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雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项

雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项

雅思小作文写作技巧与应注意事项

1。试卷发下后,请花半分钟的时间来浏览作文的题目,这里包括议论文在内。

2。此后,请看第一部分的题目,明确以下几点

1)属于什么题型的图表,是一个曲线图,一个饼图,一表格,一个流程图还是一个物体以及其他类型的图表

2)是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图

3)时间、字数以及其他的要求

3。用5分钟的时间分析并形成以下的内容

1)注意不同类型图表的技巧

2)划出并分析题目中的关键内容,分析图表中的关键特征点

3)考虑结构注意以下

开头不能与文章已经给出的东西一样,用自己语言表达;

描述关键以及有代表性的点或者是趋势;

在语法与句法正确的基础上,力求用不同的句型组合,用近意词语;正确表达文章所给信息;

在可能的情况下做简单的总结;

不要发表有个人或者是评论性的句子;

标点符号,单词的拼写应该正确;

4。书写的时候注意流利与工整,采用现代式的书写格式

5。留出一定时间检查,保持卷面的整洁

技巧性套句

开头句型

一般有两种,一种是主动一种是被动。

1)The chart/graph/table/diagram/process

2)According to/As can be seen from/As shown in/It is clear/apparent from/It can be seen from

结尾句型

中间关键句型————☆要注意认真审查题目,弄清楚要描述的数据究竟代表什么,单位是什么,用什么方式表达。OBJECT

注意点:要明确以一定的顺序来写。从左到右或者是从上到下,从内到外等等。把题目中给出的部件详细描述。

句型:介绍功能The illustration is of a _______ which is designed to

说明构成部分A ______ is made up of /consists of/comprises How many ?A number of parts/sections

描述各个部件功能不要用you ,one 可以用we, the operator First , puts his or her _____on the ____

要有一定的顺序,不要将每个部分

单独写出,应该将能够合并的一起结合,注意用以下句型

要用关联词

PIE CHART

注意点:1)文字中要表达出总量与分量的关系,在两个以上的PIE中,要注意各个PIE间的比较

2)数据究竟代表什么应清楚

语言点:1)percentage / proportion

2) make up/ constitute / account for

3)①the biggest difference between 2 group is in…,where A makes up 5% while B constitutes 67%the highest percentage of A, which was approximately 12%

②the percentage of A in…..is more than twice that of B,the ratio is 67% to 45%

③in…,while a greater percentage of

A than

B are found in…….

④there are more A in……,reaching 0,compared with 0 of B

⑤A , which used to be the……..,has become less important, which declined sharply from 0 in 1978 to only 0 in 1998.

⑥The biggest loss was to某区域.

The biggest gains in A were made by 某区域.FLOW CHART

注意点:1)抓住“变化”和“趋势”

2)有两种情况其一是在不同时间段内的数据比较,另外是单独数据的全程描述。前者适合于数据代表的物体较少且时间界限明确的情况下,后者适合于描述数据对象很多且时间划定不清晰。当然依据考试中的题目来决定。语言点:1)变化状态幅度词

轻微-----slightly, slowly, steadily逐渐----gradually

显著-----significantly , markedly急剧-----rapidly , dramatically , abruptly ,sharply突然---suddenly趋势---trend inclination tendacy2)变量幅度词语

★增加-----increase, jump ,go up ,rise,

climb , ascend , level up ,surge,

★减少----decrease, drop ,go down ,fall,---- , descend, level down ,

★水平----keep/stay/remain/maintain stable ,----steady ,be similar to ,there is little/hardly any/no change★最高-----reach a highest point/the top/the summit/the peak/the most/peak in,at★最低-----reach a lowest point/the bottom//rock/hit a trough /bottom out★交叉-----correspond with in ----year; --- crossing the line for -----3)时间幅度词语During the period 1970—1999 ; From 1970 to 1999 ; Since the early 1970s ;In 1970------then in 1980-----ten years later4)基本句型

There was变化趋势in the number of A from 1986-1990 ,which was followed by 变化趋势and then变化趋势until 1998 when there was变化趋势for the next….years

From 1990 onwards, there was变化

趋势in the number of A which then变化趋势at 0 in 1994.In 1990,the number reached 0,but 30 years later there was变化趋势.After变化趋势from…to…,A begin变化趋势over the next….years.

The number of…increased rapidly from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period

〓There was a rapid increase from 1988 to 1990 during the five-year period

A has almost/nearly/about/over a quarter/half/twice/one third /as many students as/as much money as /B; A has about/approximately/exactly/precisely the same number/proportion/amount of students/money as…..It has reached something of a plateau,X percent/an average of X percent in the past few years in 1998.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of.....the graphs show a threefold increase in the

number of.....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....here is an upward trend in the number of

..witnessed/saw a sharp rise in.....

a has something in common with b/ the difference between a and

b lies in..柱状图

注意点:1)柱图主要是陈列的数据比较多,不能将所有的信息写出,只能抓住重点与关键点来写都需要结合题目来分析,对于一些点的特征具有相似性应该采用统一合并的方法,不能每有项都列出。

2)应该根据一定的顺序来写,否则会因逻辑不合理而失分语言点:1)一般是以比较极与最高级的句子形式出现如Low income consumed more hamburghers than other group,spending more than twice/ as much as hamburghers than FC and PizzaHigh income favoured pizza,spenting 0,followed by FC at 0,then hamburgher at 0.

High income appear to less than other /group/ on hamburghers,pizza remain their most popular fast-food, followed by FC.

In 1975,among 3 of the world’s largest cities, San Paulo had the highest population,and……is the second highest……had the lowest population .

As a result in 1990,the number of….appears the largest population, closely followed by…,then…….at……The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in 3 countries between 1930-1960 in great Britain, the numbers in prison has increased from….in 1930 to….in 1940,apart from in 1950 when the numbers in prison fell by….On the other hand , New Zealand and Australia are the only two countries in which the numbers in prison remain steady from 1930-1960,although there have been slightly fluctuations in this trend.

In the period 1975to 1990,all cities showed a growth, Tokyo and Newyork had by far the largest increase .san Paulo had the smallest growthThere were no figures given for male part-time workers.

In unemployed group, men enjoyed more leisure time---over 80%,compared with 40% for women, markedly more than women in retired group.表格/统计图

注意点:1)同柱状一样对数据间的变化与特殊显著数据的描写要求很高2)选择好顺序流程图

注意点:1)与物体、地图的描述一样,保持相同的作题原则2)一定要按照顺序来说明

3)明确图片上要求说明的内容是什么,不要随意编造

IELTS套句式写作大全

第一部分:TASK1图表写作套句精选

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...

该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。2.the bar chart illustrates that...该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding...该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows ...该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts ....该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of...这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show ...数据表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how...该树型图向我们揭示了如何...9.the data/statistics show ...该数据可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that...这些数据资料令我们得出结论...11.as

is

shown/demonstrated/exhibited

in

the

diagram/graph/chart/table...如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures...根据这些表...13.as is shown in the table...如表格所示...

14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken

place in...

从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is

clear/apparent from the chart that...

从图表我们可以很清楚看到...16.this is a graph which illustrates...这个图表向我们展示了...

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to...

该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的

比例关系。18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in...

该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。19.this is a column chart showing...这是个柱型图,描述了...

20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of...

如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。21.over the period from...to...the...remained level.在...至...期间,...基本不变。22.in the year between...and...在...年到...期间...

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998...1995年至1998三年里...

24.from then on/from this time onwards...从那时起...

25.the number of...remained steady/stable from to .

...月至...月达到顶点,为...29.the percentage remained steady at...比率维持在...

30.the percentage of...is sightly

larger/smaller than that of......的比例比...的比例略高。31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and......与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of...该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily....逐年减少,而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak of....的情况到达顶点,为...百分点。35.the figures/situation bottomed out in...数字在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough.数字达到底部。37.a is ...times as much/many as b.a是b的...倍。38.a increased by...a增长了...39.a increased to...a增长到...

40.high/low/great/small/ percentage.比低高

41.there is an upward trend in the

number of......数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to......到...发生急剧上升。

43.from...to...the rate of decrease slow down.从...到...,下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on,there was a gradual declinel reduction

figure of...

从这年起,...逐渐下降至...45.be similar to...与...相似

46.be the same as...与...相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between...and......与...之间有许多相似之处48.a has something in common with ba于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in...a与b之间的差别在于...

50...witnessed/saw a sharp rise in......年...急剧上升。

第二部分:Task1 写作常识一、图形种类及概述法:泛指一份数据

图表:a data

graph/chart/diagram/illustration/table 饼图:pie chart

直方图或柱形图:bar chart / histogram趋势曲线图:line chart / curve diagram表格图:table

流程图或过程图:flow chart / sequence diagram程序图:processing/procedures diagram以下是一些较常用的描述用法

The table/chart diagram/graph shows According to the table/chart diagram/graphAs shown in the table/chart diagram/graph

As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures,figures/s tatistics shows ...It can be seen from the figures/statisticsWe can see from the figures/statisticsIt is clear from the figures/statisticsIt is apparent from the figures/statistics

table/chart/diagram/graph figures ...

table/chart/diagram/graph shows/describes/illustrates how

in the...,reaching a......

阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的,因此文章必须逻辑清晰,如果描述得能令人在脑海里勾画出那个data chart,这篇task1无疑会达到8分的水平。开篇的第一句话可以是一句高度概括性的introduction;这样做不仅使文章更趋于完美,而且可以达到凑字数的目的。接下来另起一段开始进行描述,这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定于从句,从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。最后也可再另起一段进行简短的综述。上述的任何一个步骤都要遵循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则,任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不仅不会加分,而且还会成为扣分的因素。

二、data的具体表达法

data在某一个时间段固定不变:fixed in time在一系列的时间段中转变:changes over time持续变化的data在不

同情况下:增加:increase / raise / rise / go up ...

减少:decrease / grow down / drop / fall ...波动:fluctuate / rebound / undulate / wave ...稳定:remain stable / stabilize / level off ...最常用的两种表达法:

动词+ 副词形式

形容词+ 名词形式1. Verb+Adverb formThe number of XXX

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluc tuate...

+insignificantly/significantly/slightly/sudd enly/rapidly/dramatically/sharply/steeply/s teadily/gradually/slowly...

+from to / between and

2. Adjective+Noun form

There was a

sudden/rapid/dramatic/significant/sharp/ste ep/steady/gradual/slow/slight

+increase/jump/rise/decrease/drop/fall/fluc tuation

+in the number of XXX from to / between and

描述稳定的data:

The number of XXX remained steady/stable from to / between and The number of XXX stayed the same from to / between and

There was little change / hardly any change / no change in the number of XXX from from to / between and

描述不同状态的data

Noun form:

steady drop / sharp rise peak / dramatic fall / sharp dropVerbal form:

bottom out / reach the bottom / increase gradually / reach a

plateau / remain steady

描述the highest point以及the lowest point高点极值:

The monthly profit / The figures / The situation ...

+peaked in at XXX% / XXX

或者reached a peak / a high point at XXX% / XXX低点极值:

XXX bottomed out / reached+rock / the bottom / a low point或者hit a trough 此外,在描述过程中还有很多的conjunctional words/sentences,最常用的固定搭配如下:

并列:as well as, also, as well, either, neither,

too, moreover,

furthermore, in addition, additionally, besides, what’s more, apart from ...

举例:for example, for instance, to illustrate, as an illustration, in particular, particularly, especially

事实:as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, as long as, so long as ...

雷同/近似:similarly, likewise, at the same time, equally ...

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