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写作真经总纲
学以致用雅思写作考试为什么设计成两个部分？学会了雅思写作除了拿个高分还能帮你做什么？
评分标准全球雅思考官是怎样给你评分的？哪些重点是不同分数段的标志特征？
中西合璧什么是好作文？字数多，词汇大，语法复杂，还是条理清楚？
循序渐进写作能力提升的正确途径。是不是一上来就学习官方满分范文？
读写互通学习范文的正确方法，是不是要读，要背很多范文？
自成风格什么是模板？要不要学习模板？如何形成自己的写作风格？
I.赢在起跑线
正确审题，不再跑偏，高分从这里开始
5分钟认真审题，构思，写提纲。
高手审题4大技能
12-12-08
More men and women decide to have children later in life. Why is it happening? What influences does it have on society and family life?
原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后；
2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。
影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显；
2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。
In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some industrialised countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
In the last century when a human astronaut first arrived on the Moon he said “it is a big step for m ankind” but some people think it makes little difference to our daily life. To what extent to you agree or disagree?
II.十五句语法句型对应推荐
读写互通，剑桥经典句型语法集锦
剑8
1.1 The revolutionary aspect of this new timekeeper was neither the descending weight that provided its motive force nor the gear wheels (which had been around for at least 1,300 years) that transferred the power; it was the part called the escapement.
1.3 Some researchers say the results constitute compelling evidence that telepathy is genuine. Other parapsychologists believe that the field is on the brink of collapse, having tried to produce definitive scientific proof and failed. Sceptics and advocates alike do concur on one issue, however, that the most impressive evidence so far has come from the so-called ‘ganzfeld’ experiments, a German term that means ‘whole field’.
2.2 The Little Ice Age was far from a deep freeze, however; rather an irregular seesaw of rapid climatic shifts, few lasting more than a quarter-century, driven by complex and still little understood interactions between the atmosphere and the ocean.
2.3 While it is true that the olfactory powers of humans are nothing like as fine as those possessed by certain animals, they are still remarkably acute.
3.3 It follows from the above that sparing use of energy reserves should tend to extend life.
3.1 Discussion now centres on whether the route through the maze is communicated as a
'left-right' sequence of turns or as a 'compass bearing and distance' message.
3.3 Forests are one of the main elements of our natural heritage. The decline of Europe's forests over the last decade and a half has led to an increasing awareness and understanding of the serious imbalances which threaten them.
4.2 The MSC has established a set of criteria by which commercial fisheries can be judged.
4.3 It was found that children from the noisy schools had higher blood pressure and were more easily distracted than those who attended the quiet schools. Moreover, there was no evidence of adaptability to the noise. In fact, the longer the children had attended the noisy schools, the more distractible they became.
剑6
1.2 Theoretically, in the world of trade, shipping costs do not matter. Goods, once they have been made, are assumed to move instantly and at no cost from place to place. The real world, however, is full of frictions.
1.3 Some scientists doubt the value of traditional knowledge because the occupation of the Arctic doesn't go back far enough. Others, however, point out that the first weather stations in the far north date back just 50 years.
2.1 It is common for supporters of road networks to reject the models of cities with good public transport by arguing that such systems would not work in their particular city.
2.3 Perhaps the most fundamental step in developing a sense of number is not the ability to count, but rather to see that a number is really an abstract idea instead of a simple attachment to a group of particular objects.
3.1 But it is worth trying, for to understand the initial shock of those images is to understand the extraordinary power and magic of cinema, the unique, hypnotic quality
3.3 The monkey projects demonstrate that, compared with control animals that eat normally, caloric-restricted monkeys have lower body temperatures and levels of the pancreatic hormone insulin, and they retain more youthful levels of certain hormones that tend to fall with age.
4.3 The more effort put in and the wider the whole school involvement, the more substantial the results are likely to be.
剑5
1.3 （媒体负面）People are clearly more curious about bad news than good. Newspapers and broadcasters are there to provide what the public wants. That, however, can lead to significant distortions of perception.
2.1 The impetus behind the development of these early plastics was generated by a number of factors - immense technological progress in the domain of chemistry, coupled with wider cultural changes, and the pragmatic need to find acceptable substitutes for dwindling supplies of 'luxury' materials such as tortoiseshell and ivory.
2.3 There were several reasons why original science continued to be written in Latin. The first was
simply a matter of audience.
A third reason why the writing of original science in English was delayed may have been to do with the linguistic inadequacy of English in the early modern period.
3.2 According to Siegel, international environmental organisations are beginning to pay closer attention to the region, partly because of the problems of erosion and pollution of the Nile delta, but principally because they fear the impact this situation could have on the whole Mediterranean coastal ecosystem. But there are no easy solutions.
4.1 （开发旅游业）The market for tourism in remote areas is booming as never before. Countries all across the world are actively promoting their 'wilderness' regions - such as mountains, Arctic lands, deserts, small islands and wetlands — to high-spending tourists.
剑4
2.1 （语言习得）What makes a language endangered is not just the number of speakers, but how old they are.
Language is also intimately bound up with culture, so it may be difficult to preserve one without the other.
2.2 Part of the incentive was financial, Dr Laver said. The bottom line is that most general practitioners are business people. If they see potential clientele going elsewhere, they might want to be able to offer a similar service.'
3.1 Many children may choose entrepreneurship because it allows them a degree of independence, is less exploitative than many forms of paid-employment, and is flexible enough to allow them to participate in other activities such as education and domestic task.
4.1 No one theory can explain improvements in performance, but the most important factor has been genetics.
Identifying genetically talented individuals is only the first step.
4.3 The problem of how health-care resources should be allocated or apportioned, so that they are distributed in both the most just and most efficient way, is not a new one.
III.十五句最新范文
【刘洪波作品】
写作提纲
中立观点，两者皆可，个人选择。
●穿着时尚增加自信自尊
●穿着时尚是融入流行文化，与时俱进的体现
The improvement of the living standard is believed to have caused higher demand for fashion, because people have much more money to afford it. However, there is a fear that people will lose their own tastes, and never find what they really need.My view is that to dress up fashion should be respected and it is also correct to choose the clothes people like.
Being fashionable is healthy and brings some benefits to us. This is because seeking for beauty and wanting to look good are part of human nature. When some people start to wear stylish[adj.时髦的] clothes like a superstar, they feel more confident and have good self-esteem[n.自尊], which is of course helpful and essential in some social and business occasions.
Moreover, fashion is one element of the popular culture. For example, South Korean modern clothes and TV drama have been popular in other Asian countries for some time, and lately PSY’s “Gangnam Style” has even swept the world and almost everyone imitate s his horse-riding dance. Being in fashion and following idols make people understand and involve in the popular culture and feel up-to-date in this fast-changing world.
This is not to say that everyone should be fashion-conscious[adj.时尚意识的，时装意识的]. Certainly, it is a personal choice to put on the comfortable clothes people are interested in. And since fashion changes over time, it would be better for people to pay more attention to something more meaningful in life, like pursuing knowledge, loving family and cherishing friendship.
In sum, fashion should be respected, and at the same time people should have their own tastes of clothing style rather than blindly following the so-called “fashion”. Sometimes the plain clothes may mirror a person’s inner peace.
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生活水平的提升导致了对时装的需求提高，因为人们的购买力提升了。但存在一种担忧，
我的观点是穿着时装值得尊重，同时穿自己喜欢的衣服也没错。
穿着时尚是健康有益的，并带给我们一些好处。这是因为追求
美和想外表好看是人类天性的一部分。当一些人开始像明星一样穿
着时髦的衣物时，他们感觉更加自信和拥有良好的自尊，这在一些
社交和商业场合当然是有帮助和必要的。
而且，时装是流行文化的一个元素。例如，韩国的现代服饰和韩剧在亚洲国家已经流行了一阵子，最近鸟叔的江南Style又席卷全球，大家都在模仿他的骑马舞。[有共鸣的例子让读者印象深刻]穿着时尚和追随偶像让人们理解和融入流行文化，并会感到在这个快速变化的世界中他们是与时俱进的。
这并不是说每个人都应该有意识的追求时装。当然，穿自己喜欢的舒适衣服是个人的选
总之，时装应该被尊重，同时，人们应该有自己的穿着品味而非盲目的跟随那些所谓的
【十五句逻辑模板范文之二】
【经典考题-科技】
【刘洪波作品】
写作提纲
观点：不是科技而是社会财富分配不均导致的。
原因1：政府的责任。
原因2：科技其实还缩小贫富差距。举例：利用网站创业。MODEL ANSWER
The application of new technologies is one of the most important ways of making millionaires such as Bill Gates. However, discussion now centers on whether the technology has also widened the gap between the rich and the poor. My view is that the improper distribution system of social wealth, rather than modern technology, has caused such a social problem.
First, it is obvious that the government is the one most capable and responsible for solving any social issue and ensuring social equality. In order to bridge this wealth gap, the most effective and direct method should be taxation leverage, by which the government can use the rich people’s tax money to subsidize the unfortunate. So, the technology should not become the scapegoat of the issue.
Conversely, modern technologies indeed have provided great opportunities for the poor to be rich. For example, many people have become wealthy by setting their own commercial websites on
Internet. Compared with traditional companies that require large initial investment and higher operation cost, Internet is the cheaper and more accessible platform for ordinary people to make fortune.
Those who harbor the view that the technology has polarized the distribution of wealth around the world believe that the poor countries are getting poorer due to lack of creative technologies. Of course, this is a real phenomenon. But paradoxically, the right solution for those nations is just to introduce advanced technologies to improve the social productivity, which is like the age-old chicken-or-egg question.
In sum, modern technology plays a key role in filling the gap between the rich and poor not only for individuals, but for nations as well. In the era of the knowledge-based economy, the one who is diligent and can capitalize knowledge will eventually prevail.
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新科技的运用是创造像比尔盖茨一样的百万富翁的重要方式之一。但是现在的争论集中在科技是否也增大了贫富差距。[读写互通]我的观点是不合理的社会财富分配体系而非现代科技，导致了这样一个社会问题。
首先，政府显然是最有能力和责任来解决任何一个社会问题和确保社会公平的。为了缩小财富差距，最有效和最直接的方法应该是税收杠杆，通过它政府可以用富人纳税的钱去补贴穷人。因此，科技不应该成为这一问题的替罪羊。[重点句型]
相反，现代科技事实上提供了巨大的机会为穷人致富。例如，通过在互联网上建立他们自己的商业网站，很多人已经变得富裕。和需要巨大的初始投资和高昂的运营成本的传统公司相比，互联网对常人来说是一个更加便宜和可企及的制造财富的平台。[重点句型]那些认为科技使财富在全球范围内两级分化的人认为，因为缺
乏创新科技，穷国正变得更穷。当然这是一个真实的现象。但自相
矛盾的是，对这些国家来说正确的解决方法恰恰就是要引进先进科
技以提高社会生产力，这像是古老的先有鸡还是先有蛋的问题。[读
写互通]
总之，现代科技在缩小个人之间以及国家之间的贫富差距上都
起到一个关键作用。在这个知识经济时代，勤奋并能将知识资本化的人最终将获胜。
【十五句逻辑模板范文之三】
【经典考题-动物保护】
【刘洪波作品】
写作提纲
观点: 人类合理利用动物是正当的
论据1：自然法则，natural law, the law of the jungle
论据2：动物对人类文明贡献大，KFC, MacDonald’s even pets
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about animal protection and animal rights. However, whether we should utilize animals for the human purposes has caused heated debate recently. In my view, it is acceptable to reasonably exploit animals for the benefit of mankind and impossi ble to completely cut down the human’s reliance on animals.
It is clear that human beings are standing at the top of the food chain of this planet. As big fishes eat small ones, mankind uses animals for its own benefits, which is consistent with natural law. So, it is hard to say that we are doing wrong by exploiting animals for our interests.
Moreover, it is unrealistic to ban using animals since the history of human civilization is entwined with the history of the ways we have learned to manipulate animal resources. We have raised cattle for food; the outcomes of animal experiments have saved many lives; people have even kept pets to satisfy their psychological needs. If using animals were prohibited, we would firstly close thousands of KFC’s and MacDonald’s franchises[n.连锁店] around the world, because they are slaughtering lovely chicken to make money!And everyone in this world would become a vegetarian[n.素食主义者].
This is not to say that it is always right for people to use animals for whatever purpose. Some people hunt wild animals just for fun; others kill rare animals for their expensive furs.Indeed, these behaviors are not only cruel and unnecessary, but actually against long-term interests of human race.Humans should shoulder their responsibilities of maintaining the diversity of wild animals and the balance of ecosystem.
In sum, using animals rationally for the benefit of humans is justified. Meanwhile, some behaviors that are harmful to both animals and humans have to be prohibited. By doing so, we can ensure that our next generation could also exploit the animal resource.
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现在越来越多的人关注动物保护和动物权益。但是，我们是否可以为了人类的利益使用动物导致了热议。我的观点是，为了人类的利益合理利用动物是可以接受的，并且完全杜绝人类对动物的依赖是不可能的。
显然，人类是站在这个星球食物链的最高端的。就像大鱼吃小鱼一样，人类为了自身的
利益使用动物，这一点是和自然法则一致的。因此，很难说我们利用动物是错的。
而且，禁止使用动物是不现实的，因为人类文明的历史是和我们学会利用动物资源的历史伴生交织在一起的。[读写互通，剑7第23页阅读文章首句改写]我们饲养家畜作为食物；动物实验的成果拯救了很多人的生命；人们甚至饲养宠物满足他们的心理需求。如果利用动物被禁止，那么我们首先要关闭上万的肯德基
和麦当劳的全世界连锁店，因为他们正在屠杀可爱
的小鸡去挣钱！[用虚拟语气表达反方观点的不现实]
世界上的每个人将成为素食主义者。
这并不是说不论怎样利用动物都是对的。一些
人捕猎取乐；另一些人猎杀珍稀动物为了它们昂贵
的毛皮。事实上，这些行为不仅是残忍和没有必要
的，而且也背离了人类的长期利益。[重点句型-not only…but also…]人类应该肩负起维护野生动物多样性和生态系统平衡的责任。
总之，为了我们自身利益而理性的使用动物是正当的。同时，一些对动物和人类都有害的行为应该被禁止。这么做，我们才能确保我们的下一代也能开发利用动物资源。[思想升华]
雅思教父经典范文，真实考试碰到请勿全文一字不改背诵。当有多位考生作文完
全一致时，有遭遇调查之风险。
IV.十五句逻辑模板个性化升级
学习材料：
●本讲义中“五段式变四段式改写全过程”
●《最简化雅思写作》中33篇自由体范文
●《剑桥雅思》系列考官范文
官方9分四段式范文逻辑剖析：
剑8 p173
Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.
Some educationalists think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in single-sex schools because they believe this environment reduces distractions and encourages pupils to concentrate on their studies. This is probably true to some extent. It also allows more equality among pupils
and gives more opportunity to all those at the school to choose subjects more freely without gender prejudice. For example, a much higher proportion of girls study science to a high level when they attend girls’ schools than their counterparts in mixed schools do. Similarly, boys in single-sex schools are more likely to take cookery classes and to study languages, which are often thought of as traditional subjects for girls.
On the other hand, some experts would argue that mixed schools prepare their pupils better for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together from an early age and are consequently not emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with the opposite sex. They are also able to learn from each other, and to experience different types of skill and talent then might be evident in a single gender environment.
Personally, I think that there are advantages to both systems. I went to a mixed school, but feel that I myself the opportunity to specialise in science because it was seen as the natural domain and career path for boys when I was a girl. So becaus e of that, I would have preferred to go to a girls’ school. But hopefully times have changed, and both genders of student can have equal chances to study what they want to in whichever type of school they attend.
五段式变四段式改写全过程
【15句经典范文】
孩子看电视利弊讨论
五段式范文
Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Watching TV is one of the most important children’s leisure activities. However, whether it brings more harm than good has caused heated debate. My view is that too much time spent on it surely has negative impacts on kids and parents should filter out the inappropriate programs and channels for them.
With the rapid development of science and technology, TV shows are
designed so vivid and attractive that not only kids but even adults are
much easier to get addicted to them. When children spend more time
sitting in front of a screen, they are isolated from the real world. They
don’t have enough time to socialize, to engage in outdoor activities
which are crucial for their physical growth. Also, their eyesight will be
weakened by staring at the screen for too long.
Moreover, questionable contents on TV will have negative effects on children since they are impressionable. The fact that many developing countries including China lack TV program rating
system means that children are more easily exposed to indecent TV scenes. So, TV is not always a good one in the sense that parents really cannot control what comes on the screen.
Of course, there are many educational and inspirational TV shows, such as Disney cartoons which enable kids to have fun in learning process, facilitate their intellectual development and help children learn caring, sharing, courage, honesty and other virtues from an early age. These benefits of TV on children’s education cannot be denied.
In sum, spending long time watching TV is harmful and parents should either follow TV rating guideline or carefully choose the programs for children.
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【参考译文】
看电视是孩子们重要的娱乐活动之一。但是是否它带来的坏处大于好处导致了热烈的争议。我的观点是花太多的时间看电视肯定不好，而且父母应该为孩子过滤掉一些不适合他们的节目和频道。
随着科技的快速发展，[只要使用恰当就不是模板] 电视节目被设计得如此的生动和有吸引力，以至于不仅是孩子，甚至成年人都容易上瘾。当孩子花更多的时间坐在电视屏幕前时，他们和真实的世界隔离开了。他们没有足够的时间去社会交往，
去参加对他们身体发育有好处的户外锻炼。而且，当盯着电视
屏幕太久他们的视力会减退。
另外，电视节目中的不良内容对孩子有负面作用，因为孩子们
很容易受影响。包括中国在内的许多发展中国家缺乏电视节目
内容，从这一意义上来说，电视不一定总是一个好东东。
当然，电视上有很多有教育意义的、激发灵感的好节目，比如
迪斯尼的动画片，它能让孩子们在快乐中学习，促进他们的智
并列是展现词汇量的好机会]等美德。电视对于儿童教育的这
些好处不容否认。
总之，长时间看电视是不好的，而且父母要么遵守电视内容分级的指导原则，要么应该仔细的为孩子们选择节目。
孩子看电视利弊讨论
四段式范文
Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Watching TV is one of the most important children’s leisure activities. However, whether it brings
more harm than good has caused heated debate. My view is that parents have an essential role to play regarding to this.
Some educationalists think watching TV is potentially harmful to children because when they spend more time sitting in front of a screen, their eyesight will be weakened and kids don’t have enough time to engage in outdoor activities which are crucial for their physical growth. This is definitely true. The questionable content on TV can also cause negative implications. The fact that many developing countries including China lack TV program rating system means that children are more easily exposed to indecent TV scenes.
On the other hand, some experts would argue that the educational and inspirational TV shows enable kids to have fun in learning process and facilitate their intellectual development. For example, many children have learnt caring, courage, honesty and other virtues from the characters in classic Disney cartoons. Moreover, watching TV can be an important parent-child activity. Accompanying with kids to watch their favorite shows is a great opportunity for adults to have common topics and increase intimacy with children, to communicate deeply with them, and to fully read their minds.
Unfortunately, I don’t think most parents have realized these points. Some even treat TV as a good babysitter to keep kids busy. It is parents’ responsibility to control the time kids spend on TV, choose the suitable program for them, and most importantly, enjoy it together with kids.
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【参考译文】
看电视是孩子们重要的娱乐活动之一。但是是否它带来的坏处大于好处导致了热烈的争议。我的观点是花太多的时间看电视肯定不好，而且父母应该为孩子过滤掉一些不适合他们的节目和频道。
随着科技的快速发展，[只要使用恰当就不是模板] 电视节目被设计得如此的生动和有吸引力，以至于不仅是孩子，甚至成年人都容易上瘾。当孩子花更多的时间坐在电视屏幕前时，他们和真实的世界隔离开了。他们没有足够的时间去社会交往，去参加对他们身体发育有好处的户外锻炼。而且，当盯着电视屏幕太久他们的视力会减退。
另外，电视节目中的不良内容对孩子有负面作用，因为孩子们很容易受影响。包括中国在内
电视不一定总是一个好东东。
当然，电视上有很多有教育意义的、激发灵感的好节目，
比如迪斯尼的动画片，它能让孩子们在快乐中学习，促进
于儿童教育的这些好处不容否认。
总之，长时间看电视是不好的，而且父母要么遵守电视内
容分级的指导原则，要么应该仔细的为孩子们选择节目。
V.最新真题清单
2011-01-08
【Task 1】Pie graph
【Task 2】Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 机器人的优与劣
2011-01-15
【Task 1】Pie graph
【Task 2】The workplace nowadays is trying to employ the equal number of females and males. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? 雇佣男女同数
2011-01-22
【Task 1】Pie graph
【Task 2】Today there is a great increase in anti-social behaviors and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? Who should take responsibility for dealing with it? 反社会行为和对他人不敬
2011-01-27
【Task 1】Table
【Task 2】some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own one. 出国旅游
2011-02-12（G）
【Task 1】投诉信
【Task 2】Some people think traveling abroad is a valuable experience for young people. Others think it wastes too much time and expense. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 青少年旅游
2011-02-17
【Task 1】Pie graph+Table
【Task 2】Some people believe that people who work for arts, such as painting, theatre or music should be supported financially by the government. Some people believe that they should find other financial support resources instead.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 谁为艺术注资
2011-02-19
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Some people think that women should play an equal role as men in military force or police force, others say women are not suited for such kind of work. Discuss both side and give your own opinion. 男女平等
2011-03-05
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources.Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府是否支持濒危语言
2011-03-10
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】In some countries, children start school at the age of seven, so they could have more time to build relationship with their parents. In other countries, Some think that children start school as young as possible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 儿童入学早晚
2011-03-12
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies. How does this competitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend？竞争力
2011-03-19
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development? 计算机进步
2011-04-02
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 旅游费用+环境
2011-04-16
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Every one believes that it is important to protect the environment however seldom do that themselves. Why is it important to protect environment by ourselves? What action should we do?保护环境人人有责
2011-04-28
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Too much money has spend on looking after and repairing old buildings, therefore, we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 政府建新楼
2011-04-30
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Foreign tourist abroad should be charged more than local people when visiting the local historical and
cultural tourist attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree？旅游本国人少收费
2011-05-07
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 全球解决环境问题
2011-05-14
【Task 1】Pie graph
【Task 2】Individual greed and selfishness has been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 价值观
2011-06-04
【Task 1】Flow Chart
【Task 2】People set news as our knowledge of society, but people don’t make sure how far we trust in journalists. What is your opinion on this? And what qualities do you think journalist should have? 记者可信度
2011-06-11
【Task 1】Pie graph+Table
【Task 2】Some people think the government should spend more money on public services rather than waste money on arts (i.e. music and printing). To what extent do you agree or disagree? 政府注资艺术还是公共服务
2011-07-09
【Task 1】Table
【Task 2】There are many extinct animals’ species in the world nowadays. Some people say we should protect these animals from dying out, while others say we should concentrate more on problems of human beings. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view. 保护动物还是人
2011-07-16
【Task 1】Pie graph
【Task 2】In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot? 艺术+科技
2011-07-28
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】In schools and universities, some girls tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose to study science subjects. What are the reasons? Do you think this trend should be changed? 男女选课差异
2011-07-30
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, but others think the people should have
freedom to choose sports activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 危险地方该不该去
2011-08-13
【Task 1】flow chart
【Task 2】Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?学校教育目
2011-08-20
【Task 1】Table
【Task 2】Some people believe that if a police force carries guns, it would cause a high level of violence in that society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 警察配枪
2011-08-25
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Higher education is funded in several ways: all costs paid by the government; all costs paid by students; all costs paid by students with a government loan which must be repaid after graduation. What are the advantages of these options? Which is your choice? 谁为教育买单
2011-08-27
【Task 1】Pie graph
【Task 2】Nowadays, people all over the world are watching foreign films much more than locally produced films. Why? Should government give more financial support to local film industry? 电影看本土的还是外国的
2011-09-03
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】The qualities a person needs to bec ome successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or any similar academic institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 人成功的品质从哪获得
2011-09-15
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Nowadays a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think this can have negative effects on children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree？广告对儿童不利
2011-09-17
【Task 1】Map
【Task 2】Somebody think that some subjects such as math and philosophy are difficult to some students, so people should take it as selective not compulsory.Do you agree or disagree? 理科强制还是选修
2011-09-24
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】The best way for a country to prepare for the future is to invest more resources for its young people. How true do you think of it? What is the best way to invest more resources on young people? 对年轻人投入
2011-10-08
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】The trend of the proportion of older people is increasing steadily. Is it positive or negative to society? 人口稳定增长
2011-10-20
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Holding Olympic Games is an exciting event. Some people think it has positive effects while others argue it is a waste of money. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 奥运会
2011-10-22
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Currently, anyone can post information on the internet. Therefore, most information on the internet might be inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 网络信息准确性
2011-10-29
【Task 1】Flow chart
【Task 2】Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation.Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 电影游戏暴力
2011-11-05
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Some people think government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 政府投资
2011-11-19
【Task 1】Line graph+ Table
【Task 2】Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Other people think one should hold a permanent job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 工作满意度
2011-11-26
【Task 1】graph
【Task 2】People in both developed countries and developing countries are richer for economic growth. Studies show people in developing countries are happier than before while people in developed countries are not. Analyze the reasons and what can we learn?
2011-12-03
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Today food travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend? 食物消费
2011-12-10
【Task 1】Line graph
【Task 2】Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late
to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 动植物保护
2011-12-17
【Task 1】Table
【Task 2】It becomes more popular to find out the history of your family, what are the reasons and do you think it's a positive or negative development? 家谱
2012-1-7
【Task 1】Bar Graph
【Task 2】Some people think developing country should invite large foreign company to open office and factory to grow their economies. Other people think the developing country should keep the large company out and develop local company instead. Discuss and give your own opinion. 发展中国家是否应该欢迎外企
2012-1-12
【Task 1】Line Graph
【Task 2】Some people think that government should establish free libraries in each town. While others believe that it is a waste of money since people can obtain information from the internet at home. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 图书馆与网络
2012-1-14
【Task 1】Table
【Task 2】Some employers consider social skills as important as good qualification for success in a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 社交技能在工作中的重要性
2012-2-4
【Task 1】
【Task 2】Some people think that young people should follow traditions of their society, and others think that young people should be free to behave as individuals. 年轻人对传统和自由个性的选择
2012-2-9
【Task 1】line graph
【Task 2】The spread of multinational companies and globalization produce positive effects for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 外企和全球化的影响
2012-2-18
【Task 1】Bar graph
【Task 2】Technology makes life complex, and to make it simple is to stop using technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 科技是生活复杂？
2012-2-25
【Task 1】bar Graph
【Task 2】Full time university students need to spend a lot of time on studying，it is essential for them to get involved in other activities, to what extend do you agree？大学生的学习之外
新托福写作讲义09年暑假 第一课时新托福考试流程 报名-缴费-考试流程和界面-成绩-大学录取分数线 第二课时新托福考试备考 观点1 攻克托福考试最有效的捷径是听写 观点2 托福考试全面复习的同时重点放在单词和听力上 观点3口语和写作部分是很容易得分的 第三课时新托福独立写作评分标准 第三课时新托福独立写作中文构思和文章结构 第四课时新托福独立写作开头部分 例子——提炼——中文思维模板——中文练习——英文模板——英文练习——英文模板变换 开头类型1：特训234 同意不同意：明智的父母比优秀的老师对我们教益更多 明智的父母教会我们许多生活的哲理，例如高尚的价值观、与不同的人融洽相处的方法以及理解她对他人的责任。优秀的老师则教会我们怎样为将来的工作做好准备和实现梦想所需要的技能。老师和父母在我们的成长中起着同样重要的作用，是他们使我们对未来有了一种敏锐的洞察力。所以，我反对明智的父母比优秀的老师对我们教益更多的观点。 提炼类型1：用例子解释或定义关键词1+用例子或定义解释关键词2+所以，表明观点
开头类型1举例：图书馆还是体育设施 图书馆的资源是大学生获取知识、培养自学能力最主要的方式之一。而体育设施能够使大学生强身健体、舒缓压力、娱乐身心。我不否认体育锻炼对于学生成长的重要影响。但作为大学投资的决定，学校应该把更多的钱投资于图书馆而不是体育设施。 开头类型1举例：事实还是概念 事实是发生在我们周围事情，往往形象生动并且容易让人理解，而概念是事实的总结和抽象，能够概括一系列符合规律的事实。因此据我来看，在学习的过程中间，概念和事实的学习对于学生来说有着不同的作用。 开头类型2：特训236 同意不同意在社区周围建立一家折扣店 折扣店的出现成为我们社区关注的焦点。当一家企业决定在购物区开折扣店时，一些人游行表示反对，而另一些人觉得在这种商店购物很方便。我喜欢附近有一所大型折扣店，但我也能理解在同一条街开小商店的朋友为什么不喜欢这种竞争对手。换句话说，我支持新商店，因为它位置便利、价格低廉。 提炼类型2：关键词背景+论题重复+表明观点 开头类型2举例：经济发展和环境保护 经济发展和环境保护逐渐成为全球政府共同关注的两大议题。政府在制定国家发展策略的时候，一些人主张优先发展经济，而另一些人认为人们的首要任务是保护环境。
托福写作圣经： 1.写作的第一要务是把观点表达清楚；（就是解释） 2.习作考试不基于考试的真实身份；（可以作假，真情实感没有任何意义） 3.写作考试只考察语言水平，不考察思想水平（unique, critical ideas mean nothing） 4.写作考试不测试考生的真实想法； 5.写作是基于表达，而不是基于翻译； 6.写作考试不同于平时写作； 7.写作内容和语言同等重要； 8.观点的层次比观点的数目更重要； 9.逻辑错误比语法错误更严重; 10.跑题就完蛋（finish egg）. “T he longer, the better.”------黄金规则 Use best structure and sentence Sentence: “我认为…………….” I feel/think/hold/claim/believe/deem/maintain/reckon/argue/assume that…………. In my opinion From my point of view From my perspective/angle As far as I am concerned I hold/share the opinion/belief/position/standpoint/idea that My viewpoint/belief/opinion is that……… As I see/view/perceive/ the problem/question/issue/case/discussion/argument/controversy……. 托福作文不需要标题 段落格式：缩行式，空行式 教材推荐： 俞敏洪：《托福词根》 张洪伟，戴云《托福词汇10000》 张道真，《实用英语语法》 戴云，《托福语法精要》 张洪伟，戴云《新托福写作词汇小伴侣》 句子训练方法 1.多种方法表达同一句意 e.g A 对B很重要 1) A is important to B
小学作文辅导教案（含范文） 第一讲 写好作文的诀窍 １、有理想、不怕难，敢于“争强好胜”。 每个人从小都有对未来理想的向往，谁都想长大了，能出人头地，有所作为，那就离不开表达，表达就是作文呀！比如，你当了科学家，发明了一种国内外先进的设备，总得让人家知道设备的原理、功能、构造和用途吧！如果你不会说也不会写，怎么能让人家认可并大批量生产使用？你总得通过书面文字来阐述吧？为此，你必须打好作文基础，争做强者、胜利者、成功者。 ２，在课内外阅读中培养兴趣。 当你读了一部引人入胜的小说或一篇文章，当你观看了一部激动人心的电视电影，你都会被故事波澜起伏的情节和特色鲜明的人物所感染、所吸引的时候，你在羡慕和欣赏之余，不妨问一问自己：“人家为什么写得那么好？假如我也能用手中的笔，写出这样的好文章、好书，那该多好啊！别看现在不行，但只要肯努力，一定能行！” ３、多说多写多练，品尝成功的喜悦。 开始作文写不好，没关系，但在老师的指导下，多说多写多练，总会越写越好的。写作文总会有一个从“不好”到“较好”再到“好”、“很好”的循序渐进的过程。当你写出了一篇老师说好、在同学面前交流的文章时，你就成功了。 第二讲 作文入门 写作文要从哪开始入手呀？ 要从学会语文开始。语文拆开来讲就是 “语”和“文”，口头为“语”，书面为“文”，这就是“语文”的真正含义。口头说话，不管说什么，只要张嘴说话或者说从你“呀呀”学语，叫“爸、妈”的时候，“语”就开始了，这实际上是“口头作文”了。而在纸上写文章，就是书面作文。所以，作文是从口头说话开始的。 不要以为写在作文本上才是作文，而忽视了生活中的口头说话，包括课堂发言、与同学、家长说话聊天等等。所以，我们学作文就应该采取“两条腿走路”的方式： “一条腿”是书面作文，可以按老师平时指导训练的要求，郑重其事地学习写作文。另“一条腿”就是口头说话、口头作文了。我们可以在说话过程中，逐步体会、感受语言，在自然而然中潜移默化地感受、学会语言。 不相信？咱们举一个简单的例子：你放学回家，妈妈问你：“孩子，今天在学校怎么样？学什么了？高兴吗？”你总得回答她吧？会说的同学一定说得头头是道，有头有尾。可能他会这样说：“妈妈，我今天在学校可高兴了，因为我呀，学了不少知识，收获可大了！数学课学的是两步计算应用题，语文课学习的是怎样概括段意。最有意思的是科学课上，做了一个‘氧气燃烧’的实验，
雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义 有效避免7种语法错误 有效避免7种语法错误 1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer. 2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. 2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. 2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics. 2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. 3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create. 4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms. 5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself. 6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives. 7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment. 高分范文讲解 范文讲解 In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer. Example 2 Band 8 One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models. Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs. A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.
小学生作文辅导教案目录 第一讲写人作文 第二讲记叙文 第三讲状物作文（动物、植物、物体）第四讲写景作文 第五讲书信、导游词 第六讲想象作文 第七讲导游词 1
第一讲写人的文章 （一）写开头 请同学们先选好要写的人，想一想：你为什么要写这个人？根据下面的词句导引把想到的写出来。 1.在我熟悉的人中，是一位，我非常 他。 2. 虽然不是，不是，不是 ，他（她）只是，但是，他是我最敬佩的人。 3.说起来，可真是与众不同，他，他 他，同学们都很喜欢他。 4.我有一个小伙伴，他的名字叫，他他 ，我们是形影不离的好朋友。 5.瞧，他来了， 。他就是我敬佩的老师。 6.每当___________________________ 的时候，我就想起了________________ __________ ，他就是我最_________________ 人。 优秀习作 1.你认识我吗？我叫汤诗琦，是山东省博兴县第一小学三年级五班的一名学生，今年已度过了九个“六一”儿童节。 2.你瞧,镜子里出现了一个可爱的小女孩,一头乌黑发亮的头发,圆圆的脸上镶着两道又黑又浓的眉毛,大大的眼睛里有两颗黑得像葡萄的眼珠子,小鼻子下有一张能说会道的小嘴巴,那不是别人,就是我! 3.在我们的生活中，有许多人值得我们去敬佩，有无私的教师，抚养我们成长的爸爸妈妈，辛勤的清洁工……。然而使我最敬佩的是那无私的清洁工。 4.我最敬佩的人是我的妈妈。她有一双炯炯有神的眼睛，虽然小了点，但透着一股威严。那乌黑的头发，浅浅的眉毛，挺挺的鼻子，不大的嘴巴，衬在她那张瓜子脸上，显得很好看。 5.在我家的旁边！住着邻居王大妈！王大妈是个大大咧咧的人！不过她乐于助人！还是我们弄堂有名的开心果呢！ 6.她，是我的朋友。她长着一头乱蓬蓬的短发，一双眯成一条缝的眼睛，满脸雀斑。别看她长得傻乎乎的，但是坚强的她非常值得我欣赏、学习。 这些开头都写得很好，一开头就抓住了“主旨”。这样写就不会离题偏题。 （二）写主体
托福基础写作 一、托福写作概述 二、英汉两种语言的区别 （一）、美国人与中国人思维方式的不同。 linear way of thinking （二）、英汉句子结构的特点。英语重形和，重结构，汉语重意和, 重语义。英语中常用复合句；汉语则常用短句，简单句。 10 Linking words cohesion 1. conj.: 1) and. but, or, so, while 2) if, because, although, That, who, which, what, as---as more than, so--- that 2. in this reason, in conclusion, for example 3. however, unfortunately, Undeniably 4. to make things worse 5. generally speaking 6. 同义词 7. repetition 8. this, it, that, those 9. interesting to see 10. what is more （三）英语多变化variety(diversity)，汉语多重复。 （四）英语被动句多。汉语中主动句多。 三、中国学生写作最易犯的十大错误 1. Nowadays, college student should learn competition and cooperation. 2. The problem that is created by computers attract (draw, spark, captivate, intrigue, arouse, yield, give rise to) much attention. 3. In present-day society, there are a great many young people go abroad. 4. In my opinion, I think that smoking should be banned in public places. 5. The computer can not instead the pivotal role played by teachers in education. 6. Some people welcome raising pets, others hold different opinions.
复习建议 敲字和单词量，电脑上听写、写字板里练习写作 重复阅读官方指南第五章249-293和321-343 分类读185题库，列提纲，贯彻详细细节，查字典 分类写文章，修改到完美，准备机经 练习3分钟看一篇短文，做笔记然后重述能力 练习听学术段子，重述能力，建议93篇学术段子 练习可以从不计时到计时，量变到质量 三角和巴朗练习 一、独立写作评分原则 An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following: ●Effective ad dresses the topic and task ●Is well organized and well developed,using clearly appropriate explanations,exemplification,and/or details ●Displays unity，progression，and coherence ●Displays consistent facility in the use of language，demonstrating syntactic variety，appropriate word choice，and idiomaticity，though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors. OG 325-343 effectively:in a way that produces the intended result or a successful result organized:arranged or planned in a particular order or structure developed:to make an idea clearer by explaining it further explanation:a statement,fact or situation that tells you why a reason given for sth unity:the state of looking or being complete in a natural and pleasing way progression:the process of developing gradually from one stage to another coherence:of different ideas,arguments,sentences to have a clear logical connection so that together they make a whole consistent:always behaving in the same way ,or having the same opinions standard
写作提高： 1. 中文思维——看到题目有话可说； 2. 英文表达——正确恰当把中文思维体现成英文 细节，结构，语言 细节：清晰恰当的举例或“说明”能力；并不是一定出现for example，论据：why, what, how 结构：正常的逻辑说话顺序 不重视语言。 语言：讲究用简单的话陈述深刻的道理； 不是用复杂的话陈述简单的道理 审题：1. 问法：which one, A & D （10-30 sec.） 2. 思考什么现象导致出此题目（30-60 sec.）
思考方式：1.过去和今天对比；2.以自身为背景; 3. 细化主题词 写作： A 开头部分 题目背景：1.通过现象 2.引出话题 3-5mins 50字 主题句（开头）用肯定的语言概括文章将来结构（理由，例子） B 论证部分 1 （1）key words和题目相同（尽量保持题目语序） （2）概括此段大意（尽量概括论据） （3）简单准确 2 解释1句 3 解释2句论据：why / what / how 4 解释3句
C 结尾部分 主题句（结尾）清晰明确 递进 A & D（含有绝对词） 第1段：BI(Back Information) 第2段：去掉绝对词（或把绝对词变限定词）肯定 第3段：加上绝对词否定 第4段：TS (Thesis Statement) + 递进(取决于&不得不) “含绝对词立论文”出题形式 A is the most important. & A is more important than B. 2. A is important. 3. However, B is the same important. 4. I disagree that A is the “most” important. (1) It depends on …… whether A or B is
新托福强化听力讲义 新托福考试听力部分介绍 1. 新托福和旧托福的对比 考试形式预读题目笔记题型 PBT旧托福Paper Yes No 1/4 choice multiple IBT新托福Internet No Yes New types 2. 题量，时间，分数 文章类型题量题目数时间CONVERSATION 2-3 5 / conversation 2-3 min / conversation LECTURE 4-6 6 / lecture 4-6 min / lecture min TOTAL 6-9（加试）34 60-90 SCALE SCORE: 30 见OG185评分标准 3. 题目的考查形式 考场环境：独立电脑，耳机，铅笔，草稿本 电脑环境：图片，视频，声音，板书 新题型：双选题，重听题，表格配对题 答题时间：总时间限制，每题分配时间不限 答题流程：永不悔改 4. 文章材料的考查形式 文章结构：删除了旧托福的PART A 部分，更加注重于对于能力的考查 文章长度：比旧托福长 文章语速：无所谓快慢，比旧托福更加贴近真实的学习生活 文章类型：对话，独白，讨论 CONVERSATION文章思路 LECTURE文章思路
5. 新托福考试题型概述 IBT listening comprehension Basic comprehension Gist question Detail question Pragmatic understanding Purpose question Attitude question Connecting information Organization question Inference question 题号问题题型1 Why does the student go to see the professor? Gist question 2 According to the professor, what information should the student include in her statement of purpose? Detail Question 3 What does the professor consider unusual about the student’s background? Detail Question 4 Why does the professor tell a story about his friend who went ot medical school? Detail Question 5 What does the professor imply about the people who admit students to graduate school? Inference question 6 What are the students mainly discussing? Gist question 7 Listen again and then answer the question: Why does the woman say this? Purpose question 8 According to the conversation, why are transposes sometimes called “jumping genes”? Detail Question 9 According to the conversation, what are two ways in which bacteria cells get resistance genes? Detail Question 10 What can be inferred about the resistance genes discussed in the conversation? Inference question 11 What is the talk mainly about? Gist question 12 What is the professor’s point of view concerning the method of “safe yield”? Detail Question 13 According to the professor, what are two problems associated with removing wter from an underground system? Detail Question 14 Listen again and then answer the question: Why does the professor say this? Purpose question
12月10日托福写作答案解析 综合写作】 关于加拿大一种当地语言的保护。阅读说了几个影响语言消失的factor，听力反驳。 阅读文章： 1. 根据一个survey,当地十六岁以下才有百分之二十的人说当地话，而且在减少。 2. 当地渔业为了实现国际化，只说international话，比如说像English这种语言。因此，父母不鼓励孩子学当地话。 3. 电视和电台大部分都是用English和French播的，这对年轻人影响比较大的。所以也造成这种语言的后继无人。 听力文章： 1. 阅读中survey的数据不准确，实际收据比这个要多。因为survey 只是针对traditional的当地话，而年轻人说的也是当地话，只不过比较modern。 2. 听力说及时发展渔业也还是需要和local交易的。而local人只说当地话，所以在工作中说当地话也很重要，父母们也意识到了，开始让孩子们学。
3. 听力说确实电视和电台是这样的，但是网络媒体并不这样，人家大部分还是用native language的，而且听众也挺多的。 【独立写作】 Which option do you prefer? Travel to foreign countries when you are young than when you are older. Give specific reasons or examples to support your decision. 题目解析： 这道题算是一道老题，和今年5月29日那场考试的题目(It is better to take risks and explore new things when you are older than when you are young.)极其类似。并且，也呼应了2015年北美考场的真题。所以，部分同学对此可能并不陌生。 写作思路解析： 选择年轻时旅行 1. 丰富生活 列出细节(the Golden Gate Bridge ，The Pyramids and The Louvre)具体描绘世界之五彩缤纷。拿书本所学和实际经历对比，感叹纸上得来终觉浅。拿年轻实现旅行梦想和年老后悔对比，鼓励年轻人尽早行动。
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新闻写作培训 一、什么是新闻(新闻的定义) 1. 新闻的定义。 a. 新闻必须是新近发生的; b. 新闻所报道的事实必须是真实的，且有价值的; c. 新闻必实)须是对事件(事的“报道”。 2. 新闻六要素=5W 1H。 既然新闻是对新近发生的事实的报道，即对“5W”事件What、时间When、人物Who、地点Where、原因Why和“1H”How怎么样,如何/结果)的报道。5W 1H也称新闻六要素。新闻六要素近年来在国内一些教材中得到认可，原来我们上学时的教科书里只有新闻五要素，即5W。 a(新闻报道不是重复历史(旧闻) 过去的已知已发生的事实不是新闻，新闻是新近(近期)发生的未知事实，昨天的新闻就是今天的历史。如:比如3月份发生在车间的新闻，你4月份才去写，或者别人都知道了，你再写，就没有新闻报道的价值了。所以说，新闻必须要及时。 b(新闻稿件不是文学作品 文学作品都是大家常见的，比如散文、诗歌、小说、剧本。文学作品讲究修饰、形容，甚至虚构、夸大;但新闻重真实、明晰(尽量少用形容词、心理描写、合理想像，多用动词)。新闻通讯是饭、文学作品是酒。
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小学生作文辅导教案 (全)48298 The final revision was on November 23, 2020
小学生作文辅导教案 目录 第一讲写人作文 第二讲记叙文 第三讲状物作文（动物、植物、物体） 第四讲写景作文 第五讲书信、导游词 第六讲想象作文 第七讲导游词 第一讲写人的文章 （一）写开头 请同学们先选好要写的人，想一想：你为什么要写这个人根据下面的词句导引把想到的写出来。 1.在我熟悉的人中，是一位，我非常他。 2. 虽然不是，不是，不是，他（她）只是，但是，他是我最敬佩的人。 3.说起来，可真是与众不同，他，他他，同学们都很喜欢他。 4.我有一个小伙伴，他的名字叫，他他，我们是形影不离的好朋友。 5.瞧，他来了， 。他就是我敬佩的老师。
6.每当 ___________________________ 的时候，我就想起了________________________ __ ，他就是我最_________________ 人。 优秀习作 1.你认识我吗我叫汤诗琦，是山东省博兴县第一小学三年级五班的一名学生，今年已度过了九个“六一”儿童节。 2.你瞧,镜子里出现了一个可爱的小女孩,一头乌黑发亮的头发,圆圆的脸上镶着两道又黑又浓的眉毛,大大的眼睛里有两颗黑得像葡萄的眼珠子,小鼻子下有一张能说会道的小嘴巴,那不是别人,就是我! 3.在我们的生活中，有许多人值得我们去敬佩，有无私的教师，抚养我们成长的爸爸妈妈，辛勤的清洁工……。然而使我最敬佩的是那无私的清洁工。 4.我最敬佩的人是我的妈妈。她有一双炯炯有神的眼睛，虽然小了点，但透着一股威严。那乌黑的头发，浅浅的眉毛，挺挺的鼻子，不大的嘴巴，衬在她那张瓜子脸上，显得很好看。 5.在我家的旁边！住着邻居王大妈！王大妈是个大大咧咧的人！不过她乐于助人！还是我们弄堂有名的开心果呢！ 6.她，是我的朋友。她长着一头乱蓬蓬的短发，一双眯成一条缝的眼睛，满脸雀斑。别看她长得傻乎乎的，但是坚强的她非常值得我欣赏、学习。 这些开头都写得很好，一开头就抓住了“主旨”。这样写就不会离题偏题。 （二）写主体 主体部分要具体生动地展现人物的言谈举止和精神风貌，要通过具体生动的事例来表现人物的思想品质。要把人物写“活”，就要有具体生动的描写。描写人物的方法主要有以下几种：
新东方·北京2008年7月 庄重 整理：Sketch K＆Tina （思琦＆萌萌） 2008年7月28日第一讲 一．托福写作的评分系统 官方指南 按分数档次进行微调 评判：一分钟内浏览给分数档次 根据闪点+- 1分 必须给评分者短时间内最好的印象 不能在关键的地方犯恶心的错误 关键：各段首句，文章末句及具有强结论的句子 恶心：主谓不一致 时态问题 名词单复数 印象极为关键：紧扣题目，紧扣要求 二．如何取悦评卷人 1 必须有清晰的整体脉络
2 必须有自然的段间衔接 3 经典的用词用句 经典用词用句的锻造： 用词：动词 核心动词的动词的使用是写作能力的标志 e.g,: eat ---consume 英语写作表达的美在于用不同的单词表达相同的含义 e.g.:show ---display --- demonstrate 近义词的积累 英语中“好”的词有： Good / ok Perfect / glorious / terrific / fantastic Superb 用句： It 作形式主语或形式宾语 e.g. : It is easy to learn English there be 倒装、虚拟、强调 名人名言（不要使用c-e）（千万不要乱编） ***said + 直接引用———不用 ***believed + 自由表述 -----用 可用人物: Kant& Nietzsche 只用于道德和爱心之类的话题 三．文化差异对应试写作产生的影响 1 必须有清晰的结构 观点鲜明的开头 紧扣主题的结尾 由主题句引导的衔接自然的中间段落 引导：主题句一定要在该段首句 2 必须要有统一的中心 3 自然的衔接（衔接为其生命） 中文：意合语言 英文：形合语言 逻辑关系的显性化 逻辑关键词 衔接方法：1 重复词：概括重复直接重复和齐头重复 2 序数词：first…second… 3 关联词：并列 and 转折 but 让步 although 递进 in addition 因果 because e.g. Because of having rain ,he developed a high fever , and thus has to sleep at home .his absence resulted in the reduction of his pay. 4 转折和让步之间的差别 让步好于转折 democracy 民主 e.g. they are poor ---they suffer from poverty They are hungry ---they struggle against starvation ------they suffer form poverty ,struggling against starvation 左手：遣词造句的上升 右手：思维方式的改变 e.g: 我们不会把所有秘密告诉其他人 we don’t tell others all the secrets we don’t let others know all the secrets we hide some secrets from others everyone has privacy 四．平时训练写作的方法 境界：手中有文章心中有文章出口成章 手中无文章心中有文章 手中无文章心中无文章妙笔生花 《新东方英语中学版》 1 阅读 I will think about it 没戏
小学生阅读和作文同时起步 辅导班招生简章 学好阅读和作文，受益终身。作文是语文学习的重要内容，也是考试中占分最多的试题。可现实中很多孩子对作文的畏难情绪和厌烦心理十分严重。作文辅导成为家长们较为头疼的问题。孩子说作文难，归纳起来不外乎两点：一是难在写作时不知道该写些什么；二是难在作文不知道该怎么写。 “小学生阅读和作文同时起步”辅导班，将按照不同年级特点，精心设计辅导内容，分层次系统讲授简单快捷的写作方法，采用先进的教育理念，权威的作文教材，结合国学经典、阅读训练、思维训练，让你轻松快乐写作文。在这里，作文就像说话一样自然真实，像游戏一样开心快乐，像梦想一样自由飞翔。 一、招生对象：小学1---6年级学生 二、教学特色： ★小班制教学，针对性强。 每班学生人数不超过8人，能够形成一定的教学氛围，提高教学效率. ★分年级教学:1、2年级，3、4年级，5、6年级 ★师生互动训练 ★符合小学生思维特点 三、教学方式灵活，兴趣与能力兼顾。 精心设置每一个教学环节，在培养学生兴趣的基础上使学生掌握基本的阅读技巧和写作技巧，逐步积累素材，明显提高阅读能力和写作能力。 阅读:传授阅读技巧，提高阅读能力。听、说、读、议、写结合，积累词汇，丰富语言，汲取文学营养，领略语言魅力。 作文:创设和谐氛围，激发写作兴趣。通过教师指导、范例分析、巧设练习夯实作文基础知识。采用讲故事、猜谜语、编广告词、儿歌、演说等形式，辅之成功激励游戏，使课堂妙趣横生，寓教于乐，快乐学习。 四、教学内容全面丰富。
将实行“阅读”与“写作”相结合的方式进行教学。提高阅读能力与写作能力的是学生在语文考试中取得高分的关键因素。掌握一定的阅读技巧，学会常见阅读理解问题的答题方法，将大大提高学生的阅读效率，开阔学生的视野，积累更多的好词佳句，从而有利于写作能力的提高。另外，实行“阅读”与“写作”相结合的方式进行教学也将帮助学生巩固语文基础知识，从根本上帮助学生提高语言表达能力。 开班时间：暂定7月6日
前些日子，和一个同学聊天，他忧愁地说：“他儿子的作文真是差劲，周末他跑了几家作文辅导班，下狠心要让孩子好好练习写作文。”我便发了我和女儿校讯通的博客地址，并我告诉他：一年来，我和我的孩子写了一百多篇文章。他惊讶：“你那么忙，怎么还有时间写这么多东西呢？”他看了几篇后更是惊叹：“你真是有心的妈妈！”我有些沾沾自喜了，把鲁迅的话告诉他：“时间是海绵里的水，只要挤就会有的。”他赶紧也给自己的儿子也申请了一个博客。第二天我QQ刚上线，他就向我请教怎么加入圈子，怎样发表文章。我提议他先随便浏览一下网页，又给他推荐了几个优秀的圈子。之后他感谢我说：“谢谢你，老同学，这里真是一个好的作文选，以前真不知道网上会有这么好的练习写作的平台。” 能给朋友一点小小的帮助也算是收获吧！我相信只要他和他儿子在这里扎了根，他儿子的作文会越写越好的，便不用他愁眉苦脸地给儿子找作文辅导班了。在这里他们会看到别人是怎样读书的，在这里他们会看到别的家长和孩子是怎样进步的。这里不仅仅是一个练习写作的平台，还是一个给你醒悟，给你成长建议的平台，不管你是家长还是孩子，都能让你从中学到许多东西。 孩子上再好的作文辅导班，如果他读的书不够多，练习的不够多，他的作文也提高的不会快。作文不好写，作文写不好，这是很多孩子的普遍现象，一个孩子在学校学习两年后就开始写作文了，确实有些难。我觉得一个小学三年级的孩子，写的好与不好只要能成文就不错了。不要忙着给孩子报什么作文辅导班了，纵使老师教你几个写作的
技巧，自己缺乏创新，缺乏观察生活，缺乏生活的感悟，你也写不出好文章。 个人一点小建议，对于初学写作的孩子，给他报个作文辅导班，不如给孩子报一个阅读班，让他先读许多东西。写东西真不是容易的事情，我们从小学到大学，这么多年也没有写出好文章。但是读就容易了，一篇有趣的文章，故事性强、情节跌宕，谁不喜欢读呢？ 有些家长说：“我家孩子就不爱看书。”我不赞同这个观点。你没有给他书看，怎么就知道他不爱看书呢？你想想，如果你经常带孩子去图书馆，去书店。你经常对着书看的津津有味，看着书笑，看着书流泪。他还能对书无动于衷吗？如果你故意生怕他发现自己偷偷地看书，对于一个孩子，他好奇心那么强，能不动心吗？他不爱看书，那是他没发现书里的好东西。你带着他走进书里，他不爱看书才怪呢？ 我们不用内疚自己没有很高的学历教育孩子，也不用埋怨自己写作水平不高不能指导孩子。“书中自有黄金屋，书中自有颜如玉。”拿起一本好书，就能读出作者的文学修养、写作方法。和孩子一起读，我们做家长的自己读，孩子自己读。读得多了，他的写作思路就不在狭窄了。道路宽了，就走的舒服了，走的舒服了，就越来越愿意走了。他愿意走了，我们也舒心了。 今天，我QQ刚上线，我那个同学，他就高兴地给我打招呼，告诉我他儿子的作文，上周被老师选为范文读给全班的同学听了。他说：真的谢谢你，要不是当初你给我们介绍这么好的一个网站的话，我们