短文改错专项训练
下面短文中每篇各有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
Passage 1
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital．
Passage 2
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allow ed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
Passage 3
Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.
Customer
Li Ming
Passage 4
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming came see me every day. Then his father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Si nce then we haven’t see each other much. But we’ve kept writing to each other.
Passage 5
I feel quite sure the chemistry test that we’re going to have tomorrow. The teacher has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem. Then I will ready for the test.
Passage 6
Dear Susan,
I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.
Yours,
Zhang Ming Passage 7
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English. I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day I learned from many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even
communicate some college students freely.
Passage 8
If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.
Passage 9
Dear Mary,
I receive your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the lab. But to my greatly surprise you say you will give up learn English. The reason is because you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests. I’m afraid I couldn’t agree with you . I know it is difficulty to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be important tool in our future work. Beside, it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be succeed. Do remember that where there is a will, there is a way. I’ m looking forward to hearing good news from yo u.
Yours,
Li Hua
Passage 10
Dear Ralph,
I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,
but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one
to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find
they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve
become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I
felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this
sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?
参考答案
Passage 1
It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the on
east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a when side
yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment
make
the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop
he
and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was∧young woman ∧wore a pair drove a who/改为wearing
of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car
passing
and took the old man to the nearest hospital．
Passage 2
I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after
with
school. She holds∧ view that senior three students have to make fully use of
the full
every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am
her
allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my
be
study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.
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In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.
watching work Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at\
has 删除at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.
Passage 3
Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like∧shape of the bought the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it But
∧turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter
is(或去it) becomes
worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask
disappointed
for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will ∧at home this weekend.Please
man/ person be/stay
call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very
Thank
much.
Customer
Li Ming Passage 4
I first met Li Ming at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Ming over in my
friend’s to place. We listen to my CDs together and soon become best friends. Three years ago, Li Ming’s listened
parents invited I to spend two wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer
me a weeks
holiday. Li Ming and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but
beautiful and had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Ming cam e ∧see me every day. Then his father has
to
changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much. but
seen
we’ve kept writing to each other.
Passage 5
I feel quite sure∧the chemistry test that we’re go ing to have tomorrow. The teacher
about/of
has already told us exact what to study and I think my grades on homework has been
exactly have
good．In a fact, I think chemistry has always been one of the subjects that I enjoy
it most. Susan and I had already spent two hours review pages 115-140 tonight. We
have reviewing
are going to devote another hour to practise with some of the sample(实例) problem.
practicing problems
Then I will ∧ready for the test.
be
Passage 6
Dear Susan,
I'm very gladly to hear you are coming to visit me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won't be able glad
to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won't find∧difficult to get
because/as it
to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the
minutes right
Friendship Hotel. My classes will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you
and
together to a hot pot restaurant for dinner and we'll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner.
about
Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday.
Have Yours,
Zhang Ming Passage 7
Some day I happened to find a chatting room in my QQ, there people were chatting in English.
One where
I tried to chat with some of them. To my surprised, I found the oral English of some junior
surprise
students were better than me. I asked them for advice and they told me to practise more on was mine
QQ. But every day after that I would spend one hour practise my oral English on QQ. Day by day So practising
I learned f rom many useful words and expressions. With time went by, I found that I could even
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communicate∧some college students freely.
with
Passage 8
If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my
chosen
English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitors. Second,I will learn more about ∧history of
with 或to the
the Olympics as much as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can well am
help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history or way and culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the
our make Games a success.
Passage 9
Dear Mary,
I receive ( received)your E-mail just now. Don’t worry about me. I’m getting on well with my research work in the laB．But to my greatly(great)surprise you say you will give up learn(learning) English. The reason is because (that)you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interests( interest). I’m afraid I couldn’t(can’t)agree with you . I know it is difficulty(difficult) to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today. It will be（加an ）important tool in our future work. Beside( Besides), it is becoming more and more important in our daily life. If you study hard, you will be (去be)succeed. Do remember that where there is a will there is a way. I’ am looking forward to hearing good news from you.
Passage 10
Dear Ralph,
I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent,
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but now I ∧changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one
have
to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find
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they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve
become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I colder times
felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this
left
sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?
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高中英语短文改错技巧 2017-07-08 高中英语短文改错技巧（1） 体裁和句式： 体裁以为主，句子结构以简单句为主过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。从近几年考试题来看，短文改错的句子平均长度趋于平稳，由于多数句子不是只占一行，所以只有读完整个句子，仔细分析，才能发现错误、纠正错误。但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。这就需要考生在这个句子中判断出二到三个地方有错或无错，增加了试题的难度。归纳短文改错错误类型: （一）词法的测试 1.名词：主要是查名词是否可数，与其修饰语是否一致。 eg: 1） I have many hobby, such as football, sing, listen music. Hobby是可数名词，在这要用复数形式；playing football是一项运动，football只是一种球； sing和listen to 要用动名词形式。 2） Do exercises do good to our healthy. exercise作运动讲是不可数名词，do exercise作主语要用动名词形式，谓动用单数；healthy是形容词，这里要用名词形式。 3） Reading books is one of my hobby. one of 后的名词应用复数形式。 2. 代词：对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的 内容及在句中的作用，注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后是否一致，常考的代词包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词及疑问代词等。 1）He drove too fast, and the police stopped her. 前面提到的是he而后面却用her来代，故应将her改为him. 2）This is the best film which I have ever seen. 先行词前有最高级修饰应用关系代词that 而不是which。 3. 冠词：英语中只有三个冠词，但用起来却很复杂，在短文改
【解题技巧】 1、通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，尤其是有的行文逻辑方面的错误在看单句时难以发现错误（比如前文用mike，后文代词用she等）。在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行分句改错。 2、分局阅读，逐行找错。在完成第一步后，要进行逐行主句的改错。这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇角度着重分析和特别注意。 3、最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿。 【考查要点】 1 词法的测试： 2 定冠词和不定冠词的用法，即a, an, the三者的转化与增减。例：A beauty of the West Lake is more than I can describe.正解：A--The 3 名词的单复数和名词所有格。 例：More than one students can’t take in it.正解：students—student 4 动词的时态、语态、语气，情态动词和非谓语动词。
例：He is good at sing songs.正解：sing—singing 5 人称代词的格、物主代词、指示代词、连接代词、不定代词等用法。 例：The book is her.正解：her—hers 6 词性的变化。 例：John deep believed that the God knows everything.正解：deep—deeply 7 并列连词、从属连词的用法。 例：She insisted that the boy told was a lie.正解：that—what 8 形容词、副词以及比较级与最高级的用法。 例：They all exacting by the exacted news.正解：exacting—exacted ; exacted—exacting 9 固定搭配与习惯用法。 例：It happened all of sudden.正解：of 后加a 11、句法的测试： 12 考察英语的一致性现象，主要包括：主谓不一致、代词不一致、
短文改错练习（1） Rowena and Billy Wrangler are model high school students . They study hard . They do extreme well on 76．_______________ achievement tests . And next year , Rowena will attending 77．_______________ Harvard University . Billy , her younger brother , hoe to go 78．_______________ to Cornell . That makes Rowena and Billy different from 79．_______________ most students is that they don’t go to school . In fact , 80．_______________ they've never been to school . Since a kindergarten , they 81．_______________ have studied at home . Neither Rowena or Billy feels as if 82．_______________ they have missed out on nothing by being taught at home . 83．_______________ As many of the more than one million people who receive 84．_______________ home schooling in the United States , they feel if they 85．_______________ have gotten a good education . 短文改错练习（2） Did you enjoy yourself yesterday? I suppose you do. But I’d76．_______________ like to tell you what a bad day I had yesterday. Nothing 77．_______________ just went wrong. On the morning, my alarm clock didn’t ring,78．_______________ since I woke up an hour late. I was in such a hurry that I burnt my 79．_______________ hand when I was cooking the breakfast. Then I ran out of the house 80．_______________ to catch the 8:30 buses. This is the bus I usually take. But, you 81．_______________ may laugh, I missed it of course. I am very unhappy, and scared 82．_______________ as well because teacher hates the students coming late to school. 83．_______________ So I ran three miles to school only to discover that nobody 84．_______________ was there. The school was quiet but peaceful. Our classroom was 85．_______________ locked. I realized that moment: It was Sunday. 短文改错练习（3） Get a good education is more important today than 76．_______________ ever before .In Canada mostly children attend public 77．_______________ schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments 78．_______________ through tax income. Students in Canada taught in 79．_______________ English and in French. The rests of Canadian children 80．_______________ attend private schools, that are supported mainly by fees 81．_______________ paying by parents .By law ,the children must attend 82．_______________ the school from age 5 to 16. There are several different 83．_______________ levels in the Canadian education system .The first was 84．_______________ called Elementary Schools ,which include kindergartens 85．_______________ through grade 7 or 8. 短文改错练习（4） Yesterday we went to plant trees on the hill near to 76. our school. The boys were made dig pits(坑).The 77. girls were told to plant the young trees into the pits. 78. All of us worked very hardly. Soon we were all wet 79. with sweat.After the young trees planted, we 80. began to water it.The water was at the foot of 81. the hill. But we stood in line to pass pails(桶) 82. of water from one to other up to the hill. 83. We did not finish water the trees until it 84. was dark.Though we were tired,we feel very happy. 85 短文改错练习（5） A few months after returning the US from Germany , I took 76. _______________ part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 77. _______________
英语改错 纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错，不难看出，其错误形式基本上为：错词占6行左右;正确占一行;多词和缺词一般占3行左右。错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。其中，动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。 1. 谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;② and 前后动词时态不一致; ③主谓不一致; ④缺少动词,特别是be动词; ⑤第三人称单数形式错用; ⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。 They did not want me to do any work at home; they wantme to devote all my time to my studies.(did 改为do，错误类型属于①) As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visitingtemples and told stories. (visiting 改为 visited, 错误类型属于②) There will an important game next month. (will后加be, 错误类型属于④) One evening she told me that something happened whenher parents was out. ( was 改为were，错误类型属于③) 2. 名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。 I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subject 改为subjects) Their word were a greatencouragement to me.(word 改为words) Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.(knowledges改为knowledge) 3. 连词错误：连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/ or/but等。关于连词，一般考查从句关系 who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。 I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. (错用了who的所有格形式，改为whose) I teach them, play with them, but watch them growingup. (此处应该是并列的关系而非转折，but改为 and) Clever as she is, but she works very hard.(as意为“尽管”，不能再跟but连用，所以去掉but) 4. 冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an 和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词) We may be one family and live under a same roof. (a 改为the，the same 是固定搭配) As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain with all kindsof pants. (mountain是可数名词需用冠词，所以其前加 a ) I hope you have pleasant journey.(journey是可数名词，故have后加a) 5. 形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词 smell /feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。 I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (time是名词所以要用形容词wonderful修饰) My pronunciation was terribly.(was后用形容词，terribly改为terrible.) 6. 代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I / me; he/him; she/ her; we/ us they/ them )错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。 Soon I began to enjoy talking to myself on paper as Iwas learning to express me in simple English. (me 改为 myself ) One day I wrote a little story and showed to myteacher. (to前加it) If any one of us had any difficulty in our life andstudy, the other would help him out. (other 后加s) What’s more, you have to be friends with your pupilsand take good care of him. (him改为them) 7. 非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。 Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper. (enjoy 后需接动名词，talk改为talking) But his parents think go to college is more importantthan playing sports. (go作主语,应改为 going ) Children may not develop the habit of read and theability to enjoy themselves. (介词后用动名词形式作宾语，read改为reading) I particularly enjoyed driving through the countrysidewith you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees. (and 连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致，故saw改为seeing)
高中英语短文改错技巧总结 短文改错口诀：动词形，名词数; 注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别;习惯用法要记住;句子成分多分析;逻辑错误须关注。 一. 动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如： My favourite sport is football. I was member of our school football team. (is) Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are) 上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念，注意短文内容发生或存在的时间，保持时间概念的一致性。 二. 名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如： …so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects) 三. 区分形和副 及区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。例如： I'm sure we'll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful) Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately) 需要注意的是，形容词多用来做定、表、补语等，而副词只能在句子中作状语，修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time，第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。 四. 非谓动词细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有分词和动名词类错误，也包括不定式类错误。例如： …in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. (interested) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also …(playing) My parents love me…and will do all they can ∧make sure…(to) 上述二、三例分别是动名词作主语，和不定式作目的状语。一般的，现在分词有主动态和进行时的含义，而过去分词具有被动态和完成时的含义，不定式有将来时态的含义。 五. 习惯用法要记住 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考的常考点，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。例如： It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and…(of) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ourselves. (of) 六. 句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语景要选择不同的词语。这些都有待我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：They ∧eager to know everything about China and…(were) I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. (which) 第一例漏掉了谓语动词were，这是受寒于习惯的影响而导致的错误;第二例则是词类与它在句子中的成分不相符，where是副词，不能作主语。 七. 逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误，常是这类错误的考查对象。例如：The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (their) First, let me tell you something more about myself. (去掉more) …no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. (everyone) 上述第一例中的主语是Smiths(史密斯夫妇俩)，因此后面的his不合逻辑。第二例中的more在这儿表“再”的意思，才开始告诉别人，怎么能说“再告诉你
高考英语短文改错新题型 下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分 Passage 1 It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007． I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street．Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and made a right turn into Park Road．The next moment the car hit the man while she was crossing the road．He fell with a cry．The car didn’t stop and drive off at full speed heading west． I noticed the driver was young woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864．After two minutes later, I stopped a passed car and took the old man to the nearest hospital． Passage 2 I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allo wed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for u s to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV. Passage 3 Dear sir, Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And recently I find something is wrong with it. It begins to make noise when it turned on. At first it is low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make the matter worse, it even stops working sometimes. We all feel disappointing. I am writing you to ask for help. Would you please send a people to repair it? I will at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 6606.5531. Thanks you very much.
高中英语短文改错专题练习（10篇） 答题要求：此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正： 此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。 此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。 此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。 注意：原行没有错的不要改。 A While traveled to Paris on a bus, I became very sick. 1. _______________ A well-dressing man on the bus helped me greatly. He 2. _______________ took me off the bus, found out where the doctor’s office. 3. _______________ and took me to there himself. The next day, he came 4. _______________ to visit me. I didn’t speak French well, so I can’t talk with 5. _______________ him very much. However, even if we couldn’t talk, but 6. _______________ we could communicate. I communicated myself thanks 7. _______________ to his great kindness, and he communicated his concern 8. _______________ for my healthy. Through this experience I have learned 9. _______________ that communication can take place without much actual 10. ______________ language at all. B The Internet is playing a important part in81．＿＿＿＿＿ our daily life. On the net, we can learn about82．＿＿＿＿＿ news both home and abroad and some other83．＿＿＿＿＿informations as well．We can also make phone calls，84．＿＿＿＿＿ send messages by e-mails，go to net schools，and85．＿＿＿＿＿ learn foreign languages by ourselves．Beside，we86．＿＿＿＿＿ can enjoy music，watch sports matches，and play the87．＿＿＿＿＿ chess or cards．The net even help us do shopping，88．＿＿＿＿＿ make a chat with others and make friends with them．89．＿＿＿＿＿ In a word，the Internet has made our life more easier．90．＿＿＿＿＿ C A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took 81. part in a college course in French. Since I have learned to 82. speak German good in Germany, I thought that it might be 83. interested to begin studying another language. At the first 84. class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, 85. in which he would say one word or two in French, and each 86. student would do their best to copy. When he got to me, he 87. kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him 88.
逻辑错误部分 短文改错在试题中属于写作部分，但设置的逻辑性错误却让人感觉有点幼稚，因为我们在写作时一般不会出现这样的低 级错误。譬如，我们不会用she 来指代一个男孩，不会分不清but 和and 的用法，也不会混淆here 和there 的词义。但是在短文改错中要找出这样的错误却不是件容易事。为什么还要设置这样的题呢？因为它能反映出考纲考查“语篇”和“逻辑”的要求。 因此，我们在做短文改错题时，不仅要留意语法，还要留意行文逻辑。本讲把高考中常设置的逻辑性错误归纳在一起， 好让大家对逻辑性错误的常设点有个清楚深刻的认识，以便快速提高查找逻辑错误的能力。要做好逻辑性错误题，必须认真细心来读懂文章，要认真读懂每一句话才行。走马观花地看文章，有一些错误是不容易找出来的。 考点1. so, and, but, or连接句子或并列成分时，要认真分析前后逻辑关系 1. 【2012 陕西】It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go anywhere from the hotel by public transport. 2. 【2009 全国Ⅱ】I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon, and I was held up on my way back. 3. 【2016 全国Ⅱ】If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. 4. 【2013 四川】We were warned not to cheat again, so she would need to see our parents. 5. 【2017 新课标I】I thought I had learned the instructor ’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind went blank. 考点2. 连接并列项时，肯定句常用and，否定句常用or 连接。肯定句用or 表选择，译为“或者” He has a car and a house. He doesn ’t have a car or a house. I need a pen or a pencil. 我需要支钢笔或者铅笔。 注意：He has no sister or brother. =He has no sister and no brother. 即：no A or B=no A and no B 6. 【2016 全国Ⅰ】Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are used for cooking. 7. 【2008 全国Ⅰ】I ’d like to stay there for half a month, visiting places of interest or practicing my Englis h as well. 8. Ten days later, it didn ’t ring and send messages. 9. Earmuffs ( 护耳) consist of two thick soft pieces of cloth jointed by a band, which you wear over your ears to protect them from the cold and loud noise. 考点3. 遇到人称代词时，要留意其是否用错。几乎每篇短文改错都有这样一个题 A. 性别指代错误。例如，前面提到是 a boy，后面却用she来指代 10. 【2013 辽宁】I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. 11. 【2010 全国Ⅱ】Before her leaving, I prepared a gift to show my best wishes to him. 12. 【2016 浙江】Every time he arrived home at the end of the day, we reet her at’t h e d dgoor. B. 单复数指代错误。例如，前面提到people，后面却用he 来指代 13. 【2012 全国新课标】I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did go wrong, I got angry and broke it. 14. 【2015 浙江】Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. 15. 【2009 全国Ⅰ】The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and a sports center has been built in their place. C. 对象指代错误。例如，前面用的we，后面却用their
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新短文改错练习题8篇 1WhenIwasinhighschool,'"Whenyoubowtosomebodynexttime,youcancount'January, February,March,"Inwhatmonthdidhegoaway" ’,来 源:Inaword,ifeverybodyhastheawareofreducingthewasteandtakesaction,wecanco ntributetooursociety ,youwouldfindthereareallsortofnews:accidents,floods,fires,wars,sports,boo ks,答案 改为friends【解析】考查名词数的变化。Mostof决定了名词必须用复数形式。改为one【解析】考查代词用法。it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处我希望我也能有一辆，与前面提到的是一类。改为which【解析】考查非限制性定语从句关系词。非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用前加for【解析】考查介词用法。此处askmyfather的目的应该是钱。askmyfather与themoney 之间需要加表目的的介词。改为I【解析】考查代词用法。由前句hesaidhecouldonlygivemehalfofthemoney.和后句的myself.可知此处应该改为改为when【解析】考查连词用法。按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。改为later【解析】考查副词用法。此处用副词，不能用连词。改为gave【解析】考查动词时态。按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。9.去掉happy前的much.考查副词用法。此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。 改为happiest【解析】考查形容词。此句意为，今天是假期中最高兴的一天。故将原型happy改为最高级happiest。2.去掉but【解析】考查表转折的连词。因为本句的句首用Although，所以此处不再用but。故将but去掉。改为taking【解析】考查动词ing的用法，of是介词，其后用动词的ing形式，即动名词形式。改为me 【解析】考查动词后宾语的使用形式。此处谓语动词drive后应该用“我”的宾格形式，即me。改为didn’t或did后加not【解析】上文说到，通常我害怕坐公共汽车，汽车难闻的气味让我发疯，使我感到晕车。且下文说，我最终打败了晕车的习惯。所以上下文表达的是转折的意思。故此处意为“但是今天我不晕车了。”所以加上not。改为liked【解析】考查动词的时态。这句话的意思是，晚上我和一位我曾经喜欢的老朋友一块出去。故将现在时改为一般过去式。改为both【解析】考查代词。我们两个人用both，三人或三人以上用all。改为with【解析】考查固定搭配bebusywithsth忙于做某事。改为that【解析】考查so和such的区别。So后通常接形容词或副词，such后接名词，此处surprised是形容词，意为“惊讶的”。所以将such改为so。改为after【解析】这句话要表达的意思是“起初，我以为我们毕业后将不会再见面了”，所以把before改为after。 改为therefore【解析】考查副词。这句话的意思是“跳舞是我的爱好，因此当我听到…”，otherwise意为“否则”；therefore意为“因此”。故将otherwise改
短文改错 My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! 二 Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. 三 Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes !