雅思强化写作精讲班第10讲讲义
6步装配式作文法
6步装配式作文法
(1)判断题目类型
Report Argumentation
(2)快速安排文章结构
Report
I 3-4
II 1+6
III 1+6
IV 2
Argumentation
I 3-4
II 1+4
III 1+6
IV 2-3
(3)确定主体段分论点
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Technology & Efficiency Environment & Health
Mind & Soul Employment & Competition
Society & Crime Culture & Population
Time & Space Money & Fun
Rights & Responsibilities
(4)确定模板
(5)主体段集中使用20个连接词，100个必备词汇和43个加分句型和4种特殊句式
(6) 确保不犯7类常见语法错误
雅思基础口语精讲班第 17讲讲义 经历类话题 经历类话题 经历类话题是最近出现频率较高的卡片话题。相对于爱好兴趣类话题, 描述一件或开心或激动的经历, 难度要大一些。这类话题涉及到具体的事件,考生最后在备考时应精心准备一些素材,有吸引人之处,也要容易叙述。这类话题通常不在第一阶段出现,只在第二阶段卡片部分有所涉及,第三阶段会围绕这个事件做深度探讨。 第二阶段相关的卡片包括: Describe an interesting/unusual thing you did in your free time; Describe a piece of good advice you accepted; Describe a three-day holiday; Describe a piece of interesting news that impressed you; Describe a positive change in your life; Describe a special dinner you had; Describe a wedding you joined; Describe a special letter/ card you received; 旅游话题 一、旅游、度假 Describe an interesting travel. You should say:
When you took the travel; Where it was; What you did during the trip; And explain why it was interesting. 在准备这类话题时,考生首先应考虑它们和其他卡片的关联性。在前面,我们已讲解了交通、建筑、城市等话题,它们都可以作为假期的内容,只需稍加修改即可。假期的主要活动可以是观光自然风景、参观城市建筑,也可以是在家休闲娱乐如读书、看电影。注意时态的使用,在描述过去发生的事件时,要用一般过去时;在描述这件事对现在的影响时,使用现在完成时。第二部分可参考下列提纲: ●When was the holiday? ●How did you plan the holiday? ●Where did you travel? ●How did you travel? ●What did you do during the three d ays/traveling? ●What impressed you most during the holiday? How do you feel the holiday? 1.旅游方式(The Categories of Traveling backpack travel 背包旅行 /自助旅行 package tour 随团旅行 guided tour 有导游带领的旅游 driving tour 自驾游 walking tour 步行旅游 bush walking 丛林徒步旅游cycling tour 骑自行车旅游 motorbike travel 摩托车旅游 coach /greyhound travel 巴士
雅思真题写作班精讲班第11讲讲义 图表作文（二） You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. VISITS ABROAD BY UK RESIDENTS BY PURPOSE OF VISIT (1994-98) 19941995199619971998 Holiday 15,24614,89817,89619,70320,700 Business 3,1553,1883,2493,6393,957 Visits to friends and relatives 2,6892,6282,7743,0511,181 Other reasons 9828961,0301,054990 TOTAL 22,07221,61024,94927,44728,828 DESTINATIONS OF VISITS ABROAD BY UK RESIDENTS BY MAIN REGION (1994-98) Western Europe North America Other areas Total 199419,3719191,78222,072 199518,9449141,75221,610 199621,8771,1671,90524,949
雅思经典小作文柱状图4篇范文+写作要点分析 C1T3 题目 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. The chart shows that high income earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other income groups, spending more than twice as much on hamburgers (43 pence per person per week) than on fish and chips or pizza (both under 20 pence). Average income earners also favored hamburgers, spending 33 pence per person per week, followed by fish and chips at 24 pence, then pizza at 11 pence. Low income earners appear to spend less than other income groups on fast foods, though fish and chip remains their most popular fast food, followed by
2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文：废纸回收 The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling. 范文： The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper. At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill. Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product： usable paper. (160 words, band 9)
真题示范： 1．Tourism is becoming good source of revenue for many countries. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of exploiting this resource. 2．What is your opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food?(2002,10;2003,1;2004,4) 3．In 1995,an Englishman killed a burglar who broke into his house. He was sentenced. Do you think he should be sentenced ? How can we protect our property? 4．With the development of a market economy. Advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry, despite the rich information brought by television. There still exists strong criticism against television advertisement. Write an article analyzing the positive and negative effects of television advertisement. 5．作业：version:000121(2005年G类新题) Some people think that visitors to other countries imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views and give your own opinion. 主体和方向 例文讲解：真题重现： 1．Some people think that people at the age of 55 and over should be encouraged to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. Do you agree or disagree? 2．A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Give the reasons for this and a proposal for a solution.(2003) 主体相似方向不同： 3．Computers are widely used for education and some people think that teachers will not play important role in the classroom. Disagree or agree? 4．People use computers when they work, go banking and so on, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 5．Some people think that traditional techniques and modern technology are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 6．Oriental session 7．Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what should government do? 8．Is it possible for a woman to be a good mother and a successful career woman at the same time? some people agree that government should pay some money to women so that they can stay at home to look after their children. Do you agree or disagree? 9．Modern technology, such as fertilizer and machinery has changed our world so much. What are the advantages and disadvantages? Discuss 10．There have been many technological developments in the 20th century. For example, computer and electric power. Choose either of them, describe the change it has brought about and discuss whether all the changes are positive. 11．作业：What are the purposes of places, such as museums and how should they be funded? 审题和构思后如何展开段落 题目重现：首段展开 1．电视对儿童的影响？正面还是负面？你的观点 A．Television is the most popular form of entertainment in the modern household.(引入话题)people of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average of four hours a day.(发展话题)thus, television has had a tremendous influence on its viewers, especially children.(缩小话题范围指电视 对孩子的影响)scientists now say that children can be negatively effected by constantly watching
雅思强化写作精讲班第 7 讲讲义 复杂句的六种内在关系 如何写复杂句 （A）IELTS 作文复杂句的六种内在关系 1 cause and effect 因果关系 标志词 1）表示原因的 as ,since ; due to , owing to 2）表示结果的 hence(因此)， thus(因此) ， therefore（因此）As a consequence,…（作为结果） As a result,…（作为结果）Consequently…（作为结果） 3） thereby( 以此达到……的目的) 1 The ecological problems are being aggravated ; hence , it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 2 The government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation, thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment. 2 exemplification 举例关系 标志词Take…for example.(以……为例)for instance,（比如……）To illustrate,…(例如…..)As an apt illustration,…（作为例证,……）Consider, for example…(以……为例) 1 The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is common for them to choose Hollywood blockbusters over domestic films. 2 Animals are humans’ companions. To illustrate, dolphins often rescue sailors from sinking ships. 3 comparison and contrast 对比关系 标志词while…/ whilst… /whereas…By contrast,… 1While/ Whilst modern man leads a stressful life, our ancestors could often perform their business in a leisurely fashion. 2The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality. 4 Concession让步关系 标志词Despite/In spite of/Notwithstanding…(尽管…) Nonetheless/ Nevertheless， (尽管如此)Even
雅思写作小作文范文118篇之范文14 以下是三立在线雅思网给大家分享的雅思写作小作文范文118篇：范文14。希望对大家的雅思备考有所帮助，更多雅思备考资料欢迎大家随时关注三立在线雅思网。 范文14 The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In this period of communication,computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons. The main reason is that people’s brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer’s programs. Secondly, computer doesn’t have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer’s programs to judge a question’s right or wrong. In other words, computer can’t defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question’s right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义 有效避免7种语法错误 有效避免7种语法错误 1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer. 2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. 2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. 2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics. 2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. 3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create. 4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms. 5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself. 6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives. 7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment. 高分范文讲解 范文讲解 In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer. Example 2 Band 8 One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models. Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs. A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.
1. 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2. 该柱状图展示了... 3. 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4. 该图向我们展示了... 5. 该线形图揭示了... 6. 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7. 数据(字)表明... 8. 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9. 该数据(字)可以这样理解... 10. 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11. 如图所示... 12. 根据这些表(数字)... 13. 如表格所示... 14. 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15. 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 16. 这个图表向我们展示了... 17. 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 18. 该图描述了...总的趋势。 19. 这是个柱型图，描述了...
20. 如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。 21. 在...至...期间，...基本不变。 22. 在...年到...的期间 23. 1995年至1998三年里... 24. 从那时起... 25. ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。 26. 数字急剧上升至... 27. ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。 28. ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点，为... 29. 比率维持在... 30. ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。 31. ...与...的区别不大。 32. 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。 33. ...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。 34. ...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点，为...百分点。 35. 数字(情况)在...达到底部。 36. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。 37. a是b的...倍。 38. a增长了...
雅思写作冲刺 时间：一个小时，无法超时 上午九点考试，写作往往是11点开始考。一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个，比托福等都长。 图表作文只占了1/3的分数，那议论文就占了2/3。 G类也要按A类要求去做。 Academic writing 的特殊要求 1.Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写，凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手，专业选手必须要用，do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的，特别提醒大家，cannot 中间没有空格。如果你不相信我说的话，我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6，一个缩写你都找不到。 2.Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇，可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词。A great deal of 不可数。 3.The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语，-se 结尾的都是英式英语，而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语，而neighborhood是美式英语，有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢？不是这样的，在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式，但两者不能混合使用。我建议大家-our -se 是英式的，-or -ze 是美式的，这两者的区别是最常见的，其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。 4.Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。More and more ,给大家推荐一个词，increasingly. 5.Serious crimes harm people's lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人，大家看考官的作文也不是很难。但这里serious 高中词汇，crime harm 初中词汇，people 和life 就是小学词汇了，给大家推荐一个severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair people's health, human being 这个词太大，不建议使用，individual 6.The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成outweigh 7.Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用，中间加个连词即可。 8.The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系，加because 就很一般了哈，加个therefore. 9.So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem! So 换成therefore,大家在写作中，千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈，好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的，所以，感叹号去掉，还有，must 换成should. 10.We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, "treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated." 不能出现宗教语言。 大作文，40分钟，最低要求240字，要求考高分的同学，建议270-280，7分以上的同学，我建议300字以上。 大家刚看了雅思真题库，不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。但是如果没有素材的话，你再好的基础都无法体现出来。 Tourism Education Government Women and families Language and culture Technology and the media Development and globalization Crime Animals Environmental problems 雅思不会出时事类的话题，只出争议比较大的话题。 常见的词汇，常见的句式都可以通用。 推荐大家掌握思考方法 A.分类法
1/6/2018 The maps show changes of a school in 1985 and now. Summarise information and make comparisons when necessary. People in many countries today have a wide range of household goods(e.g. television, microwave ovens and rice cookers) than ever before. Is it a positive or negative development? 1/13/2018 The graphs below show the changes in age structure of population in a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a projection in 2021. Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about dress, while others think the working quality is the most important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 1/18/2018 The chart below shows amount (in tonnes) of coffee and tea imported
to four countries in 2007. Lectures were used in the past with many students. With modern technology available for education, there is no justification for this way of teaching. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 1/20/2018 The graphs show the number of yearly visits from France and North America to the U.K., for holiday and business reasons. People are now surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2/1/2018 混合型：折线+柱状 折线图：布里斯班和堪培拉平均最高气温和最低气温对比 柱状图：布里斯班和堪培拉平均降水天数的对比 Figures show that in some countries, there is an ever-increasing proportion of population aged 15 or younger. What do you think the effect of current and future in those countries?
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雅思小作文table 【篇一：雅思小作文表格图实例分析】 雅思小作文表格图实例分析 朗阁海外考试研究中心 表格图是雅思小作文的常考图形之一，也是烤鸭们在备考时必须要准备的一类题型。那么烤鸭们具体应该如何准备表格图呢？下面，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家将以一道具体的实例，就这一题型的解题思路和步骤做出详尽的分析和解答。 the table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1989, 1999 and 2009. personal savings as a percentage of personal income 一、审题，决定大体写作方式 首先，读题目，了解到这幅表格图是关于“几个国家的人民个人收入中存款的百分比”以及三个时间点（据此，正文部分描述存款率是时态基调为过去时）。表格上方的title和题目表述一样，没有额外信息，因此，读一遍即可。 然后，审具体表格，决定大致写作方向和方式，即分段方式。表格的审图需要注意以下几个方面：横轴，纵轴和总体数据特征。此图中的横纵轴分别是时间和7个研究对象——7个国 家。横纵轴中间有一栏为时间，那说明，此图原则上应该按曲线图原理来写——即，描述7个国家存款率上升或下降趋势；但是，经过下一步对表格中数据总体特征的总结发现：7个国家的存款率在这一段时间内总体呈现下降趋势。这一发现说明，如果继续按照曲线图原理描述，文章会非常单调，而且对比的空间也不大；相反，同一年份里，
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Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数 ●百分比改写