专题卷十四
书面表达之中文提纲类
1.书面表达
假设你是学生李华，得知好朋友William在学习中感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你按照以下要点给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。
1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；
2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；
3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。
注意：1. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经为你写好(不记入总词数)，但不得抄入答题卡内。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear William，
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good mind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear William，
Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed about study. I have a good kind to offer you some advice on how to study effectively.
First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. One way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sport s. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind. In this way we can memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.
Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourage us to overcome diffic ulties in our study. Keep trying, and we will make it.
I hope all these can benefit you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
2.书面表达
假定你是李华，是https://www.doczj.com/doc/1615194371.html,的会员，近日收到如下邮件，邀请你尝试成为付费会员并上传作品。请结合邮件给予回复，解释你之前未上传作品的原因，并提出建议。
re offering you a dis count to give it a go
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have received your email which offers me a big discount.______________________________
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Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
3.书面表达
假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让外国人了解中国传统文化，学生会将进行“唐诗吟诵大赛”(Tang Poetry Recitation Contest)，特邀请学校国际部学生参加，请你根据提示写一则通知。
主要内容包括：
1．大赛目的和意义；
2．主办方：校学生会。时间：201 6年12月30日。地点：校报告厅(assembly hall)； 3．范围：唐诗三百首(Three Hundred Tang Poems)。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。
Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture?
【答案】
Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture? Here comes your opportunity: the Student Union will organize a Tang Poetry Recitation Contest. I'd like to share with you some details.
As scheduled, the contest is to be held on Dec 30th ,2016. You are supposed to get prepared before the contest. Above all, it's recommended that you should read Three Hundred Tang Poems , and learn to appreciate the beauty of ancient Chinese culture. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall. Don't miss the ch ance of being a winner, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.
Don't hesitate to take part ! I'm sure you will b enefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress.
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
4.书面表达
假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你原来的外籍教师Professor Johnson已经回到了英国。请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件，包括以下内容：
1. 感谢他对你的帮助
2. 介绍你最近的学习和生活
3. 邀请他和家人来中国过春节 (the Spring Festival)
注意：
1. 词数100字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear Johnson,
How is it going? It has been nearly a month since you returned to your country.
I recall the days you taught us. You are such an energetic and humorous teacher that we like your lesson. I am grateful for your help in my spoken English. As a result, I make much progress. Recently, we are occupied in preparing for the exam to come. The winter holiday is approaching, and we are excited to make a meaningful schedule.
During the vacation, we will celebrate the Spring Festival, which is important for us Chinese. I invite you and your family members to celebrate it with us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
5.书面表达
假定你是李华，将于今年七月从新星外语学校毕业。你从报纸上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘书，你很感兴趣。请给该公司写一封求职信，包括下列要点：
1. 年龄；
2. 学习情况及英语水平；
3. 兴趣和特长；
4. 性格特点。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir / Madam,
I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
6.书面表达
假设你是肇庆市星湖中学的学生李华，你在某英文论坛上看到一个帖子。澳大利亚中学生
Mike想来中国旅游，你向他推荐了肇庆市，请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：1. 自我介绍；2. 推荐理由；
注意：1. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2. 可以适当增加细节；3. 词数100左
右。
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China. Best Wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to have read the post that you put on the English Forum. I strongly
recommend that you pay a visit to Zhaoqing.
I’m Li Hua, a student from Xinghu Middle School, good at Chinese geography and
hi story. When it comes to travelling in China, Zhaoqing is a popular tourist
destination. Zhaoqing is not only a city with a long histo ry but also has many places
of interests, where you can enjoy yourself to the full degree. Besides, people in
Zhaoqing are friendly and willing to help others in need, making your visit
comfortable and pleasant. Particularly, you can take a chance to experience
different cultures and enjoy a variety of delicious snacks in Zhaoqing. By the way,
I’d like to serve as your guide if you come.
I do hope that you will have a good time in China. Best wishes! Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
7.书面表达假如你是李华，南昌二中的一名学生，得知可向国际儿童基金会(Foundation)申请一个经费为2000元的扶贫项目(poverty-relief program)，帮助贫困地区的儿童。你感兴趣，准备申请。请根据以下要点写一篇文章：
1）个人的基本情况和申请理由；
2）你对申请项目的具体设想和项目经费的使用计划；
3）你的愿望。联系方式：2016hope@https://www.doczj.com/doc/1615194371.html,
注意： 1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结尾语已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
8.书面表达
假设你是李华,你的美国老师Miss Morgan要求你们明天下午去听一个有关美国历史的讲座。你因故不能参加。请你根据以下要点,写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点:
1.表示歉意;
2.理由:去机场接从法国回来的舅舅;
3.询问:是否有录音,以便补听讲座。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Miss Morgan,
I am so sorry that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on American history tomorrow afternoon. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have promised to meet him at the airport at 3:30 tomorrow afternoon.
I am very interested in American society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and make up for what is covered in the talk.
I would appreciate it if you could allow me to ask for a leave of absence. Thank you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
9.书面表达
假定你是李华，你的英国笔友正在写一篇关于各国中学生课外阅读(extra-curricular reading)情况的调查报告，他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请你根据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
1. 你校学生课外阅读的现状；
2. 原因分析；
3. 你的看法；
注意：1.根据所给提示，适当发挥，要求内容充实，语意连贯。
2.字数不少于100。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.邮件中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like to tell you something about
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. Now I would like t o tell you something about the extra-curricular reading in our school. As a matter of fact, most of the students in our school haven’t realized the importance of reading, especially extra-curricular reading. Therefore, the time and energy devoted to reading are limited. Besides, some students prefer to read comic books, magazines and newspapers rather than classic reading materials.
I think the reasons for such phenomenon are various. First of all, quite a lot of students are burdened with too much homework. Still, others haven’t formed a good habit of reading. They would rather spend time on TVs or computer games instead. However, reading is obviously beneficial to both our life and study, which can not only broaden our horizon but enrich our life as well. So it is quite necessary for us students to take up reading and for teachers to lessen the amount of homework so that we can have more time to read.
Best Wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
10.书面表达
假定你是李华，在校报看到了一则招聘启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点写一封应聘邮件。
写作要点：1. 表明写信意图；2. 陈述应聘目的；3. 说明应聘条件（英语好、能熟练操作电脑、有奉献精神和服务意识等）。
要求：内容向上，语意连贯，结构完整,书写工整，字数100左右。
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 2. _______________________________
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class 21, Grade 2. I’m writing to apply for the position as an English editor of the School Paper.
I am really eager to obtain this precious opportunity. As an outgoing girl, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. Additionally, I am adept in operating the computer, which enables me to have an evident advantage over many others. Above all, I am more than glad to devote myself to serving my fellow students as much as possible.
I am pretty sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I would appreciate it if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】略
【题型】书面表达
【难度】容易
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精锐教育学科教师辅导讲义 学员编号：年级：高三课时数：3 学员姓名：辅导科目：英语学科教师：余英 授课类型C专题—翻译常用句型C专题—成语翻译T能力—综合翻译训练授课日期及时段 教学内容 一.专题知识梳理 知识点1：翻译常用句型 1. As is known ( to us all ), … = It is known (to us all) that … 2. It seems that sb./sth.… =sb./sth. seems to… It appears (to sb) that …=sb./sth. appears to… 3. It (so)happened that sb./sth.…=sb./sth. happened to… 4. There is/are…. There seems to be… There happened to be… There must have been… T here is going to/will be… 5. Sth occurred to sb It (suddenly) occurred to sb that … It never occurred to sb that… = It didn’t occur to sb that… 6. It is said / reported that sb./sth.… = sb / sth is said / reported to do… It is believed that sb./sth.… = sb / sth is believed to do…… 7. It is no good / use doing … 1 / 15
书面表达 一、内容解读 提纲作文是高考书面表达的考查热点之一。命题者把材料分割成信息块，用独立的文字信息表示出来。这类题型中有较多的文字说明，对考生的表述思路有较明确的规定。形式以书信、报道、通知、日记等为主，内容贴近学生生活。 二、能力解读 根据《考试大纲》中对于写作的要求，提纲类作文要求考生能够灵活运用英语知识，根据相关信息将试题要求的要点完整地表述出来，力求准确、简洁、礼貌、规范。 这类题型的主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体。考生极容易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成翻译，造成语法结构和词汇使用上的单调。要写好提纲式作文，应注意以下几点： 1、细读提示，认真审题，把握体裁 审题应包括：审体裁，高考书面表达题的体裁一般有记叙文、说明文和应用文等；审格式，特别注意掌握应用文(书信、通知、演讲稿等)的格式；定人称，根据命题内容需要，对人称进行合理的选择定位；定时态，英语的动词与汉语的动词用法有很大的差别，是考生常出错误的地方。 2、紧扣主题，组织要点 虽然提纲作文的“要点”似乎已经定好了，但在认真审题，弄清楚题意的基础上，仍要逐个地、完美无缺地把内容要点列出来。 3、选词造句，初步成文 在体裁明确、信息全面、要点清晰的基础上，根据要点和重点词汇的句法功能、句子的语法规则，按照提示或说明中所提供的事实和情节发展的顺序选词造句，然后将零散的句子排列成主谓一致、时态呼应、脉络分明、合乎逻辑、内容完整的短文。 4、仔细审核，查漏补缺 写作时，由于时间仓促，加上心情紧张和粗心，难免出现错漏现象，如漏掉内容要点，字母大小写不准确，单词拼写有误，习惯用语搭配不当，时态混乱，主谓不一致以及母语干扰造成的中文式英语等。所有的这些问题，都值得考生在定稿前认真检查、仔细核对、及时修补，力争做到全文信息齐全、结构合理、语句表达准确。 三、提纲作文的常用模版句型 1．开篇句 With the development of economy...随着经济的发展……
高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作 一. 教学内容： 书面表达讲解与训练 开放性写作（北京卷） 开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。 写作注意要点： 1. 审题要准，定位要清。 即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。 2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。 要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。 要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。 3. 内容充实，详略得当。 要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。 考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。 4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。 【典型例题】 ［开放性写作分类与解析：］ 1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect） 根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。 注意：词数不少于30。 You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. Possible version: I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
【关键字】活动、作文、英语、要点、发现、研究、支撑、环境、标准、任务、关系、取决于、规范 任务型阅读与书面表达组合练(三) (限时40分钟) Ⅰ.任务型阅读 (2017·南京、盐城高三二模)“HELL is a city much like London，” said Percy Bysshe Shelley in 1819. Modern academics agree. Last year Dutch researchers showed that city dwellers (居民) have a 21% higher risk of suffering from anxiety disorders than do their calmer rural countrymen, and a 39% higher risk of suffering from mood disorders. But exactly how the inner workings of the urban and rural minds cause this difference has remained unclear —until now. A study just published in Nature by Andreas Meyer-Lindenberg of the University of Heidelberg and his colleagues has used a scanning technique called functional magnetic-res onance imaging (机能性磁共振成像，简称fMRI) to examine the brains of city dwellers and countrymen when they are under stress. In Dr Meye r-Lindenberg's first experiment, participants lying with their heads in a scanner took maths tests that they were bound to fail (the researchers had designed success rates to be just 25－40% ). To make the experience still more embarrassing, the team provided negative feedback through headphones, all the while checking participants for indications of stress, such as high blood pressure. The city people's general mental health did not differ from that of the rural countrymen. However, their brains dealt with the stress caused by the experimenters in different ways. These differences were noticeable in two regions: the amygdalas (杏仁核) and the perigenual anterior cingulate cortex (前扣带皮层，简称pACC)．People living in the countryside had the lowest levels of activity in their amygdalas. Those living in towns had higher levels. City dwellers had the highest. In the case of the pACC, however, what mattered was not where someone was living now, but where he or she was brought up. The more urban a person's childhood, the more active his pACC, regardless of where he was dwelling at the time of the experiment. The amygdalas thus seem to respond to the h ere-and-now while the pACC is programmed early on, and does not react in the same, flexible way as the amygdalas. Second-to-second changes in its activity might, though, be expected to be connected with changes in the amygdalas, because of its role in regulating them. fMRI allows
2012届高考英语专题冲刺系列同形异义词辨析（九） 1. They the report to the State council for approval. A) made B) submitted C) committed D) admitted 2. We’d like to a table for five for dinner this evening. A) preserve B) reserve C) retain D) sustain 3. The European Union countries were once worried that they would not have supplies of petroleum. (2002.06) A) proficient B) efficient C) potential D) sufficient 4. The life of the vice mayor was exposed in the newspaper. A) corrupt B) bankrupt C) abrupt D) incorrupt 5. Chinese vases are around the gallery according to their authors’ names. A) composed B) disposed C) impose D) expose 解题小贴士 1. 【B】 词根mit意为“送、投掷”；sub-(under)+mit(to send)=（使）服从，（使）顺从（在 下面传递）；com-（with）+mit(to send)=委托，犯罪（传送→委托），固定搭配commit a crime 犯罪；ad-(to)+mit(to throw)=承认，允许（送入，移进）。正确答案为B，题目译文为：“他 们把报告上交给州议会批准。” 2. 【B】 词根serv意为“服务，保持”；pre-(before)+serve(to keep)=保存，保管；re-(back) +serve(to keep)=保留，预定（秘密地保留→不出来）。正确答案B，题目译文为：“我们想订 一张今晚5个人吃饭的位置。” 3. 【D】 pro-(forward)+fic(do)+ient(a.)=熟练的，专家（做得更好→进步）；efficient有 效率的，能干的；sufficient充分的，足够的。正确答案为D，题目译文为：“欧盟国家曾担 心会没有足够供应的石油供应。” 4. 【A】 词根rupt意为“打破”，cor-(wholly)+rupt(to break)= 腐败的，贪污的（完全受损）；bankrupt破产的（银行倒闭的）；ab-(off)+rupt(to break)=突然的，陡峭的；incorrupt 为A的反义词。所以正确答案为A，题目译文为：“副市长的腐败生活在报纸上曝了光。” 5. 【B】 词根pos意为“放置”，com-(together)+pose(to place)=构成，作曲； dis-(apart)+pose=陈列，布置（个别分开放置）；im-(on)+pose=课税，强使（置于之上）； ex-(out)+pose=暴露，使曝光（置于外部）。所以正确答案为B，题目译文为：“根据作者名字 的顺序，中国式样的花瓶被摆放在陈列室的四周。” 1. miss, mit=to send（送），to throw（投；掷） admit v. 容许，承认，接纳【ad-(=to)+mit=送入，移入。名词admission】 commit vt. 犯（错误），干（坏事），把……交托给，提交，答应负责【com-(=to)+mit= 传送→委托。名词commission】 emit vt. 发出，放射【e-(=ex-=out)+mit=送出。名词emission】
2020届新高考英语书面表达内容概要高三作文模拟写作指导与解读 一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 It is quite reasonable to blame traffic jams, the cost of gas and the great speed of modern life, but manners on the road are becoming horrible. Everybody knows that the nicest men would become fierce tiger s behind the wheel. It is all right to have a tiger in a cage, but to have one in the driver's seat is another matter. Road politeness is not only good manners, but good sense. It takes the most cool-headed drivers great patience to give up the desire to beat back when forced to face rude driving. On the other hand, a little politeness goes a long way towards reducing the possibility of quarrelling and fighting. A friendly nod or a wave of thanks in answer to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of good will and becomes so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such behaviors of politeness are by no means enough. Many drivers nowadays don't even seem able to recognize politeness when they see it. However, misplaced politeness can also be dangerous. Typical examples are the driver who waves a child crossing the street at a wrong place into the path of oncoming cars that may not be able to stop in time. The same goes for encouraging old ladies to cross the road wherever and whenever they want to. An experienced driver, whose manners are faultless, told me it would help if drivers learnt to correctly join in traffic stream without causing total blockages that give rise to
如何突破写作，获得高分，成为广大师生关注的问题。下面就写作中如何运用高级表达提 出以下几点建议，供广大师生参考。 1.使用复合句 复合句可以把结构松散的句子连接起来，从而使表达显得高级。高考写作中用到的复合句 包括下列几种： (1) 定语从句 Mary is a girl in Class 1. She speaks English very fluently. → Mary is a girl in Class1 who speaks English very fluently. (2) 状语从句 The doctor arrived there in time. The boy was saved. It was not too late. → The boy was saved because the doctor arrived there before it was too late. (3) 名词性从句(包括主语从句、表语从句、宾语从句和同位语从句) Xiao Ming was always late for school. His te acher didn’t know why. → His teacher didn’t know why Xiao Ming was always late for school. 如果考生驾驭句子的能力较强，则还可以恰当使用复杂的复合句（就是从句中还包含从句）。例如： I want to know whether you want to meet Miss Tang when she comes back from Japan where she works as an engineer. (本句包含3个从句) 2.使用某些惯用句型 写作中如果能恰当运用英语中某些常见的惯用句型，可以使文章显得富有“洋味”。例如： (1) The boy was so brave that he led the enemy into our ring of encirclement (包围).(so…that… 句型) (2) So brave was the boy that he led the enemy into our ring of encirclement (包围). （倒装结构） (3) I did not realize the importance of learning English well until then.（not…until…） (4) Not until then did I realize the importance of learning English well.(not until的倒装句) (5) It was not until then that I realized the importance of learning English well.（强调句） 3.使用高级词汇 ⑴巧用习语(idiom) 英语中有大量习语，如果运用得当，则可大大增加文章的感染力。考生要在平时的学习过 程中不断积累。例如： ① What she explained doesn’t hold water. 她的解释站不住脚。 ② Many families struggle to make ends meet. 很多家庭只能勉强维持生计。 ③ I don’t know why she is always in low spirits. 我不知道她为什么总是情绪低落。 ④ He turned a deaf ear to what I said. 他对我的话一点也听不进去。 ⑤ This sentence doesn’t make sense. 这个句子讲不通。 ⑵用短语代替单词 英语中同义词众多，在表达的时候，尽量用短语代替单个的词。例如： ① I have made up my mind to study English better this term. (同义词：decide) ② I have no idea how to enlarge my vocabulary. (同义词：don’t know) ③ A burning cigarette end resulted in/led to the big fire. (同义词：cause)
一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧 2018-08-10英语：高考书面表达解析及写作技巧一、解读书面表达书面表达是一个综合性题目，要求考生根据所给图画、图表、提纲(或者开放性)等，运用所学知识将提示信息组成句子，句子连成段，段连成篇。 它不断要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。 它也是一种融形式、文体、交际三位于一体的试题，所考查内容都体现在表达和传递信息的交流能力，因此，书面表达有交流性、实用性、合理性等特点。 近几年来高考书面表达正在一步步地向考试要考语言运用能力这一方向改进，并采用了新的评分标准，因此要求考生语言的准确性和得体性，注重上、下文连贯，注重表达方式多样化。 新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过渡性词汇增强文章连贯性。 如果考生在表达中只是运用了简单句，虽然表达了要求的信息，那么得分也不会高。 因此，近几年高考要求考生掌握词汇要丰富，句式表达要复杂，适当地使用情感性语言。 二、各种题型的应试对策1图画作文要求考生首先仔细观察，读懂图意，抓住要点，按图片顺序编拟提纲，同时要注意图片所给的时
间、背景等相关信息，确定写作的人称、时态和语态。 在写作时还要适当地使用一些关联词、过渡句来加工润色，使文章层次清楚、通顺畅达。 这种作文的难点在于要求考生能自己编拟出合适的要点，并且表达上要连贯。 2图表作文要求考生能分析把握该图表要表达的内容，确定主题，然后从图表中归纳出相应要点来写作。 这种作文能有效考查考生的篇章结构组织能力，要求写作具有逻辑性。 3提纲作文要求考生首先将所给出的要点进行组织，按照一定的逻辑顺序用明白、恰当、得体的语言来表达；要尽量消除汉语式的英文表达。 这种作文切忌逐字逐句汉译英，使得文章支离破碎，不忍卒读。 相对来说，这种作文难度相对较小。 4（半）开放性作文要求考生能根据相当简短的提示来写作；或者要求续写一段文字，或者写出你的感想等等。 这种形式为考生张扬个性提供了空间，答案不唯一，淋漓尽致地考查了考生发散思维和创新思维能力。 它还可能包括改写、缩写等其他形式。 近年来不少自主命题省（市）的高考试题有向（半）开放性过渡的趋势。
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
一书面表达（共35分） 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论学习习惯问题。请你结合自身学习实际,按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。 1.说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系; 2.介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议; 3.描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施。 注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. 【范文赏读】 It's useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. In reality, different students have different learning habits, which I think influence their learning efficiency greatly. Good habits always lead to high efficiency, while bad ones bring the opposite. Some students are good at concentrating on what the teachers teach in class. They think only in this way can they understand and memorize the teaching materials better. If we find those materials interesting, we'll focus our attention on them for long. However, those dull lessons require our determination, self-controlling ability and confidence. My classmates always call me "Mr. forgetful", because I cannot memorize those I have learnt. I know that it is because I don't spend some time in memorizing them after class. My teachers advise me to repeat the materials several times and read them aloud, which they think will help improve my memory. 二书面表达(满分25分) 孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题,现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画,按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求: 1.描述漫画内容; 2.分析漫画所揭示的问题; 3.提出你的看法。 注意: 1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯; 3.词数120左右; 4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：铺路pave the way From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. 【范文赏读】 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
1.阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，然后从各题所给的A、B、C和D项中， 选出最佳选项。 Life is filled with challenges. As we get older we come to realize that those challenges are the very things that __1______ us and make us who we are. It is the same with the challenges that come with __2______. When we are faced with a challenge, we usually have two __3______. We can try to beat it off, or we can decide that the thing __4______ the challenge isn’t worth the __5______ and call it quits. Although there are __6______ times when calling it quits is the right thing to do, in most __7______ all that is needed is __8______ and communication. When we are committed to something, it means that no matter how __9______ or how uncomfortable something is, we will always choose to __10_____ it and work it through instead of running away from it. Communication is making a __11______ for discussion and talking about how you feel as opposed to just saying what the other person did wrong. If you can say to a friend, “I got my feelings hurt.”rather than “You hurt my feelings,” you are going to be able to solve the problem much __12______. In dealing with many challenges that friendship will bring to you, try to see them for what they are: small hurdles you need to jump or get through on your way through life. Nothing is so big that it is __13______ to get over, and hurt only __14_______ to make us stronger. It’s all part of growing up, it __15______ to everyone, and some day you will look back to all of this and say, “Hard as it was, it makes me who I am today. And that is a good thing.” 1．A．design B．promote C．direct D．shape 2．A．confidence B．friendship C．pressure D．difficulty 3．A．opportunities B．expectations C．choices D．aspects 4．A．demanding B．deserving C．predicting D．presenting 5．A．comment B．loss C．trouble D．expense 6．A．seriously B．certainly C．scarcely D．closely 7．A．cases B．fields C．parts D．areas 8．A．assessment B．commitment C．encouragement D．adjustment 9．A．doubtful B．shameful C．harmful D．painful 10．A．keep B．control C．face D．catch 11．A．space B．plan C．topic D．rate 12．A．faster B．worse C．further D．slower
2019高考英语写作专题（6）（感谢信）含参考范文 06感谢信 模板① Dear ________(对象), I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原 因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体 帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear ______, How about you r life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢 的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果). During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s mo re, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因) Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢) Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) Yours sincerely _______ 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只 需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。 感谢信一般分为三个部分： 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；