2015年4月11日雅思写作解析及语料库2015年4月11日雅思写作解析及语料库
Old people need employment, so, they have to compete with young people (for the same job), what problems it will cause? What are the solutions. 老人需要工作岗位，所以，他们要和年轻人竞争，这会引起哪些问题，如何解决?(新题出现)
考察主题：大学生择业难的影响和解决策略换成了老人和年轻人竞争工作岗位的影响和解决策略。
雅思题库：
1. 大学生择业难的影响和解决策略?
2. 老人是否应该55岁退休?
注意事项：本文考察的是问题影响+ 解决策略
写作目的：本文要探讨的是老人和年轻人竞争工作岗位可能带来的消极影响以及提出相关的解决的策略。
雅思布局图：
首段：背景介绍+(问题影响) + 写作目的。
二段：问题影响的展开：对于年轻人的影响;对于老年人的影响; 对于企业的影响。
三段：相应的解决策略的展开：政府如何做;企业如何做;老人如何做。
尾段：亮明观点+ (总结理由)
雅思思路拓展：
老人和年轻人竞争相同的工作岗位的影响：
1. 对于年轻人而言，年长求职者者拥有丰富的的工作经验和独特的智慧，这就增加了年轻人择业的压力，如果惯性地求职失败，年轻人也许会失去工作的动力，闲赋在家，成为啃老族。
2. 对于老人而言，他们的体能和精力已经使他们不能适合现代工作的高强度以及压力，即使求职成功，也会带来健康管理以及精神压力方面的问题。
3. 对于企业而言，年轻人和老人都有其择业的优势，但是，如果老人成为公司员工的主力，这就意味企业生产力和工作效率的下降。
如何解决年轻人和老人共同竞争工作岗位的矛盾：
1. 政府鼓励年轻人自我创业，提供相关的优惠策略，这样，即使年轻人在和老人竞争工作岗位失败后，依然有广阔的就业空间。
2. 企业可以邀请老人做顾问，付给象征性的工资，指导年轻人的工作，这既可以发挥了老人的经验和智慧，又给年轻人提供了就业的机会。
3. 对于老人而言，他们应该调整心态，享受晚年生活，所以，他们应该满足于退休的生活，寻找人生的其他的乐趣，而不是非要和年轻人竞争工作岗位，这样，年轻人有更多的就业的机会，老人可以偷得浮生半日闲。
原创范文赏析：
首段：背景介绍+ 问题影响+ 写作目的
Notably, the competition between young job-seekers and senior job candidates is very fierce, which has a really adverse influence on young adults，the aged and relevant enterprises. In this essay，I will endeavor to explore the potential influence caused by the hot competition between young job-seekers and old job-hunters and then present my suggestions
解析：In this essay，I will endeavor to explore the potential influence caused by ……文本中，我将会努力探究下由……引起的不良的影响
解析：job candidates = job-seekers = job-hunters 求职者
二段：问题影响的展开
Virtually，under no circumstances can we ignore the negative influence triggered by the conflict between young job candidates and senior job-hunters. First, senior job candidates have accumulated rich experiences and wisdom，therefore，they tend to outshine young adults and thus increase the likelihood of youth unemployment. If youngsters constantly suffer from failure, then, they might feel unmotivated and frustrated. Therefore, they might end up becoming the bread-eaters of their families. Also, as for the old, their deteriorating energy and physique might make it hard for them to be competent at intense and
stressful work. They might suffer both physically and psychologically even if they secure reasonable jobs. Last, if senior employees constitute the largest proportion of the company’s staff, then, it indicates the decline of productivity and efficiency of the enterprises.
解析：under no circumstances can we ignore the negative influence trig gered by …… 任何情况下我们都不能忽视由于……引起的弊端
解析：outshine v 使某人相形见拙
解析：feel unmotivated and frustrated v感到失去动力，有挫败感
解析：end up doing sth v最终以……为结局
解析：bread-eaters n 只消费不赚钱的人
解析：be competent at …… v 能胜任……
解析：secure reasonable jobs v 找到理想的工作
解析：constitute t he largest proportion of …… v组成最大的比例
三段：相应的解决策略的展开：
Considering the severity of this problem，it is high time that we started adopting effective measures. First, it is imperative for the government to encourage youngsters to embark on self-employment and provide relevant preferential policies, thereby, young people still have huge room for employment even though they are eliminated by the job competition. Further, it works to invite senior job-seekers to act as consultants for the companies and provide symbolic remuneration. In this way, both parties could put their talents into full play. Wise and experienced job candidates can provide ambitious and vigorous youngsters with guidance. Finally, on the part of the elderly, what is of the utmost importance is to adjust their mentalities, by that I mean, to enjoy the retirement life and seek other pleasure is more commendable for them. Instead of competing for the limited job vacancies, to smell the flowers is a win-win option both for the aged and the young.
解析：Considering the severity of this problem，it is high time that we started adopting effective measures. 考虑到问题的严重性，是我们采取有效的措施来解决问题的时候了。
解析：to encourage youngsters to embark on self-employment and provide relevant preferential polices 鼓励年轻人自我创业，并且提供相关的优惠政策。
解析：provide symbolic remuneration v 提供象征性的薪酬
解析：put their talents into full play v充分展示才华
解析：on the part of sb 对于某人而言
解析：what is of the utmost importance is to …… 真正重要的是去……
解析：by that I mean 我的意思是……
解析：is more commendable for them 对于他们而言更加值得赞美
解析：job vacancies n工作岗位
解析：to smell the flowers v偷得浮生半日闲
解析：a win-win option n 双赢的选择
尾段：亮明观点(时间不足，现场省略)
Overall，it is not an easy task to appropriately balance the job needs between the young and the old. Every method I have method has its unique merit，therefore，joint efforts should be made by the government，relevant enterprises and the individual job-hunters.
解析：Every method I have method has its unique merit，therefore，joint efforts should be made by ……，……，…… 我提及的方法都有其利好，因此，……，……，……应该共同努力
本文档配合《顾家北手把手教你雅思写作（剑10）》版使用使用方法：每句话下面预留两行空格， 第一行写自己的翻译，第二行写顾家北的翻译与批阅。 全文翻译1：遵守规则论述类题目写作要点 Some people think that children should obey the rules or do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Other people think children controlled too much cannot deal with problem themselves in adulthood. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.
全文翻译2：老龄化社会+观点类( advantage/disadvantage ) +段落的数量In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?
全文翻译3：看电视学习+观点类( agree/disagree ) +写作要点
Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and they should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
科技 SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY 在这部分，你的任务是： 一，背诵话题词汇短语 二，为题目列出英文提纲 基础词汇短语 advanced science 尖端科学 scientific invention 科学发明 exert a far-reaching impact on…对…产生一种深远的影响 double-edged sword 双刃剑 earth-shaking changes 翻天覆地的改变 pay the way for the future development 为未来的发展铺平道路 lay a solid foundation for…为…打下良好的基础 energy crisis 能源危机 depletion of resources 能源消耗 milestone 里程碑 sophisticated equipment 尖端设备 technical innovation 科技创新 expediency 权宜之计 antithetical 与…背道而驰的 over-commercialized 过渡商业化的 a heated discussion 热烈的讨论 exhaust gas 废气 disastrous 灾难性的 overshadow 使…相形见绌 compared to/with…与…相比 usher in 引领 speedy and comfortable 既快捷又舒适 opposite forces 负面影响 a fatal breakdown 致命故障 potential hazards 潜在危险 pose a threat to…对…有一种威胁 promote relative industries 促进相关产业发展 accelerate 加速… means of transportation 交通方式 transportation tools 交通工具 social status 社会地位 environmentally-friendly resources 环保的能源 make people's life easier 使人们生活更方便 alternative fuel 可替代燃料
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delete/eliminate/excise v. 删除evaluate v. 评价、评估 the evaluation on 对……的评价或评估 be ?ooded (or ?lled/awash/saturated/inundated) with... 充斥着 excessive and gratuitous violent and pornographic contents 过多的、无端的暴力与色情内容 at the expense/cost of 以……为代价 media hype 媒体炒作advertising hype 广告炒作 hype n. 炒作，大肆吹捧 v. 对 ……大肆宣传，吹捧commercial(s) n. 商业广告public service advertising 公益广告 evoke (or stimulate) impulse buying 刺激冲动性购物shopaholic(s) n. 购物狂promotion n. 促销 marketing tool 市场营销手段 induce sb. to do sth. 诱导或引诱某人做某事 target audience 目标受众sensationalise (or sensationalize 美式拼写) /exaggerate v. 耸人听闻地夸大某事，大肆渲染 over-report...to hook viewers and maximise pro ?ts 为了利益最大化，从而过度报道……来吸引公众的眼球 道德规范（尤指职业的） 良好的/较强的/无懈可击的职业道德adj. 无所不在的，普遍存在的……的流行或盛行对……有着深远的影响 揭露社会问题 监督非常详尽地报道…… 如实的描述、报道adj. 有新闻价值的，有报道价值的adj. 最新的，及时的adj. 客观公正的adj. 不客观的，有偏见的 adj. 可信的，可靠的 adj. 令人误导的，不如实报道的，曲解的adj. 虚假的adj. 欺骗性的 adj. 信息量大的，增长见闻的adj. 娱乐性的，令人愉快的 v. & n. 审查n. 审查制度 对……实施审查 v. 影响，左右 (e.g. sway sb./sb. be swayed by... 影响某人或者某人受到影响)
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运用了哪些论证手法;范文是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段。 3、雅思写作短期快速提高之改 有时考生看的范文多了，是会认为郁闷更甚是沮丧，因为发现自己的低水平*和好成绩作文之间似乎存在着不可逾越的巨大鸿沟。若大家想跨越这条鸿沟，弥补其中的差距，关键在多修改。考生们需要首先在规定时间里完成作文，然后对照范文，观察自己作文里存在的一些问题。有没有审题错误?结构是否混乱?是否存在表达不清的地方?而后又认真的琢磨一下，范文要如何展开论证的?已经看了很我遍范文，是能够尝试根据刚才学习范文的体会和收获来修改自己原先写过的*，把论证不够充分的地方重新论证一下，关联不当的地方修补一下，错误表达改正过来。 雅思大作文：students should spend a period of time in a different county 雅思大作文题目：As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different county to learn language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 作文范文： There is a common situation raised in today’s society that many students go abroad to pursue the further education;
2020 年雅思写作语料库：科技时代传统教育是否还有 价值 考试真题（2020 年 9 月 12 日）： Some people think that students at schools and universities learn far more from teachers than from other resources(the Internet or television). To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人认为：对于其他的学习渠道，例如网络教育或者电视教育，学生在学校和大学能够和老师学习更多，是否认同 类似题目】： Some people think that computers and the Internet are more important for a child's education than going to school. But others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn effectively. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 有人认为计算机和互联网对于孩子的教育比去学校有效，有认为老师和学校对于孩子的高效学习更加重要，讨论两种观点 ? 薛鹏点评】： 如果雅思备考仅练习一篇文章，本题首选，关于网络教育和课堂 教育的比较，每年必考。练习本篇，教育类话题融会贯通。 薛鹏感言】： 我是如何做出预测的：对 20 年考试题库的整理、分类、考频统计。归类考题类型、核心母题、边缘考题。无论考试如何变化，我相信热题恒热、遗漏太久、必然回补。网络教育和课堂教育每年的考频 1-2 次，必然会考，意料之中。仅仅，不知你是否还信赖小鹏哥：惯性阅
2015年全年A类雅思大作文题目整理 2015.1.10 The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2015.1.17 Some people think that the amount of noise people make should be controlled strictly, while other say that people are free to make as much noise as they wish. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 2015.1.29 It is possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 2015.1.31 Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之 逻辑篇 写作老师经验分享, 如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻 辑篇，今天给大家带来如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇,希望可以帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 写作老师经验分享如何从根本上提升雅思写作水平之逻辑篇 我们来拿一个真题和一个类似于真题的题进行说明： 20XX0328 Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 改编题： Some people say that the use of using computers and phones will have side effects on young people’s communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
请各位同学想一想，这两个问题是一样的么?劳烦各位思考个3分钟，然后继续往下翻~如果你觉得并没有很大差别，那估计真的碰到这个题目的话，6.5分是很勉强的。 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 我们先来说改编题： side effects: 1. face-to-face communication减少，感情可能变淡 positive effects: 1. be able to contact people without geographical limitation; in the past, it may be impossible to say Hi to a foreign friend. 2. be able to contact friends or partners quickly, no need to wait for responses; in the past, writing letters really wastes a lot of time and sometimes letters may be lost. 我们再来说真题： side effects: 1. writing abilities会下降，因为写信的频率降低了，handwriting当然变差
雅思写作36个基础句型 1 benefit from 从……当中获益 例句：Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.（剑8例句） 2 invest in 对……投资 例句：The government should invest a large proportion of its budget in helping the needy, despite the economic recession. 3 promote the development of 促进……的发展 例句：Even though the city has invested millions of pounds in museums and art galleries,it has done little to promote the development of education and medical care. 4 boost efficiency/productivity 提高效率/生产力 例句:The main question about high-tech education is whether it actually boosts the efficiency and effectiveness of learning. 5 play a pivotal role in 在……中起关键作用 例句:Vitamins and minerals play a pivotal role in keeping our body heathy;therefore,children and adults alike shoud eat more vegetables that are rich in various vitamins and minerals. 6 enrich one’s social/academic/professional experience 丰富……的社会的/学术的/职业的经历 例句：Working for a period before going to university can greatly enrich students’social experience and make them more capable in university. 7 keep society safe and stable 保持社会稳定 例句：Harmony keeps society safe and stable while conflict disturbs social order. 8 have a duty/obligation to do…有责任做… 例句：In most European countries,parents have a legal obligation to ensure that their children receive proper education. 9 relax their bodies and ease their minds 让人放松身心 例句：Children not only need opportunities to acquire knowledge ,they need time to relax their bodies and their minds as well. 10 be based on 基于 例句：Discipline should be based on a positive,loving parent child relationship instead of on force and punishment. 11 generate employment opportunities 创造就业机会 例句：International tourism can generate employment opportunities.On the other hand ,it may damage the culture heritage of a nation. 12 be less time-consuming and more economical 省钱又省时间 例句：Contrary to the popular belief ,advertising makes our shopping experience neither less time-consuming nor more economical. 13 relieve one’s academic/financial/psychological burden 减轻某人的学业/经济/心理负担 例句：Part-time jobs help students to relieve their parents’financial burdens.Nevertheless,working on a part-time basis may create psychological burdens for the students themselves. 14 fulfill one’s potential 发挥某人的潜力 例句：Employees may feel they cannot fulfill their professional potential when their work is not
[雅思写作评分标准2017]雅思写作评分标准【教育公文写作】 (1) [雅思写作评分标准]雅思写作的准备方法 对绝大多数学生来说，写作是雅思4门考试中最难的。很多同学从来就没有用英文写过文章，但写作反应一个人的综合英语水平，它又是4门中最重要的。对于基础班的同学来说，他们最大的问题是词汇和语法，而语言恰恰是写作的评分标准之一，没有好的语言，思路和结构再好也没有用。所以提高语言运用的准确性是第一个要解决的问题。我最近刚开始教一个基础班，第一次不限字数让学生写一个印象最深的人。交上来的文章出现最大的问题就是语言表达。他们的思路很好，内容也比较充实，但是语法错误通篇都是，词汇量也很小。 对于这种情况，首先要做的就是帮助他们梳理语法结构。因为这些学生有一定的英语基础但是很不扎实，语法虽然知道但是漏洞很多，我给他们讲解语法时尽量简单，比如讲到动词不定式的复合结构作主语的情况时，必须要用形式主语来表示。学生会觉得这些理论知识很难记，这时我就让
他们背这样一个一般结构：It is +adj+for sb. to do sth. 写作的最终目的是要写出准确的句子，所以在讲语法时给学生总结一些句型比单纯的讲语法会更容易让他们接受。又如，在讲到当动词不定式作定语时，一般与被修饰词有动宾关系，如果动词不定式为不及物动词，则在动词不定式后加上相应的介词。很多学生刚听这个会觉得很抽象，我就举了这个例子：Please give the child a pen to write with. 在判断到底要不要在动词后面加介词时，只要把to后面的动词和相应的宾语做一个动宾搭配，看意思是否正确即可，因为只能说write with a pen，而不能说write a pen。 (2) [雅思写作评分标准]雅思作文评分标准细则 雅思考试（IELTS），全称国际英语语言测试系统，外文名International English Language Testing System，由剑桥大学考试委员会外语考试部、英国文化协会及IDP教育集团共同管理，是一种针英语能力，下面就是小编整理的雅思作文评分标准细则，一起来看一下吧。 雅思作文评分标准细则解读 1. Task response & Task achievement
雅思写作基础段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作基础段 课程周期：16小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共8次 教学目标： 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1整体介绍；task 1常用词汇及运用 第二次：雅思写作task 1常见图表介绍及相应的表达 第三次：雅思写作task 2整体介绍和常用词汇及运用 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类介绍与背景构建 第五次：雅思写作task 2常用表达运用及强化进阶 第六次：雅思写作task 1 和task 2 混合基础分场景共建 第七次：雅思写作task 1和task 2混合表达及词汇共建 第八次：雅思写作基础段总结及强化段铺垫与衔接 雅思写作强化段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作强化段 课程周期：12小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共6次 教学目标： 在进行了起步段和基础段之后，通过强化段的课程来帮助学生更深入地理解雅思写作考试。帮助学生解决备考中的关键性问题——思维发散。通过强化段的课程来提高学生在雅思写 作方面的应试能力。 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第二次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第三次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第五次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第六次：雅思写作task 2分类强化篇二：定制雅思教学计划 雅思阅读【总学时】 24学时 教材选用 《剑桥雅思考试全真试题4-9》外语教研社 第一阶段：第一个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：基础词汇积累&定位信息，关键词的基本能力 授课内容： 1，扩充雅思基础阅读词汇。 2，学会寻找关键词，在原文中快速定位，教授雅思阅读中常见的3种题型：1heading sentence(找标题)summary(摘要填空) ture/false/not given(是非题) 再陈述与推理及true, false, not given 题的技巧。 培养学生雅思判断题需要的逻辑思维 4，教会学生读文章的步骤，利用文章中的图片图表信息做题。 模考安排：每4次课一次单科模考和分析反馈 第二阶段：第二个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：猜词与复杂句，基本题型的操练 授课内容：1，词根，词缀，词性，利用上下文猜词的能力；十大句子关系。 学会如何判断词性，句子成分，如何判断区分有用与无用的生词。 3，快速找到复杂句的重点，根据复杂句完成简单的问题；
In some countries，the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future? 在一些国家，父母在教育孩子中扮演的角色，和很多方面，是不同的，为何存在这种差异，在未来父母的角色会有哪些变化? 【名师点评】 新题出现，恒热教育，谈及父母对于孩子成长中影响差异的原因，展望父母在孩子未来成长中作用的不同，不属分析问题解决问题话题，考察头脑风暴，写作有一定难度。 预测题目中的寒门贵子还是将门虎子，是否所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程，和本场考试都有交集。 【思路拓展】 男性比较理性和阳刚，女性比较感性和温柔，因此，他们对于孩子成长的影响自然不同，一般而言，孩子会从爸爸身上学到坚毅和勇敢，会从妈妈身上学会善良和孝道。骨血相连，血浓于水，无论父母，对于孩子的教育和引导都是积极的善意的。爸爸努力赚钱，是为孩子赢一个成长环境，妈妈努力育儿，是让孩子明辨是非、行为规范。 教育这个词的本源是说将一个人从一种蒙昧的无知的状态中引导出来，教育应该涉及道德教育、性格培养、学术教育等。
教育不能颠覆：道德教育和性格培养应该优先于学术成长，先重品质和品行，后重成绩和选择。如果可以畅想未来，父爱如山，为人父，应该树立标杆，让孩子学会志存高远，不懈奋斗。母爱如水，为人母，应该树立标杆，让孩子学会海纳百川，清澈纯净。 【范文赏析】 【首段】背景介绍+ 写作目的 Parents are the initial teachers of their children, thereby, their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. The impacts that parents impose on their kids might differ greatly due to various reasons. This essay aims to explore where the differences lie in and how parental roles will change in the future. 【解析】 1. Their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. 父母的言行举止，在很大程度上，对于孩子的性格培养和未来发展有潜移默化的影响。
雅思写作常用句型分类总结 雅思写作是否有规律可循，答案是肯定的。至少从语言上来讲，雅思考试的写作可以通过一些句型的替换来实现个人观点的陈述，完成论述过程。熟练掌握运用这些表达方式可以大大节约在考场上的时间，也可以使自己的文章能够流畅自如，从而获得高分。下面就将这些句型做一个分类总结： 一．首段的句型 第一句：描述背景： 1. Along with the rapid development the society, remarkable changes have taken place in… 随着社会的快速发展，……已发生了显著的变化。 2. The ….is a subject matte r in recent years. …是近年来的一个课题。 3. In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in… / In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to …. 最近几年来，中国……有了惊人的增长。 /近几年来，….吸引了众多关注。 4. One of the pressing problem facing our nation (China) today is…and… 我们国家(中国)如今面临的紧迫问题之一是…… 第二句：改写题目/介绍两个对立论点 1.There is much controversy over whether…/There is an ongoing debate about … 对于是否…很有争论 2.S ome people think that… Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but I think… 有的人认为应该……另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是…… 3.It is widely held/acknowledged that….(改写题目)。Such people think that…（介 绍对方观点） 第三句：提出个人观点/引出接下来要讨论的内容 1.表示只赞同一方观点： My personal view is that … is of benefits to sb./sth. As far as I know, its benefits are far more obvious than its downsides. Although…, I am of the view that they do more harm than good. My personal view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.我 个人观点是它的好处不能抵消它的负面影响。