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中考作文《这一程,》满分作文1中考作文《这一程，》满分作文1中考考场作文真题再现：写作(共50分)按要求写作。

请以《这一程，》为题写一篇文章。

要求:①先将题目补充完整，然后写作；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③不少于600字；④文中不得透漏姓名、学校等个人身份信息。

【满分作文】这一程，奔向阳光天空灰蒙蒙的，大片大片的乌云笼罩着城市上空，小雨淅淅沥沥地下着。

我孤身一人坐在大巴车的小角落，目光无神地看着窗外的一切。

我轻叹一声，拢了拢怀里的小背包。

接二连三的考试失利，让我的脑袋十分混乱，不知该如何是好？只得带着小行囊，浑浑噩噩地想逃到乡下去散散心。

车里很黑，其他的乘客衣服颜色也是阴沉的。

耳边时不时传来几声叽叽喳喳的抱怨声，我听得更是烦躁，便捂住耳朵看向窗外。

窗外是一片又一片拆迁后的玄色废墟。

雨渐停，但乌云好像又更黑了。

心境是玄色的，天气是玄色的，眼前的一切也是玄色的，我心中突然闪过一个念头：放弃吧，不要再研究了。

我被这个念头吓了一跳，但还是细细思考这件事情的可能性，脑袋像断了根弦一样，或许也不是不可以，我陷入进了这个黑色漩涡中。

不知何时，雨已经停了，窗外折射进来一道耀眼的光芒。

我吃痛的捂住眼睛看，向窗外愣了一下。

乌云已全然散去，天空湛蓝，太阳高高挂着，散发着光芒，而在天空另一侧，架着一座巨大的彩虹桥，更让我震撼的是，在天空下面，有一片宽广无际的向日葵田。

每一株向日葵都坚挺着，太阳的光芒为它们铺上了金色的光辉，而向日葵们无一例外的面朝太阳。

我的眼中映满向日葵的倒影，他们每个都是向阳而生。

历经风雨后的每一株向日葵都奔赴着太阳，而我刚刚为何却想着坠入黑暗？如果我真的像刚才所想的那样去做了，那我的未来、前程、梦想该怎么办？到站了，而我的眼前还是那片向日葵田。

慢慢下车，见奶奶在车站等着我，而奶奶的手里握着一株向日葵。

我的眼里突然有光了，笑着向奶奶走去。

中考作文《这一程，》满分作文 1
中考考场作文真题再现：
写作(共50分)
按要求写作。

人生的路，一程又一程。

经历风雨，仍心怀希望；收获成功，又放眼远方。

这一程，有人陪你走；这一程，你只身前行。

这一程的风景，这一程的故事，这一程的成长.....
请以《这一程，》为题写一篇文章。

要求:①先将题目补充完整，然后写作；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③不少于600字；④文中不得透漏姓名、学校等个人身份信息。

【满分作文】
这一程，奔向阳光
天空灰蒙蒙的，大片大片的乌云笼罩着城市上空，小雨淅淅沥沥地下着。

我孤身一人坐在大巴车的小角落，目光无神地看着窗外的一切。

我轻叹一声，拢了拢怀里的小背包。

接二连三的考试失利，让我的脑袋十分混乱，不知该如何是好？只得带着小行囊，浑浑噩噩地想逃到乡下去散散心。

车里很黑，其他的乘客衣服颜色也是阴沉的。

耳边时不时传来几声叽叽喳喳的抱怨声，我听得更是烦躁，便捂住耳朵看向窗外。

窗外是一片又一片拆迁后的黑色废墟。

雨渐停，但乌云仿佛又更黑了。

心情是黑色的，天气是黑色的，眼前的一切也是黑色的，我心。

历年高考满分作文范文6篇历年高考满分作文范文（精选篇1）2023年浙江卷：《争做创新青年，助力祖国盛放》物换星移几度秋，科技齿轮节节高。

无论何时，创新与时代都在共生共长。

在新时代中成长起来的我们，一定要把握时代的特点，抓住时代的机遇，大胆拓展创新的内涵，在民族复兴的道路上贡献自己的力量，绽放自己的光彩。

创新，能够筑牢底气，彰显志气。

“要成长，你必须独创才行”，歌德这样启示我们。

创新是培养个人底气的坚实基础，也是实现社会发展的必然要求。

君可见，铁路工程师詹天佑，远洋归国，努力钻研，开启中国铁路事业;君可见，第一代航天人陈敬熊，不畏坎坷，攻克难题，为导弹安上“眼睛”。

创新，不仅筑牢中国人的底气，面且彰显中国人的志气。

看现在，高铁如璀璨明星，拖曳创新尾迹，照亮了不断崛起、翱翔长空的中华文明。

如此看，创新确实是个人与国家发展的助推器。

历史的车轮滚滚向前，时代正在发出召唤。

身处求知阶段的我们应深思：如何成为不负时代使命的创新型人才?知识基础、创新思维、创新能力无疑是关键所在。

首先，青年需要践行“山不让尘，川不辞盈”——日积月累的理念。

创新并非空中楼阁，必须建立在现有知识的坚实地基上。

因此，作为新时代青年，我们必须认真学习现有的科学文化知识，不断提升自己的学习能力，打牢专业知识基础，扩大知识范围。

其次，要敢于迎接高难度的挑战，有“黄沙百战穿金甲，不破楼兰终不还”的信念。

最后，敢于质疑，敢于向权威挑战，“大道行思，取则行远”，善于思考、勇于质疑无疑是高质量创新人才的基本素质。

生命不息，创新不止。

既然渴望美好的生活，就应努力拓展创新的内涵，以创新的魄力去大胆创造，用严谨踏实的科学素养去发现、去实践，用自强不息、奋斗拼搏书写青春之华章。

徐枫灿、杨杰等新时代浙江青年都是我们学习的榜样，他们在各个领域开拓创新，为社会发展贡献了自己的力量，也点亮了明天的憧憬与希望。

“鹏北海，凤朝阳，又携书剑路茫茫。

”青年是国家前途之曙光，是民族未来之希望。

语文七年级上册第一单元《热爱生活，热爱写作》写作实践满分作文引领第一单元《热爱生活，热爱写作》写作实践满分作文引领单元写作实践九月份，由夏入秋，天气转凉，昼夜温差增大，自然景物、人们穿戴等方面也相应发生了许多变化。

你注意到了吗？生活中去细心观察、体验，选取一个场景，写一段文字，描述这些变化。

别忘了取一个别致的题目。

提示:1.关键是要善于发现，你观察、感受到的点点滴滴都可能成为写作的素材，不妨先都记下来，再做取舍。

2.注意“九月份”这个特定的时节，写出由夏入秋的各种变化。

要写得具体明确，比如你的感受是“秋高气爽”，就要用特定的景物把这个感觉描绘出来。

满分作文引领示例（一）秋天的校园，小草啊，小花啊，都凋零了；校园栏杆上的那一片爬山虎，它由夏天的墨绿变成了秋天的枫红，十分美丽，远远望去，就像一幅被渲染的油墨画。

秋天的校园，所有的绿色便集中在了那几株又矮又小的小松树上，它们似乎越长越绿，像一个个永不言败的小英雄。

高高昂头的枫树越到深秋，越是红艳。

远远望去，在秋风的吹拂下，就像火焰在滚动。

秋天的校园，操场上彩旗飘扬，在鼓号队雄壮的奏乐声中，秋季运动会开幕了，“阳光体育，青春少年！友谊第一，比赛第二！”同学们比赛的是运动，收获的是友谊！秋天的校园，凉丝丝的秋风吹进教室，吹到了我们的脸上，秋风传送着同学们的欢歌笑语，收获着老师辛勤培育下的学习成果。

【名师点评】写出这样优美的语句得益于作者的细致观察，又矮又小的小松树、操场上彩旗飘扬，都是作者观察到的点点滴滴，然后用笔记录下来。

示例（二）金色的秋天来到了我们的校园，给多姿多彩的校园增添了几分成熟的美校园里，许多树叶儿都变黄了。

它们经不住秋风的吹袭，从树上纷纷飘落，像一群美丽的蝴蝶在翩翩起舞。

落在地上的树叶积得厚厚的，就像给大地铺上了一层金黄的地毯。

只有那不怕冷的松树依然那么葱郁。

校园里的草坪上，许多花的花瓣也已经凋谢，叶子枯黄。

只有那坚强的菊花开得那么旺盛，开得那么饱满，像一只只绣球。

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ㅤㅤ熊熊燃烧的五四火炬，点亮了青年学子百年奋斗的征程。

从新民主主义革命“挽狂澜于既倒”的爱国青年，到社会主义建设时期“到祖国最需要的地方去”的垦荒青年，再到改革开放新时期“一切为了祖国，一切为了成功”的航天科研团队，他们青春无悔！值此共青团成立百年之际，亲爱的同学：你将迈出怎样的青春步伐？是拒绝躺平做挺立青年？是抛弃幻想做有为青年？还是远离浮躁做理性青年？习总书记说：“奋斗是青春最亮丽的底色。

青年一代有理想、有本领、有担当，国家就有前途，民族就有希望。

”作为新时代的青年，我的青春有信仰、有挑战、有故事、有色彩……ㅤㅤ请联系生活实际，以“我的青春有_______”为题写一篇文章。

ㅤㅤ要求；①请将题目补充完整；②除诗歌外，文体自选；③不少于600字；④不得抄袭，不得套作；⑤不出现真实的校名和师生姓名。

【满分作文】1我的青春有快乐“少年不识愁滋味，爱上层楼，爱上层楼，为赋新词强说愁。

”这是说青少年总爱有莫名其妙的忧愁，或许我天生是乐天派，我的青春里不但没有忧愁，反而充满了欢乐。

被理解的快乐糟糕，我写给我班女神的情诗被妈妈发现了。

当她举着那封信问我时，我顿时觉得天都要塌了。

我不知道接下来她要对我做什么，是“巴掌炒肉”“恶意嘲讽”“唠叨盖顶”，还是向老师报告，“里应外合”共同解决我的“问题”?总之，我能想到的都不是好结果。

没想到，她把那首情诗交到我的手里，竟然什么也没做，只是意味深长地说:“如果你喜欢她，就要想想自己现在对她负不负得起责任。

”“你，你竟然不批评我?”我诧异地问。

妈妈说:“我干什么要批评你?对于青少年来说，这很正常。

”哇，原来妈妈并没有把这档子事看成十恶不赦。

我几经思索，把对女神的爱慕藏在了内心深处。

但我的青春里，多了—份被理解的快乐。

能自立的快乐青春年少的我，少了一份童年的幼稚，多了一份少年的独立。

从上初中起，我就开始住校，度过了最初那段打饭都不知道自己饭量、睡觉都不会铺床、洗脸要自己打水、洗衣要自己动手的“困难”时光，我现在独立生活的能力越来越强。

推荐理由你听说过吗？犯错误乃是取得进步所必须交付的学费。

本文选材紧贴日常生活，叙事真实、完整。

小作者因心急而没问清楚价格，只凭着旧时在别家买饼的印象付了四元钱，导致少付钱的经历，相信很多人都可能遇到过。

文中小作者发现自己少付钱后由侥幸到煎熬的心理变化过程，及其主动补付一元钱的行为，突出了新时代少年知错就改、敢于担当的精神品质，这也深深感动着读者。

那一次，我真感动雨淅淅沥沥地下着，天空灰蒙蒙的。

我冲进辅导班楼下的一家烧饼铺子，泥猴般抖了抖身上的水，对柜台后的老爷爷说：“老爷爷，一个肉馅的！”“好呦！先到里屋候着！”不一会儿，只见他一巴掌将烧饼拍在壁炉上。

烧饼在璧炉里像气球一样努力地挺着它的肚皮儿，见差不多成形，老爷爷用一把钳子将烧饼从壁炉里“揪”了出来，随即左手抓起一只褐色的纸袋，右手在烧饼上撒了一圈白芝麻，熟练地将烧饼包好递给我。

我翻了翻口袋，凭过往印象，放下四枚硬币，抓起烧饼往辅导班冲。

热乎乎的烧饼散发着浓浓的肉香，白气随风飘散，忍不住咬上一口，满嘴留香……。

雨愈下愈大，玻璃球般大的雨珠砸向地面，碎成一片。

我紧贴着墙壁前行。

无意间，目光定格在纸袋上的价格表，香肉烧饼——五元！对了，四元的肉饼是在别家买的，那家的饼个头小些。

我竟然少给了老爷爷一元钱！眼看着就要上课了，我饿狼般吞掉烧饼，跑进了教室。

我心想：“不就是一块钱吗，这有什么的，难道老爷爷还缺这一块钱？哎呀，管他呢，自己还赚了呢！”可上课时，我总忍不住想起那个小店和那个老爷爷。

终于熬到下课，我挪步到烧饼铺前。

店内没有顾客，老爷爷躺在一张吱呀作响的竹椅上。

我手中紧紧攥着一张被揉皱的一元纸币，慢慢地向店内挪去。

老爷爷察觉到有人来，起身，脸上挂满和蔼的笑容：“来点什么呀….…”“老爷爷，对不起，早上我在您这儿买了一只烧饼，少给了您一块钱，现在还给您。

”我的脸开始发烫。

老爷爷眯了眯眼，用手挠挠后脑勺：“咳，我也是晓得的，你们这些学生啊，没有多少钱，自己留着，啊。

教资科一满分作文范文英文回答:In my opinion, achieving a perfect score on theTeaching Certificate Exam (TCE) Part 1 essay sectionrequires a combination of language proficiency andstrategic writing techniques. Firstly, it is essential to have a strong command of both English and Chinese languages. This allows for effective communication and expression of ideas in a bilingual context. Additionally, being able to switch between languages seamlessly demonstrates linguistic agility and versatility.Furthermore, to excel in the TCE Part 1 essay section,it is crucial to showcase a deep understanding of theprompt and provide well-developed arguments. For instance,if the prompt asks about the advantages and disadvantagesof technology in education, I would begin by discussing the benefits of technology, such as enhanced access to information and interactive learning experiences. Then, Iwould transition into addressing the drawbacks, such as potential distractions and overreliance on technology.Moreover, it is important to support these arguments with relevant examples and personal experiences. For instance, I could share an anecdote about how a student in my class used educational apps on a tablet to improve their reading skills. This not only adds credibility to my argument but also makes the essay more relatable and engaging for the reader.Additionally, incorporating idioms and colloquial expressions can further enhance the quality of the essay. For example, I could use the idiom "a double-edged sword" to describe how technology can have both positive and negative effects on education. This not only demonstrates my language proficiency but also adds a touch of creativity and flair to the essay.In conclusion, achieving a perfect score on the TCE Part 1 essay section requires a strong command of both English and Chinese languages, as well as strategic writingtechniques. By understanding the prompt, providing well-developed arguments, supporting them with examples, and incorporating idioms and colloquial expressions, one can create a compelling and impactful essay. Practice and continuous improvement are key in mastering the art ofessay writing for the TCE.中文回答：在我看来，要在教育资格证书考试（TCE）科目一的作文部分取得满分，需要具备语言能力和策略性写作技巧的结合。

The professor think that by 4-day workweek rules, the company may probabely cost more and cut in their profits. Firstly, more employees means more work space and more computers, this is a large budget that the lecture didn,t include. Even thought they accept that they can be payed less if they go on the four-day workweek, the amount of work doesn't change. To fullfill the company's business goal, they need to hire more empolyees, therefore more private work space and computers and stuff like that are needed. Since the new employees take up the salary which the others gave up, the cost of the computer and workplace cannot be solved without inves ng more money. Secondly, by reducing the work hour, one emploee's assignment cannot be accomplished as much as before, and then the le over must be shi ed to another employee. Also, with less me to work, the employees should work much harder than they used to be. This will lead to a high work expecta ons that make one's pressure more intense. How can a man live a good life under a huge stress? On the contrary to the lecture, less work me will oppositely lead to an unpleasant life life than than a be er be er life which life which can improve improve one's one's work efficiency and make make more more more benefits benefits benefits to to the company. Finally, Finally, as as the compe on compe on is is so high in the work market, market, one who one who j ust just work work for 4 for 4 d ays days days a a week cannot match those who work as hard as they can and at least 5 days a week. Being less compe ve, compe ve, one one one cannot cannot cannot keep keep keep their their their job job job stability, stability, and and may may may be be be the the the first first first sacrifice sacrifice sacrifice of of of the the the job job compe on. Since the boss must give their credit to those who work 5 days a week other than those who work only 4 days a week. Therefore, the delegant ones get promoted for they can be relied on crucial tasks and they will supervise the company constantly with lower absense-error happening. 。

2021-2022八年级英语下学期单元话题满分写作Unit 1：What’s the matter？单元话题：talk about health problems “讨论健康问题并给建议”范文11．由于新型冠状病毒肺炎(COVID-19)的爆发，几个月来我们不得不待在家里。

正因如此，这次疫情教会了我们重新审视自己的习惯，更好地生活。

请根据下列提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文，谈谈保持健康的秘诀。

短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数。

提示：1. 多锻炼，多喝水，均衡膳食(have a balanced diet)；2. 早睡早起，保持充足的睡眠；3. 多吃蔬菜和水果，健康饮食；4. ……Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. __________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文Because of the COVID-19, we had to stay at home for months. It taught us to take a second look at our habits and to live better. Here are some tips to keep healthy.First, we should do more exercise and have a balanced diet. Drink more water every day. Second, we’d better go to bed early and get up early to keep enough sleep. Third, why not eat more vegetables and fruit every day? As we know, they are good for our health. What’s more, to be healthy, we can’t play too much computer games. We can read more books about health.In a word, there are many ways to make us healthy. You can find some and try them.【详解】题干解读：题目要求写一篇关于保持健康的秘诀的英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。

官方真题TPO1托福独立写作题目文本+满分范文官方真题TPO1托福独立写作题目文本+满分范文官方真题Official1托福独立写作题目原文：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Use specific reasons and e某amples to support your answer.官方真题Official1托福独立写作满分范文1：As people regard education as an essential part of life more and more, where the educational budgets should be devoted to rises to a hot topic. Some people hold the view that money is supposed to be put into classes and libraries, while others believe that an equal amount of financial support should be given to sports and social activities at universities and colleges. From my perspective, sports and social activities make a complete campus life together with classes and libraries, so I firmly agree with the statement. First of all, playing sports makes a person healthy and energetic to face thefuture challenges. It can be seen everywhere that more and more students wear glasses, and too much reading along with facing computers for a long time makes it even worse. Then they may suffer from eye problems or other physical diseases. The only way of improving this case is to encourage them to take some time rela某ing in sports. Furthermore, playing a ball game together is the best method to promote teamwork spirit. After a period of playing together, members will develop a way to solve problems and achieve their common goal. Therefore, sports strengthen one's body as well as enhance the spirit of teamwork. Besides, social activities can help foster abilities that students cannot gain during classes or self-studying. Though being smart and diligent, some students are called pedants because of not being able to e某change ideas with others freely. Only if a person is equipped with knowledge and is capable of e某pressing it can he become competent. So, it is significant for them to take part in social activities with the aim of lifting their communication skills. When pedants are forced to talking with others, it's a great chance for them to make new friends and e某press their thoughts, which may be an opportunity for their future career. Last but not the least is that the places provided for sports and social activities are in need of money. It is common that the school will spend a large sum of money to purchase updated books and facilities to fulfill the requirements of classes and libraries. However,finding a suitable place to play sports or hold social activities is always hard. Take my university as an e某ample, if I want to read a book, I can easily find a seat in the library, but if I want to run for half an hour, the crowded gym will just turn me into a upset mood. Then, requiring the same amount of financial support to ameliorate the condition is just reasonable. In a nutshell, financial support should be contributed to sports and social activities just like classes and libraries, for they help with strengthening bodies, making progress in communication skills and they are in shortage of fund.官方真题Official1托福独立写作满分范文2：Some people claim that universities and colleges should not spend a great deal of money on sports and social activities, as their budgets should prioritize classes and libraries. However, as educational institutions, universities and colleges have anobligation to provide a wide range of knowledge to their students tohelp them develop academically and socially. An increasing number of businesses have high demand for people who are not only specialistsin their fields, but also skilled in social interaction. With the ever changing science and technology, no task can be fulfilled by a single person and given the need for collaboration, social skills and team spirit are indispensable qualities for success. Clearly, sports and social activities in universities and colleges provide students with the perfect settings to practice their social skills. By playing football in a team or joining in a contest, for instance, students can develop a sense of belonging and e某perience team spirit, both of which are quite essential for their future careers. Aside from fostering social skills and team spirit, sports and social activities can greatly help students release their pressures. Nowadays, students not only have to finish all the tasks assigned by teachers, but also have to attend many e某tra-curricular training courses. Even the most enthusiastic people feel tired and e某hausted if they keep this busy schedule for a pretty long time. For e某ample, when I was in high school, I would play basketball with my classmates. I could always get good refreshment and resume schoolwork with higher efficiency later on. Admittedly, academic education will always be at the heart of a university. In universities, sports and social activities should by no means take the place of a focus on academic study. However, what I believe is that universities and colleges are supposed to invest in academics as well as sports and social activities. For instance, in the United States, almost all famous universities have plenty of sports teams and social groups, and universities provide adequate financial support for these events. Both of these fields are highly valued. For these reasons, I maintainthat universities and colleges should spend enough money on academic education and social movements to prepare students for their future development.如何提高托福写作速度?一、打字速度作为互联网的一代，绝大部分考生对键盘应当是相当熟悉对，并且用中文打字的速度也是十分的快速，但是为什么偏偏英文就不行呢?答案很简单，大家熟悉的是中文拼音的排列组合。