2009初三英语复习之写作篇--作文训练
作文训练集中营(题目)
俗话说，熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也会吟，英语写作也是如此。命题者为了让考生有话可写，必然会涉及中学生身边熟悉的生活，包括人物和事件。只要我们对这些内容的写作都能熟练掌握，相信在考场作文的时候必然会得心应手。
1.体育锻练(sports)
?作为一名初三的学生，我们每天进行体育锻炼，如做操、打篮球…因为运动能增强体质，减少疾病。运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好。通过体育锻炼我…在今后我要…
?词汇：Junior Three, do sports, morning exercises, take exercise, health, healthy, relax, strong, necessary, kinds of
?句型：such as, so on, I think…, Doing…;so that…;become…
and …;It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.;… because…
范文1. As a Grade 3 student, we have sports every day, such as doing some exercise, playing basketball and so on. We do sports because it can not only make us strong and but also keep us healthy. It can also make us have a good rest and study better. So I will keep doing sports every day from now on.
范文2. As a middle school student of Junior Three, I do sports one or two hours a day, such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running and so on. I think it is very helpful to me. Taking exercise makes me healthier so that I won’t be ill very often. What’s more, I also get myself relaxed in different kinds of sports, and then I do the better job in my study in high spirit. By doing physical exercise, I’m becoming stronger and more confident than before. I think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day because people’s health is essential in modern life.
2.日记
?今天(4月15日)上午你去参加了英语角活动。请根据提示写一篇日记。
?简介：英语角成立于三年前，许多中学生参加，还有大学生和外国朋友。
?地点：家附近的公园。内容：练口语，谈感兴趣的事，交流学习英语的经验。
?感想：很…下决心…
?词汇：English corner, found, college students, foreigners, take part in, activity, experience, chance
exchange, widely, talk about, improve
?句型：which/ that + clause; It is … since…;as well as; practice doing;I think…，… after…;try one’s best to do…;be + done
范文1
?15th, April Fine
? Th is morning I went to the English corner which is in the park near my home. It is three years since it was founded. Many middle school students as well as college students and foreigners take part in the activity. People there practice speaking English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English Learning. I think it is a good chance for me to use what I have learnt in my English class. I felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best to learn English better, for it is so widely used in the world.
?范文2.
?April, 15Fine
? How interesting! I went to an English corner in a park near my home this morning. There were many students and foreign friends in the English corner. The English corner was founded three years ago. I think we can not only practice speaking English but also make a lot of foreign friends. We talked about interesting things and exchanged the experience of learning English with each other. I have improved my English since I became a member of the English corner.
3.The favorite subject
?我们在学校学习很多课程，如数学、语文、英语、体育…在这些课程当中我最喜欢…因为…在这门课中我学会了…
?词汇：subject, among, language, foreign culture, sound, improve, host, the Olympic Games, useful, top,
?句型：like… best，… because…；
not only… but also…
?how to do…，sound +adj
be different from，with one’s help
?It’s known…，must be…，make up mind to do sth.
范文1.
I am a middle school student. I study many subjects at school. There are Chinese, maths, English, PE and so on. Among them, I like English best, because in class I can not only learn how to use the language but also know some foreign culture. Sometimes they sound interesting, for they are quite different from ours. With the
作文训练集中营(题目)
俗话说，熟读唐诗三百首，不会做诗也会吟，英语写作也是如此。命题者为了让考生有话可写，必然会涉及中学生身边熟悉的生活，包括人物和事件。只要我们对这些内容的写作都能熟练掌握，相信在考场作文的时候必然会得心应手。
1.体育锻练(sports)
?作为一名初三的学生，我们每天进行体育锻炼，如做操、打篮球…因为运动能增强体质，减少疾病。运动使大脑休息，使复习效果更好。通过体育锻炼我…在今后我要…
?词汇：Junior Three, do sports, morning exercises, take exercise, health, healthy, relax, strong, necessary, kinds of
?句型：such as, so on, I think…, Doing…;so that…;become…
and …;It’s adj. for sb. to do sth.;… because…
范文1. As a Grade 3 student, we have sports every day, such as doing some exercise, playing basketball and so on. We do sports because it can not only make us strong and but also keep us healthy. It can also make us have a good rest and study better. So I will keep doing sports every day from now on.
范文2. As a middle school student of Junior Three, I do sports one or two hours a day, such as doing morning exercises, playing basketball, long-distance running and so on. I think it is very helpful to me. Taking exercise makes me healthier so that I won’t be ill very often. What’s more, I also get myself relaxed in different kinds of sports, and then I do the better job in my study in high spirit. By doing physical exercise, I’m becoming stronger and more confident than before. I think it is necessary for everyone to spend some time on sports every day
because people’s health is essential in modern life.
2.日记
?今天(4月15日)上午你去参加了英语角活动。请根据提示写一篇日记。
?简介：英语角成立于三年前，许多中学生参加，还有大学生和外国朋友。
?地点：家附近的公园。内容：练口语，谈感兴趣的事，交流学习英语的经验。
?感想：很…下决心…
?词汇：English corner, found, college students, foreigners, take part in, activity, experience, chance, exchange, widely, talk about, improve
?句型：which/ that + clause; It is … since…;as well as; practice doing;I think…，… after…;try one’s best to do…;be + done
范文1
?15th, April Fine
? This morning I went to the English corner which is in the park near my home. It is three years since it was founded. Many middle school students as well as college students and foreigners take part in the activity. People there practice speaking English by talking about something interesting. People also exchange the experience in English Learning. I think it is a good chance for me to use what I have learnt in my English class. I felt very cool after I got back home. I’ll try my best to learn English better, for it is so widely used in the world.
?范文2.
?April, 15Fine
? How interesting! I went to an English corner in a park near my home this morning. There were many students and foreign friends in the English corner. The English corner was founded three years ago. I think we can not only practice speaking English but also make a lot of foreign friends. We talked about interesting things and exchanged the experience of learning English with each other. I have improved my English since I became a member of the English corner.
3.The favorite subject
?我们在学校学习很多课程，如数学、语文、英语、体育…在这些课程当中我最喜欢…因为…在这门课中我学会了…
?词汇：subject, among, language, foreign culture, sound, improve, host, the Olympic Games, useful, top,
?句型：like… best，… because…；
not only… but also…
?how to do…，sound +adj
be different from，with one’s help
?It’s known…，must be…，make up mind to do sth.
范文1.
I am a middle school student. I study many subjects at school. There are Chinese, maths, English, PE and so on. Among them, I like English best, because in class I can not only learn how to use the language but also know some foreign culture. Sometimes they sound interesting, for they are quite different from ours. With the teachers’ help, my English has improved a lot. It’s known that Beijing is going to host the 2008 Olympic Games. At that time, English must be the most useful language in our city. I have made up my mind to learn English well and be the top student in English learning.王可
范文2.
?We can learn many subjects in our school, such as Chinese, English, physics, history and so on. Even though I like all the subjects, my favourite is history. History is so interesting that I will never forget it. It usually takes me a lot of time to read the books on history. From the books I have learnt about the development of human beings. I think history is the best of all the subjects.(肖宇)
4.The hobby groups
?你们学校有很多兴趣小组活动，你参加的是什么小组？请记叙一次你参加的小组活动，什么时间活动？在哪里？活动中做了什么？你的感受是什么？
?词汇：hobby groups, computer group, photograph group, calligraphy group, dancing group, join, member, start, interesting, knowledge,
?句型：There are many …in our school, such as…
? I’m a member of…，I join … because
? I’m interested in；not only… but also…
? I hope that…；I have made up my mind…
范文1.
There are a lot of hobby groups in our school. I am a member of the science group. Last year, the teacher asked me to grow some flowers and watch them. Then I should write a report about these flowers. I felt very excited about it. During that time, I was so busy with my flowers that I even forgot the time. I have become more and more interested in science, so I hope to be a scientist when I grow up.
范文2.
Our school has many hobby groups. I am a member of photograph group. We often go to the hills or lakes to take good photos. Last summer holiday, we went to the Great Wall. All of us took a lot of beautiful photos. We enjoyed ourselves there. I hope that we can go to Mount Emei next time
?5. my friend
?每个人都有自己的朋友，请把你最要好或最特殊的朋友介绍给大家。
?词汇：
?1. N. Friends, parents, teachers, classmates, family, school, relatives , happiness, sadness, generation gap, feelings, friendship, communication, teamwork
?2. V. make friends, understand encourage take good care of,e xpect, get on well with, play together, smile, trouble, talk with, quarrel with, help each other, discuss, argue, do well in enjoy oneself
?3. Adj. Happy, sad, important, lonely , helpful, necessary
?句式：
?1. I hope we can understand each other.
?2.It’s necessary to understand each other.
?3. No one can be successful only by himself.
?4. There are some sayings, “friendship is sunlight in the dark.” “If there
were no friendships in a city, it would become a desert.”
?5. Although we sometimes quarrel with each other, yet we get on well later.
?6. We should get on well with everyone around us.
?7. The more friends you get, the happier you will be.
?8. A friend can not only help you, but also bring you happiness.
?9. Everybody needs frien ds to talk with and get confidence from.
?10. Don’t argue, but discuss.
?11. People who refuse to consider others have few friends.
?12. We need to learn how to take care of other people.
?13. “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
?范文
? My bes t friend
? I have not only a lot of common friends, but also a special friend. He is my father. My father isn’t tall but he is very kind and lovely. He usually helps me with my maths and physics in the evening. At weekends he plays chess, cards with me. When I am in trouble. He always help me in time. I prefer my father to any other friend. I think he is not only a good father, but also one of my best friends. I love my father very much.
6.my pets
?现在，越来越多的人拥有宠物，比如，狗，猫，兔子，鱼等，动物已经成了我们的好朋友，他们为人们带来了很多的乐趣，你们家有宠物吗？谈谈你的看法
词汇：
?1.N. pet, dog, cat, fish, feather, nose, fur, playmate, friend
?2. V. bark, keep pets, take time, cost money, bring troubles, bring a lot of fun, run, feed on, relax, play with sb
?3. Adj. Lovely, nuaghty, small, white, funny
?句式：
?1. Today more and more people have kept animals for pets.
?2. Even though keeping a pet takes time and costs money,
I think pets will bring us a lot of fun.
3.It is true to say dogs are man’s best friends
?4. His two eyes are just like two big lamps both big and bright
?5. His noses are like a button next to the eyes.
?6. What a lovely dog!
?.7.It is necessary for a child to have a pet to play with because they are lonely sometimes.
?8.I like to play with my pet after I finish my ho mework
?9. I often take a walk with my pet after supper.
?10.When I am unhappy, I like to talk with my dags
范文
?Today more and more people keep animals for pets, like dogs, cats, rabbits, birds, fish, and so on. Some people think that animals often make rooms dirty and smelly. Even though keeping a pet takes time and costs money. I think pets will bring us a lot of fun.
?Three years ago my uncle gave me a dog, a naughty dog. I liked it very much. The dog was about one year old. I called him TaoTao. His two eyes are just like big lamps, both big and bright. He has long and white hair which makes him look like a white ball. His nose is like a button next to the eyes. He has a cute look. When we have meal he looks at us and barks at us. He seems to sa y:” why don’t you give me something to eat?”
?What a lovely dog! I like it very much!
7.学英语
现在有很多人都在学习英语，因为人们认为英文很重要。你认为学好应为的方法是什么？你是怎样学习英文的？
?词汇：
?N. a foreign language, a second language, an international language, spoken English, English-speaking countries, Olympic games, opening up polity ability, a good future, income, salary, entry into WTO, future study, information age, one of the subjects, in the modern world, opportunities, required courses, a large number of, volunteer, success,
?V. mak e a contribution to, be used by, speck to, talk with, secure, study hard, understand, encourage sb. to do, try one’s best, go abroad, graduate from, learn from, put one’s heard into, give up, be interested in, communicate, practice speaking, come true, catch up with, get ready for,
?Adj. important, difficult, useful, interesting, widely, easy, hard, popular, necessary, popular,
?句式
?1 There’s nothing difficult if you put your heart into it
?2 I think it is important and necessary for everyone to lea rn english.
?3 The better English you speak the more chances you will get
?4. More and more people prefer to learn English rather than learn the other languages
?5. China’s entry into WTO encourages more people to learn…
?6. learning English well i s good for our future
?7. if you are good at English you can make a contribution to …. 8.They want to learn English well so that they can go to a good high school.
?9. There are more and more people learning English.
?范文
There are a lot of people learning English in china. Why do people learn English in china? Because they think it is very useful. Beijing’s successful bid for the 2008 Olympic Games encourages more people to learn English. How can we learn English well? At first, I try to speak as much as I can. I speak English with my classmates and teachers in school. Secondly, I listen to English as often as possible in and out of class and write down the important things the teacher teaches in class. Thirdly, at night I like to listen to the English songs at home. At last, I go over my lessons and do a lot of practice after class. Fourthly, it is also important to remember the English words .I think if we do like this, we can learn English well. In fact, there is no good and easy way to learn English well. But there is nothing difficult if we put our heart into it.
?8. one child policy
?中国人口现已达13亿，造成了许多不良后果。降低人口数量势在必行。独生子女的政策使每个家庭更重视孩子的健康和教育。学会与他人交流很必要…
?词汇
?family, child, policy, brothers and sisters, population, solve, problem, large, allow, slow down, feel lonely, challenge, necessary, traffic, water problem, chance, take care of, basic, save, energy, improve, economy, food, advantage, carry out, education, environment, society, develop, sooner or later, the standard of living, competition, spoil, comfortable, get on well with
?句式
?1. Friends are important to a person who is the only child of his family, for he has no brothers or sisters.
?2. China has the largest population in the world.
?3. We will have smaller families with fewer, but healthier children.
?4. One Child Policy has made a contribution to improving the people’s quality.
?5. We should find out the best way to solve the population problem.
?6. What can be done to slow down the population of China?
?7. Other are worrying about “one child” don’t know how to get on well with others.
?8. We feel lonely because we have no brothers or sisters to talk with at home.
?9. It’s very difficult to find a job now.
?10. China is still a developing country.
?11. More ene rgy will be saved if there is fewer people.
?12. There are so many people in China, so we have to work harder and harder, or we will have no chance.
?范文
?The population of China is 1.3 billion now. The large population has made many bad results, for example, the environment is becoming worse and worse. So to reduce the population is urgent. In China almost every family has only one child, in this way-China’s One Child Policy, the government has controlled the growth of the population.
?In a family o f three-mother, father and the child, the child is usually brought up patiently. The parents let him have good education and want him to be a useful person to the society when he grows up. As the child has no brothers or sisters, he must be trained to get on well with other people, such as his classmates, teachers, other family members etc. He has to get used to communicating with others. Usually, I think it is hard to us -“One Child”, yet I never give up.
?Most of the developed countries have a small pop ulation each. I am sure the One Child Policy will bring many advantages to China.
9. travelling
?你喜欢旅游吗？你的上一次旅游去了哪里？都看到了什么？你们玩得愉快吗？请谈谈你的想法。
词汇：holiday travel mobilephone Go outings happy
句式：
1.I like … very much.
https://www.doczj.com/doc/ea13985010.html,st summer, I went to …with whom
3.we went to… by bus ( train, car,bike..)
4.We set off at (place)… at (time)…
5.It took sb. Some time to get there
6.We took a lot of pictures there
7.We had a good time there( enjoyed ourselves very much)
8.It’s such an exciting… that I w ill never forget it.
?范文：
? Last week I went to mount Emei in Sichuan province with my family. Early in the morning, we took a taxi to Beijing West Railway Station. The station was very lively.
? Half an hour later, we got on the train. On the train, we had a lot of fun. After 26 hours, we reached Sichuan. There, we took many photos and had a goodtime. 5 days later, we came back to the Beijing. Even though my travel seemed really short, but my memory of the pleasant trip will last long.
初三下英语作文合集 作文1：写一篇日记 假定你是李明，请你根据下面表格中的汉语提示，用英语写一篇日记，记述你5月30日参加的一次郊游活动，并简要谈谈你的感受。 写作要求: 1.日记必须要点齐全，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 3.词数80左右，已给出的词句不计入总词数。 参考词汇 outing; arrive; go boating; comfortable; return May 30th Today I went for a pleasant outing with my friends... 范文： Today I went for a pleasant outing with my friends. We went to Li Lake. It is about ten kilometers away from my home. We went there by bike. We started at 9:00 and arrived there at 10:00 in the morning. We went boating in the lake first, and then we went fishing by the lake. In the afternoon, we went swimming in a swimming pool beside the lake. We felt relaxed and comfortable in the water. At 5:30 in the afternoon, we returned together. We all had a good time for our outing. 作文2：做一个关于电话礼仪的演讲 学生会将要邀请Mr. Black做一个关于电话礼仪的演讲。请根据下列内容，写一个不少于90词的通知，不包括所给的开头和结尾。 Name of the talk: Good telephone manners Time: 2 p.m., May 13 Place: The school hall Content: Some important rules 参考词汇: answer a phone as soon as possible; say sorry for delays; keep your voice down; speak naturally; say good-bye before hanging up Hello, everyone,
公开课教学设计： 教材版本外语教学与研究出版社 授课班级八年级课型中考复习写作课 课题Travel 1.整体设计思路、指导依据说明 本节课依据课程标准,注重对学生中考复习课上如何更好地写作，进行有针对性地复习，方法点播，引领提升，查漏补缺，梳理归纳。引导学生对所学话题知识进行理解内化及运用（写作）。从而获得自信心和可持续发展的能力并逐渐形成自主高效率的学习策略。 2.教学背景分析 教学内容分析：教学话题为Travel，课型为中考复习写作课。话题涉及外研版初中英语12个Modules，随着社会发展和人们生活水平提高，旅行逐渐成为人们生活的重要组成部分， 而且假期旅行不仅是中学生感兴趣的话题之一，也是非常有意义的话题：旅行可以使人们视 野开阔，增长见识，认识大自然，了解不同的风俗习惯。本堂课以旅行为话题，试图在学生 面前打开一扇窗户，让他们不仅仅停留在游山玩水式的旅游，而是更要关注旅游还可以有文 化和学习的本质。 2 要注意的是，旅游涉及的子话题很广，若面面俱到，一堂课的容量就 过大，因此需要教师充分分析教材，整合资源，选取角度，作为本堂课的主线。3本堂课选取的角度是旅行经历，侧重旅行经历中的旅行活动与旅行时的感受，因此教师在设计课时， 应该围绕这两方面展开词汇、句型、篇章结构的复习。而旅行活动涉及的词汇主要是一些为
了玩，锻炼和学习而展开的活动的单词或短语；旅行感受主要是积极的感受和消极的感受方 面的词汇，当然，还应注意ing形容词和ed形容词的正确使用。由于主线是过去的旅行经历，因此旅行活动的句子应当尤其注意动词的时态-过去时态；表达感受的句型既可以是be+形容词的结构，也可以是feel+形容词的结构等。4写过去的旅行经历，提升写作立意的是 旅行中有意义的活动，如旅行时为了增长知识、开阔视野的活动，因此，教师应有意识培养 学生在旅行中学的意识。 5 中考复习写作课应教会学生学会复习，因此，总结复习方法和复 习策略很重要，这应该是在师生共同努力下完成的，包括教师关于如何更好地写作进行的方 法点拨，以及学生可以通过写作档案卡的方式总结优势与不足。 学生情况分析：进入初三，写作容易成为学生的学习瓶颈，因此教师应针对这一现象激发学 生的学习兴趣，并通过教学活动的设计实现分层教学，设计出适合各层次学生的活动，并注 重学生的过程性评价。 3.教学目标（含知识目标、技能目标、情感目标） 知识目标：Enable the Ss to review some key vocabulary( excited, fantastic, tired, terrible), phrases(visit museum, go to church, take photos...) and sentence patterns(I felt..., I travelled to...). 技能目标: Enable the Ss to master the strategies and skills of writing revision-how to make our composition better, such as brainstorming, categorizing for vocabulary, self-check, peer-revising and assessment, etc . 情感目标: Enable the Ss not only to enjoy travel and the fun it brings to us, but also realize that travel can help us learn through some activities.
Topic：How to Introduce a Place Type：Writing Teaching objectives:1.To be able to describe a place in English. 2.To be able to use complex and compound sentences to polish the writing . 3.To be clearer about how to organize a passage. Important points 1.Make good use of the expressions and sentences patens describing a place. 2.Make the student to be familiar with how to introduce different aspects of a place. difficult points 1. How to describe a place using coherent sentences . methods Induction and deduction period 1 Teaching procedures Step 1 Warming up Play a guess game” Where is it ?” Guessing 1 With a population of about 1.3 billion, “? ”has the largest number of population in the world at present. Guessing 2 “?” is the second largest country in the world. It has an area of over 9.9 million square kilometers and a population of over 30 million. Guessing 3 ? , the largest island in China, lies in the west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea surrounding its southwest. Step 2 Look and Read Read a passage about Taiwan Island, T let the Ss find good sentences and learn how to write about a place. Put sentence patterns into the stdudents ’mind .(Keys: China, Canada. Taiwan Islan) ①.Taiwan Island, the largest island in China, lies in the west of the Pacific Ocean, with the East Sea on the north and the South Sea surrounding its southwest. ②.Taiwan covers a total area of about 46,000 square kilometers with a population of over 20,000,000. ③.It’s a place abundant in natural resources and bananas, rice, tea and other agricultural products are well-known both at home and abroad. ④The scenery is so beautiful and the climate is so pleasant that tourists come in large numbers for a visit from all over the world. ⑤Alishan National Scenic Area, lying in the northeast of Jiayi county on
1 朋友会给你带来欢乐，朋友能解除你学习生活的烦恼，真正的朋友是患难与共的，您的朋友如何？请你以‘‘My Good Friend’’为题写一篇英语短文。 提示：1Who is your good friends? 2 Why is he/ she your friend? 3.What kind of qualities does he /she have? 要求：1。语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2。文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3。词数：60-80。 My good friend . Everyone has got good friends.Who is your friends?Who is your true friends?Let’s tell you my best friend Tommy. Tommy is a grade seven student .He’s one year older than than me,but both of us are in the same class.Tommy is taller than me ,he always wears a pair of glasses .We live in the same block.We usually go to school together.After school ,we do our homework and play games together.Tommy is very kind to other people ,He is also helpful and is ready to help people..Sometimes I’m angry and he often comes to me and make me happy,but he never says a bad word about me.I like to share things with him. That is my good friend ,and I’m always happy to be with him. 2 去看电影是人们休闲的好方式。它既丰富了人们的业余生活，有开阔人们的视野。 请你以I like seeing a film a lot.为题写一篇幅英语短文。 提示；1。Why do you like seeing a film? 2.What’s your reason for seeing a film? 要求：1。语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2。文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称 3.80 个词左右。 I Like Seeing Film a Lot Lots of people like seeing films ,so do I. As a middle school student,I’m busy with my lessons every day .So I usually go to a movie on the weekend. Seeing a film is not just for fun ,but it’s a good reaction,There are many different kind of films ,such as cartoon ,love story, science fiction ...I enjoy seeing science fiction and funny films. The movies can give me more new knowledge and I can learn much from them.My parents also like movies .They ask me to relax by watching a movie on weekends. Sometimes we all go to see a new film in the movie theater.We feel very nice. 3.假如某英语报社的“未来职业板块正在征稿。请你以I Want to Be a Teacher 为题,写一篇英语短文，参加征稿活动。 提示；1。W hat would you do if you become a teacher? 2.How will you get along well with them? 要求：1。语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2。文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3。词数：60-80。 I Want to Be a Teacher I want to be a teacher when I grow up .If I become a teacher , I’ll care for both my students’study and life .I’ll be strict with them and teach them how to study .In class,I’ll try my best to teach them well.I’ll play with them after class. I’m sure I’ll be their good friend and a good teacher.I believe there is nothing difficult if you put your heart into it. Do you believe me ?
初中英语写作课教案 书面表达是写的一种途径，是英语交际的重要组成部分。初中阶段对于英语写作的要求，实际上是“有指导的写作”(Guided Writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格)，让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思想，以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。客观地说，书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点，也是学生应试的一个难点。 从中考英语试卷的抽样调查情况来看，英语写作是得分最为薄弱的一个题项，究其原因，一是学生写作练习的时间少，二是教师平时缺乏对学生进行系统的写作知识的指导。（比如，如何用词、句、组段、谋篇等）。这些原因造成了学生从最初不会写盲目写到不愿写。惧怕写，直至最后拒绝写的恶性循环。针对这一现象，我进行了一次如何提高学生写作能力的课堂实践。写作的材料取自于教材的“Reading and writing”。教师旨在通过与学生谈论他们熟悉的话题搜索学生头脑中有关朋友的消息，通过阅读两则e-pal广告，获取e-pals的一些信息，指导如何写e-mail，从而达到给e-pals写信的目的。 二、教学过程。 1．Warm-up活动：通过听一首英语歌：“The more we get together, the happier we’ll be.”目的是活跃气氛，为引出今天的话题做准备。 2．Revision①使用大脑风暴法（brainstorm）让学生想出一些和friends有关的单词短语和句子，目的是激活学生头脑中和写作话题make friends相关的东西，如想法、概念、形象等酝酿写作的思路，供拟稿阶段（drafting stage）选择有写的价值和意义的东西时参考。]②根据下列所给提示介绍你的朋友（四人一小组活动）。⑴Name and age.⑵Where he / she comes from subject?⑶What he is?⑷What his / her friend?⑸looks（外貌）⑹personality （性格）⑺His / Her dream⑻…… 3．Pre-reading通过提问，How can you know your friends, if you haven’t seen each other for a long time?联系朋友有很多方法，但是One of the best ways is sending e-mails to them. Do you know why?过渡今天话题的材料，快速看完两则e-pal广告，找出答案。 4．While-reading，读两则广告，了解Mary和Jack完成表格Name Age Hobbies Looks Personality E-mail added Wish Where she… 5．Post-reading引导学生讨论：Do you like to make e-pals with Mary or Jack? Why?当大部分学生都持肯定观点时进一步思索，What will you write in you e-mail to them?为下面事实写作埋下伏笔，提供铺垫。 6．While-Writing.教会学生正确使用e-mail格式，同时提供关于朋友和友谊的一些精彩句子，为学生写作提供素材。 7．Post-writing.提供写作标准 要求学生根据这个标准，修改自己的e-mail. 1. Do you use the tense (时态)，spelling(拼写)，punctuation (标点)，capitalization(大写字母)correctly? 2. Is your e-mail complete(完整的)? 3.Is your e-mail coherently(连贯地)written? 4.Can you describe yourself in a concise（简洁的）way? 5.Are there any complex sentences （复合句）in your e-mail? 目的是通过自改，有助于他们提高书面表达中的语言准确性，提高了学生通过自己独立思考，来解决问题的能力。 8．Share the writing. 点评两篇学生习作，选自一位基础较好的同学和一位基础一般的同学的作文。教师根据上
初三英语写作公开课课教学设计 双沙中学李育新 2011.6.2 课型：专题复习课 教学内容：初三英语书面表达专题复习 教学目标： 1.指导学生掌握书面表达语篇结构的组织技巧。 2.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 3.培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲的能力。 4. 指导学生小组合作评改学生习作。 教学重点：1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力 教学难点：1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力讨论法 教学方法：自主学习，合作学习 教学辅助手段：电脑（或实物投影仪） 学情分析： 1. 书面表达是写的一种途径，是英语交际的重要组成部分。初中阶段对于英语写作的要求，实际上是“有指导的写作”(Guided Writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格)，让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思想，以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。客观地说，书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点，也是学生应试的一个难点。 从中考英语试卷的抽样调查情况来看，英语写作是得分最为薄弱的一个题项。究其原因，一是学生写作练习的时间少，二是教师平时缺乏对学生进行系统的写作知识的指导。（比如，如何用词、句、组段、谋篇等）。这些原因造成了学生从最初不会写盲目写到不愿写。惧怕写，直至最后拒绝写的恶性循环。 2. 学生分析我校学生生源较差，学生英语学习两级分化严重，因此尽管经过3年的学习与训练，仍有相当一部分学生作文得分在6-7分之间甚至更低。书面表达中式英语较多，连贯性较差。很多学生对书面表达中快速构思和罗列提纲能力较差。本堂课希望通过指导、帮助提高学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性,帮助学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲能力。 二、教学流程设计
水污染Water Pollution Everybody knows that there is serious problem of water pollution on the earth. Yes, water pollution is increasing. Look! The water in the river is getting dirtier and dirtier. Most of fish in the water have died, and we can’t swim in the water. My grandfather says, when he was very little, the water in the river was very clean. He often swam in the river with his friends. That was before, but now we can’t see such clean rivers. Let’s protect the water from pollution, be cause we can’t live without water. The water is really important to us all. 2.元旦英语作文（初中） January 1st is New Year's Day. It's a great day for all the people throughout the world. As the saying goes, "A good beginning is half the battle". So, many people go all out to celebrate the important day. On that day, I went to the Book City with my classmates. We bought a lot of useful reference books and interesting story books. I believe "Knowledge is power". I hope I can learn a lot from these books and improve my study. In the evening, my family had a big dinner party. All the members in my family wished me a good luck in the new year. 3.关于时间的英语作文初中英语作文 We often hear the saying"Time is money."But I think time is much more precious than money.Because If we lost time, we can't find it.But We can try to woke harder to get more money.No matter whatever you do ,you can not get lost time back. "Time flies.time and tides wait for no men".You can see how important time is.Lunxun had said"I spent the time on my work while others are havig coffee."We must make good use of our time,especially for our students,we shouldn't waste time in playing games and the like. 4.初中英语作文My friend (我的朋友) I have many friends. One of them is my classmate Ma Hua.He is a League member and one of the best students in my class.He is fond of English and good at it. He often practises reading aloud. So he has a good pronunciation. He is always ready to help others. With his help I have made great progress. I have made up my mind to catch up with him and to join the League in the near future. 5.初中英语作文水 Water is very important to us. If you don’t have water for three days, you will die. We can use water for flowers, swimming, washing and many different things. We use it to cook, make electricity, put out fires and so on. We use millions of liters of water every day. Do you know how does the water come to your home? It travels through water pipes. Some are long and wide but some are short and narrow. Then the water travels through the water pipes to the reservoirs. Then it travels through the water pipes to the river and to the special factories (we call water plants) that purify the water. When the water is purified, we can drink it. Please don’t leave garbage in the water on which we line, and keep the water clean.
初三英语复习写作课模式 摘要：本文分析了中考英语中写作题的答题现状，提出初三复习阶段，教师要 确立正确的英语写作教学观念，明确英语写作知识与技能的关系，探索促进英语 写作知识与技能学习和训练的有效途径，改变中学英语写作教学的薄弱状况。 关键词：写作教学；知识铺垫；技能训练；写作能力 英语写作是一种综合性的思维活动，既具有知识形态特点，又具有学习手段特征。写作具有发展学生思维能力和表达能力的独特作用，也是衡量教学效果的标准之一。写作是中学生学 习英语应掌握的一项基本技能，它要求学生有扎实的语言基本功，具备一定的审题能力、想 象能力、表达能力和评价能力等。《英语课程标准》也对学生的写作提出了一定的要求，九 年级学生应达到五级标准：“能独立起草短文、短信等，能简单描述人物或事件，能根据所给图示或表格写出简单的段落或操作说明。”然而从近几年的中考情况来看，学生写作题得分率很低，江西省中考英语写作题平均得分近几年都在4~6分(总分15分)，与《英语课程标准》 前言中“发展学生综合语言运用能力”的要求还有一定的差距。英语写作在中考复习中已经成 为令师生都感到头痛的问题。 一、学生在考试中写作题失分的原因 1.考生没有养成良好的审题习惯，未能从话题、文体、要点、人称及时态等方面入手进行审 题 中学阶段要求学生掌握的文体主要有说明文、记叙文、议论文和应用文，其中应用文又包括 通知、请假条、书信和电子邮件等，由于一些学生忽视了各种体裁的写作特点，从而导致文 章体裁格式不正确，如：将写信的日期写在信末；写请假条不写署名等。 学生写作之前没有判断整篇文章主要用哪种时态，常出现该用一般现在时的句子，用了一般 过去时；而该用将来时的句子，用了完成时。或者时态构成表达错误，经常出现这样的句子：I'm go to school by bike. He told some children that there are some places of interest in Beijing. 2.考生没有养成良好的写作习惯，写作过程随意，或没有分配好写作时间 在做书面表达的过程中，有的学生一拿到考题慌慌张张开始写，在写作之前没有构思好先写 什么后写什么，哪些内容应该详写，哪些内容应该略写，而是一边写一边构思，从而导致整 篇文章逻辑不清，层次感不强，不知所云。 3.考生词汇贫乏，不能正确运用英语的基本句型进行准确而得体的表达 由于部分学生平时不注意记忆单词，基础知识掌握不牢固，所以在文章中常出现单词拼写错误。另外，由于我们教师对运用基础知识的训练不够，对基本句型的复习不够系统，导致学 生常常按汉语的词序来翻译句子，在学生的作文中常常见到这样的句子： You can by bus. In china have different places of interest. In autumn is best season for traveling.有些学生虽然在词汇运用书面表达方面能够达到基本要求，但由于句子之间没有添加适当的衔接成分，使句子之 间和文段之间缺乏必要的过渡和连贯，影响了信息的传递和表达效果。 尽管学生在写作上有着很大的缺陷，但在现实教学中，很多教师不够重视写作训练，原因有二：(1)复习阶段课时紧，教师认为很难取得好的效果，所以思想上不重视，总是把写作教学 置于听力、阅读、语法之后。(2)不好操作，很多教师上写作课就是把一个作文题拿出来，带 领学生审题，然后让他们自己课后写，交上来批改后，班上点评几句就给出范文，让学生抄。初三本身任务重，结果是评语没有多少学生认真看，范文也没多少人背。或是背了这篇，换 过一篇文章又不知如何下笔。因此，教师要确立正确的英语写作教学观念，明确英语写作知 识与技能的关系，探索促进英语写作知识与技能学习和训练的有效途径，改变中学英语写作 教学的薄弱状况。 二、促进英语写作知识与技能学习和训练的有效途径 笔者认为在初三复习阶段，应对初中教材进行整合，以话题为主线进行写作训练。 1.话题教学，写作铺垫 例如，可以以健康为话题，把八年级上册(Units1-4)中的疾病、运动、饮食几个内容整合在一起。首先复习关于疾病的词句，然后引出怎样抵抗疾病，保持健康，把运动、饮食、健康的 生活方式糅合进去，以话题为主线展开听说读写各种训练，在学生积累足够的词汇、句型后
初中英语公开课优秀教案范文 双沙中学李育新 011.6.2 课型：专题复习课 教学内容：初三英语书面表达专题复习 教学目标： 1.指导学生掌握书面表达语篇结构的组织技巧。 2.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 3.培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲的能力。. 指导学生小组合作评改学生习作。 教学重点： 1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力 教学难点：1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力讨论法 教学方法：自主学习，合作学习 教学辅助手段：电脑 学情分析： 1. 书面表达是写的一种途径，是英语交际的重要组成
部分。初中阶段对于英语写作的要求，实际上是“有指导的写作”。它通过提供情景，让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思想，以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。客观地说，书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点，也是学生应试的一个难点。 从中考英语试卷的抽样调查情况来看，英语写作是得分最为薄弱的一个题项。究其原因，一是学生写作练习的时间少，二是教师平时缺乏对学生进行系统的写作知识的指导。。这些原因造成了学生从最初不会写盲目写到不愿写。惧怕写，直至最后拒绝写的恶性循环。 2. 学生分析我校学生生源较差，学生英语学习两级分化严重，因此尽管经过3年的学习与训练，仍有相当一部分学生作文得分在6-7分之间甚至更低。书面表达中式英语较多，连贯性较差。很多学生对书面表达中快速构思和罗列提纲能力较差。本堂课希望通过指导、帮助提高学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性,帮助学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲能力。 二、教学流程设计 课后反思： 本节课从提问学生写作中最大的困惑入手，引出本节课的主要教学目标，在写作中学会构思和使用连词。通过比较两篇学生的英语习作，让学生认识到连词在英语写作中的
1.沉迷网络游戏 题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up, concentrate on, be (become)interested in ★范文Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2.怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 要求：1. 词数：80—100词(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2. 字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 ★范文How to learn English well
1、书面表达 请以“My Life in the Future”为题，根据以下提示写一篇英语短文。 要求：⑴.根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文。词数不少于60个； ⑵．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。 My Life in the Future In the future，I think I'll be a teacher. As a teacher，I'll meet lots of interesting kids.What's more，I will open my students' eyes to outside world and give them a good start in life. I think I will live in Beijing.Because I went to Beijing last year，and I fell in love with it.And I think I will live in a big house with my parents，because I don't like living alone. I love playing basketball.I want to be a professional basketball player.So in the future，I will play basketball every day. 2、随着网络的发展，如今"网购"也随之流行，越来越多的中学生也加入到网购的群体当中．某校的学生会就"网购"这一热点问题作了问卷调查，观点如下： 优点： （1）不需要出门，节约时间，不会劳累； （2）商品更多，可以选择更多类型的商品； （3）东西通常更便宜． 缺点： （1）只看到图片，看不到商品； （2）容易购买到无用的或不良的东西． 请根据以上的提示要点，以"Shopping Online"为题写一篇英语短文．（短文的开头 和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．） 提示词语：without，save，choose，cheap，goods （商品），useless （无用的）写作要求： （1）短文必须包括所给的提示要点和提示词，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥．（2）不能出现真实的人名或校名． Shopping Online With the development of the Internet，many people like shopping online．Obviously，there are some advantages of shopping online．Firstly，we needn't to go outside for shopping，which make us tired．Secondly，there are many more goods online and we can choose the goods we like．Thirdly，the last but not the least，the goods online are cheaper than in the true shop．However，just like every corn has two sides online shopping has its side effects．For example，you cannot see and touch the goods before you receive it．Besides ，some of the online goods are useless． In a word，we should think it over when shopping online．
初三英语作文三篇 英语作文，是指用英语针对某一内容写出一篇文章，是英语考试最常见的一种题目类型，英语作文要求阅读、写作比较高，也是考生最容易失分的题型。以下是为大家精心整理的初三英语作文三篇，供大家参考。 篇一 Different countries have different teaching aims and teaching ways. It s well known that Chinese education is exam-oriented education in the past. Obviously, exam-oriented education has some disadvantages, like the disconnection between theory and practice that renders students with high scores have low abilities. So, our country decide to change exam-oriented education to quality education. Quality education is focus on the development in an all-around way. Under this kind of education system, students will study easier and get improvement for all sides. 不同的国家有不同的教学目标和教学方法。众所周知，过去中国的教育是应试教育。显然，应试教育存在一些弊端，如理论和实际脱节，使学生高分低能。因此，我国决定把应试教育转向素质教育。素质教育是以全面发展为重点。在这样的教育体制下，学生学习将会更轻松，方方面面都会得到提高。 篇二 There are four seasons in a year. The spring, summer, autumn and winter. I think spring is the most beautiful season. In the spring, the flowers are blossoming, the grass is green and the birds start to sing. The temperature in the spring is not too cold or too hot. We can go on an excursion during the spring. We can fly kites and enjoy the sunshine. I think spring is the best season ever! 【参考翻译】 一年有四个季节：春天、夏天、秋天和冬天。我认为春天是最美丽的季节。在春天，鲜花开放，草地变绿，小鸟也开始歌唱。春天的温度不冷不热，我们可以去春游，去放风筝，去享受阳光。我认为春天是最棒的季节。 篇三