第十二讲 满分作文怎样
——三步作文法
[典例研析] [示例] (2016·全国卷乙)假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教Ms Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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第一步：依体裁 谋篇章(结构对 第一关) 体裁
应用文 人称 第一人称 时态 一般现在时 内容 写信求助外教帮助修改所附材料的文字和格式
段落 第一段：写信目的
第二段：求助原因， 求助外教修改所附材料的文字和格式
第三段：表达期待
第二步：列要点 选句式(要点全 及格线)
要点一：我是二班李华， 是你的学生。 我写信向你求助。
I’m one of your students.I’m Li Hua from Class Two.I’m writing to ask you for help.
要点二：今年暑假我想去一家外资公司兼职。
This summer I intend to take up a part -time job in a foreign capital company.
要点三：申请书和个人简历已完成， 真心地希望老师帮忙修改。
My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish them.
要点四：修改内容
You can help add some contents and correct some mistakes and format.
要点五：表达期望
I would appreciate it if you could do me a favor.
Looking forward to your early reply.
第三步：扣主题 拓展句(句式美 优秀分)
要点一：升级句式(名词作同位语)
I’m one of your students , Li hua from Class Two.I’m writing to ask you for help.
要点二拓展：今年暑假去一家外资公司兼职及做兼职的意义(非限制性定语从句)
This summer I intend to take up a part -time job in a foreign capital company , through which I
would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet my new friends．要点三拓展：修改内容(Firstly…Secondly…Lastly…)
Firstly, I’m wondering if you can help add some contents.Secondly, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct https://www.doczj.com/doc/c7264863.html,stly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.
[现场阅卷·作文升格]
该生习作为四档作文，得分为18分。能覆盖所有内容要点；大部分句子基本正确，可以适当增加复合句的使用；文章词汇表达基本正确，希望能更多使用一些高级词汇；衔接成分太少，可以适当添加一些过渡词。
1.第二句experiences改为experience。
2.第六、七句可升级v.-ing作状语：I’m writing you a letter, hoping to get your guide and suggestions.。
3.文章句子可以适当加入过渡词：what is more, worse still, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, as well as, additionally等。例如第二段的3、4句之间最好加Worse still。
五档作文
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I’m one of your students, Li Hua from Class Two.I’m writing to ask for your help.
This summer I intend to take up a part-time job in a foreign capital company, through which I would like to broaden my horizons, gain some working experience and meet new friends.My application and resume have been prepared and I sincerely hope you can help me polish
them.Firstly, I’m wondering if you can help add some contents.Besides, if there are some mistakes in them, I hope you can help correct https://www.doczj.com/doc/c7264863.html,stly, I attach some materials whose format had better be changed and hope you can help.
I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to do so much for me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。 请按下列要求用英语写一篇100－120个词的短文： 1. 针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法； 2. 举例说明理由。注意：短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。 （passage 1） In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” And, I am totally for it. Affected by many factors, such as surroundings, education background, living conditions and some other things, tomorrow is unknown to us. But that your future is in your hand is already known. So there is no doubt that you are the only master of your future. A 25-year-old young man, who lost his arms at an early age, won the Chinese Talent by playing the piano with his feet. Though disabled, he didn’t abandon himself to despair. On the contrary, he devoted all his energy to piano learning. Thanks to his hard work and determination, he can play it as well as normal people now. And I think he is a real strong man who has brightened his own future. （passage 2） In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” As far as I’m concerned, I completely agree with the view. Of course, our future depends on many things such as our living environment, opportunities, luck, others’ help and etc. But it is we ourselves that determine our future. Our positive attitude, our determination, our confidence and our sense of discipline are the keys to our future. Madame Curie was a good example to us. In her times, women were not admitted to university in her motherland, Poland, so she was forced to leave her homeland and studied in France. She often said: we should believe every one of us can do something and above all we should believe in ourselves. It was her confidence that made her discover radium and later win the Nobel Prize. So I firmly hold the belief that our future is in our hands.
2002年高考英语满分作文（十篇） 作文题目 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。 2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear Editor． I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entranc e fee should be charged for parks． 满分作文（一） Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entra nce fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fe e do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where th e public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If a n entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a g ate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us school mates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. T he money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buy ing some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protec t a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 满分作文（二） Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entranc e fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entr ance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public t o go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be buil t for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred thin k that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price o f the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used t
2018年高考英语作文全总结及满分作文范例 1.2018年新课标全国卷I 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1．到达时间； 2．合适的礼物； 3．餐桌礼仪。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________ 【试题分析】 书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性，给予考生畅所欲言的空间，摆脱单一方法，唯一答案的思维模式，在展示多彩思维活动的同时，真正考查了考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力，让考生感受英语学习的趣味与魅力，突出英语学科的独有特征。 2018年全国卷I书面表达体裁为应用文电子邮件，内容为回复外国朋友Terry的邮件，向其介绍在中国家庭做客方面的相关习俗。要求文中涵盖试题给出的三方面内容要点，即到达时间、合适的礼物和餐桌礼仪。该题型和内容设计紧密联系考生实际，但是，餐桌礼仪这个普通得再普通不过的日常小节反而在生活中被很多中学生忽略了。如果没有跨文化对比凝练出的思维品格和文化素养的意识，学生很难在短时间内写出中国老百姓的餐桌礼仪文化。例如受邀赴宴客人可以准时到达但切忌过早到达。外地客人所带礼物常见为能体现客人当地特色的物品。但注意，传统的中国人收到礼物后一般不会当着客人的面打开。中国餐桌为圆桌，正对门的位置为上座，一般为长者位置。中国人特别尊敬
必修一Unit 1Friendship Ⅰ.常考单词必背 1．upset adj.心烦意乱的；不安的；不适的vt.(upset，upset) 使不安；使心烦；打翻，碰倒；打乱 She was upset about losing her job. 她正为失去工作而心烦意乱。 Losing the ring upset her very much. 遗失戒指使她很心烦意乱。 [快速闪记] be upset about/over/at sth 为某事心烦 upset oneself about sth 为某事而烦恼 2．ignore vt.不理睬；忽视 Either she didn't see me wave or she ignored me on purpose.要么她没看见我招手，要么就是故意不理我。 [快速闪记] ignorant adj.不了解的，无知的 ignorance n．不了解，无知 3．concern vt.(使)担忧；涉及；关系到n．担心；关注；(利害)关系 The accident was concerned with the bus driver. 这次事故与公交车司机有关。 There is some cause for concern but no need for alarm. 是有点令人忧虑，但不必惊慌。 [快速闪记] concerned adj.担心的；关注的 be concerned about/for关心；担忧；挂念
be concerned with牵涉到……，与……有关 as/so far as...be concerned关于；至于；就……而言 4．power n．能力；力量；权力 The power was cut off and the street was entirely in darkness.断电后街道完全陷入了黑暗。 She was the one who had the power to hire or fire people.有权雇用或解雇人的是她。[快速闪记] (1)come to power上台，当权，表示动作，不能和一段时间连用。 (2)be in power当权，执政，表示状态，可以和一段时间连用。 (3)have the power to do sth 具有做某事的能力、权力 beyond/out of one's power某人力所不能及 5．settle vi.安家；定居；停留vt.使定居；安排；解决 They calmed down and settled their problem soon. 他们镇静下来并很快把问题解决了。 Mr.Wang settled down in America soon after he got there.王先生到美国后不久就定居下来了。 [快速闪记] (1)settle down舒适地坐下；安静下来；定居下来 settle down to sth/doing sth开始认真对待某事；定下心来做某事 (2)settlement n．解决；协议 6．suffer vt.& vi.遭受；忍受；经历 We'll suffer hunger one day if we don't care about the farmland.如果我们不关注农田，将来我们会挨饿的。 [快速闪记] suffering n．痛苦；苦难sufferer n．患病者；受难者 7．pack vi.& vt.捆扎；包装；打行李n．小包；包裹 As soon as I graduated，I packed my bags and moved to the west of China.一毕业我就收拾行李去了中国西部。 A pack of reporters were waiting outside for the latest news.一群记者在外面等待最
一. 用词准确 ;表达地道 【北京卷】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文 (20 分) 美国中学生 jeff 将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文, 经磋商安排住在你家。 假设你是李 华,请给 Jeff 写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意： 1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于 60。 Dear Jeff, I ’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I stay with my family while you ’re in Beijing. While you are here, we ’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk,of chairs and a TV. You ’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close t we could go to school t ogether by bike. At noon we ’ll eat at the school dining ha ’m very happy to learn that you like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classe school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball g or swimming. It ’ll be a lot of fun. If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We ’ll try our best to stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience. Best wishes, Li Hua [名师点评 ] 这篇文章的特点还是比较清晰的, 第一, 作者根据图画将文章的要点概括完整, 内容充 实而丰富,结构紧凑,有层次感 过渡自然,令人耳目一新。 ;第二,本文没有采用华丽的辞藻,但用词十分恰当,段落 【安徽卷】 【试题回放】 假如你是李华, 美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校配合创办一份中学生英文刊物, 该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。 请你给她写封回信, 假如你是李华, 美国一所友好学校准备与 你们学校配合创办一份中学生英文刊物, 该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。 请你给她写封回 信,主要内容如下： l 表示赞成。 l 提出你喜欢的栏目。 1. 词数 100 左右。 3. 适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Green, l 简要说明理由。 注意： 2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。 4. 参考栏目：栏目 —column I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds And I definitely agree with you on that. Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of “culture express ” gives us a better understanding of the world. Since people from di the world have different values, it ’s necessary to learn from each other. This wil chance. Apart from that , “blurt out ” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn En and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment is s ”o cool! The popular actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can just fond of the trendy things. Teenagers a Well, I can ’t list more. I really can ’t wait to read that magazine! Yours faithfully, Li Hua 第 1 页 共 5 页
●2018年全国卷I 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 到达时间； 2. 合适的礼物； 3. 餐桌礼仪。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writ ing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua ●2018年全国卷II 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1. 短片内容：学校的发展； 2. 放映时间、地点； 3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. The Student Union June 8, 2018●2018年全国卷III 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括： 1. 学校的体育场馆； 2. 主要的运动项目； 3. 你喜欢的项目。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter,
2019全国卷高考英语满分作文英语作文在高考英语试卷中所占分值很高，写好高考作文十分重要。下面由橙子为大家介绍全国卷高考英语满分作文，希望能帮到你。全国卷高考英语作文篇一 Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, 1 / 5
2007-2015江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时·健康工作五十年·幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意： 1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。 2.词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3.参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program; 教育部—the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone, Thank you! 参考范文： Good afternoon, everyone, On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope thatthey will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life. Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake a n hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep a cl ear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently. Thank you! 2008年江苏高考英语满分作文 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提 供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。 为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系 谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，…… 老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，…… 同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，…… 怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。） 注意：1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。 Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”........... Thank you for your listening! 参考范文： Good afternoon, everyone!
2017高考英语真题及满分作文（全国I、II卷） 2017年高考已然落下帷幕，不过这也意味着下一届高考序幕的开启。今天，万朋教育小编跟大家一起回顾一下刚过去的2017年高考全国I卷和全国II卷的英语作文真题 及优秀满分范文！希望为2018年的准高考生们提供参考。 全国I卷 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： 1.时间和地点； 2.内容：学习唐诗； 3.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
优秀满分作文 Dear Leslie, How are you? Glad to see you have made some progress in Chinese learning and I’m writing to tell you something about our next lesson. The lesson will be given from 3 pm to 5 pm on the afternoon of next Tuesday in the classroom 502. In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese. You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poetry. You’d better make full preparations before class and have a b rief understanding of the history of Tang Dynasty, which makes it easy for you to go through the class. If there is anything that I can help you, please don’t hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 全国II卷 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文. 广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀 有的广告走向极端 你对广告的看法 Possible version: Advertisement广告 Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill your life. 广告在现代社会中无处不在。当你走在街上，你可以看到大的董事会与漂亮的女孩在你微笑。你看报纸，看到有一半的网页上覆盖着广告。你打开电视，你看到商业广告。不管你喜欢不喜欢，广告填满你的生活。 In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delicious food product while they film him. 为了吸引更多的顾客，广告有时会走向极端。广告在制作公告的过程中使用各种可能的手段。举例来说，要做广告，广告主会雇用一位演员坐在一张桌子上，吃上他们在电影中的美味食物。 Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for. 虽然广告让你快速做出决定，但有时他们会给你带来很多麻烦。他们中有很多人，他们让你忘记你坐在那里的。 春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他. 假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况. 注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽broaden 70%的学生赞成春游 30%的学生反对春游 1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景; 2. 拓宽视野,增长知识; 3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康. 1. 时间紧,耽误学习; 2. 增加父母经济负担; 3. 担心安全. Dear Headmaster, I’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students. 范文 Dear Headmaster,
2018年高考英语满分作文 1.2018年新课标全国卷I 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1．到达时间； 2．合适的礼物； 3．餐桌礼仪。 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 【试题分析】 书面表达具有很强的开放性和选择性，给予考生畅所欲言的空间，摆脱单一方法，唯一答案的思维模式，在展示多彩思维活动的同时，真正考查了考生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力，让考生感受英语学习的趣味与魅力，突出英语学科的独有特征。 2018年全国卷I书面表达体裁为应用文电子邮件，内容为回复外国朋友Terry的邮件，向其介绍在中国家庭做客方面的相关习俗。要求文中涵盖试题给出的三方面内容要点，即到达时间、合适的礼物和餐桌礼仪。该题型和内容设计紧密联系考生实际，但是，餐桌礼仪这个普通得再普通不过的日常小节反而在生活中被很多中学生忽略了。如果没有跨文化对比凝练出的思维品格和文化素养的意识，学生很难在短时间内写出中国老百姓的餐桌礼仪文化。例如受邀赴宴客人可以准时到达但切忌过早到达。外地客人所带礼物常见为能体现客人当地特色的物品。但注意，传统的中国人收到礼物后一般不会当着客人的面打开。中国餐桌为圆桌，正对门的位置为上座，一般为长者位置。中国人特别尊敬长辈，用餐时，需等长辈先动筷子。吃饭时不得发出声响，强调“食不语寝不言”等。中国地域广文化差异也很大，给予思维发散的考生提供
高考英语满分作文精选：我的朋友(附翻译) Ｉ ha*e a good friend. Ｈe is a handsome boy and his eyes shine with wisdom. Ｉha*e known him since Ｓenior Ｏne. Ｗe are both interested in Ｅnglish. Ｏnce both of us entered for an Ｅnglish contest. Ｈow eagerly Ｉ expected to get a prize! Ｏn hearing that Ｉ had failed in the contest, Ｉ could hardly hold back my tears. "Ｗhat a pity!" Ｉ murmured to myself o*er and o*er again. Ｉ felt that the world had become cold and e*eryone seemed to be laughing at me.Ｉlo*e Ｅnglish and ha*e gone all out to study it since my first day in the junior middle school. Ｉha*e e*en dreamed of entering a foreign language institute. Ｓo Ｉ felt *ery sad. Ｊust at this time, Ｉrecei*ed a short letter in Ｅnglish, saying, "Ｆailure is the mother of success. Ｃheer up! Ｄon't lose confidence. Ｋeep on your study and you will succeed!" Ｉ knew it was from the good friend of mine.Ｔhese words encouraged me greatly. Ｉ forgot all my sadness. Ｆrom then on, Ｉ studied Ｅnglish e*en harder. Ｉn the next Ｅnglish contest, Ｉ got the first prize. Ｏf course, he was delighted with my success. 【译文】