就将成为高考作文获得高分的亮点之一。

一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时，恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。

①(2018·浙江6月高考读后续写)We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Tired and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.→We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Exhausted and hungry, I wondered if we could find our way back.②(2016·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)So I have to bother you to correct my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.→Therefore, I have no choice but to put you to trouble by correcting my mistakes in the material I attach to the letter.③(2015·重庆高考写作)Of the two, I think the latter is the better.→Of the two, the latter wins my favor.2．更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。

第十五周概要写作概要写作实际上就是对所读过的文章简要而概括地写出文章的中心大意。

写概要时，考生要把文章的具体信息用一些具有概括功能的词和句表述出来，而不是抄袭文章的句子。

写概要也不是把细节性的信息作为中心，而是要通过对文章中的单词、短语和句子进行合理转换，重新组织文章的信息，再用合适的语言进行表述。

这种写作形式能考查考生的阅读理解能力和对文章的大意进行归纳概括、重新构造、创新输出的能力。

[写作技法指导]一、题型特点要求考生进行概要写作的阅读材料原文词数一般为300词左右。

文章体裁可以是记叙文、说明文或者议论文。

写作要求考生在对原文阅读后根据其内容写出一篇约60词的内容概要。

概要所用语句既要用词准确，结构合理，语义连贯，不得抄写原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。

二、注意事项1．词数要限制在60词左右，上下限不得超过10个单词。

2．要根据文章的体裁特点进行概要写作。

3．人称和时态要与所给文章中的人称和时态保持一致，但必要时也可变换成第三人称。

4．写作时尽可能地使用复合句，必要时可转换词性，不得完全照搬照抄原文。

三、写作步骤第一步：仔细审题速读文章，确定文章的体裁和题材、人称和时态以及写作要求等。

第二步：细读全文阅读语篇时，根据文章不同的文体可采取以下方法：第三步：初写成文初写概要时，根据文章不同的文体可采取以下方法：第四步：润色升级初写成文后，要对概要进行润色升级，使用高级词汇和高级句式代替平庸词汇和一般句式，使之锦上添花。

第五步：复查定稿写好概要后，要从语法和语义角度进行通读。

对语法错误和语义不连贯处进行修改润色。

最后规范誊写在答题卷的指定位置。

[经典案例示法](一)(2019·浙江效实中学模拟)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Many years ago, when I was fresh out of school, I was driving to my parents'home in Missouri for Christmas.I stopped at a gas station about 50 miles from Oklahoma City. While I was standing in line at the cash register (收款台), I said hello to an older couple who were also paying for gas.I took off, but had gone only a few miles when black smoke poured from the back of my car.I stopped and wondered what I should do.A car pulled up behind me.It was the couple. They said they would take me.We chatted and when I got out of the car, the husband gave me his business card.I wrote them a thank-you note.Soon afterward, I received a Christmas present from them.Their note that came with it said that helping me had made their holidays meaningful.Years later, I drove to a meeting in the morning.In late afternoon I found that I'd left the lights on all day, and the battery was dead.Then I noticed that the Friendly Ford dealership was right next door.I walked over and found two salesmen in the showroom.“Just how friendly is Friendly Ford？”I asked and explained my trouble.They quickly drove a pickup truck to my car and started it.They would accept no payment, so later, I wrote them a note to say thanks.I received a letter back from one of the salesmen.No one had ever written him and say thank you, and it meant a lot, he said.“Thank you” — two powerful words.They're easy to say and mean so much.[写作步骤]第一步：仔细审题1．定体裁：记叙文。

WELE UNITWrite a student profileMy name is Li Hua, and I’m a Grade10 student at Zhonghua Senior High School. I’m quiet and very easygoing. I just don’t let things bother me—I always try to stay as cool as a cucumber. Myfavourite subject is Chinese, because I find Chinese characters fascinating, and I love to write new characters using calligraphy. In fact, I spend most of my free time practising it. When I’m notstudying or practising calligraphy, Iplay basketball with my friends. I plan on being a writer in the future.UNIT 1 TEENAGE LIFEWrite a letter of adviceDear Xu Ting,You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel. It is mon for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people. This will give you a chance to meet and be around others. It will also help you realise that you are not alone in having problems and that many other people have problems, too. Helping other people also makes us feel better. You can also connect with your parents online. Just because your parents are far away, it doesn’t mean you can’t talk to them. I’m sure that you’ll make new friends and get a chance to speak to your parents more often. This will help drive away your loneliness.Unit 2 TRA VELLING AROUNDWrite to a friend about a travel planDear Richard,My time in England is going wonderfully! My new school is amazing, and all the teachers and classmates are so friendly. Over the Christmas holiday, my parents and I are going up to London to see the Tower of London. This is the old castle that the king used to live in. Later, it was used as a prison for people who angered the king. It’s also where the marvellous Crown Jewels are located. I just can’t wait to see it. It has such an incredible history and there are so many amazing stories connected with it.We’re also planning on seeing Big Ben, Westminster Abbey, and the Millennium Bridge while we are there, and of course we’re going to ride on the London Eye! I think my mother is mostly interested in the shopping, however, so we will also stop by Regent Street.We plan on taking a train up, which should only take an hour and a half. Since we are staying for a week, we plan on just stretching our legs a little after we arrive and then hitting the sights the next day.Well, I guess that’s about it for now. I’ll buy you a souvenir from the Tower shop. Talk later!UNIT 3 SPORTS AND FITNESSWrite a page in a wellness bookI am a high school student. I want to feel better about myself and be healthier becausesometimes I get down, have no energy and worry about things too much. I decided to change my diet to make it healthier. For example, I stopped eating fast food so often, and introduced fruit and vegetables into my diet every day. I also do my exercises regularly to keep fit. Now, because I became healthier, I became much happier and better about myself too. This has made me more confident to make new friends and try new things.UNIT 4 NATURAL DISASTERSWrite a summaryFor several days, strange things occurred in the countryside of northeastern Hebei. Then, on 28 July 1976, an earthquake hit Tangshan city. The city was greatly affected and nearly destroyed. Many people were killed or injured. The rescue work began soon after the quakes. Soldiers and medical workers arrived to find survivors and help the people who had lost everything. With strong support from the government and the tireless efforts of the people, a new Tangshan was built.UNIT 5 LANGUAGES AROUND THE WORLDWrite a blog about English studyI have trouble with phrasal verbs. There are so many of them and it seems impossible to work out the meanings just from the words. And some of the verbs have different meanings. For example, put off can mean postpone, discourage (someone from doing something), and make someone dislike (something). I try to use phrasal verbs sometimes, but I usually use the wrong one!My classmates had some suggestions for me. One was to use flash cards and to write down the phrasal verb on one side and a sentence using the phrasal verb on the other side. Then I can study them when I have time, like on the bus. Another suggestion was to use the phrasal verb ina sentence that is true for me, so that it’s easy to remember. For example, I always put off doing my homework. I think my classmates gave me some good advice. Next time I hear a phrasal verb, I’ll write it down and think of a sentence that uses the verb. Maybe I’ll draw a picture too, to make it easier to remember.。

话题21 热点话题(Topical issues)Ⅰ.话题相关词汇1．世界人口爆炸world population explosion2．人口控制population/birth control3．世界人口日World Population Day4．独生子女政策the one child policy5．导致，引起contribute/lead to6．最近的，跟上时代的up to date/update/latest7．网上冲浪surf the Internet8．网上购物shopping online9．网民netizen (net citizen)10．网吧Internet bar11．网友net friend12．外出打工人员migrant workers13．素质教育education for all－round development14．应试教育exam－oriented education15．学生减负to reduce study load16．废气排放gas emission17．金融危机financial crisis18．和谐社会harmonious society19．环境保护environmental protection20．广泛关注wide public concern21．降低人口出生率reduce the birth rate22．健康问题health problem23．二孩政策the second child policy或two－child policy24．住房问题housing problem25．公平公正fair and equal/fair and just26．新鲜血液new blood/fresh blood27．开阔视野widen horizenⅡ.实用句型1．农民进城打工日益增长的趋势，引起世界上大部分城市的普遍关注。

There is a growing tendency these days for many people who live in rural areasto come and work in city. This problem has caused wide public concern in most cities all over the world.2．环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。

►读后续写重点话题突破05 成长、感悟类1精选最新名校试题2话题故事背诵模板3分类话题情节分析4分类话题写作步骤5分类话题高分词汇6分类话题写作高分句型1．（2023·河北沧州·高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Once a middle aged man lost his job and was looking for a job to support his living. One day, in a newspaper he found that a job of “office boy” was available. He needed a job so badly that he applied for the post of “office boy” at once. It was at a big famous company.Next day he was called for an interview. The manager interviewed him and gave him a test. Surprisingly, he cleared the test, which meant he was hired and he could make money. He was pleased beyond description. “Now give me your e-mail address so that I can send you further details and your joining letter,” the manager said. Sadly, he replied, “Sir, I don’t have a computer and neither do I have any e-mail address.” The manager replied, “What? You don’t have an e-mail address? In modern times, if you don’t have it, which suggests you don’t exist and also means you can’t get this job. I am really sorry but you are not hired.”He left, completely overcome by disappointment. He didn’t know what to do as he had only $200 left in his pocket and no job. He had no hope of getting any other job anytime soon. He didn’t know what to do. He didn’t want to go home without a job. He thought for a long time. Then an idea occurred to him. He decided to go to the supermarket and buy 10 kg vegetables with that money and then went door to door to sell those vegetables. Till evening he was able to sell off all those vegetables and even doubled up his money.This made him realize that he could survive by this and started to go to supermarket every day early in the morning and bought fresh vegetables and then the whole day he would sell them going door to door. To his delight, by evening he would sell all the vegetables he bought in the morning.He worked very hard every day and with his determination and persistence, just in 5 years he became a well-established businessman.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

写作话题十五个人情感个人情感已逐渐成为高考英语写作的热点话题，这类文章以应用文为主，题材一般包括感受或领悟、保持身心健康、消除紧张或恐惧心理等。

◆话题词汇理解1．depressed adj.压抑的2．down adj.心情低落的3．blue adj.悲伤的；沮丧的4．negative adj.消极的5．sorrow n．悲伤；悲痛6．touched adj.感动的7．affection n．喜爱8．ashamed adj.难为情的9．approve of赞同10．cherish today 珍惜今天11．have a preference for 偏爱12．complain about 抱怨◆话题词汇识记1．anxious adj.焦虑的2．confident adj.有信心的3．annoyed adj.恼火的4．disappointed adj.失望的5．worried adj.担心的6．content/satisfied adj.满足的7．upset/depressed adj.沮丧的8．optimistic adj.乐观的9．stressed adj.感到压力的10．encouragement n．鼓舞11．support n. & v．支持12．motivate vt.激励13．be in low spirits 情绪低落14．be faced with/in the face of 面对15．build up self-confidence 树立自信16．overcome/get over difficulties 克服困难17．be fed up with ...对……受够了18．look down upon/on看不起；轻视◆话题满分好句1．It goes without saying that a smile can help us get through difficult situations and find friends in a world full of strangers.毫无疑问，微笑能够帮助我们渡过难关，帮助我们在一个充满陌生人的世界里找到朋友。