7.14
雅思作文：
小作文：三分之一分数150-180字
大作文：三分之二分数250-280字
如何1+1>2？
1、记笔记：速记自查
2、看参考书
写作胜经：P115 33篇非常重要，看内容不看结构
00-12年写作机经：每天四道，P28 08.1.10至最后
读话题，找考点
看题型，定结构
划核心词，定同义、近义词
T2解题步骤：
1、审题：话题题型核心词
2、思路：必须一分为二
3、结构：4/5段，prefer 4段
4、表达：话题考点
话题：
教育
社会
科技传媒
国家政策
题型：
1、让步反驳3-7 do u agree or disagree
2、平衡写5-5 discuss
3、问题解决（PRS）
4、组合题
评分标准：
Content：what why how
Organization：衔接词
V ocabulary
Grammar：18-22句话，7种不同句型
EX: study in another country
1、论点-7分-一心一意
A great many advantages can be seen from…
First of all, these developed countries are home to some of the most prestigious universities in the world, such as Cambridge and Oxford.
In this sense, XXX can not only offer the best academic environment but also advanced educational facilities to XXX, which, by contrast, might not be easily obtained from their domestic study.
2、衔接完善
Secondly, XXX could highly broaden XX horizon, this is mostly because, XXX would gain knowledge of another culture, lifestyle, value, even attitude of life, leading to XXX.
衔接词：
大S顺序：
To start/begin with, second, what is more
In the first place, in the second place, in addition
小S表因：
This is possibly/partly/mostly/mainly because
Due to/owing to the fact that
小S表果：
Lead to, as a result
Bring about, result in
Trigger, generate
3、词汇
①近义互换：
Benefit/drawback
Advantage/disadvantage
Strength/weakness
Positive/negative
Merit/demerit
Blessing/curse
②词性转换
Consider
After a considered discussion of both views
Lack of consideration of others
How considerate you are!
A considerable number of findings show that
③形副出没
Solve problem
The tough/urgent/pressing question/challenge can be effectively tackled by
“极其非常”：
Highly
Extremely
Definitely
Absolutely
Vital
Essential
Significant
“仅仅，只是”：
Simply
Merely
Nothing more than
4、语法：
①There be表状态、趋势
There is an abundance of evidence to support the idea that …
②it is 强调句
It is widely accepted that…
It is undenied that…
It is an undeniable fact that…
③被动
Should never be neglected/denied/underestimated
④虚拟语气
Financial aid could be one of the most practical/reasonable/useful methods to
⑤名词+插入语+more likely to do
Studying abroad, as far as I’m concerned, is likely to be an extremely significant …Reading, generally speaking, would be more likely to cultivate children’s creativity and imagination.
插入语：
Although
Indeed/surely/certainly
Needless to say
To my knowledge
⑥the+比较级，the+比较级
The more passion we have, the more happiness we are likely to experience.
⑦and连接两个简单句
Possible reasons leading to this matter will be carefully explored and effective solutions will be obtained accordingly.
题型一：辩论型
让步反驳3-7 Agree or disagree
背景+作者观点
让步
反驳
重申作者观点
平衡写5-5 胜经P30
背景+双方观点+作者目的
观点A
观点B
亮明作者观点
题型二：PRS
背景+作者目的
原因1
原因2
提出解决方式
题型三：组合题
背景+目的
分析原因
给出观点
提建议
先问观点，再问其他无关紧要问题：
背景+目的
让步
反驳
回答第二问
T2文章分布：
全文250字，18-22句
1、首段2-3句话
题目改写：
In recent years/Over the recent decades, a heated debate about XXX has drawn the public’s attention.
Public attention has been led to XXX.
In the past decades, XXX has become one of the most heated focuses of discussion and disputes across the whole country.
双方观点（平衡写时才有）：
Some people welcome the idea that …
While others hold a rather different opinion
作者目的：
In this essay, both views will be taken into careful consideration and my own conclusion will be drawn at the end.
This essay will compare and contrast its controversy.
开头举例：
11.1.8
The effects of using robots have drawn many people’s attention in recent years, Some people firmly believe that it’s vital for human being
While other hold an opposite idea.
10.11.6
Nowadays, there is a perception held by increasingly more people that it’s definitely vital for student’s to study at school until they become adult.
For my part, I find myself in complete agreement with this idea.
However, I hold opposite attitude toward this view.
11.2.26
There are a great number of people proposing currently that it’s definitely significant for central authority to provide food for its citizens rather than importing from other country.
2、尾端2-3句
重申总论点+强调作者观点
提建议或解决方法
3-7
All in all, based on the above discussion, I’m firmly convinced that the idea of … is more rational than … especially when XXX has been taken into consideration.
5-5
To sum up, the issue of XX, from my own perspective, depends/relies on the actual situation involved if XXX would/should/might
尾段举例：
11.2.7
All in all, the issue of how to travel, from my personal view, depends on the actual situation involved,
If people have time and money, going to the destination in person would be a better choice when XX is concerned.
7.17
3-7让步论点：
诚然：
Certainly, there are several obvious reasons for people to support the view that…
It’s not denying that those who oppose to the idea also have their reasons to some extent.
反驳：
By contrast, people holding the opposite idea are oversimplifying the situation. Conversely, it’s not completely true to say this view is always good or beneficial/bad or harmful.
5-5论点：
On the one hand, it’s understandable for people to believe that
On the other hand, it’s also reasonable for people to suggest that
It’s definitely/completely true to say XX to some extent.
小S论据：
解释：见“原因”
递进：近义词互换
That is to say
In other words
By that I mean
There is, first of all, a clear link between human and environmental problems.
That is to say, whenever human lives, they damage the environment in some way.
举例子：
To illustrate
To demonstrate
A case in point that
We can find plenty of evidence, from my own school/work/life experience, to support the view that…
完整主体段框架：
For one thing, for another
TS: the idea of XX is comprehensive.
大S: first and foremost,
小S: Put it in another way
大S: more importantly and practically
小S: XX could serve as a perfect example.
Hence/thereby, the reasons of XX are easiest to note.
第三节：教育类话题
考点：
①教育的目的和方式
②选课
③老师的不可替代性
08.9.6
有两件事情的题目：
首段2句背景+观点
让步4句父母好
反驳3句父母差
反驳5-7句老师全好
结尾2句再次表明观点+提出意见
Genes demonstrate a powerful influence on…
The latest survey, relating to XX, has highlighted that XX
The traits we inherited from parents, apply a constant as well as repetitive and profound impact on …
A considerable number of findings show that
XX spend great about of time living with XX, when lifestyle, custom, attitude and value of life are formed.
老师——传道：
1、了解教育心理学
Have a better knowledge/understanding of educational psychology
Exploit one’s natural resources without destroying them
2、专业教育方式
Possess expertise in teaching method
Continued teaching and guided practice
老师——授业
1、吸收-传递-促进
Stimulate one’s interests in a smarter way
Pass on a series of social skills
Promote teamwork spirit via
2、教导-培养
Educate value and attitude, right and wrong, good and evil
Cultivate XX to become sociable, outgoing, optimistic and tolerant
老师——解惑
1、教育者+父母
A dual role is inevitably carried out by…
XXX shoulder the responsibility of not only an educator, but also a mentor in taking care of…
2、心理辅导师
Can be grouped into
09.10.8P118
自学的好处
Ease financial burden imposed by…
Learn how to exploit and develop their talent at their own pace
Develop faster socially
第四节：社会类话题
考点：
1、家庭；老人P119、P129
老龄化人数增多
好处：
Experienced
Social harmony
坏处：
Labor forces shortage
Army/military/police force
Financial pressure for youngsters
3、抽象
①What is happiness? 具体问题具体分析
11.11.26
Spiritual—permanent, eternal, ever-lasting
Material--temporary
②过去现在将来
Unpredictable
Practical
③竞争
好处：
Motivation=driving factor
Progress
坏处：
Frustrated
Twisted value
④环保
⑤犯罪
⑥择业
手掌原则：
个人家庭学校（单位）媒体政府
犯罪考点：
犯罪原因
解决措施
1.PRS首段：2-3句话
The recent issue of XX has triggered serious problems
There are probably several direct reasons leading to this situations
The following content represents my view on why the case is and how to tackle it.
2.PRS主体段——分析原因
Chief among the causes is that
Another contributing factor is that
3.PRS尾段——解决措施
All in all, we have no choice but to take some feasible actions as follows
One to be taken is that
Another one could be adopted is that XX
犯罪原因:
Crime
手掌原则应用：
个人：
Lacking of self-control ability, can be easily influenced by negative effects from outside world, to be more specific,
家庭：
Unsuitable/improper/inappropriate parenting
Domestic violence
Physical punishment
Psychological negligence
学校：
Focus too much on academic achievement
Qualities to be a responsible person are not valued at all
媒体：
Violent/pornographic scenes
Poison one’s minds
Trigger violent impulse
政府：
Gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide
It is no easy task to adapt to the rapidly changing world
7.19
08.1.12
监狱、刑期正面作用
维护-补偿-预防
Maintain the law
Ensure victims and their relatives some compensation
Further deter potential crimes
择业考点：
①男女
男女性别描述：
女性：
Better communicator
Considerate and endurant
Patient and gentle
Subtleness and empathy
男性：
Physical advantage
Born to be adventurous
Have instinct of being actively aggressive
②老少
③收入高低
④长期vs. 临时
第五节：科技传媒类话题
1、总体影响
2、传媒力量
Profit-driven
Exaggerate
Conceal
3、现代/传统
TS:
There are a great number of benefits of…
The comfortable use of …undoubtedly/surely brings numerous unprecedented/exceptional/extraordinary benefits to
大S：铁路的优点——改变生活
In the past decades, many people, such as businessman, commuters and even politicians realized that railways, with their power and speed, were transforming lives Put it in another way, you could bathe in the sea at Brighton in the morning, and you could have lunch in London. And you might be in Newmarket for a race meeting in the afternoon.
小S：铁路的优点——便捷
And all these have been ensured with the prevailing use of…, which enables …to maximize their social opportunities.
Overcome geographical barriers
科技的缺点
TS：
Conversely, XX also results in some unavoidable problems.
Personal information security is one of the biggest rising concerns ever involved.
小S：再解释——信息丢失
Due to the fact that…
This is mostly because, huge inconvenience along with heavy loss of …could be triggered by increasingly more virus threats and well-trained hackers.
大S：科技的缺点——缺少沟通
Another problem of …might lie in the fact that …would become somewhat indifferent and feel isolated in the long run with sufficient face to face communication.
第六节：国家政策类话题
考点：
1、挣钱
2、买单
3、形象
11.6.11买教育、医疗还是艺术
人民有权利：
As honorable taxpayers, XX all contribute to a nation’s XX system.
In this sense, XX should be entitled to receive financial support from public fund as necessary condition of a proper human life.
政府有义务：
It’s a duty and inescapable duty for central authority to popularize free medical care and prosper education industry.
Due to the fact that both of them are loosely related to citizens fundamental interests as well as benefits and rights.
社会和谐：
A more harmonious society would thus be secured in the long run.
预算有限
There is never a unlimited budget for administration.
And there are simply too many other issues to be dealt with 08.3.8
Behave yourself
Stay healthy
Protect environment
Obey the law
Treat your family well
Maintain a harmonious relationship
Smile to other people
Contribute to social stability
7.24
第七节：小作文概况
图表分类：
1、数据图表
Line graph=line curve
Pie chart
Bar chart=column
Table
2、非数据图表
流程图：flowchart
地图：geography
数据图标特征：
1、两种状态：用时间分配
动T>1：上升下降波动
静T<=1：比大小
2、三种趋势
巨大上升
中速下降
缓慢波动
3、四大金刚句型
趋势/状态+数字
4、5步衔接
起终高低交
评分标准：
1、任务完成
Summarize:大趋势决定分段Main features:同类关键点及变化Make comparisons:静态比较
2、衔接
Start from
And followed by
However, from them on Afterwards,
Finally, XX finished by
3、词汇
上升：
Increase, rise
Improve, grow
Go up
Upward trend
下降：
Fall drop decrease decline
波动：
Rise and fall
Fluctuate
平稳：
Maintain the same level Remain stable
最值：
顶点：
Get to summit
Reach a peak
谷底：
Drop to the bottom
Hit the lowest point
幅度巨大：
Significant(ly)
Considerable/considerably
Dramatic/dramatically
中速：
Gradual(ly)
General(ly)
缓慢：
Slight(ly)
Slow(ly)
时间：
Between and
During 20 years since 1979
Over the period of 2 decades form 1979
4、语法
趋势状态：
主谓
There be
拟人
被动
数字：
括号（）
分词：falling
Which从句
介词with at about
The birth rate in China decreased slightly by 3%(from 23% to 20%) over the period of 30 years since 1966.
There was a slight decrease of 3% in XX, falling slowly form XX to XX, between X and X.
A slight decrease (3%) can be seen in …, dropping from … in … to … in …
The 30-year period since 1966 witnessed a 3% slight decrease in … , which declined moderately from … to …
文章结构：150字，7-10句
1、首段1-2句
题目改写：时间地点对象单位
大趋势/状态
2、主体段1-3段：按趋势/按图形
关键点及变化
3、尾端1-2句：
总结特征+比大小
总结两张图的关系
EX
As can be seen from the line graph … starts from a high of … units (at 0:00)
And followed by a steady increase to estimate … units …
However, from then on, XX drops sharply for the next 6 hours and hits the lowest point, at … units.
Thereafter, X is on a stable rise until …, when the peak of the day is achieved, with …units.
The last two hours of the day see a sharp decrease in …to the same level as it’s starting point.
静态表达：
占：
Account for
Make up
Take up
Occupy
比大小：
The most principle/significant/popular component is A, which makes up % of all, while B is the minimal segment, occupying …
Meanwhile, C lies in the middle (X %)
多饼图-主体段1
Cars increased greatly during these three decades: rising from … in… to … in …
At the same time, both … and … displayed a gradual upward trend (from to and from to respectively)
主体段2-降
In contrast to these increased, X experienced a more or less decline.
Among them, the former demonstrated a dramatic drop, decreasing from to over Meanwhile, the remainder declined slightly, which has not easy to notice.
柱图-静态
两个柱：以其中一根为准，其余与其比大小
主体段比大小，尾端归纳特征
柱图-动态
横轴为时间：连同颜色柱子顶端
中间状态
结尾比大小
横轴为事物：连同类项顶端
主体段：
Trains at first rose steadily and dropped slightly to … in 2000.
While tube has been relatively stable, falling gradually form … to …, during …, but climbing back to reach … by 2000.
Conversely, compared with in 1960, there was a sharp increase in, which went up from…, whereas the popularity of buses experienced a dramatic decline since 1960, falling sharply from to, over two decades and with … in 2000.
To sum up, according to the bar chart, buses and trains, both in 1960 and 1980, were the most popular.
Among which, the former was of greater popularity, whereas automobiles substituted them in 2000 to become…
Flowchart注意事项：
顺起点箭头
按步骤分段
有逻辑衔接
生词带入或改词性
一般现在时被动
流程图首尾段模板
This flowchart reflects the process of, which can be divided into X steps.
Overall, as it shows in the diagram, it is clear to see how the development of … is carried out.
机经P21
In the initial stage, X are collected in X where they are deposited by … and … are then transported to … by truck.
The second stages shows that X are cleaned by X in … and …are afterwards sorted
/classified by color into …
And then taken to … where they are put into … in order to melt in preparation for moulding.
Next, X is mixed with a certain amount of X before being poured into X for the manufacture of X
In the final stage, the fresh bottles are ready for use, and they are taken to be filled at … and return to …
静态选址：
考虑人口交通位置
一般现在时+虚拟语气
雅思写作必备高分技巧 雅思写作想得高分，这些技巧不可不知道,今天就给大家带来了雅思写作高分技巧，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 雅思写作想得高分这些技巧不可不知道 一.词汇的问题 很多同学在雅思写作的时候都会背很多高难的词汇，但这并不是雅思评分标准的核心。他们想要知道的是你有没有精准的用到了这些词，把认识的词汇进行巩固了解才是真理。如何做到这些呢，把6级词汇和雅思词汇拿出来，你会看到很多你认识的词，但真要说到用法，还是有很多不确定。把这些单词整理下来，用例子和语义重新梳理一遍。 二.拓展词汇 在做到精准的用词之后，就可以想想拓展词汇事情。雅思写作的题材是非常固定的，分类题材，在每一个分类里面找出常用的词汇。背诵范文只是一个步骤，最关键的是在每个题材下面练习写一篇自己的*，里面用到这些语句和词汇，仔细斟酌是否有用对这个词。
三.论述的重要性 一篇*写完最重要的是有没有自己的观点和认识，这也是雅思考官很看中的一个方面。这时候论述的策论就很重要了，要考虑到扣题，也要考虑到完美的扩展衔接自己观点。这点对于词汇句式相对较好的人是要重点突破的一关，也是7分和6.5的分水岭。 2018年7月21日雅思写作真题回忆及范文 题目为Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team. 雅思小作文类型：流程图 题目The diagram shows the how recycled paper is made 雅思大作文类型：社会类 题目：Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team.What do you think the causes of this problem?And how to solve this? 范文来自雅思哥：
Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Foreign languages have increasingly gained popularity among students these years, given that the world is shrinking and each country now has a more frequent contact with the outside world. Many people[c1]argue that children should begin learning a foreign language at elementary school, instead of waiting until [c2] they enter secondary school. There are several reasons for this. Firstly, despite the fact that parents do not want to put too much pressure on their children, they also do not want them to lose at the starting line. This means, if the kids start to learn a foreign language early, their parents are relieved from the thought that their kids will have to catch up later on, which is true to some extent. On the other hand, it is scientifically proved that children tend to learn a language faster before the age of 12. As far as I know, my friends who started to learn English when they were six or seven now have a much more satisfactory English level than those who started at12 or 13. So it is wise to have foreign language course in primary school curriculum. Additionally, learning a foreign language at an earlier age can lay children a solid foundation for future studying.Rather than just learning a language itself, children learn a lot more about the learning methods. As a result, when they enter secondary school, they can explore more languages and enrich their knowledge by extensive readings.
More and more farmers and food manufacturers are genetically modifying their crops to reduce susceptibility to disease, improve flavor, and reduce costs. Do you think genetically modifying foods is a good idea? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position. Sample 6 Score A few decades ago, manipulating genes in people, plants, and animals was just science fiction. Today, it’s a reality, and genetic modification may have many positive applications in the future, including the eradication of many hereditary diseases. But like most scientific and technological advances, the genetic modification of organisms for our food supply can be as dangerous as it is beneficial. Because of the potential dangers of this technology, I think genetically altering plants and animals in the food supply is a practice that should be very tightly controlled and carefully studied before it is an accepted and common practice. Unfortunately, it may already be too late for that. Many people don’t even realize that many of their foods are genetically modified organisms (GMOs). GMOs are already prevalent in supermarkets and grocery stores across the country, but manufacturers are not required to label foods as having been made from GMOs. As a result, millions of Americans purchase and eat GMOs every day without even knowing it. Yet we don’t even know if GMOs are harmful to our health. We don’t really know how GMOs may affect our bodies or our ecosystem. When we mess with DNA, we may be making changes that have all sorts of dangerous repercussions, including some that we may not even realize for several generations. One of the main concerns about GMOs is the unpredictability of the behavior of altered genes and of the bacteria, plants, and animals that interact with the altered organism. For example, a crop of corn genetically modified to be less susceptible to a particular insect may take on other unwanted characteristics due to the change. It may, for example, become more susceptible to another disease, or it could develop a tougher skin on its kernels, or it could decrease the crop’s ability to produce vitamin E. More frightening is the domino effect of genetically modifying foods. Any change in an organism’s DNA has the potential to affect not only the organism but also anything that feeds off of it, including us. How do we know how GMOs might affect us on a microscopic, genetic level? We don’t know, and can’t know, without years of studies that track all sorts of potential outcomes over several generations. Another fear is that transferred genes may escape from one organism into another. For example, imagine that Strain A of sweet peas was altered by adding a gene that would increase its sugar production. Through cross-pollination, this altered genetic code could enter other strains and slowly (or quickly) infect the entire sub-species. If the alteration was beneficial, this could be a good thing. But the altered gene might not act the same way in all varieties, and the change may not be a good thing in the first place,
Topic one 1.to cultivate one's independence 培养独立性 2.to develop a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感 3.to foster a sense of competition and cooperation 培养竞争和合作感 4.be necessary to sth 对...是必要的 5.in one's future career/development 在未来的事业发展中 6.to enhance one's social awareness/consciousness/realization 提高人们的社 会意识 7.to become more socially adaptable 更具社会适应性 8.to keep pace with the outside world 跟上外面世界的步伐 9.to build up/ establish one's confidence 建立自信 10.offer somebody a sense of achievement/ accomplishment 给与成就感 11.to actualize/realize one's value and capability 实现价值与能力 12.to make money/earn money 挣钱 13.to form a good habit of frugality/thrift 养成勤俭的习惯 14.to provide a chance/opportunity for sb 提供机会 15.to apply A into B 把A应用到B 中 16.to apply for sth 申请 17.in return/in reward 作为回报 18.obtain/acquire/reap/gain/attain 获取 19.cooperate and compromise 合作与妥协 20.to master interpersonal skills 掌握人际关系技巧 21.to ease/lessen/relieve financial strain/burden 缓解经济压力和负担 22.to enjoy a more colorful and interesting campus life 享受多彩和有趣的校园 生活 23.to widen one's horizon 拓宽视野 24.to shape one's character 塑造性格 25.to exert a negative/adverse impact on one's study and life 对学习很生活产 生负面的影响 26.to have a positive influence on sth/sb对学习很生活产生正面的影响 27.take up/occupy one’s space and time 占用时间和空间 28.the sole task/ the main task 主要任务 29.to make the best of/ to make full use of/ to take the advantage of 充分利用 30.be essential to/be fundamental to/ be basic to 对...是很根本的 31.be mature and rational/be immature and irrational 成熟和理性的/或相反 32.be vulnerable to/ be exposed to 对...是敏感的/暴露在... 33.social evils 社会罪恶 34.to go astray/be led into traps/to become lost sheep/to fall down the slippery slope 误入歧途 35.to tell/distinguish/differentiate right from wrong 明辨是非
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析 距离雅思写作7分你大概还有3个步骤要走，是的，不是谁都可以轻轻松松活动雅思高分的。今天给大家带来了雅思7分大作范文批改和解析,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。 雅思7分大作范文批改和解析 雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5) 问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad) 同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners. 解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出
雅思大作文5分与7分范文各项指数对比分析 Let’s compare two answers to a question.The topic is as follows: International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? A Poor Essay – The following is a band 5 essay. International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn’t be able to funtcion properly. Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plant s. Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean. Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun. But on the other hand, people often for get that they aren’t the only beings on the planet. Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them wan’t an exotic souvenir so they pay for illegal things like dea d or live animals or some sculpture. To sum up I think international traveling is a good thing but people must realise that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but alsow protect environment. Below is an analysis of this essay. Task Response The essay question has been copied and used as the introduction (paragraph 1). Once these 34 words are taken off the word count, the response is underlength at 194 words and so loses marks. Nevertheless, the topic is addressed and a relevant position is expressed, although there are patches – as in the third paragraph – where the development is unclear. Other ideas are more relevant but are sometimes insufficiently developed.
Although we can easily acquire knowledge from modern media like television and internet,I think it is not enough to prove that the teachers will lose their position in the future. Indeed,people can absorb a lot of knowledges from television and internet.For example ,some students now can watch many teaching videos on television and internet and they do not need to get these knowledge from teacher.Some modern software can even help students to make a suitable study plan.It is obvious that students do not need to listen to the fixed content in the classroom. However,are all students have the chance to get the knowledge that they want from television and internet?Many poor students cannot afford the cost of television or internet and some elders do not know how to use these equipments.Getting various of knowledge from teacher is the best way for them.Otherwise,online learning needs time to make the courseware.The student cannot learn the new course if the courseware has not completed by the teacher. Even if television and internet can meet some needs of students but they cannot completely perform the effects of the teachers.In fact, children also need to learn the method of communication and how to become a good citizen.In this aspect,teachers play an important role during the learning process.The computer cannot completely achieve the teaching goal. To sum up, modern technologies can replace some of teachers' job. but considering other important parts in education, I do not believe this development can make teachers useless in the future.
雅思写作九分作文范文欣赏：There is no doubt that helping students find a job is one of the primary functions of university education， but universities do exist for other purposes such as improving students’ analytical skills and raising students’moral standards. A university education can be seen as a process of improving students’analytical thinking. The variety of courses offered at university inspires students in various ways， therefore improving their analytical ability. For example， science courses such as math and biology help students develop a rational way of thinking whereas arts courses such as literature 123ve to let students ponder over issues from a logical， multi- dimensional perspective; and courses in social sciences force students to recognize the ideas that have been traditionally assumed to be acceptable and unproblematic. With the development of these types of analytical thinking，graduates can face future challenges with more confidence and enthusiasm. Also， university education is expected to improve students’ moral standards. This is rooted in universities’ belief that students’ awar123ss of responsibility towards their community and their country is of high importance. In this ever-deg123rating society and civilization， students are encouraged actively participate in improving the local community. A university that provides care and facilities for physically disadvantaged students may inspire the graduates to better handle situations in the future where they may have to interact with the disabled community. A successful university education is supposed to produce morally sound graduates， therefore increasing their employability. In conclusion， university education not only helps students locate a decent job but will also develop other qualities such as enhancing their analytical skills and cultivating their hunger and spirit for life. Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema. Do you agree or disagree with this view (250 words)
前言 ?出于对剑桥雅思的爱恨交加，出于对那些需要完成留学梦移民梦的人的感同身受，出于对那些在烤鸭路上屡战屡败屡败屡战的人的精神支持，出于对那些仍在迷茫、仍在盲目背单词、仍在疯狂买参考书、仍在迷恋机经的人的劝勉与鼓励，出于对网络上面所谓出售雅思写作7分资料的虚假广告的无比痛恨，出于对某些所谓名师名校培训机构的不齿不屑，出于那些迷恋习惯背诵范文依赖别人的鸭子们的真诚忠告，出于对那些急需在7月1日之前考到雅思4个7（澳洲会计毕业生，你懂的）的人的理解和帮助，出于上天对我的眷顾和怜悯，出于·········出于因为我曾经也是这么一种人，也是有这么一种经历，我决定，无偿地，毫无保留地，完整地分享我在过去三月自己总结的雅思复习计划和资料（本人曾经的弱项是写作和口语（对，是曾经，哈哈！），所以，我的资料绝大多数都是写作和口语）~~~ ?争取写一篇最全最好的雅思写作经验分享，和更多的鸭友们远离全聚德烤鸭店的火海！ 从4年前为了完成踏进悉尼大学的留学梦，到现在努力实现的澳大利亚梦，雅思成为了一个绕不开的情意结。其中走了特别多的弯路，摔了特别多的跤，失去了很多，也收获了很多。从当初的总分6.5而单科不低于6分的大学门槛到现在的A类4个7的独木桥，对于这个来自英国的―老熟人‖，可谓百般滋味在心头。雅思的备考也是一种―被烤‖，在烤鸭过程中，一不小心，有可能首先被这只鸭给烤焦了。焦虑，迷茫，急躁，失落，绝望，期待，紧张，亢奋，XX失调等所有更年期综合症状都会在备考的过程中轮番上映。 从2010年12月到2011年2月底，我一共参加了4次雅思考试(12月11日，1月22日，2月12日和2月26日)，成绩为： 12月11日：听力：7.0，阅读：6.5，写作：6.0，口语：6.0 01月22日：听力：6.5，阅读：7.0，写作：6.0，口语：7.0 02月12日：听力：7.0，阅读：7.5，写作：6.5，口语：8.5 02月26日：听力：7.0，阅读：7.5，写作：7.5，口语：7.0 03月05日：听力：7.0，阅读：7.5，写作：7.0，口语：8.0 可以说，在过去的三个月里面，我感受过裸考过后无言以对的惶恐，体味过努力过后略有进步的喜悦，忍受着就差0.5、与目标无比接近却未能接近的失落，最后，苦尽甘来。因为这次考试，至少再一次让我确信‖天道酬勤―。NO SWEAT, NO SWEET; NO PAIN, NO GAIN。
雅思写作高分范文赏析：Culture Shock 导读：本文雅思写作高分范文赏析：Culture Shock，仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。 Culture Shock Culture Shock The United States of America is a country in which many people from all over the world comes to live harmoniously with each other. Unlike Canada, which is a multicultural country, it is a melting pot since each person brings his peculiarity to enrich the culture of this country. But this melting process is not always without pain or hurt. I felt the life in Canada is more comfortable According to John J. Macionis, the author of Sociology, secondary Canadian edition. Culture shock is a state of bewilderment, anxiety, disorientation and distress as an individual suddenly exposed to a social or
G类雅思7分作文范文 Topic Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice. TEXT（257 Words） One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to. Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped. Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young. Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that if the parents and their adult children do not live together, both the old and the young can enjoy complete independence and freedom, live a life they like, and keep intact their affections for each other 雅思范文：电脑是否现代教育所必须？ 成因 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Are computers an essential feature of modern education? What subjects can be better taught using computers? Are there aspects of a good education that cannot be taught using computers? You should write at least 250 words. 提示 You should you your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. Topic words: Computers Essential features / absolutely necessary Modern education / good education Task words: There are no specific task words. Three separate questions are given. Questions I should ask myself: Do I think computers are essential for education? What subjects do I think are best be learnt using computers? What do I think are the features of a good education, and are computers important in it?