雅思写作警察持枪的优缺点讨论
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Topic: Discuss the issue about whether police should be armed
写得不错没什么可以指正的，如果说想写得更地道一点的话我的范文：
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Nowadays, prevention of increasing criminal rates could be a thorny problem. There has been a controversial issue regarding whether police need be armed, one accepted statement is that it leads to the rise of the level of violence. Personally, I disagree with this view.
1. 首先我需要表扬你写得不错，有两个点
1)犯罪成本的上升，罪犯可能因为怕死而不敢犯罪。
2)持枪可能使罪犯误伤街上的老人。
以上两点是你的观点，而且topic sentence写得还可以，只是你没有像我一样将“担心死亡”上升到“犯罪成本的提高”，你只是
简单地翻译出来而且用了lose life这样不地道的口语表达，而且第二点用for example 连接不妥，明明在说第二件事情，“比如”什么呢?逻辑不要乱。用in addition 或者secondly更显得用层次感。
2. 开头的it指代不明。
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Police being armed might be an effective method that deters criminals and hence decrease the criminal rates. First, this increases the possibilities that some offenders give up the criminal minds if crime costs have risen significantly, which implies that potential offenders might consider the possible consequence to be death. In addition, elderly people could be injured accidentally by in the street. Nevertheless, this type of crimes is gradually disappearing because of the deterrent of police carrying guns.
1. 两段写得都是持枪不好的观点，分别是：
1) 刺激罪犯买枪与警察对峙。
2) 警察可能不理智会误伤。
这可以是持枪不好的两个理由，为什么要强分两段呢?第一个主体段是两个观点，第二个主体段就必须也是两个观点(或例子)这就叫“平行段”。
2. alternative就带有另外一种的意思，再用other就重复了。
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On the other hand, with the increasing number of police with guns, it will increase the level of violence. Because for many criminal groups, being armed is a basic condition against the threat from police, while this action results in crimes to innocent citizens easily. Additionally, some police might abuse their authority subjectively. Police is likely to lose the control of emotions when confronting criminals, this may increase the rate of unnecessary death. Therefore, adopting an alternative way to deter potential criminals (such as anesthetic rifle) may be better for police enforcement.
1. 除了get injured和抓捕用pursue和catch，没什么问题.
我的范文(7.0-7.5)：
Nowadays, prevention of increasing criminal rates could be a thorny problem. There has been a controversial issue regarding whether police need be armed, one accepted statement is that it leads to the rise of the level of violence. Personally, I disagree with this view.
Police being armed might be an effective method that deters criminals and hence decrease the criminal rates. First, this increases the possibilities that some offenders give up the criminal minds if crime costs have risen significantly, which implies that potential offenders might consider the possible
consequence to be death. In addition, elderly people could be injured accidentally by in the street. Nevertheless, this type of crimes is gradually disappearing because of the deterrent of police carrying guns.
On the other hand, with the increasing number of police with guns, it will increase the level of violence. Because for many criminal groups, being armed is a basic condition against the threat from police, while this action results in crimes to innocent citizens easily. Additionally, some police might abuse their authority subjectively. Police is likely to lose the control of emotions when confronting criminals, this may increase the rate of unnecessary death. Therefore, adopting an alternative way to deter potential criminals (such as anesthetic rifle) may be better for police enforcement.
In conclusion, although carring guns to some extent deters criminals and prevents the citizens. This will lead to inappropriate guns uses resulting from an excess of guns or even more innocent people who may gey injured when police pursue criminals.
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环境类雅思写作高频词汇 1. be sick at: 恶心的，厌恶的 2. experimenting on animals for medical purposes：用动物试药 3. prohibit / banish: 禁止 4. end their lives in extreme sufferings：在极度痛苦中结束生命 5. besides: 除此之外 6. constitute：构成 7. defendant: 拥护者 8. unavoidable：不可避免的, =inevitable 9. Moreover： 10. be placed at great risk：处于巨大的风险中 复杂一些的 1. abuse domestic animals: 虐待家养动物 2. go on vegetarian diet：吃素 3. barbaric, cruel, and against humanity: 野蛮、残酷、有违人性 4. live autopsy: 活体解剖 5. indignity：侮辱 6. brazen violation of their basic rights: 对他们基本权利的厚颜无耻的侵犯 7. formulate: 做配方 8. side-effects of drugs：药物的副作用 9. devise humane methods to：设计人性的方法 10. minimize suffering of animals：最大限度减少动物所受的痛苦 环境问题类 Environmental Problems The Problems pollution: air pollution, water pollution (including oceanic pollution), soil pollution, noise pollution 污染：空气污染，水污染（包括海洋污染）土壤污染噪声污染global warming 全球变暖 species loss 物种的灭绝 deforestation 森林采伐 desertification 沙漠化 soil salinification 土壤盐化 ozone depletion in the upper atmosphere 高层大气的臭氧层破坏 waste disposal 废物处理 water shortage 水资源短缺 Other Related Vocabulary 污染类Pollution · fertilizer 化肥· factory waste 工厂废料· rivers and streams 河川· heavy metals 重金属 全球变暖类Global Warming · melting of the glaciers and the polar icecaps 冰川和极地冰盖的融化· extremes of weather 极端恶劣的天气· the El Nino phenomenon 厄尔尼诺现象· the greenhouse effect 温室效应·
雅思写作大作文范文雅思写作优缺点 living alone独自居住 今天我们雅思写作大作文范文的文章来研究下独自居住。以中国为例，许多年轻人到外地上大学。大学毕业之后就留在那个城市，而非回到家乡。他们通常自己居住在一个小房子里，承担各种各样的生活成本。这样固然是自由，但也容易引发各种各样的问题。那么这种趋势究竟是好是坏呢？小编搜集了一篇考官范文，以供大家参考。 雅思写作大作文题目 In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 与以前相比，现在一些国家越来越多的人选择独自居住。你认识这一积极的发展还是消极的发展。 雅思写作大作文范文 In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. 最近几年，人们独自居住越来越常见，尤其是在发达国家的大城市中。在我看来，这一趋势带来的积极和消极影响基本相等。 The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development. From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in a greater demand for housing. This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services. 从个人角度和更广的经济角度来看，独居家庭的上升可以被看作是有好处的。在个人层面，和那些与家庭共同居住的人相比，选择独居的人可能变得更加独立自主。例如，独居的年轻人需要学会做饭，打扫卫生，支付各种账单，并管理译文来自雅思自己的财产。所有这些都是有用的生活技能。这类人数量的上升当然可以被看作是有益的发展。从经济的角度来看，独自居住的趋势将会对住房产生更大的需求。这可能使建筑产业、房产中介以及一系列依赖房主购买他们产品或者服务的公司受益。 However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased
雅思写作中代词的使用及常见错误 来源：考试吧 作为英语中衔接的一种重要形式，代词的使用值得引起重视和加以深思。 先来看两个学生作文当中出现的句子： Medical care and education are cornerstones of the society, because it is needed by both youngsters and adults. Doctors are not able to control themselves'profitable activities. 请注意上面两句话中标记出来的代词，它们的使用均存在问题，具体是什么问题，我们将在下文中得以解答。 既然中国学生在英语的代词使用上是普遍存在错误的，在谈论错误分类之前，我们先来欣赏一下native speaker的文字中，代词使用的典范。 例文： It is rather hard work: there is now no smooth road into the future: but we go round, or scramble over the obstacles. We've got to live, no matter how many skies have fallen. This was more or less Constance Chatterley's position. The war had brought the roof down over her head. And she had realized that one must live and learn. ——D. H. Lawrence Lady Chatterley's Lover 翻译：这是一种颇为艰难的工作。现在没有一条通向未来的康庄大道，但是我们却迂回前进，或攀援障碍而过。不管天翻地覆，我们都得生活。 这大概就是康士丹斯·查太莱夫人的处境了。她曾亲尝世界大战的灾难，因此她了解了一个人必要生活，必要求知。 以上的一段文字来自于劳伦斯的《查特莱夫人的情人》，被标注的地方仅仅是这段文字当中几个代词使用的范例。当然，这是fiction，和我们雅思要求的议论文写作有很大的出入。那么在雅思的写作当中，我们也不难从考官范文当中，找到代词使用的模范。 Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feeling about one's job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.
雅思大作文范文：环境问题谁来解决 这篇文章是雅思大作文范文《环境问题谁来解决》，供大家阅读参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 1.环境保护是谁的责任?考题给出的选项通常会有个人、公司、国家、国际合作等(例如04年5月15日，0-7年2月3日考题)。 2.怎样保护环境?考题通常会给出某个方案问其正确与否(如06年6月17日，08年6月14日考题)。 3.为什么人们明知环境正在被破坏却无动于衷例?(如08年9月13日A类议论文) 如果考前对以上三方面的雅思写作真题都思考过，相信本题一定会变的很简单，实际上只要把一些理由进行组合就可以了。由于考题的提问形式是“Discuss both views and give your own opinion. ”所以，既要讨论到个人能够采取何种行动解决一些环境问题，也要讨论为什么有些环境问题个人无法解决(即只有政府或公司才能解决)。 Sample Answer (274words)：
It is true that our tiny individual actions often seem insignificantcompared to the scale and complexity of global environmental problems such as pollution, deforestation and depletion of natural resources. But that does not relieve our duty as individuals to do as much as we can to deal with these problems。 Individual actions, small as they may be, can sometimes prove more effective than we realize. We can avoid driving the car, and take public transit, walk, or bicycle instead. This will reduce the use of fossil fuels and cut pollution. Saving energy at home, like turning on the air conditioner only when we have to, or turning water heater down a few degrees, is also ultimately good for the environment. Individual actions can also turn into united powers when, for example, the whole neighborhood is mobilized to participate in a local campaignto oppose environmentally damaging policies。 There are, however, obstacles that stand in the way of individual action towards environmental conservation. The first obstacle is the lack of professional knowledge needed to cope with serious environmental issues like soil erosion and salinity, which requires a significant amount of investigation and research. Another obstacle which makes individual action almost impossible is when an environmental emergency or
雅思写作十大话题万能分类题库 一、教育 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面 来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成吅格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2. 学校的科目谁来选择？ 母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1：政府选课or 老师选课？学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择？ 子题2：只有学术科目重要，体育和音乐这样的课不重要，你同意吗？要不要学国 际新闻？要不要学历史？要不要中学阶段就学习外语？要不要学数学哲学这类的科目？ 提示：子题2与母题联系不大，需要准备这些科目各自的优点。 3. 什么样的教学方式最好？ 母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515) 提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点 是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有 体育课且久坐电脑前，会引发健康问题。 子题：私立学校好不好？留学好不好？要不要分快慢班？小组学习还是单独学习好？ 4. 谁来为学费买单？
雅思写作考试论题讲解：环境保护中的个人力量 环保类： The environmental problem in the world can not be solved by ordinary people, and governments and large companies should be responsible for this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 环境问题个人是无法解决的，只有企业和国家才能解决，是否同意? 作家立场：个人在环保中可以发挥不可替代的作用。 思路拓展： 国家企业环保的方式： 1. 国家可以采取环保政策，加强环保合作，分享环保经验。对于破坏环境的企业和个人加大处罚力度。 2. 企业，尤其是高度污染的企业(例如汽车厂，造纸厂，化工厂)，应该依赖高科技，减少对于环境的污染。例如，汽车生产企业可以研发和推广新型环保汽车，这些汽车具有小排量，低消耗，电瓶驱动等特征。 个人环保的方式： 1. 个人可以减少对于高科技产品的使用，具体来说，减少家用电器使用的频率。(例证：空调，热水器) 2. 个人可以培养环保的意识，珍惜自然资源，过简单生活。
具体而言，可以购买小排量汽车或者乘坐公共交通工具;周边游不是长途游等。(细节展开) 3. 个人可以参加环保组织，做环保志愿者，宣传环保，反对有害环境的政策的出台和推广。 原创语料库： 1. environmental pollution = environmental contamination n 环境污染 2. environmental issues = environmental problems n环境问题 3. various environment-related issues n 各种与环境相关的问题 4. live a simple life = choose a simpler lifestyle v 过简单生活 5. embark on simple lifestyle = opt for a simple lifestyle v选择简单生活 6. environmental conservation = environmental protection = environmental preservation n 环境保护 7. raise the environmental protection awareness amongst the general public v提高公众的环保意识 点评：raise = enhance = improve v 提高…… 点评：awareness = consciousness n 意识 8. take public transit = take public transport v 乘坐公共交通工具 9. foster water-wise lifestyle v 培养节水的生活方式